Unit 6 Survival
1.appreciate v.欣赏;赏识;领会;感谢
appreciation n.欣赏;感激;理解
appreciative adj.欣赏的;感谢的
[语境运用] 语境串词/完成句子
(1)①I truly the kind words of I received from my teacher.Her look filled me with warmth and motivation,making me feel valued.(appreciate)
(2)②我写这封信是为了真诚地感谢您指导我完成这个要求很高的数学竞赛。(应用文写作之感谢信)
I am writing to sincerely through the demanding math contest.
③我正在做作业,如果你能把音乐的音量调小一点,我将不胜感激。
I am doing my homework,and I you could turn the music down.
④这时,燕子妈妈在我的身边飞来飞去,好像在感谢我救了她的孩子。(读后续写之动作描写)
At this time,the swallow mother flew around me,as if me for saving her child.
【答案】 (1)①appreciated;appreciation;appreciative
(2)②appreciate your guiding me ③would appreciate it if ④in appreciation of
·appreciate (one’s) doing sth 感激(某人)做某事
I would appreciate it if...如果……我将不胜感激
·in appreciation of为感谢……
appreciate作“感谢,感激”讲时,其宾语不能是人,只能是物;且其后不能直接跟从句,需先接it,再接从句,有类似用法的动词还有like,hate,love等。
2.react v.(作出)反应;回应
reaction n.反应;回应
[语境运用] 完成句子
①只有当我们冷静应对紧急状况时,我们才能更好地解决问题。(应用文写作之倡议书)
Only when we emergencies calmly can we solve problems in a better way.
②氙是一种惰性气体,这意味着它通常不会与其他元素产生化学反应。
Xenon is a noble gas,which means that it does not typically other elements.
③面对计划的突然改变,约翰先是惊讶,然后又反对这个主意。
Faced with the sudden change in the plan,John was first surprised and then the idea.
④为了应对这一现象,一些人建议我们种更多的树。
the phenomenon,some people suggested that we should plant more trees.
【答案】 ①react to ②react with ③reacted against ④In reaction to
·react to 对……作出反应
react with 同……起反应
react against反对;反抗
·in reaction to 作为对……的反应;以应对
3.expose v.使暴露(于险境);使接触;使体验;显露
exposed adj.无遮蔽的;暴露的
exposure n.暴露;揭露;接触;体验
[语境运用] 完成句子/一句多译
(1)①接触外国文化有益于我们学习当地语言。(应用文写作之建议信)
is beneficial for us to learn the local language.
②看到我们走近,她高兴地笑了,露出她漂亮的小牙齿。(读后续写之细节描写)
Seeing us approaching,she smiled joyfully, .
(2)如果你在夏天长时间暴露在阳光下,你会被晒伤的。
③ ,you will get sunburnt.(现在分词短语作状语)
④ ,you will get sunburnt.(过去分词短语作状语)
【答案】 (1)①Being exposed/Exposure to a foreign culture ②exposing her nice little teeth
(2)③Exposing yourself to the sunlight for a long time in summer ④Exposed to the sunlight for a long time in summer
·expose sth to sb 向某人揭露某事
expose sb/sth as...揭穿某人/某物为……
expose sb/sth/oneself to...使某人/某物/自己暴露于/接触……
·be exposed to...暴露于/接触……;遭受到……
及物动词expose后若无宾语,则常常使用它的被动形式;在expose...to...以及be exposed to结构中,to为介词,其后要用名词、代词或动名词作宾语。
4.get rid of 摆脱,除去
[语境运用] 完成句子
①练习瑜伽是一种很好的方式,让你摆脱压力和烦恼,寻找内心平和。(话题写作之运动与健康)
Practising yoga is a good way for you to and find inner peace.
②小丑医生给小病人讲了一个有趣的故事,使他不再害怕打针。
The clown doctor told the little patient a funny story, of injections.
③她决定改掉坏习惯,过更健康的生活。
She made a decision to to live a healthier life.
【答案】 ①get rid of stress and worry ②ridding him of his fear ③rid herself of bad habits
get rid of=be rid of 摆脱,除去
rid sb/sth of...使某人/某物摆脱/除去……
rid oneself of...使自己摆脱……
it作形式主语
[教材原句] However they adapt to our ways of urban living,it’s important that we get a better understanding of and even learn to appreciate our wild neighbours.
不论它们如何适应我们的城市生活方式,更好地理解甚至学会欣赏我们的野生邻居是非常重要的。
[语境运用] 完成句子
①我很荣幸能发表演讲,与大家分享我对京剧的看法。(应用文写作之演讲稿)
to share with you my opinions on Beijing Opera.
②听说你要去一个中国家庭做客,我非常高兴。了解中国的餐桌礼仪是有必要的。(应用文写作之建议信)
I’m more than delighted to learn that you are going to visit a Chinese family.
the table manners of China.
③我们都知道良好的开端是成功的一半。欢迎你尽快加入我们。(应用文写作之倡议书)
.
Welcome your participating in us as soon as possible.
④随着社会的发展,我们似乎正在失去很多传统。(话题写作之传统文化)
With the development of society, .
【答案】 ①It is an honour that I can deliver a speech ②It is necessary that you (should) know about ③It is known that well begun is half done ④it seems that we are losing a lot of traditions
①it作形式主语的常用句式:
It be+形容词(amazing,obvious,possible,strange,natural,important...)+that从句
It be+名词短语(a pity,a fact,an honour,no wonder...)+that从句
It be+过去分词(said,reported,announced,believed...)+that从句
It+不及物动词(seems,appears,happens...)+that从句
②在“It is necessary/important/surprising/strange+that从句”中,that从句的谓语常用“should+动词原形”形式,should可以省略。
[教材原句] There is evidence ①that urban racoons are more intelligent than their wild cousins,②as they frequently have to figure out difficult problems such as how to open rubbish bins and other containers ③which they would not find in the wild.
有证据显示,和野生浣熊相比,城市里的浣熊更聪明,因为它们时常要想办法解决难题,比如怎么打开垃圾桶以及其他它们在野外不会见到的容器。
分析:此句为主从复合句。句中There is evidence为主句,其中①为that引导的同位语从句,解释说明evidence;②为as引导的原因状语从句,③为which引导的定语从句,修饰先行词other containers。
[语境运用] 场景句式练习
①有证据表明,与那些有不健康饮食习惯的人相比,保持均衡饮食的人往往更健康,因为他们不缺乏对健康很重要的必需营养素。
There is evidence that individuals who maintain a balanced diet tend to be in better health compared to those who have unhealthy eating habits,as they don’t lack essential nutrients which are important to their health.
②有证据表明,经常参加社交活动的人,比如参加俱乐部或做志愿活动,通常会有更高的幸福感和满足感,因为他们与他人建立了有意义的联系,并获得了丰富他们生活的经历。
There is evidence that people who engage in social activities regularly,such as joining clubs or volunteering,often report higher levels of happiness and satisfaction,as they establish meaningful connections with others and gain experiences that enrich their lives.
Ⅰ.课文语法填空
Animals are reported 1. (frequent) to appear in cities,like London,San Francisco and Hong Kong.It seems as if our cities are being taken over by wild animals.
2. is generally believed that urban 3. (develop) and climate change are responsible for animals’ entering our cities.However,we must consider that it is we human beings that have moved into animals’ territory.
It is an obvious fact 4. our cities appeal to wild animals very much.For one thing,they are quite out of reach from many of their natural predators and are able to live more safely.For another,they can find food more easily from the leftovers 5. (throw) away by human beings.Some wild animals are so 6. (intelligence) that they can figure out very difficult problems.Some wild animals even have changed their living habits 7. (fit) in with their new homes.Besides,with more high-rise buildings 8. (show) up in cities,lots of birds get killed by crashing 9. the glass windows.Some even have to change their migratory routes due to the high buildings.
As many animals have got used to living in cities,we human beings ought to learn to appreciate our new 10. (neighbour).Only in this way can we live in peace with the animals.
【答案】 1.frequently 2.It 3.development 4.that 5.thrown 6.intelligent 7.to fit 8.showing 9.into 10.neighbours
Ⅱ.单句语法填空
1.(2024·新高考全国Ⅱ卷)The Carlow Autumn Walking Festival is a great opportunity for the beginner,experienced or (advance) walker to enjoy the challenges of Carlow’s mountain hikes or the peace of its woodland walks.
2.(2023·新高考全国Ⅰ卷)The experiment of he conducted showed that in some cases,the average of a large number of independent could be quite accurate.
(estimate)
3.Eventually your child will leave home to lead his own life,but the meantime he will always rely on your emotional support.
4.The museum, (consist) of four storeys,is the first comprehensive state museum in the history of our city.
5.This picture tells us a simple truth: (appreciate) words are the most powerful force on Earth!
6.I can’t imagine how my sister will react the news that she will be employed by the big firm in the urban district.
7.On behalf of my class,I will talk about how teenagers cope some difficulties in their new senior high school life.
8.After his (terrify) adventure,Mac felt relieved when he reached home safe and sound.
9.You should rid yourself the smoking habit for health’s sake.
【答案】 1.advanced 2.estimation;estimates 3.in 4.consisting 5.Appreciative 6.to 7.with 8.terrifying 9.of
假设你前几天在丛林远足过程中与其他徒步旅行者走散了三天,请你以“What an Adventure!”为题,用英语描述这次经历。
1.我和其他徒步旅行者已经走散三天了。(hiker)
It’s been three days since I got separated from the other hikers.
2.没有指南针,我在茂密的丛林中迷路了。由于没有前进的道路,我不得不冷静地应对各种情况。(advance;cope with)
Without a compass,I got lost in the thick jungle.With no roads to advance,I had to calmly cope with various situations.
3.暴露在荆棘(thorn)中,我的手受了重伤。(expose)
Exposed to the thorns,my hands were badly hurt.
4.更糟糕的是,蛇、猴子、昆虫和其他动物不时出现。他们把我吓得无法控制地发抖。(now and then;terrify)
Worse still,snakes,monkeys,insects and other animals appeared now and then.They terrified me into trembling uncontrollably.
5.为了摆脱寒冷和恐惧,我每天晚上把树枝搓(rub)在一起生火。(get rid of)
To get rid of the cold and fear,I made a fire every night by rubbing branches together.
6.我渴望找点吃的,但我必须非常小心,避免任何有毒的东西。(greedy)
I was greedy to find something to eat,but I had to be very careful to avoid anything poisonous.
7.当我找到一条可以顺着走的溪流时,我对找到出路很乐观!(optimistic)
When I found a stream which I could follow,I was optimistic about finding my way out!
8.毫无疑问,这将是我一生中最难忘的一次冒险!(there is no doubt that...)
There is no doubt that this will be the most unforgettable adventure in my life.
[句式升级]
1.将第4句用定语从句进行改写升级。
Worse still,snakes,monkeys,insects and other animals appeared now and then,who terrified me into trembling uncontrollably.
2.将第7句用“only+状语”置于句首进行改写升级。
Only when I found a stream which I could follow was I optimistic about finding my way out!
[连句成篇]
What an Adventure!
It’s been three days since I got separated from the other hikers.
Without a compass,I got lost in the thick jungle.With no roads to advance,I had to calmly cope with various situations.Exposed to the thorns,my hands were badly hurt.Worse still,snakes,monkeys,insects and other animals appeared now and then,who terrified me into trembling uncontrollably.To get rid of the cold and fear,I made a fire every night by rubbing branches together.I was greedy to find something to eat,but I had to be very careful to avoid anything poisonous.Only when I found a stream which I could follow was I optimistic about finding my way out!
There is no doubt that this will be the most unforgettable adventure in my life.
要求:在线训练的基础上,在段前、段中、段后增加关联句,使语境更完整,构成片段
训练。
①夏日的午后,阳光炽热而明媚,一群兴奋的孩子们聚集在游泳池周围,穿着五彩斑斓的泳衣,准备开始他们的游泳课程。Devi站在人群中,显得格外不起眼,她的眼神中充满了不安与恐惧。“我真的不会游泳!每个人都会嘲笑我的!”她心想,羞愧得无地自容。Devi把毛巾披在肩上缩成一团,尴尬得不敢看其他人的优秀表现。然后到Devi试跳了。Devi 环顾四周,发现她的教练在泳池对面,和那些像鱼儿跳入大海一样跳进水里的孩子们在一起。她惊讶地看着,感到耳朵发红。此时,一个小女孩走过,让她不要害怕,她的脸颊很快就泛起了尴尬的红晕。她尴尬地垂下了头。②看到Devi的犹豫,小女孩更加温柔地握住了她的手,给予她更多的鼓励和支持。在小女孩的陪伴下,Devi深吸一口气,闭上眼睛,任由自己被教练温柔地推入水中。那一刻,Devi感受到了一种她从未经历过的自由和快乐。她明白了,敢于尝试确实可以让自己变得更好。
③On a hot,sunny summer afternoon,a group of excited children gathered around the pool,dressed in colourful swimsuits,ready to begin their swimming lessons.Devi stood in the crowd,unremarkable,her eyes filled with anxiety and fear. “I really can’t swim!Everyone’s going to laugh at me!” she thought to herself,wanting to curl up and die.Devi huddled with a towel over her shoulders,too awkward to see others’ excellent performance.Then came the time for Devi to have a try.Scanning around,Devi spotted her instructor across the pool,together with the kids who jumped into the water like fish leaping into the ocean.She watched in amazement,feeling her ears going red.At the moment,a little girl passed by and asked her not to be scared,a flush of embarrassment soon creeping to her checks.She hung her head in embarrassment.④Seeing Devi’s hesitation,the little girl held her hand even more gently,offering her more encouragement and support.With the little girl by her side,Devi breathed deeply,closed her eyes,and allowed herself to be gently pushed into the water by her instructor.At that moment,Devi felt a sense of freedom and joy she had never experienced before.She understood that daring to try could indeed make her better.
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Unit 6 Survival
1.appreciate v.欣赏;赏识;领会;感谢
appreciation n.欣赏;感激;理解
appreciative adj.欣赏的;感谢的
[语境运用] 语境串词/完成句子
(1)①I truly the kind words of I received from my teacher.Her look filled me with warmth and motivation,
making me feel valued.(appreciate)
appreciated
appreciation
appreciative
(2)②我写这封信是为了真诚地感谢您指导我完成这个要求很高的数学竞赛。(应用文写作之感谢信)
I am writing to sincerely through the demanding math contest.
③我正在做作业,如果你能把音乐的音量调小一点,我将不胜感激。
I am doing my homework,and I you could turn the music down.
appreciate your guiding me
would appreciate it if
④这时,燕子妈妈在我的身边飞来飞去,好像在感谢我救了她的孩子。(读后续写之动作描写)
At this time,the swallow mother flew around me,as if me for saving her child.
in appreciation of
·appreciate (one’s) doing sth 感激(某人)做某事
I would appreciate it if...如果……我将不胜感激
·in appreciation of为感谢……
appreciate作“感谢,感激”讲时,其宾语不能是人,只能是物;且其后不能直接跟从句,需先接it,再接从句,有类似用法的动词还有like,hate,love等。
2.react v.(作出)反应;回应
reaction n.反应;回应
[语境运用] 完成句子
①只有当我们冷静应对紧急状况时,我们才能更好地解决问题。(应用文写作之倡议书)
Only when we emergencies calmly can we solve problems in a better way.
react to
②氙是一种惰性气体,这意味着它通常不会与其他元素产生化学反应。
Xenon is a noble gas,which means that it does not typically other elements.
③面对计划的突然改变,约翰先是惊讶,然后又反对这个主意。
Faced with the sudden change in the plan,John was first surprised and then
the idea.
react with
reacted against
④为了应对这一现象,一些人建议我们种更多的树。
the phenomenon,some people suggested that we should plant more trees.
In reaction to
·react to 对……作出反应
react with 同……起反应
react against反对;反抗
·in reaction to 作为对……的反应;以应对
3.expose v.使暴露(于险境);使接触;使体验;显露
exposed adj.无遮蔽的;暴露的
exposure n.暴露;揭露;接触;体验
[语境运用] 完成句子/一句多译
(1)①接触外国文化有益于我们学习当地语言。(应用文写作之建议信)
is beneficial for us to learn the local language.
②看到我们走近,她高兴地笑了,露出她漂亮的小牙齿。(读后续写之细节描写)
Seeing us approaching,she smiled joyfully, .
Being exposed/Exposure to a foreign culture
exposing her nice little teeth
(2)如果你在夏天长时间暴露在阳光下,你会被晒伤的。
③ ,you will get sunburnt.(现在分词短语作状语)
④ ,you will get sunburnt.(过去分词短语作状语)
Exposing yourself to the sunlight for a long time in summer
Exposed to the sunlight for a long time in summer
·expose sth to sb 向某人揭露某事
expose sb/sth as...揭穿某人/某物为……
expose sb/sth/oneself to...使某人/某物/自己暴露于/接触……
·be exposed to...暴露于/接触……;遭受到……
及物动词expose后若无宾语,则常常使用它的被动形式;在expose...to...以及be exposed to结构中,to为介词,其后要用名词、代词或动名词作宾语。
4.get rid of 摆脱,除去
[语境运用] 完成句子
①练习瑜伽是一种很好的方式,让你摆脱压力和烦恼,寻找内心平和。(话题写作之运动与健康)
Practising yoga is a good way for you to and find inner peace.
get rid of stress and worry
②小丑医生给小病人讲了一个有趣的故事,使他不再害怕打针。
The clown doctor told the little patient a funny story, of injections.
③她决定改掉坏习惯,过更健康的生活。
She made a decision to to live a healthier life.
ridding him of his fear
rid herself of bad habits
get rid of=be rid of 摆脱,除去
rid sb/sth of...使某人/某物摆脱/除去……
rid oneself of...使自己摆脱……
it作形式主语
[教材原句] However they adapt to our ways of urban living,it’s important that we get a better understanding of and even learn to appreciate our wild neighbours.
不论它们如何适应我们的城市生活方式,更好地理解甚至学会欣赏我们的野生邻居是非常重要的。
[语境运用] 完成句子
①我很荣幸能发表演讲,与大家分享我对京剧的看法。(应用文写作之演讲稿)
to share with you my opinions on Beijing Opera.
②听说你要去一个中国家庭做客,我非常高兴。了解中国的餐桌礼仪是有必要的。(应用文写作之建议信)
I’m more than delighted to learn that you are going to visit a Chinese family.
the table manners of China.
It is an honour that I can deliver a speech
It is necessary that you (should) know about
③我们都知道良好的开端是成功的一半。欢迎你尽快加入我们。(应用文写作之倡议书)
.
Welcome your participating in us as soon as possible.
④随着社会的发展,我们似乎正在失去很多传统。(话题写作之传统文化)
With the development of society,
.
It is known that well begun is half done
it seems that we are losing a lot of
traditions
①it作形式主语的常用句式:
It be+形容词(amazing,obvious,possible,strange,natural,important...)+that从句
It be+名词短语(a pity,a fact,an honour,no wonder...)+that从句
It be+过去分词(said,reported,announced,believed...)+that从句
It+不及物动词(seems,appears,happens...)+that从句
②在“It is necessary/important/surprising/strange+that从句”中,that从句的谓语常用“should+动词原形”形式,should可以省略。
长难句分析
有证据显示,和野生浣熊相比,城市里的浣熊更聪明,因为它们时常要想办法解决难题,比如怎么打开垃圾桶以及其他它们在野外不会见到的容器。
[教材原句] There is evidence ①that urban racoons are more intelligent than their wild cousins,②as they frequently have to figure out difficult problems such as how to open rubbish bins and other containers ③which they would not find in the wild.
分析:此句为主从复合句。句中There is evidence为主句,其中①为that引导的同位语从句,解释说明evidence;②为as引导的原因状语从句,③为which引导的定语从句,修饰先行词other containers。
[语境运用] 场景句式练习
①有证据表明,与那些有不健康饮食习惯的人相比,保持均衡饮食的人往往更健康,因为他们不缺乏对健康很重要的必需营养素。
There is evidence that individuals who maintain a balanced diet tend to be in better health compared to those who have unhealthy eating habits,as they don’t lack essential nutrients which are important to their health.
②有证据表明,经常参加社交活动的人,比如参加俱乐部或做志愿活动,通常会有更高的幸福感和满足感,因为他们与他人建立了有意义的联系,并获得了丰富他们生活的经历。
There is evidence that people who engage in social activities regularly,such as joining clubs or volunteering,often report higher levels of happiness and satisfaction,as they establish meaningful connections with others and gain experiences that enrich their lives.
单元能力·提升自测
Ⅰ.课文语法填空
Animals are reported 1. (frequent) to appear in cities,like London,San Francisco and Hong Kong.It seems as if our cities are being taken over by wild animals.2. is generally believed that urban 3. (develop) and climate change are responsible for animals’ entering our cities.However,we must consider that it is we human beings that have moved into animals’ territory.
frequently
It
development
It is an obvious fact 4. our cities appeal to wild animals very much.For one thing,they are quite out of reach from many of their natural predators and are able to live more safely.For another,they can find food more easily from the leftovers 5. (throw) away by human beings.
Some wild animals are so 6. (intelligence) that they can figure out very difficult problems.
that
thrown
intelligent
Some wild animals even have changed their living habits 7. (fit) in with their new homes.Besides,with more high-rise buildings 8. (show) up in cities,lots of birds get killed by crashing 9. the glass windows.Some even have to change their migratory routes due to the high buildings.
to fit
showing
into
As many animals have got used to living in cities,we human beings ought to learn to appreciate our new 10. (neighbour).Only in this way can we live in peace with the animals.
neighbours
Ⅱ.单句语法填空
1.(2024·新高考全国Ⅱ卷)The Carlow Autumn Walking Festival is a great opportunity for the beginner,experienced or (advance) walker to enjoy the challenges of Carlow’s mountain hikes or the peace of its woodland walks.
advanced
2.(2023·新高考全国Ⅰ卷)The experiment of he conducted showed that in some cases,the average of a large number of independent
could be quite accurate.(estimate)
3.Eventually your child will leave home to lead his own life,but the meantime he will always rely on your emotional support.
estimation
estimates
in
4.The museum, (consist) of four storeys,is the first comprehensive state museum in the history of our city.
5.This picture tells us a simple truth: (appreciate) words are the most powerful force on Earth!
consisting
Appreciative
6.I can’t imagine how my sister will react the news that she will be employed by the big firm in the urban district.
7.On behalf of my class,I will talk about how teenagers cope some difficulties in their new senior high school life.
to
with
8.After his (terrify) adventure,Mac felt relieved when he reached home safe and sound.
9.You should rid yourself the smoking habit for health’s sake.
terrifying
of
微写作
记叙文——安全常识与自我保护——人个历险
假设你前几天在丛林远足过程中与其他徒步旅行者走散了三天,请你以“What an Adventure!”为题,用英语描述这次经历。
1.我和其他徒步旅行者已经走散三天了。(hiker)
It’s been three days since I got separated from the other hikers.
2.没有指南针,我在茂密的丛林中迷路了。由于没有前进的道路,我不得不冷静地应对各种情况。(advance;cope with)
Without a compass,I got lost in the thick jungle.With no roads to advance,
I had to calmly cope with various situations.
3.暴露在荆棘(thorn)中,我的手受了重伤。(expose)
Exposed to the thorns,my hands were badly hurt.
4.更糟糕的是,蛇、猴子、昆虫和其他动物不时出现。他们把我吓得无法控制地发抖。(now and then;terrify)
Worse still,snakes,monkeys,insects and other animals appeared now and then.They terrified me into trembling uncontrollably.
5.为了摆脱寒冷和恐惧,我每天晚上把树枝搓(rub)在一起生火。(get rid of)
To get rid of the cold and fear,I made a fire every night by rubbing branches together.
6.我渴望找点吃的,但我必须非常小心,避免任何有毒的东西。(greedy)
I was greedy to find something to eat,but I had to be very careful to avoid anything poisonous.
7.当我找到一条可以顺着走的溪流时,我对找到出路很乐观!(optimistic)
When I found a stream which I could follow,I was optimistic about finding my way out!
8.毫无疑问,这将是我一生中最难忘的一次冒险!(there is no doubt that...)
There is no doubt that this will be the most unforgettable adventure in my life.
[句式升级]
1.将第4句用定语从句进行改写升级。
Worse still,snakes,monkeys,insects and other animals appeared now and then,who terrified me into trembling uncontrollably.
2.将第7句用“only+状语”置于句首进行改写升级。
Only when I found a stream which I could follow was I optimistic about finding my way out!
[连句成篇]
What an Adventure!
It’s been three days since I got separated from the other hikers.
Without a compass,I got lost in the thick jungle.With no roads to advance,I had to calmly cope with various situations.Exposed to the thorns,my hands were badly hurt.Worse still,snakes,monkeys,insects and other animals appeared now and then,who terrified me into trembling uncontrollably.
To get rid of the cold and fear,I made a fire every night by rubbing branches together.I was greedy to find something to eat,but I had to be very careful to avoid anything poisonous.Only when I found a stream which I could follow was I optimistic about finding my way out!
There is no doubt that this will be the most unforgettable adventure in my life.
读后续写微技能
面训练——“尴尬、羞愧”
要求:在线训练的基础上,在段前、段中、段后增加关联句,使语境更完整,构成片段训练。
①夏日的午后,阳光炽热而明媚,一群兴奋的孩子们聚集在游泳池周围,穿着五彩斑斓的泳衣,准备开始他们的游泳课程。Devi站在人群中,显得格外不起眼,她的眼神中充满了不安与恐惧。“我真的不会游泳!每个人都会嘲笑我的!”她心想,羞愧得无地自容。Devi把毛巾披在肩上缩成一团,尴尬得不敢看其他人的优秀表现。然后到Devi试跳了。
Devi 环顾四周,发现她的教练在泳池对面,和那些像鱼儿跳入大海一样跳进水里的孩子们在一起。她惊讶地看着,感到耳朵发红。此时,一个小女孩走过,让她不要害怕,她的脸颊很快就泛起了尴尬的红晕。她尴尬地垂下了头。②看到Devi的犹豫,小女孩更加温柔地握住了她的手,给予她更多的鼓励和支持。在小女孩的陪伴下,Devi深吸一口气,闭上眼睛,任由自己被教练温柔地推入水中。那一刻,Devi感受到了一种她从未经历过的自由和快乐。她明白了,敢于尝试确实可以让自己变得更好。
③On a hot,sunny summer afternoon,a group of excited children gathered around the pool,dressed in colourful swimsuits,ready to begin their swimming lessons.Devi stood in the crowd,unremarkable,her eyes filled with anxiety and fear. “I really can’t swim!Everyone’s going to laugh at me!” she thought to herself,wanting to curl up and die.Devi huddled with a towel over her shoulders,too awkward to see others’ excellent performance.Then came the time for Devi to have a try.
Scanning around,Devi spotted her instructor across the pool,together with the kids who jumped into the water like fish leaping into the ocean.She watched in amazement,feeling her ears going red.At the moment,a little girl passed by and asked her not to be scared,a flush of embarrassment soon creeping to her checks.She hung her head in embarrassment.
④Seeing Devi’s hesitation,the little girl held her hand even more gently,
offering her more encouragement and support.With the little girl by her side,Devi breathed deeply,closed her eyes,and allowed herself to be gently pushed into the water by her instructor.At that moment,Devi felt a sense of freedom and joy she had never experienced before.She understood that daring to try could indeed make her better.
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