第4讲 人物介绍
人物介绍的文章一般都是对所写之人的基本情况(如年龄、出生地、家庭背景、受教育情况等)作简单的概述，继而再叙述其事迹或在某个领域中做出的贡献，最后对其进行评价。具体写作结构如下：
(2023·全国甲卷改编)
你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：
1．人物简介及事迹；
2．意义或启示。
注意：1．写作词数应为80个左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
一、找全要点
(一)题干要求
1．人物简介：
①Confucius is a famous figure in Chinese history whose teachings emphasized the importance of moral values，respect for the elders，and the social harmony．
2．人物事迹：
②Confucius traveled throughout the country．
③He imparted his wisdom to many disciples and left a good impact on Chinese society．
3．意义：
④His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture．
⑤His teachings fostered respect for authority，harmonious relationships，and the pursuit of knowledge．
4．启示：
⑥His teachings serve as a guiding light in our fast-paced and interconnected world，which remind us of the importance of integrity，compassion，and social responsibility．
(二)逻辑关联
孔子学说的现实意义：
⑦Even today，his ideas continue to guide individuals and communities in China and beyond．
二、塑造亮点
(一)高级词汇(升格①③句中的加黑词汇)
1．famous→ __________________________________________________________
2．many→___________________________________________________________
3．good→____________________________________________________________
(二)高级句式
1．用非谓语动词合并②句和词汇升格后的③句
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2．用非谓语动词合并④⑤句
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(誊写成文，注意逻辑衔接和行文规范)
1．开头句
(1)The person I admire most is...我最敬佩的人是……
(2)There are many respectable people around us．The one who I admire most is...我们身边有许多可敬的人。我最崇拜的人是……
(3)When it comes to the person who I think highly of，I would say...without hesitation．当说到我高度赞扬的人时，我会毫不犹豫地说……
2．主体句
(1)Born in... on...，...is one of...出生在……(地点)，在……(时间)，……是……之一。
(2)Graduating from...，he worked as...毕业于……，他担任……
(3)With strong will and great determination，he achieved great success in...凭借坚强的意志和决心，他在……方面取得了巨大的成功。
(4)He/She put his/her heart into...and made great contributions to...他/她全身心投入到……中去，为……做出了巨大贡献。
3．结尾句
(1)As a great...，he/she will be remembered by us forever．作为一个伟大的……，他/她将永远被我们铭记。
(2)It is his determination that inspires me to go on when I have difficulty in learning．当我在学习上有困难时，正是他的决心激励我继续前进。
(3)Having set a great example for us，he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect．他为我们树立了一个很好的榜样，他是一个非常优秀的完全值得我们钦佩和尊重的人。
第4讲 人物介绍
写作指导
(一)高级词汇
1．well known/distinguished/renowned 2．countless/numerous
3．profound/everlasting
(二)高级句式
1．Confucius traveled throughout the country，imparting his wisdom to countless disciples and leaving a profound impact on Chinese society． 2．His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture，fostering respect for authority，harmonious relationships，and the pursuit of knowledge．
落笔华章
Confucius is a well known figure in Chinese history whose teachings emphasized the importance of moral values，respect for the elders，and the social harmony．
Confucius traveled throughout the country，imparting his wisdom to countless disciples and leaving a profound impact on Chinese society．The significance of Confucius's thoughts cannot be overstated．His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture，fostering respect for authority，harmonious relationships，and the pursuit of knowledge．Even today，his ideas continue to guide individuals and communities in China and beyond．
His teachings serve as a guiding light in our fast paced and interconnected world，which remind us of the importance of integrity，compassion，and social responsibility．
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第三部分
写作专题突破
应用文写作
类型二 非书信体应用文
第4讲 人物介绍
人物介绍的文章一般都是对所写之人的基本情况(如年龄、出生地、家庭背景、受教育情况等)作简单的概述，继而再叙述其事迹或在某个领域中做出的贡献，最后对其进行评价。具体写作结构如下：
(2023·全国甲卷改编)
你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：
1．人物简介及事迹；
2．意义或启示。
注意：1．写作词数应为80个左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
一、找全要点
(一)题干要求
1．人物简介：
①Confucius is a famous figure in Chinese history whose teachings emphasized the importance of moral values，respect for the elders，and the social harmony．
2．人物事迹：
②Confucius traveled throughout the country．
③He imparted his wisdom to many disciples and left a good impact on Chinese society．
3．意义：
④His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture．
⑤His teachings fostered respect for authority，harmonious relationships，and the pursuit of knowledge．
4．启示：
⑥His teachings serve as a guiding light in our fast-paced and interconnected world，which remind us of the importance of integrity，compassion，and social responsibility．
(二)逻辑关联
孔子学说的现实意义：
⑦Even today，his ideas continue to guide individuals and communities in China and beyond．
二、塑造亮点
(一)高级词汇(升格①③句中的加黑词汇)
1．famous→ __________________________________
2．many→____________________
3．good→_____________________
well-known/distinguished/renowned
countless/numerous
profound/everlasting
1．用非谓语动词合并②句和词汇升格后的③句
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．用非谓语动词合并④⑤句
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Confucius traveled throughout the country，imparting his wisdom to countless disciples and leaving a profound impact on Chinese society．
His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture，fostering respect for authority，harmonious relationships，and the pursuit of knowledge．
(誊写成文，注意逻辑衔接和行文规范)
Confucius is a well-known figure in Chinese history whose teachings emphasized the importance of moral values，respect for the elders，and the social harmony．
Confucius traveled throughout the country，imparting his wisdom to countless disciples and leaving a profound impact on Chinese society．The significance of Confucius's thoughts cannot be overstated．His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture，fostering respect for authority，harmonious relationships，and the pursuit of knowledge．Even today，his ideas continue to guide individuals and communities in China and beyond．
His teachings serve as a guiding light in our fast-paced and interconnected world，which remind us of the importance of integrity，compassion，and social responsibility．
1．开头句
(1)The person I admire most is...我最敬佩的人是……
(2)There are many respectable people around us．The one who I admire most is...我们身边有许多可敬的人。我最崇拜的人是……
(3)When it comes to the person who I think highly of，I would say...without hesitation．当说到我高度赞扬的人时，我会毫不犹豫地说……
2．主体句
(1)Born in...on...，...is one of...出生在……(地点)，在……(时间)，……是……之一。
(2)Graduating from...，he worked as...毕业于……，他担任……
(3)With strong will and great determination，he achieved great success in...凭借坚强的意志和决心，他在……方面取得了巨大的成功。
(4)He/She put his/her heart into...and made great contributions to...他/她全身心投入到……中去，为……做出了巨大贡献。
3．结尾句
(1)As a great...，he/she will be remembered by us forever．作为一个伟大的……，他/她将永远被我们铭记。
(2)It is his determination that inspires me to go on when I have difficulty in learning．当我在学习上有困难时，正是他的决心激励我继续前进。
(3)Having set a great example for us，he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect．他为我们树立了一个很好的榜样，他是一个非常优秀的完全值得我们钦佩和尊重的人。
谢 谢！
