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Section G 单元主题写作——成功
1．写作任务
假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Jim在探讨成功的话题，请你回复他一封邮件，以感动中国人物为例，说明你对成功的理解，内容包括：
(1)人物名字；
(2)他或她的事迹；
(3)你对成功的理解。
注意：(1)词数80左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
How is everything going？
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
(2)二定：时态与人称
时态：一般现在时为主
人称：第三人称为主
(3)三明确：写作要点
①导入话题
②人物介绍：名字＋事迹(献身教育、建立学校、带病工作)
③个人理解：成功的标准是对社会的贡献
3．素材整理
(1)关键词语
become a millionaire 成为百万富翁
be honored as... 被誉为……
with complete commitment 完全献身(投入)
apply oneself to sth. 致力于
mountainous areas 山区
sacrifice everything to do... 奉献一切去做……
strive to do sth. 努力做某事
set up a school 建立一所学校
despite her serious illness 尽管她自己有严重疾病
(2)完成句子
①我曾经认为成功就是成为一名百万富翁。
I once ____________ success was ____________ a millionaire.
②这个人是张桂梅，被誉为感动中国年度人物。
The person is Zhang Guimei, _________ the person _________ China.
③张桂梅，既热情又充满奉献精神，致力于山区贫穷女孩的教育。
Zhang, ____________and with complete ______________， _______________ the education of poor girls from mountainous areas.
thought
to become
honored as
who moves
enthusiastic
commitment
applied herself to
④坚定、坚持不懈、尽心尽力，张桂梅为了帮助她们献出了一切。
____________， ________ and ________， Zhang __________ everything to help them.
⑤她设法为女孩们建立了一所学校，努力通过教育改变她们的命运。
She managed to ____________ for the girls, ______________ their fate ____________．
⑥正是通过她的事迹，我认识到真正的成功不在于金钱，而在于一个人为社会贡献了什么。
It's from her deed ________ I know the real success doesn't _____________ money ________________ one has _______________ society.
Deter-mined
persistent
committed
sacrificed
set up a school
striving to change
with education
that
lie in
but in what
contributed to
4．整理成文 (注：黑体部分为本单元的重点词汇)
Dear Jim，
How is everything going I once thought success was to become a millionaire. However, one person completely changed me.
The person is Zhang Guimei, honored as the person who moves China. Zhang, enthusiastic and with complete commitment, applied herself to the education of poor girls from mountainous areas. Determined, persistent and committed, Zhang sacrificed everything to help them and managed to set up a school for them, striving to change their fate with education, despite her serious illness.
It's from her deed that I know the real success doesn't lie in money but in what one has contributed to society.
Yours，
Li Hua
5．写作练习
每个人都有梦想，但是并不是每个人都可以成功。假设你是李华，请你写一封邮件给你的英国笔友Joe，说明你的观点，内容包括：
(1)对梦想的理解；(2)实现梦想的秘诀。
注意：(1)词数80左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Joe，
How is everything going？
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
参考范文： (注：黑体部分为本单元的重点词汇)
Dear Joe，
How is everything going Everyone has their own dream. But what they strive to achieve and how to realise it matter more.
From my perspective, only if the dream relates to commitment to society will it be meaningful. If one is too selfish and only applies himself to his own interest, it will make no sense.
Once we determine what dream to follow, the key is to devote ourselves to it, because it's only with traits of being persistent and committed that we can finally achieve it.
Yours，
Li HuaSection G 单元主题写作——成功
1．写作任务
假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Jim在探讨成功的话题，请你回复他一封邮件，以感动中国人物为例，说明你对成功的理解，内容包括：
(1)人物名字；
(2)他或她的事迹；
(3)你对成功的理解。
注意：(1)词数80左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
How is everything going？
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
2．写作思路
(1)一审：体裁、结构和主题
体裁：应用文——观点交流信件
结构：三段
主题：对成功的理解
(2)二定：时态与人称
时态：一般现在时为主
人称：第三人称为主
(3)三明确：写作要点
①导入话题
②人物介绍：名字＋事迹(献身教育、建立学校、带病工作)
③个人理解：成功的标准是对社会的贡献
3．素材整理
(1)关键词语
become a millionaire 成为百万富翁
be honored as... 被誉为……
with complete commitment 完全献身(投入)
apply oneself to sth. 致力于
mountainous areas 山区
sacrifice everything to do... 奉献一切去做……
strive to do sth. 努力做某事
set up a school 建立一所学校
despite her serious illness 尽管她自己有严重疾病
(2)完成句子
①我曾经认为成功就是成为一名百万富翁。
I once ____________ success was ____________ a millionaire.
②这个人是张桂梅，被誉为感动中国年度人物。
The person is Zhang Guimei, ____________ the person ________________ China.
③张桂梅，既热情又充满奉献精神，致力于山区贫穷女孩的教育。
Zhang, ________________ and with complete ________________， __________________ the education of poor girls from mountainous areas.
④坚定、坚持不懈、尽心尽力，张桂梅为了帮助她们献出了一切。
________， ________ and ________， Zhang ________ everything to help them.
⑤她设法为女孩们建立了一所学校，努力通过教育改变她们的命运。
She managed to ____________ for the girls, ____________ their fate ____________．
⑥正是通过她的事迹，我认识到真正的成功不在于金钱，而在于一个人为社会贡献了什么。
It's from her deed ____________________ I know the real success doesn't ________________ money ________________ one has ____________ society.
4．整理成文
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
5．写作练习
每个人都有梦想，但是并不是每个人都可以成功。假设你是李华，请你写一封邮件给你的英国笔友Joe，说明你的观点，内容包括：
(1)对梦想的理解；(2)实现梦想的秘诀。
注意：(1)词数80左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Joe，
How is everything going？
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
Section G 单元主题写作——成功
3．素材整理
(2)①thought; to become ②honored as; who moves
③enthusiastic; commitment; applied herself to ④Deter-mined; persistent; committed; sacrificed ⑤set up a school; striving to change; with education ⑥that; lie in; but in what; contributed to
4．整理成文
(注：黑体部分为本单元的重点词汇)
Dear Jim，
How is everything going I once thought success was to become a millionaire. However, one person completely changed me.
The person is Zhang Guimei, honored as the person who moves China. Zhang, enthusiastic and with complete commitment, applied herself to the education of poor girls from mountainous areas. Determined, persistent and committed, Zhang sacrificed everything to help them and managed to set up a school for them, striving to change their fate with education, despite her serious illness.
It's from her deed that I know the real success doesn't lie in money but in what one has contributed to society.
Yours，
Li Hua
5．写作练习
参考范文：
(注：黑体部分为本单元的重点词汇)
Dear Joe，
How is everything going Everyone has their own dream. But what they strive to achieve and how to realise it matter more.
From my perspective, only if the dream relates to commitment to society will it be meaningful. If one is too selfish and only applies himself to his own interest, it will make no sense.
Once we determine what dream to follow, the key is to devote ourselves to it, because it's only with traits of being persistent and committed that we can finally achieve it.
Yours，
Li Hua
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