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Section G 单元主题写作——人际关系
1．写作任务
假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Jim不擅长与人交际，在学校不能融入同学中，因此朋友少，非常烦恼。请你给Jim回复一封邮件，内容包括：
1．表示同情；
2．你的建议。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
(2)二定：时态与人称
时态：一般现在时为主
人称：第二人称
(3)三明确：写作要点
①表达同情
②提出建议：树立自信，微笑待人，参加班级活动
③表达希望
3．素材整理
(1)关键词语
feel depressed感到沮丧
handle the problem解决问题
the key problem关键的问题
avoid socializing with people逃避与人交往
avoid embarrassment避免尴尬
convey sth. to sb.向某人传递某事
engagement in sth.参与某事
a couple of几个
associate with sb.与某人交往
(2)完成句子
①很遗憾得知你如此沮丧。
I am really sorry ________________ that you are ________________．
②就我个人而言，我认为你是一个充满热情的人，关键的问题是你缺乏信心。
____________， I think you're a ____________ person and that your ________ of self-confidence is the ________________．
to hear
feeling so depressed
Personally
passionate
lack
key problem
③为了解决这个问题，你不能逃避与他人社交。
____________ the problem, never ________ you _______________ other people.
④尝试对同学微笑，因为正是微笑可以最好地传递你与人交友的愿望。
Try ________________ your classmates because it's a smile ________ can best ________ your wish to ________________．
To handle
should
avoid associating with
smiling at
that
convey
make friends
⑤参与一些班级活动可以为你提供与人交往和建立友谊的机会。
__________ in _______________ class activities may provide you with chances ________________ and start up ________ with others.
⑥我真诚地希望这些建议可以对你有帮助。
I ________ hope these ________ may be ________ some ________ to you.
Engagement
a couple of
to associate
friendship
sincerely
tips
of
help
4．整理成文 (注：黑体部分为本单元的重点词汇)
Dear Jim，
I am really sorry to hear that you are feeling so depressed. The following tips might help you handle the problem.
Personally, I think you're a passionate person and that your lack of self-confidence is the key problem. To handle the problem, never should you avoid associating with other people. In order to avoid embarrassment, try smiling at your classmates because it's a smile that can best convey your wish to make friends. Moreover, engagement in a couple of class activities may provide you with chances to associate and start up friendship with others.
I sincerely hope these tips may be of some help to you.
Yours，
Li Hua
5．写作练习
假设你是红星中学的李华，你校英文报纸正在举办征文比赛。请你以网络交友为主题，写一篇文章投稿，内容包括：
1．网络交友现状；
2．你的看法。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．标题已给出，不计入总词数。
Online friendship
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参考范文： (注：黑体部分为本单元的重点词汇)
Online friendship
Online friendship is a preference of some people. However, it's time that we saw it in a different angle．
In reality, being obsessed with online friendship makes people more and more separated. Besides, it's during the course of making friends online that personal privacy is constantly leaked, occasionally causing extremely serious problems.
Thus, not only should we realize the risk of making friends online but we should focus more on face-to-face relationship. Never can we be too careful with online friendship.Section G 单元主题写作——人际关系
1．写作任务
假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Jim不擅长与人交际，在学校不能融入同学中，因此朋友少，非常烦恼。请你给Jim回复一封邮件，内容包括：
1．表示同情；
2．你的建议。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
2．写作思路
(1)一审：体裁、结构和主题
体裁：应用文——建议信
结构：三段
主题：如何处理人际关系
(2)二定：时态与人称
时态：一般现在时为主
人称：第二人称
(3)三明确：写作要点
①表达同情
②提出建议：树立自信，微笑待人，参加班级活动
③表达希望
3．素材整理
(1)关键词语
feel depressed感到沮丧
handle the problem解决问题
the key problem关键的问题
avoid socializing with people逃避与人交往
avoid embarrassment避免尴尬
convey sth. to sb.向某人传递某事
engagement in sth.参与某事
a couple of几个
associate with sb.与某人交往
(2)完成句子
①很遗憾得知你如此沮丧。
I am really sorry ________________ that you are ________________．
②就我个人而言，我认为你是一个充满热情的人，关键的问题是你缺乏信心。
____________， I think you're a ____________ person and that your ________ of self-confidence is the ________________．
③为了解决这个问题，你不能逃避与他人社交。
________________ the problem, never ________ you ____________________ other people.
④尝试对同学微笑，因为正是微笑可以最好地传递你与人交友的愿望。
Try ________________ your classmates because it's a smile ________ can best ________ your wish to ________________．
⑤参与一些班级活动可以为你提供与人交往和建立友谊的机会。
________ in ________________________ class activities may provide you with chances ________________ and start up ________ with others.
⑥我真诚地希望这些建议可以对你有帮助。
I ________ hope these ________ may be ________ some ________ to you.
4．整理成文
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
5．写作练习
假设你是红星中学的李华，你校英文报纸正在举办征文比赛。请你以网络交友为主题，写一篇文章投稿，内容包括：
1．网络交友现状；
2．你的看法。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．标题已给出，不计入总词数。
Online friendship
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Section G 单元主题写作——人际关系
3．素材整理
(2)①to hear; feeling so depressed ②Personally; passionate; lack; key problem ③To handle; should; avoid associating with ④smiling at; that; convey; make friends
⑤Engagement; a couple of; to associate; friendship
⑥sincerely; tips; of; help
4．整理成文
(注：黑体部分为本单元的重点词汇)
Dear Jim，
I am really sorry to hear that you are feeling so depressed. The following tips might help you handle the problem.
Personally, I think you're a passionate person and that your lack of self-confidence is the key problem. To handle the problem, never should you avoid associating with other people. In order to avoid embarrassment, try smiling at your classmates because it's a smile that can best convey your wish to make friends. Moreover, engagement in a couple of class activities may provide you with chances to associate and start up friendship with others.
I sincerely hope these tips may be of some help to you.
Yours，
Li Hua
5．写作练习
参考范文：
(注：黑体部分为本单元的重点词汇)
Online friendship
Online friendship is a preference of some people. However, it's time that we saw it in a different angle．
In reality, being obsessed with online friendship makes people more and more separated. Besides, it's during the course of making friends online that personal privacy is constantly leaked, occasionally causing extremely serious problems.
Thus, not only should we realize the risk of making friends online but we should focus more on face-to-face relationship. Never can we be too careful with online friendship.
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