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期末必背英语满分作文-2025译林版英语七年级下册
简介:
这是一份专为译林版七年级英语下册教材编写的作文辅导资料。该资料紧密结合教材单元话题,旨在帮助学生在期末考试中取得优异的英语写作成绩。
一、内容特点
紧扣教材单元话题:每个作文题目都与教材单元话题紧密相连,如“My Dream Home”对应教材中关于“家”的话题,让学生在写作中巩固所学知识。
覆盖多种写作类型:包括描述性写作(如“My Dream Home”)、叙事性写作(如端午节经历)、说明性写作(如介绍家乡、动物等)和议论性写作(如健康生活),全面提高学生的写作能力。
提供详细写作指导:每个题目都配有思维导图或写作提示,帮助学生梳理写作思路,确保写作要点全面覆盖。
附有高质量范文:每个题目都提供了精心编写的范文,供学生参考学习。范文语言规范、结构清晰、内容丰富,能够激发学生的写作灵感。
二、教学价值
提高写作能力:通过系统练习,学生能够掌握不同类型的写作技巧,提高语言运用能力和逻辑思维能力。
增强应试能力:范文的结构和语言表达符合考试要求,学生通过学习和模仿,能够在考试中写出高质量的作文,提高考试成绩。
培养文化意识:部分题目涉及中国传统节日和文化,如端午节、泰山等,有助于学生在写作中传播中国文化,增强文化自信。
三、使用建议
课堂讲解与练习:教师可以在课堂上讲解写作要点和范文,然后让学生进行写作练习,及时给予反馈和指导。
课后复习与巩固:学生可以在课后复习写作要点,背诵范文,加深对写作技巧的理解和记忆。
模拟考试与评估:教师可以将这些作文题目作为模拟考试题目,让学生在规定时间内完成写作,然后进行评估和讲解,帮助学生熟悉考试流程和要求。
一、书面表达
1.假如一家报社正在举行题目为“My Dream Home”的征文活动,请根据下面的思维导图描述你的梦想家园。要求必须包括所有要点提示,并作适当发挥;词数80左右;不得使用真实姓名、校名等。
My Dream Home
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【答案】例文
My Dream Home
My dream home is a big house at the foot of a hill. There are many trees and flowers around it. Every day, I can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing. It is far from the city centre, so I need take a bus or drive there.
There are two floors in my house. On the ground floor, there is a kitchen and a home cinema. I can have meals and watch films at the same time. On the first floor, there are six rooms. My friends can come and stay with me together at the weekend. I have many neighbours and they are friendly and helpful. We often help each other.
This is my dream home. It is a good place to enjoy life.
2.题目: 假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Emma想了解你所在社区的变化。请根据以下提示,用英语写一封电子邮件,介绍社区的过去和现在,并谈谈你对变化的感受。
提示:
1. 过去:老旧、道路狭窄、设施少;
2. 现在:新建高楼、道路宽阔、有公园/图书馆/健身房等;
3. 你的感受。
写作要求:
1. 文中须包含所有要点,可适当发挥;
2. 不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数70左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Emma,
I’m glad to tell you about the changes in my community.
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【答案】参考范文:
Dear Emma,
I’m glad to tell you about the changes in my community. It was old and small in the past. The roads were narrow, and there were few facilities. But now, many tall buildings have been built. The roads are wide and clean, and there is a new park, a library, and a gym. People can exercise or read books here. I really love the changes because they make our life more convenient and enjoyable.
Yours,
Li Hua
3.我有一个美国笔友叫Millie,她想了解我的家乡。请根据下面提示以“Welcome to My Hometown”为题目,写一篇英语短文。
提示:
1. 我的家乡是一个漂亮的小城,在江苏省的中部,有着悠久的历史;
2. 人们乐于助人并且友好相处,早晨人们在公园步行、骑车……(至少补充一点)。我最喜欢动物园,里面有……(至少补充一点);
3. 如果你想更多地了解靖江的民间艺术,不要错过这里的演出,还可以……(至少补充一点)
要求:
1. 表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯; 2. 要点须包括表格中的所有信息;
3. 词数:100字左右。
Welcome to My Hometown
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【答案】例文
Welcome to My Hometown
My hometown is a beautiful small city in the middle of Jiangsu Province. With a long history, it’s full of charm.
The best part about it is the people here. They are very kind and always ready to help each other. They live together happily, just like a big family. In the morning, the park becomes lively. Many people go there to exercise. Some walk slowly, enjoying the fresh air; some ride bikes around, while others run to keep fit. My favorite place is the zoo. When you enter it, you can see many cute animals. Pandas are my favorite. They look so lovely when they eat bamboo. Monkeys are very smart and funny; they always make people laugh.
If you want to know more about Jingjiang’s traditional art, don’t miss the local shows. They are really wonderful. Besides, you can visit the local museums. There, you will see old things and learn interesting stories about our city. I hope you can visit my hometown soon and have a great time here!
4.端午节是中国四大传统节日之一,具有丰富的风俗和传统文化。你在今年的端午节做了什么有意义的事情呢?你的感受怎么样?请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文,介绍一下你今年的端午节吧。
提示:1.What did you do 2.How did you feel
WORD BANKtraditional adj. 传统的poet n. 诗人culture n. 文化celebrate v. 庆祝
要求:1.词数70左右;2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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【答案】One Possible Version:
As we all know, the Dragon Boat Festival is one of the traditional festivals in China. We celebrate it to remember the great poet, Qu Yuan.
On the morning of this Dragon Boat Festival, I learned to make zongzi from my mom. It was a little difficult for me to wrap the rice and in bamboo leaves. The zongzi made by me didn’t look so nice but tasted delicious. In the afternoon, I saw the dragon boat races with my parents along the Fenhe River. They were exciting and we all felt happy.
All in all, I can get a lot of joy by celebrating the Dragon Boat Festival.
5.假设你是李华,想要参加下周学校举行的主题为“My favourite animal”的英文写作比赛,请写一篇参赛稿。
内容包括:
1.你喜欢的动物。
2.讲述理由。
3.你对动物的了解与感受。
要求:
1.词数80左右。
2.可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称
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【答案】参考范文
Hi, everyone! I am Li Hua. I love animals.
I want to introduce my favourite animal to you. My favourite animal is dogs. I have a dog. Its name is Wangwang. It is a yellow one. It often sleeps on the floor and it’s strong. It likes playing with balls and eating meat. It doesn’t like to be active at night, but it likes to make noise. I love dogs because they are helpful. They can help us look after our houses. And they are our friends.
What’s more, dogs are very smart. They can learn to do many things. Do you love them
6. 你校英语网站正在举办一次英文写作竞赛活动,主题是介绍我国的自然旅游胜地。请你以“Mount Taishan: A Cultural and Natural Gem”为题,写一篇介绍泰山的短文参赛。文章需要包括以下要点:
概况 ·位于中国山东省中部·大约1,545米高·中国五岳之一
美景 ·高高的悬崖、古老的松树和云海·“旭日东升”和“晚霞夕照”尤其著名
游览 ·可以探索历史遗迹·有通往山顶的台阶和小路,以及缆车服务
参考词汇:the Five Sacred Mountains五岳;cliff 悬崖;Sunset Glow晚霞夕照;historical site历史遗迹
要求:
1.短文包括所有要点提示,可适当发挥。
2.词数:80左右。
Mount Taishan: A Cultural and Natural Gem_
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【答案】例文
Mount Taishan: A Cultural and Natural Gem
Mount Taishan lies in the middle of Shandong Province, China. It is about 1,545 metres high. It is one of the Five Sacred Mountains of China.
The mountain is famous for its beautiful views, such as high cliffs, ancient pine trees, and the sea of clouds. The “Sunrise from the East” and “Sunset Glow” are among the most famous views.
Visitors can visit historical sites. They can walk up paths and steps to the top or take a cable car up and down.
7.健康是人生的第一财富。我校英文报发起了以“How to keep a healthy life ”为题的征文活动。请根据下图的图示写一篇英语短文投稿,谈谈你的看法。
要求:要点齐全,书写工整;可以适当发挥,不少于80 词。
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【答案】例文:
How to Keep a Healthy Life
“Health is the first wealth in life.” To keep a healthy life, we should pay attention to several aspects.
First, good eating habits are crucial. We should eat more fruits like bananas, which are rich in nutrients. Second, we need to develop exercise habits. Just like the running person in the picture, regular exercise can make us stronger. Third, having good sleeping habits is also important. Getting enough sleep helps us stay energetic.
Besides these, there may be other factors we haven’t listed. In a word, only by keeping a healthy life can we enjoy a better future.
8.假如你叫李华,你们班正在进行题为“My Favourite Book”的读书分享活动。你最喜欢的书是两年前父亲送你的《西游记》(Journey to the West)。请你根据下面提示内容,写一篇发言稿在课堂上分享。
提示:
(1) How did you get the book
(2) Who is your favourite character What’s he like
(3) What can you learn from the book
要求:
(1)发言稿需包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
(2)不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名;
(3)词数80左右。 (开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数)
Dear classmates,
I’m glad to be here to share my favourite book, Journey to the West. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thanks for your attention!
【答案】例文
Dear classmates,
I’m glad to be here to share my favourite book, Journey to the West. My father bought it for me as a gift at the beginning of my junior high school.The Monkey King is my favourite character in the traditional Chinese book. He is not an ordinary monkey. In fact, he sometimes doesn’t even look like a monkey! He keeps fighting to help the weak and never gives up.
After reading this book, I learned to try my best to reach my goal although sometimes it is really difficult. I also learned the importance of teamwork.
That’s all. Thanks for your attention!