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Section G 单元主题写作——环境保护
1．写作任务
假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Jim对保护大熊猫很关心，请你给他写一封邮件，介绍相关信息，内容包括：
1．保护措施；
2．取得的成就。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
How is everything going？
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，
Li Hua
(2)二定：时态与人称
时态：一般现在时为主
人称：第三人称为主
(3)三明确：写作要点
①提出写作目的
②保护措施：建立保护区、制定法律、救助大熊猫
③取得成就：数量增加、由“濒危”到“易危”
3．素材整理
(1)关键词语
①be concerned about 关注
②related information 相关信息
③close to being extinct 濒临灭绝
④dozens of 数十个
⑤conservation areas 保护区
⑥apart from 除……之外
⑦ban hunting pandas illegally 禁止非法猎杀大熊猫
⑧rescue pandas in danger 拯救处于危险中的大熊猫
⑨thanks to constant efforts 由于不懈的努力
⑩the number of pandas 大熊猫的数量
be classified from “endangered” to “vulnerable”
被从“濒危”分类到“易危”
(2)完成句子
①我很高兴你如此关注大熊猫，让我来跟你分享一下相关信息。
________ that you're so ________________ pandas, let me ________ related information with you.
②你知道，大熊猫一直都是濒危动物，曾经濒临灭绝。
________ you know, pandas have long been an ________ animal and once _______________________________．
Glad
concerned about
share
As
endangered
close to being extinct
③为了保护大熊猫，数十个保护区被建立，这样它们的栖息地就不会被破坏了。
In order to protect pandas, ________________________ are set up _________ their habitats won't be ________．
④不仅制定了法律禁止非法猎杀大熊猫，而且还努力救助处于危险中的大熊猫。
Not only ______________ to ban hunting pandas illegally, ________ great efforts are made to ____________ pandas in danger.
dozens of conservation areas
so that
destroyed
are laws made
but
rescue/save
⑤已经有数百只大熊猫被救助了。
Hundreds of pandas ________________________ ever since.
⑥多亏了不断的努力，大熊猫的数量已经变得如此多，以至于它们已经被从“濒危”分类到“易危”了。
___________constant efforts, __________ of pandas has become so big ________ pandas have been classified ________ “endangered” ________ “vulnerable”．
have been saved/rescued
Thanks to
the number
that
from
to
4．整理成文 (注：黑体部分为本单元的重点词汇)
Dear Jim，
How is everything going Glad that you're so concerned about pandas, let me share related information with you.
As you know, pandas have long been an endangered animal and once close to being extinct. In order to protect them, dozens of conservation areas are set up so that their habitats won't be destroyed. Apart from that, not only have laws been passed to ban hunting pandas illegally but great efforts are made to rescue pandas in danger. Hundreds of pandas have been saved ever since.
Thanks to constant efforts, the number of pandas has become so big that pandas have been classified from “endangered” to “vulnerable”．
Yours，
Li Hua
5．写作练习
假设你是李华，为了保护环境，中国许多城市正在推行垃圾分类，请你向你校英文报纸投稿，介绍你们社区垃圾分类中的小故事，内容包括：
1．人们的看法；
2．人们的做法；
3．你的感想。
注意：词数80左右。
参考范文： (注：黑体部分为本单元的重点词汇)
Waste Sorting
Waste sorting has become a fashion in some cities. Having realized it's mankind that is to blame for the destruction of the environment, people are all in favor of it. People in my community all take an active part. For instance, some people volunteer to act as instructors, introducing ways of sorting rubbish. Others are involved in activities spreading knowledge of waste sorting.
I consider it a worthwhile project. In no case shall I avoid doing my own part．Section G 单元主题写作——环境保护
1．写作任务
假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Jim对保护大熊猫很关心，请你给他写一封邮件，介绍相关信息，内容包括：
1．保护措施；
2．取得的成就。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
How is everything going？
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
2．写作思路
(1)一审：体裁、结构和主题
体裁：应用文——信息介绍
结构：三段
主题：大熊猫保护
(2)二定：时态与人称
时态：一般现在时为主
人称：第三人称为主
(3)三明确：写作要点
①提出写作目的
②保护措施：建立保护区、制定法律、救助大熊猫
③取得成就：数量增加、由“濒危”到“易危”
3．素材整理
(1)关键词语
①be concerned about关注
②related information相关信息
③close to being extinct濒临灭绝
④dozens of数十个
⑤conservation areas保护区
⑥apart from除……之外
⑦ban hunting pandas illegally禁止非法猎杀大熊猫
⑧rescue pandas in danger拯救处于危险中的大熊猫
⑨thanks to constant efforts由于不懈的努力
⑩the number of pandas大熊猫的数量
be classified from “endangered” to “vulnerable”被从“濒危”分类到“易危”
(2)完成句子
①我很高兴你如此关注大熊猫，让我来跟你分享一下相关信息。
________ that you're so ________________ pandas, let me ________ related information with you.
②你知道，大熊猫一直都是濒危动物，曾经濒临灭绝。
________ you know, pandas have long been an ________ animal and once _______________________________．
③为了保护大熊猫，数十个保护区被建立，这样它们的栖息地就不会被破坏了。
In order to protect pandas, ________________________ are set up ________________ their habitats won't be ________．
④不仅制定了法律禁止非法猎杀大熊猫，而且还努力救助处于危险中的大熊猫。
Not only ________________________ to ban hunting pandas illegally, ________ great efforts are made to ________ pandas in danger.
⑤已经有数百只大熊猫被救助了。
Hundreds of pandas ________________________ ever since.
⑥多亏了不断的努力，大熊猫的数量已经变得如此多，以至于它们已经被从“濒危”分类到“易危”了。
________________ constant efforts, ________________ of pandas has become so big ________ pandas have been classified ________ “endangered” ________ “vulnerable”．
4．整理成文
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5．写作练习
假设你是李华，为了保护环境，中国许多城市正在推行垃圾分类，请你向你校英文报纸投稿，介绍你们社区垃圾分类中的小故事，内容包括：
1．人们的看法；
2．人们的做法；
3．你的感想。
注意：词数80左右。
Waste Sorting
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Section G 单元主题写作——环境保护
3．素材整理
(2)①Glad; concerned about; share
②As; endangered; close to being extinct
③dozens of conservation areas; so that; destroyed
④are laws made; but; rescue/save
⑤have been saved/rescued
⑥Thanks to; the number; that; from; to
4．整理成文
(注：黑体部分为本单元的重点词汇)
Dear Jim，
How is everything going Glad that you're so concerned about pandas, let me share related information with you.
As you know, pandas have long been an endangered animal and once close to being extinct. In order to protect them, dozens of conservation areas are set up so that their habitats won't be destroyed. Apart from that, not only have laws been passed to ban hunting pandas illegally but great efforts are made to rescue pandas in danger. Hundreds of pandas have been saved ever since.
Thanks to constant efforts, the number of pandas has become so big that pandas have been classified from “endangered” to “vulnerable”．
Yours，
Li Hua
5．写作练习
参考范文：
(注：黑体部分为本单元的重点词汇)
Waste Sorting
Waste sorting has become a fashion in some cities. Having realized it's mankind that is to blame for the destruction of the environment, people are all in favor of it. People in my community all take an active part. For instance, some people volunteer to act as instructors, introducing ways of sorting rubbish. Others are involved in activities spreading knowledge of waste sorting.
I consider it a worthwhile project. In no case shall I avoid doing my own part．
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