2026届高考英语二轮复习：作文 课件(共37张PPT)
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(共37张PPT)
How to beautify your sentences
Writing
学习目标任务
掌握作文中使用高级词汇；
掌握作文中使用高级语法句式；
背诵并熟练掌握6种左右高级语法句式；
“四步写作模式”
词汇、短语
变换句式 禁忌自己造句 用熟悉的句型和词汇
连接词
通读全文，检查单词拼写，大小写，表达准确，要点全否，标点，字数，抄写清楚
第一步：Brainstorming（头脑风暴)
第二步：Sentences Making（造句)
第三步：Sentences Combining（句子合并）
第四步：Drafting and writing down
the final version(写草稿，誊写)
一、如何使用高级词汇
1．词的升格。
1.We all have the same chance.
2.He didn’t listen to what I said in class.
We all possess the same opportunity.
He turned a deaf ear to what I said in class.
valuable ___________ useful _______________ helpful _____________
wonderful__________ interesting ___________ important __________
different___________ difficult______________ visit________________
decide_____________ look_________________ plan________________
interest____________ thank________________ talk________________
help_________________
Step 1: 完成下列词汇信息
1. 写出下列词汇的名词
value
use
help
wonder
difference
decision
interest
help
interest
difficulty
look
thanks
importance
visit
plan
talk
2．表达新颖、寻求亮点。
It is more and more difficult to find jobs
in China nowadays.
Developing a good habit
is very important.
increasingly difficult
of great/vital importance
选词时适当选用别人使用较少的词，可以使自己
与众不同，从而取得出奇制胜的效果。
3．短语替词、展示实力。
(1)I have __________________ to study English better this term.(同义词decided)
(2)I ______________ how to enlarge my vocabulary. (同义词don't know)
(3)We will _____ the matter __________________ (同义词consider)
(4) He ___________ music so much that he devotes much time to it.(同义词likes）
made up my mind
have no idea
take into account
/consideration
如果能用短语代替单词，一方面会使文章生动，
另 一方面则会展示你的实力，这会使阅卷老师对
你刮目相看，从而提高文章的档次。
is fond of
think of想起，想到_____________ be + adj …怎样_________________
should 应该，应当______________ look at 看…____________________
visit 参观…______________ help sb to do 帮助某人做…_____________
decide to do决定做…____________ plan to do计划去做…____________
understand理解, 了解________________________________
Step 1: 完成下列词汇信息
2. 写出下列对应英语短语
occur to
be supposed to do
might as well do
pay a visit to
make a decision to do
have a better understanding of
be + of great + 名词
have a look at
give sb some help to do
make a plan to do
在写作中，我们运用并列连词合并句子是最常用的手段。常用的并列连词有and， but， or， nor， so， yet， for， as well as， both…and，not…but， not only…but (also)， either…or， neither…nor，(and) then， since等。
4. 使用并列连词
【课堂练习】用并列连词合并每一组句子。
John wanted to settle down. His wife also wanted to settle down.
2. He got a job as a manager in New York City. He was looking for a house to live in.
John, as well as his wife, wanted to
settle down.
He got a job as a manager in New York City
and he was looking for a house to live in.
Group work
3. He found a house not far from his office. The house was not far from his children’s school.
He found a house neither far from his office nor far from his children’s school.
4. The house was not big. The house had a beautiful garden.
The house was not big, but had a beautiful garden.
5. His wife liked their new home. His children also like their new home very much.
Not only his wife but also his children liked their new home very much.
5．巧用习语、引人入胜。
(1)He promised to show us around the city，but soon he ate his words.
(2)Many families used to struggle to make ends meet.
(3)He has been a laughing stock of the class.
语言是文化的载体，习语又是语言的精华。恰当
地使用它，会给文章增色，加强文章的感染力，
从而引人入胜。
收回前言
使收支相抵
笑柄
6．引用谚语。
和汉语一样，英语中也有大量谚语。
若能在写作中恰当运用，会给文章增色不少。
(1)Nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it.
(2)Where there is a will, there is a way.
(3)He who laughs last laughs best.
(4)It is no use crying over spilt milk.
(5)Practice makes perfect.
(6) Every coin has two sides.
【英语写作中常见的高级词汇】
1．第一 firstly
2．第二secondly
3．因此so
4．参加join in
5．选择choice
6. 应该should
7. all kinds of
primarily;initially;first and foremost
plus；additionally；moreover
participate in；take an active part in
alternative
be supposed to；had better do；
may/might as well do sth.
a wide range of; a great divesity of;
a variety of
consequently；thus；therefore
Ⅱ.用正确的固定短语替换画线部分(不得改变句意) 1．The club has twenty members.
2．The dog sensed danger and ran away.
3．He said he would help me if necessary.
4．Surprisingly,the little girl knows so many things.
5．The man is jobless and he feels upset.
6．When I saw the horse,I began to cheer up.
is made up of/ consists of
was aware of
give me a hand/come to my aid
To our surprise
out of work/out of a job
caught sight of
二、句的升格。
1．为了达到简洁的目的，我们常常用短语来代替句子。这其中包括：
(1)不定式短语
You are so kind that you help me.
→It’s so kind of you to help me.
(2)过去分词短语
The teacher walked out of the lab and some students followed him.
→The teacher walked out of the lab,followed by some students.
(3)现在分词和动名词短语
If you stand here, you can see it clearly.
→Standing here, you can see it clearly.
(4)with复合结构
New Year is coming.We are so excited.
→With New Year coming,we are so excited.
→As New Year is coming,we are so excited.
(5) 独立主格结构
If the weather permits,I’ll come tomorrow.
→Weather permitting,I’ll come tomorrow.
3．选择别人少用的句式或结构将会使你的文章“不同凡响”。
(1)倒装句
They are so grateful to their partners that they don’t know what to do.
→So grateful are they to their partners that they don’t know what to do.
(2)强调句
What he said at the meeting surprised everybody.
→It was what he said at the meeting that surprised everybody.
I do hope you can come.
1. I think of a good idea.
A good idea _________ _________ me all of a sudden.
2. I recalled that someone had broken into my house.
________ _________ _________ _________ __________ someone had broken into my house.
3. Your advice is helpful.
Your advice _________ _______ _________ __________ for me at present.
4. It is dangerous to go out at night.
It _______ _________ _______ _______ for girl to go out at night especially without your classmates.
Step 1: 完成下列词汇信息
3. 用短语改写下列句子
occurs to
It occurred to me that
is of great help
is of great danger
5. We should protect the earth.
We _________ __________ _________ ____________ the earth from now on in the future.
6. We should listen to some English songs.
We ___________ __________ ___________ ___________ to some English songs after class every day.
7.She looked at his homework.
She ___________ __________ ___________ __________ his homework in surprise in front of the boy.
Step 1: 完成下列词汇信息
3. 用短语改写下列句子
might as well protect
are supposed to listen
make a look at
8.We plan to visit the nursing home.
We plan to __________ __________ ____________ ____________ the nursing home next Sunday.
We ______ _____ ____ _______ ______ the nursing home next Sunday.
9.Mr Liu helped us to learn English.
Mr Liu ____ _____ _____ _____ ____ _____ English in his spare time.
10. You will learn more about the Chinese culture.
You will ______ ______ ______ _______ _______ the Chinese culture during the great event with us.
Step 1: 完成下列词汇信息
3. 用短语改写下列句子
pay a visit to
make a plan to visit
gave me some help to learn
have a better understanding of
4．为了使句子表达生动，可使用感叹句和反问句
We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.
→__________we were to see crops and vegetables growing well! （感叹句）
I think it’s so interesting.
→Don’t you think it is interesting （反问句）
How glad
5.我们也可以使用比喻、拟人等修辞手法。修辞手法能给读者留下较深刻的印象，具有强大的感染力。
(1)To finish the work ahead of time，they have been as busy as a bee recently.
(2)August 8th,2008 saw Beijing holding the opening ceremony of the 29th Olympic Games.
另外，句式也要精心选择。如谈到环境保护时，
We must take measures to protect our
environment 远远不如Measures must be taken
to protect our environment.表达有力。
【体验写作】
Ⅰ.用正确的语法结构来替换下列画线的句子(注意不得改变句意)
1. When you are trapped in the fire, keep calm.
2. Because he has so many things to do, he
feels stressful.
3. As he has been sentenced to 15 years in
prison, Jim is in a hopeless state.
4. When he saw his mother, the boy ran up
to her.
5. As it has hosted the 29th Olympics success-
fully, Beijing becomes a hit.
(When )trapped in the fire
With/Having so many things to do
(Having been)Sentenced to 15years in prison
Seeing his mother
Having hosted
1.如果他听了我的话，他就不会失去他的工作。(follow)
________________________, he wouldn’t have lost
his job.
2. 随着考试的到来，学生们忙着他们的学业。(approach)
With ___________________, the students are busy
with their studies.
3.房价将要下跌的消息使得很多人以更低的价格出售了
他们的房子。(fall)
The news ______________________ has caused
many people to sell their houses at lower price.
4. 受到老师的表扬，他又恢复了自信。(praise)
________________________________,he regained
confidence.
5.任何别的地方你不可能看到像武汉一样多的桥(nowhere)
________________________so many grand bridges
as in Wuhan.
If he had followed my advice
the exam approaching
that house prices will fall
Having been praised by the teacher
Nowhere else can you see
修改下面2段话，使其简洁、连贯、紧凑。
1.The Chinese women’s football team beat the
US team. He heard the news. He was very
happy. He couldn’t go to sleep.
2. Chaplin was a famous director. He directed
a number of films. Most of them were silent.
They were popular with people of all ages.
Hearing the news that the Chinese women’s
team beat the US team, he was too happy to
go to sleep.
Chaplin, who was a famous director, directed
a number of films, most of which were silent
and popular with people of all ages.
1. 假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部（photography club）将举办国际中学摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信。请他提供作品。信的内容包括：
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Step 1: 完成下列词汇信息
练习：为下列作文思考开头和结尾，并努力使用上列短语。
Hope this letter finds you well. I’m more than delighted to tell you that our school makes a plan to hold a Photography Show in our school photography club. In this letter, I’m writing to invite you to take part in it.
I do hope that you will have a better understanding of Chinese life and culture. I’m looking forward to your reply.
2. 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim 在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣，并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物。请你给Jim回信，内容包括：
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Step 1: 完成下列词汇信息
练习：为下列作文思考开头和结尾，并努力使用上列短语。
Hope this letter finds you well. I’m more than delighted to hear that you’re interested in Chinese history. In this letter, I’m writing to share something with you.
I do hope that you will have a better understanding of Chinese culture. I’m looking forward to your reply.
1. 表语从句：be who 是...的人（对句主语或宾语处理）
Lily is who loves Chinese at school. 李莉是在学校喜欢英语的人。
润色：你能更了解中国画。
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
2. 表语从句：be what是...的物/事（对句主语或宾语处理）
Chinese is what Lily loves all the time. 英语是李莉一直喜欢的东西。
润色：你能更了解中国画。
__________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________
Step 2: 改造下列句子成为高级句式 (Lily loves English.)
You are who will have a better understanding of Chinese paintings after the exhibition.
Chinese paintings are what you will have a better understanding of during the event.
3. 强调句型：it is + 强调部分 + that... （对句主语、宾语或状语）
1. 在学校，李莉从心底喜欢汉语。（强调主语部分）
It is Lily that loves English at school from the bottom of her heart.
2.在 学校，李莉从心底喜欢汉语。（强调宾语部分）
It is Chinese that Lily loves at school from the bottom of her heart.
3.在学校，李莉从心底喜欢汉语。（强调状语部分）
It is from the bottom of her heart that Lily loves Chinese at school. 润色：你能更了解中国画。
__________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________
Step 2: 改造下列句子成为高级句式 (Lily loves English.)
It is you that will have a better understanding of Chinese paintings after the exhibition.
It is Chinese paintings that you will have a better understanding of after the exhibition.
4. 强调句型：do, does, did （对句谓语动词部分强调）
在学校，李莉从心底确实喜欢汉语。（强调谓语动词）
At school, Lily does love Chinese at school from the bottom of her heart.
润色：你能更了解中国画。
__________________________________________________________
5. 宾语从句 + 非谓语动词（do whatever sb can to do sth 做任何能做的事情来做...）
李莉以后将会做她能做的一切事来从心底喜欢汉语。（谓语动词部分开始）
Lily will do whatever she can to love Chinese from the bottom of her heart.
润色：你能更了解中国画。
Step 2: 改造下列句子成为高级句式 (Lily loves English.)
You do have a better understanding of Chinese paintings.
You will do whatever you can to have a better understanding of Chinese paintings.
6. 形式宾补：think+it+adj+for sb to do sth 认为对...来说，做…，会…）
我认为对李莉来说空余时间喜欢汉语很重要。
I think it important for Lily to love Chinese in her spare time.
润色：你能更了解中国画。
__________________________________________________________
7. 主语从句 + 表语从句：what is the most important is that... (最重要的事就是…)
最重要的事就是李莉一直在空余时间喜欢汉语。
What is the most important is that Lily loves Chinese all the time.
What really counts is that Lily loves Chinese all the time.
润色：你能更了解中国画。
__________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________
Step 2: 改造下列句子成为高级句式 (Lily loves English.)
I think it of great value for you to have a better understanding …
What really counts is that you will have a better understanding …
8. 附加：Only + 状语部分 + 一般问句语序（倒装句）
只有这样李莉才会从内心喜欢汉语。
Only in this way will Lily love Chinese in her heart.
润色：你能更了解中国画。
_________________________________________________________
Step 2: 改造下列句子成为高级句式 (Lily loves English.)
Only in this way will you have a better understanding of…
9. 附加：状语从句 & 非谓语（省略状语从句中的主语，处理非谓语）
A)当她在教师空余时间帮助下，李莉从内心一直喜欢汉语。
When she is helped by the teacher in the spare time, Lily loves Chinese deeply in her heart.
When helped by the teacher in the spare time, Lily loves Chinese deeply in her heart.
B)当她有空余时间的时候，李莉从内心喜欢汉语。
When she has spare time, Lily loves Chinese deeply in her heart.
When having spare time, Lily loves Chinese deeply in her heart.
润色：你能更了解中国画。
__________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________
Step 2: 改造下列句子成为高级句式 (Lily loves English.)
After you take part in it, you will have a better understanding of…
After taking part in it, you will have a better understanding of…
10. 附加：定语从句 & 非谓语（省略状语从句中的主语，处理非谓语）
A)李莉喜欢汉语。李莉要去中国。（who代人构建定语从句）
Lily, who will go to China soon, loves Chinese all the time.
Lily, to go to China soon, loves Chinese all the time.
B)李莉喜欢汉语。李莉有她的梦想。（who代人构建定语从句）
Lily, who has her big dream, loves Chinese deeply in her heart.
Lily, having her big dream, loves Chinese deeply in her heart.
C)李莉喜欢汉语。汉语在世界上广泛被使用。（which代物建定语从句）
Lily loves Chinese deeply in her heart, which is widely used in the world.
In her heart, Lily loves Chinese deeply widely used in the world.
润色：你能更了解中国画。
___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________
Step 2: 改造下列句子成为高级句式 (Lily loves English.)
You, who takes part in it, will have a better understanding of…
You, taking part in it, will have a better understanding of…
I’m Li Hua, the chairman of our broadcast station. I’m more than delighted to tell you that the station has an English program, Talk and Talk. In this letter, I’m writing to ask you to take an interview next Monday.
The program was founded in 2002 by some English teachers in our school. The purpose is to arouse our interest in English. The interview begins at 5:00 pm next Monday on May 5 at the Room 202 of the first teaching building and it lasts 25 munities. You come from the USA and I think you can talk about American culture for the students. I believe students will open their eyes after the program.
If having questions, please call me at 1243221. I will appreciate it if you can do me a favour. I’m looking forward to your coming.
Step 3 用高级词汇和高级句式改造作文
The program was founded in 2002 by some English teachers in our school. The purpose is to arouse our interest in English. The interview begins at 5:00 pm next Monday on May 5 at the Room 202 of the first teaching building and it lasts 25 munities. You come from the USA and I think you can talk about American culture for the students. I believe students will open their eyes after the program.
Step 3 用高级词汇和高级句式改造作文
Founded in 2002 by some English teachers in our school, the program is to arouse our interest in English. The interview begins at 5:00 pm next Monday on May 5 at the Room 202 of the first teaching building, lasting 25 munities. I know that you come from the USA. Therefore, American culture is what you can talk about for the students so that they can open their eyes after the program.
How to beautify your sentences
Writing
学习目标任务
掌握作文中使用高级词汇；
掌握作文中使用高级语法句式；
背诵并熟练掌握6种左右高级语法句式；
“四步写作模式”
词汇、短语
变换句式 禁忌自己造句 用熟悉的句型和词汇
连接词
通读全文，检查单词拼写，大小写，表达准确，要点全否，标点，字数，抄写清楚
第一步：Brainstorming（头脑风暴)
第二步：Sentences Making（造句)
第三步：Sentences Combining（句子合并）
第四步：Drafting and writing down
the final version(写草稿，誊写)
一、如何使用高级词汇
1．词的升格。
1.We all have the same chance.
2.He didn’t listen to what I said in class.
We all possess the same opportunity.
He turned a deaf ear to what I said in class.
valuable ___________ useful _______________ helpful _____________
wonderful__________ interesting ___________ important __________
different___________ difficult______________ visit________________
decide_____________ look_________________ plan________________
interest____________ thank________________ talk________________
help_________________
Step 1: 完成下列词汇信息
1. 写出下列词汇的名词
value
use
help
wonder
difference
decision
interest
help
interest
difficulty
look
thanks
importance
visit
plan
talk
2．表达新颖、寻求亮点。
It is more and more difficult to find jobs
in China nowadays.
Developing a good habit
is very important.
increasingly difficult
of great/vital importance
选词时适当选用别人使用较少的词，可以使自己
与众不同，从而取得出奇制胜的效果。
3．短语替词、展示实力。
(1)I have __________________ to study English better this term.(同义词decided)
(2)I ______________ how to enlarge my vocabulary. (同义词don't know)
(3)We will _____ the matter __________________ (同义词consider)
(4) He ___________ music so much that he devotes much time to it.(同义词likes）
made up my mind
have no idea
take into account
/consideration
如果能用短语代替单词，一方面会使文章生动，
另 一方面则会展示你的实力，这会使阅卷老师对
你刮目相看，从而提高文章的档次。
is fond of
think of想起，想到_____________ be + adj …怎样_________________
should 应该，应当______________ look at 看…____________________
visit 参观…______________ help sb to do 帮助某人做…_____________
decide to do决定做…____________ plan to do计划去做…____________
understand理解, 了解________________________________
Step 1: 完成下列词汇信息
2. 写出下列对应英语短语
occur to
be supposed to do
might as well do
pay a visit to
make a decision to do
have a better understanding of
be + of great + 名词
have a look at
give sb some help to do
make a plan to do
在写作中，我们运用并列连词合并句子是最常用的手段。常用的并列连词有and， but， or， nor， so， yet， for， as well as， both…and，not…but， not only…but (also)， either…or， neither…nor，(and) then， since等。
4. 使用并列连词
【课堂练习】用并列连词合并每一组句子。
John wanted to settle down. His wife also wanted to settle down.
2. He got a job as a manager in New York City. He was looking for a house to live in.
John, as well as his wife, wanted to
settle down.
He got a job as a manager in New York City
and he was looking for a house to live in.
Group work
3. He found a house not far from his office. The house was not far from his children’s school.
He found a house neither far from his office nor far from his children’s school.
4. The house was not big. The house had a beautiful garden.
The house was not big, but had a beautiful garden.
5. His wife liked their new home. His children also like their new home very much.
Not only his wife but also his children liked their new home very much.
5．巧用习语、引人入胜。
(1)He promised to show us around the city，but soon he ate his words.
(2)Many families used to struggle to make ends meet.
(3)He has been a laughing stock of the class.
语言是文化的载体，习语又是语言的精华。恰当
地使用它，会给文章增色，加强文章的感染力，
从而引人入胜。
收回前言
使收支相抵
笑柄
6．引用谚语。
和汉语一样，英语中也有大量谚语。
若能在写作中恰当运用，会给文章增色不少。
(1)Nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it.
(2)Where there is a will, there is a way.
(3)He who laughs last laughs best.
(4)It is no use crying over spilt milk.
(5)Practice makes perfect.
(6) Every coin has two sides.
【英语写作中常见的高级词汇】
1．第一 firstly
2．第二secondly
3．因此so
4．参加join in
5．选择choice
6. 应该should
7. all kinds of
primarily;initially;first and foremost
plus；additionally；moreover
participate in；take an active part in
alternative
be supposed to；had better do；
may/might as well do sth.
a wide range of; a great divesity of;
a variety of
consequently；thus；therefore
Ⅱ.用正确的固定短语替换画线部分(不得改变句意) 1．The club has twenty members.
2．The dog sensed danger and ran away.
3．He said he would help me if necessary.
4．Surprisingly,the little girl knows so many things.
5．The man is jobless and he feels upset.
6．When I saw the horse,I began to cheer up.
is made up of/ consists of
was aware of
give me a hand/come to my aid
To our surprise
out of work/out of a job
caught sight of
二、句的升格。
1．为了达到简洁的目的，我们常常用短语来代替句子。这其中包括：
(1)不定式短语
You are so kind that you help me.
→It’s so kind of you to help me.
(2)过去分词短语
The teacher walked out of the lab and some students followed him.
→The teacher walked out of the lab,followed by some students.
(3)现在分词和动名词短语
If you stand here, you can see it clearly.
→Standing here, you can see it clearly.
(4)with复合结构
New Year is coming.We are so excited.
→With New Year coming,we are so excited.
→As New Year is coming,we are so excited.
(5) 独立主格结构
If the weather permits,I’ll come tomorrow.
→Weather permitting,I’ll come tomorrow.
3．选择别人少用的句式或结构将会使你的文章“不同凡响”。
(1)倒装句
They are so grateful to their partners that they don’t know what to do.
→So grateful are they to their partners that they don’t know what to do.
(2)强调句
What he said at the meeting surprised everybody.
→It was what he said at the meeting that surprised everybody.
I do hope you can come.
1. I think of a good idea.
A good idea _________ _________ me all of a sudden.
2. I recalled that someone had broken into my house.
________ _________ _________ _________ __________ someone had broken into my house.
3. Your advice is helpful.
Your advice _________ _______ _________ __________ for me at present.
4. It is dangerous to go out at night.
It _______ _________ _______ _______ for girl to go out at night especially without your classmates.
Step 1: 完成下列词汇信息
3. 用短语改写下列句子
occurs to
It occurred to me that
is of great help
is of great danger
5. We should protect the earth.
We _________ __________ _________ ____________ the earth from now on in the future.
6. We should listen to some English songs.
We ___________ __________ ___________ ___________ to some English songs after class every day.
7.She looked at his homework.
She ___________ __________ ___________ __________ his homework in surprise in front of the boy.
Step 1: 完成下列词汇信息
3. 用短语改写下列句子
might as well protect
are supposed to listen
make a look at
8.We plan to visit the nursing home.
We plan to __________ __________ ____________ ____________ the nursing home next Sunday.
We ______ _____ ____ _______ ______ the nursing home next Sunday.
9.Mr Liu helped us to learn English.
Mr Liu ____ _____ _____ _____ ____ _____ English in his spare time.
10. You will learn more about the Chinese culture.
You will ______ ______ ______ _______ _______ the Chinese culture during the great event with us.
Step 1: 完成下列词汇信息
3. 用短语改写下列句子
pay a visit to
make a plan to visit
gave me some help to learn
have a better understanding of
4．为了使句子表达生动，可使用感叹句和反问句
We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.
→__________we were to see crops and vegetables growing well! （感叹句）
I think it’s so interesting.
→Don’t you think it is interesting （反问句）
How glad
5.我们也可以使用比喻、拟人等修辞手法。修辞手法能给读者留下较深刻的印象，具有强大的感染力。
(1)To finish the work ahead of time，they have been as busy as a bee recently.
(2)August 8th,2008 saw Beijing holding the opening ceremony of the 29th Olympic Games.
另外，句式也要精心选择。如谈到环境保护时，
We must take measures to protect our
environment 远远不如Measures must be taken
to protect our environment.表达有力。
【体验写作】
Ⅰ.用正确的语法结构来替换下列画线的句子(注意不得改变句意)
1. When you are trapped in the fire, keep calm.
2. Because he has so many things to do, he
feels stressful.
3. As he has been sentenced to 15 years in
prison, Jim is in a hopeless state.
4. When he saw his mother, the boy ran up
to her.
5. As it has hosted the 29th Olympics success-
fully, Beijing becomes a hit.
(When )trapped in the fire
With/Having so many things to do
(Having been)Sentenced to 15years in prison
Seeing his mother
Having hosted
1.如果他听了我的话，他就不会失去他的工作。(follow)
________________________, he wouldn’t have lost
his job.
2. 随着考试的到来，学生们忙着他们的学业。(approach)
With ___________________, the students are busy
with their studies.
3.房价将要下跌的消息使得很多人以更低的价格出售了
他们的房子。(fall)
The news ______________________ has caused
many people to sell their houses at lower price.
4. 受到老师的表扬，他又恢复了自信。(praise)
________________________________,he regained
confidence.
5.任何别的地方你不可能看到像武汉一样多的桥(nowhere)
________________________so many grand bridges
as in Wuhan.
If he had followed my advice
the exam approaching
that house prices will fall
Having been praised by the teacher
Nowhere else can you see
修改下面2段话，使其简洁、连贯、紧凑。
1.The Chinese women’s football team beat the
US team. He heard the news. He was very
happy. He couldn’t go to sleep.
2. Chaplin was a famous director. He directed
a number of films. Most of them were silent.
They were popular with people of all ages.
Hearing the news that the Chinese women’s
team beat the US team, he was too happy to
go to sleep.
Chaplin, who was a famous director, directed
a number of films, most of which were silent
and popular with people of all ages.
1. 假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部（photography club）将举办国际中学摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信。请他提供作品。信的内容包括：
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Step 1: 完成下列词汇信息
练习：为下列作文思考开头和结尾，并努力使用上列短语。
Hope this letter finds you well. I’m more than delighted to tell you that our school makes a plan to hold a Photography Show in our school photography club. In this letter, I’m writing to invite you to take part in it.
I do hope that you will have a better understanding of Chinese life and culture. I’m looking forward to your reply.
2. 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim 在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣，并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物。请你给Jim回信，内容包括：
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Step 1: 完成下列词汇信息
练习：为下列作文思考开头和结尾，并努力使用上列短语。
Hope this letter finds you well. I’m more than delighted to hear that you’re interested in Chinese history. In this letter, I’m writing to share something with you.
I do hope that you will have a better understanding of Chinese culture. I’m looking forward to your reply.
1. 表语从句：be who 是...的人（对句主语或宾语处理）
Lily is who loves Chinese at school. 李莉是在学校喜欢英语的人。
润色：你能更了解中国画。
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
2. 表语从句：be what是...的物/事（对句主语或宾语处理）
Chinese is what Lily loves all the time. 英语是李莉一直喜欢的东西。
润色：你能更了解中国画。
__________________________________________________________
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Step 2: 改造下列句子成为高级句式 (Lily loves English.)
You are who will have a better understanding of Chinese paintings after the exhibition.
Chinese paintings are what you will have a better understanding of during the event.
3. 强调句型：it is + 强调部分 + that... （对句主语、宾语或状语）
1. 在学校，李莉从心底喜欢汉语。（强调主语部分）
It is Lily that loves English at school from the bottom of her heart.
2.在 学校，李莉从心底喜欢汉语。（强调宾语部分）
It is Chinese that Lily loves at school from the bottom of her heart.
3.在学校，李莉从心底喜欢汉语。（强调状语部分）
It is from the bottom of her heart that Lily loves Chinese at school. 润色：你能更了解中国画。
__________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________
Step 2: 改造下列句子成为高级句式 (Lily loves English.)
It is you that will have a better understanding of Chinese paintings after the exhibition.
It is Chinese paintings that you will have a better understanding of after the exhibition.
4. 强调句型：do, does, did （对句谓语动词部分强调）
在学校，李莉从心底确实喜欢汉语。（强调谓语动词）
At school, Lily does love Chinese at school from the bottom of her heart.
润色：你能更了解中国画。
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5. 宾语从句 + 非谓语动词（do whatever sb can to do sth 做任何能做的事情来做...）
李莉以后将会做她能做的一切事来从心底喜欢汉语。（谓语动词部分开始）
Lily will do whatever she can to love Chinese from the bottom of her heart.
润色：你能更了解中国画。
Step 2: 改造下列句子成为高级句式 (Lily loves English.)
You do have a better understanding of Chinese paintings.
You will do whatever you can to have a better understanding of Chinese paintings.
6. 形式宾补：think+it+adj+for sb to do sth 认为对...来说，做…，会…）
我认为对李莉来说空余时间喜欢汉语很重要。
I think it important for Lily to love Chinese in her spare time.
润色：你能更了解中国画。
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7. 主语从句 + 表语从句：what is the most important is that... (最重要的事就是…)
最重要的事就是李莉一直在空余时间喜欢汉语。
What is the most important is that Lily loves Chinese all the time.
What really counts is that Lily loves Chinese all the time.
润色：你能更了解中国画。
__________________________________________________________
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Step 2: 改造下列句子成为高级句式 (Lily loves English.)
I think it of great value for you to have a better understanding …
What really counts is that you will have a better understanding …
8. 附加：Only + 状语部分 + 一般问句语序（倒装句）
只有这样李莉才会从内心喜欢汉语。
Only in this way will Lily love Chinese in her heart.
润色：你能更了解中国画。
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Step 2: 改造下列句子成为高级句式 (Lily loves English.)
Only in this way will you have a better understanding of…
9. 附加：状语从句 & 非谓语（省略状语从句中的主语，处理非谓语）
A)当她在教师空余时间帮助下，李莉从内心一直喜欢汉语。
When she is helped by the teacher in the spare time, Lily loves Chinese deeply in her heart.
When helped by the teacher in the spare time, Lily loves Chinese deeply in her heart.
B)当她有空余时间的时候，李莉从内心喜欢汉语。
When she has spare time, Lily loves Chinese deeply in her heart.
When having spare time, Lily loves Chinese deeply in her heart.
润色：你能更了解中国画。
__________________________________________________________
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Step 2: 改造下列句子成为高级句式 (Lily loves English.)
After you take part in it, you will have a better understanding of…
After taking part in it, you will have a better understanding of…
10. 附加：定语从句 & 非谓语（省略状语从句中的主语，处理非谓语）
A)李莉喜欢汉语。李莉要去中国。（who代人构建定语从句）
Lily, who will go to China soon, loves Chinese all the time.
Lily, to go to China soon, loves Chinese all the time.
B)李莉喜欢汉语。李莉有她的梦想。（who代人构建定语从句）
Lily, who has her big dream, loves Chinese deeply in her heart.
Lily, having her big dream, loves Chinese deeply in her heart.
C)李莉喜欢汉语。汉语在世界上广泛被使用。（which代物建定语从句）
Lily loves Chinese deeply in her heart, which is widely used in the world.
In her heart, Lily loves Chinese deeply widely used in the world.
润色：你能更了解中国画。
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Step 2: 改造下列句子成为高级句式 (Lily loves English.)
You, who takes part in it, will have a better understanding of…
You, taking part in it, will have a better understanding of…
I’m Li Hua, the chairman of our broadcast station. I’m more than delighted to tell you that the station has an English program, Talk and Talk. In this letter, I’m writing to ask you to take an interview next Monday.
The program was founded in 2002 by some English teachers in our school. The purpose is to arouse our interest in English. The interview begins at 5:00 pm next Monday on May 5 at the Room 202 of the first teaching building and it lasts 25 munities. You come from the USA and I think you can talk about American culture for the students. I believe students will open their eyes after the program.
If having questions, please call me at 1243221. I will appreciate it if you can do me a favour. I’m looking forward to your coming.
Step 3 用高级词汇和高级句式改造作文
The program was founded in 2002 by some English teachers in our school. The purpose is to arouse our interest in English. The interview begins at 5:00 pm next Monday on May 5 at the Room 202 of the first teaching building and it lasts 25 munities. You come from the USA and I think you can talk about American culture for the students. I believe students will open their eyes after the program.
Step 3 用高级词汇和高级句式改造作文
Founded in 2002 by some English teachers in our school, the program is to arouse our interest in English. The interview begins at 5:00 pm next Monday on May 5 at the Room 202 of the first teaching building, lasting 25 munities. I know that you come from the USA. Therefore, American culture is what you can talk about for the students so that they can open their eyes after the program.