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续写情感语料库
直接描写
to tell
间接描写
to show,情绪可视化
1. 纯表达内心感情
2. 用so ... that ...倒装表达感情
3. 用Adj, ...句式表达感情
4. 用眼睛/心跳表达感情
5. 用人作主语的动作表达感情
6. 用身体部位做主语的动作表达感情
"To tell" 更直接,指通过明确的语言传递信息或观点。
"To show" 更间接,通过描述情景、行动或细节,让读者自己得出结论,而不是直接告诉他们。例如:
To tell: "David was scared."(直接告诉读者:大卫害怕。)
To show: "David stood by the fence, his hands trembling as he looked down at the ground."(通过细节展示:大卫害怕,而不直接告诉读者。)
一、喜乐
我感到我的心充满了幸福。
她的眼睛闪烁着幸福的光芒。
当她得到获得一等奖的消息时,她的心欣喜若狂。
当班主任得知我们在朗诵比赛中获得第一名时,他高兴地笑了。
她听着,嘴角绽开灿烂的笑容。
他的脸上露出笑容。
杰克非常激动,他的心喜悦地怦怦直跳,甜蜜充满了全身。
萨拉非常高兴,在房间里跳起舞来,她的笑声充满了每个角落。
(1).I felt my heart was overflowing with happiness/pleasure//joy/amusement.(纯表达)
(2).Her eyes shined with happiness/pleasure//joy/amusement.(用眼睛表达感情)
(3).When she got the news of her winning the first prize, her heart was pounding with wild joy.(用心跳表达感情)
(4).Our head-teacher grinned with delight when he got the news that we got first place in the reciting contest.(用人作主语的动作表达感情)
(5).As she listened, her mouth split into a big smile.(用身体部位做主语的动作表达感情)
(6).His face lit up with a grin.(用身体部位做主语的动作表达感情)
(7)So thrilled was Jack that his heart jumped and danced for joy and sweet from the heart filled the body.(用so ... that ...倒装表达感情)
(8)Joyful and delighted, Sarah danced around the room, her laughter filling every corner.(用Adj, ...句式表达感情)
三、孤独、郁闷、忧伤
绝望/悲伤/悲伤/孤独淹没了我。
他独自走在黑暗的街道上,心中充满了孤独。
他独自度过了一个晚上,这使他充满了一种深深的孤独感。
听到这个坏消息,她的心因一种沉重的沮丧而怦怦直跳。
男孩站在那里,低着头,一言不发。
(1) Despair/Sorrow/Sadness/Loneliness flooded over me.纯表达
(2) He walked alone in the dark street, his heart swelling with loneliness.(人做主语)
(3) He spent the evening by himself, which filled him with a profound sense of loneliness.(纯表达)
(4) Receiving the bad news, her heart pounded with a heavy sense of depression.(心跳)
(5) The boy stood there, lowering his head and holding his tongue.(人做主语)
(6) On hearing the bad news, she lowered her head, tears streaming/rolling/pouring down her cheeks.人做主语动作表达 听到这个坏消息,她低下了头,眼泪从脸颊上滚落下来。
(7) When I saw the pile of dirty dishes, my heart sank.身体部位做主语 当我看到那堆脏盘子时,我的心一沉。
(8) So desperate was he that his eyes darkened and cried bitter tears. so...that.. 他是如此绝望,以致双眼黯然无光,流下了痛苦的眼泪。
(9) Sad and sorrowful, Lily sat on the park bench, tears streaming down her face as she remembered her lost love. adj.句式 莉莉悲伤地坐在公园的长椅上,当她想起她失去的爱时,眼泪从她的脸上流下来。
(10) Disappointed, Michael sighed heavily, staring at the rejection letter in his hand. adj.句式 迈克尔失望地叹了口气,盯着手里的拒绝信。
四、爱与幸福、感动
她把孩子抱在怀里紧紧地抱着。
她深情地在他们的额头上轻轻地吻了两下。
她沉浸在美味的早餐和双胞胎纯洁的爱中,啜泣着,愉快的泪水从脸上流下来。
我心中充满了由衷的感激,一句话也说不出来。
幸福的泪水顺着她的脸颊流下来。
她感动得热泪盈眶。
(1) She gathered the child in her arms and held him close.人做主语动作
(2) Lovingly, she pressed two gentle kisses on their foreheads.人做主语动作
(3) Lost in the delicious breakfast and pure love from her twins, she sobbed, with delightful tears streaming down her face. adj.句式
(4) Overwhelmed with heartfelt gratitude, I couldn’t utter a word. adj.句式
(5) Tears of happiness flowed down her cheeks.(间接表达,泪水)
(6) So touched was she that tears streamed down her face. (so...that...)
五、紧张、焦虑
(1) I felt a wave of anxiety/nervousness surging through me.. 纯表达内心感情 我感到一股焦虑/紧张的情绪涌上全身。
(2) Waiting for the results, her heart was pounding with anxiety.用心跳表达感情 在等待结果时,她的心焦虑得砰砰直跳。
(3) The boy rubbed his hands restlessly when he saw his teacher coming towards him.用人作主语的动作表达感情 那个男孩看见老师朝他走来,就不安地搓着手。
(4) My palms were sweating heavily as I walked into the teacher’s office.用身体部位做主语的动作表达感情 当我走进老师的办公室时,我的手心大汗淋漓。
(5) Jack stood there tongue-tied, his face turning pale. 人做主语的动作 杰克站在那里说不出话来,脸色变得苍白。
(6) So nervous was Jack that his throat tightened and his knees felt weak.用so ... that ...倒装表达感情 杰克紧张得喉咙发紧,膝盖发软。
(7) Anxious and uneasy, Jack paced up and down in the room. 用Adj, ...句式表达感情 杰克又焦虑又不安,在房间里踱来踱去。
(1) A flood of fear welled up in him.(纯表达)
(2) He heard strange noises, which filled him with fear.(纯表达)
(3) He grasped the flashlight tightly in hand, his heart pounding with fear.人做主语动作(4) Hearing the sharp scream, she froze with horror.人做主语动作
(5) They got into a panic, waving and shouting crazily towards the shore.人做主语动作
(6) His throat tightened with fear when he saw the snake.身体部位做主语
(7) I could feel my heart pounding wildly and my palms sweating.纯表达+心跳
(8) So frightened was Jack that he went weak at the knees and got numb with fear.(so...that)
(9) Terrified, Rachel huddled under the covers, every creak in the house setting her heart racing.用Adj, ...句式表达感情
一阵恐惧涌上他的心头。
他听到奇怪的声音,这使他充满了恐惧。
他紧紧地抓着手电筒,他的心吓得砰砰直跳。
听到尖锐的尖叫声,她吓呆了。
他们惊慌失措,疯狂地朝岸边挥手喊叫。
当他看到那条蛇时,他吓得喉咙发紧。
我能感觉到我的心狂跳,手心冒汗。
杰克吓得双膝发软,吓得麻木了。
瑞秋吓坏了,蜷缩在被窝里,屋子里的每一个声音都让她心跳加速。
六、恐惧
当他读信时,一丝惊奇掠过他的眼睛。
指示不清楚,这使她感到困惑。
他不解地看了我一眼。
我们惊讶地张大嘴巴,睁大眼睛。
当我看到台前有这么多观众时,我惊讶得下巴都掉了。
七、惊讶、困惑
(1) As he read the letter, a flicker (瞬间出现)of surprise crossed his eyes.(纯表达)
(2) The instructions were unclear, which filled her with confusion.(纯表达)
(3) He gave me a puzzled/confused look.(人做主语)
(4) Our mouth dropped open in surprise and our eyes widened.(身体部位做主语)
(5) My jaw dropped in astonishment when I saw such a large audience in front of the stage.(身体部位做主语)
(6) To his astonishment, she agreed to the proposal.(纯表达) 令他惊讶的是,她同意了这个建议。
(7) So surprised was she that she gasped and her hand flew to her mouth, eyes widening in disbelief. 用so ... that ...倒装 她惊讶得喘不过气来,用手捂住了嘴,难以置信地瞪大了眼睛。
(8) So confused was he that he scratched his head, frowning deeply as he tried to make sense of the situation.用so ... that ...倒装 他非常困惑,他搔着头,深深地皱着眉头,试图弄清楚情况。
(9) Surprised/Astonished, Olivia's eyes widened as she opened the gift, her mouth hanging open in disbelief.用Adj, ...句式 奥利维亚打开礼物时惊讶地睁大了眼睛,难以置信地张着嘴。
(10) Confused/Bewildered /b w ld d/, Alex rubbed his temples, trying to make sense of the complex instructions.用Adj, ...句式 亚历克斯困惑不解,揉着太阳穴,试图弄明白这些复杂的说明。
二、愤怒
突然,一种愤怒的感觉席卷了我的全身。
他故意破坏了我的作品,这使我怒不可遏。
看到他如此不公平地对待别人,我的心气得砰砰直跳。
汤姆气得一句话也说不出来。
她愤怒地叫了一声,眼睛瞪着儿子。
汤姆气得冲出房间,狠狠地关上了身后的门。
(1) All at once, a feeling of anger swept through me.纯表达
(2) He deliberately/d l b r tli/ destroyed my work, which filled me with rage/re d /.人做主语动作
(3) Seeing him treat others so unfairly, I felt my heart was pounding with fury/ fj ri/.纯表达(4) Filled with fury, Tom was unable to utter a single word.adj.,句式
(5) She let out a cry of anger, her eyes glaring at her son.人做主语动作
(6) So angry was Tom that he stormed out of the room and slammed the door furiously behind him.so ....that
八、尴尬
当我意识到我在舞台上忘记了台词时,我感到一阵尴尬。
她红扑扑的脸上写满了尴尬。
我的朋友不小心在公共场合叫了我小时候的外号,这让我很尴尬。
令我尴尬的是,我在试图用舞步打动别人时绊了一跤。
他尴尬地搓着手。
妻子尴尬地站在那里,脸涨得通红。
她很尴尬,笨拙地站在那里,感觉血液涌向她的脸。
杰克很尴尬,脸涨得通红。
(1) When I realized I had forgotten my lines on stage, I felt a wave of embarrassment wash over me.(纯表达)
(2) Embarrassment was written on her red face.(纯表达)
(3) My friend accidentally called me by my childhood nickname in public, which filled me with embarrassment.(纯表达)
(4) To my embarrassment, I tripped and fell while trying to impress someone with my dance moves.人做主语的动作
(5) He rubbed his hands in embarrassment.(人做主语动作)
(6) The wife stood there embarrassed, blood rushing to her face.(人做主语的动作)
(7) So embarrassed was she that she stood there clumsily, feeling blood rushing to her face.用so ... that ...倒装
(8) Embarrassed, Jack’s cheeks flushed red.用so ... that ...倒装
九、内疚、自责
我感到一阵内疚感涌上心头。
想起他的谎言,他的心因内疚而怦怦直跳。
他脸上掠过一丝羞愧的表情。
她咬着嘴唇,当她在脑海中重播那件事时,负罪感沉重地压在她的心头。
她低着头站着,眼中涌出了内疚的泪水。
当他意识到自己行为的后果时,那人双手抱头坐在那里,内疚吞噬着他。
她感到非常羞愧,血液都涌向了她的脸。
他太内疚了,以至于不敢直视她的眼睛,他试图道歉时双手颤抖。
马克感到内疚和懊悔,他避开了目光接触,在他做了那样的事之后,他无法面对他的朋友。
(1) I felt a wave of guilt wash over me.(纯表达)
(2) Remembering his lie, his heart pounding with guilt.(心跳)
(3) An expression of shame crossed his face.(纯表达)
(4) She chewed on her lip, guilt weighing heavily on her as she replayed the events in her mind.(人做主语的动作)
(5) She stood with her head bowed, tears of guilt welling up in her eyes. (人做主语的动作)
(6) As he realized the consequences of his actions, the man sat with his head in his hands, guilt consuming him.(人做主语的动作)
(7) So ashamed was she that she could feel the blood rush to her face.用so ... that ...倒装
(8) So guilty was he that he couldn't meet her eye, his hands shaking as he tried to apologize.用so ... that ...倒装
(9) Guilty and remorseful, Mark avoided eye contact, unable to face his friend after what he had done.Adj, ...句式
十、后悔、同情
我感到一阵悔恨涌上心头。
当他意识到自己的错误太晚时,他的内心充满了悔恨。
她心中充满了悔恨。
我站在那里,眼里含着悔恨的泪水。
看到她的状况,我对她产生了强烈的同情。
她坐在床沿上,由于悔恨的重压,她的肩膀耷拉下来,眼泪无声地顺着脸颊流下来。
(7) I felt a wave of regret wash over me.(纯表达)
(8) When he realized his mistake too late, his heart swelled with regret.(身体部位做主语)
(9) Regret/Remorse flooded over her.(纯表达)
(10) I stood there, with regretful tears in my eyes.(人做主语动作)
(11) Seeing her condition, I felt a huge surge of sympathy for her.(纯表达)
(12) She sat on the edge of the bed, her shoulders sagging with the weight of regret, tears silently streaming down her cheeks.(人做主语动作)
她伸出手轻轻地拍了拍他的背,说了些安慰的话,眼神因同情而变得柔和.
他后悔极了,在床上翻来覆去睡不着。
她被同情感动了,忍不住流下了眼泪,伸出手紧紧地拥抱了他。
后悔,詹姆斯希望时光能倒流,他的脑海里不断回放着那天晚上发生的事情。
要是我没有独自离开农场就好了!
如果我没有和杰克吵架,我就不会迷路了。
(1) Her eyes softened with sympathy as she reached out to pat his back gently, offering words of comfort.(眼睛)
(2) So regretful was he that he tossed and turned in bed, unable to fall asleep.用so ... that ...倒装
(3) So moved with sympathy was she that she couldn't hold back her tears, reaching out to hug him tightly.用so ... that ...倒装
(4) Regretful, James wished he could turn back time, his mind replaying the events of that night.Adj, ...句式
(5) If only I had not left the farm alone!(虚拟语气,间接表达)
(6) If I hadn’t quarreled with Jack, I wouldn’t have got lost.(虚拟语气,间接表达)