【期末押题预测】期末核心考点 书面表达（含解析）2024-2025学年八年级下册英语外研版
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期末核心考点 书面表达
一．书面表达（共18小题）
1．（2024春 红桥区期末）假如你是学校校报英语专栏小记者，请根据以下要点写一篇短文，描述英国作家、旅行者威廉 林赛保护长城的故事。
（1）11岁时，他第一次在地图上看见长城；
（2）30岁时，他来到中国，登上长城；
（3）他花了25年时间研究长城；
（4）1998年的一天他去长城拍照，看到垃圾，感到伤心；
（5）他开始组织志愿者在长城捡垃圾，现在已经坚持20多年。
要求：1.要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
2.词数：60个左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
3.书写工整占1分。
参考词汇：垃圾litter组织organize v.坚持insist v.
志愿者volunteer登上长城walk on the Great Wall
William Lindesay，a British writer and traveller，has been protecting and studying the Great Wall.At the age of 11，he______.
He thinks that one who fails to love the Great Wall is not a hero.He takes actions to love the Great Wall.
2．（2024春 青秀区校级期末）在学习和生活中，我们可能收获了很多特别的礼物，可能是一支笔、一本书，也可能是一个微笑、一个拥抱……可能来自同学朋友，也可能来自父母家人。有没有那么一份礼物，让你想起一个人，一段故事？校园广播站正面向全校同学征集主题为"A special gift"的广播稿。请你根据以下要点，完成一篇英语短文。
写作要点：1.介绍这份特别的礼物。
2.分享礼物背后的故事。
3.谈谈你的感受和收获。
写作要求：1.内容必须包含写作要点中的所有信息，可适当拓展；
2.结构完整，语句流畅，意思清楚、连贯；
3.使用正确和较丰富的词汇和语法结构，书写规范；
4.文中不得透露个人信息，否则不予评分；
5.词数80左右（短文首句已给出，不计入总词数）。
A special gift
I have received many gifts in my life.__________
3．（2024春 高州市期末）请根据要求完成短文写作，并将作文写在答题卡指定的位置。国家提出了将劳动教育（labor education）纳入中小学国家课程的方案，今年秋季起，劳动课将正式成为中小学的一门独立课程。假如你是李华，你将参加学校关于劳动的英文征文。请谈
谈你对劳动的看法，写一篇不少于80词的征文稿，号召同学们多参加劳动。
（1）做劳动的好处（至少两点）；
（2）你对学校开设劳动教育课的建议（开设种植课，组织烹饪、修理比赛等……至少两点）；
（3）发出积极做家务劳动的号召。
提示词：劳动labor；生活技能life skills；责任感a sense of responsibility；行动take action
作文要求：
（1）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名。
（2）语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Much Labor，Much Fun
Nowadays，the government encourages students to take part in more labour activities.
4．（2024春 钦州期末）一年一端午，一岁一安康。在端午节当天，你们学校八年级的同学们组织了一次难忘且有意义的端午活动。作为你校英语报的一名小记者，请你根据以下提示，写一篇80词左右的英语短文报道此次活动，刊登在英语报上。
写作要点：
（1）地点：老年之家（the old people's home）；
（2）活动：和老人一起包粽子、在电视上观看龙舟比赛、给老人表演节目、听老人讲故事、为老人打扫房间；
（3）感受：深受感动、呼吁更多同学关心老人。
写作要求：
（1）开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）短文应包括所提供的信息要点，可适当发挥，使行文流畅；
（3）书写工整规范，卷面整洁；
（4）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名，否则不予评分。
Dragon Boat Festival is an important day for Chinese people.It is celebrated everywhere in China.On the day，the eighth grade students in our school have done something unforgettable.
5．（2024春 百色期末）假设你叫李华，请以"An Introduction of Pandas"为题，根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文介绍大熊猫。
特征 生活习性 生存现状 保护措施
黑白相间 可爱，友善 居住在中国四川省森林 以竹子为食 数量越来越少 没有足够的食物 没有足够的地方 建立更多的研究基地 多种植竹子
参考词汇：province（省），feed on...（以……为食），the number of...（……的数量），research base（研究基地）
要求：
1.文章必须包括全部要点，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现除李华以外的其他人名和校名；
3.词数80左右。
An Introduction of Pandas
_______
6．（2024春 钦州期末）作为学生，我们应该了解良好的文明礼仪。请以"Good manners students should learn about'"为题，根据以下提示写一篇70词左右的短文。提示如下：
（1）要尊敬（respect）父母、老师和老人（the elderly.。对他们说话要有礼貌（politely），不应该大喊大叫。
（2）在公共场合，要遵守交通规则（obey traffic rules），依次排队，见到老人要让座，不乱扔垃圾（drop litter）等。
（3）就餐时，要等大家一起吃，吃饭时不要讲话，用完餐一起离席等。
要求：正确使用时态，语法正确，书写整洁。可根据提示适当发挥，使句子通顺、连贯。
Good manners students should learn about
__________
7．（2024春 庐阳区期末）假如你是李华，目前正在一所国际学校学习，得知学校暑期将举办一场中国文化秀。请写一封信申请做志愿者。
要点如下：
1.擅长中文英文；
2.了解中国文化；
3.乐于沟通交流。
注意事项：
1.词数80﹣100；
2.文中不能出现真实人名和校名；
3.开头不计入总词数。
参考词汇：volunteer（n.志愿者）
Dear Sir，
I'm Li Hua，a student from China.I am studying in an international school.
_____________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
8．（2024春 莱西市期末）假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Helen想了解"双减"给你的学习和生活带来的变化。请根据提示，用英语写一封邮件介绍一下。
提示：
1.过去晚上经常做作业到很晚，现在有更多时间读课外书等；
2.过去周末要上课，现在周末可以进行体育锻炼等；
3.结合自己的实际情况，补充1﹣2个方面。
要求：
1.必须包括用给的指示要求；
2.词数：80～100.邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Helen，
_________________
Yours，
Li Hua
9．（2024春 浦北县期末）你学校准备举办英语征文比赛，请你以Let's Walk to School为题，写一篇短文投稿。内容要点如下：
（1）步行上学的好处：
①步行是很好的锻炼方式，有益健康；
②和同学朋友一起步行，增进交流和友谊；
③不用父母开车接送，有益环保；
（2）呼吁同学们步行上学。
要求：①要点完整，可适当拓展，表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯；
②词数：80左右。
_________________________________
10．（2024春 河北区期末）假如你平时坚持用英语写日记，请根据以下提示要点，叙述你今天放学回家后照顾妈妈的事情，并表达你的感受。
提示要点：
（1）我今天下午放学回到家的时候，妈妈正躺在床上。
（2）妈妈生病了，浑身不舒服。
（3）爸爸不在家，因为两天前他出差了。
（4）我帮妈妈买药、做饭……，妈妈感觉好多了。
（5）我已经长大了，应该为妈妈做一些事情。
（6）我感到……
参考词汇：出差 be on business
要求：
（1）词数：80～100词。
（2）日记格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
20th June，2024 Monday
When I got home this afternoon，Mum ______________.
11．（2024春 那坡县期末）假如你是李雷，是建华中学一名九年级的学生，在学校开展的校园"读书日"活动上，请你以"Reading is a good Habit"为题写一篇英语小短文，和同学们分享你的阅读好习惯。内容要点：
1.目前你读了多少本好书？
2.你的阅读习惯（喜欢阅读哪一类书籍，阅读的时间、地点和方式等）；
3.阅读给你带来什么益处（至少两点）：
4.号召大家多读书、读好书。
写作要求；1.包含上述要点，可适当发挥；2.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范，卷面整洁；3.文中不能出现"李雷"和"建华中学"以外的人名、校名或地名：4.词数80左右。
Reading is a good Habit
_________
12．（2024春 庄河市期末）暑假快到了，请以"The favourite thing I'd like to do in summer"为题，结合人生活实际写一篇英语短文，在假前的最后一次英语课上与同学分享。
内容提示：（1）What do you want to do in the summer holiday？
（2）What do you like to do best？Why？
要求：（1）中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；
（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
（3）词数80词左右。题目已给出，不计入总词数。
The favourite thing I'd like to do in summer
___________
13．（2024春 沙河口区期末）一个兴趣培养，一项技能学习，一次游学经历，一份友情感悟……生活中很多事情都有可能给你的生活带来积极的变化，或者让你学业更轻松，或者让你人生更有成就感，或者让你身心更加愉悦……请你写一篇英语短文，在英语班会上跟同学们分享你的成长故事。
内容提示：（1）What's the hobby/skill/experience.…？
（2）How did it change your life？
要求：（1）中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；
（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
（3）词数80词左右。
14．（2024春 大连期末）成长至今，你一定游览过很多地方。最近，你校英语网站征集 "My favourite place"的文章，请你介绍一处留给你印象最深刻的地方。
内容提示：
（1）Where did you go？
（2）What did you do there？
（3）Why is it your favourite place？
要求：
1.中心突出，语意连贯，层次清楚，书写规范。
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名、学校。
3.词数 80 个词左右。
My favourite place
____________
15．（2024春 中山区期末）时间过得很快，转眼间八年级的学习生活就要结束了，在过去一年中每个人都会在不同方面有所收获，也许是"develop hobbies"，也许是"form close friendships with..."，亦或许是"make progress in learning English"，等等。假如你是李华，请写一篇短文回忆你的收获和感受，并在英语课上交流。
要求；1.中心突出，语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名：
3.80词左右。
___________
16．（2024春 甘井子区期末）在我们的生活中，选择无处不在。选择一本喜欢的书，选择一个适合自己的爱好……近日，某英文报正在进行此主题的征文活动，请结合自己的经历和感受，就其中的一个方面写一篇短文投稿，分享你的故事。
内容提示：
（1）What did you choose？
（2）Why did you choose it？
（3）How did you feel about it？
要求：（1）中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；
（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
（3）词数70词左右。
__________
17．（2024春 青秀区校级期末）美不仅在外表，更在于内心。我们身边就有很多拥有美好心灵的同学，他们以自己美好的行为事迹影响着周围的人。假如你是李华，你校英语报开展"The Most Beautiful Teenager in My Heart"为题的征文活动。你认为你们班班长Lily就是你心目中的最美少年，请你按照以下提示写一篇征文投稿。
What does she look like？ 身高；……
What is she like？ 待人有礼；……
Why do you think she is the most beautiful？ ……
What have you learnt from her？ ……
写作要求：
（1）内容必须包含表格中所有信息；
（2）结构完整，语句流畅，意思清楚、连贯；
（3）使用正确和较丰富的词汇和语法结构，书写规范；
（4）文中不得出现除题目以外的人名、班级年级、校名、地名等个人信息，否则不予评分；
（5）80词左右（短文首句和尾句已给出，不计入词数）。
The Most Beautiful Teenager in My Heart
Lily is our class monitor.
Lily is such a good girl that I think she is the most beautiful teenager in my heart.
18．（2024春 西岗区期末）生活和学习中难免会遇到烦恼.当面对压力时你放松身心的方法是什么？请以"My favorite way to relax"为题写一篇短文向校英文报投稿，与同学们分享你的放松方法及感受。
内容要点：
（1）What is your favorite way to relax？
（2）How do you feel？
写作要求：
（1）书写规范，包含要点，层次清晰；
（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
（3）80词左右，题目已给出，不计入总词数。
期末核心考点 书面表达
参考答案与试题解析
一．书面表达（共18小题）
1．（2024春 红桥区期末）假如你是学校校报英语专栏小记者，请根据以下要点写一篇短文，描述英国作家、旅行者威廉 林赛保护长城的故事。
（1）11岁时，他第一次在地图上看见长城；
（2）30岁时，他来到中国，登上长城；
（3）他花了25年时间研究长城；
（4）1998年的一天他去长城拍照，看到垃圾，感到伤心；
（5）他开始组织志愿者在长城捡垃圾，现在已经坚持20多年。
要求：1.要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
2.词数：60个左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
3.书写工整占1分。
参考词汇：垃圾litter组织organize v.坚持insist v.
志愿者volunteer登上长城walk on the Great Wall
William Lindesay，a British writer and traveller，has been protecting and studying the Great Wall.At the age of 11，he______.
He thinks that one who fails to love the Great Wall is not a hero.He takes actions to love the Great Wall.
【考点】人物介绍．
【答案】William Lindesay，a British writer and traveller，has been protecting and studying the Great Wall.At the age of 11，he first saw the Great Wall on a map.At the age of 30，he came to China and climbed the Great Wall.He spent 25 years studying the Great Wall.One day in 1998，he went to the Great Wall to take photos.He felt sad when he saw litter everywhere.So he began to organize volunteers to collect garbage in the Great Wall.Now he has insisted on it for more than 20 years.
He thinks that one who fails to love the Great Wall is not a hero.He takes actions to love the Great Wall.
【分析】【高分句型一】
At the age of 30，he came to China and climbed the Great Wall.30岁时，他来到中国，爬上了长城。
At the age of ...在……岁时。
【高分句型二】
He felt sad when he saw litter everywhere.当他看到到处都是垃圾时，他感到很难过。
when引导时间状语从句。
【解答】William Lindesay，a British writer and traveller，has been protecting and studying the Great Wall.At the age of 11，he first saw the Great Wall on a map.（11岁时，他第一次在地图上看见长城）At the age of 30，he came to China and climbed the Great Wall.（30岁时）【高分句型一】He spent 25 years studying the Great Wall.（研究长城）One day in 1998，he went to the Great Wall to take photos.He felt sad when he saw litter everywhere. （1998年的一天他去长城拍照，看到垃圾，感到伤心）【高分句型二】So he began to organize volunteers to collect garbage in the Great Wall.Now he has insisted on it for more than 20 years.（他开始组织志愿者在长城捡垃圾，现在已经坚持20多年）
He thinks that one who fails to love the Great Wall is not a hero.He takes actions to love the Great Wall.
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
2．（2024春 青秀区校级期末）在学习和生活中，我们可能收获了很多特别的礼物，可能是一支笔、一本书，也可能是一个微笑、一个拥抱……可能来自同学朋友，也可能来自父母家人。有没有那么一份礼物，让你想起一个人，一段故事？校园广播站正面向全校同学征集主题为"A special gift"的广播稿。请你根据以下要点，完成一篇英语短文。
写作要点：1.介绍这份特别的礼物。
2.分享礼物背后的故事。
3.谈谈你的感受和收获。
写作要求：1.内容必须包含写作要点中的所有信息，可适当拓展；
2.结构完整，语句流畅，意思清楚、连贯；
3.使用正确和较丰富的词汇和语法结构，书写规范；
4.文中不得透露个人信息，否则不予评分；
5.词数80左右（短文首句已给出，不计入总词数）。
A special gift
I have received many gifts in my life.__________
【考点】情感与情绪；演讲稿．
【答案】
A special gift
I have received many gifts in my life.But the special one is a watch，which my dad gave me when I entered the senior middle school.At that moment，my family are living a hard life.Although it was not expensive，in order to buy me the gift，my dad made every effort to earn money.Each time I see the watch，I think about my great dad.He always tries his best to support our family and he is the greatest man in my heart.
【分析】【高分句型一】
But the best one is a watch，which my dad gave me when I entered the senior middle school.
译文：但最好的是一块手表，那是我上高中时爸爸给我的。
分析：这句话使用which引导非限制性定语从句，when引导时间状语从句。
【高分句型二】
Although it was not expensive，in order to buy me the gift，my dad made every effort to earn money.
译文：虽然不贵，但为了给我买礼物，我爸爸千方百计挣钱。
分析：这句话使用although引导让步状语从句。
【解答】
A special gift
I have received many gifts in my life.But the special one is a watch，which my dad gave me when I entered the senior middle school. 【高分句型一】At that moment，my family are living a hard life.（特别的礼物是什么） Although it was not expensive，in order to buy me the gift，my dad made every effort to earn money. （背后故事）【高分句型二】Each time I see the watch，I think about my great dad.He always tries his best to support our family and he is the greatest man in my heart.（感受和收获）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
3．（2024春 高州市期末）请根据要求完成短文写作，并将作文写在答题卡指定的位置。国家提出了将劳动教育（labor education）纳入中小学国家课程的方案，今年秋季起，劳动课将正式成为中小学的一门独立课程。假如你是李华，你将参加学校关于劳动的英文征文。请谈
谈你对劳动的看法，写一篇不少于80词的征文稿，号召同学们多参加劳动。
（1）做劳动的好处（至少两点）；
（2）你对学校开设劳动教育课的建议（开设种植课，组织烹饪、修理比赛等……至少两点）；
（3）发出积极做家务劳动的号召。
提示词：劳动labor；生活技能life skills；责任感a sense of responsibility；行动take action
作文要求：
（1）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名。
（2）语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Much Labor，Much Fun
Nowadays，the government encourages students to take part in more labour activities.
【考点】记叙文；观点态度．
【答案】
Much Labor，Much Fun
Nowadays，the government encourages students to take part in more labour activities.We can benefit a lot from labor.First，we can learn lots of life skills and look after ourselves well.Besides，we can develop a sense of pride and responsibility.Last but not least，we can build up our bodies so that we will be stronger and healthier.
As for school labor education，I think the school can offer some classes to teach us how to grow plants.Or the school can set up some competitions on cooking or repairing things.
Labor is an important part of life and it's our duty to share some labour work.As teenagers，we should take action and do more labour activities.
【分析】【高分句型一】
Last but not least，we can build up our bodies so that we will be stronger and healthier.最后但并非最不重要的一点是，我们可以锻炼身体，使我们更加强壮和健康。so that 为了。
【高分句型二】
As for school labor education，I think the school can offer some classes to teach us how to grow plants.至于学校劳动教育，我认为学校可以提供一些课程来教我们如何种植植物。宾语从句。
【解答】
Much Labor，Much Fun
Nowadays，the government encourages students to take part in more labour activities.We can benefit a lot from labor.First，we can learn lots of life skills and look after ourselves well.Besides，we can develop a sense of pride and responsibility.Last but not least，we can build up our bodies so that we will be stronger and healthier.【高分句型一】（做劳动的好处）
As for school labor education，I think the school can offer some classes to teach us how to grow plants. 【高分句型二】Or the school can set up some competitions on cooking or repairing things.（对学校开设劳动教育课的建议）
Labor is an important part of life and it's our duty to share some labour work.As teenagers，we should take action and do more labour activities.（发出积极做家务劳动的号召）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
4．（2024春 钦州期末）一年一端午，一岁一安康。在端午节当天，你们学校八年级的同学们组织了一次难忘且有意义的端午活动。作为你校英语报的一名小记者，请你根据以下提示，写一篇80词左右的英语短文报道此次活动，刊登在英语报上。
写作要点：
（1）地点：老年之家（the old people's home）；
（2）活动：和老人一起包粽子、在电视上观看龙舟比赛、给老人表演节目、听老人讲故事、为老人打扫房间；
（3）感受：深受感动、呼吁更多同学关心老人。
写作要求：
（1）开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）短文应包括所提供的信息要点，可适当发挥，使行文流畅；
（3）书写工整规范，卷面整洁；
（4）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名，否则不予评分。
Dragon Boat Festival is an important day for Chinese people.It is celebrated everywhere in China.On the day，the eighth grade students in our school have done something unforgettable.
【考点】节假日活动．
【答案】Dragon Boat Festival is an important day for Chinese people.It is celebrated everywhere in China.On the day，the eighth grade students in our school have done something unforgettable.
They went to the old people's home and stayed with the old people to make them feel less lonely.They made zongzi together.But it was a little difficult for students to do that.The elderly taught them patiently.There was a dragon boat race on TV.All of them enjoyed watching it.How excited they were!After lunch，some students sang and danced.Some told funny jokes.The old people laughed and clapped.Grandpa Sun told his old stories to the students.Everyone listened to him quietly and carefully.Before leaving，students also did the cleaning and washing.All old people were touched with tears in their eyes.Both the elderly and the young had a good time together.
I was touched and proud of the students.I hope more and more people will take action to help the elderly.
【分析】【高分句型一】
How excited they were!他们多兴奋啊！感叹句。
【高分句型二】
I hope more and more people will take action to help the elderly.我希望越来越多的人采取行动帮助老年人。宾语从句。
【解答】Dragon Boat Festival is an important day for Chinese people.It is celebrated everywhere in China.On the day，the eighth grade students in our school have done something unforgettable.
They went to the old people's home and stayed with the old people to make them feel less lonely.（地点）They made zongzi together.But it was a little difficult for students to do that.The elderly taught them patiently.There was a dragon boat race on TV.All of them enjoyed watching it.How excited they were!【高分句型一】After lunch，some students sang and danced.Some told funny jokes.The old people laughed and clapped.Grandpa Sun told his old stories to the students.Everyone listened to him quietly and carefully.Before leaving，students also did the cleaning and washing.All old people were touched with tears in their eyes.Both the elderly and the young had a good time together.（活动）
I was touched and proud of the students.I hope more and more people will take action to help the elderly.【高分句型二】（感受）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
5．（2024春 百色期末）假设你叫李华，请以"An Introduction of Pandas"为题，根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文介绍大熊猫。
特征 生活习性 生存现状 保护措施
黑白相间 可爱，友善 居住在中国四川省森林 以竹子为食 数量越来越少 没有足够的食物 没有足够的地方 建立更多的研究基地 多种植竹子
参考词汇：province（省），feed on...（以……为食），the number of...（……的数量），research base（研究基地）
要求：
1.文章必须包括全部要点，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现除李华以外的其他人名和校名；
3.词数80左右。
An Introduction of Pandas
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【考点】人物介绍．
【答案】
How to protect pandas
Panda is our national treasure.They live in Sichuan.Their food is bamboo.They are kind but lovely.They are black and withe.However，their current situation is that they don't have enough bamboo to eat.They have less and less land.Their numbers are getting smaller and smaller.So we should realize the importance of protecting giant pandas.Here are some rules to protect pandas.We should not cut down trees.Don't throw food when visiting pandas in panda museum.This will help protect the giant pandas.There is less and less bamboo.For example，we should build more nature reserves base for them.We plant more bamboo.
If we can do those，I think there will be more and more pandas.
【分析】【高分句型一】
Don't throw food when visiting pandas in panda museum.在熊猫博物馆参观熊猫时，不要乱扔食物。时间状语从句。
【高分句型二】
If we can do those，I think there will be more and more pandas.如果我们能做到这些，我想会有越来越多的熊猫。条件状语从句。
【解答】
How to protect pandas
Panda is our national treasure.They live in Sichuan.Their food is bamboo.（生活习性）They are kind but lovely.They are black and withe.（特征）However，their current situation is that they don't have enough bamboo to eat.They have less and less land.Their numbers are getting smaller and smaller.（生存现状）So we should realize the importance of protecting giant pandas.Here are some rules to protect pandas.We should not cut down trees.Don't throw food when visiting pandas in panda museum.This will help protect the giant pandas.There is less and less bamboo.For example，we should build more nature reserves base for them.We plant more bamboo.（保护措施）
If we can do those，I think there will be more and more pandas.
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
6．（2024春 钦州期末）作为学生，我们应该了解良好的文明礼仪。请以"Good manners students should learn about'"为题，根据以下提示写一篇70词左右的短文。提示如下：
（1）要尊敬（respect）父母、老师和老人（the elderly.。对他们说话要有礼貌（politely），不应该大喊大叫。
（2）在公共场合，要遵守交通规则（obey traffic rules），依次排队，见到老人要让座，不乱扔垃圾（drop litter）等。
（3）就餐时，要等大家一起吃，吃饭时不要讲话，用完餐一起离席等。
要求：正确使用时态，语法正确，书写整洁。可根据提示适当发挥，使句子通顺、连贯。
Good manners students should learn about
__________
【考点】中华文化与传统．
【答案】
Good manners students should learn about
As students，we should know what good manners are.
First，we should respect our parents，teachers and the elderly.We should speak to them politely.It's rude of us to shout at them.When we are in public，we should obey traffic rules，queue for our turn，and give our seats to the elderly when we see them.Don't drop litter everywhere.While having dinner with others，we shouldn't start until everyone is ready and shouldn't talk with food in our mouth.Don't reach over someone's plate for something.Wait for everyone to finish before you leave.
【分析】【高分句型一】
When we are in public，we should obey traffic rules，queue for our turn，and give our seats to the elderly when we see them.当我们在公共场所时，我们应该遵守交通规则，排队等候轮到我们，当我们看到老人时，把座位让给他们。时间状语从句。
【高分句型二】
While having dinner with others，we shouldn't start until everyone is ready and shouldn't talk with food in our mouth.在与他人共进晚餐时，我们不应该在每个人都准备好之前就开始，也不应该嘴里含着食物说话。时间状语从句。
【解答】
Good manners students should learn about
As students，we should know what good manners are.
First，we should respect our parents，teachers and the elderly.We should speak to them politely.It's rude of us to shout at them.（要尊敬父母、老师和老人。对他们说话要有礼貌），不应该大喊大叫）When we are in public，we should obey traffic rules，queue for our turn，and give our seats to the elderly when we see them. 【高分句型一】Don't drop litter everywhere.（在公共场合，要遵守交通规则，依次排队，见到老人要让座，不乱扔垃圾等）While having dinner with others，we shouldn't start until everyone is ready and shouldn't talk with food in our mouth. 【高分句型二】Don't reach over someone's plate for something.Wait for everyone to finish before you leave.（就餐时，要等大家一起吃，吃饭时不要讲话，用完餐一起离席等）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
7．（2024春 庐阳区期末）假如你是李华，目前正在一所国际学校学习，得知学校暑期将举办一场中国文化秀。请写一封信申请做志愿者。
要点如下：
1.擅长中文英文；
2.了解中国文化；
3.乐于沟通交流。
注意事项：
1.词数80﹣100；
2.文中不能出现真实人名和校名；
3.开头不计入总词数。
参考词汇：volunteer（n.志愿者）
Dear Sir，
I'm Li Hua，a student from China.I am studying in an international school.
_____________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】书信类；学校生活．
【答案】Dear Sir，
I'm Li Hua，a student from China.I am studying in an international school.I'm delighted to learn that volunteer students are wanted for a Chinese culture show.Now 'm writing to apply for the position.
The reasons for my application are as follows.First of all，I am good at Chinese and English.I can communicate freely with others in English.What's more，years of being a monitor makes me a brilliant organizer，which will help a lot to keep the exhibition in order.I understand Chinese culture.I am happy to communicate with others.The most important factor is that my related knowledge will undoubtedly help the audience learn more about the unique Chinese art form.
All in all，my sense of responsibility will make me a qualified volunteer.I'd appreciate it if you could take my application intoconsideration.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】【高分句型一】
All in all，my sense of responsibility will make me a qualified volunteer.总之，我的责任感将使我成为一名合格的志愿者。All in all总之。
【高分句型二】
I'd appreciate it if you could take my application intoconsideration.如果您能考虑我的申请，我将不胜感激。条件状语从句。
【解答】Dear Sir，
I'm Li Hua，a student from China.I am studying in an international school.I'm delighted to learn that volunteer students are wanted for a Chinese culture show.Now 'm writing to apply for the position.
The reasons for my application are as follows.First of all，I am good at Chinese and English.I can communicate freely with others in English.（擅长中文英文） What's more，years of being a monitor makes me a brilliant organizer，which will help a lot to keep the exhibition in order.I understand Chinese culture.I am happy to communicate with others.（了解中国文化；乐于沟通交流）The most important factor is that my related knowledge will undoubtedly help the audience learn more about the unique Chinese art form.
All in all，my sense of responsibility will make me a qualified volunteer. 【高分句型一】I'd appreciate it if you could take my application intoconsideration.【高分句型二】
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
8．（2024春 莱西市期末）假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Helen想了解"双减"给你的学习和生活带来的变化。请根据提示，用英语写一封邮件介绍一下。
提示：
1.过去晚上经常做作业到很晚，现在有更多时间读课外书等；
2.过去周末要上课，现在周末可以进行体育锻炼等；
3.结合自己的实际情况，补充1﹣2个方面。
要求：
1.必须包括用给的指示要求；
2.词数：80～100.邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Helen，
_________________
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】热点话题；学习．
【答案】Dear Helen，
How nice to hear from you again!You learn about the "double reduction" policy in China and want to know about the changes of my life.Now let me tell you something about it.A lot of changes have taken place in our schools because of Double﹣reduction policy.I used to do my homework late at night.But now，I have more free time.I can do some reading and visit museums and so on.I used to have classes on weekends，but now I can follow my own interests such as doing sports and visiting friends.In the evenings，I can watch news on TV，read books and newspapers.What's more，I can go to bed earlier than before.
I think "double reduction" policy is very good，which reduces the burden on our students and makes our school life more wonderful.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】【高分句型一】
A lot of changes have taken place in our schools because of Double﹣reduction policy.由于"双减"，我们学校发生了许多变化。
这是一个现在完成时的句子，a lot of许多，固定搭配；take place发生，固定搭配；because of 由于，固定搭配。
【高分句型二】
I think "double reduction" policy is very good，which reduces the burden on our students and makes our school life more wonderful.我认为"双减"政策非常好，它减轻了我们学生的负担，使我们的学校生活更加美好。
"double reduction" policy is very good，是一个省略that的宾语从句；which引导定语从句，修饰先行词"double reduction" policy；make sb./sth.+adj.使某人/某物....，固定搭配。
【解答】Dear Helen，
How nice to hear from you again!You learn about the "double reduction" policy in China and want to know about the changes of my life.Now let me tell you something about it.（引出话题）A lot of changes have taken place in our schools because of Double﹣reduction policy.【高分句型一】I used to do my homework late at night.But now，I have more free time.I can do some reading and visit museums and so on.I used to have classes on weekends，but now I can follow my own interests such as doing sports and visiting friends.In the evenings，I can watch news on TV，read books and newspapers.What's more，I can go to bed earlier than before.（"双减"带来学习和生活的变化）
I think "double reduction" policy is very good，which reduces the burden on our students and makes our school life more wonderful.【高分句型二】
Yours
Li Hua
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
9．（2024春 浦北县期末）你学校准备举办英语征文比赛，请你以Let's Walk to School为题，写一篇短文投稿。内容要点如下：
（1）步行上学的好处：
①步行是很好的锻炼方式，有益健康；
②和同学朋友一起步行，增进交流和友谊；
③不用父母开车接送，有益环保；
（2）呼吁同学们步行上学。
要求：①要点完整，可适当拓展，表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯；
②词数：80左右。
_________________________________
【考点】安全与健康．
【答案】
Let's Walk to School
It is good for us to walk to school.First，walking to school is wonderful way to exercise and it's good for our health.Second，it's fun to walk together with friends every day.We can talk about something interesting and know about each other.Third，if we walk，our parents won't have to drive us to school.That saves their time and money .Moreover ，there will be less cars on the roads，and there will be less pollution in the city.So let's walk to school.
【分析】【高分句型一】：
It is good for us to walk to school.步行上学对我们有好处。It is good for sb to do sth表示对某人来说做某事有好处。
【高分句型二】：
So let's walk to school.所以我们步行去学校吧。let's do sth表示让我们做某事。
【解答】
Let's Walk to School
It is good for us to walk to school.【高分句型一】（引出话题）First，walking to school is wonderful way to exercise and it's good for our health.Second，it's fun to walk together with friends every day.We can talk about something interesting and know about each other.Third，if we walk，our parents won't have to drive us to school.That saves their time and money .（步行上学的好处）Moreover ，there will be less cars on the roads，and there will be less pollution in the city.So let's walk to school.【高分句型二】（呼吁同学们步行上学）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
10．（2024春 河北区期末）假如你平时坚持用英语写日记，请根据以下提示要点，叙述你今天放学回家后照顾妈妈的事情，并表达你的感受。
提示要点：
（1）我今天下午放学回到家的时候，妈妈正躺在床上。
（2）妈妈生病了，浑身不舒服。
（3）爸爸不在家，因为两天前他出差了。
（4）我帮妈妈买药、做饭……，妈妈感觉好多了。
（5）我已经长大了，应该为妈妈做一些事情。
（6）我感到……
参考词汇：出差 be on business
要求：
（1）词数：80～100词。
（2）日记格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
20th June，2024 Monday
When I got home this afternoon，Mum ______________.
【考点】日常生活；情感与情绪；记叙文．
【答案】20th June，2024 Monday
When I got home this afternoon，Mum was lying in bed.She was ill and felt awful all over.Dad wasn't at home because he was on business two days ago.I have grown up and I should do something for Mum.I took Mum's temperature.Luckily，she didn't have a fever.She asked me to buy some medicine for her.After I bought the medicine，I cooked dinner.Mum took the medicine and had dinner.Soon she felt better.She thanked me and said she was proud of me.Although I felt a little tired，I was very happy.
【分析】【高分句型一】
When I got home this afternoon，Mum was lying in bed.今天下午我到家时，妈妈躺在床上。
When引导时间状语从句。
【高分句型二】
After I bought the medicine，I cooked dinner.买了药后，我做了晚饭。
After 引导时间状语从句。
【解答】20th June，2024 Monday
When I got home this afternoon，Mum was lying in bed.（我今天下午放学回到家的时候，妈妈正躺在床上）【高分句型一】She was ill and felt awful all over.Dad wasn't at home because he was on business two days ago.（爸爸不在家，因为两天前他出差了）I have grown up and I should do something for Mum.（我已经长大了，应该为妈妈做一些事情）I took Mum's temperature.Luckily，she didn't have a fever.She asked me to buy some medicine for her.After I bought the medicine，I cooked dinner. （我买药、做饭）【高分句型二】Mum took the medicine and had dinner.Soon she felt better.（妈妈感觉好多了） She thanked me and said she was proud of me.Although I felt a little tired，I was very happy.（感受）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
11．（2024春 那坡县期末）假如你是李雷，是建华中学一名九年级的学生，在学校开展的校园"读书日"活动上，请你以"Reading is a good Habit"为题写一篇英语小短文，和同学们分享你的阅读好习惯。内容要点：
1.目前你读了多少本好书？
2.你的阅读习惯（喜欢阅读哪一类书籍，阅读的时间、地点和方式等）；
3.阅读给你带来什么益处（至少两点）：
4.号召大家多读书、读好书。
写作要求；1.包含上述要点，可适当发挥；2.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范，卷面整洁；3.文中不能出现"李雷"和"建华中学"以外的人名、校名或地名：4.词数80左右。
Reading is a good Habit
_________
【考点】学校生活．
【答案】
Reading is a good Habit
I like reading a lot.In my spare time，I often read newspapers and magazines，from which I can get lots of fun and learn about what's going on around the world.I also read my favorite books such as story books，novels and so on，which make me relax and happy.On weekends I usually spend a whole afternoon reading in the library.And I often read for about half an hour before going to bed.Now I usually buy my favorite books on line.
Reading is a very good habit.In my eyes，I think that forming a good reading habit is necessary for us.It can not only open up our eyes but also improve our knowledge.
Summer vocation is coming.I plan to read more English books to improve my English abilities .I often share my favorite books with my friends and classmates.It's time for us to form a good reading habit because it's very important and necessary for us.Let's do more reading together.
【分析】【高分句型一】
I also read my favorite books such as story books，novels and so on，which make me relax and happy.
such as 例如，and so on 等等
which作为关系词的定语从句，which做主语，修饰先行词favorite books.
【高分句型二】
And I often read for about half an hour before going to bed.
before going to bed是省略句，完整表达是before I go to bed.
【高分句型三】
It's time for us to form a good reading habit because it's very important and necessary for us.
It's time for sb to do sth 某人做某事的时间到了
because 引导的原因状语从句
【解答】
Reading is a good Habit
I like reading a lot.In my spare time，I often read newspapers and magazines，from which I can get lots of fun and learn about what's going on around the world.I also read my favorite books such as story books，novels and so on，which make me relax and happy.【高分句型一】On weekends I usually spend a whole afternoon reading in the library.And I often read for about half an hour before going to bed.【高分句型二】Now I usually buy my favorite books on line.（阅读习惯，阅读体会）
Reading is a very good habit.In my eyes，I think that forming a good reading habit is necessary for us.It can not only open up our eyes but also improve our knowledge.（阅读益处）
Summer vocation is coming.I plan to read more English books to improve my English abilities.I often share my favorite books with my friends and classmates.It's time for us to form a good reading habit because it's very important and necessary for us.【高分句型三】Let's do more reading together.（号召大家多阅读）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
12．（2024春 庄河市期末）暑假快到了，请以"The favourite thing I'd like to do in summer"为题，结合人生活实际写一篇英语短文，在假前的最后一次英语课上与同学分享。
内容提示：（1）What do you want to do in the summer holiday？
（2）What do you like to do best？Why？
要求：（1）中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；
（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
（3）词数80词左右。题目已给出，不计入总词数。
The favourite thing I'd like to do in summer
___________
【考点】日常生活．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型一】
So I can do the things that I'd like to do，such as playing computer games ，playing football and eating ice cream.
所以我可以做我想做的事情，比如玩电脑游戏，踢足球和吃冰淇淋。that引导定语从句。such as例如…。
【高分句型二】
That's why I love swimming in the summer.
这就是为什么我喜欢在夏天游泳。That's why…，这就是为什么…。
【解答】
The favourite thing I'd like to do in summer
The summer holiday is coming.So I can do the things that I'd like to do，such as playing computer games ，playing football and eating ice cream.【高分句型一】（暑假想做什么） The thing I want to do best is swimming.I love swimming for many reasons.I love swimming because it makes me feel cool.I can also meet a lot of friends in the swimming pool and play with them.Swimming can make me grow taller as well.That's why I love swimming in the summer.【高分句型二】（最喜欢做的事情及原因）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
13．（2024春 沙河口区期末）一个兴趣培养，一项技能学习，一次游学经历，一份友情感悟……生活中很多事情都有可能给你的生活带来积极的变化，或者让你学业更轻松，或者让你人生更有成就感，或者让你身心更加愉悦……请你写一篇英语短文，在英语班会上跟同学们分享你的成长故事。
内容提示：（1）What's the hobby/skill/experience.…？
（2）How did it change your life？
要求：（1）中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；
（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
（3）词数80词左右。
【考点】日常生活．
【答案】
An Unforgettable Experience
How time flies!There are a lot of unforgettable moments in my middle school life.During the three years，I have known many kind teachers and helpful classmates.Thanks to them，my middle school life is meaningful and colourful.One of the most unforgettable experiences happened in Grade 8.I worked hard to prepare an English Speech.However，things didn't went on as smoothly as expected.I fell ill a week before the speech.I coughed so badly that I could even hardly speak.I felt worried and helpless.It was my dearest English teacher that helped me get out of trouble.She told me to calm down and looked after me carefully.To me，my English teacher is like my family who care me and love me.Because of the experience，I have decided to be a teacher like my English teacher when I grow up.
【分析】【高分句型一】
Thanks to them，my middle school life is meaningful and colourful.多亏了他们，我的中学生活才有意义和丰富多彩。
Thanks to ，表示多亏。
【高分句型二】
She told me to calm down and looked after me carefully.她让我冷静下来，仔细照顾我。
look after，照顾。
【解答】
An Unforgettable Experience
How time flies!There are a lot of unforgettable moments in my middle school life.How time flies!Three years of middle school life has come to an end.During the three years，I have known many kind teachers and helpful classmates.Thanks to them，my middle school life is meaningful and colourful.【高分句型一】One of the most unforgettable experiences happened in Grade 8.（引出话题）I worked hard to prepare an English Speech.However，things didn't went on as smoothly as expected.I fell ill a week before the speech.I coughed so badly that I could even hardly speak.I felt worried and helpless.It was my dearest English teacher that helped me get out of trouble.She told me to calm down and looked after me carefully. （简述经历）【高分句型二】To me，my English teacher is like my family who care me and love me.Because of the experience，I have decided to be a teacher like my English teacher when I grow up.（对我的改变 ）
【点评】这是一篇提纲作文，题目要求围绕内容写作，命题既有限制又给予学生发挥的空间。
14．（2024春 大连期末）成长至今，你一定游览过很多地方。最近，你校英语网站征集 "My favourite place"的文章，请你介绍一处留给你印象最深刻的地方。
内容提示：
（1）Where did you go？
（2）What did you do there？
（3）Why is it your favourite place？
要求：
1.中心突出，语意连贯，层次清楚，书写规范。
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名、学校。
3.词数 80 个词左右。
My favourite place
____________
【考点】旅游景点．
【答案】
My favourite place
Our school organized a four﹣day activity to Yuquan Farm last week and we had a good time and learned a lot.
At around 7 a.m.，we got to the farm on the school bus.On arriving，we were warmly welcomed by the kind farm owner.We were divided into several groups，and then picked hops which is a kind of plants to make beer.Besides，not only were we competing with other groups to win the first place，but also we helped each other to finish our duty on time.At the end of the activity，sun﹣burnt as we were，we learned a lot from this meaningful activity.
This outdoor activity was of great benefit to us.Not only did it get us closer to nature，but also taught us the value of hard work.
【分析】高分句型一：
We were divided into several groups，and then picked hops which is a kind of plants to make beer.
译文：我们被分成几组，然后采摘啤酒花，这是一种制造啤酒的植物。
分析：这句话使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：
Not only did it get us closer to nature，but also taught us the value of hard work.
译文：它不仅使我们更接近大自然，而且教会了我们努力工作的价值。
分析：这句话使用了not only置于句首，后面用部分倒装。
【解答】
My favourite place
Our school organized a four﹣day activity to Yuquan Farm last week and we had a good time and learned a lot.（时间与地点）
At around 7 a.m.，we got to the farm on the school bus.On arriving，we were warmly welcomed by the kind farm owner.We were divided into several groups，and then picked hops which is a kind of plants to make beer.【高分句型一】Besides，not only were we competing with other groups to win the first place，but also we helped each other to finish our duty on time.At the end of the activity，sun﹣burnt as we were，we learned a lot from this meaningful activity.（活动过程：采摘啤酒花、互帮互助。）
This outdoor activity was of great benefit to us.Not only did it get us closer to nature，but also taught us the value of hard work.【高分句型二】（我的理由）
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
15．（2024春 中山区期末）时间过得很快，转眼间八年级的学习生活就要结束了，在过去一年中每个人都会在不同方面有所收获，也许是"develop hobbies"，也许是"form close friendships with..."，亦或许是"make progress in learning English"，等等。假如你是李华，请写一篇短文回忆你的收获和感受，并在英语课上交流。
要求；1.中心突出，语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名：
3.80词左右。
___________
【考点】书信类．
【答案】
An Experience of Making Progress
Dear teachers and fellow students.I'm here to share one of my experiences of making progress.
When 1 entered high school，1 found everybody else in my class was good at English except me.I had a small vocabulary and had difficulty understanding the passages.However，I didn't lose heart.I went to my English teacher，who advised me to use a dictionary while reading and try to get what the passages conveyed to me.I worked harder，following the teacher's advice.Gradually，I felt better while reading and began to find English interesting.
Now I have already caught up with my classmates.This experience gives me a better understanding of the saying：Nothing is too difficult to a willing heart.
【分析】高分句型一：
When I entered high school，I found everybody else in my class was good at English except me.
译文：当我进入高中时，我发现除了我以外，班上其他人英语都很好。
分析：when引导时间状语从句。
高分句型二：
I went to my English teacher，who advised me to use a dictionary while reading and try to get what the passages conveyed to me.
译文：我去找了我的英语老师，他建议我在阅读时使用词典，并试着了解文章所传达给我的信息。
分析：这句话使用who引导定语从句，while引导省略的时间状语从句。
【解答】
An Experience of Making Progress
Dear teachers and fellow students.I'm here to share one of my experiences of making progress.（话题）
When I entered high school，I found everybody else in my class was good at English except me. 【高分句型一】I had a small vocabulary and had difficulty understanding the passages.However，I didn't lose heart.I went to my English teacher，who advised me to use a dictionary while reading and try to get what the passages conveyed to me. 【高分句型二】I worked harder，following the teacher's advice.Gradually，I felt better while reading and began to find English interesting.（经历的过程）
Now I have already caught up with my classmates.This experience gives me a better understanding of the saying：Nothing is too difficult to a willing heart.
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
16．（2024春 甘井子区期末）在我们的生活中，选择无处不在。选择一本喜欢的书，选择一个适合自己的爱好……近日，某英文报正在进行此主题的征文活动，请结合自己的经历和感受，就其中的一个方面写一篇短文投稿，分享你的故事。
内容提示：
（1）What did you choose？
（2）Why did you choose it？
（3）How did you feel about it？
要求：（1）中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；
（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
（3）词数70词左右。
__________
【考点】日常生活．
【答案】There are a great many hobbies to choose from.Some people enjoy collecting coins or stamps，others choose to spend their time on sports or music.
I have many hobbies，but playing basketball is my favorite one.At weekends，we always build a team to play basketball against another one in our neighbourhood.The competitions brought us so much fun.I think playing basketball is a good way to build up one's body and relax oneself.I'm happy to play basketball with my friends.It is interesting.But I will always remember that it's unwise to spend too much time playing.
【分析】【高分句型一】
There are a great many hobbies to choose from.有很多爱好可供选择。
There be 结构，表示有；存在。
【高分句型二】
I think playing basketball is a good way to build up one's body and relax oneself.我认为打篮球是锻炼身体和放松自己的好方法。
I think +宾语从句，表示我认为……
【解答】There are a great many hobbies to choose from.【高分句型一】Some people enjoy collecting coins or stamps，others choose to spend their time on sports or music.
I have many hobbies，but playing basketball is my favorite one. （选择打篮球）At weekends，we always build a team to play basketball against another one in our neighbourhood.The competitions brought us so much fun.I think playing basketball is a good way to build up one's body and relax oneself.（为什么选择打篮球）【高分句型二】I'm happy to play basketball with my friends.It is interesting.But I will always remember that it's unwise to spend too much time playing.（感受）
【点评】提纲作文就是把文章的情景和内容要求分成块，以条目的形式列出，请考生据此进行写作。这实际上是对考生思路和文章写作范围所作的明确限定。因此，提纲中所列举的要点要全部涉及到，一个也不能遗漏。
17．（2024春 青秀区校级期末）美不仅在外表，更在于内心。我们身边就有很多拥有美好心灵的同学，他们以自己美好的行为事迹影响着周围的人。假如你是李华，你校英语报开展"The Most Beautiful Teenager in My Heart"为题的征文活动。你认为你们班班长Lily就是你心目中的最美少年，请你按照以下提示写一篇征文投稿。
What does she look like？ 身高；……
What is she like？ 待人有礼；……
Why do you think she is the most beautiful？ ……
What have you learnt from her？ ……
写作要求：
（1）内容必须包含表格中所有信息；
（2）结构完整，语句流畅，意思清楚、连贯；
（3）使用正确和较丰富的词汇和语法结构，书写规范；
（4）文中不得出现除题目以外的人名、班级年级、校名、地名等个人信息，否则不予评分；
（5）80词左右（短文首句和尾句已给出，不计入词数）。
The Most Beautiful Teenager in My Heart
Lily is our class monitor.
Lily is such a good girl that I think she is the most beautiful teenager in my heart.
【考点】说明文；人物介绍．
【答案】The Most Beautiful Teenager in My Heart
Lily is our class monitor.I think she is the most beautiful person in my heart.She is of medium height.She is outgoing and good with others.She often helps old people cross the road.She is always the first to come to school in order to clean the desks and chairs.She helps her classmates with their homework.I have made much progress with the help of her，so I am very thankful to her.I think she is the most beautiful person because of her kindness.From her，I know we should help others and be kind to others.
Lily is such a good girl that I think she is the most beautiful teenager in my heart.
【分析】高分句型一】
She is always the first to come to school in order to clean the desks and chairs.她总是第一个到学校来打扫课桌椅。
in order to do sth为了做某事。
【高分句型二】
I think she is the most beautiful person because of her kindness.我认为她是最美丽的人，因为她的善良。
I think+宾语从句。
because of因为……
【解答】The Most Beautiful Teenager in My Heart
Lily is our class monitor.I think she is the most beautiful person in my heart.She is of medium height..（名字和身高）She is outgoing and good with others.（外貌和性格）She often helps old people cross the road.She is always the first to come to school in order to clean the desks and chairs. 【高分句型一】She helps her classmates with their homework.I have made much progress with the help of her，so I am very thankful to her.I think she is the most beautiful person because of her kindness.【高分句型二】（为什么认为她最美） From her，I know we should help others and be kind to others.（在她身上我学到了什么）
Lily is such a good girl that I think she is the most beautiful teenager in my heart.
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
18．（2024春 西岗区期末）生活和学习中难免会遇到烦恼.当面对压力时你放松身心的方法是什么？请以"My favorite way to relax"为题写一篇短文向校英文报投稿，与同学们分享你的放松方法及感受。
内容要点：
（1）What is your favorite way to relax？
（2）How do you feel？
写作要求：
（1）书写规范，包含要点，层次清晰；
（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
（3）80词左右，题目已给出，不计入总词数。
【考点】记叙文；情感与情绪．
【答案】There are many ways to relax，but my favorite way to relax is hiking.At the age of 12，I went hiking with my parents for the first time.And I have been in love with it since then.I go hiking with my friends or parents on weekends.We can enjoy the fresh air and the peaceful country scene.Also，we can have a talk happily.
Relaxing is very important for me.If I keep studying for a long time without relaxing，I'll feel very tired even I'll have a headache.This is bad for my health.However，if I relax myself by hiking，I'll feel happy and energeti.All in all，relaxing is good for my body and mind.
【分析】【高分句型一】
There are many ways to relax，but my favorite way to relax is hiking.有很多放松的方式，但我最喜欢的放松方式是徒步旅行。there be句型。
【高分句型二】
If I keep studying for a long time without relaxing，I'll feel very tired and even I'll have a headache.如果我长时间不放松地学习，我会感到很累，甚至头痛。if如果，引导条件状语从句，主从句时态遵循"主将从现"的原则。
【解答】There are many ways to relax，but my favorite way to relax is hiking.【高分句型一】At the age of 12，I went hiking with my parents for the first time.And I have been in love with it since then.I go hiking with my friends or parents on weekends.We can enjoy the fresh air and the peaceful country scene.Also，we can have a talk happily.（放松的方式）
Relaxing is very important for me.If I keep studying for a long time without relaxing，I'll feel very tired even I'll have a headache.【高分句型二】This is bad for my health.However，if I relax myself by hiking，I'll feel happy and energetic .All in all，relaxing is good for my body and mind.（感受）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
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期末核心考点 书面表达
一．书面表达（共18小题）
1．（2024春 红桥区期末）假如你是学校校报英语专栏小记者，请根据以下要点写一篇短文，描述英国作家、旅行者威廉 林赛保护长城的故事。
（1）11岁时，他第一次在地图上看见长城；
（2）30岁时，他来到中国，登上长城；
（3）他花了25年时间研究长城；
（4）1998年的一天他去长城拍照，看到垃圾，感到伤心；
（5）他开始组织志愿者在长城捡垃圾，现在已经坚持20多年。
要求：1.要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
2.词数：60个左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
3.书写工整占1分。
参考词汇：垃圾litter组织organize v.坚持insist v.
志愿者volunteer登上长城walk on the Great Wall
William Lindesay，a British writer and traveller，has been protecting and studying the Great Wall.At the age of 11，he______.
He thinks that one who fails to love the Great Wall is not a hero.He takes actions to love the Great Wall.
2．（2024春 青秀区校级期末）在学习和生活中，我们可能收获了很多特别的礼物，可能是一支笔、一本书，也可能是一个微笑、一个拥抱……可能来自同学朋友，也可能来自父母家人。有没有那么一份礼物，让你想起一个人，一段故事？校园广播站正面向全校同学征集主题为"A special gift"的广播稿。请你根据以下要点，完成一篇英语短文。
写作要点：1.介绍这份特别的礼物。
2.分享礼物背后的故事。
3.谈谈你的感受和收获。
写作要求：1.内容必须包含写作要点中的所有信息，可适当拓展；
2.结构完整，语句流畅，意思清楚、连贯；
3.使用正确和较丰富的词汇和语法结构，书写规范；
4.文中不得透露个人信息，否则不予评分；
5.词数80左右（短文首句已给出，不计入总词数）。
A special gift
I have received many gifts in my life.__________
3．（2024春 高州市期末）请根据要求完成短文写作，并将作文写在答题卡指定的位置。国家提出了将劳动教育（labor education）纳入中小学国家课程的方案，今年秋季起，劳动课将正式成为中小学的一门独立课程。假如你是李华，你将参加学校关于劳动的英文征文。请谈
谈你对劳动的看法，写一篇不少于80词的征文稿，号召同学们多参加劳动。
（1）做劳动的好处（至少两点）；
（2）你对学校开设劳动教育课的建议（开设种植课，组织烹饪、修理比赛等……至少两点）；
（3）发出积极做家务劳动的号召。
提示词：劳动labor；生活技能life skills；责任感a sense of responsibility；行动take action
作文要求：
（1）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名。
（2）语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Much Labor，Much Fun
Nowadays，the government encourages students to take part in more labour activities.
4．（2024春 钦州期末）一年一端午，一岁一安康。在端午节当天，你们学校八年级的同学们组织了一次难忘且有意义的端午活动。作为你校英语报的一名小记者，请你根据以下提示，写一篇80词左右的英语短文报道此次活动，刊登在英语报上。
写作要点：
（1）地点：老年之家（the old people's home）；
（2）活动：和老人一起包粽子、在电视上观看龙舟比赛、给老人表演节目、听老人讲故事、为老人打扫房间；
（3）感受：深受感动、呼吁更多同学关心老人。
写作要求：
（1）开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）短文应包括所提供的信息要点，可适当发挥，使行文流畅；
（3）书写工整规范，卷面整洁；
（4）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名，否则不予评分。
Dragon Boat Festival is an important day for Chinese people.It is celebrated everywhere in China.On the day，the eighth grade students in our school have done something unforgettable.
5．（2024春 百色期末）假设你叫李华，请以"An Introduction of Pandas"为题，根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文介绍大熊猫。
特征 生活习性 生存现状 保护措施
黑白相间 可爱，友善 居住在中国四川省森林 以竹子为食 数量越来越少 没有足够的食物 没有足够的地方 建立更多的研究基地 多种植竹子
参考词汇：province（省），feed on...（以……为食），the number of...（……的数量），research base（研究基地）
要求：
1.文章必须包括全部要点，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现除李华以外的其他人名和校名；
3.词数80左右。
An Introduction of Pandas
_______
6．（2024春 钦州期末）作为学生，我们应该了解良好的文明礼仪。请以"Good manners students should learn about'"为题，根据以下提示写一篇70词左右的短文。提示如下：
（1）要尊敬（respect）父母、老师和老人（the elderly.。对他们说话要有礼貌（politely），不应该大喊大叫。
（2）在公共场合，要遵守交通规则（obey traffic rules），依次排队，见到老人要让座，不乱扔垃圾（drop litter）等。
（3）就餐时，要等大家一起吃，吃饭时不要讲话，用完餐一起离席等。
要求：正确使用时态，语法正确，书写整洁。可根据提示适当发挥，使句子通顺、连贯。
Good manners students should learn about
__________
7．（2024春 庐阳区期末）假如你是李华，目前正在一所国际学校学习，得知学校暑期将举办一场中国文化秀。请写一封信申请做志愿者。
要点如下：
1.擅长中文英文；
2.了解中国文化；
3.乐于沟通交流。
注意事项：
1.词数80﹣100；
2.文中不能出现真实人名和校名；
3.开头不计入总词数。
参考词汇：volunteer（n.志愿者）
Dear Sir，
I'm Li Hua，a student from China.I am studying in an international school.
_____________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
8．（2024春 莱西市期末）假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Helen想了解"双减"给你的学习和生活带来的变化。请根据提示，用英语写一封邮件介绍一下。
提示：
1.过去晚上经常做作业到很晚，现在有更多时间读课外书等；
2.过去周末要上课，现在周末可以进行体育锻炼等；
3.结合自己的实际情况，补充1﹣2个方面。
要求：
1.必须包括用给的指示要求；
2.词数：80～100.邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Helen，
_________________
Yours，
Li Hua
9．（2024春 浦北县期末）你学校准备举办英语征文比赛，请你以Let's Walk to School为题，写一篇短文投稿。内容要点如下：
（1）步行上学的好处：
①步行是很好的锻炼方式，有益健康；
②和同学朋友一起步行，增进交流和友谊；
③不用父母开车接送，有益环保；
（2）呼吁同学们步行上学。
要求：①要点完整，可适当拓展，表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯；
②词数：80左右。
_________________________________
10．（2024春 河北区期末）假如你平时坚持用英语写日记，请根据以下提示要点，叙述你今天放学回家后照顾妈妈的事情，并表达你的感受。
提示要点：
（1）我今天下午放学回到家的时候，妈妈正躺在床上。
（2）妈妈生病了，浑身不舒服。
（3）爸爸不在家，因为两天前他出差了。
（4）我帮妈妈买药、做饭……，妈妈感觉好多了。
（5）我已经长大了，应该为妈妈做一些事情。
（6）我感到……
参考词汇：出差 be on business
要求：
（1）词数：80～100词。
（2）日记格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
20th June，2024 Monday
When I got home this afternoon，Mum ______________.
11．（2024春 那坡县期末）假如你是李雷，是建华中学一名九年级的学生，在学校开展的校园"读书日"活动上，请你以"Reading is a good Habit"为题写一篇英语小短文，和同学们分享你的阅读好习惯。内容要点：
1.目前你读了多少本好书？
2.你的阅读习惯（喜欢阅读哪一类书籍，阅读的时间、地点和方式等）；
3.阅读给你带来什么益处（至少两点）：
4.号召大家多读书、读好书。
写作要求；1.包含上述要点，可适当发挥；2.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范，卷面整洁；3.文中不能出现"李雷"和"建华中学"以外的人名、校名或地名：4.词数80左右。
Reading is a good Habit
_________
12．（2024春 庄河市期末）暑假快到了，请以"The favourite thing I'd like to do in summer"为题，结合人生活实际写一篇英语短文，在假前的最后一次英语课上与同学分享。
内容提示：（1）What do you want to do in the summer holiday？
（2）What do you like to do best？Why？
要求：（1）中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；
（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
（3）词数80词左右。题目已给出，不计入总词数。
The favourite thing I'd like to do in summer
___________
13．（2024春 沙河口区期末）一个兴趣培养，一项技能学习，一次游学经历，一份友情感悟……生活中很多事情都有可能给你的生活带来积极的变化，或者让你学业更轻松，或者让你人生更有成就感，或者让你身心更加愉悦……请你写一篇英语短文，在英语班会上跟同学们分享你的成长故事。
内容提示：（1）What's the hobby/skill/experience.…？
（2）How did it change your life？
要求：（1）中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；
（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
（3）词数80词左右。
14．（2024春 大连期末）成长至今，你一定游览过很多地方。最近，你校英语网站征集 "My favourite place"的文章，请你介绍一处留给你印象最深刻的地方。
内容提示：
（1）Where did you go？
（2）What did you do there？
（3）Why is it your favourite place？
要求：
1.中心突出，语意连贯，层次清楚，书写规范。
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名、学校。
3.词数 80 个词左右。
My favourite place
____________
15．（2024春 中山区期末）时间过得很快，转眼间八年级的学习生活就要结束了，在过去一年中每个人都会在不同方面有所收获，也许是"develop hobbies"，也许是"form close friendships with..."，亦或许是"make progress in learning English"，等等。假如你是李华，请写一篇短文回忆你的收获和感受，并在英语课上交流。
要求；1.中心突出，语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名：
3.80词左右。
___________
16．（2024春 甘井子区期末）在我们的生活中，选择无处不在。选择一本喜欢的书，选择一个适合自己的爱好……近日，某英文报正在进行此主题的征文活动，请结合自己的经历和感受，就其中的一个方面写一篇短文投稿，分享你的故事。
内容提示：
（1）What did you choose？
（2）Why did you choose it？
（3）How did you feel about it？
要求：（1）中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；
（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
（3）词数70词左右。
__________
17．（2024春 青秀区校级期末）美不仅在外表，更在于内心。我们身边就有很多拥有美好心灵的同学，他们以自己美好的行为事迹影响着周围的人。假如你是李华，你校英语报开展"The Most Beautiful Teenager in My Heart"为题的征文活动。你认为你们班班长Lily就是你心目中的最美少年，请你按照以下提示写一篇征文投稿。
What does she look like？ 身高；……
What is she like？ 待人有礼；……
Why do you think she is the most beautiful？ ……
What have you learnt from her？ ……
写作要求：
（1）内容必须包含表格中所有信息；
（2）结构完整，语句流畅，意思清楚、连贯；
（3）使用正确和较丰富的词汇和语法结构，书写规范；
（4）文中不得出现除题目以外的人名、班级年级、校名、地名等个人信息，否则不予评分；
（5）80词左右（短文首句和尾句已给出，不计入词数）。
The Most Beautiful Teenager in My Heart
Lily is our class monitor.
Lily is such a good girl that I think she is the most beautiful teenager in my heart.
18．（2024春 西岗区期末）生活和学习中难免会遇到烦恼.当面对压力时你放松身心的方法是什么？请以"My favorite way to relax"为题写一篇短文向校英文报投稿，与同学们分享你的放松方法及感受。
内容要点：
（1）What is your favorite way to relax？
（2）How do you feel？
写作要求：
（1）书写规范，包含要点，层次清晰；
（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
（3）80词左右，题目已给出，不计入总词数。
期末核心考点 书面表达
参考答案与试题解析
一．书面表达（共18小题）
1．（2024春 红桥区期末）假如你是学校校报英语专栏小记者，请根据以下要点写一篇短文，描述英国作家、旅行者威廉 林赛保护长城的故事。
（1）11岁时，他第一次在地图上看见长城；
（2）30岁时，他来到中国，登上长城；
（3）他花了25年时间研究长城；
（4）1998年的一天他去长城拍照，看到垃圾，感到伤心；
（5）他开始组织志愿者在长城捡垃圾，现在已经坚持20多年。
要求：1.要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
2.词数：60个左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
3.书写工整占1分。
参考词汇：垃圾litter组织organize v.坚持insist v.
志愿者volunteer登上长城walk on the Great Wall
William Lindesay，a British writer and traveller，has been protecting and studying the Great Wall.At the age of 11，he______.
He thinks that one who fails to love the Great Wall is not a hero.He takes actions to love the Great Wall.
【考点】人物介绍．
【答案】William Lindesay，a British writer and traveller，has been protecting and studying the Great Wall.At the age of 11，he first saw the Great Wall on a map.At the age of 30，he came to China and climbed the Great Wall.He spent 25 years studying the Great Wall.One day in 1998，he went to the Great Wall to take photos.He felt sad when he saw litter everywhere.So he began to organize volunteers to collect garbage in the Great Wall.Now he has insisted on it for more than 20 years.
He thinks that one who fails to love the Great Wall is not a hero.He takes actions to love the Great Wall.
【分析】【高分句型一】
At the age of 30，he came to China and climbed the Great Wall.30岁时，他来到中国，爬上了长城。
At the age of ...在……岁时。
【高分句型二】
He felt sad when he saw litter everywhere.当他看到到处都是垃圾时，他感到很难过。
when引导时间状语从句。
【解答】William Lindesay，a British writer and traveller，has been protecting and studying the Great Wall.At the age of 11，he first saw the Great Wall on a map.（11岁时，他第一次在地图上看见长城）At the age of 30，he came to China and climbed the Great Wall.（30岁时）【高分句型一】He spent 25 years studying the Great Wall.（研究长城）One day in 1998，he went to the Great Wall to take photos.He felt sad when he saw litter everywhere. （1998年的一天他去长城拍照，看到垃圾，感到伤心）【高分句型二】So he began to organize volunteers to collect garbage in the Great Wall.Now he has insisted on it for more than 20 years.（他开始组织志愿者在长城捡垃圾，现在已经坚持20多年）
He thinks that one who fails to love the Great Wall is not a hero.He takes actions to love the Great Wall.
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
2．（2024春 青秀区校级期末）在学习和生活中，我们可能收获了很多特别的礼物，可能是一支笔、一本书，也可能是一个微笑、一个拥抱……可能来自同学朋友，也可能来自父母家人。有没有那么一份礼物，让你想起一个人，一段故事？校园广播站正面向全校同学征集主题为"A special gift"的广播稿。请你根据以下要点，完成一篇英语短文。
写作要点：1.介绍这份特别的礼物。
2.分享礼物背后的故事。
3.谈谈你的感受和收获。
写作要求：1.内容必须包含写作要点中的所有信息，可适当拓展；
2.结构完整，语句流畅，意思清楚、连贯；
3.使用正确和较丰富的词汇和语法结构，书写规范；
4.文中不得透露个人信息，否则不予评分；
5.词数80左右（短文首句已给出，不计入总词数）。
A special gift
I have received many gifts in my life.__________
【考点】情感与情绪；演讲稿．
【答案】
A special gift
I have received many gifts in my life.But the special one is a watch，which my dad gave me when I entered the senior middle school.At that moment，my family are living a hard life.Although it was not expensive，in order to buy me the gift，my dad made every effort to earn money.Each time I see the watch，I think about my great dad.He always tries his best to support our family and he is the greatest man in my heart.
【分析】【高分句型一】
But the best one is a watch，which my dad gave me when I entered the senior middle school.
译文：但最好的是一块手表，那是我上高中时爸爸给我的。
分析：这句话使用which引导非限制性定语从句，when引导时间状语从句。
【高分句型二】
Although it was not expensive，in order to buy me the gift，my dad made every effort to earn money.
译文：虽然不贵，但为了给我买礼物，我爸爸千方百计挣钱。
分析：这句话使用although引导让步状语从句。
【解答】
A special gift
I have received many gifts in my life.But the special one is a watch，which my dad gave me when I entered the senior middle school. 【高分句型一】At that moment，my family are living a hard life.（特别的礼物是什么） Although it was not expensive，in order to buy me the gift，my dad made every effort to earn money. （背后故事）【高分句型二】Each time I see the watch，I think about my great dad.He always tries his best to support our family and he is the greatest man in my heart.（感受和收获）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
3．（2024春 高州市期末）请根据要求完成短文写作，并将作文写在答题卡指定的位置。国家提出了将劳动教育（labor education）纳入中小学国家课程的方案，今年秋季起，劳动课将正式成为中小学的一门独立课程。假如你是李华，你将参加学校关于劳动的英文征文。请谈
谈你对劳动的看法，写一篇不少于80词的征文稿，号召同学们多参加劳动。
（1）做劳动的好处（至少两点）；
（2）你对学校开设劳动教育课的建议（开设种植课，组织烹饪、修理比赛等……至少两点）；
（3）发出积极做家务劳动的号召。
提示词：劳动labor；生活技能life skills；责任感a sense of responsibility；行动take action
作文要求：
（1）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名。
（2）语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Much Labor，Much Fun
Nowadays，the government encourages students to take part in more labour activities.
【考点】记叙文；观点态度．
【答案】
Much Labor，Much Fun
Nowadays，the government encourages students to take part in more labour activities.We can benefit a lot from labor.First，we can learn lots of life skills and look after ourselves well.Besides，we can develop a sense of pride and responsibility.Last but not least，we can build up our bodies so that we will be stronger and healthier.
As for school labor education，I think the school can offer some classes to teach us how to grow plants.Or the school can set up some competitions on cooking or repairing things.
Labor is an important part of life and it's our duty to share some labour work.As teenagers，we should take action and do more labour activities.
【分析】【高分句型一】
Last but not least，we can build up our bodies so that we will be stronger and healthier.最后但并非最不重要的一点是，我们可以锻炼身体，使我们更加强壮和健康。so that 为了。
【高分句型二】
As for school labor education，I think the school can offer some classes to teach us how to grow plants.至于学校劳动教育，我认为学校可以提供一些课程来教我们如何种植植物。宾语从句。
【解答】
Much Labor，Much Fun
Nowadays，the government encourages students to take part in more labour activities.We can benefit a lot from labor.First，we can learn lots of life skills and look after ourselves well.Besides，we can develop a sense of pride and responsibility.Last but not least，we can build up our bodies so that we will be stronger and healthier.【高分句型一】（做劳动的好处）
As for school labor education，I think the school can offer some classes to teach us how to grow plants. 【高分句型二】Or the school can set up some competitions on cooking or repairing things.（对学校开设劳动教育课的建议）
Labor is an important part of life and it's our duty to share some labour work.As teenagers，we should take action and do more labour activities.（发出积极做家务劳动的号召）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
4．（2024春 钦州期末）一年一端午，一岁一安康。在端午节当天，你们学校八年级的同学们组织了一次难忘且有意义的端午活动。作为你校英语报的一名小记者，请你根据以下提示，写一篇80词左右的英语短文报道此次活动，刊登在英语报上。
写作要点：
（1）地点：老年之家（the old people's home）；
（2）活动：和老人一起包粽子、在电视上观看龙舟比赛、给老人表演节目、听老人讲故事、为老人打扫房间；
（3）感受：深受感动、呼吁更多同学关心老人。
写作要求：
（1）开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）短文应包括所提供的信息要点，可适当发挥，使行文流畅；
（3）书写工整规范，卷面整洁；
（4）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名，否则不予评分。
Dragon Boat Festival is an important day for Chinese people.It is celebrated everywhere in China.On the day，the eighth grade students in our school have done something unforgettable.
【考点】节假日活动．
【答案】Dragon Boat Festival is an important day for Chinese people.It is celebrated everywhere in China.On the day，the eighth grade students in our school have done something unforgettable.
They went to the old people's home and stayed with the old people to make them feel less lonely.They made zongzi together.But it was a little difficult for students to do that.The elderly taught them patiently.There was a dragon boat race on TV.All of them enjoyed watching it.How excited they were!After lunch，some students sang and danced.Some told funny jokes.The old people laughed and clapped.Grandpa Sun told his old stories to the students.Everyone listened to him quietly and carefully.Before leaving，students also did the cleaning and washing.All old people were touched with tears in their eyes.Both the elderly and the young had a good time together.
I was touched and proud of the students.I hope more and more people will take action to help the elderly.
【分析】【高分句型一】
How excited they were!他们多兴奋啊！感叹句。
【高分句型二】
I hope more and more people will take action to help the elderly.我希望越来越多的人采取行动帮助老年人。宾语从句。
【解答】Dragon Boat Festival is an important day for Chinese people.It is celebrated everywhere in China.On the day，the eighth grade students in our school have done something unforgettable.
They went to the old people's home and stayed with the old people to make them feel less lonely.（地点）They made zongzi together.But it was a little difficult for students to do that.The elderly taught them patiently.There was a dragon boat race on TV.All of them enjoyed watching it.How excited they were!【高分句型一】After lunch，some students sang and danced.Some told funny jokes.The old people laughed and clapped.Grandpa Sun told his old stories to the students.Everyone listened to him quietly and carefully.Before leaving，students also did the cleaning and washing.All old people were touched with tears in their eyes.Both the elderly and the young had a good time together.（活动）
I was touched and proud of the students.I hope more and more people will take action to help the elderly.【高分句型二】（感受）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
5．（2024春 百色期末）假设你叫李华，请以"An Introduction of Pandas"为题，根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文介绍大熊猫。
特征 生活习性 生存现状 保护措施
黑白相间 可爱，友善 居住在中国四川省森林 以竹子为食 数量越来越少 没有足够的食物 没有足够的地方 建立更多的研究基地 多种植竹子
参考词汇：province（省），feed on...（以……为食），the number of...（……的数量），research base（研究基地）
要求：
1.文章必须包括全部要点，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现除李华以外的其他人名和校名；
3.词数80左右。
An Introduction of Pandas
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【考点】人物介绍．
【答案】
How to protect pandas
Panda is our national treasure.They live in Sichuan.Their food is bamboo.They are kind but lovely.They are black and withe.However，their current situation is that they don't have enough bamboo to eat.They have less and less land.Their numbers are getting smaller and smaller.So we should realize the importance of protecting giant pandas.Here are some rules to protect pandas.We should not cut down trees.Don't throw food when visiting pandas in panda museum.This will help protect the giant pandas.There is less and less bamboo.For example，we should build more nature reserves base for them.We plant more bamboo.
If we can do those，I think there will be more and more pandas.
【分析】【高分句型一】
Don't throw food when visiting pandas in panda museum.在熊猫博物馆参观熊猫时，不要乱扔食物。时间状语从句。
【高分句型二】
If we can do those，I think there will be more and more pandas.如果我们能做到这些，我想会有越来越多的熊猫。条件状语从句。
【解答】
How to protect pandas
Panda is our national treasure.They live in Sichuan.Their food is bamboo.（生活习性）They are kind but lovely.They are black and withe.（特征）However，their current situation is that they don't have enough bamboo to eat.They have less and less land.Their numbers are getting smaller and smaller.（生存现状）So we should realize the importance of protecting giant pandas.Here are some rules to protect pandas.We should not cut down trees.Don't throw food when visiting pandas in panda museum.This will help protect the giant pandas.There is less and less bamboo.For example，we should build more nature reserves base for them.We plant more bamboo.（保护措施）
If we can do those，I think there will be more and more pandas.
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
6．（2024春 钦州期末）作为学生，我们应该了解良好的文明礼仪。请以"Good manners students should learn about'"为题，根据以下提示写一篇70词左右的短文。提示如下：
（1）要尊敬（respect）父母、老师和老人（the elderly.。对他们说话要有礼貌（politely），不应该大喊大叫。
（2）在公共场合，要遵守交通规则（obey traffic rules），依次排队，见到老人要让座，不乱扔垃圾（drop litter）等。
（3）就餐时，要等大家一起吃，吃饭时不要讲话，用完餐一起离席等。
要求：正确使用时态，语法正确，书写整洁。可根据提示适当发挥，使句子通顺、连贯。
Good manners students should learn about
__________
【考点】中华文化与传统．
【答案】
Good manners students should learn about
As students，we should know what good manners are.
First，we should respect our parents，teachers and the elderly.We should speak to them politely.It's rude of us to shout at them.When we are in public，we should obey traffic rules，queue for our turn，and give our seats to the elderly when we see them.Don't drop litter everywhere.While having dinner with others，we shouldn't start until everyone is ready and shouldn't talk with food in our mouth.Don't reach over someone's plate for something.Wait for everyone to finish before you leave.
【分析】【高分句型一】
When we are in public，we should obey traffic rules，queue for our turn，and give our seats to the elderly when we see them.当我们在公共场所时，我们应该遵守交通规则，排队等候轮到我们，当我们看到老人时，把座位让给他们。时间状语从句。
【高分句型二】
While having dinner with others，we shouldn't start until everyone is ready and shouldn't talk with food in our mouth.在与他人共进晚餐时，我们不应该在每个人都准备好之前就开始，也不应该嘴里含着食物说话。时间状语从句。
【解答】
Good manners students should learn about
As students，we should know what good manners are.
First，we should respect our parents，teachers and the elderly.We should speak to them politely.It's rude of us to shout at them.（要尊敬父母、老师和老人。对他们说话要有礼貌），不应该大喊大叫）When we are in public，we should obey traffic rules，queue for our turn，and give our seats to the elderly when we see them. 【高分句型一】Don't drop litter everywhere.（在公共场合，要遵守交通规则，依次排队，见到老人要让座，不乱扔垃圾等）While having dinner with others，we shouldn't start until everyone is ready and shouldn't talk with food in our mouth. 【高分句型二】Don't reach over someone's plate for something.Wait for everyone to finish before you leave.（就餐时，要等大家一起吃，吃饭时不要讲话，用完餐一起离席等）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
7．（2024春 庐阳区期末）假如你是李华，目前正在一所国际学校学习，得知学校暑期将举办一场中国文化秀。请写一封信申请做志愿者。
要点如下：
1.擅长中文英文；
2.了解中国文化；
3.乐于沟通交流。
注意事项：
1.词数80﹣100；
2.文中不能出现真实人名和校名；
3.开头不计入总词数。
参考词汇：volunteer（n.志愿者）
Dear Sir，
I'm Li Hua，a student from China.I am studying in an international school.
_____________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】书信类；学校生活．
【答案】Dear Sir，
I'm Li Hua，a student from China.I am studying in an international school.I'm delighted to learn that volunteer students are wanted for a Chinese culture show.Now 'm writing to apply for the position.
The reasons for my application are as follows.First of all，I am good at Chinese and English.I can communicate freely with others in English.What's more，years of being a monitor makes me a brilliant organizer，which will help a lot to keep the exhibition in order.I understand Chinese culture.I am happy to communicate with others.The most important factor is that my related knowledge will undoubtedly help the audience learn more about the unique Chinese art form.
All in all，my sense of responsibility will make me a qualified volunteer.I'd appreciate it if you could take my application intoconsideration.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】【高分句型一】
All in all，my sense of responsibility will make me a qualified volunteer.总之，我的责任感将使我成为一名合格的志愿者。All in all总之。
【高分句型二】
I'd appreciate it if you could take my application intoconsideration.如果您能考虑我的申请，我将不胜感激。条件状语从句。
【解答】Dear Sir，
I'm Li Hua，a student from China.I am studying in an international school.I'm delighted to learn that volunteer students are wanted for a Chinese culture show.Now 'm writing to apply for the position.
The reasons for my application are as follows.First of all，I am good at Chinese and English.I can communicate freely with others in English.（擅长中文英文） What's more，years of being a monitor makes me a brilliant organizer，which will help a lot to keep the exhibition in order.I understand Chinese culture.I am happy to communicate with others.（了解中国文化；乐于沟通交流）The most important factor is that my related knowledge will undoubtedly help the audience learn more about the unique Chinese art form.
All in all，my sense of responsibility will make me a qualified volunteer. 【高分句型一】I'd appreciate it if you could take my application intoconsideration.【高分句型二】
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
8．（2024春 莱西市期末）假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Helen想了解"双减"给你的学习和生活带来的变化。请根据提示，用英语写一封邮件介绍一下。
提示：
1.过去晚上经常做作业到很晚，现在有更多时间读课外书等；
2.过去周末要上课，现在周末可以进行体育锻炼等；
3.结合自己的实际情况，补充1﹣2个方面。
要求：
1.必须包括用给的指示要求；
2.词数：80～100.邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Helen，
_________________
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】热点话题；学习．
【答案】Dear Helen，
How nice to hear from you again!You learn about the "double reduction" policy in China and want to know about the changes of my life.Now let me tell you something about it.A lot of changes have taken place in our schools because of Double﹣reduction policy.I used to do my homework late at night.But now，I have more free time.I can do some reading and visit museums and so on.I used to have classes on weekends，but now I can follow my own interests such as doing sports and visiting friends.In the evenings，I can watch news on TV，read books and newspapers.What's more，I can go to bed earlier than before.
I think "double reduction" policy is very good，which reduces the burden on our students and makes our school life more wonderful.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】【高分句型一】
A lot of changes have taken place in our schools because of Double﹣reduction policy.由于"双减"，我们学校发生了许多变化。
这是一个现在完成时的句子，a lot of许多，固定搭配；take place发生，固定搭配；because of 由于，固定搭配。
【高分句型二】
I think "double reduction" policy is very good，which reduces the burden on our students and makes our school life more wonderful.我认为"双减"政策非常好，它减轻了我们学生的负担，使我们的学校生活更加美好。
"double reduction" policy is very good，是一个省略that的宾语从句；which引导定语从句，修饰先行词"double reduction" policy；make sb./sth.+adj.使某人/某物....，固定搭配。
【解答】Dear Helen，
How nice to hear from you again!You learn about the "double reduction" policy in China and want to know about the changes of my life.Now let me tell you something about it.（引出话题）A lot of changes have taken place in our schools because of Double﹣reduction policy.【高分句型一】I used to do my homework late at night.But now，I have more free time.I can do some reading and visit museums and so on.I used to have classes on weekends，but now I can follow my own interests such as doing sports and visiting friends.In the evenings，I can watch news on TV，read books and newspapers.What's more，I can go to bed earlier than before.（"双减"带来学习和生活的变化）
I think "double reduction" policy is very good，which reduces the burden on our students and makes our school life more wonderful.【高分句型二】
Yours
Li Hua
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
9．（2024春 浦北县期末）你学校准备举办英语征文比赛，请你以Let's Walk to School为题，写一篇短文投稿。内容要点如下：
（1）步行上学的好处：
①步行是很好的锻炼方式，有益健康；
②和同学朋友一起步行，增进交流和友谊；
③不用父母开车接送，有益环保；
（2）呼吁同学们步行上学。
要求：①要点完整，可适当拓展，表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯；
②词数：80左右。
_________________________________
【考点】安全与健康．
【答案】
Let's Walk to School
It is good for us to walk to school.First，walking to school is wonderful way to exercise and it's good for our health.Second，it's fun to walk together with friends every day.We can talk about something interesting and know about each other.Third，if we walk，our parents won't have to drive us to school.That saves their time and money .Moreover ，there will be less cars on the roads，and there will be less pollution in the city.So let's walk to school.
【分析】【高分句型一】：
It is good for us to walk to school.步行上学对我们有好处。It is good for sb to do sth表示对某人来说做某事有好处。
【高分句型二】：
So let's walk to school.所以我们步行去学校吧。let's do sth表示让我们做某事。
【解答】
Let's Walk to School
It is good for us to walk to school.【高分句型一】（引出话题）First，walking to school is wonderful way to exercise and it's good for our health.Second，it's fun to walk together with friends every day.We can talk about something interesting and know about each other.Third，if we walk，our parents won't have to drive us to school.That saves their time and money .（步行上学的好处）Moreover ，there will be less cars on the roads，and there will be less pollution in the city.So let's walk to school.【高分句型二】（呼吁同学们步行上学）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
10．（2024春 河北区期末）假如你平时坚持用英语写日记，请根据以下提示要点，叙述你今天放学回家后照顾妈妈的事情，并表达你的感受。
提示要点：
（1）我今天下午放学回到家的时候，妈妈正躺在床上。
（2）妈妈生病了，浑身不舒服。
（3）爸爸不在家，因为两天前他出差了。
（4）我帮妈妈买药、做饭……，妈妈感觉好多了。
（5）我已经长大了，应该为妈妈做一些事情。
（6）我感到……
参考词汇：出差 be on business
要求：
（1）词数：80～100词。
（2）日记格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
20th June，2024 Monday
When I got home this afternoon，Mum ______________.
【考点】日常生活；情感与情绪；记叙文．
【答案】20th June，2024 Monday
When I got home this afternoon，Mum was lying in bed.She was ill and felt awful all over.Dad wasn't at home because he was on business two days ago.I have grown up and I should do something for Mum.I took Mum's temperature.Luckily，she didn't have a fever.She asked me to buy some medicine for her.After I bought the medicine，I cooked dinner.Mum took the medicine and had dinner.Soon she felt better.She thanked me and said she was proud of me.Although I felt a little tired，I was very happy.
【分析】【高分句型一】
When I got home this afternoon，Mum was lying in bed.今天下午我到家时，妈妈躺在床上。
When引导时间状语从句。
【高分句型二】
After I bought the medicine，I cooked dinner.买了药后，我做了晚饭。
After 引导时间状语从句。
【解答】20th June，2024 Monday
When I got home this afternoon，Mum was lying in bed.（我今天下午放学回到家的时候，妈妈正躺在床上）【高分句型一】She was ill and felt awful all over.Dad wasn't at home because he was on business two days ago.（爸爸不在家，因为两天前他出差了）I have grown up and I should do something for Mum.（我已经长大了，应该为妈妈做一些事情）I took Mum's temperature.Luckily，she didn't have a fever.She asked me to buy some medicine for her.After I bought the medicine，I cooked dinner. （我买药、做饭）【高分句型二】Mum took the medicine and had dinner.Soon she felt better.（妈妈感觉好多了） She thanked me and said she was proud of me.Although I felt a little tired，I was very happy.（感受）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
11．（2024春 那坡县期末）假如你是李雷，是建华中学一名九年级的学生，在学校开展的校园"读书日"活动上，请你以"Reading is a good Habit"为题写一篇英语小短文，和同学们分享你的阅读好习惯。内容要点：
1.目前你读了多少本好书？
2.你的阅读习惯（喜欢阅读哪一类书籍，阅读的时间、地点和方式等）；
3.阅读给你带来什么益处（至少两点）：
4.号召大家多读书、读好书。
写作要求；1.包含上述要点，可适当发挥；2.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范，卷面整洁；3.文中不能出现"李雷"和"建华中学"以外的人名、校名或地名：4.词数80左右。
Reading is a good Habit
_________
【考点】学校生活．
【答案】
Reading is a good Habit
I like reading a lot.In my spare time，I often read newspapers and magazines，from which I can get lots of fun and learn about what's going on around the world.I also read my favorite books such as story books，novels and so on，which make me relax and happy.On weekends I usually spend a whole afternoon reading in the library.And I often read for about half an hour before going to bed.Now I usually buy my favorite books on line.
Reading is a very good habit.In my eyes，I think that forming a good reading habit is necessary for us.It can not only open up our eyes but also improve our knowledge.
Summer vocation is coming.I plan to read more English books to improve my English abilities .I often share my favorite books with my friends and classmates.It's time for us to form a good reading habit because it's very important and necessary for us.Let's do more reading together.
【分析】【高分句型一】
I also read my favorite books such as story books，novels and so on，which make me relax and happy.
such as 例如，and so on 等等
which作为关系词的定语从句，which做主语，修饰先行词favorite books.
【高分句型二】
And I often read for about half an hour before going to bed.
before going to bed是省略句，完整表达是before I go to bed.
【高分句型三】
It's time for us to form a good reading habit because it's very important and necessary for us.
It's time for sb to do sth 某人做某事的时间到了
because 引导的原因状语从句
【解答】
Reading is a good Habit
I like reading a lot.In my spare time，I often read newspapers and magazines，from which I can get lots of fun and learn about what's going on around the world.I also read my favorite books such as story books，novels and so on，which make me relax and happy.【高分句型一】On weekends I usually spend a whole afternoon reading in the library.And I often read for about half an hour before going to bed.【高分句型二】Now I usually buy my favorite books on line.（阅读习惯，阅读体会）
Reading is a very good habit.In my eyes，I think that forming a good reading habit is necessary for us.It can not only open up our eyes but also improve our knowledge.（阅读益处）
Summer vocation is coming.I plan to read more English books to improve my English abilities.I often share my favorite books with my friends and classmates.It's time for us to form a good reading habit because it's very important and necessary for us.【高分句型三】Let's do more reading together.（号召大家多阅读）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
12．（2024春 庄河市期末）暑假快到了，请以"The favourite thing I'd like to do in summer"为题，结合人生活实际写一篇英语短文，在假前的最后一次英语课上与同学分享。
内容提示：（1）What do you want to do in the summer holiday？
（2）What do you like to do best？Why？
要求：（1）中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；
（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
（3）词数80词左右。题目已给出，不计入总词数。
The favourite thing I'd like to do in summer
___________
【考点】日常生活．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型一】
So I can do the things that I'd like to do，such as playing computer games ，playing football and eating ice cream.
所以我可以做我想做的事情，比如玩电脑游戏，踢足球和吃冰淇淋。that引导定语从句。such as例如…。
【高分句型二】
That's why I love swimming in the summer.
这就是为什么我喜欢在夏天游泳。That's why…，这就是为什么…。
【解答】
The favourite thing I'd like to do in summer
The summer holiday is coming.So I can do the things that I'd like to do，such as playing computer games ，playing football and eating ice cream.【高分句型一】（暑假想做什么） The thing I want to do best is swimming.I love swimming for many reasons.I love swimming because it makes me feel cool.I can also meet a lot of friends in the swimming pool and play with them.Swimming can make me grow taller as well.That's why I love swimming in the summer.【高分句型二】（最喜欢做的事情及原因）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
13．（2024春 沙河口区期末）一个兴趣培养，一项技能学习，一次游学经历，一份友情感悟……生活中很多事情都有可能给你的生活带来积极的变化，或者让你学业更轻松，或者让你人生更有成就感，或者让你身心更加愉悦……请你写一篇英语短文，在英语班会上跟同学们分享你的成长故事。
内容提示：（1）What's the hobby/skill/experience.…？
（2）How did it change your life？
要求：（1）中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；
（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
（3）词数80词左右。
【考点】日常生活．
【答案】
An Unforgettable Experience
How time flies!There are a lot of unforgettable moments in my middle school life.During the three years，I have known many kind teachers and helpful classmates.Thanks to them，my middle school life is meaningful and colourful.One of the most unforgettable experiences happened in Grade 8.I worked hard to prepare an English Speech.However，things didn't went on as smoothly as expected.I fell ill a week before the speech.I coughed so badly that I could even hardly speak.I felt worried and helpless.It was my dearest English teacher that helped me get out of trouble.She told me to calm down and looked after me carefully.To me，my English teacher is like my family who care me and love me.Because of the experience，I have decided to be a teacher like my English teacher when I grow up.
【分析】【高分句型一】
Thanks to them，my middle school life is meaningful and colourful.多亏了他们，我的中学生活才有意义和丰富多彩。
Thanks to ，表示多亏。
【高分句型二】
She told me to calm down and looked after me carefully.她让我冷静下来，仔细照顾我。
look after，照顾。
【解答】
An Unforgettable Experience
How time flies!There are a lot of unforgettable moments in my middle school life.How time flies!Three years of middle school life has come to an end.During the three years，I have known many kind teachers and helpful classmates.Thanks to them，my middle school life is meaningful and colourful.【高分句型一】One of the most unforgettable experiences happened in Grade 8.（引出话题）I worked hard to prepare an English Speech.However，things didn't went on as smoothly as expected.I fell ill a week before the speech.I coughed so badly that I could even hardly speak.I felt worried and helpless.It was my dearest English teacher that helped me get out of trouble.She told me to calm down and looked after me carefully. （简述经历）【高分句型二】To me，my English teacher is like my family who care me and love me.Because of the experience，I have decided to be a teacher like my English teacher when I grow up.（对我的改变 ）
【点评】这是一篇提纲作文，题目要求围绕内容写作，命题既有限制又给予学生发挥的空间。
14．（2024春 大连期末）成长至今，你一定游览过很多地方。最近，你校英语网站征集 "My favourite place"的文章，请你介绍一处留给你印象最深刻的地方。
内容提示：
（1）Where did you go？
（2）What did you do there？
（3）Why is it your favourite place？
要求：
1.中心突出，语意连贯，层次清楚，书写规范。
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名、学校。
3.词数 80 个词左右。
My favourite place
____________
【考点】旅游景点．
【答案】
My favourite place
Our school organized a four﹣day activity to Yuquan Farm last week and we had a good time and learned a lot.
At around 7 a.m.，we got to the farm on the school bus.On arriving，we were warmly welcomed by the kind farm owner.We were divided into several groups，and then picked hops which is a kind of plants to make beer.Besides，not only were we competing with other groups to win the first place，but also we helped each other to finish our duty on time.At the end of the activity，sun﹣burnt as we were，we learned a lot from this meaningful activity.
This outdoor activity was of great benefit to us.Not only did it get us closer to nature，but also taught us the value of hard work.
【分析】高分句型一：
We were divided into several groups，and then picked hops which is a kind of plants to make beer.
译文：我们被分成几组，然后采摘啤酒花，这是一种制造啤酒的植物。
分析：这句话使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：
Not only did it get us closer to nature，but also taught us the value of hard work.
译文：它不仅使我们更接近大自然，而且教会了我们努力工作的价值。
分析：这句话使用了not only置于句首，后面用部分倒装。
【解答】
My favourite place
Our school organized a four﹣day activity to Yuquan Farm last week and we had a good time and learned a lot.（时间与地点）
At around 7 a.m.，we got to the farm on the school bus.On arriving，we were warmly welcomed by the kind farm owner.We were divided into several groups，and then picked hops which is a kind of plants to make beer.【高分句型一】Besides，not only were we competing with other groups to win the first place，but also we helped each other to finish our duty on time.At the end of the activity，sun﹣burnt as we were，we learned a lot from this meaningful activity.（活动过程：采摘啤酒花、互帮互助。）
This outdoor activity was of great benefit to us.Not only did it get us closer to nature，but also taught us the value of hard work.【高分句型二】（我的理由）
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
15．（2024春 中山区期末）时间过得很快，转眼间八年级的学习生活就要结束了，在过去一年中每个人都会在不同方面有所收获，也许是"develop hobbies"，也许是"form close friendships with..."，亦或许是"make progress in learning English"，等等。假如你是李华，请写一篇短文回忆你的收获和感受，并在英语课上交流。
要求；1.中心突出，语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名：
3.80词左右。
___________
【考点】书信类．
【答案】
An Experience of Making Progress
Dear teachers and fellow students.I'm here to share one of my experiences of making progress.
When 1 entered high school，1 found everybody else in my class was good at English except me.I had a small vocabulary and had difficulty understanding the passages.However，I didn't lose heart.I went to my English teacher，who advised me to use a dictionary while reading and try to get what the passages conveyed to me.I worked harder，following the teacher's advice.Gradually，I felt better while reading and began to find English interesting.
Now I have already caught up with my classmates.This experience gives me a better understanding of the saying：Nothing is too difficult to a willing heart.
【分析】高分句型一：
When I entered high school，I found everybody else in my class was good at English except me.
译文：当我进入高中时，我发现除了我以外，班上其他人英语都很好。
分析：when引导时间状语从句。
高分句型二：
I went to my English teacher，who advised me to use a dictionary while reading and try to get what the passages conveyed to me.
译文：我去找了我的英语老师，他建议我在阅读时使用词典，并试着了解文章所传达给我的信息。
分析：这句话使用who引导定语从句，while引导省略的时间状语从句。
【解答】
An Experience of Making Progress
Dear teachers and fellow students.I'm here to share one of my experiences of making progress.（话题）
When I entered high school，I found everybody else in my class was good at English except me. 【高分句型一】I had a small vocabulary and had difficulty understanding the passages.However，I didn't lose heart.I went to my English teacher，who advised me to use a dictionary while reading and try to get what the passages conveyed to me. 【高分句型二】I worked harder，following the teacher's advice.Gradually，I felt better while reading and began to find English interesting.（经历的过程）
Now I have already caught up with my classmates.This experience gives me a better understanding of the saying：Nothing is too difficult to a willing heart.
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
16．（2024春 甘井子区期末）在我们的生活中，选择无处不在。选择一本喜欢的书，选择一个适合自己的爱好……近日，某英文报正在进行此主题的征文活动，请结合自己的经历和感受，就其中的一个方面写一篇短文投稿，分享你的故事。
内容提示：
（1）What did you choose？
（2）Why did you choose it？
（3）How did you feel about it？
要求：（1）中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；
（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
（3）词数70词左右。
__________
【考点】日常生活．
【答案】There are a great many hobbies to choose from.Some people enjoy collecting coins or stamps，others choose to spend their time on sports or music.
I have many hobbies，but playing basketball is my favorite one.At weekends，we always build a team to play basketball against another one in our neighbourhood.The competitions brought us so much fun.I think playing basketball is a good way to build up one's body and relax oneself.I'm happy to play basketball with my friends.It is interesting.But I will always remember that it's unwise to spend too much time playing.
【分析】【高分句型一】
There are a great many hobbies to choose from.有很多爱好可供选择。
There be 结构，表示有；存在。
【高分句型二】
I think playing basketball is a good way to build up one's body and relax oneself.我认为打篮球是锻炼身体和放松自己的好方法。
I think +宾语从句，表示我认为……
【解答】There are a great many hobbies to choose from.【高分句型一】Some people enjoy collecting coins or stamps，others choose to spend their time on sports or music.
I have many hobbies，but playing basketball is my favorite one. （选择打篮球）At weekends，we always build a team to play basketball against another one in our neighbourhood.The competitions brought us so much fun.I think playing basketball is a good way to build up one's body and relax oneself.（为什么选择打篮球）【高分句型二】I'm happy to play basketball with my friends.It is interesting.But I will always remember that it's unwise to spend too much time playing.（感受）
【点评】提纲作文就是把文章的情景和内容要求分成块，以条目的形式列出，请考生据此进行写作。这实际上是对考生思路和文章写作范围所作的明确限定。因此，提纲中所列举的要点要全部涉及到，一个也不能遗漏。
17．（2024春 青秀区校级期末）美不仅在外表，更在于内心。我们身边就有很多拥有美好心灵的同学，他们以自己美好的行为事迹影响着周围的人。假如你是李华，你校英语报开展"The Most Beautiful Teenager in My Heart"为题的征文活动。你认为你们班班长Lily就是你心目中的最美少年，请你按照以下提示写一篇征文投稿。
What does she look like？ 身高；……
What is she like？ 待人有礼；……
Why do you think she is the most beautiful？ ……
What have you learnt from her？ ……
写作要求：
（1）内容必须包含表格中所有信息；
（2）结构完整，语句流畅，意思清楚、连贯；
（3）使用正确和较丰富的词汇和语法结构，书写规范；
（4）文中不得出现除题目以外的人名、班级年级、校名、地名等个人信息，否则不予评分；
（5）80词左右（短文首句和尾句已给出，不计入词数）。
The Most Beautiful Teenager in My Heart
Lily is our class monitor.
Lily is such a good girl that I think she is the most beautiful teenager in my heart.
【考点】说明文；人物介绍．
【答案】The Most Beautiful Teenager in My Heart
Lily is our class monitor.I think she is the most beautiful person in my heart.She is of medium height.She is outgoing and good with others.She often helps old people cross the road.She is always the first to come to school in order to clean the desks and chairs.She helps her classmates with their homework.I have made much progress with the help of her，so I am very thankful to her.I think she is the most beautiful person because of her kindness.From her，I know we should help others and be kind to others.
Lily is such a good girl that I think she is the most beautiful teenager in my heart.
【分析】高分句型一】
She is always the first to come to school in order to clean the desks and chairs.她总是第一个到学校来打扫课桌椅。
in order to do sth为了做某事。
【高分句型二】
I think she is the most beautiful person because of her kindness.我认为她是最美丽的人，因为她的善良。
I think+宾语从句。
because of因为……
【解答】The Most Beautiful Teenager in My Heart
Lily is our class monitor.I think she is the most beautiful person in my heart.She is of medium height..（名字和身高）She is outgoing and good with others.（外貌和性格）She often helps old people cross the road.She is always the first to come to school in order to clean the desks and chairs. 【高分句型一】She helps her classmates with their homework.I have made much progress with the help of her，so I am very thankful to her.I think she is the most beautiful person because of her kindness.【高分句型二】（为什么认为她最美） From her，I know we should help others and be kind to others.（在她身上我学到了什么）
Lily is such a good girl that I think she is the most beautiful teenager in my heart.
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
18．（2024春 西岗区期末）生活和学习中难免会遇到烦恼.当面对压力时你放松身心的方法是什么？请以"My favorite way to relax"为题写一篇短文向校英文报投稿，与同学们分享你的放松方法及感受。
内容要点：
（1）What is your favorite way to relax？
（2）How do you feel？
写作要求：
（1）书写规范，包含要点，层次清晰；
（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
（3）80词左右，题目已给出，不计入总词数。
【考点】记叙文；情感与情绪．
【答案】There are many ways to relax，but my favorite way to relax is hiking.At the age of 12，I went hiking with my parents for the first time.And I have been in love with it since then.I go hiking with my friends or parents on weekends.We can enjoy the fresh air and the peaceful country scene.Also，we can have a talk happily.
Relaxing is very important for me.If I keep studying for a long time without relaxing，I'll feel very tired even I'll have a headache.This is bad for my health.However，if I relax myself by hiking，I'll feel happy and energeti.All in all，relaxing is good for my body and mind.
【分析】【高分句型一】
There are many ways to relax，but my favorite way to relax is hiking.有很多放松的方式，但我最喜欢的放松方式是徒步旅行。there be句型。
【高分句型二】
If I keep studying for a long time without relaxing，I'll feel very tired and even I'll have a headache.如果我长时间不放松地学习，我会感到很累，甚至头痛。if如果，引导条件状语从句，主从句时态遵循"主将从现"的原则。
【解答】There are many ways to relax，but my favorite way to relax is hiking.【高分句型一】At the age of 12，I went hiking with my parents for the first time.And I have been in love with it since then.I go hiking with my friends or parents on weekends.We can enjoy the fresh air and the peaceful country scene.Also，we can have a talk happily.（放松的方式）
Relaxing is very important for me.If I keep studying for a long time without relaxing，I'll feel very tired even I'll have a headache.【高分句型二】This is bad for my health.However，if I relax myself by hiking，I'll feel happy and energetic .All in all，relaxing is good for my body and mind.（感受）
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