第5讲 咨询信&告知信
(1)咨询信是写信人对某方面的信息感兴趣，希望了解详细信息的信件。具体写作结构如下：
(2)告知信多是从个人角度出发，将对方想要了解的事情告诉对方。告知信通常分为两类：①告知某人有某事将要发生；②回复某人关于某事的询问。具体写作结构如下：
(2024·新课标Ⅰ卷改编)
假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：
1．你完成的作品；
2．你的感想。
注意：1．写作词数应为80个左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
一、找全要点
(一)题干要求
1．写信目的：
①I am writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday．
2．介绍告知的内容：
②I chose to draw a beautiful landscape scene．
③I drew pretty flowers, a calm lake, and a clear blue sky．
④The fresh air and the birdsong added a calming effect to the whole process．
⑤It was a good experience to create art under the open sky．
⑥I could not only connect with nature but also fully express my creativity．
3．你的感想：
⑦Overall, I thoroughly enjoyed the art class．
(二)逻辑关联
分享这次经历：
⑧I can't wait to show you my creation in person and perhaps we can enjoy a similar experience together．
二、塑造亮点
(一)高级词汇(升格②③⑤句中的加黑词汇)
1．beautiful→ ________________
2．pretty→____________
3．good→________________________
(二)高级句式
1．用with合并词汇升格后的②③句
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
2．用状语从句合并词汇升格后的⑤句和⑥句
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
(誊写成文，注意逻辑衔接和行文规范)
(一)咨询信
1．开头句
(1)I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding/concerning...我写信是想知道你能否给我提供有关……的信息。
(2)I am wondering if you could/would let me know something about...我想知道你能否告知我有关……的情况。
(3)I'm writing to inquire/ask for some information/details about...我写信是为了咨询有关……的信息/细节。
2．主体句
(1)I'd like to know something about...I would also like to inquire...我想知道关于……的一些事情。我还想询问……
(2)Another point I am uncertain/unclear about is...我还不确定的另外一点是……
(3)Could you be so kind to tell me the time arrangement for...？你能告诉我……的时间安排吗？
(4)I'd be grateful if you could let me know if there are any special requirements for...如果你能告诉我……有何特定要求，我将不胜感激。
3．结尾句
(1)I am looking forward to your immediate/prompt response．期待你的及时答复。
(2)I would be very grateful if you can send me a reply as soon as possible．如果你能尽快给我回复，我将非常感激。
(3)Thank you for your kindness，and your prompt reply to this letter will be highly appreciated．感谢你的善意，对于你对这封信的及时回复我们将非常感激。
(二)告知信
1．开头句
(1)It's a pleasure for me to inform you of...我很高兴地通知你……
(2)I am writing to inform you of some relevant details．我写信是想告诉你一些相关的细节。
(3)Having learned that...，I can't wait to share some relevant details with you．得知……，我迫不及待地想和你分享一些相关的细节。
2．主体句
(1)Some details regarding/concerning...are as follows．一些关于……的细节如下。
(2)...will take place between...and...，so we'd better...……将在……和……之间进行，所以我们最好……
(3)A wide range of meaningful activities will be held in...，including...，which are bound to appeal to enthusiasts like you．将在……举办多种多样包括……在内的有意义的活动，这些活动一定会吸引像你一样的爱好者。
(4)...is arranged to start from...，which will last...……被安排从……开始，将为期……
3．结尾句
(1)If you want to know more detailed information/anything else，please don't hesitate to contact me/drop me a line．如果你想知道更多详细信息/其他事情，请尽管联系我/写信给我。
(2)I sincerely hope the information is beneficial to you．/I sincerely hope you can benefit from the information．我真诚地希望这些信息对你有益。
(3)Please don't hesitate to turn to me for help if you have any other questions．如果你还有其他的问题，请不要迟疑，尽管向我求助。
第5讲 咨询信&告知信
写作指导
(一)高级词汇
1．breathtaking/picturesque 2．lovely 3．unique/meaningful/rewarding/fruitful
(二)高级句式
1．I chose to draw a breathtaking landscape scene with lovely flowers，a calm lake，and a clear blue sky． 2．It was a unique experience to create art under the open sky，because I could not only connect with nature but also fully express my creativity．
落笔华章
Dear Chris，
I am writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday．
In the class，we were asked to create our artwork inspired by nature．I chose to draw a breathtaking landscape scene with lovely flowers，a calm lake，and a clear blue sky．The fresh air and the birdsong added a calming effect to the whole process．It was a unique experience to create art under the open sky，because I could not only connect with nature but also fully express my creativity．
Overall，I thoroughly enjoyed the art class．I can't wait to show you my creation in person and perhaps we can enjoy a similar experience together．
Yours，
Li Hua
1 / 5(共18张PPT)
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第5讲 咨询信&告知信
(1)咨询信是写信人对某方面的信息感兴趣，希望了解详细信息的信件。具体写作结构如下：
(2)告知信多是从个人角度出发，将对方想要了解的事情告诉对方。告知信通常分为两类：①告知某人有某事将要发生；②回复某人关于某事的询问。具体写作结构如下：
(2024·新课标Ⅰ卷改编)
假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：
1．你完成的作品；
2．你的感想。
注意：1．写作词数应为80个左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
一、找全要点
(一)题干要求
1．写信目的：
①I am writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday．
2．介绍告知的内容：
②I chose to draw a beautiful landscape scene．
③I drew pretty flowers，a calm lake，and a clear blue sky．
④The fresh air and the birdsong added a calming effect to the whole process．
⑤It was a good experience to create art under the open sky．
⑥I could not only connect with nature but also fully express my creativity．
3．你的感想：
⑦Overall，I thoroughly enjoyed the art class．
(二)逻辑关联
分享这次经历：
⑧I can't wait to show you my creation in person and perhaps we can enjoy a similar experience together．
二、塑造亮点
(一)高级词汇(升格②③⑤句中的加黑词汇)
1．beautiful→ _________________________
2．pretty→______
3．good→________________________________
breathtaking/picturesque
lovely
unique/meaningful/rewarding/fruitful
(二)高级句式
1．用with合并词汇升格后的②③句
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．用状语从句合并词汇升格后的⑤句和⑥句
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I chose to draw a breathtaking landscape scene with lovely flowers， a calm lake， and a clear blue sky．
It was a unique experience to create art under the open sky， because I could not only connect with nature but also fully express my creativity．
(誊写成文，注意逻辑衔接和行文规范)
Dear Chris，
I am writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday．
In the class，we were asked to create our artwork inspired by nature．I chose to draw a breathtaking landscape scene with lovely flowers，a calm lake，and a clear blue sky．The fresh air and the birdsong added a calming effect to the whole process．It was a unique experience to create art under the open sky，because I could not only connect with nature but also fully express my creativity．
Overall，I thoroughly enjoyed the art class．I can't wait to show you my creation in person and perhaps we can enjoy a similar experience together．
Yours，
Li Hua
(一)咨询信
1．开头句
(1)I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding/concerning...我写信是想知道你能否给我提供有关……的信息。
(2)I am wondering if you could/would let me know something about...我想知道你能否告知我有关……的情况。
(3)I'm writing to inquire/ask for some information/details about...我写信是为了咨询有关……的信息/细节。
2．主体句
(1)I'd like to know something about...I would also like to inquire...我想知道关于……的一些事情。我还想询问……
(2)Another point I am uncertain/unclear about is...我还不确定的另外一点是……
(3)Could you be so kind to tell me the time arrangement for...？你能告诉我……的时间安排吗？
(4)I'd be grateful if you could let me know if there are any special requirements for...如果你能告诉我……有何特定要求，我将不胜感激。
3．结尾句
(1)I am looking forward to your immediate/prompt response．期待你的及时答复。
(2)I would be very grateful if you can send me a reply as soon as possible．如果你能尽快给我回复，我将非常感激。
(3)Thank you for your kindness，and your prompt reply to this letter will be highly appreciated．感谢你的善意，对于你对这封信的及时回复我们将非常感激。
(二)告知信
1．开头句
(1)It's a pleasure for me to inform you of...我很高兴地通知你……
(2)I am writing to inform you of some relevant details．我写信是想告诉你一些相关的细节。
(3)Having learned that...，I can't wait to share some relevant details with you．得知……，我迫不及待地想和你分享一些相关的细节。
2．主体句
(1)Some details regarding/concerning...are as follows．一些关于……的细节如下。
(2)...will take place between...and...，so we'd better...……将在……和……之间进行，所以我们最好……
(3)A wide range of meaningful activities will be held in...，including...，which are bound to appeal to enthusiasts like you．将在……举办多种多样包括……在内的有意义的活动，这些活动一定会吸引像你一样的爱好者。
(4)...is arranged to start from...，which will last...……被安排从……开始，将为期……
3．结尾句
(1)If you want to know more detailed information/anything else，please don't hesitate to contact me/drop me a line．如果你想知道更多详细信息/其他事情，请尽管联系我/写信给我。
(2)I sincerely hope the information is beneficial to you．/I sincerely hope you can benefit from the information．我真诚地希望这些信息对你有益。
(3)Please don't hesitate to turn to me for help if you have any other questions．如果你还有其他的问题，请不要迟疑，尽管向我求助。
谢 谢！
