Unit 5 What an adventure!
1.confirm v.证实,证明;使确信,确认
confirmation n.证实,证明;批准,许可
confirmed adj.成习惯的;根深蒂固的,坚定的
[语境运用] 单句语法填空/完成句子
(1)①I have finished the test, and I’m waiting for the (confirm) of the test result.
(2)②他的面部表情使我相信了我的怀疑。
His facial expression my suspicion.
③已证实我们要去爬山,在那里野餐。
we’ll go to climb a mountain and have a picnic there.
【答案】 (1)①confirmation (2)②confirmed me in ③It has been confirmed that
·confirm sb in/confirm sb that... 使某人确信……
confirm sth/+that从句/+wh-从句 证实/证明/确认……
·It is/has been confirmed that... 据/已证实……
2.attempt n.& v.努力,尝试;企图,试图
attempted adj.未遂的;企图的
[语境运用] 单句语法填空/语境串词
(1)①I attempted (pass) the exam but failed,because it was too difficult.
②Police say they’re treating it as a case of (attempt) murder.
(2)③我试图说服他远离他的坏朋友们,但第一次尝试就失败了。为了缓解紧张气氛,我提议我们中断谈话去吃午饭。
I persuading him to break away from his bad friends,but failed . ease the tension,I suggested that we break off the conversation for lunch.
【答案】 (1)①to pass ②attempted (2)③made an attempt at;at my/the first attempt;In an attempt to
·make an attempt to do/at doing sth 尝试做某事
in an attempt to do sth 试图做某事
at one’s/the first attempt 第一次尝试
·attempt to do sth 企图做某事;尝试做某事
表示“企图/尝试/试图做某事”的固定搭配还有:
try to do sth
seek to do sth
3.charge n.主管,负责;费用,价钱;指控;电量
v.收费,要价;指控,控告;给……充电
[语境运用] 一词多义
①The restaurant has a minimum charge of $50 per person, so the four of us need to pay at least $200.
②How much did he charge you for repairing the bicycle
③Have you got your phone charged It was powered off just now.
④Two men have been charged in connection with the fire.
⑤Philip is in charge of our marketing department.
【答案】 ①费用 ②收费,要价 ③充电 ④指控,控告 ⑤主管,负责
·take charge of...掌管/负责……(表动作)
in charge of...负责/管理……(表状态)
in the charge of...受……的管理;由……负责
free of charge=for free免费
·charge sb...for sth 为某物向某人收取……费用
charge sb with (doing) sth=accuse sb of (doing) sth 控告某人(做)某事
注意in charge of与in the charge of的用法区别:前者意为“掌管,负责”,一般用人作主语;后者意为“由……负责,在……的掌管之下”,一般用物作主语。
4.permit v.允许,准许,许可
n.许可证
permission n.允许,许可
[语境运用] 单句语法填空/一句多译
(1)①Much to my disappointment, everyone mustn’t take any photographs in the old temple without (permit).
②The mother permitted her son (play) in the garden after he finished his homework.
③The security guards didn’t permit (take) a camera into the museum.
(2)天气允许的话,聚会将在花园里举办。
④ ,the party will be held in the garden.(条件状语从句)
⑤ ,the party will be held in the garden.(独立主格结构)
【答案】 (1)①permission ②to play ③taking (2)④If weather permits ⑤Weather permitting
·permit sb to do sth 允许某人做某事
permit (one’s) doing sth 允许(某人)做某事
weather/time permitting=if weather/time permits 天气/时间允许的话
·without permission 未经允许
ask for permission 请求许可
5.astonish v.使吃惊,使惊讶
astonishing adj.令人惊讶的
astonished adj.感到惊讶的,吃惊的
astonishment n.惊讶,吃惊
[语境运用] 单句语法填空/语境串词/一句多译
(1)①He was astonished (see) how his hometown had changed in the past 10 years.
(2)②To my ,they seemed at the news, and looked at me in .(astonish)
(3)令我吃惊的是,他们竟然在这么短的时间里完成了那项任务。
③ they should have finished that task in such a short time.(it作形式主语)
④ they should have finished that task in such a short time.(what引导主语从句)
【答案】 (1)①to see (2)②astonishment;astonished;astonishing;astonishment (3)③It astonishes me that ④What astonishes me is that
·it astonishes sb that...令某人惊讶的是……
·be astonished at/by sth 对/因某事感到惊讶
be astonished to do sth 对做某事感到惊讶
·to one’s astonishment 令某人惊讶的是
in/with astonishment 惊讶地,吃惊地
6.distinguish v.看清;认出;区分;使著名
distinguished adj.卓越的;著名的;杰出的
[语境运用] 单句语法填空/完成句子
(1)① (distinguish) for its attractive scenery, Hangzhou sees large numbers of tourists every year.
②Reading good books enriches our minds and teaches us to distinguish right and wrong.
③As we all know, Ms Sun is distinguished a great table tennis player in the world.
(2)④苏轼是中国宋代杰出的作家、诗人、书法家和画家。他因对自己事业的奉献和对祖国的热爱而闻名。
Su Shi was during the Song Dynasty.He
.
【答案】 (1)①Distinguished ②between ③as
(2)④a distinguished Chinese writer,poet,calligrapher and painter;was distinguished for his dedication to his career and his love for his country
·distinguish between A and B区分/辨别A和B
distinguish...from...把……与……区分开来;使……有别于……
distinguish oneself as...作为……而出名
·be distinguished for...因……而出名
be distinguished as...作为……而出名
7.bring...into focus 使……成为焦点
[语境运用] 单句语法填空/完成句子
(1)①While rock-climbing, you need to remain very (focus) so that you won’t make any dangerous errors.
(2)②他在演讲中所说的话使人工智能成为焦点。
What he said in his speech .
③讲座的主题是汉字的历史和演变。(应用文写作之通知信)
The lecture will the history and development of Chinese characters.
【答案】 (1)①focused (2)②brought AI into focus ③focus on
·focused adj.注意力集中的;专注的
·come into focus 成为焦点
·focus (one’s energy/attention) on...集中(某人的精力/注意力)于……
1.not...until...直到……才……
[教材原句] Sadly,Mallory would die on the mountain in 1924,although his body would not be found until many years later.
可惜的是,1924年马洛里在登山过程中身亡,而他的遗体直到多年后才被找到。
[语境运用] 完成句子
①她昨晚直到完成旅行计划才上床睡觉。
she finished making a plan for a trip.
②人们都说“桂林山水甲天下”,到桂林一看,果然名不虚传。
People say:“Guilin’s scenery is peerless in the world.” It was that I found it really worthy of the reputation.
③由于糟糕的天气,直到下周才会举办运动会。
Not until next week due to the bad weather.
【答案】 ①She didn’t go to bed last night until ②not until I visited the place ③will the sports meet be held
2.完全倒装
[教材原句] Above me was the calm surface of the sea.
我头顶上是平静的海面。
[语境运用] 完成句子
①远处有一个废弃的农场。
There in the distance.
②地板上坐着一个男孩,他周围有一堆书。
On the floor surrounded by a pile of books.
③这就是我们充满活力的城市,只要您方便,随时欢迎来参观。
,which you are welcome to visit whenever at your convenience.
【答案】 ①exists an abandoned farm ②sat a boy ③Such is our lively city
在图中的第一、第二种情况中,若主语是代词,则不用完全倒装。
Out he rushed on hearing the noise.
他一听到喧闹声就冲了出去。
Ⅰ.课文语法填空
Last year, hundreds of people spent a lot of money on climbing Qomolangma even though they knew they would be challenged with different risks.For some people, climbing makes them feel 1. (power).
George Mallory believed that we ate and made money 2. (enjoy) life.Sadly, this climber lost his life in 1924 while he 3. (climb) Qomolangma.It is still not
4. (know) if he succeeded in reaching the top before Qomolangma took his life.Alan Arnette, 5. climbed Qomolangma in 2011, held the idea that climbing brought
6. focus what was important to you in your life.He believed that there were a thousand reasons to turn around and only one to keep going.He added that you had to focus on 7. one reason that was most important and unique to you.And it helped you figure out whether you had the physical and mental 8. (tough) to push when you wanted to give up.
With the majority of attempts to climb Qomolangma 9. (result) either in total success or failure, is there also a scientific reason Recent studies indicate that risk-taking may be part of human nature.Besides,people enjoy climbing because they expect to benefit from the results.
Therefore, it’s 10. (total) up to you whether you will take the risk of climbing Qomolangma.
【答案】 1.powerful 2.to enjoy 3.was climbing 4.known 5.who 6.into 7.the 8.toughness 9.resulting 10.totally
Ⅱ.单句语法填空
1.(2024·全国甲卷)The annual arrival of the Saint Lukas is another attempt (improve) the situation.
2.(2024·新高考全国Ⅰ卷)The differences between print and digital reading results are partly
(relate) to paper’s physical properties.
3.(2024·北京卷)Once a pair has been determined to be suitable, the students will be contacted individually with a special (permit) number to register for the programme.
4.(2024·新高考全国Ⅱ卷) Given the (astonish) potential of AI to transform our lives, we all need to take action to deal with our AI-powered future...
5.China is the first country (land) on the far side of the Moon.
6.Unaware what was happening around him,he was on pins and needles.
7.He has distinguished himself an excellent athlete in the world.
8.I wonder how much money you will charge us the six-week course.
9.The trees (surround) the town were planted by the soldiers ten years ago.
10.We should bring focus what we can do together for our children and grandchildren.
【答案】 1.to improve 2.related 3.permission 4.astonishing 5.to land 6.of 7.as 8.for 9.surrounding 10.into
假设你是新华中学的李华,今年暑假你和父母去了夏威夷,在此期间你经历了人生中的第一次潜水探险。请你用英文来描述自己这一次的探险经历以及从中获得的感想。
1.今天我想和大家分享的是我在夏威夷的第一次潜水尝试。(share with;attempt)
Today what I want to share with you is my first diving attempt in Hawaii.
2.在了解了一些旅行贴士之后,一大早,我和父母乘公共汽车去了帕帕科莱亚海滩(Papakolea Beach),然后乘船去了一个小岛。(by bus/boat)
After learning some travel tips,in the early morning,my parents and I went to Papakolea Beach by bus and then to an island by boat.
3.当我听到海里有各种生物,包括鲨鱼的消息时,我不敢跳进海里。(including)
When I heard the news that there were all kinds of creatures in the sea,including sharks,I didn’t dare to jump into the sea.
4.教练解释说鲨鱼不会故意攻击人类后,我跳了进去。(attack;on purpose)
After the coach explained that sharks would not attack humans on purpose,I jumped in.
5.一开始我分辨不出鱼、珊瑚和海藻。(distinguish)
At first I couldn’t distinguish between fish,coral and seaweed.
6.渐渐地,我发现了各种各样的鱼和海龟。(gradually)
Gradually,I found a variety of fishes and turtles.
7.最让我吃惊的是,我看到了一些鲨鱼。它们在追赶鱼群。(astonish)
What astonished me most was that I saw some sharks.They were running after the fish groups.
8.我被我所看到的东西迷住了。(fascinated)
I was fascinated by what I saw.
9.这次潜水经历是令人激动和难忘的,我从中学到很多,也受益颇多。我期待着第二次尝试。(thrilling)
This diving experience is thrilling and unforgettable,from which I learnt and benefited a lot.I’m looking forward to a second attempt.
[句式升级]
1.将第3句用非谓语作状语进行改写升级,再将第3句和第4句用not...until...结构合并。
Hearing the news that there were all kinds of creatures in the sea,including sharks,I didn’t dare to jump into the sea until the coach explained that they would not attack humans on purpose.
2.将第7句中的后一句用非谓语作后置定语进行改写升级并与前一句合并,再将第8句用定语从句进行改写升级并与第7句合并。
What astonished me most was that I saw some sharks running after the fish groups,by which I was fascinated.
[连句成篇]
Today what I want to share with you is my first diving attempt in Hawaii.After learning some travel tips,in the early morning,my parents and I went to Papakolea Beach by bus and then to an island by boat.
Hearing the news that there were all kinds of creatures in the sea,including sharks,I didn’t dare to jump into the sea until the coach explained that they would not attack humans on purpose.At first I couldn’t distinguish between fish,coral and seaweed.Gradually,I found a variety of fishes and turtles.What astonished me most was that I saw some sharks running after the fish groups,by which I was fascinated.
This diving experience is thrilling and unforgettable,from which I learnt and benefited a lot.I’m looking forward to a second attempt.
要求:找出下列各句中点训练里出现过的词汇。
我非常担心自己会在所有观众面前丢脸,我能感觉到我的心在怦怦直跳。我双手捧着歌本,不知如何是好,这时亨利注意到了我的尴尬,过来帮助我。他把我的服装固定好,打了一个别致的绳结。他开玩笑说我“不会”打结。听到这里,观众中响起了欢呼声,一切都很顺利。他嘴角掠过一丝微笑,好像我的错误没什么大不了的。我成功地演完了剩下的戏,心里仍然很震惊。
I was extremely worried that I’d lose face in front of all the audience,and I could feel my heart pounding.
Both my hands were holding the songbook.I was at a loss what to do when Henry noticed my embarrassment and came to my aid.
He fixed my costume,and tied the string with a fancy knot.
He made a joke about me “not” knowing how to knot.Hearing this, a cheer went up from the audience and everything was all right.
A faint smile flicked across his lips as if my mistake was no big deal.
I got through the rest of the play successfully, and there was still a shock in my mind.
要求:根据括号中的提示完成句式升级。
①Extremely worried that I’d lose face in front of all the audience (形容词作状语), I could feel my heart pounding.②With both my hands holding the songbook (with复合结构), I was at a loss what to do when Henry,③who noticed my embarrassment (非限制性定语从句), came to my aid.He fixed my costume,④tying the string with a fancy knot (现在分词作状语).He made a joke about me “not” knowing how to knot.Hearing this, a cheer went up from the audience and everything was all right.A faint smile flicked across his lips as if my mistake was no big deal.I got through the rest of the play successfully,⑤still a shock in my mind(独立主格结构).
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Unit 5 What an adventure!
1.confirm v.证实,证明;使确信,确认
confirmation n.证实,证明;批准,许可
confirmed adj.成习惯的;根深蒂固的,坚定的
[语境运用] 单句语法填空/完成句子
(1)①I have finished the test, and I’m waiting for the (confirm) of the test result.
confirmation
(2)②他的面部表情使我相信了我的怀疑。
His facial expression my suspicion.
③已证实我们要去爬山,在那里野餐。
we’ll go to climb a mountain and have a picnic there.
confirmed me in
It has been confirmed that
·confirm sb in/confirm sb that... 使某人确信……
confirm sth/+that从句/+wh-从句 证实/证明/确认……
·It is/has been confirmed that... 据/已证实……
2.attempt n.& v.努力,尝试;企图,试图
attempted adj.未遂的;企图的
[语境运用] 单句语法填空/语境串词
(1)①I attempted (pass) the exam but failed,because it was too difficult.
②Police say they’re treating it as a case of (attempt) murder.
to pass
attempted
(2)③我试图说服他远离他的坏朋友们,但第一次尝试就失败了。为了缓解紧张气氛,我提议我们中断谈话去吃午饭。
I persuading him to break away from his bad friends,but failed . ease the tension,I suggested that we break off the conversation for lunch.
made an attempt at
at my/the first attempt
In an attempt to
·make an attempt to do/at doing sth 尝试做某事
in an attempt to do sth 试图做某事
at one’s/the first attempt 第一次尝试
·attempt to do sth 企图做某事;尝试做某事
表示“企图/尝试/试图做某事”的固定搭配还有:
try to do sth
seek to do sth
3.charge n.主管,负责;费用,价钱;指控;电量
v.收费,要价;指控,控告;给……充电
[语境运用] 一词多义
①The restaurant has a minimum charge of $50 per person, so the four of us need to pay at least $200.
费用
②How much did he charge you for repairing the bicycle
③Have you got your phone charged It was powered off just now.
④Two men have been charged in connection with the fire.
⑤Philip is in charge of our marketing department.
收费,要价
充电
指控,控告
主管,负责
·take charge of...掌管/负责……(表动作)
in charge of...负责/管理……(表状态)
in the charge of...受……的管理;由……负责
free of charge=for free免费
·charge sb...for sth 为某物向某人收取……费用
charge sb with (doing) sth=accuse sb of (doing) sth 控告某人(做)某事
注意in charge of与in the charge of的用法区别:前者意为“掌管,负责”,一般用人作主语;后者意为“由……负责,在……的掌管之下”,一般用物作主语。
4.permit v.允许,准许,许可
n.许可证
permission n.允许,许可
[语境运用] 单句语法填空/一句多译
(1)①Much to my disappointment, everyone mustn’t take any photographs in the old temple without (permit).
permission
②The mother permitted her son (play) in the garden after he finished his homework.
③The security guards didn’t permit (take) a camera into the museum.
(2)天气允许的话,聚会将在花园里举办。
④ ,the party will be held in the garden.(条件状语从句)
⑤ ,the party will be held in the garden.(独立主格结构)
to play
taking
If weather permits
Weather permitting
·permit sb to do sth 允许某人做某事
permit (one’s) doing sth 允许(某人)做某事
weather/time permitting=if weather/time permits 天气/时间允许的话
·without permission 未经允许
ask for permission 请求许可
5.astonish v.使吃惊,使惊讶
astonishing adj.令人惊讶的
astonished adj.感到惊讶的,吃惊的
astonishment n.惊讶,吃惊
[语境运用] 单句语法填空/语境串词/一句多译
(1)①He was astonished (see) how his hometown had changed in the past 10 years.
to see
(2)②To my ,they seemed at the news, and looked at me in .(astonish)
(3)令我吃惊的是,他们竟然在这么短的时间里完成了那项任务。
③ they should have finished that task in such a short time.(it作形式主语)
④ they should have finished that task in such a short time.(what引导主语从句)
astonishment
astonished
astonishing
astonishment
It astonishes me that
What astonishes me is that
·it astonishes sb that...令某人惊讶的是……
·be astonished at/by sth 对/因某事感到惊讶
be astonished to do sth 对做某事感到惊讶
·to one’s astonishment 令某人惊讶的是
in/with astonishment 惊讶地,吃惊地
6.distinguish v.看清;认出;区分;使著名
distinguished adj.卓越的;著名的;杰出的
[语境运用] 单句语法填空/完成句子
(1)① (distinguish) for its attractive scenery, Hangzhou sees large numbers of tourists every year.
Distinguished
②Reading good books enriches our minds and teaches us to distinguish
right and wrong.
③As we all know, Ms Sun is distinguished a great table tennis player in the world.
between
as
(2)④苏轼是中国宋代杰出的作家、诗人、书法家和画家。他因对自己事业的奉献和对祖国的热爱而闻名。
Su Shi was
during the Song Dynasty.He
.
a distinguished Chinese writer,poet,calligrapher and painter
was distinguished for his dedication to his
career and his love for his country
·distinguish between A and B区分/辨别A和B
distinguish...from...把……与……区分开来;使……有别于……
distinguish oneself as...作为……而出名
·be distinguished for...因……而出名
be distinguished as...作为……而出名
7.bring...into focus 使……成为焦点
[语境运用] 单句语法填空/完成句子
(1)①While rock-climbing, you need to remain very (focus) so that you won’t make any dangerous errors.
focused
(2)②他在演讲中所说的话使人工智能成为焦点。
What he said in his speech .
③讲座的主题是汉字的历史和演变。(应用文写作之通知信)
The lecture will the history and development of Chinese characters.
brought AI into focus
focus on
·focused adj.注意力集中的;专注的
·come into focus 成为焦点
·focus (one’s energy/attention) on...集中(某人的精力/注意力)于……
1.not...until...直到……才……
[教材原句] Sadly,Mallory would die on the mountain in 1924,although his body would not be found until many years later.
可惜的是,1924年马洛里在登山过程中身亡,而他的遗体直到多年后才被找到。
[语境运用] 完成句子
①她昨晚直到完成旅行计划才上床睡觉。
she finished making a plan for a trip.
②人们都说“桂林山水甲天下”,到桂林一看,果然名不虚传。
People say:“Guilin’s scenery is peerless in the world.” It was
that I found it really worthy of the reputation.
She didn’t go to bed last night until
not until
I visited the place
③由于糟糕的天气,直到下周才会举办运动会。
Not until next week due to the bad weather.
will the sports meet be held
2.完全倒装
[教材原句] Above me was the calm surface of the sea.
我头顶上是平静的海面。
[语境运用] 完成句子
①远处有一个废弃的农场。
There in the distance.
②地板上坐着一个男孩,他周围有一堆书。
On the floor surrounded by a pile of books.
③这就是我们充满活力的城市,只要您方便,随时欢迎来参观。
,which you are welcome to visit whenever at your convenience.
exists an abandoned farm
sat a boy
Such is our lively city
在图中的第一、第二种情况中,若主语是代词,则不用完全倒装。
Out he rushed on hearing the noise.
他一听到喧闹声就冲了出去。
单元能力·提升自测
Ⅰ.课文语法填空
Last year, hundreds of people spent a lot of money on climbing Qomolangma even though they knew they would be challenged with different risks.For some people, climbing makes them feel 1.
(power).
powerful
George Mallory believed that we ate and made money 2. (enjoy) life.
Sadly, this climber lost his life in 1924 while he 3. (climb) Qomolangma.It is still not 4. (know) if he succeeded in reaching the top before Qomolangma took his life.Alan Arnette, 5. climbed Qomolangma in 2011, held the idea that climbing brought 6. focus what was important to you in your life.He believed that there were a thousand reasons to turn around and only one to keep going.He added that you had to focus on 7. one reason that was most important and unique to you.And it helped you figure out whether you had the physical and mental 8.
(tough) to push when you wanted to give up.
to enjoy
was climbing
known
who
into
the
toughness
With the majority of attempts to climb Qomolangma 9.
(result) either in total success or failure, is there also a scientific reason Recent studies indicate that risk-taking may be part of human nature.
Besides,people enjoy climbing because they expect to benefit from the results.
Therefore, it’s 10. (total) up to you whether you will take the risk of climbing Qomolangma.
resulting
totally
Ⅱ.单句语法填空
1.(2024·全国甲卷)The annual arrival of the Saint Lukas is another attempt
(improve) the situation.
2.(2024·新高考全国Ⅰ卷)The differences between print and digital reading results are partly (relate) to paper’s physical properties.
to improve
related
3.(2024·北京卷)Once a pair has been determined to be suitable, the students will be contacted individually with a special (permit) number to register for the programme.
4.(2024·新高考全国Ⅱ卷) Given the (astonish) potential of AI to transform our lives, we all need to take action to deal with our AI-powered future...
5.China is the first country (land) on the far side of the Moon.
permission
astonishing
to land
6.Unaware what was happening around him,he was on pins and needles.
7.He has distinguished himself an excellent athlete in the world.
8.I wonder how much money you will charge us the six-week course.
of
as
for
9.The trees (surround) the town were planted by the soldiers ten years ago.
10.We should bring focus what we can do together for our children and grandchildren.
surrounding
into
微写作
记叙文——丰富自我——潜水探险经历
假设你是新华中学的李华,今年暑假你和父母去了夏威夷,在此期间你经历了人生中的第一次潜水探险。请你用英文来描述自己这一次的探险经历以及从中获得的感想。
1.今天我想和大家分享的是我在夏威夷的第一次潜水尝试。(share with;
attempt)
Today what I want to share with you is my first diving attempt in Hawaii.
2.在了解了一些旅行贴士之后,一大早,我和父母乘公共汽车去了帕帕科莱亚海滩(Papakolea Beach),然后乘船去了一个小岛。(by bus/boat)
After learning some travel tips,in the early morning,my parents and I went to Papakolea Beach by bus and then to an island by boat.
3.当我听到海里有各种生物,包括鲨鱼的消息时,我不敢跳进海里。(including)
When I heard the news that there were all kinds of creatures in the sea,including sharks,I didn’t dare to jump into the sea.
4.教练解释说鲨鱼不会故意攻击人类后,我跳了进去。(attack;on purpose)
After the coach explained that sharks would not attack humans on purpose,I jumped in.
5.一开始我分辨不出鱼、珊瑚和海藻。(distinguish)
At first I couldn’t distinguish between fish,coral and seaweed.
6.渐渐地,我发现了各种各样的鱼和海龟。(gradually)
Gradually,I found a variety of fishes and turtles.
7.最让我吃惊的是,我看到了一些鲨鱼。它们在追赶鱼群。(astonish)
What astonished me most was that I saw some sharks.They were running after the fish groups.
8.我被我所看到的东西迷住了。(fascinated)
I was fascinated by what I saw.
9.这次潜水经历是令人激动和难忘的,我从中学到很多,也受益颇多。我期待着第二次尝试。(thrilling)
This diving experience is thrilling and unforgettable,from which I learnt and benefited a lot.I’m looking forward to a second attempt.
[句式升级]
1.将第3句用非谓语作状语进行改写升级,再将第3句和第4句用not...until...结构合并。
Hearing the news that there were all kinds of creatures in the sea,including sharks,I didn’t dare to jump into the sea until the coach explained that they would not attack humans on purpose.
2.将第7句中的后一句用非谓语作后置定语进行改写升级并与前一句合并,再将第8句用定语从句进行改写升级并与第7句合并。
What astonished me most was that I saw some sharks running after the fish groups,by which I was fascinated.
[连句成篇]
Today what I want to share with you is my first diving attempt in Hawaii.After learning some travel tips,in the early morning,my parents and I went to Papakolea Beach by bus and then to an island by boat.
Hearing the news that there were all kinds of creatures in the sea,
including sharks,I didn’t dare to jump into the sea until the coach explained that they would not attack humans on purpose.At first I couldn’t distinguish between fish,coral and seaweed.Gradually,I found a variety of fishes and turtles.What astonished me most was that I saw some sharks running after the fish groups,by which I was fascinated.
This diving experience is thrilling and unforgettable,from which I learnt and benefited a lot.I’m looking forward to a second attempt.
读后续写微技能
线训练——“喜悦、高兴”
要求:找出下列各句中点训练里出现过的词汇。
我非常担心自己会在所有观众面前丢脸,我能感觉到我的心在怦怦直跳。我双手捧着歌本,不知如何是好,这时亨利注意到了我的尴尬,过来帮助我。他把我的服装固定好,打了一个别致的绳结。他开玩笑说我“不会”打结。听到这里,观众中响起了欢呼声,一切都很顺利。他嘴角掠过一丝微笑,好像我的错误没什么大不了的。我成功地演完了剩下的戏,心里仍然很震惊。
I was extremely worried that I’d lose face in front of all the audience,
and I could feel my heart pounding.
Both my hands were holding the songbook.I was at a loss what to do when Henry noticed my embarrassment and came to my aid.
He fixed my costume,and tied the string with a fancy knot.
He made a joke about me “not” knowing how to knot.Hearing this, a cheer went up from the audience and everything was all right.
A faint smile flicked across his lips as if my mistake was no big deal.
I got through the rest of the play successfully, and there was still a shock in my mind.
要求:根据括号中的提示完成句式升级。
①Extremely worried that I’d lose face in front of all the audience (形容词作状语), I could feel my heart pounding.②With both my hands holding the songbook (with复合结构), I was at a loss what to do when Henry,③who noticed my embarrassment (非限制性定语从句), came to my aid.He fixed my costume,④tying the string with a fancy knot (现在分词作状语).He made a joke about me “not” knowing how to knot.Hearing this, a cheer went up from the audience and everything was all right.A faint smile flicked across his lips as if my mistake was no big deal.I got through the rest of the play successfully,⑤still a shock in my mind(独立主格结构).
