英语[W]
第三讲 高分主题分类演练
1．涉及家人之间互相关爱(如：节日惊喜、送礼物、问候、父母教子女生活技能或做人道理、子女帮父母解决困难、家人间共同的温馨经历等)；
2．涉及亲人间的矛盾冲突(或缺乏沟通，或疏于陪伴，或相互误会等)。
此类文章中重点涉及个人的喜、怒、哀、乐、害怕、紧张、孤单、骄傲、喜悦等细节描写。有关该话题的文章旨在帮助中学生建立和满的家庭关系，进而领悟到要珍惜亲情，意识到家庭和睦、家人间的关爱和相互尊重以及有效沟通非常重要。
1．[内疚]Overwhelmed by guilt, Asad quickly picked up the wallet and strode to Fahad, “I found it over there, and I think it is yours.”
阿萨德满心愧疚，赶紧拿起钱包，大步向法赫德走去，“我在那里找到的，我想它是你的。”
2．[内疚]She now could do nothing but feel the regret burning in her heart.
她现在什么也做不了，只感到悔恨在心里燃烧。
3．[生气]Without saying a word, I got up, dragged myself down the hall, and flopped into the living－room chair.
我一言不发地站起来，拖着身子穿过走廊，瘫坐在客厅的椅子上。
4．[愤怒]Seized by embarrassment and bad moods, I slammed the door and rushed out.
我感到尴尬和心情不好，摔上门就冲了出去。
5．[感动]When Ariana gave the lunch to Ashley, she saw tears well up in Ashley's eyes.
当奥丽安娜把午餐给艾希莉时，她看到艾希莉的眼泪夺眶而出。
6．[激动]Excitement crept over his heart and made him grin from ear to ear.
兴奋悄悄涌上他的心头，使他笑得合不拢嘴。
7．[破裂]During the trip, we intentionally avoided each other. However, I couldn't help glancing at her when she turned back and I sensed the same.
旅程中，我们有意避开彼此。然而，当她回头时，我也忍不住看了她一眼，我也有同样的感觉。
8．[弥补]Therefore, we both learned to be tolerant and brave enough to always forgive.
因此，我们都学会了宽容，勇敢地去原谅别人。
9．[升华]My mom's words of praise and advice were deeply engraved in my heart. And I promised to be a better guardian of Sara.
妈妈的赞美和忠告深深地铭刻在我心里。我答应要好好地保护萨拉。
10．[升华]It is a reminder—not of failure, but of my mother's courage, the courage to go ahead.
这提醒我——不是失败，而是母亲的勇气，勇往直前的勇气。
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(2025·湖南省长沙市第一中学高三阶段性检测(一))When our youngest sister was born, my little brother Tom was six and I was eight. I had always been the “Big Sister” and he had always been “The Baby”．
Our sister's arrival was a complete surprise to both of us. In those days no one worried much about sibling rivalry (兄弟姐妹间的较劲), and no “experts” told us how to deal with another child in the house. We had wise and loving Grandpa and Mom, however.
I was excited about the baby and loved to hold her and help care for her. Tom's feelings were quite different! He just looked at her and left, preferring to spend the evening in his room. When I went to his room to talk to him and try to get him to play games with me, he just looked away. “Why did they have to get that baby？” Tom asked.
Later that night, Grandpa came over to see the new baby. As he held her, he said to Tom, “You know, she's a lot like the baby lamb I'm raising on the bottle. I have to take care of her and feed her often, just the way your mom does with the baby.” Tom said, “I'd rather have the lamb.”
Grandpa heard and said, “Well, if you'd rather have a lamb, maybe we could trade your little sister for it. I'll give you a day to think it over, and if you still want to trade tomorrow, we'll do it.” I thought I saw him wink at Mom, but I knew I must have been mistaken because Grandpa never winked at anyone.
After Grandpa left, Mom read to Tom for a long while. Tom kept looking at the baby, and Mom asked him to hold our little sister while she went to the bathroom. When Mom came back, Tom was gently touching the baby's smooth black hair, and as he held her hand, she took hold of his finger.
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“Mom, look! She's holding my hand！” Tom smiled. “She's a day older now. I think she's worth five lambs now，” Tom said.
写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了作者最小的妹妹出生时，弟弟Tom (汤姆)六岁，作者八岁。作者能够照顾小妹妹，而Tom对这个小妹妹却十分排斥。Tom对小妹妹的感情有没有增加？爷爷的计策对Tom管用吗？
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“Mom, look! She's holding my hand！” Tom smiled. “Sure, she knows you're her brother，” Mom smiled. He held the baby for more minutes, and seemed much happier at bedtime. The next day, Tom and I spent much of the day watching the baby bathe, watching her sleep and holding her. That evening, when Grandpa came back and asked Tom whether he was ready to trade, Tom looked surprised that Grandpa had remembered the bargain. He began to worry that Grandpa would take our sister away.
“She's a day older now. I think she's worth five lambs now，” Tom said. Grandpa looked shocked, and said he had to think it over. Anxious, Tom went to Mom's room and held the baby for long. The next day, Grandpa visited us and told Tom he was preparing five lambs. Tom took a deep breath and said, “The baby is worth fifty lambs now！” Annoyed, Grandpa answered, “I can't afford fifty lambs. I guess you'll have to keep her and help your parents look after her.” Tom smiled, and this time I really did see Grandpa wink at Mom.
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(2025·黑龙江省哈尔滨市第三十二中学高三月考)Every Sunday, the competition started. The three of us would set our alarm clocks to wake up earlier than anyone else. I had set my alarm clock to six in the morning, hoping that my brothers wouldn't start before me.
Beep. Beep. Beep. Groaning, I reached over to my nightstand and slapped the top of my alarm clock. “Too early on this cold winter day，” I murmured. I curled back into my warm blanket and fell asleep again.
My eyes blinked open to the whirring sound of the vacuum cleaner. “They chose their chores first！” I thought with despair. I jumped up from my bed and rushed to the bathroom, where I started the only chore that was left for me. I would definitely be shoveling (铲) the driveway while they built an igloo (冰屋), I thought cheerlessly, rubbing and wiping madly at the toilet bowl.
When I finished cleaning the toilet and sink, my brothers came into the bathroom to watch me clean the bathtub as they mocked me about how I'd overslept and got stuck with the longest chore. “Whoever finishes last has to shovel the driveway, remember？” my older brother reminded me with a triumphant smile when we put on our big coats and snow pants to go outside.
The three of us stepped outside into the knee deep snow and shielded our eyes from the brightness. My brothers wasted no time and dashed off to play in the yard, leaving me behind to tackle the frustrating task of shoveling the driveway. With a heavy sigh, I inched through the thick snow to the driveway, my boots sinking with each step. I grunted (嘟哝) with effort as my brothers yelled with joy. Sunday would never be my day, I sighed.
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Suddenly, I heard the sound of a shovel rubbing against the driveway concrete. After we finished, we sat inside the igloo, laughing about our morning adventures.
写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了作者因为比兄弟们起床晚不得不做最繁重的家务并清理大雪后的车道，作者因此非常沮丧。作者的兄弟们会帮他清理车道吗？作者有什么感悟呢？
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Suddenly. I heard the sound of a shovel rubbing against the driveway concrete. Turning around, I saw my brothers busily scooping snow from the driveway. “We're not helping; we just need blocks of snow for our igloo，” my younger brother explained hastily. Watching them, I couldn't help but smile. Despite their explanation, it was clear they were helping me, which greatly warmed my heart. With their help, the task became easier, and soon scoop by scoop, we cleared out the driveway together, laughing and chatting as we worked. We dug up enough snow to build the igloo of our dreams.
After we finished, we sat inside the igloo, laughing about our morning adventures. As we sipped on some hot cocoa, the warmth of the cocoa and the snugness of the igloo made me forget all about the cold outside. Looking around at my brothers' smiling faces, I felt a warm sense of contentment. Despite our silly competitions and occasional teasing, there was nowhere else I'd rather be than right there, surrounded by my family. As we sat together, I couldn't help but feel grateful for these moments. It wasn't just about the igloo or the hot cocoa; it was about the bond we shared as siblings. That day, as we sat in our cozy snow fortress, I realized that our rivalry was just a small part of the love and support we had for each other. And that's what made our Sundays so special.
善行义举是中华民族的传统美德。由于这类语篇非常适合给学生传达积极向上的正能量，因此受到出题者的偏爱。2020年的新高考全国卷《John's Bright Idea》就是这种类型。善行义举类语篇在续写中可能涉及家庭、学校、工作、生活等方方面面，描写的部分主要有：遭遇困难时的绝望、无助、尴尬、窘迫、苦恼等等；提供帮助的想法、言语、动作等等；受到帮助的感激、感动、温暖等等；困难得以解决的开心、喜悦等等；以及最后主题升华的意识领悟等。
绝望无助类：
be sunk into hopelessness 陷入绝望
in despair 在绝望中
be overwhelmed by a feeling of despair 深感绝望
with one's head hanging down 耷拉着头
尴尬窘迫类：
flush with embarrassment 尴尬得脸发红
lower one's head 低下头
feel one's face burning 感觉脸上滚烫
feel the blood rush to one's face 感到血液涌上脸颊
提供帮助类：
do sb a favor 帮某人一个忙
give/lend sb a hand 帮助某人
spare no efforts to help sb 不遗余力地帮助某人
It's much better to teach how to fish than to give fish. 授人以鱼不如授人以渔。
感激类：
give sb a hug 拥抱某人
be grateful for 对……表示感激
express/offer one's heartfelt gratitude 表达衷心的感谢
hold sb tightly in the arms 把某人紧紧抱在怀里
温暖感动类：
be moved to tears 感动得流泪
tears spring to one's eyes 热泪盈眶
a warm current rises in one's heart 一股暖流涌上心头
melt the ice in one's heart 融化了某人内心的寒冰
开心喜悦类：
flash/wear a bright smile 露出灿烂的笑容
light up (面)露喜色
one's eyes twinkle with pleasure 高兴得眼睛闪闪发光
one's eyes dance with joy and sweetness 眼里荡漾着开心与甜蜜
意识领悟类：
be aware of 意识到
be overcome with emotions 心中百感交集
hold the belief that ... 相信……
learn from the experience that ... 从这段经历中学到……
句式一：It's ... that ... (强调句)
1．It is love that makes the world go round and Bernard felt it deep in his little heart.
正是爱让世界转动，伯纳德在心里深深地感受到了这一点。
2．It's Mr Johnson's encouragement that gave me courage and confidence.
是约翰逊老师的鼓励给予了我勇气和自信。
句式二：from then on＋行动
1．From then on, I made up my mind to pass on “love” to others. Just as a saying goes, “Roses given, fragrance in hand.”
从那以后，我下定决心向别人传递“爱”。俗话说：“赠人玫瑰，手留余香。”
2．From that day on, every time I meet someone who needs help, I always reach out to them, hoping to pass on the kindness that Mexican family offered me.
从那天起，每当我遇到需要帮助的人，我总是伸出手去帮助他们，希望把墨西哥家庭给予我的善意传递下去。
句式三：It dawned on sb that ...
1．It dawned on me that a moment of kindness could mean so much to another, and that a simple act could make the world so much better.
我恍然大悟，某一刻的善良对另一个人来说意义重大，而一个简单的行为可以使世界变得更加美好。
2．It dawned on Mia that sometimes a small act of kindness may be powerful enough to make a huge difference.
米娅突然意识到，有时候一个小小的善举可能足以产生巨大的影响。
]句式四：Only ... (倒装句)
1．Only when we open up the door of our heart can we be bathed in the brilliant sunshine.
只有当我们打开心扉，我们才能沐浴在灿烂的阳光中。
2．Only then did I realize that it was kindness and love that made our world so warm and beautiful.
直到那时我才意识到，正是爱和善意让我们的世界如此温暖、美丽。
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(2025·湖北省襄阳市襄城区襄阳市第五中学高三月考)It was late, about 10：15 pm when Janice Esposito safely arrived at the Bellport, New York, train station; she happily jumped into her little car, and couldn't wait to begin the 20 minute drive home to see her loved husband and seven year old son. She had just returned from visiting her older mother in Los Angles and had traveled the route many times before. She drove on autopilot (自动驾驶) practically and skillfully: a left onto Station Road, then a left on Montauk Highway, and then suddenly—wham!
Out of nowhere on that awful night a truck hit Janice's car, violently pushing her to move backward some 100 feet away onto the railroad tracks. She sat in the car, bruised (撞伤) but mostly just knocked out by the impact and by the vehicle's airbags.
As it happened, Pete DiPinto was getting ready for bed. He'd just closed his book, turned off the light and was lazily crawling under the covers when he heard the high pitched clang sound of metal on metal and breaking glass coming from not far outside his bedroom window. As a volunteer firefighter and retired teacher, DiPinto, 64, instantly became alert and never stopped to think. He quickly grabbed a big professional flashlight out of habit, put his own cellphone in the pocket of his pajamas (睡衣), and hurriedly ran out the door without getting changed. “Any firefighter would have done what I did，” he later told Newsday. “We're always on duty.”
The first truck DiPinto came upon, 2，000 feet away from his front yard, was the one that had hit Janice, who was trapped in her car still, her eyes closed and her mind semiconscious. He looked around and spotted one wheel of Janice's car positioned on the railroad tracks.
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And then he heard a terrible sound: the bells signaling an oncoming train. The heavy train, traveling at 65 miles per hour, crashed into the car.
写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了Janice (贾尼斯)看望母亲回来，不料路上却出了车祸。她的车被撞到铁路轨道上。DiPinto (迪平托)听到声音迅速出来营救。火车就要来了， DiPinto如何帮助Janice脱困呢？沉重的撞击下，Janice是否平安？
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And then he heard a terrible sound: the bells signaling an oncoming train. DiPinto's heart froze in his chest as he realized the upcoming danger. Without any delay, he rushed towards Janice's car. After quickly assessing the situation, despite the huge potential risk, DiPinto swiftly smashed open the car's window with his big professional flashlight, swung open the door and mightily pulled Janice out of the vehicle before it was too late. The speeding train was roaring towards the car like a monster in times of crisis.
The heavy train, traveling at 65 miles per hour, crashed into the car. With a loud bang, the car was knocked off. Some flying debris shooting in all directions, DiPinto instinctively protected Janice from being hurt again with his own body. Fortunately, they both narrowly escaped! DiPinto calmly dialed 911 and it didn't take long before Janice was rushed to hospital. Thanks to DiPinto's heroic rescue, Janice had a near brush with death. Afterward, DiPinto was reported and awarded “A Hero in Pajamas” to honor his fearless and selfless actions.
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(2025·江苏省靖江高级中学高三月考)There's a lot that goes into moving to a new city. You're house hunting in areas you aren't familiar with, dragging all of your belongings around, trying to figure out which grocery store keeps your favourite noodles in stock, and wondering when you'll ever find a new dentist. This was exactly what I went through when I settled in Chicago.
Every day, I was fully occupied, exhausted. I found my new city so big and unfriendly.
After graduating from college in May, I moved from the town of Oxford, Mississippi, to Chicago to start my full time job. Typically, when I went through lots of change in my life, I had consistent faces around me: my family or my friends. This time, however, it was just me. And for someone who's an introvert (内向的人), this was anything but easy.
Besides, the job itself was also something beyond my expectation. What I learnt in college was totally different from what I needed to do in the company. I worked longer hours to sort things out and couldn't sleep well at night. It was a lot of change at once. It was too much. I was helpless.
What's worse, my poor health added to the helplessness. Due to days of pressure, I had a physical problem. It seemed that I had to go to hospital for a thorough examination. It seemed a small challenge compared to the one I was about to face, but things started to go wrong right from the beginning.
Not having a car or knowing the city, I was depending on a couple of buses to get around. Although I'd left myself plenty of time, soon it was obvious that I was going to be late, as I had mistakenly got on a bus that was taking me in the opposite direction.
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I had no choice but to get off the bus. Suddenly, a car stopped in front of me and it was the same woman.
写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了作者初到芝加哥定居时，觉得这个城市似乎对自己不太友好。由于工作压力，作者就因身体不适需要去医院进行检查，然而因人生地不熟坐错了车。作者该怎么办？陌生的女子和作者之间发生了什么故事？
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I had no choice but to get off the bus. Standing on the pavement, I felt totally at a loss. Strangers passed by, but I couldn't gather the courage to ask for directions. Just at the moment, a middle aged woman, instead of moving on, stopped to ask if I needed help. After I explained my situation to her, she pointed to a bus stop across the street. “No.5 bus will take you to the hospital，” she said kindly. I showed my thanks and hurried to the stop, where I waited for the bus restlessly.
Suddenly, a car stopped in front of me and it was the same woman. She waved her hand and offered to give me a ride. The smile on her face was so bright that I was nearly moved to tears. With gratitude filling my heart, I got in the car. “I see you're not familiar with the city，” she chuckled. I told her about my helplessness in the new city along the way. “Don't worry. Everything will work out here，” she comforted me when dropping me off at the hospital. Yes, everything would go fine, starting from making such an amazing friend.
纵观历年高考英语中的读后续写，很容易发现人与自我主题尤其凸显青少年的自我迷茫、自我学习、自我突破、自我领悟、自我成长的过程。无论在家庭、校园，还是在社会场景中，成长的过程总是伴随着挑战和突破，最终实现对自我的更深认知。因此，按照情节发展，个人成长类读后续写内容可分为三个阶段：
阶段 情节发展 情绪刻画
第一阶段 成长前的苦恼 负面情绪塑造
第二阶段 成长中 努力＋反思
第三阶段 成长后的升华 感悟＋感激＋升华
成长前的苦恼(负面情绪塑造)
1．I was about to respond when I felt my tongue tied and palms sweating.
我正要回答时，感到舌头打结，手掌也开始出汗。
2．Worried about the journey, I was unsettled for the first few days.
由于担心这次旅行，头几天我心神不宁。
3．I was so nervous about the English test that I lay awake half the night, worrying.
我对英语考试感到如此紧张，以至于大半夜都睡不着觉，心神不宁。
4．On hearing the bad news, she felt seized by a burst of sadness and couldn't help crying bitterly.
一听到这个坏消息，她被一股悲伤之情控制，忍不住痛哭起来。
5．He gazed at the confusion around him and was overwhelmed by a feeling of despair.
他凝视着周围一片混乱，感到一阵绝望。
6．She felt exhausted and sat by the stream resting her aching feet.
她感到精疲力竭，坐在小溪边使疼痛的双脚放松一下。
成长中(努力挣扎应对＋反思)
1．Scared and shocked, she couldn't say a word.
她又害怕又震惊，一句话也说不出来。
2．Raising her eyebrows in surprise, Mrs Rossi froze, as if rooted on the ground.
罗西太太惊讶地扬起眉毛，僵住了，仿佛定格在那里一样。
3．“That's not the right way. Patience, Will. Patience，” a voice echoed in my ears after the boys left.
“这不是正确的方式。耐心，威尔。耐心，”男孩们离开后，一个声音在我耳边回响。
4．ked up at him, his eyes sparkling with hope and determination.
杰斯抬头看着他，眼睛里闪烁着希望和决心。
5．I was deeply moved by what he had done, tears rolling down without control.
我被他的所作所为深深打动了，泪水情不自禁地夺眶而出。
6．Tears dropping from his eyes, he ran to Mum's warm hug and said gently, “Mum, thank you.”
他热泪盈眶，跑向妈妈温暖的怀抱，温柔地说：“妈妈，谢谢你。”
成长后的升华(感悟＋感激＋升华)
1．His face is glowing with excitement.
他的脸因激动而容光焕发。
2．I looked at her, tears of love and gratitude welling up in my eyes.
我看着她，爱与感激的泪水夺眶而出。
3．“Thank you，” I replied, with a mixture of gratitude and excitement.
“谢谢你，”我带着感激和兴奋的心情回答道。
4．It was the first time that I had truly realized the meaning of the gift—patience.
这是我第一次真正体会到这份礼物的意义——耐心。
5．It dawned on Adam that one should stick to his dream no matter what happens.
亚当突然想到，无论发生什么事，都要坚持自己的梦想。
6．Determination and optimism are what it takes to conquer your fear and accomplish your goal.
战胜恐惧和实现目标，需要决心和乐观。
7．Today's experience was like an everlasting flower, blooming in the river of my memories.
今天的经历像是一朵永不凋谢的花朵，永远绽放在我的记忆长河里。(比喻)
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(2025·云南省云南民族大学附属高级中学高三月考)Dressed in my white polo shirt and black pants, I was ready for my first day as a fashion's worker. I had been working on a register for over two weeks when they decided that I was ready to work as a shop assistant.
I remember the feeling of excitement because this was something new, and nervousness because I didn't know what was going to happen. I didn't even know whom I would be working with. So many thoughts came floating into my head as I walked from my car to the store.
“What if the customers don't like me What if I can't handle this job Will I remember everything？” With my mind filled with all these what ifs, I walked back to the break room and put my purse in my locker. Then, with my shaking hands and upset stomach, I walked back to the front of the store and met with Theresa at the service desk where Theresa greeted me warmly.
“We are going to have you work with Vicki today. She is a friendly lady and takes charge of the men's department. She can teach you how to communicate with the customers. So let's take a walk back to the men's department, and she can get you trained in，” Theresa said.
“Okay，” I replied with nervousness.
Walking for what seemed like a long time, we finally reached our destination. Vicki, a young lady in her early thirties, came bouncing out to receive us with a light hearted walk and a brilliant white smile. We must have caught her a little off guard because she stopped, stared at us for a moment, and said, “Hi Theresa！”
“Hey, Vicki! I'd like you to meet Kayli. She is going to be working with you for the next couple of weeks.” Theresa introduced me to this young lady.
“Hi, Kayli，” she replied with more enthusiasm than I had expected.
“Well, I'll leave it up to you, Vicki，” Theresa happily replied, then turned and walked away, leaving Vicki and me standing there.
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In front of a stranger alone, my nervousness grew. Listening to her words, I started to relax and had more confidence in myself.
写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了作者作为时尚行业工作者第一天的工作经历。与新同事初次见面，新同事会在工作中如何指导作者呢？过后作者会有怎样的感悟？
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In front of a stranger alone, my nervousness grew. I had a smile on my face. But as a matter of fact, I had butterflies in my stomach. I expected the usual uncomfortable silence that always happens when two strangers meet, but I was wrong. Vicki was very comfortable to be around and easy to talk to. She felt my nervousness. “Take it easy. Just be yourself and you will do a good job，” Vicki smiled at me. Then she explained different styles and trends, and how to assist customers.
Listening to her words, I started to relax and had more confidence in myself. I recited the information of many clothes and couldn't wait to serve the customer on my own. That day I received ten customers and all of them showed satisfaction with me. I regained my confidence and no longer doubted myself. That day, I ended up learning more than just the tasks of a fashion's worker. I learned to communicate, and to just be myself. Vicki has taught me that it was okay to be myself, and for that, I will be forever grateful.
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(2025·福建省福州市高中毕业班质量监测(一模))Emily Harper sat at her desk, staring blankly at the math problems in front of her. Numbers and variables danced confusingly across the page, laughing at her every effort. At school, Emily was known for her artistic talents, but math had always been her weakness. No matter how hard she tried, she just couldn't make sense of it.
Her struggles only worsened in the 10th grade. The pressure to keep up with her classmates grew, and the poor grades shook her confidence. Her parents decided to step in. “We need to find you some help，” her mother gently suggested one evening.
Then came Mr Jenkins, a retired local teacher known for his unique teaching style. Emily was initially resistant; the idea of spending extra hours on a subject she hated seemed like a punishment. But she unwillingly agreed, knowing something had to change.
Their first session was tense. Mr Jenkins, sensing her frustration, didn't dive straight into problems. Instead, he asked about her interests. When Emily spoke passionately about her painting, he smiled. “Math is like art, Emily. It has patterns and beauty if you know where to look.”
Doubtful but inspired, Emily listened as he began to explain concepts through visual examples. He used colors and shapes, turning abstract numbers into something almost tangible (有形的). For the first time, math seemed less like a foreign language and more like a puzzle waiting to be solved.
However, progress was slow. Weeks passed with minimal improvement, and Emily's patience wore thin. A particularly difficult quiz left her in tears, convinced she was sure to fail. Mr Jenkins said, “Remember, Emily, every artist starts with a blank canvas. Masterpieces aren't created overnight.”
Encouraged by his firm belief, Emily pushed on. She began to see the connections between the steps, how each solution followed a logical path. Small victories in practice problems gave her some hope. Mr Jenkins was always there, celebrating her successes, no matter how minor.
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Gradually, Emily's confidence grew with Mr Jenkins' help. Emily's heart raced when the results day arrived.
写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了Emily Harper (埃米莉·哈珀)擅长艺术，但数学一直是她的弱项。尽管很努力，但她的成绩仍然不理想。她的父母找来退休教师Jenkins (詹金斯)帮助她。Jenkins老师将数学与艺术联系起来，逐渐激发了她的兴趣。Emily会取得进步吗？成绩公布后， Emily会有什么感悟？
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Gradually, Emily's confidence grew with Mr Jenkins' help. She found herself approaching math problems with a newfound curiosity instead of anxiety. The once confusing numbers and symbols began to become patterns she could understand. Mr Jenkins continued to teach her in his unique way. When it's time for her to take the mid term test, her once hesitant hand now moved steadily across the paper. The joy she felt when a solution clicked into place was something she had never expected to experience with math.
Emily's heart raced when the results day arrived. She sat in the classroom, her hands trembling slightly as she received her test paper. Her eyes widened in disbelief as she saw the grade—a solid A. Tears of relief and happiness welled up in her eyes. At that moment, Emily knew that she had not only conquered her fear of math but also discovered the power of perseverance.
比赛表演类一般属于人与自我以及人与社会的主题语境。一般比赛可能涉及常见的绘画、写作等主题；竞技球类比赛涉及体育活动、大型体育赛事、体育与健康、体育精神的话题。个人表演，演讲比赛类多涉及认识自我、丰富自我、完善自我的子主题。一般比赛常涉及如何面对失败，进行自我反思，实现个人成长的故事；竞技球类比赛呈现尊重对手，收获友谊的体育精神的故事或者是与同伴协助取得团队胜利的故事，又或者是在同伴或者家人的鼓励下取得比赛成功的故事。个人表演和演讲比赛类经常讲述个人经过克服舞台恐惧，在其他人的鼓励下克服心理障碍，收获个人成长与他人肯定的故事。 按照情节发展，比赛表演类读后续写内容可以分为三个阶段：
阶段 情节发展 情绪刻画
第一阶段 比赛前(中)的苦恼或问题 负面情绪塑造(紧张、尴尬、担忧、困惑)
第二阶段 他人帮助/帮助他人 努力＋坚持(疲惫、挣扎、坚持、感动)
第三阶段 观众反应＋赛后感受 动作＋情感＋环境＋升华(拥抱、鼓掌、欢呼、流泪)
比赛前(中)的苦恼或问题(负面情绪塑造)
1．Hard as he trained, he still made little progress, which put him on the verge of collapse.
尽管他努力训练，但仍然没有取得什么进步，这使他处于崩溃的边缘。
2．I spoke in a nervous voice and even stuttered a few times. My legs trembled and so did my voice.
我说话声音紧张，甚至结巴了几次。我的腿在颤抖，声音也在颤抖。
3．My heart sank, because I was concerned all the training that I had done was in vain.
我的心凉了半截，因为我担心我所做的所有训练都是徒劳的。
4．When I stood on the stage in front of the large audience, my mind went blank.
我站在舞台上面对大批观众时，我的大脑一片空白。
5．Exhausted, I slid into bed and fell fast asleep.
我精疲力竭地躺在床上，很快就睡着了。
比赛中(努力挣扎应对＋反思)
1．He was about to quit when his teacher cast an encouraging glance at him.
他正要放弃时，老师向他投来了鼓励的目光。
2．A flush of excitement surged through him as he made another attempt.
当他再次尝试时，一阵兴奋涌上心头。
3．I could feel that all the eyes were fixed on us. A strong sense of nervousness surged through me.
我能感觉到所有的眼睛都盯着我们。一种强烈的紧张感涌上我的全身。
4．Swiftly adjusting his breath, he swam forward like an arrow off the bowstring.
他迅速调整呼吸，像离弦的箭一样向前游去。
5．My heart beating wildly, I tried my best and got closer to the other runners.
我的心跳得很厉害，我尽了最大的努力，离其他跑步者越来越近了。
比赛后的升华(感悟＋感激＋升华)
1．Never in his wildest dream had he expected that he won the first prize.
他做梦也没想到自己获得了一等奖。
2．As long as we don't give up hope and make every effort to overcome all the difficulties, we will surely achieve our goals finally.
只要不放弃希望并竭尽全力克服所有困难，我们最终会实现我们的目标。
3．Only then did I realize that it was bravery that could conquer any difficulty that came in the way.
直到那时，我才意识到，勇敢能够战胜途中遇到的一切困难。
4．Standing on the podium, he said gratefully, “Without your support, I wouldn't be here. This honor is ours.”
他站在领奖台上，感激地说：“没有你们的支持，我不可能站在这里，荣誉属于我们。”
5．Just as the saying goes, one person can go far, but a group of persons can travel farther.
正如俗话所说，一个人可以走得很远，但一群人可以走得更远。
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(2025·广东省中山市濠头中学等校高三检测)It was a sunny day. Anabia, an 11 year old girl, was excited because today was the drawing contest at her school. Anabia was really good at drawing and usually got the highest marks in art. Her teachers would often ask her to make posters for school plays and call on her during free periods to help with cuttings, drawing, shading, colouring and much more. There was an art competition taking place in school and Anabia had worked really hard and wanted to win it. But there was one thing that was disturbing her today.
Recently, a new girl, Rida, had joined her class. She was also interested in art but she was not as good at drawing as Anabia was. Miss Saima, the art teacher, helped Rida and taught her tips and tricks to improve her drawing skill. And now Rida was also considered among the best artists in grade six.
Rida was quick, smart and intelligent. Anabia became jealous of Rida's intelligence and felt that the new girl would be tough to beat.
So that day, for the art competition, Miss Saima took all the students to the art room, told them their roll numbers and gave important instructions. Anabia's roll number was 16, while Rida was number 17. The bell rang, indicating the beginning of the contest. Miss Saima wrote on the board: make a scene of a sunset with a flowing river and a sailing boat.
Anabia knew that the best tools to make a sunset were oil pastels (油画棒). Anabia started to look for her oil pastels in her art bag. Then, after looking through the bag, she remembered that she had left them at home. Immediately, she got up to tell Miss Saima.
Miss Saima was disappointed at Anabia's carelessness and told her that she could not help her, as it was her responsibility to come prepared for the contest that had been announced a week in advance. Anabia's best friends were also there, but none of them offered to share anything, much to Anabia's surprise and disappointment.
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Anabia's eyes were filled with tears. Then Rida held Anabia's hand, and the two girls waited for the winners to be announced.
写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。Anabia (阿纳比亚)很擅长画画，经常在艺术方面得到最高分。新来的女孩Rida (里达)敏捷、聪明，也被认为是六年级最好的艺术家之一。Anabia开始嫉妒Rida。今天学校举办绘画比赛，Anabia忘记带油画棒了，却没有人借给她。Anabia该怎么办？比赛结果如何呢？
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Anabia's eyes were filled with tears. She found something hard to swallow. To her sadness, she lost the art competition before she even started. Just then, a box of oil painting sticks appeared in front of her eyes. “If you don't mind, I think we can share these.” Rida, the girl who she once hoped to beat, extended a helping hand. Anabia hesitated, but quickly they were both devoted into their works. Time flies in the blink of an eye. After handing in their works, Anabia reached out her hand.
Then Rida held Anabia's hand, and the two girls waited for the winners to be announced. “I'm sorry. I once became jealous of your intelligence, and hoped to beat you，” Anabia apologized sincerely. Rida hugged her delightedly and said she hoped they would be friends in the future. It seemed that who would be the winner was not so important at the moment. The sun shone warm sunlight into the room and also shone on the hearts of the two girls. The world always prepares a surprise for the people who like the sun. They both got the first place.
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(2025·辽宁省鞍山市普通高中高三质量监测)In the small town of Elmsworth, there lived a boy named Daniel, who was often overshadowed by his more outgoing siblings (兄弟姐妹). He was quiet and thoughtful, preferring the company of books to that of people. Yet, deep inside, there was a burning desire to prove himself, to step out of the shadows and into the light.
One day, a golden opportunity presented itself when his school announced a public speaking competition, an opportunity that Daniel knew he had to seize. The competition represented not just an academic challenge but a personal one. It was a chance to remove his self doubts and show his true abilities to himself and others. But the thought of standing alone on a stage filled him with fear, a terrible feeling that always kept him in the shadows. Daniel didn't tell his mother the news of the speaking competition when he got home after school that day. But his mother sensed his hesitation and pain. Instead of suggesting anything, she took him for a walk in the woods just beyond their backyard. There, among the towering trees, she showed him a tiny acorn (橡子) lying in the soil. “This small acorn，” she bent down and said, “has the potential to become a powerful oak (橡树). It will push through the soil, fighting against the darkness and seeking the light. It's the same with you, Daniel. The strength to grow, to reach for the sky, is already within you.” She paused, allowing the words to sink into his heart, her gaze filled with the belief that he too could achieve greatness.
Daniel looked at the acorn, then at his mother, and felt a spark of determination. It was as if the tiny acorn had whispered to his soul, “You too can rise above the ordinary.” With a newfound sense of purpose, he knew he would face the competition with the same strength that the acorn would one day display as a towering oak.
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With renewed courage, Daniel began to prepare for the competition. The day of the competition arrived.
写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了Daniel (丹尼尔)在兄弟姐妹中并不起眼，他渴望证明自己，在学校宣布要举行公开演讲比赛后，Daniel想抓住这个机会，但是又充满了恐惧。妈妈的话给了他力量，Daniel是如何准备比赛的？比赛结果如何？
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With renewed courage, Daniel began to prepare for the competition. Immersed in the world of words and ideas, he rose early, referring to books and practicing his speech every day, with his voice echoing through the quiet house. He also stayed up late, polishing his message. He felt his confidence grow as he mastered the art of public speaking. He stood in front of the mirror, his voice growing increasingly strong with each repetition. The words that once stumbled on his tongue now flowed with ease. With time going by, he was fueled by the belief that he could achieve what once seemed impossible.
The day of the competition arrived. Waiting backstage, Daniel felt his heart pounding in his chest and nervousness surging through him, which almost weakened his resolution. Closing his eyes, he recalled the acorn's silent strength and his mother's words. With the image of the strong oak guiding him, he stepped on the stage, ready to embrace his moment in the spotlight. He delivered his speech in clear, persuasive and infectious language, which surprised even himself. Thunderous applause lingering in the room, Daniel knew he had proved himself, stepping out of the shadows and into the light.
众所周知，遇险脱困是读后续写中非常重要的一类故事，它并不只出现在人与自然主题语境中，在人与社会主题语境下，也会有火灾、洪水、溺水、迷路、交通事故、突发疾病等紧急情况。从最初遇险的惊慌害怕，绝望无助，到想办法救援，到最后获救的宽慰和感激，涉及一系列的表达。
情节线：遭遇危险(恶劣环境/危险描写&情感描写)——出现转机(想到办法&呼救求助)——救援脱险(救援描述&情感描写)——感悟升华(历险者/救援者)
情感线：焦急紧张/恐惧无助——筋疲力尽——欣喜/欣慰——感动/感谢/感悟
1．Exhausted as we were, we didn't stop. Gritting our teeth, we kept digging the trench.
尽管我们筋疲力尽，但是我们没有停下来。我们咬紧牙关继续挖沟槽。
2．Inch by inch, we dug the snow out. After what seemed a century, we made it.
我们一点一点地把雪挖出来。在经历了似乎一个世纪之后(夸张)，我们终于成功了。
3．No sooner had we arrived where the child was trapped than the man started to scan the surroundings. Then he inched toward the hole and stretched out to seize the child's hands, pulling him out without reserve.
我们一到孩子被困的地方，那个人就开始观察周围的环境。然后他慢慢地向洞口走去，伸手抓住孩子的手，把他完全拉了出来。(动作链)
4．It seemed that his mouth was full of blood, his eyes red with anger and the mouth widely open.
他的嘴里似乎满是血，眼睛因愤怒而发红，嘴巴张得很大。
5．I shouted for help at the top of my voice but in vain.
我声嘶力竭地喊叫求助，但徒劳无功。
6．Seeing this, she felt terror welling up in her heart and surging through her.
当她看到这个时，她感到恐惧涌上心头并且涌向全身。
7．When she saw the beast, so terrified was she that the throat tightened and the knees weakened.
当她看到这只野兽的时候，她如此害怕以至于喉咙发紧，膝盖发软。
8．Extremely frightened, I found my body was trembling and my palms were sweating.
非常害怕，我发现我的身体正在发抖，手心正在冒汗。
9．I breathed a sigh of relief, throwing my arms around him and hugged him tightly.
我如释重负地松了口气，伸出双臂紧紧地抱住了他。
10．Smiling in relief, I felt a rush of gratitude welling up in my heart.
我如释重负地笑了笑，感觉心里涌起一阵感恩。
11．With tears filling his eyes, Richard expressed his gratitude in a weak voice.
理查德眼里充满泪水，用微弱的声音表达了他的感激之情。
12．With tears of appreciation rolling down his cheeks, he said thankfully, “You have saved me today. I couldn't thank you enough.”
感激的泪水顺着脸颊流下，他感激地说：“今天你救了我，我对你感激不尽。”
13．What a narrow escape! It turns out that there is always a way out of any difficult situation as long as we stay calm.
真是九死一生啊！事实证明，只要我们保持冷静，任何困境都有出路。
14．Only then did I realize that actions can cure fear and bravery can conquer difficulties.
直到那时，我才意识到行动可以治愈恐惧，勇敢可以战胜困难。
15．Never should we give up our hope whatever setbacks we are faced with.
无论遇到什么挫折，我们绝不该放弃希望。
16．This painful adventure teaches me not to despair even in the darkest hour, because after every night there is a day.
这次痛苦的冒险教会了我即使在最黑暗的时刻也不要绝望，因为黑夜之后就是黎明。
17．“Be patient! The rescue team is on the way.” These words brought a ray of hope to the seemingly hopeless situation.
“耐心点！救援队已经在路上了。”这句话给看似绝望的处境带来了一线希望。
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(2025·江苏省射阳中学高三月考)One summer day, I decided to go for a walk in the nearby forest. I had my backpack prepared with water, food, and sunscreen. I was excited to spend some time in nature, away from the busy city.
The forest was attractive, with towering trees that seemed to touch the sky and colorful wildflowers under my feet. I walked deeper into the woods, attracted by the pleasant sounds of birds. The path I followed was winding and narrow, but I paid little attention, carried away by the beauty. I started to notice that the trees around me looked unfamiliar. Soon I found myself lost. I realized that I had no idea which way to go.
The sun was setting and I knew that I needed to find a way out before it got dark. I started walking, trying to remember which direction I had come from. But the forest was a maze (迷宫) of winding paths, and I soon found myself going in circles. Every tree looked the same, and every path seemed to lead nowhere.
The sound of leaves made me jump. Was it a wild animal My heart was racing and I tried to stay calm as I listened for other sounds. But there was only silence, broken now and then by the distant calls of birds.
As the sun set, I fully understood the seriousness of my situation. There was no food or water left. I was completely alone, lost in a wilderness that could easily devour (吞噬) me. I walked nervously, tripping over things in my path, feeling frightened with a racing heartbeat. Hours passed, or maybe only minutes. Time had lost all meaning in this place.
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But then, as I was about to give up hope, I saw a weak light in the distance. The house's owner welcomed me inside.
写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。一个夏日，作者前往附近的森林散步，享受自然。但是作者迷路了，四周的景象变得陌生。太阳西下，作者意识到自己身处险境，孤独地在森林中徘徊。作者正打算放弃希望，突然看到远处有一束微弱的光。微弱的光来自哪里？作者走出森林了吗？
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But then, as I was about to give up hope, I saw a weak light in the distance. As I came closer, the light grew brighter. It was coming from a small area in the forest. In the center stood a tiny wooden house, its windows shining warmly in the darkness. With a feeling of hope, I ran towards the house and knocked on the door. A man opened it, with his face filled with worry. “Are you lost？” he asked. I nodded, too tired to speak.
The house's owner welcomed me inside. I sat down on a chair and the man offered me food and water. We talked for hours about his life in the forest. His eyes told me that he had found peace in that wilderness. He kindly allowed me to stay overnight at his house. As the sun rose above the treetops, I knew that it was time to leave. The man offered to guide me out of the forest. From then on, we became friends. I learned something valuable from my journey that sometimes when we are lost, we find unexpected treasures.
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(2025·安徽省合肥市第七中学高三月考)After a busy week, Emily and her parents decided to go on a mountain picnic. They longed to fully experience nature's beauty and enjoy quality family time. Little did they know, this outing would be filled with unexpected twists and turns (波折)．
Arriving at the mountain's base, they discovered a house, in front of which Mike and his father had just finished loading a boat onto Mike's truck. Emily approached them and asked for the best picnic spot in the area. Knowing the mountain well, Mike suggested a location about two hours' walk away. “It's worth the effort，” he assured them.
Parking their car next to Mike's truck and carrying their picnic supplies, Emily and her parents set off on the winding road. Tall green trees on one side, a flowing stream on the other, the road eventually led them to a breathtaking clearing dotted with colorful wildflowers. They enjoyed their delicious sandwiches, fruits, and snacks, engaging in pleasant conversations.
Just as they finished their meal and settled down to relax, dark clouds unexpectedly rolled in. It looked like rain. Panicked, they hurriedly set up the tent they had brought. No sooner had they entered than raindrops began pouring on the roof. Heavy rain enveloped the surroundings, making it impossible to see anything. They had no choice but to patiently wait it out.
After what felt like a century, the rain ceased. Emily and her parents wasted no time packing up their belongings, ready to get downhill. However, their excitement turned to worry when they discovered that the small stream they had previously crossed had turned into a wide and impassable river. With no cellphone signal, they were trapped without a means of seeking help. To make matters worse, darkness was approaching.
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Suddenly, they heard the sound of a vehicle from across the river. Emily and her parents boarded the boat.
写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了Emily (埃米莉)和家人外出野餐，结果在山上的时候下了暴雨，之前越过的小溪变成了一条宽阔而无法通行的河流，他们被困在那里，因手机没有信号而无法寻求帮助。谁会来救他们呢？他们会如何脱困？
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Suddenly, they heard the sound of a vehicle from across the river. A truck appeared around the bend of the road—a sense of relief washed over them as they realized it was Mike's truck. It turned out that Mike had noticed that it was getting dark but Emily's car was still parked in the open space in front of his house. Thinking of the heavy rain, he suspected something bad might have happened to them. Without delay, Mike and his father jumped into the truck and headed uphill. Nearing the picnic spot, Mike heard the shout for help and, in the next moment, saw Emily and her parents waving their hands desperately on the other side of the river. Mike immediately stopped, and with his father's help, moved the boat from his truck into the water.
Emily and her parents boarded the boat. Safely crossing the river, they returned to the base of the mountain in Mike's truck. Emily and her parents were not only grateful for their safe return, but also for the kindness and assistance they received from Mike and his father. They expressed their heartfelt thanks to Mike and his father for their swift response and invaluable assistance, tears welling up in their eyes. This unforgettable experience taught them the power of kindness and inspired them to pay it forward. They also learned a valuable lesson on the importance of being well prepared for exploring nature. No doubt it is a mountain picnic that has left a deep impression on them.
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WELCOME UNIT
第三编 高效写作
读后续写——致知致用致素养
第三讲 高分主题分类演练
善行义举类
个人成长类
目录
CONTENTS
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家庭亲情类
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比赛表演类
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遇险脱困类
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家庭亲情类
1．涉及家人之间互相关爱(如：节日惊喜、送礼物、问候、父母教子女生活技能或做人道理、子女帮父母解决困难、家人间共同的温馨经历等)；
2．涉及亲人间的矛盾冲突(或缺乏沟通，或疏于陪伴，或相互误会等)。
此类文章中重点涉及个人的喜、怒、哀、乐、害怕、紧张、孤单、骄傲、喜悦等细节描写。有关该话题的文章旨在帮助中学生建立和满的家庭关系，进而领悟到要珍惜亲情，意识到家庭和睦、家人间的关爱和相互尊重以及有效沟通非常重要。
1．[内疚]Overwhelmed by guilt, Asad quickly picked up the wallet and strode to Fahad, “I found it over there, and I think it is yours.”
阿萨德满心愧疚，赶紧拿起钱包，大步向法赫德走去，“我在那里找到的，我想它是你的。”
2．[内疚]She now could do nothing but feel the regret burning in her heart.
她现在什么也做不了，只感到悔恨在心里燃烧。
3．[生气]Without saying a word, I got up, dragged myself down the hall, and flopped into the living－room chair.
我一言不发地站起来，拖着身子穿过走廊，瘫坐在客厅的椅子上。
4．[愤怒]Seized by embarrassment and bad moods, I slammed the door and rushed out.
我感到尴尬和心情不好，摔上门就冲了出去。
5．[感动]When Ariana gave the lunch to Ashley, she saw tears well up in Ashley's eyes.
当奥丽安娜把午餐给艾希莉时，她看到艾希莉的眼泪夺眶而出。
6．[激动]Excitement crept over his heart and made him grin from ear to ear.
兴奋悄悄涌上他的心头，使他笑得合不拢嘴。
7．[破裂]During the trip, we intentionally avoided each other. However, I couldn't help glancing at her when she turned back and I sensed the same.
旅程中，我们有意避开彼此。然而，当她回头时，我也忍不住看了她一眼，我也有同样的感觉。
8．[弥补]Therefore, we both learned to be tolerant and brave enough to always forgive.
因此，我们都学会了宽容，勇敢地去原谅别人。
9．[升华]My mom's words of praise and advice were deeply engraved in my heart. And I promised to be a better guardian of Sara.
妈妈的赞美和忠告深深地铭刻在我心里。我答应要好好地保护萨拉。
10．[升华]It is a reminder—not of failure, but of my mother's courage, the courage to go ahead.
这提醒我——不是失败，而是母亲的勇气，勇往直前的勇气。
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(2025·湖南省长沙市第一中学高三阶段性检测(一))When our youngest sister was born, my little brother Tom was six and I was eight. I had always been the “Big Sister” and he had always been “The Baby”．
Our sister's arrival was a complete surprise to both of us. In those days no one worried much about sibling rivalry (兄弟姐妹间的较劲), and no “experts” told us how to deal with another child in the house. We had wise and loving Grandpa and Mom, however.
I was excited about the baby and loved to hold her and help care for her. Tom's feelings were quite different! He just looked at her and left, preferring to spend the evening in his room. When I went to his room to talk to him and try to get him to play games with me, he just looked away. “Why did they have to get that baby？” Tom asked.
Later that night, Grandpa came over to see the new baby. As he held her, he said to Tom, “You know, she's a lot like the baby lamb I'm raising on the bottle. I have to take care of her and feed her often, just the way your mom does with the baby.” Tom said, “I'd rather have the lamb.”
Grandpa heard and said, “Well, if you'd rather have a lamb, maybe we could trade your little sister for it. I'll give you a day to think it over, and if you still want to trade tomorrow, we'll do it.” I thought I saw him wink at Mom, but I knew I must have been mistaken because Grandpa never winked at anyone.
After Grandpa left, Mom read to Tom for a long while. Tom kept looking at the baby, and Mom asked him to hold our little sister while she went to the bathroom. When Mom came back, Tom was gently touching the baby's smooth black hair, and as he held her hand, she took hold of his finger.
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“Mom, look! She's holding my hand！” Tom smiled. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍
“She's a day older now. I think she's worth five lambs now，” Tom said. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍
写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了作者最小的妹妹出生时，弟弟Tom (汤姆)六岁，作者八岁。作者能够照顾小妹妹，而Tom对这个小妹妹却十分排斥。Tom对小妹妹的感情有没有增加？爷爷的计策对Tom管用吗？
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“Mom, look! She's holding my hand！” Tom smiled. “Sure, she knows you're her brother，” Mom smiled. He held the baby for more minutes, and seemed much happier at bedtime. The next day, Tom and I spent much of the day watching the baby bathe, watching her sleep and holding her. That evening, when Grandpa came back and asked Tom whether he was ready to trade, Tom looked surprised that Grandpa had remembered the bargain. He began to worry that Grandpa would take our sister away.
“She's a day older now. I think she's worth five lambs now，” Tom said. Grandpa looked shocked, and said he had to think it over. Anxious, Tom went to Mom's room and held the baby for long. The next day, Grandpa visited us and told Tom he was preparing five lambs. Tom took a deep breath and said, “The baby is worth fifty lambs now！” Annoyed, Grandpa answered, “I can't afford fifty lambs. I guess you'll have to keep her and help your parents look after her.” Tom smiled, and this time I really did see Grandpa wink at Mom.
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(2025·黑龙江省哈尔滨市第三十二中学高三月考)Every Sunday, the competition started. The three of us would set our alarm clocks to wake up earlier than anyone else. I had set my alarm clock to six in the morning, hoping that my brothers wouldn't start before me.
Beep. Beep. Beep. Groaning, I reached over to my nightstand and slapped the top of my alarm clock. “Too early on this cold winter day，” I murmured. I curled back into my warm blanket and fell asleep again.
My eyes blinked open to the whirring sound of the vacuum cleaner. “They chose their chores first！” I thought with despair. I jumped up from my bed and rushed to the bathroom, where I started the only chore that was left for me. I would definitely be shoveling (铲) the driveway while they built an igloo (冰屋), I thought cheerlessly, rubbing and wiping madly at the toilet bowl.
When I finished cleaning the toilet and sink, my brothers came into the bathroom to watch me clean the bathtub as they mocked me about how I'd overslept and got stuck with the longest chore. “Whoever finishes last has to shovel the driveway, remember？” my older brother reminded me with a triumphant smile when we put on our big coats and snow pants to go outside.
The three of us stepped outside into the knee deep snow and shielded our eyes from the brightness. My brothers wasted no time and dashed off to play in the yard, leaving me behind to tackle the frustrating task of shoveling the driveway. With a heavy sigh, I inched through the thick snow to the driveway, my boots sinking with each step. I grunted (嘟哝) with effort as my brothers yelled with joy. Sunday would never be my day, I sighed.
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Suddenly, I heard the sound of a shovel rubbing against the driveway concrete.﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍
After we finished, we sat inside the igloo, laughing about our morning adventures. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍
写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了作者因为比兄弟们起床晚不得不做最繁重的家务并清理大雪后的车道，作者因此非常沮丧。作者的兄弟们会帮他清理车道吗？作者有什么感悟呢？
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Suddenly. I heard the sound of a shovel rubbing against the driveway concrete. Turning around, I saw my brothers busily scooping snow from the driveway. “We're not helping; we just need blocks of snow for our igloo，” my younger brother explained hastily. Watching them, I couldn't help but smile. Despite their explanation, it was clear they were helping me, which greatly warmed my heart. With their help, the task became easier, and soon scoop by scoop, we cleared out the driveway together, laughing and chatting as we worked. We dug up enough snow to build the igloo of our dreams.
After we finished, we sat inside the igloo, laughing about our morning adventures. As we sipped on some hot cocoa, the warmth of the cocoa and the snugness of the igloo made me forget all about the cold outside. Looking around at my brothers' smiling faces, I felt a warm sense of contentment. Despite our silly competitions and occasional teasing, there was nowhere else I'd rather be than right there, surrounded by my family. As we sat together, I couldn't help but feel grateful for these moments. It wasn't just about the igloo or the hot cocoa; it was about the bond we shared as siblings. That day, as we sat in our cozy snow fortress, I realized that our rivalry was just a small part of the love and support we had for each other. And that's what made our Sundays so special.
善行义举类
善行义举是中华民族的传统美德。由于这类语篇非常适合给学生传达积极向上的正能量，因此受到出题者的偏爱。2020年的新高考全国卷《John's Bright Idea》就是这种类型。善行义举类语篇在续写中可能涉及家庭、学校、工作、生活等方方面面，描写的部分主要有：遭遇困难时的绝望、无助、尴尬、窘迫、苦恼等等；提供帮助的想法、言语、动作等等；受到帮助的感激、感动、温暖等等；困难得以解决的开心、喜悦等等；以及最后主题升华的意识领悟等。
绝望无助类：
be sunk into hopelessness 陷入绝望
in despair 在绝望中
be overwhelmed by a feeling of despair 深感绝望
with one's head hanging down 耷拉着头
尴尬窘迫类：
flush with embarrassment 尴尬得脸发红
lower one's head 低下头
feel one's face burning 感觉脸上滚烫
feel the blood rush to one's face 感到血液涌上脸颊
提供帮助类：
do sb a favor 帮某人一个忙
give/lend sb a hand 帮助某人
spare no efforts to help sb 不遗余力地帮助某人
It's much better to teach how to fish than to give fish. 授人以鱼不如授人以渔。
感激类：
give sb a hug 拥抱某人
be grateful for 对……表示感激
express/offer one's heartfelt gratitude 表达衷心的感谢
hold sb tightly in the arms 把某人紧紧抱在怀里
温暖感动类：
be moved to tears 感动得流泪
tears spring to one's eyes 热泪盈眶
a warm current rises in one's heart 一股暖流涌上心头
melt the ice in one's heart 融化了某人内心的寒冰
开心喜悦类：
flash/wear a bright smile 露出灿烂的笑容
light up (面)露喜色
one's eyes twinkle with pleasure 高兴得眼睛闪闪发光
one's eyes dance with joy and sweetness 眼里荡漾着开心与甜蜜
意识领悟类：
be aware of 意识到
be overcome with emotions 心中百感交集
hold the belief that ... 相信……
learn from the experience that ... 从这段经历中学到……
句式一：It's ... that ... (强调句)
1．It is love that makes the world go round and Bernard felt it deep in his little heart.
正是爱让世界转动，伯纳德在心里深深地感受到了这一点。
2．It's Mr Johnson's encouragement that gave me courage and confidence.
是约翰逊老师的鼓励给予了我勇气和自信。
句式二：from then on＋行动
1．From then on, I made up my mind to pass on “love” to others. Just as a saying goes, “Roses given, fragrance in hand.”
从那以后，我下定决心向别人传递“爱”。俗话说：“赠人玫瑰，手留余香。”
2．From that day on, every time I meet someone who needs help, I always reach out to them, hoping to pass on the kindness that Mexican family offered me.
从那天起，每当我遇到需要帮助的人，我总是伸出手去帮助他们，希望把墨西哥家庭给予我的善意传递下去。
句式三：It dawned on sb that ...
1．It dawned on me that a moment of kindness could mean so much to another, and that a simple act could make the world so much better.
我恍然大悟，某一刻的善良对另一个人来说意义重大，而一个简单的行为可以使世界变得更加美好。
2．It dawned on Mia that sometimes a small act of kindness may be powerful enough to make a huge difference.
米娅突然意识到，有时候一个小小的善举可能足以产生巨大的影响。
句式四：Only ... (倒装句)
1．Only when we open up the door of our heart can we be bathed in the brilliant sunshine.
只有当我们打开心扉，我们才能沐浴在灿烂的阳光中。
2．Only then did I realize that it was kindness and love that made our world so warm and beautiful.
直到那时我才意识到，正是爱和善意让我们的世界如此温暖、美丽。
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(2025·湖北省襄阳市襄城区襄阳市第五中学高三月考)It was late, about 10：15 pm when Janice Esposito safely arrived at the Bellport, New York, train station; she happily jumped into her little car, and couldn't wait to begin the 20 minute drive home to see her loved husband and seven year old son. She had just returned from visiting her older mother in Los Angles and had traveled the route many times before. She drove on autopilot (自动驾驶) practically and skillfully: a left onto Station Road, then a left on Montauk Highway, and then suddenly—wham!
Out of nowhere on that awful night a truck hit Janice's car, violently pushing her to move backward some 100 feet away onto the railroad tracks. She sat in the car, bruised (撞伤) but mostly just knocked out by the impact and by the vehicle's airbags.
As it happened, Pete DiPinto was getting ready for bed. He'd just closed his book, turned off the light and was lazily crawling under the covers when he heard the high pitched clang sound of metal on metal and breaking glass coming from not far outside his bedroom window. As a volunteer firefighter and retired teacher, DiPinto, 64, instantly became alert and never stopped to think. He quickly grabbed a big professional flashlight out of habit, put his own cellphone in the pocket of his pajamas (睡衣), and hurriedly ran out the door without getting changed. “Any firefighter would have done what I did，” he later told Newsday. “We're always on duty.”
The first truck DiPinto came upon, 2，000 feet away from his front yard, was the one that had hit Janice, who was trapped in her car still, her eyes closed and her mind semiconscious. He looked around and spotted one wheel of Janice's car positioned on the railroad tracks.
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And then he heard a terrible sound: the bells signaling an oncoming train. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍
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The heavy train, traveling at 65 miles per hour, crashed into the car. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍
写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了Janice (贾尼斯)看望母亲回来，不料路上却出了车祸。她的车被撞到铁路轨道上。DiPinto (迪平托)听到声音迅速出来营救。火车就要来了， DiPinto如何帮助Janice脱困呢？沉重的撞击下，Janice是否平安？
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And then he heard a terrible sound: the bells signaling an oncoming train. DiPinto's heart froze in his chest as he realized the upcoming danger. Without any delay, he rushed towards Janice's car. After quickly assessing the situation, despite the huge potential risk, DiPinto swiftly smashed open the car's window with his big professional flashlight, swung open the door and mightily pulled Janice out of the vehicle before it was too late. The speeding train was roaring towards the car like a monster in times of crisis.
The heavy train, traveling at 65 miles per hour, crashed into the car. With a loud bang, the car was knocked off. Some flying debris shooting in all directions, DiPinto instinctively protected Janice from being hurt again with his own body. Fortunately, they both narrowly escaped! DiPinto calmly dialed 911 and it didn't take long before Janice was rushed to hospital. Thanks to DiPinto's heroic rescue, Janice had a near brush with death. Afterward, DiPinto was reported and awarded “A Hero in Pajamas” to honor his fearless and selfless actions.
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(2025·江苏省靖江高级中学高三月考)There's a lot that goes into moving to a new city. You're house hunting in areas you aren't familiar with, dragging all of your belongings around, trying to figure out which grocery store keeps your favourite noodles in stock, and wondering when you'll ever find a new dentist. This was exactly what I went through when I settled in Chicago.
Every day, I was fully occupied, exhausted. I found my new city so big and unfriendly.
After graduating from college in May, I moved from the town of Oxford, Mississippi, to Chicago to start my full time job. Typically, when I went through lots of change in my life, I had consistent faces around me: my family or my friends. This time, however, it was just me. And for someone who's an introvert (内向的人), this was anything but easy.
Besides, the job itself was also something beyond my expectation. What I learnt in college was totally different from what I needed to do in the company. I worked longer hours to sort things out and couldn't sleep well at night. It was a lot of change at once. It was too much. I was helpless.
What's worse, my poor health added to the helplessness. Due to days of pressure, I had a physical problem. It seemed that I had to go to hospital for a thorough examination. It seemed a small challenge compared to the one I was about to face, but things started to go wrong right from the beginning.
Not having a car or knowing the city, I was depending on a couple of buses to get around. Although I'd left myself plenty of time, soon it was obvious that I was going to be late, as I had mistakenly got on a bus that was taking me in the opposite direction.
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I had no choice but to get off the bus. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍
Suddenly, a car stopped in front of me and it was the same woman. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍
写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了作者初到芝加哥定居时，觉得这个城市似乎对自己不太友好。由于工作压力，作者就因身体不适需要去医院进行检查，然而因人生地不熟坐错了车。作者该怎么办？陌生的女子和作者之间发生了什么故事？
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I had no choice but to get off the bus. Standing on the pavement, I felt totally at a loss. Strangers passed by, but I couldn't gather the courage to ask for directions. Just at the moment, a middle aged woman, instead of moving on, stopped to ask if I needed help. After I explained my situation to her, she pointed to a bus stop across the street. “No.5 bus will take you to the hospital，” she said kindly. I showed my thanks and hurried to the stop, where I waited for the bus restlessly.
Suddenly, a car stopped in front of me and it was the same woman. She waved her hand and offered to give me a ride. The smile on her face was so bright that I was nearly moved to tears. With gratitude filling my heart, I got in the car. “I see you're not familiar with the city，” she chuckled. I told her about my helplessness in the new city along the way. “Don't worry. Everything will work out here，” she comforted me when dropping me off at the hospital. Yes, everything would go fine, starting from making such an amazing friend.
个人成长类
纵观历年高考英语中的读后续写，很容易发现人与自我主题尤其凸显青少年的自我迷茫、自我学习、自我突破、自我领悟、自我成长的过程。无论在家庭、校园，还是在社会场景中，成长的过程总是伴随着挑战和突破，最终实现对自我的更深认知。因此，按照情节发展，个人成长类读后续写内容可分为三个阶段：
阶段 情节发展 情绪刻画
第一阶段 成长前的苦恼 负面情绪塑造
第二阶段 成长中 努力＋反思
第三阶段 成长后的升华 感悟＋感激＋升华
成长前的苦恼(负面情绪塑造)
1．I was about to respond when I felt my tongue tied and palms sweating.
我正要回答时，感到舌头打结，手掌也开始出汗。
2．Worried about the journey, I was unsettled for the first few days.
由于担心这次旅行，头几天我心神不宁。
3．I was so nervous about the English test that I lay awake half the night, worrying.
我对英语考试感到如此紧张，以至于大半夜都睡不着觉，心神不宁。
4．On hearing the bad news, she felt seized by a burst of sadness and couldn't help crying bitterly.
一听到这个坏消息，她被一股悲伤之情控制，忍不住痛哭起来。
5．He gazed at the confusion around him and was overwhelmed by a feeling of despair.
他凝视着周围一片混乱，感到一阵绝望。
6．She felt exhausted and sat by the stream resting her aching feet.
她感到精疲力竭，坐在小溪边使疼痛的双脚放松一下。
成长中(努力挣扎应对＋反思)
1．Scared and shocked, she couldn't say a word.
她又害怕又震惊，一句话也说不出来。
2．Raising her eyebrows in surprise, Mrs Rossi froze, as if rooted on the ground.
罗西太太惊讶地扬起眉毛，僵住了，仿佛定格在那里一样。
3．“That's not the right way. Patience, Will. Patience，” a voice echoed in my ears after the boys left.
“这不是正确的方式。耐心，威尔。耐心，”男孩们离开后，一个声音在我耳边回响。
4．ked up at him, his eyes sparkling with hope and determination.
杰斯抬头看着他，眼睛里闪烁着希望和决心。
5．I was deeply moved by what he had done, tears rolling down without control.
我被他的所作所为深深打动了，泪水情不自禁地夺眶而出。
6．Tears dropping from his eyes, he ran to Mum's warm hug and said gently, “Mum, thank you.”
他热泪盈眶，跑向妈妈温暖的怀抱，温柔地说：“妈妈，谢谢你。”
成长后的升华(感悟＋感激＋升华)
1．His face is glowing with excitement.
他的脸因激动而容光焕发。
2．I looked at her, tears of love and gratitude welling up in my eyes.
我看着她，爱与感激的泪水夺眶而出。
3．“Thank you，” I replied, with a mixture of gratitude and excitement.
“谢谢你，”我带着感激和兴奋的心情回答道。
4．It was the first time that I had truly realized the meaning of the gift—patience.
这是我第一次真正体会到这份礼物的意义——耐心。
5．It dawned on Adam that one should stick to his dream no matter what happens.
亚当突然想到，无论发生什么事，都要坚持自己的梦想。
6．Determination and optimism are what it takes to conquer your fear and accomplish your goal.
战胜恐惧和实现目标，需要决心和乐观。
7．Today's experience was like an everlasting flower, blooming in the river of my memories.
今天的经历像是一朵永不凋谢的花朵，永远绽放在我的记忆长河里。(比喻)
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(2025·云南省云南民族大学附属高级中学高三月考)Dressed in my white polo shirt and black pants, I was ready for my first day as a fashion's worker. I had been working on a register for over two weeks when they decided that I was ready to work as a shop assistant.
I remember the feeling of excitement because this was something new, and nervousness because I didn't know what was going to happen. I didn't even know whom I would be working with. So many thoughts came floating into my head as I walked from my car to the store.
What if the customers don't like me What if I can't handle this job Will I remember everything？” With my mind filled with all these what ifs, I walked back to the break room and put my purse in my locker. Then, with my shaking hands and upset stomach, I walked back to the front of the store and met with Theresa at the service desk where Theresa greeted me warmly.
“We are going to have you work with Vicki today. She is a friendly lady and takes charge of the men's department. She can teach you how to communicate with the customers. So let's take a walk back to the men's department, and she can get you trained in，” Theresa said.
“Okay，” I replied with nervousness.
Walking for what seemed like a long time, we finally reached our destination. Vicki, a young lady in her early thirties, came bouncing out to receive us with a light hearted walk and a brilliant white smile. We must have caught her a little off guard because she stopped, stared at us for a moment, and said, “Hi Theresa！”
“Hey, Vicki! I'd like you to meet Kayli. She is going to be working with you for the next couple of weeks.” Theresa introduced me to this young lady.
“Hi, Kayli，” she replied with more enthusiasm than I had expected.
“Well, I'll leave it up to you, Vicki，” Theresa happily replied, then turned and walked away, leaving Vicki and me standing there.
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In front of a stranger alone, my nervousness grew. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍
Listening to her words, I started to relax and had more confidence in myself. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍
写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了作者作为时尚行业工作者第一天的工作经历。与新同事初次见面，新同事会在工作中如何指导作者呢？过后作者会有怎样的感悟？
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In front of a stranger alone, my nervousness grew. I had a smile on my face. But as a matter of fact, I had butterflies in my stomach. I expected the usual uncomfortable silence that always happens when two strangers meet, but I was wrong. Vicki was very comfortable to be around and easy to talk to. She felt my nervousness. “Take it easy. Just be yourself and you will do a good job，” Vicki smiled at me. Then she explained different styles and trends, and how to assist customers.
Listening to her words, I started to relax and had more confidence in myself. I recited the information of many clothes and couldn't wait to serve the customer on my own. That day I received ten customers and all of them showed satisfaction with me. I regained my confidence and no longer doubted myself. That day, I ended up learning more than just the tasks of a fashion's worker. I learned to communicate, and to just be myself. Vicki has taught me that it was okay to be myself, and for that, I will be forever grateful.
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(2025·福建省福州市高中毕业班质量监测(一模))Emily Harper sat at her desk, staring blankly at the math problems in front of her. Numbers and variables danced confusingly across the page, laughing at her every effort. At school, Emily was known for her artistic talents, but math had always been her weakness. No matter how hard she tried, she just couldn't make sense of it.
Her struggles only worsened in the 10th grade. The pressure to keep up with her classmates grew, and the poor grades shook her confidence. Her parents decided to step in. “We need to find you some help，” her mother gently suggested one evening.
Then came Mr Jenkins, a retired local teacher known for his unique teaching style. Emily was initially resistant; the idea of spending extra hours on a subject she hated seemed like a punishment. But she unwillingly agreed, knowing something had to change.
Their first session was tense. Mr Jenkins, sensing her frustration, didn't dive straight into problems. Instead, he asked about her interests. When Emily spoke passionately about her painting, he smiled. “Math is like art, Emily. It has patterns and beauty if you know where to look.”
Doubtful but inspired, Emily listened as he began to explain concepts through visual examples. He used colors and shapes, turning abstract numbers into something almost tangible (有形的). For the first time, math seemed less like a foreign language and more like a puzzle waiting to be solved.
However, progress was slow. Weeks passed with minimal improvement, and Emily's patience wore thin. A particularly difficult quiz left her in tears, convinced she was sure to fail. Mr Jenkins said, “Remember, Emily, every artist starts with a blank canvas. Masterpieces aren't created overnight.”
Encouraged by his firm belief, Emily pushed on. She began to see the connections between the steps, how each solution followed a logical path. Small victories in practice problems gave her some hope. Mr Jenkins was always there, celebrating her successes, no matter how minor.
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Gradually, Emily's confidence grew with Mr Jenkins' help.﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍
Emily's heart raced when the results day arrived.﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍
写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了Emily Harper (埃米莉·哈珀)擅长艺术，但数学一直是她的弱项。尽管很努力，但她的成绩仍然不理想。她的父母找来退休教师Jenkins (詹金斯)帮助她。Jenkins老师将数学与艺术联系起来，逐渐激发了她的兴趣。Emily会取得进步吗？成绩公布后， Emily会有什么感悟？
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Gradually, Emily's confidence grew with Mr Jenkins' help. She found herself approaching math problems with a newfound curiosity instead of anxiety. The once confusing numbers and symbols began to become patterns she could understand. Mr Jenkins continued to teach her in his unique way. When it's time for her to take the mid term test, her once hesitant hand now moved steadily across the paper. The joy she felt when a solution clicked into place was something she had never expected to experience with math.
Emily's heart raced when the results day arrived. She sat in the classroom, her hands trembling slightly as she received her test paper. Her eyes widened in disbelief as she saw the grade—a solid A. Tears of relief and happiness welled up in her eyes. At that moment, Emily knew that she had not only conquered her fear of math but also discovered the power of perseverance.
比赛表演类
比赛表演类一般属于人与自我以及人与社会的主题语境。一般比赛可能涉及常见的绘画、写作等主题；竞技球类比赛涉及体育活动、大型体育赛事、体育与健康、体育精神的话题。个人表演，演讲比赛类多涉及认识自我、丰富自我、完善自我的子主题。一般比赛常涉及如何面对失败，进行自我反思，实现个人成长的故事；竞技球类比赛呈现尊重对手，收获友谊的体育精神的故事或者是与同伴协助取得团队胜利的故事，又或者是在同伴或者家人的鼓励下取得比赛成功的故事。个人表演和演讲比赛类经常讲述个人经过克服舞台恐惧，在其他人的鼓励下克服心理障碍，收获个人成长与他人肯定的故事。 按照情节发展，比赛表演类读后续写内容可以分为三个阶段：
阶段 情节发展 情绪刻画
第一阶段 比赛前(中)的苦恼或问题 负面情绪塑造(紧张、尴尬、担忧、困惑)
第二阶段 他人帮助/帮助他人 努力＋坚持(疲惫、挣扎、坚持、感动)
第三阶段 观众反应＋赛后感受 动作＋情感＋环境＋升华(拥抱、鼓掌、欢呼、流泪)
比赛前(中)的苦恼或问题(负面情绪塑造)
1．Hard as he trained, he still made little progress, which put him on the verge of collapse.
尽管他努力训练，但仍然没有取得什么进步，这使他处于崩溃的边缘。
2．I spoke in a nervous voice and even stuttered a few times. My legs trembled and so did my voice.
我说话声音紧张，甚至结巴了几次。我的腿在颤抖，声音也在颤抖。
3．My heart sank, because I was concerned all the training that I had done was in vain.
我的心凉了半截，因为我担心我所做的所有训练都是徒劳的。
4．When I stood on the stage in front of the large audience, my mind went blank.
我站在舞台上面对大批观众时，我的大脑一片空白。
5．Exhausted, I slid into bed and fell fast asleep.
我精疲力竭地躺在床上，很快就睡着了。
比赛中(努力挣扎应对＋反思)
1．He was about to quit when his teacher cast an encouraging glance at him.
他正要放弃时，老师向他投来了鼓励的目光。
2．A flush of excitement surged through him as he made another attempt.
当他再次尝试时，一阵兴奋涌上心头。
3．I could feel that all the eyes were fixed on us. A strong sense of nervousness surged through me.
我能感觉到所有的眼睛都盯着我们。一种强烈的紧张感涌上我的全身。
4．Swiftly adjusting his breath, he swam forward like an arrow off the bowstring.
他迅速调整呼吸，像离弦的箭一样向前游去。
5．My heart beating wildly, I tried my best and got closer to the other runners.
我的心跳得很厉害，我尽了最大的努力，离其他跑步者越来越近了。
比赛后的升华(感悟＋感激＋升华)
1．Never in his wildest dream had he expected that he won the first prize.
他做梦也没想到自己获得了一等奖。
2．As long as we don't give up hope and make every effort to overcome all the difficulties, we will surely achieve our goals finally.
只要不放弃希望并竭尽全力克服所有困难，我们最终会实现我们的目标。
3．Only then did I realize that it was bravery that could conquer any difficulty that came in the way.
直到那时，我才意识到，勇敢能够战胜途中遇到的一切困难。
4．Standing on the podium, he said gratefully, “Without your support, I wouldn't be here. This honor is ours.”
他站在领奖台上，感激地说：“没有你们的支持，我不可能站在这里，荣誉属于我们。”
5．Just as the saying goes, one person can go far, but a group of persons can travel farther.
正如俗话所说，一个人可以走得很远，但一群人可以走得更远。
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(2025·广东省中山市濠头中学等校高三检测)It was a sunny day. Anabia, an 11 year old girl, was excited because today was the drawing contest at her school. Anabia was really good at drawing and usually got the highest marks in art. Her teachers would often ask her to make posters for school plays and call on her during free periods to help with cuttings, drawing, shading, colouring and much more. There was an art competition taking place in school and Anabia had worked really hard and wanted to win it. But there was one thing that was disturbing her today.
Recently, a new girl, Rida, had joined her class. She was also interested in art but she was not as good at drawing as Anabia was. Miss Saima, the art teacher, helped Rida and taught her tips and tricks to improve her drawing skill. And now Rida was also considered among the best artists in grade six.
Rida was quick, smart and intelligent. Anabia became jealous of Rida's intelligence and felt that the new girl would be tough to beat.
So that day, for the art competition, Miss Saima took all the students to the art room, told them their roll numbers and gave important instructions. Anabia's roll number was 16, while Rida was number 17. The bell rang, indicating the beginning of the contest. Miss Saima wrote on the board: make a scene of a sunset with a flowing river and a sailing boat.
Anabia knew that the best tools to make a sunset were oil pastels (油画棒). Anabia started to look for her oil pastels in her art bag. Then, after looking through the bag, she remembered that she had left them at home. Immediately, she got up to tell Miss Saima.
Miss Saima was disappointed at Anabia's carelessness and told her that she could not help her, as it was her responsibility to come prepared for the contest that had been announced a week in advance. Anabia's best friends were also there, but none of them offered to share anything, much to Anabia's surprise and disappointment.
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Anabia's eyes were filled with tears. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍
Then Rida held Anabia's hand, and the two girls waited for the winners to be announced. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍
写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。Anabia (阿纳比亚)很擅长画画，经常在艺术方面得到最高分。新来的女孩Rida (里达)敏捷、聪明，也被认为是六年级最好的艺术家之一。Anabia开始嫉妒Rida。今天学校举办绘画比赛，Anabia忘记带油画棒了，却没有人借给她。Anabia该怎么办？比赛结果如何呢？
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Anabia's eyes were filled with tears. She found something hard to swallow. To her sadness, she lost the art competition before she even started. Just then, a box of oil painting sticks appeared in front of her eyes. “If you don't mind, I think we can share these.” Rida, the girl who she once hoped to beat, extended a helping hand. Anabia hesitated, but quickly they were both devoted into their works. Time flies in the blink of an eye. After handing in their works, Anabia reached out her hand.
Then Rida held Anabia's hand, and the two girls waited for the winners to be announced. “I'm sorry. I once became jealous of your intelligence, and hoped to beat you，” Anabia apologized sincerely. Rida hugged her delightedly and said she hoped they would be friends in the future. It seemed that who would be the winner was not so important at the moment. The sun shone warm sunlight into the room and also shone on the hearts of the two girls. The world always prepares a surprise for the people who like the sun. They both got the first place.
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(2025·辽宁省鞍山市普通高中高三质量监测)In the small town of Elmsworth, there lived a boy named Daniel, who was often overshadowed by his more outgoing siblings (兄弟姐妹). He was quiet and thoughtful, preferring the company of books to that of people. Yet, deep inside, there was a burning desire to prove himself, to step out of the shadows and into the light.
One day, a golden opportunity presented itself when his school announced a public speaking competition, an opportunity that Daniel knew he had to seize. The competition represented not just an academic challenge but a personal one. It was a chance to remove his self doubts and show his true abilities to himself and others. But the thought of standing alone on a stage filled him with fear, a terrible feeling that always kept him in the shadows. Daniel didn't tell his mother the news of the speaking competition when he got home after school that day. But his mother sensed his hesitation and pain. Instead of suggesting anything, she took him for a walk in the woods just beyond their backyard. There, among the towering trees, she showed him a tiny acorn (橡子)
lying in the soil. “This small acorn，” she bent down and said, “has the potential to become a powerful oak (橡树). It will push through the soil, fighting against the darkness and seeking the light. It's the same with you, Daniel. The strength to grow, to reach for the sky, is already within you.” She paused, allowing the words to sink into his heart, her gaze filled with the belief that he too could achieve greatness.
Daniel looked at the acorn, then at his mother, and felt a spark of determination. It was as if the tiny acorn had whispered to his soul, “You too can rise above the ordinary.” With a newfound sense of purpose, he knew he would face the competition with the same strength that the acorn would one day display as a towering oak.
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With renewed courage, Daniel began to prepare for the competition. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍
The day of the competition arrived. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍
写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了Daniel (丹尼尔)在兄弟姐妹中并不起眼，他渴望证明自己，在学校宣布要举行公开演讲比赛后，Daniel想抓住这个机会，但是又充满了恐惧。妈妈的话给了他力量，Daniel是如何准备比赛的？比赛结果如何？
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With renewed courage, Daniel began to prepare for the competition. Immersed in the world of words and ideas, he rose early, referring to books and practicing his speech every day, with his voice echoing through the quiet house. He also stayed up late, polishing his message. He felt his confidence grow as he mastered the art of public speaking. He stood in front of the mirror, his voice growing increasingly strong with each repetition. The words that once stumbled on his tongue now flowed with ease. With time going by, he was fueled by the belief that he could achieve what once seemed impossible.
The day of the competition arrived. Waiting backstage, Daniel felt his heart pounding in his chest and nervousness surging through him, which almost weakened his resolution. Closing his eyes, he recalled the acorn's silent strength and his mother's words. With the image of the strong oak guiding him, he stepped on the stage, ready to embrace his moment in the spotlight. He delivered his speech in clear, persuasive and infectious language, which surprised even himself. Thunderous applause lingering in the room, Daniel knew he had proved himself, stepping out of the shadows and into the light.
遇险脱困类
众所周知，遇险脱困是读后续写中非常重要的一类故事，它并不只出现在人与自然主题语境中，在人与社会主题语境下，也会有火灾、洪水、溺水、迷路、交通事故、突发疾病等紧急情况。从最初遇险的惊慌害怕，绝望无助，到想办法救援，到最后获救的宽慰和感激，涉及一系列的表达。
情节线：遭遇危险(恶劣环境/危险描写&情感描写)——出现转机(想到办法&呼救求助)——救援脱险(救援描述&情感描写)——感悟升华(历险者/救援者)
情感线：焦急紧张/恐惧无助——筋疲力尽——欣喜/欣慰——感动/感谢/感悟
1．Exhausted as we were, we didn't stop. Gritting our teeth, we kept digging the trench.
尽管我们筋疲力尽，但是我们没有停下来。我们咬紧牙关继续挖沟槽。
2．Inch by inch, we dug the snow out. After what seemed a century, we made it.
我们一点一点地把雪挖出来。在经历了似乎一个世纪之后(夸张)，我们终于成功了。
3．No sooner had we arrived where the child was trapped than the man started to scan the surroundings. Then he inched toward the hole and stretched out to seize the child's hands, pulling him out without reserve.
我们一到孩子被困的地方，那个人就开始观察周围的环境。然后他慢慢地向洞口走去，伸手抓住孩子的手，把他完全拉了出来。(动作链)
4．It seemed that his mouth was full of blood, his eyes red with anger and the mouth widely open.
他的嘴里似乎满是血，眼睛因愤怒而发红，嘴巴张得很大。
5．I shouted for help at the top of my voice but in vain.
我声嘶力竭地喊叫求助，但徒劳无功。
6．Seeing this, she felt terror welling up in her heart and surging through her.
当她看到这个时，她感到恐惧涌上心头并且涌向全身。
7．When she saw the beast, so terrified was she that the throat tightened and the knees weakened.
当她看到这只野兽的时候，她如此害怕以至于喉咙发紧，膝盖发软。
8．Extremely frightened, I found my body was trembling and my palms were sweating.
非常害怕，我发现我的身体正在发抖，手心正在冒汗。
9．I breathed a sigh of relief, throwing my arms around him and hugged him tightly.
我如释重负地松了口气，伸出双臂紧紧地抱住了他。
10．Smiling in relief, I felt a rush of gratitude welling up in my heart.
我如释重负地笑了笑，感觉心里涌起一阵感恩。
11．With tears filling his eyes, Richard expressed his gratitude in a weak voice.
理查德眼里充满泪水，用微弱的声音表达了他的感激之情。
12．With tears of appreciation rolling down his cheeks, he said thankfully, “You have saved me today. I couldn't thank you enough.”
感激的泪水顺着脸颊流下，他感激地说：“今天你救了我，我对你感激不尽。”
13．What a narrow escape! It turns out that there is always a way out of any difficult situation as long as we stay calm.
真是九死一生啊！事实证明，只要我们保持冷静，任何困境都有出路。
14．Only then did I realize that actions can cure fear and bravery can conquer difficulties.
直到那时，我才意识到行动可以治愈恐惧，勇敢可以战胜困难。
15．Never should we give up our hope whatever setbacks we are faced with.
无论遇到什么挫折，我们绝不该放弃希望。
16．This painful adventure teaches me not to despair even in the darkest hour, because after every night there is a day.
这次痛苦的冒险教会了我即使在最黑暗的时刻也不要绝望，因为黑夜之后就是黎明。
17．“Be patient! The rescue team is on the way.” These words brought a ray of hope to the seemingly hopeless situation.
“耐心点！救援队已经在路上了。”这句话给看似绝望的处境带来了一线希望。
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(2025·江苏省射阳中学高三月考)One summer day, I decided to go for a walk in the nearby forest. I had my backpack prepared with water, food, and sunscreen. I was excited to spend some time in nature, away from the busy city.
The forest was attractive, with towering trees that seemed to touch the sky and colorful wildflowers under my feet. I walked deeper into the woods, attracted by the pleasant sounds of birds. The path I followed was winding and narrow, but I paid little attention, carried away by the beauty. I started to notice that the trees around me looked unfamiliar. Soon I found myself lost. I realized that I had no idea which way to go.
The sun was setting and I knew that I needed to find a way out before it got dark. I started walking, trying to remember which direction I had come from. But the forest was a maze (迷宫) of winding paths, and I soon found myself going in circles. Every tree looked the same, and every path seemed to lead nowhere.
The sound of leaves made me jump. Was it a wild animal My heart was racing and I tried to stay calm as I listened for other sounds. But there was only silence, broken now and then by the distant calls of birds.
As the sun set, I fully understood the seriousness of my situation. There was no food or water left. I was completely alone, lost in a wilderness that could easily devour (吞噬) me. I walked nervously, tripping over things in my path, feeling frightened with a racing heartbeat. Hours passed, or maybe only minutes. Time had lost all meaning in this place.
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But then, as I was about to give up hope, I saw a weak light in the distance. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍
The house's owner welcomed me inside.﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍
写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。一个夏日，作者前往附近的森林散步，享受自然。但是作者迷路了，四周的景象变得陌生。太阳西下，作者意识到自己身处险境，孤独地在森林中徘徊。作者正打算放弃希望，突然看到远处有一束微弱的光。微弱的光来自哪里？作者走出森林了吗？
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But then, as I was about to give up hope, I saw a weak light in the distance. As I came closer, the light grew brighter. It was coming from a small area in the forest. In the center stood a tiny wooden house, its windows shining warmly in the darkness. With a feeling of hope, I ran towards the house and knocked on the door. A man opened it, with his face filled with worry. “Are you lost？” he asked. I nodded, too tired to speak.
The house's owner welcomed me inside. I sat down on a chair and the man offered me food and water. We talked for hours about his life in the forest. His eyes told me that he had found peace in that wilderness. He kindly allowed me to stay overnight at his house. As the sun rose above the treetops, I knew that it was time to leave. The man offered to guide me out of the forest. From then on, we became friends. I learned something valuable from my journey that sometimes when we are lost, we find unexpected treasures.
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(2025·安徽省合肥市第七中学高三月考)After a busy week, Emily and her parents decided to go on a mountain picnic. They longed to fully experience nature's beauty and enjoy quality family time. Little did they know, this outing would be filled with unexpected twists and turns (波折)．
Arriving at the mountain's base, they discovered a house, in front of which Mike and his father had just finished loading a boat onto Mike's truck. Emily approached them and asked for the best picnic spot in the area. Knowing the mountain well, Mike suggested a location about two hours' walk away. “It's worth the effort，” he assured them.
Parking their car next to Mike's truck and carrying their picnic supplies, Emily and her parents set off on the winding road. Tall green trees on one side, a flowing stream on the other, the road eventually led them to a breathtaking clearing dotted with colorful wildflowers. They enjoyed their delicious sandwiches, fruits, and snacks, engaging in pleasant conversations.
Just as they finished their meal and settled down to relax, dark clouds unexpectedly rolled in. It looked like rain. Panicked, they hurriedly set up the tent they had brought. No sooner had they entered than raindrops began pouring on the roof. Heavy rain enveloped the surroundings, making it impossible to see anything. They had no choice but to patiently wait it out.
After what felt like a century, the rain ceased. Emily and her parents wasted no time packing up their belongings, ready to get downhill. However, their excitement turned to worry when they discovered that the small stream they had previously crossed had turned into a wide and impassable river. With no cellphone signal, they were trapped without a means of seeking help. To make matters worse, darkness was approaching.
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Suddenly, they heard the sound of a vehicle from across the river. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍
Emily and her parents boarded the boat. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍
写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了Emily (埃米莉)和家人外出野餐，结果在山上的时候下了暴雨，之前越过的小溪变成了一条宽阔而无法通行的河流，他们被困在那里，因手机没有信号而无法寻求帮助。谁会来救他们呢？他们会如何脱困？
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Suddenly, they heard the sound of a vehicle from across the river. A truck appeared around the bend of the road—a sense of relief washed over them as they realized it was Mike's truck. It turned out that Mike had noticed that it was getting dark but Emily's car was still parked in the open space in front of his house. Thinking of the heavy rain, he suspected something bad might have happened to them. Without delay, Mike and his father jumped into the truck and headed uphill. Nearing the picnic spot, Mike heard the shout for help and, in the next moment, saw Emily and her parents waving their hands desperately on the other side of the river. Mike immediately stopped, and with his father's help, moved the boat from his truck into the water.
Emily and her parents boarded the boat. Safely crossing the river, they returned to the base of the mountain in Mike's truck. Emily and her parents were not only grateful for their safe return, but also for the kindness and assistance they received from Mike and his father. They expressed their heartfelt thanks to Mike and his father for their swift response and invaluable assistance, tears welling up in their eyes. This unforgettable experience taught them the power of kindness and inspired them to pay it forward. They also learned a valuable lesson on the importance of being well prepared for exploring nature. No doubt it is a mountain picnic that has left a deep impression on them.
