高效写作 读后续写 第1讲 三年真题解析 课件(共35张)+教案--2026届高考英语外研版(2019)大一轮复习

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英语[W]
第一讲 三年真题解析
01 2025·八省联考
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was in Philadelphia for a conference when I saw an ad in the hotel. A nearby theater was showing a documentary (纪录片) about several local animal shelters that were helping to save abandoned dogs across the country. I love animals, and I felt an urge to go to this fundraising event. However, none of my co-workers would go with me, and I was worried about walking on the street alone at night.
I resigned myself to spending the evening in my hotel room, but as soon as I got back to my room I felt restless and bored. The theater where the event was taking place was only about five blocks from the hotel, and the area around the hotel didn't seem particularly dangerous. So, I decided to brave it. I gathered up my wallet and room key and set off.
It was already getting dark and the streets were nearly deserted. I managed to find the street the theater was on, but when I turned the corner, I stopped in shock. In front of the theater were a group of bikers—very big, tough-looking bikers.
I've known lots of motorcycle enthusiasts and most are nice people. However, in this case, I was a woman all alone, in a strange neighborhood, at night, and there were twenty or so very large men—all wearing insignia (徽章) that indicated they were in some sort of club—standing before me. Warning bells began to sound in my head, and my heart was pounding. Was I at the right theater Had I misread the date of the event
A sign outside the theater told me that I was in the right place on the right evening. Nevertheless, I wondered if I should rush back to my hotel instead of walking through that crowd of bikers. I finally decided that I would be safer inside the theater. Hopefully, the bikers would have gone away by the time the film was over.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150个左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside.                                                                                                                                                                                          When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group.                                                                                                                                                    
[续写线索]
写前导读:本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了作者在费城参加会议期间,得知剧院有一场关于救助流浪狗的纪录片放映及筹款活动,作者前往参加,却在剧院外看到一群看起来凶巴巴的摩托车骑手,犹豫后还是进入剧院的作者发现了什么?得知骑手们的真实身份后作者又有什么感悟?
[高分范文]
I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. They were chatting loudly and seemed to fill every corner of the place. My heart sank even further. I quickly found an empty seat in the back row, trying to make myself as inconspicuous as possible. I clutched my bag tightly, constantly glancing around, praying that nothing bad would happen. Every now and then, I peeked at the bikers, wondering what they were doing here. Were they going to cause trouble The tension in the air was palpable, and I regretted my decision to come alone.
When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. They had come to support the fundraiser for the local animal shelters. As the documentary unfolded, showing the plight of the abandoned dogs, I saw many of the bikers wiping away tears. They were as moved as I was by the heartwarming and heartbreaking stories. During the intermission, some of them even came over to me, smiling kindly and asking if I was enjoying the film. Their tough exteriors hid big, soft hearts. I felt ashamed of my initial fear and was truly grateful that I had decided to come. We spent the rest of the evening sharing our love for animals and discussing ways to help.
[词汇激活]
行为类
①紧握:clutch/grab/grasp/seize
②偷看:peek at/steal a look at/glance at
③支持:support/back/uphold/advocate
情绪类
①感动:moved/touched/affected
②羞愧:ashamed/embarrassed
[高分句型]
1.Every now and then, I peeked at the bikers, wondering what they were doing here.(运用了现在分词作状语和what引导的宾语从句)
2.As the documentary unfolded, showing the plight of the abandoned dogs, I saw many of the bikers wiping away tears.(运用了As引导的时间状语从句和现在分词短语作状语和宾语补足语)
[主题升华]
消除刻板印象,得到个人成长。
02 2024·新课标Ⅰ卷&Ⅱ卷
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I met Gunter on a cold, wet and unforgettable evening in September. I had planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference. Due to a big storm, my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half. I touched down in Vienna just 30 minutes before the departure of the last bus to Prague. The moment I got off the plane, I ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought.
That was when I met Gunter. I told him where I was going, but he said he hadn't heard of the bus station. I thought my pronunciation was the problem, so I explained again more slowly, but he still looked confused. When I was about to give up, Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend. After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century, Gunter put his phone down and started the car.
Finally, with just two minutes to spare we rolled into the bus station. Thankfully, there was a long queue (队列) still waiting to board the bus. Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus, turned around, and looked at me with a big smile on his face. “We made it,” he said.
Just then I realised that I had zero cash in my wallet. I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled out my Portuguese bankcard. He tried it several times, but the card machine just did not play along. A feeling of helplessness washed over me as I saw the bus queue thinning out.
At this moment, Gunter pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station. There, at the entrance, was a cash machine. I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the machine, and popped my card in, only to read the message: “Out of order. Sorry.”
注意:
1.续写词数应为150个左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.                                                                                                                                                     Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised.                                                                                                                                                    
[续写线索]
写前导读:本文是一篇记叙文。作者航班延误,为了赶上最后一班公共汽车,作者乘出租车去汽车站。顺利到达后,作者用葡萄牙银行卡支付没有成功,车站取款机也出现故障。接下来,谁会帮助作者呢?作者又是怎样做的呢?
[高分范文]
I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. I explained to him the urgency of catching the bus, emphasizing that otherwise I would be forced to stay overnight and buy a new ticket the next morning. Ultimately, I suggested, “I will return to Vienna in four days. If it's OK with you, I can pay you then, with an additional 10 euros as a gesture of my gratitude.” Following an uncomfortable pause, he simply nodded, saying, “I agree to this arrangement and trust you.” I thanked him with the biggest smile you can imagine, and we exchanged contact information before I got on the bus.
Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. He picked me up at the bus station where he had dropped me off four days before. Upon our arrival, we hugged each other like long lost friends. When I gave him the extra 10 euros I had promised, he didn't accept. “Buy me a beer next time you are in Vienna,” he said with a warm smile. Then we parted ways with a firm handshake and a promise to keep in touch. Gunter's kindness had turned a potentially disastrous evening into a memorable story I would cherish for years to come.
[词汇激活]
行为类
①被迫做某事:be forced to do sth
②交换:exchange
③开车接:pick up
描述类
①衔接词:最终ultimately/紧接着following
②形容词:不舒服的uncomfortable/
很久不见的long lost/灾难性的disastrous/
难忘的memorable
[高分句型]
1.He picked me up at the bus station where he had dropped me off four days before.(运用了where引导的定语从句)
2.Gunter's kindness had turned a potentially disastrous evening into a memorable story I would cherish for years to come.(运用了省略引导词that或which的定语从句)
[主题升华]
诚实和信任——筑起你我的友谊之桥。
03 2023·新课标Ⅰ卷&Ⅱ卷
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When I was in middle school, my social studies teacher asked me to enter a writing contest. I said no without thinking. I did not love writing. My family came from Brazil, so English was only my second language. Writing was so difficult and painful for me that my teacher had allowed me to present my paper on the sinking of the Titanic by acting out a play, where I played all the parts. No one laughed harder than he did.
So, why did he suddenly force me to do something at which I was sure to fail His reply: “Because I love your stories. If you're willing to apply yourself, I think you have a good shot at this.” Encouraged by his words, I agreed to give it a try.
I chose Paul Revere's horse as my subject. Paul Revere was a silversmith (银匠) in Boston who rode a horse at night on April 18, 1775 to Lexington to warn people that British soldiers were coming. My story would come straight from the horse's mouth. Not a brilliant idea, but funny; and unlikely to be anyone else's choice.
What did the horse think, as he sped through the night Did he get tired Have doubts Did he want to quit I sympathized immediately. I got tired. I had doubts. I wanted to quit. But, like Revere's horse, I kept going. I worked hard. I checked my spelling. I asked my older sister to correct my grammar. I checked out a half dozen books on Paul Revere from the library. I even read a few of them.
When I handed in the essay to my teacher, he read it, laughed out loud, and said, “Great. Now, write it again.” I wrote it again, and again and again. When I finally finished it, the thought of winning had given way to the enjoyment of writing. If I didn't win, I wouldn't care.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150个左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news.                                                                                                                                                                                          I went to my teacher's office after the award presentation.                                                                          
[续写线索]
写前导读:本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了作者上中学的时候,老师让作者参加一个写作比赛。作者不喜欢写作,于是毫不犹豫地拒绝了。但是在老师的鼓励下,作者同意试一试。在写作过程中,作者付出了很多努力。他会获奖吗?颁奖典礼后作者和老师说了什么?
[高分范文]
A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news. I was informed that I won the first prize in the writing contest and that there would be an award presentation in two days. I was so happy to hear the news that I immediately shared it with my teacher. “I knew you'd win! I am proud of you. You made it!” he said excitedly. Then came the big day. When I was invited to the stage to receive the award, I expressed my thanks to my teacher. I said, “It's you who make me fall in love with writing, my social studies teacher. Without your recognition and guidance, I couldn't have written this article. Again thank you very much!”
I went to my teacher's office after the award presentation. My teacher was waiting for me. Holding my hands, he said, “Congratulations! You are a good writer, so keep writing.” “You know I didn't like writing before, but now I am crazy about it! I will try my best to create good works,” I said seriously. Since then, I have written many good works and now I am a famous writer. I owe my success to my social studies teacher who is a beacon in my life on the road to writing.
[词汇激活]
行为类
①告知:inform
②成功做到:make it
③表达:express
情绪类
①高兴的:happy
②自豪的:proud
③激动地:excitedly
④认真地:seriously
[高分句型]
1.I was informed that I won the first prize in the writing contest and that there would be an award presentation in two days. (运用了两个由连接词that引导的宾语从句)
2.It's you who make me fall in love with writing, my social studies teacher.(运用了强调句型)
3.I owe my success to my social studies teacher who is a beacon in my life on the road to writing.(运用了who引导的定语从句)
[主题升华]
自信是成功路上的垫脚石。
1(共35张PPT)
WELCOME UNIT
第三编 高效写作
读后续写——致知致用致素养
第一讲 三年真题解析
2024·新课标Ⅰ卷&Ⅱ卷
2023·新课标Ⅰ卷&Ⅱ卷
目录
CONTENTS
2
3
2025·八省联考
1
2025·八省联考
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was in Philadelphia for a conference when I saw an ad in the hotel. A nearby theater was showing a documentary (纪录片) about several local animal shelters that were helping to save abandoned dogs across the country. I love animals, and I felt an urge to go to this fundraising event. However, none of my co-workers would go with me, and I was worried about walking on the street alone at night.
I resigned myself to spending the evening in my hotel room, but as soon as I got back to my room I felt restless and bored. The theater where the event was taking place was only about five blocks from the hotel, and the area around the hotel didn't seem particularly dangerous. So, I decided to brave it. I gathered up my wallet and room key and set off.
It was already getting dark and the streets were nearly deserted. I managed to find the street the theater was on, but when I turned the corner, I stopped in shock. In front of the theater were a group of bikers—very big, tough-looking bikers.
I've known lots of motorcycle enthusiasts and most are nice people. However, in this case, I was a woman all alone, in a strange neighborhood, at night, and there were twenty or so very large men—all wearing insignia (徽章) that indicated they were in some sort of club—standing before me. Warning bells began to sound in my head, and my heart was pounding. Was I at the right theater Had I misread the date of the event
A sign outside the theater told me that I was in the right place on the right evening. Nevertheless, I wondered if I should rush back to my hotel instead of walking through that crowd of bikers. I finally decided that I would be safer inside the theater. Hopefully, the bikers would have gone away by the time the film was over.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150个左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside.﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍
When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group.﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍
[续写线索]
写前导读:本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了作者在费城参加会议期间,得知剧院有一场关于救助流浪狗的纪录片放映及筹款活动,作者前往参加,却在剧院外看到一群看起来凶巴巴的摩托车骑手,犹豫后还是进入剧院的作者发现了什么?得知骑手们的真实身份后作者又有什么感悟?
[高分范文]
I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. They were chatting loudly and seemed to fill every corner of the place. My heart sank even further. I quickly found an empty seat in the back row, trying to make myself as inconspicuous as possible. I clutched my bag tightly, constantly glancing around, praying that nothing bad would happen. Every now and then, I peeked at the bikers, wondering what they were doing here. Were they going to cause trouble The tension in the air was palpable, and I regretted my decision to come alone.
When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. They had come to support the fundraiser for the local animal shelters. As the documentary unfolded, showing the plight of the abandoned dogs, I saw many of the bikers wiping away tears. They were as moved as I was by the heartwarming and heartbreaking stories. During the intermission, some of them even came over to me, smiling kindly and asking if I was enjoying the film. Their tough exteriors hid big, soft hearts. I felt ashamed of my initial fear and was truly grateful that I had decided to come. We spent the rest of the evening sharing our love for animals and discussing ways to help.
[词汇激活]
行为类
①紧握:clutch/grab/grasp/seize
②偷看:peek at/steal a look at/glance at
③支持:support/back/uphold/advocate
情绪类
①感动:moved/touched/affected
②羞愧:ashamed/embarrassed
[高分句型]
1.Every now and then, I peeked at the bikers, wondering what they were doing here.(运用了现在分词作状语和what引导的宾语从句)
2.As the documentary unfolded, showing the plight of the abandoned dogs, I saw many of the bikers wiping away tears.(运用了As引导的时间状语从句和现在分词短语作状语和宾语补足语)
[主题升华]
消除刻板印象,得到个人成长。
2024·新课标Ⅰ卷&Ⅱ卷
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I met Gunter on a cold, wet and unforgettable evening in September. I had planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference. Due to a big storm, my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half. I touched down in Vienna just 30 minutes before the departure of the last bus to Prague. The moment I got off the plane, I ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought.
That was when I met Gunter. I told him where I was going, but he said he hadn't heard of the bus station. I thought my pronunciation was the problem, so I explained again more slowly, but he still looked confused. When I was about to give up, Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend. After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century, Gunter put his phone down and started the car.
Finally, with just two minutes to spare we rolled into the bus station. Thankfully, there was a long queue (队列) still waiting to board the bus. Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus, turned around, and looked at me with a big smile on his face. “We made it,” he said.
Just then I realised that I had zero cash in my wallet. I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled out my Portuguese bankcard. He tried it several times, but the card machine just did not play along. A feeling of helplessness washed over me as I saw the bus queue thinning out.
At this moment, Gunter pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station. There, at the entrance, was a cash machine. I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the machine, and popped my card in, only to read the message: “Out of order. Sorry.”
注意:
1.续写词数应为150个左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍
Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised.﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍
[续写线索]
写前导读:本文是一篇记叙文。作者航班延误,为了赶上最后一班公共汽车,作者乘出租车去汽车站。顺利到达后,作者用葡萄牙银行卡支付没有成功,车站取款机也出现故障。接下来,谁会帮助作者呢?作者又是怎样做的呢?
[高分范文]
I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. I explained to him the urgency of catching the bus, emphasizing that otherwise I would be forced to stay overnight and buy a new ticket the next morning. Ultimately, I suggested, “I will return to Vienna in four days. If it's OK with you, I can pay you then, with an additional 10 euros as a gesture of my gratitude.” Following an uncomfortable pause, he simply nodded, saying, “I agree to this arrangement and trust you.” I thanked him with the biggest smile you can imagine, and we exchanged contact information before I got on the bus.
Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. He picked me up at the bus station where he had dropped me off four days before. Upon our arrival, we hugged each other like long lost friends. When I gave him the extra 10 euros I had promised, he didn't accept. “Buy me a beer next time you are in Vienna,” he said with a warm smile. Then we parted ways with a firm handshake and a promise to keep in touch. Gunter's kindness had turned a potentially disastrous evening into a memorable story I would cherish for years to come.
[词汇激活]
行为类
①被迫做某事:be forced to do sth
②交换:exchange
③开车接:pick up
描述类
①衔接词:最终ultimately/紧接着following
②形容词:不舒服的uncomfortable/
很久不见的long lost/灾难性的disastrous/
难忘的memorable
[高分句型]
1.He picked me up at the bus station where he had dropped me off four days before.(运用了where引导的定语从句)
2.Gunter's kindness had turned a potentially disastrous evening into a memorable story I would cherish for years to come.(运用了省略引导词that或which的定语从句)
[主题升华]
诚实和信任——筑起你我的友谊之桥。
2023·新课标Ⅰ卷&Ⅱ卷
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When I was in middle school, my social studies teacher asked me to enter a writing contest. I said no without thinking. I did not love writing. My family came from Brazil, so English was only my second language. Writing was so difficult and painful for me that my teacher had allowed me to present my paper on the sinking of the Titanic by acting out a play, where I played all the parts. No one laughed harder than he did.
So, why did he suddenly force me to do something at which I was sure to fail His reply: “Because I love your stories. If you're willing to apply yourself, I think you have a good shot at this.” Encouraged by his words, I agreed to give it a try.
I chose Paul Revere's horse as my subject. Paul Revere was a silversmith (银匠) in Boston who rode a horse at night on April 18, 1775 to Lexington to warn people that British soldiers were coming. My story would come straight from the horse's mouth. Not a brilliant idea, but funny; and unlikely to be anyone else's choice.
What did the horse think, as he sped through the night Did he get tired Have doubts Did he want to quit I sympathized immediately. I got tired. I had doubts. I wanted to quit. But, like Revere's horse, I kept going. I worked hard. I checked my spelling. I asked my older sister to correct my grammar. I checked out a half dozen books on Paul Revere from the library. I even read a few of them.
When I handed in the essay to my teacher, he read it, laughed out loud, and said, “Great. Now, write it again.” I wrote it again, and again and again. When I finally finished it, the thought of winning had given way to the enjoyment of writing. If I didn't win, I wouldn't care.
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A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍
I went to my teacher's office after the award presentation. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍
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写前导读:本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了作者上中学的时候,老师让作者参加一个写作比赛。作者不喜欢写作,于是毫不犹豫地拒绝了。但是在老师的鼓励下,作者同意试一试。在写作过程中,作者付出了很多努力。他会获奖吗?颁奖典礼后作者和老师说了什么?
[高分范文]
A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news. I was informed that I won the first prize in the writing contest and that there would be an award presentation in two days. I was so happy to hear the news that I immediately shared it with my teacher. “I knew you'd win! I am proud of you. You made it!” he said excitedly. Then came the big day. When I was invited to the stage to receive the award, I expressed my thanks to my teacher. I said, “It's you who make me fall in love with writing, my social studies teacher. Without your recognition and guidance, I couldn't have written this article. Again thank you very much!”
I went to my teacher's office after the award presentation. My teacher was waiting for me. Holding my hands, he said, “Congratulations! You are a good writer, so keep writing.” “You know I didn't like writing before, but now I am crazy about it! I will try my best to create good works,” I said seriously. Since then, I have written many good works and now I am a famous writer. I owe my success to my social studies teacher who is a beacon in my life on the road to writing.
[词汇激活]
行为类
①告知:inform
②成功做到:make it
③表达:express
情绪类
①高兴的:happy
②自豪的:proud
③激动地:excitedly
④认真地:seriously
[高分句型]
1.I was informed that I won the first prize in the writing contest and that there would be an award presentation in two days. (运用了两个由连接词that引导的宾语从句)
2.It's you who make me fall in love with writing, my social studies teacher.(运用了强调句型)
3.I owe my success to my social studies teacher who is a beacon in my life on the road to writing.(运用了who引导的定语从句)
[主题升华]
自信是成功路上的垫脚石。