Part Ⅳ Writing safety guidelines
Step Ⅰ 文本研读
理清脉络：整体理解
1．Read the Hurricane Safety Guidelines and finish the sentences.
(1)____________________ can increase our chances of survival when the disaster strikes.
(2)Safety guidelines tell us ________________ in the face of the disaster.
2．Fill in the blanks.
Flood Safety Guidelines
Things to do before a flood ●Listen to weather warnings. ●Prepare enough ①____________________．
Things to do during a flood ●Move to a ②________ place to keep clear of floodwater. ●Keep away from electricity.
Things not to do during a flood ●Do not drink ③________ as it is dangerous.
Step Ⅱ 知识点
1)sufficient adj.足够的，充足的)
Despite the poor service of the hotel, the manager is reluctant to invest in sufficient training for his staff.
虽然宾馆的服务很差，但经理仍然不愿意投资对员工进行充分的培训。
[考点归纳]
(1)be sufficient to do sth. 足以做某事
be sufficient for 对……来说足够
sufficient experience 足够的经验
(2)sufficiently adv. 足够地
[即学即练] 单句语法填空
①The money is not sufficient ________ (cover) everything that needs doing.
②The recipe is sufficient ________ six people.
③Students must reach a ________ (sufficient) high standard to pass.
2)shelter n.[U]庇护，掩蔽；[C]掩蔽处，避身处)
She couldn't understand why some people had to live their lives without shelter or enough food.
她不明白为什么有些人不得不在没有住所和足够食物的情况下生活。
I arrived home dry under the shelter of the umbrella.
我打着伞回到家，没有淋一点儿雨。
They got lost in the forest and couldn't find a place to shelter themselves from wind and rain.
他们在森林里迷路了，而且他们找不到遮风挡雨的地方。
[考点归纳]
(1)take shelter (from) 躲避(……)
give sb. a shelter 庇护某人
seek shelter (from...) 寻求庇护(以躲避……)
provide food and shelter for 为……提供食物和住所
under the shelter of 在……庇护下
(2)shelter v. 为……提供庇护处，躲避
shelter...from... 保护……免受……
[即学即练] 单句语法填空/完成句子
①Some parents are just too protective. They want to shelter their kids ________ every kind of danger, real or imagined.
②It is dangerous ________ (take) shelter from the storm under a tree.
③We sat in the shade, ________ (shelter) from the sun.
④We had to ____________ (躲避) the shower (阵雨) in the department store.
⑤The solution, of course, was to plant trees so the animals could ______________ (寻求庇护) during the daytime.
Step Ⅲ Writing safety guidelines
[文体介绍]
自然灾害安全指南的目的是提高读者在自然灾害中的生存概率，语言多明白简洁，以便读者更容易理解；安全指南的篇章结构应清晰明了，写作时多用简单句和祈使句。
[篇章结构]
写自然灾害安全指南主要从以下两个方面展开：
Part 1: What is the disaster
Part 2: How to survive the disaster
①Things to do before the disaster
②Things to do during the disaster
③Things not to do during the disaster
[话题词汇及句式]
1．话题词汇
教材词汇
(1)natural disaster 自然灾害
(2)measure n. 措施
(3)reduce v. 减少
(4)keep calm 保持冷静
(5)sufficient food and water 充足的食物和水
(6)keep in mind 记住
(7)get prepared for... 为……做好准备
(8)keep away from... 远离……
(9)some tips on flood safety 关于洪水安全的建议
(10)prepare a safeguard 准备安全防护装置
(11)listen to the weather warnings 收听天气警报
其他词汇
(1)turn off the power supply 切断电源
(2)join in basic medical training 参加基本的医疗培训
(3)escape from accident 逃离意外事故
(4)in case of fire 万一着火
(5)trapped/buried under the ruins 被困/埋在废墟下
(6)pay attention to safety 关注安全
2．话题句式
(1)开头语
Natural disasters frequently take place on the earth.地球上经常发生自然灾害。
Knowing what to do during an earthquake helps greatly reduce the damage.在地震发生时知道做什么能够很大程度上减少损失。
It's important to learn some important tips to protect yourself from possible injuries.
学习一些重要的技巧来保护你免受可能的伤害是很重要的。
Here, I'd like to share with you some advice/tips on how to escape from an earthquake.
在这里，我要跟你分享一些关于如何逃离地震的建议。
(2)正文
It's necessary to provide regular first aid training for the public so as to improve their knowledge of first aid.
给公众提供定期的急救培训来提高他们的急救知识是非常必要的。
The earthquake drill is important for us students, from which we have learned how to escape and protect ourselves when an earthquake happens.
地震演练对于我们学生来说非常重要，通过演练，我们学会了当地震发生时如何逃生，如何保护自己。
When an earthquake occurs, you are supposed to run downstairs instead of taking a lift.
当地震发生时，你应该跑下楼梯而不是乘坐电梯。
Make sure to keep calm and do not shout when facing the disaster.
面对灾难时，一定要保持冷静，不要大喊大叫。
After the earthquake, we should leave the dangerous area immediately in case of strong aftershocks.
地震发生后，我们应立即离开危险区域，以防发生强烈余震。
⑩As long as we can keep the tips in mind, we can increase the chances of surviving the disaster.
只要我们能记住这些窍门，我们就更有可能在灾难中幸存下来。
[实践应用]
假如你是李华，在“国际减轻自然灾害日”到来之际，学校英文版校报正在征集关于“地震逃生知识”的稿件，请你写一篇地震安全指南并投稿。要点包括：
1．背景及目的；
2．具体建议。
第一步 布局谋篇
第二步 遣词造句
?完成句子
1．我们必须记住一些安全建议，那样我们就可以保护自己免受伤害。
We must keep some safety tips in mind _____________________________________．
2．待在安全的地方，不需匆忙地乱跑。
Stay at a safe place and do not run _____________________________________．
3．如果在房间里，你应该藏在牢固的东西下面，如桌子或者床下面。
________________， you should hide yourself under something hard, such as a table or even a bed.
4．(一句多译)如果(你)在户外，找一个空旷的地方，不要靠近汽车或水边。
If (you are) in the open air, ____________________________．
＝__________________________________ if (you are) in the open air.
5．绝对不要乘电梯下楼。
____________________ to go downstairs.
6．地震很强大，如果我们有战胜它们的信念，永不放弃，我们一定能够克服任何困难。
The earthquakes are strong; ___________________________________________．
?句式升级
7．用it作形式主语改写句1。
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
8．用省略句改写句3。
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
9．用让步状语从句改写句6。
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
第三步 完美成篇
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇英语短文。
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Part Ⅳ Writing safety guidelines
写作精析·技能提升
Step Ⅰ 文本研读
理清脉络：整体理解
1．(1)Being prepared (2)what to do
2．①food and clean water ②high ③floodwater
Step Ⅱ 知识点
1．①to cover ②for ③sufficiently
2．①from ②to take ③sheltering ④take shelter from/shelter from ⑤seek shelter
Step Ⅲ Writing safety guidelines
第二步
1．so that we can protect ourselves from injuries
2．in a hurry
3．If you are in the room
4．find an open place and never get close to cars or waterside; Find an open place and keep away from cars and waterside
5．Never take a lift
6．if we have the belief to defeat them and never give up, we will be able to overcome any difficulties
7．It is necessary for us to keep some safety tips in mind so that we can protect ourselves from injuries.
8．If in the room, you should hide yourself under something hard, such as a table or even a bed.
9．No matter how strong the earthquakes are, if we have the belief to defeat them and never give up, we will be able to overcome any difficulties.
第三步
We all know that earthquakes frequently take place on the earth. Therefore, it is necessary for us to keep some safety tips in mind so that we can protect ourselves from injuries.
Things to do during an earthquake.
Stay at a safe place and do not run in a hurry.
If in the room, you should hide yourself under something hard, such as a table or even a bed.
If in the open air, find an open place and never get close to cars or waterside.
Things not to do during an earthquake.
Keep away from shelves and cupboards.
Never take a lift to go downstairs.
No matter how strong the earthquakes are, if we have the belief to defeat them and never give up, we will be able to overcome any difficulties.
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Part Ⅳ Writing safety guidelines
Step Ⅰ 文本研读
理清脉络：整体理解
1．Read the Hurricane Safety Guidelines and finish the sentences.
(1)____________________ can increase our chances of survival when the disaster strikes.
(2)Safety guidelines tell us ________________ in the face of the disaster.
Being prepared
what to do
2．Fill in the blanks.
Flood Safety Guidelines
Things to do before a flood ●Listen to weather warnings.
●Prepare enough ①____________________．
Things to do during a flood ●Move to a ②________ place to keep clear of floodwater.
●Keep away from electricity.
Things not to do during a flood ●Do not drink ③___________ as it is dangerous.
food and clean water
high
floodwater
Step Ⅱ 知识点
1)sufficient adj.足够的，充足的)
Despite the poor service of the hotel, the manager is reluctant to invest in sufficient training for his staff.
虽然宾馆的服务很差，但经理仍然不愿意投资对员工进行充分的培训。
[考点归纳]
(1)be sufficient to do sth. 足以做某事
be sufficient for 对……来说足够
sufficient experience 足够的经验
(2)sufficiently adv. 足够地
[即学即练] 单句语法填空
①The money is not sufficient ________ (cover) everything that needs doing.
②The recipe is sufficient ________ six people.
③Students must reach a ________ (sufficient) high standard to pass.
to cover
for
sufficiently
2)shelter n.[U]庇护，掩蔽；[C]掩蔽处，避身处)
She couldn't understand why some people had to live their lives without shelter or enough food.
她不明白为什么有些人不得不在没有住所和足够食物的情况下生活。
I arrived home dry under the shelter of the umbrella.
我打着伞回到家，没有淋一点儿雨。
They got lost in the forest and couldn't find a place to shelter themselves from wind and rain.
他们在森林里迷路了，而且他们找不到遮风挡雨的地方。
[考点归纳]
(1)take shelter (from) 躲避(……)
give sb. a shelter 庇护某人
seek shelter (from...) 寻求庇护(以躲避……)
provide food and shelter for 为……提供食物和住所
under the shelter of 在……庇护下
(2)shelter v. 为……提供庇护处，躲避
shelter...from... 保护……免受……
[即学即练] 单句语法填空/完成句子
①Some parents are just too protective. They want to shelter their kids ________ every kind of danger, real or imagined.
②It is dangerous ________ (take) shelter from the storm under a tree.
③We sat in the shade, ________ (shelter) from the sun.
④We had to ______________________ (躲避) the shower (阵雨) in the department store.
⑤The solution, of course, was to plant trees so the animals could ______________ (寻求庇护) during the daytime.
from
to take
sheltering
take shelter from/shelter from
seek shelter
Step Ⅲ Writing safety guidelines
[文体介绍]
自然灾害安全指南的目的是提高读者在自然灾害中的生存概率，语言多明白简洁，以便读者更容易理解；安全指南的篇章结构应清晰明了，写作时多用简单句和祈使句。
[篇章结构]
写自然灾害安全指南主要从以下两个方面展开：
Part 1: What is the disaster
Part 2: How to survive the disaster
①Things to do before the disaster
②Things to do during the disaster
③Things not to do during the disaster
[话题词汇及句式]
1．话题词汇
教材词汇
(1)natural disaster 自然灾害
(2)measure n. 措施
(3)reduce v. 减少
(4)keep calm 保持冷静
(5)sufficient food and water 充足的食物和水
(6)keep in mind 记住
(7)get prepared for... 为……做好准备
(8)keep away from... 远离……
(9)some tips on flood safety 关于洪水安全的建议
(10)prepare a safeguard 准备安全防护装置
(11)listen to the weather warnings 收听天气警报
其他词汇
(1)turn off the power supply 切断电源
(2)join in basic medical training 参加基本的医疗培训
(3)escape from accident 逃离意外事故
(4)in case of fire 万一着火
(5)trapped/buried under the ruins 被困/埋在废墟下
(6)pay attention to safety 关注安全
2．话题句式
(1)开头语
Natural disasters frequently take place on the earth.地球上经常发生自然灾害。
Knowing what to do during an earthquake helps greatly reduce the damage.在地震发生时知道做什么能够很大程度上减少损失。
It's important to learn some important tips to protect yourself from possible injuries.
学习一些重要的技巧来保护你免受可能的伤害是很重要的。
Here, I'd like to share with you some advice/tips on how to escape from an earthquake.
在这里，我要跟你分享一些关于如何逃离地震的建议。
(2)正文
It's necessary to provide regular first aid training for the public so as to improve their knowledge of first aid.
给公众提供定期的急救培训来提高他们的急救知识是非常必要的。
The earthquake drill is important for us students, from which we have learned how to escape and protect ourselves when an earthquake happens.
地震演练对于我们学生来说非常重要，通过演练，我们学会了当地震发生时如何逃生，如何保护自己。
When an earthquake occurs, you are supposed to run downstairs instead of taking a lift.
当地震发生时，你应该跑下楼梯而不是乘坐电梯。
Make sure to keep calm and do not shout when facing the disaster.
面对灾难时，一定要保持冷静，不要大喊大叫。
After the earthquake, we should leave the dangerous area immediately in case of strong aftershocks.
地震发生后，我们应立即离开危险区域，以防发生强烈余震。
⑩As long as we can keep the tips in mind, we can increase the chances of surviving the disaster.
只要我们能记住这些窍门，我们就更有可能在灾难中幸存下来。
[实践应用]
假如你是李华，在“国际减轻自然灾害日”到来之际，学校英文版校报正在征集关于“地震逃生知识”的稿件，请你写一篇地震安全指南并投稿。要点包括：
1．背景及目的；
2．具体建议。
第一步 布局谋篇
第二步 遣词造句
?完成句子
1．我们必须记住一些安全建议，那样我们就可以保护自己免受伤害。
We must keep some safety tips in mind
______________________________________________．
2．待在安全的地方，不需匆忙地乱跑。
Stay at a safe place and do not run _____________________________．
3．如果在房间里，你应该藏在牢固的东西下面，如桌子或者床下面。
________________， you should hide yourself under something hard, such as a table or even a bed.
so that we can protect ourselves from injuries
in a hurry
If you are in the room
4．(一句多译)如果(你)在户外，找一个空旷的地方，不要靠近汽车或水边。
If (you are) in the open air, __________________________________．
＝______________________________________________ if (you are) in the open air.
5．绝对不要乘电梯下楼。
____________________ to go downstairs.
find an open place and never get close to cars or waterside
Find an open place and keep away from cars and waterside
Never take a lift
6．地震很强大，如果我们有战胜它们的信念，永不放弃，我们一定能够克服任何困难。
The earthquakes are strong;
________________________________________________________________________．
if we have the belief to defeat them and never give up, we will be able to overcome any difficulties
句式升级
7．用it作形式主语改写句1。
8．用省略句改写句3。
9．用让步状语从句改写句6。
It is necessary for us to keep some safety tips in mind so that we can protect ourselves from injuries.
If in the room, you should hide yourself under something hard, such as a table or even a bed.
No matter how strong the earthquakes are, if we have the belief to defeat them and never give up, we will be able to overcome any difficulties.
第三步 完美成篇
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇英语短文。
We all know that earthquakes frequently take place on the earth. Therefore, it is necessary for us to keep some safety tips in mind so that we can protect ourselves from injuries.
Things to do during an earthquake.
Stay at a safe place and do not run in a hurry.
If in the room, you should hide yourself under something hard, such as a table or even a bed.
If in the open air, find an open place and never get close to cars or waterside.
Things not to do during an earthquake.
Keep away from shelves and cupboards.
Never take a lift to go downstairs.
No matter how strong the earthquakes are, if we have the belief to defeat them and never give up, we will be able to overcome any difficulties.
