2026届高考英语二轮复习：The person I respect应用文写作 课件（共16张）
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The person I respect
我尊敬的人
你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：
1. 人物简介；
2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。
There are many respectable people around us.
Who can we write about
Our family members, relatives, teachers, friends, neighbors, contacts, some living celebrities and so on. Yuan Longping is not a good choice.
改进点1：开头
直白：The person I respect most is my Chinese teacher.
①先概括，再具体：
我们周围有很多受人尊敬的人。我最尊敬的人是我的姐姐。
There are many respectable people around us. The person I respect most is my sister.
②先写他人，再写自己：
许多青少年将名人视为他们的英雄。然而，我最尊敬的人是我的哥哥。
Many teenagers regard celebrities as their heroes. However, the person I respect most is my brother.
改进点2：品质描写
直接描写：Li Hua is one of my classmates who is always positive and hard-working.
事实说明：Li Hua, one of my classmates, faces setbacks and frustrations positively. Under no circumstances does he quit working hard. He spends most of his time working on his studies. Rarely is he seen without a book or a pen.
品质描写(欣赏)
① 每当我向她提问，她总是会给我详细解释。
Whenever I ask her questions, she always explains to me patiently and does her utmost to remove my doubts.
品质描写(欣赏)
② 即便她当天没有课，她也会在办公室里忙着备课，而那里是我们随时可以咨询她的地方。
Even if she doesn’t have any class, she is occupied in preparing her lessons in the office, where we can turn to her anytime.
品质描写(欣赏)
③ 她关心每一位学生，无论我们在这门学科上表现好坏，她都一视同仁地对待我们。当发现有学生情绪低落或心烦意乱时，她总是亲自前去给予鼓励和安慰。
She cares about every student and treats us equally whether we are good or poor at the subject. When finding some student feeling down or upset, she always offers to encourage and comfort him or her in person.
改进点3：结尾
平淡乏味：This is my English teacher. Do you like her
总结+强调：
①这就是我的英语老师，一个热情和有爱心值得我尊重的人。
Such/This is my English teacher, an enthusiastic and loving person who deserves my respect.
②我很幸运能有这样善良和有耐心的人作我的妈妈，我最钦佩她。
I feel blessed to have such a kind and patient person as my mom, whom I admire most.
③虽然我的父亲很普通，但他在我眼中是英雄，值得我永远钦佩。
Ordinary as my father is, he is a hero in my eyes who deserves my admiration forever.
改进点4：多使用高级句式
①定语从句
我尊敬的人是我的英语老师。
The person who I respect is my English teacher.
②强调句型
是他的严格教会我认真对待学习。
His strictness teaches me to to take my studies seriously.
→
多亏她的帮助，我才在英语上取得如此大的进步。
It is his strictness that teaches me to take my studies seriously.
It is thanks to her help that I have made such rapid progress in English.
③名词性从句
给我印象最深的是他友好的微笑。
What impresses me most is his friendly smile.
我尊重他的原因之一是他总是耐心地向我们解释困难的问题。
One of the reasons why I respect him is that he always explains difficult problems to us patiently.
④倒装结构
在我的一生中，我从未见过像他这样热爱化学的人。
Never in my life have I seen a person who loves chemistry like him.
Version 1
There are many respectable people around us.However, the person I respect most is my father.
In my mind, the middle-aged gentleman is always a respected medical worker. He works very hard as a doctor. During the COVID-19 epidemic, he worked all day and all night to save the lives of patients. In daily life, he is always extremely strict, but he is a warm-hearted man. In the past 20 years, he has been keeping donating blood annually to those strangers in need.
Dad has taught me a lot. Maybe we can’t reach an agreement now and then, but he always loves me in his deep heart and asks me to be kind and warm-hearted.Without my father, I wouldn’t be what I am now, so I respect him most.
Version 2
For me, the most respectable person round me is my best friend, Li Hua, a 17-year-old teenager currently studying in my class, who is crazy about reading, learning and helping other people.
There is no doubt that there are many things that I can learn from him. First and foremost, needless to say, he is good at English, for he has lived in Detroit for half a year as an exchange student.
Additionally, no one can deny he gets along well with all our classmates, enjoy a harmonious interpersonal relationship and is always ready to help others. Last but certainly not least, he has a lot of life experience, considering that he has been serving as vice monitor for many years.
Hopefully, I could become an outstanding person like Li Hua. I have the confidence that, with such an excellent friend around me, I will become better and better.
The person I respect
我尊敬的人
你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：
1. 人物简介；
2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。
There are many respectable people around us.
Who can we write about
Our family members, relatives, teachers, friends, neighbors, contacts, some living celebrities and so on. Yuan Longping is not a good choice.
改进点1：开头
直白：The person I respect most is my Chinese teacher.
①先概括，再具体：
我们周围有很多受人尊敬的人。我最尊敬的人是我的姐姐。
There are many respectable people around us. The person I respect most is my sister.
②先写他人，再写自己：
许多青少年将名人视为他们的英雄。然而，我最尊敬的人是我的哥哥。
Many teenagers regard celebrities as their heroes. However, the person I respect most is my brother.
改进点2：品质描写
直接描写：Li Hua is one of my classmates who is always positive and hard-working.
事实说明：Li Hua, one of my classmates, faces setbacks and frustrations positively. Under no circumstances does he quit working hard. He spends most of his time working on his studies. Rarely is he seen without a book or a pen.
品质描写(欣赏)
① 每当我向她提问，她总是会给我详细解释。
Whenever I ask her questions, she always explains to me patiently and does her utmost to remove my doubts.
品质描写(欣赏)
② 即便她当天没有课，她也会在办公室里忙着备课，而那里是我们随时可以咨询她的地方。
Even if she doesn’t have any class, she is occupied in preparing her lessons in the office, where we can turn to her anytime.
品质描写(欣赏)
③ 她关心每一位学生，无论我们在这门学科上表现好坏，她都一视同仁地对待我们。当发现有学生情绪低落或心烦意乱时，她总是亲自前去给予鼓励和安慰。
She cares about every student and treats us equally whether we are good or poor at the subject. When finding some student feeling down or upset, she always offers to encourage and comfort him or her in person.
改进点3：结尾
平淡乏味：This is my English teacher. Do you like her
总结+强调：
①这就是我的英语老师，一个热情和有爱心值得我尊重的人。
Such/This is my English teacher, an enthusiastic and loving person who deserves my respect.
②我很幸运能有这样善良和有耐心的人作我的妈妈，我最钦佩她。
I feel blessed to have such a kind and patient person as my mom, whom I admire most.
③虽然我的父亲很普通，但他在我眼中是英雄，值得我永远钦佩。
Ordinary as my father is, he is a hero in my eyes who deserves my admiration forever.
改进点4：多使用高级句式
①定语从句
我尊敬的人是我的英语老师。
The person who I respect is my English teacher.
②强调句型
是他的严格教会我认真对待学习。
His strictness teaches me to to take my studies seriously.
→
多亏她的帮助，我才在英语上取得如此大的进步。
It is his strictness that teaches me to take my studies seriously.
It is thanks to her help that I have made such rapid progress in English.
③名词性从句
给我印象最深的是他友好的微笑。
What impresses me most is his friendly smile.
我尊重他的原因之一是他总是耐心地向我们解释困难的问题。
One of the reasons why I respect him is that he always explains difficult problems to us patiently.
④倒装结构
在我的一生中，我从未见过像他这样热爱化学的人。
Never in my life have I seen a person who loves chemistry like him.
Version 1
There are many respectable people around us.However, the person I respect most is my father.
In my mind, the middle-aged gentleman is always a respected medical worker. He works very hard as a doctor. During the COVID-19 epidemic, he worked all day and all night to save the lives of patients. In daily life, he is always extremely strict, but he is a warm-hearted man. In the past 20 years, he has been keeping donating blood annually to those strangers in need.
Dad has taught me a lot. Maybe we can’t reach an agreement now and then, but he always loves me in his deep heart and asks me to be kind and warm-hearted.Without my father, I wouldn’t be what I am now, so I respect him most.
Version 2
For me, the most respectable person round me is my best friend, Li Hua, a 17-year-old teenager currently studying in my class, who is crazy about reading, learning and helping other people.
There is no doubt that there are many things that I can learn from him. First and foremost, needless to say, he is good at English, for he has lived in Detroit for half a year as an exchange student.
Additionally, no one can deny he gets along well with all our classmates, enjoy a harmonious interpersonal relationship and is always ready to help others. Last but certainly not least, he has a lot of life experience, considering that he has been serving as vice monitor for many years.
Hopefully, I could become an outstanding person like Li Hua. I have the confidence that, with such an excellent friend around me, I will become better and better.