2024-2025初一英语上写作话题02校园生活（同步写作讲义）（全国通用）

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话题：校园生活
七年级上学期同步写作课讲义
同学们进入初中已经一个学期了，相信大家的校园生活一定丰富多彩！假如你是滕飞，请根据以下导图提示，总结一下你的校园生活吧。
写作要求：
1.围绕以上提示展开作文并适当发挥补充，使文章内容充实；
2.语意通顺，表达准确，条理清晰，书写规范；
3.词数不少于 60词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
4.文中不得出现个人真实的姓名、校名等信息。
Hi, I’m Teng Fei. I’m now a middle school student. I love my school very much. I’d like to tell you something about my school life.
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【审题指导】
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，完善表述内容。
【思维导图】
首先，承接开头，介绍学校的环境、学习的科目和加入的俱乐部；
其次，介绍上学日常，并书写结语。
【遣词造句】
1.我最喜欢英语，因为它很有趣。 (because引导的原因状语从句)
English is my favorite because it’s interesting.
2.在学校，我每天起得很早，然后去学校。
In school days，I get up early，then go to school.
我做家庭作业，和有时候打篮球。（and引导并列句）
I do my homework and sometimes play basketball.
【参考范文】
例文
Hi, I’m Teng Fei. I’m now a middle school student. I love my school very much. I’d like to tell you something about my school life.
My school is big and beautiful with a big playground and a library. We have many subjects like Chinese, Math and English. English is my favorite because it’s interesting. I join the art club. I can draw pictures with my club members after school.
On school days, I get up early, then go to school. I have four classes in the morning and three in the afternoon. After school, I do my homework and sometimes play basketball. My school life is busy but enjoyable.
（3）词数60词左右，开始语和结束语已给出，不计入总词数。
Our School Life
Hello, everyone! I’m Teng Fei. I am happy to introduce our school life.
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We love our school, and we enjoy our colorful school life!
【审题指导】
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
【思维导图】
第一步：使用给定的开头引出主题；
第二步：先描述学校的样子，接着列举在校做的事，然后介绍学习的科目，再说明最喜欢的科目及原因，最后介绍社团及社团活动；
第三步：用给定的句子结尾，表达对学校生活的喜爱。
【遣词造句】
1.有许多现代建筑物。（there be句型）
There are many modern buildings.
2.我最喜欢的科目是英语，因为它很重要和有用处。（because引导原因状语从句）
My favorite subject is English, because it’s important and useful.
【参考范文】
Our School Life
Hello, everyone, I’m Teng Fei. I am happy to introduce our school life.
My school is beautiful and great. There are many modern buildings. We spend most of our time having classes in the classroom building. We do exercises and raise the flag on the sports field. In the dining hall, we can have all kinds of delicious food. It’s my favorite place. For subjects, we have Chinese, maths, English, history, biology, geography, IT, PE and so on. My favorite subject is English, because it’s important and useful. For clubs, we have many different fun clubs. I join the nature club. In the club we can watch the birds and collect plants and insects. It’s fun.
We love our school, and we enjoy our colorful school life!
课程与活动
1.科目类：English, math, science, art, PE (physical education)
2. 活动类：class, homework, project, group work, school trip
3.教学设备: classroom, library, lab, playground, cafeteria
日常描述
时间: morning, afternoon, break time, lunchtime
频率: every day, usually, sometimes, never
感受: interesting, boring, fun, busy, relaxed
人际关系
朋友: classmates, teachers, partners, teammates
一般描述
I have English class at 9:00 a.m. every day.
My favorite subject is science because it’s exciting.
We usually do group work in the classroom.
对比与比较
Math is more difficult than English for me.
I prefer PE to music class.
时间与频率
On Mondays, we start school at 8:00 a.m.
After lunch, I often play basketball with my friends.
建议与邀请
Let’s go to the library after school!
Why don’t we study together for the test
学习相关
"Practice makes perfect."（熟能生巧）
"A good beginning is half done."（好的开始是成功的一半）
友谊与合作
"A friend in need is a friend indeed."（患难见真情）
"Teamwork makes the dream work."（团队合作让梦想成真）
时间管理
"Time waits for no one."（时光不等人）
"Use it or lose it."（用进废退）
1.开头（Introduction）
My school life is busy but full of fun. I study from Monday to Friday and enjoy different subjects.
2.主体（Body）
课程安排
In the morning, I have English, math, and science classes. My favorite is science because I love doing experiments.
课外活动
After lunch, I often play basketball with my classmates on the playground. Sometimes we read books in the library.
人际关系
My teachers are kind and always help us. I have many friends, and we work together on group projects.
3.结尾（Conclusion）
I love my school life because it makes me grow and learn new things every day.
（1）
亲爱的同学们，你们升入初中已经两个月了，相信你们一定在新班级和新校园里收获很多。假如你是七年级5班的李华同学，请你根据以下思维导图写一篇短文介绍你现在的学习与生活情况。
要求：
1. 所写内容必须包括提供的所有信息，并适当发挥。
2. 文章60-80词左右。
3. 语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范。
4. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
Hello, my name is Li Hua. I come from Class 5, Grade 7.
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【答案】例文
Hello, my name is Li Hua. I come from Class 5, Grade 7. I am very happy to tell you something about me and my new school life.
I am an outgoing boy. I like playing sports very much. My favourite sport is playing basketball, so I like PE class best. I think it is good for my health. My PE teacher is my favourite teacher. He is friendly to us. I also like listening to music because it can make me relaxed. I have a problem. It’s hard for me to make full use of my time. Sometimes I feel a little tired after school. Can you give me some advice
All in all, my new school life is busy but interesting. I will work hard to learn more knowledge in my new school.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是材料作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“我很高兴告诉你一些关于我和我的新学校生活的事情。”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——爱好、最喜欢的科目、老师、学习上的问题以及对新生活的感受等均要一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①outgoing外向的
②be friendly to对某人友好
③make full use of充分利用
[高分句型]
①I think it is good for my health. (宾语从句）
②My favourite sport is playing basketball, so I like PE class best. (so的用法)
（2）
假如你是七年级的李华，请你以“My School Life is Colorful”为题，写一篇英语短文，向大家介绍一下你的学校生活。
提示：1. 每天上七节课；
2. 课后活动非常丰富，可以踢足球、打篮球、打乒乓球；
3. 可以加入各种俱乐部，如：科学俱乐部、英语俱乐部等。
要求：1. 不得在文中出现真实的姓名、地名及学校信息；
2. 词数：不少于60词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
My School Life is Colorful
I’d like to tell you something about my school life.
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【答案】例文
My School Life is Colorful
I’d like to tell you something about my school life. My school life is colorful. I have seven classes a day. I like all my subjects. I think they are interesting. We can take part in many activities after school. We can play football, basketball and ping-pong. There are many kinds of study clubs in our school, such as science club and English club. I join the English club. I love to practice speaking English there.
I enjoy my colorful school life!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山。点明要给大家介绍学校生活。（开头已给出）
第二步，具体阐述。根据提示的内容，从课程、课后活动、俱乐部等方面介绍学校生活。
第三步，书写结语。总结学校生活。
[亮点词汇]
① take part in 参加
② many kinds of 多种多样
③ such as 比如
④ practice doing sth. 练习做某事
[高分句型]
① I think they are interesting.（省略that的宾语从句）
② There are many kinds of study clubs in our school, such as science club and English club.（there be句型）
（3）
假如你是Li Ming，请你给你的笔友Sally写一封信，向她简单介绍一下你的校园生活。
内容包括：
1.就读的学校。
2.通常如何去上学。
3.在校所学的科目、上课的时间和放学的时间。
4.参加的课外活动等。
写作要求：
1.文中需包含所提示要点，可适当发挥使作文连贯。
2.语意通顺，条理清晰，书写规范。
3.文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息。
4.词数不少于50 (文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)
Dear Sally,
How are you I’m fine. Now let me tell you something about my school life.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】例文
Dear Sally,
How are you I’m fine. Now let me tell you something about my school life.
I study in a middle school not too far from my home. I usually walk to school. My school is very big and beautiful. There are many buildings in our school.
Our classes start at 8:00 a.m. and end at 4:35 p.m. We have seven classes every day. We have many subjects, such as Chinese, math, English, history and so on. My favorite subject is history, because it is very interesting. I don’t have much homework each day, so I have enough time to take part in all kinds of activities. I often play ping-pong with my classmates after school. I really enjoy my school life.
What about your school and school life I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Best wishes!
Yours
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点和开头结尾部分已给出，考试应注意要求中的内容，充实细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，介绍自己的学校情况；
第三步，介绍自己的学校生活；
第四步，书写结语，表达希望了解对方的情况。
[亮点词汇]
①and so on 诸如此类，等等
②favorite最喜欢的
③take part in参加
④look forward to期待
[高分句型]
① My favorite subject is history, because it is very interesting. (原因状语从句)
② I don’t have much homework each day, so I have enough time to take part in all kinds of activities. (so连接的并列句)
（4）
假如你是来自第一中学的李想（Li Xiang），受邀在交流会上向新来的同学介绍你的校园生活，请以 “My School Life” 为题写一篇不少于70词的发言稿。标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。内容包括: 1. 学校的课程安排和个人喜欢的科目；2.学校设施；3.学校的社团。
写作要求：1. 文中须包含所有的要点提示，可以适当发挥；
文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
词数70左右。
My School Life
Hello, everyone! I’d like to tell you about my school life.
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【答案】例文
My School Life
Hello, everyone! I’d like to tell you about my school life.
I go to school from Monday to Friday. In the morning, I walk to school because I live near my school. My class begins at eight in the morning and is over at five in the afternoon. We have about twenty classes a week, including Chinese, math, English, physics, chemistry, and some other subjects like music and art. Among them, I like English best because it’s interesting and useful.
There are two teaching buildings and a playground in my school. There are also many clubs, such as the English club and the art club.
I really enjoy my school life here. I hope you will also have a great time and make many friends!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为发言稿；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”，因为描述的是现在的校园生活；
③提示：写作要点已给出，包括学校的课程安排和个人喜欢的科目、学校设施、学校的社团。考生应注意不要遗漏这些要点，并适当添加细节，使内容更生动。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。通过“I’d like to tell you about my school life.”直接引出要介绍的内容，即自己的校园生活。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。学校的课程安排和个人喜欢的科目：可以提到一周有多少节课，有哪些主科和副科，然后突出自己最喜欢的科目，并简单说明原因；学校设施：可以描述学校有哪些现代化的教学设施，如图书馆、实验室、体育场馆等，以及这些设施给自己学习带来的帮助；学校的社团：可以介绍学校有哪些社团，自己参加了哪个社团，以及参加社团的感受或收获。
第三步，书写结语。可以表达自己对学校生活的喜爱之情，或者鼓励新来的同学积极参与学校生活。
[亮点词汇]
①including包括
②such as例如
③best最喜欢的
④really真正地
[高分句型]
①We have about twenty classes a week, including Chinese, math, English, physics, chemistry, and some other subjects like music and art.（使用“including”和“like”列举事物，使句子结构更加紧凑和丰富）
②I like English best because it’s interesting and useful.（使用“because”引导原因状语从句，解释喜欢英语的原因，使表达更加连贯和清晰）
（5）
两个多月的时间，你徜徉在温暖如家的初中校园。近期，你校将举办一场以“My School, My Home”为主题的演讲比赛。请根据以下流程图和提示写一篇英文演讲稿参赛。
注意事项：
1.演讲稿根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2.词数在70个左右，演讲稿的首尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3.演讲稿中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息。
My School, My Home
Good morning, everyone! I’m glad to stand here and give you a short talk. Today my topic (话题) is “My school, My home”.
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That’s all. Thanks for listening!
【答案】例文
My School, My Home
Good morning, everyone! I’m glad to stand here and give you a short talk. Today my topic is “My school, My home”. There are a lot of buildings in our school, including bright classrooms and a modern library. We can borrow many books from the library. And we can also play sports in the playground, such as basketball, tennis and so on. Teachers and classmates are all nice to me. I like them very much. My school is my second home. I love my school. I hope it can be better in the future.
That’s all. Thanks for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中学校的建筑物、运动和学校的人员的介绍。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，和大家打招呼，引出演讲的主题；
第二步，具体介绍学校的建筑物、运动和学校的人员；
第三步，书写结束语。表达“演讲结束并表示感谢”的想法。
[亮点词汇]
①a lot of很多，许多
②play sports in the playground在操场上做运动
③such as例如
④in the future在将来
[高分句型]
①There are a lot of buildings in our school, including bright classrooms and a modern library.（There be句型）
②I hope it can be better in the future.（宾语从句）
（6）
假如你是李华，请你根据以下提示给你在英国的笔友Daniel写一封信，介绍你的学校和校园生活等情况。
提示：
1. What’s in your school
2. What’s your school life like
3. What do you think of your school and school life
4....
注意事项：
1.词数80左右（文章开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
3.根据提示写作，可适当发挥。
Dear Daniel,
I want to tell you something about my school and my school life.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Daniel,
I want to tell you something about my school and my school life.
My school has two thousand students. There are six buildings in the school. They are two classroom buildings, a library, a science building, a dining hall and a gym. There are a lot of clubs in our school. I go to the Reading Club every Tuesday. There is a sports festival and an art festival every year. Most of the classes are very interesting, and my teachers are very kind. After school I often play basketball with my friends on sports field.
My school is very nice and my school life is colourful and interesting.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意既要介绍你的学校又要介绍你的校园生活，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你的学校；
第二步，介绍你的校园生活；
第三步，谈谈你的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①a lot of许多的
②interesting有趣的
③kind友善的
④play basketball打篮球
⑤colourful丰富多彩的
[高分句型]
①There are six buildings in the school.（There be句型）