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——如何让对话高级起来
一．对话标签的位置
她说，“我想和你一起去，但我还没有完成家庭作业。”
这句话用英语，从句式结构的角度来看，怎么表达呢？特别是对话标签 she said 的位置变化。
1. 对话标签在前
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2. 对话标签在后
________________________________________________________________________________________
3. 对话标签在句子中间
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*注意：第 2,3 种情况,对话标签在后或者在句子中间时,如果主语是名词，则可以倒装;而代词不可以倒装.比如：
“I would like to go with you, but I haven’t finished my homework.”_____________./Sue said.
“I would like to go with you,”_____________/ Sue said, “but I haven’t finished my homework.”
“I would like to go with you, but I haven’t finished my homework.”said she.
二．众“说”纷纭
轻声说
（低声说出) 常指耳语、窃窃私语 _____________
(喃喃自语) 多指别人不易听到的低语____________
小声地悄悄地传开,八卦 _________ 抱怨着说________________________
咕哝__________/_______________ 安慰说_________
呻吟着说_______/______________
大声说
尖叫________ 叫喊________ 喊叫________ 呼喊_______________
尖叫，尖声说______________ 喊叫着说_____________ 惊叫___________
咆哮________ 低吼，咆哮_________ 低沉地怒吼___________ 叫骂，叫喊____________
建议说
建议______/________/__________/___________/_____________________________
主张，认为________ 警告_______/___________
权威命令说
宣布_______/__________ 声称________/_________ 命令________
结巴说
_____________/____________/_____________
问与答
询问________/________/______________________
质问_________/__________
回答道_________/__________/_________________
其他说
补充说道___________= 继续说道_________ 解释道____________
抗议道_________ 哭诉道,呜咽着说__________ 承诺道,保证道__________/_________
坚持说____________ 重复地说___________ 气喘吁吁地说__________
齐声说___________ 指出_______/_________ 评述说______/_______/_________
发誓___________ 强调说_________/___________反驳道___________
恳求说__________ 否认道___________ 喋喋不休，唠叨_________
厉声说，不耐烦或怒气冲冲地说_________ 责备说__________
心想，暗自思忖_______/____________(短语) 叹气说_________
三．对点练习
1. “I've been waiting for you,” ________________________________________.
“我一直在等你，”她微笑着说。
2.Next, he turned to Mike and ___________, “Give me a rock!”
接着，他转向迈克喊道:“给我一块石头!”
3. Then Ashley __________, “Well, let’s go and see!”
然后艾希礼继续说:“好吧，我们去看看吧! "
4.I did finish my work," _________________.
“我真的完成了工作。”他强调说。
5.“It is all your fault!" ___________.
“那都是你的错!” 他反驳说。
6.He is a fine young man," ___________.
“他是一位优秀的年轻人，”斯蒂芬评论道。
7.He ________________ “I miss you.”
他又温柔的说了一句:“我想念你。”
8.Lily ___________ the child gently for being naughty.
Lily轻声责备了那个调皮的孩子
9.“Nobody could understand me!” Andy _________, burying his face in his hands.
“没人能理解我!”安迪用手捂着脸啜泣着。
She tiptoed into the room and _________________, “I looked at every plant and I know I got the best one!”
她蹑手蹑脚地走进房间，轻声对我说:“我看过每一株植物，我知道我得到的是最好的!”
11.孩子们兴奋地，没完没了地谈论着第二天的活动。
The children __________ to each other excitedly about the next day’s event.
四．让不同的“说”锦上添花
1.“Do you know the answer ” _______________________.
“你知道答案吗？”他急切地说。
2. “Of course,” _______________________.
“当然,”南希笑着回答。
3.The children _____________, “Happy Mother’s Day!”
孩子们大声说：“母亲节快乐！”
4.“I won’t let you down,” _____________________________________________.
他信心十足地回答道，“我不会让你失望的。”
5.“I didn’t get an ideal score in the math exam, ” _______________________________________.
“我在数学考试中没有得到理想的分数，”莉莉失望地说。
6.“Time to go.” __________________________________________________.
“该出发了。”我轻声对小女孩说，希望她能立马跟上。
7.“I...I don’t know,” _____________________________________________________.
“我......我不知道。”他结结巴巴地说，声音因恐惧而颤抖。
8.“I'll get us some coffee,” _____________________________________________________.
“我去给我们拿点咖啡，”她说着朝厨房走去。
9.“ He turned me out of the room this morning, ” ________________________________________________.
早上他把我赶出了房间，”詹姆斯激动的跺着脚说
10.“I don't believe you any more.” _____________________________________________________.
“我再也不相信你了。”他转过身，砰的一声关上门，冲了出去。
11.James _____________________________________________________.
James 轻轻地说了声“谢谢”后一路跑回了家。
12. _____________________________________________________, “That's true.
他停下来，直视着她的眼睛，平静地说:“那是真的。”
13.“Drive safely," _____________________________________________________.
“小心开车，”他说着挥手告别。
14.What a beauty!” _____________________________________________________.
“多美啊!”护士走到门口时说道。
15.“Watch out!” _____________________________________________________.
“当心!”当汽车开始移动时，她喊道。
16.“I was attacked by a wolf and I thought I would never see you again.” __________________________.
“我被狼袭击了，我以为再也见不到你了。”麦克抱着他们，大哭起来。
17. __________________________________with an announcement: “The deadline to enter for the Competition is tomorrow.”
他用一则通知打断了沉默:“报名参加比赛的截止日期是明天。”
五．巩固练习：把下面的语篇补充完整。
That night the boss came home to his 14-year-old son. The father 1._______________________ (兴奋地告诉儿子) that he was given a blue ribbon by his manager，which made him surprised. He said,“It's amazing that 2. ____________________ (他解释道) how he admired me,thinking me a creative genius.”The boy 3. _____________________ (低声含糊地说着什么) , as if he had heard nothing.“As I was driving home,I thought I should honor you with the blue ribbon,”the father raised his voice in a certain tone.
“My days are really busy and I don 't pay a lot of attention to you,” 4._____________________(爸爸继续道).“I really shouldn't have ignored you.”5._____________________(爸爸叹着气说) and put the ribbon in the boy's hand.The boy hugged his father and started sobbing(啜泣).“You really make a difference to me, which is from the bottom of my heart,” 6. _____________________ (爸爸说着鼓励的话).The boy raised his head and 7. _____________________ (喃喃地说了声谢谢) with tears in his eyes，“Dad,I was the boy who gave your manager a ribbon.”(共22张PPT)
Continuation Writing
—如何让对话高级起来
1. “ Matthew Cuthbert, who’s that ” she asked. “Where is the boy ”
2. “No boy! But there must have been a boy,” insisted Marilla. “We sent word to Mrs Spencer to bring a boy.”
3.Finally Marilla stepped in to try to comfort the child. “Well, well, there is no need to cry so about it.”
4. “Yes, there is need!” The child raised her head, revealing a tear-stained face.
5. “Good night,” she said, a little awkwardly, but not unkindly.
一. Translation Practice
她说，“我想和你一起去，但我还没有完成家庭作业。”
1. 对话标签在前 She said, “I would like to go with you, but I haven’t finished my homework.”
2. 对话标签在后 “I would like to go with you, but I haven’t finished my homework.”She said.
3. 对话标签在句子中间 “I would like to go with you,”she said, “but I haven’t finished my homework.”
*注意：
第 2,3 种情况,对话标签在后或者在句子中间时，如果主语是名词，则可以倒装；而代词不可以倒装。比如：
2) “I would like to go with you, but I haven’t finished my homework.”
Tom said./____________
3) “I would like to go with you,” Tom said, /________, “but I haven’t finished my homework.”
“I would like to go with you, but I haven’t finished my homework.”said she.
said Tom .
said Tom
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二．众“说”纷纭
1.轻声说
（低声说出) 常指耳语、窃窃私语 _____________ (喃喃自语) 多指别人不易听到的低语____________小声地悄悄地传开,八卦 _________ 抱怨着说________________________咕哝__________/_______________ 安慰说_________ 呻吟着说_______/______________
2. 大声说
尖叫________ 叫喊________ 喊叫________ 呼喊_______________尖叫，尖声说______________ 喊叫着说_____________ 惊叫___________咆哮________ 低吼，咆哮_________ 低沉地怒吼___________ 叫骂，叫喊____________
3. 建议说
建议______/________/__________/___________/__________
张主，认为________ 警告_______/___________
4.正式命令说
宣布_______/__________ 声称________/_________ 命令________
5.结巴说____________/____________/_____________
6. 问与答
询问________/________/______________________质问_________/__________回答道
4.正式命令说
宣布_______/__________ 声称________/_________ 命令________
5.结巴说____________/____________/_____________
6. 问与答
询问________/________/______________________质问_________/__________回答道
7. 其他说
补充说道___________= 继续说道_________ 解释道____________抗议道_________ 哭诉道,呜咽着说__________ 承诺道,保证道__________/_________坚持说____________ 重复地说___________ 气喘吁吁地说__________齐声说___________ 指出_______/_________ 评述说______/_______/_________发誓___________ 强调说_________/___________反驳道___________恳求说__________ 否认道___________ 喋喋不休，唠叨_________厉声说，不耐烦或怒气冲冲地说_________ 责备说__________心想，暗自思忖_______/____________(短语) 叹气说_________
1.轻声说
（低声说出) 常指耳语、窃窃私语 whisper
(喃喃自语) 多指别人不易听到的低语 murmur/mutter小声地悄悄地传开,八卦 gossip 抱怨着说complain/moan/grumble
咕哝mumble/grunt 安慰说comfort 呻吟着说groan/moan
2. 大声说
尖叫scream 叫喊cry 喊叫call 呼喊shout尖叫，尖声说shrill 喊叫着说yell 惊叫exclaim
咆哮roar 低吼，咆哮snarl 低沉地怒吼growl
叫骂，叫喊bark
3. 建议说
建议 advise/propose/suggest/offer/recommend
主张，认为 argue 警告warn/caution
4.正式命令说
宣布announce/declare 声称claim/state 命令 order
5.结巴说
stammer/stutter/stumble
6. 问与答
询问 ask / inquire/ enquire
质问 question
回答道 reply/answer/respond
add补充说道= continue继续说道 explain 解释道
protest抗议道 sob哭诉道,呜咽着说 promise承诺道
insist坚持说 repeat v. 重复地说 gasp 气喘吁吁地说
chorus 齐声说 note/point out 指出
评论说observe/comment/remark 发誓 swear
否认道deny 强调说 stress/emphasize
喋喋不休，唠叨chatter 叹气说sigh
厉声说，不耐烦或怒气冲冲地说 snap 责备说scold心想，暗自思忖think to oneself/think aloud/say to oneself(短语)
7. 其他说
三.对点练习
1. “I've been waiting for you,” she said with a smile.“我一直在等你，”她微笑着说。 2.Next, he turned to Mike and yelled, “Give me a rock!”接着，他转向迈克喊道:“给我一块石头!” 3. Then Ashley continued, “Well, let’s go and see!”然后艾希礼继续说:“好吧，我们去看看吧! " 4.I did finish my work," he emphasized. “我真的完成了工作。”他强调说。
5.“It is all your fault!" he retorted. “那都是你的错!” 他反驳说。
6.He is a fine young man," observed Stephen.“他是一位优秀的年轻人，”斯蒂芬评论道。
7.He added softly “I miss you.”他又温柔的说了一句:“我想念你。”
8.Lily scolded the child gently for being naughty.Lily轻声责备了那个调皮的孩子
9.“Nobody could understand me!” Andy sobbed, burying his face in his hands.“没人能理解我!”安迪用手捂着脸啜泣着。
10.She tiptoed into the room and whispered to me, “I looked at every plant and I know I got the best one!”她蹑手蹑脚地走进房间，轻声对我说:“我看过每一株植物，我知道我得到的是最好的!”
11.孩子们兴奋地，没完没了地谈论着第二天的活动。The children chattered to each other excitedly about the next day’s event.
四.锦上添花
1.“Do you know the answer ” he said with eagerness.“你知道答案吗？”他急切地说。 2. “Of course,” Nancy replied with a smile.“当然,”南希笑着回答。
3.The children said loudly, “Happy Mother’s Day!”孩子们大声说：“母亲节快乐！”4.“I won’t let you down,” he replied confidently.他信心十足地回答道，“我不会让你失望的。”
5.“I didn’t get an ideal score in the math exam, ”said Lily, disappointed.“我在数学考试中没有得到理想的分数，”莉莉失望地说。
with + n.
“说” + adv.
“说” + adj. 做伴随状语
6.“Time to go.” I whispered to the girl, wishing she could follow me right away.“该出发了。”我轻声对小女孩说，希望她能立马跟上。
7.“I...I don’t know,” he stuttered, his voice trembling with fear.“我......我不知道。”他结结巴巴地说，声音因恐惧而颤抖。
8.“I'll get us some coffee,” she said, heading for the kitchen.“我去给我们拿点咖啡，”她说着朝厨房走去。
9.“ He turned me out of the room this morning, ”said James, stamping his foot with excitement.早上他把我赶出了房间，”詹姆斯激动的跺着脚说。
“说” + 分词做伴随状语
“说” + 独立主格结构做伴随状语
10.“I don't believe you any more.” He turned around, slammed the door and stormed out.“我再也不相信你了。”他转过身，砰的一声关上门，冲了出去。
11.James murmured a thank you and ran home all the way.James 轻轻地说了声“谢谢”后一路跑回了家。
12.He paused, looked straight into her eyes, and said in a quiet voice, “That's true.他停下来，直视着她的眼睛，平静地说:“那是真的。”
13.“Drive safely," he said, and waved goodbye.“小心开车，”他说着挥手告别。
说与其他动词并列做谓语，干净利落
14.What a beauty!” said the nurse when she came to the door.“多美啊!”护士走到门口时说道。
15.“Watch out!” she shouted, as the car started to move.“当心!”当汽车开始移动时，她喊道。
16.“I was attacked by a wolf and I thought I would never see you again.” Mac hugged them and burst out crying.“我被狼袭击了，我以为再也见不到你了。”麦克抱着他们，大哭起来。
“说” + 状语从句让语句达意并能营造画面感
五.语境练习
That night the boss came home to his 14-year-old son. The father 1._______________________________ (兴奋地告诉儿子) that he was given a blue ribbon by his manager，which made him surprised. He said,“It's amazing that 2. ____________________ (他解释道) how he admired me,thinking me a creative genius.”The boy 3. ___________________________________ (低声含糊地说着什么) , as if he had heard nothing.“As I was driving home,I thought I should honor you with the blue ribbon,”the father raised his voice in a certain tone. “My days are really busy and I don 't pay a lot of attention to you,” 4._______________________(爸爸继续道).“I really shouldn't have ignored you.”5._____________________(爸爸叹着气说) and put the ribbon in the boy's hand.The boy hugged his father and started sobbing(啜泣).“You really make a difference to me, which is from the bottom of my heart,” 6. ____________________________ (爸爸说着鼓励的话).The boy raised his head and 7. ________________________________ (喃喃地说了声谢谢) with tears in his eyes，“Dad,I was the boy who gave your manager a ribbon.”
told his son in an excited voice
he explained
muttered something between his teeth
continued the father
The father sighed
the father spoke words of comfort
murmured a thank you
Homework
You are going to write
a continuation of the story Anne of Green Gables.
