第4讲 道歉信&祝贺信
(1)道歉信通常是在因自己的过失或疏忽给别人带来了麻烦或损失时，为了向对方表示歉意而写的信件。具体写作结构如下：
(2)祝贺信是在亲朋好友毕业、晋升、获奖等值得纪念的场合向其表示祝贺的信件。信件应表达为对方感到高兴，语气要充满真诚。具体写作结构如下：
(2021·北京卷改编)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1．表达歉意并说明原因；
2．提出建议并给出理由。
注意：1．写作词数应为80个左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
一、找全要点
(一)题干要求
1．表达歉意：
①I'm sorry that I won't be able to go hiking with you this Saturday as planned．
2．说明原因：
②I began to cough yesterday morning．
③I went to see a doctor．
④She told me it was a bad cold．
⑤I would have to stay at home for a few days．
3．提出建议并给出理由：
⑥Is it OK with you if we take a trip to Zhangjiakou next Saturday
⑦It's one of the most successful cities in Hebei Province．
4．再次道歉：
⑧Once again，I'm sorry about the trouble caused by me．
(二)逻辑关联
想和好友Jim共度美好时光：
⑨I'd really like to spend some time with you．
二、塑造亮点
(一)高级词汇(升格⑦⑧句中的加黑词汇)
1．successful→ ____________
2．trouble→____________
(二)高级句式
1．用表示因果关系的并列句合并②③句
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
2．用宾语从句合并④⑤句
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
(誊写成文，注意逻辑衔接和行文规范)
(一)道歉信
1．开头句
(1)I am writing to apologize/say sorry for...我写信是为……向你致歉。
(2)I am really sorry but I have no choice but to...我真的很抱歉，但我别无选择，只能……
(3)I apologize sincerely for what I said that day．I didn't mean to hurt you．我诚挚地为那天我说的话向你道歉。我不是有意伤害你的。
2．主体句
(1)The reason why I fail to...is that...我未能……的原因是……
(2)I am not able to...due to the fact that...我不能……是由于……
(3)It's because of...that I...正是因为……我才……
(4)Anyhow，I sincerely hope that we can fix another time for...Will you be available this Sunday morning？无论如何，我真诚地希望我们可以为……再定一个时间。请问你这个星期天上午有空吗？
3．结尾句
(1)Once again，I'm sorry for any inconvenience I caused．对于我造成的不便我再次表示歉意。
(2)I apologize again for any inconvenience/trouble caused by me/my carelessness．I promise that such a thing will never happen again．再次为我/我的粗心带来的不便/麻烦表示歉意。我承诺这样的事情不会再发生。
(3)I sincerely hope you can understand my situation/think in my position and accept my apology．我真心希望你能理解我的处境/站在我的立场考虑，并接受我的道歉。
(二)祝贺信
1．开头句
(1)I am writing to tell you the thrilling news that you have won first prize in the...contest．
我写信告诉你这个激动人心的消息，你获得了……比赛的一等奖。
(2)You don't know how excited and happy we felt at the news of ... We are proud of your achievement．得知……的消息，你不知道我们有多么激动和开心。我们为你取得的成就而自豪！
(3)I'm delighted/pleased/glad to hear/learn/know that you have won first prize in the contest, so I'm writing to express/convey my congratulations． 我很开心得知你在比赛中获得了一等奖，因此我写信向你表达祝贺。
2．主体句
(1)I am delighted that your effort has been rewarded in this way．我很高兴你的努力以这样的方式得到了回报。
(2)It is obvious that you will have a promising future．显然，你将会有一个充满希望的未来。
(3)There is no denying/doubt that your success partly lies in your talent for...毫无疑问，你的成功部分在于你在……的天赋。
(4)As your close friend, I just want you to know how lucky I am to be able to share your pride and how pleased I am at your success．作为你的密友，我只想让你知道能分享你的骄傲我有多幸运，我对你的成功有多高兴。
3．结尾句
(1)Wish you good luck and success in the coming ...祝你在接下来的……中有好运并取得成功。
(2)I hope you can make every effort to realize your dream．我希望你尽一切努力实现你的梦想。
(3)Congratulations again, I wish you further success！再次向你表示祝贺，我希望你获得更大的成功。
第4讲 道歉信&祝贺信
写作指导
(一)高级词汇
1．prosperous 2．inconvenience
(二)高级句式
1．I began to cough yesterday morning，so I went to see a doctor．
2．She told me it was a bad cold，and that I would have to stay at home for a few days．
落笔华章
Dear Jim，
I'm sorry that I won't be able to go hiking with you this Saturday as planned．
I began to cough yesterday morning，so I went to see a doctor．She told me it was a bad cold，and that I would have to stay at home for a few days．I'd really like to spend some time with you．Is it OK with you if we take a trip to Zhangjiakou next Saturday？It's one of the most prosperous cities in Hebei Province．Please let me know what you think．
Once again，I'm sorry about the inconvenience caused by me．
Hope to hear from you soon．
Yours，
Li Hua
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第4讲 道歉信&祝贺信
(1)道歉信通常是在因自己的过失或疏忽给别人带来了麻烦或损失时，为了向对方表示歉意而写的信件。具体写作结构如下：
(2)祝贺信是在亲朋好友毕业、晋升、获奖等值得纪念的场合向其表示祝贺的信件。信件应表达为对方感到高兴，语气要充满真诚。具体写作结构如下：
(2021·北京卷改编)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1．表达歉意并说明原因；
2．提出建议并给出理由。
注意：1．写作词数应为80个左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
一、找全要点
(一)题干要求
1．表达歉意：
①I'm sorry that I won't be able to go hiking with you this Saturday as planned．
2．说明原因：
②I began to cough yesterday morning．
③I went to see a doctor．
④She told me it was a bad cold．
⑤I would have to stay at home for a few days．
3．提出建议并给出理由：
⑥Is it OK with you if we take a trip to Zhangjiakou next Saturday
⑦It's one of the most successful cities in Hebei Province．
4．再次道歉：
⑧Once again，I'm sorry about the trouble caused by me．
(二)逻辑关联
想和好友Jim共度美好时光：
⑨I'd really like to spend some time with you．
二、塑造亮点
(一)高级词汇(升格⑦⑧句中的加黑词汇)
1．successful→ __________
2．trouble→_____________
prosperous
inconvenience
(二)高级句式
1．用表示因果关系的并列句合并②③句
__________________________________________________________
2．用宾语从句合并④⑤句
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I began to cough yesterday morning，so I went to see a doctor．
She told me it was a bad cold，and that I would have to stay at home for a few days．
(誊写成文，注意逻辑衔接和行文规范)
Dear Jim，
I'm sorry that I won't be able to go hiking with you this Saturday as planned．
I began to cough yesterday morning，so I went to see a doctor．She told me it was a bad cold，and that I would have to stay at home for a few days．I'd really like to spend some time with you．Is it OK with you if we take a trip to Zhangjiakou next Saturday？It's one of the most prosperous cities in Hebei Province．Please let me know what you think．
Once again，I'm sorry about the inconvenience caused by me．
Hope to hear from you soon．
Yours，
Li Hua
(一)道歉信
1．开头句
(1)I am writing to apologize/say sorry for...我写信是为……向你致歉。
(2)I am really sorry but I have no choice but to...我真的很抱歉，但我别无选择，只能……
(3)I apologize sincerely for what I said that day．I didn't mean to hurt you．我诚挚地为那天我说的话向你道歉。我不是有意伤害你的。
2．主体句
(1)The reason why I fail to...is that...我未能……的原因是……
(2)I am not able to...due to the fact that...我不能……是由于……
(3)It's because of...that I...正是因为……我才……
(4)Anyhow，I sincerely hope that we can fix another time for...Will you be available this Sunday morning？无论如何，我真诚地希望我们可以为……再定一个时间。请问你这个星期天上午有空吗？
3．结尾句
(1)Once again，I'm sorry for any inconvenience I caused．对于我造成的不便我再次表示歉意。
(2)I apologize again for any inconvenience/trouble caused by me/my carelessness．I promise that such a thing will never happen again．再次为我/我的粗心带来的不便/麻烦表示歉意。我承诺这样的事情不会再发生。
(3)I sincerely hope you can understand my situation/think in my position and accept my apology．我真心希望你能理解我的处境/站在我的立场考虑，并接受我的道歉。
(二)祝贺信
1．开头句
(1)I am writing to tell you the thrilling news that you have won first prize in the...contest．
我写信告诉你这个激动人心的消息，你获得了……比赛的一等奖。
(2)You don't know how excited and happy we felt at the news of ...We are proud of your achievement．得知……的消息，你不知道我们有多么激动和开心。我们为你取得的成就而自豪！
(3)I'm delighted/pleased/glad to hear/learn/know that you have won first prize in the contest，so I'm writing to express/convey my congratulations．我很开心得知你在比赛中获得了一等奖，因此我写信向你表达祝贺。
2．主体句
(1)I am delighted that your effort has been rewarded in this way．我很高兴你的努力以这样的方式得到了回报。
(2)It is obvious that you will have a promising future．显然，你将会有一个充满希望的未来。
(3)There is no denying/doubt that your success partly lies in your talent for...毫无疑问，你的成功部分在于你在……的天赋。
(4)As your close friend，I just want you to know how lucky I am to be able to share your pride and how pleased I am at your success．作为你的密友，我只想让你知道能分享你的骄傲我有多幸运，我对你的成功有多高兴。
3．结尾句
(1)Wish you good luck and success in the coming ...祝你在接下来的……中有好运并取得成功。
(2)I hope you can make every effort to realize your dream．我希望你尽一切努力实现你的梦想。
(3)Congratulations again，I wish you further success！再次向你表示祝贺，我希望你获得更大的成功。
谢 谢！
