人教版英语八年级下册期末冲刺--书面表达写作指导学案（含词汇句式）

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八年级下册期末书面表达写作指导
话题一：An Accident I Experienced
在日常生活中，我们难免会遇到一些意外。请以 "An Accident I Experienced" 为题，写一篇短文，描述你经历过的一次意外。内容包括：
意外发生的时间和地点；
意外发生的经过；
你从中得到的启示。
要求：词数 80 左右；语句通顺，意思连贯；文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
1. 审题
时态：讲述过去发生的意外，全文使用一般过去时。
人称：以第一人称 “I” 叙述经历。
内容拆解：明确写出意外发生的具体时间、地点；详细描述意外发生的经过，包括起因、过程和结果；阐述从这次意外中获得的启示，如安全意识的重要性等。
2. 遣词造句
必备词汇：accident（意外）、happen（发生）、
hurt（受伤）、careless（粗心的）、realize（意识到）
高分词组搭配
slip and fall（滑倒）
call for help（呼救）
rush to the scene（冲向现场）
first aid（急救）
learn a valuable lesson（吸取宝贵教训）
3.高分句型：
It was + 时间 + when the accident happened.
I was doing... when suddenly... （描述意外发生瞬间）
From this accident, I learned that...
It happened that...（碰巧……）
Eg:It happened that I was walking home alone when...
To my surprise/relief...（令我惊讶/欣慰的是……）
Eg:To my relief, a passerby immediately offered first aid.
句式模板：The accident taught me that ______ (启示). From then on, I have always ______ (行动).
4. 参考范文
An Accident I Experienced
（基础版）
Last Monday afternoon, on my way home from school, an accident happened to me. I was riding my bike quickly when I suddenly hit a stone and fell off. My knees were badly hurt, and I couldn't stand up. A kind passer-by helped me and sent me to the hospital.
From this accident, I learned that I should always be careful when riding and follow the traffic rules.
An Accident I Experienced（进阶版）
It was a sunny afternoon last Monday when the accident happened. I was running in a hurry to the classroom after PE class, chatting and laughing with my classmates.
Suddenly, I didn’t notice a small stone on the ground. Before I could react, I slipped and fell hard. My knees were scraped badly, and blood started to flow. I felt a sharp pain and couldn't stand up. To my relief, several classmates rushed to the scene immediately. They called for help and some even helped me with simple first aid. Soon, the teacher came and sent me to the school clinic.
From this accident, I learned that being careless can lead to unexpected troubles. The accident taught me that safety should always come first. From then on, I have always been more careful when walking, especially in a hurry. I also realized that kindness from others can bring warmth in difficult times.
话题二：My Volunteer Experience
作为一名中学生，你一定参加过一些志愿活动。请以 "My Volunteer Experience" 为题，写一篇短文，描述你一次难忘的志愿经历。内容包括：
志愿活动的时间和地点；
你在活动中做了什么；
你的感受和收获。
要求：词数 80 左右；语句通顺，意思连贯；文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
1. 审题
时态：描述过去的志愿活动，用一般过去时。
人称：第一人称 “I”。
内容拆解：说明志愿活动的时间和地点；具体描述在活动中做的事情；分享自己在活动中的感受和收获，如学会关爱他人、增强责任感等。
2. 遣词造句
必备词汇：volunteer（志愿）、experience（经历）、help（帮助）、teach（教）、meaningful（有意义的）
高分词组搭配 ：
participate in（参与）
community service（社区服务）
distribute supplies（分发物资）
feel a sense of achievement（感到成就感）
broaden one’s horizons（开阔眼界）
3.高分句型：
It was a meaningful experience to...
I spent... time doing... in the volunteer activity.
Through this activity, I realized that...
Not only did I ______, but I also ______.（我不仅……还……）
Eg:Not only did I help clean the park, but I also learned about teamwork.
It was _____ that made me realize ____.（正是让我意识到……）
Eg:It was the smiles of the elderly that made me realize the value of kindness.
This experience has shown me that ______ (收获). I will continue to ______ (未来行动).
4. 参考范文
My Volunteer Experience（基础版）
Last Sunday, I went to an old people's home as a volunteer. When I got there, I first helped clean the rooms. Then I sat beside the old people and listened to their stories. Some of them were so interesting.
I felt very happy that day. This experience taught me to care about others and made me more responsible.
My Volunteer Experience（进阶版）
Last Sunday, I participated in a community service at an old people’s home. It was truly a meaningful experience that I will never forget.
When I arrived, I spent the whole morning helping clean the rooms and distribute fresh fruits to the elderly. Then, I sat beside them, listening to their life stories with great interest. Some of the stories were about their youth, filled with joys and challenges. I also taught an old lady how to use a smartphone to video - call her grandson. Seeing the big smile on her face when she finally connected with him made me feel a strong sense of achievement.
Through this activity, I realized that even small acts of kindness can bring warmth to others. This experience has shown me that helping those in need makes life more fulfilling. I will continue to take part in volunteer work in the future, as it not only broadens my horizons but also makes me a more caring person.
话题三：Should Teenagers Do Chores at Home
在日常生活中，做家务是每个人的责任。请以 "Should Teenagers Do Chores at Home " 为题，写一篇短文，谈谈你对青少年在家做家务的看法。内容包括：
你的观点；
支持你观点的原因；
举例说明。
要求：词数 80 左右；语句通顺，意思连贯；文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
审题
时态：表达观点和陈述原因，用一般现在时。
人称：可使用第一人称阐述观点，也可用第三人称客观论述。
内容拆解：明确表明自己对青少年在家做家务的观点，支持或反对；给出支持观点的原因，如培养独立性、减轻父母负担等；通过具体例子进行说明 。
2. 写作大纲分析
开头：提出问题并表明观点。
中间：分点阐述原因，如 “First, doing chores helps teenagers become independent.” 。
结尾：总结强调观点，如 “All in all, teenagers should do chores at home.”。
3. 遣词造句
必备词汇：chores（家务）、teenager（青少年）、independent（独立的）、responsibility（责任）、helpful（有帮助的）
高分词组搭配 ：
develop responsibility（培养责任感）
essential life skills（必备生活技能）
reduce parents’ burden（减轻父母负担）
foster independence（培养独立性）
contribute to the family（为家庭做贡献）
4.高分句型：
In my opinion,...
There are several reasons why...
For example,... shows that...
There is no doubt that ______. （毫无疑问……）
Eg:There is no doubt that doing chores builds self-discipline.
Take ______ as an example.（以……为例）
Eg:Take cooking simple meals as an example—it prepares teens for future independence.
In my view, teenagers should ______ because ______ (原因).
For instance, when I ______ (举例), I learned ______.
4. 参考范文
Should Teenagers Do Chores at Home （基础版）
In my opinion, teenagers should do chores at home. First, doing chores helps them learn to be independent. They can take care of themselves in the future. Second, it can reduce parents' burden. My parents work all day, so I often help them wash the dishes and clean the floor.
All in all, doing chores is helpful for teenagers' growth.
Should Teenagers Do Chores at Home （进阶版）
In my opinion, teenagers should definitely do chores at home. There are several reasons why I hold this view.
First, doing chores helps teenagers develop responsibility and essential life skills. Cooking simple meals, for example, teaches them how to take care of themselves. When I started helping my mom wash the dishes every day, I learned the importance of tidiness and teamwork. Second, it reduces parents’ burden. Most parents work all day, and sharing household tasks like sweeping the floor or folding clothes can make family life more harmonious. Finally, doing chores fosters independence. Teenagers who learn to manage daily tasks early are better prepared for future challenges.
There is no doubt that contributing to the family through chores benefits teenagers in many ways. All in all, it’s not just a chore—it’s a valuable life lesson.
话题四：How to Get on Well with Friends
在生活中，我们难免会和朋友发生矛盾。请以 "How to Get on Well with Friends" 为题，写一篇短文，谈谈如何与朋友友好相处。内容包括：
与朋友相处的重要性；
与朋友相处的方法（至少两种）；
你与朋友相处的经历或感受。
要求：词数 80 左右；语句通顺，意思连贯；文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
1.审题
时态：阐述方法和感受，用一般现在时。
人称：第一人称或第三人称。
内容拆解：说明与朋友友好相处的重要性，如能带来快乐、互相帮助等；列举至少两种与朋友相处的方法，如互相尊重、学会倾听；分享自己与朋友相处的经历或感受。
2. 写作大纲分析
开头：点明与朋友相处的重要性。
中间：分点列出相处方法，如 “Respect each other's opinions.” 。
结尾：结合自身经历总结感受，如 “With these ways, I have many good friends.”。
3. 遣词造句
必备词汇：friend（朋友）、get on well with（与... 友好相处）、respect（尊重）、listen（倾听）、share（分享）
高分词组搭配 ：
resolve conflicts（解决矛盾）
mutual respect（互相尊重）
honest communication（坦诚沟通）
apologize sincerely（真诚道歉）
strengthen friendships（增进友谊）
4.高分句型
It's important to... because...
One way to... is to...
From my experience, I know that...
It is crucial to ______, especially when ______.（……至关重要，尤其当……）
Eg:It is crucial to listen patiently, especially during disagreements.
By doing ______, we can ______.（通过……，我们能……）
By sharing feelings honestly, we can avoid misunderstandings.
Once, when I ______ (经历), I ______ (做法). This helped us ______ (结果).
5. 参考范文
How to Get on Well with Friends（基础版）
Getting on well with friends is very important. Good friends can bring us happiness and help us when we are in trouble.
There are many ways to get along with friends. First, we should respect each other's opinions. Second, we need to listen to them carefully. Once my friend was sad, and I just listened to her quietly. She felt much better later.
With these ways, I have many good friends and enjoy our time together.
How to Get on Well with Friends（进阶版）
It's important to get on well with friends because they bring joy and support to our lives. When we have good friendships, we always have someone to share happiness and troubles with.
There are several ways to build strong friendships. First, mutual respect is key. We should respect each other's opinions, hobbies, and differences. Even if we disagree, it is crucial to listen patiently, especially during arguments. Second, honest communication helps resolve conflicts. Whenever misunderstandings happen, we should talk openly and apologize sincerely. For example, once my friend and I had a fight about a group project. Instead of staying angry, we sat down and shared our thoughts honestly. This helped us understand each other better and finish the project successfully.
From my experience, I know that by applying these methods, we can strengthen friendships and enjoy lasting companionship. With mutual respect and open communication, I've built many meaningful friendships that bring warmth to my life.
话题五：An Unforgettable Storm
在生活中，我们会经历一些难忘的暴风雨时刻。请以 "An Unforgettable Storm" 为题，写一篇短文，描述一次让你难忘的暴风雨经历。内容包括：
暴风雨发生的时间和场景；
你和家人在暴风雨中的活动；
这次经历给你带来的感受或启示。
要求：词数 80 左右；语句通顺，意思连贯；文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
1. 审题
时态：描述过去的暴风雨经历，用一般过去时。
人称：第一人称。
内容拆解：说明暴风雨发生的时间和场景；描述自己和家人在暴风雨中的活动，如一起避险、互相安慰；表达这次经历带来的感受或启示，如感受到家人的重要性 。
2. 写作大纲分析
开头：描述暴风雨来临前的景象，引出时间和场景。
中间：叙述家人在暴风雨中的活动，加入环境描写和心理描写。
结尾：总结感受或启示，如 “Through this storm, I knew my family was always with me.”。
3. 遣词造句
必备词汇：storm（暴风雨）、heavy（猛烈的）、wind（风）、hide（躲藏）、unforgettable（难忘的）
高分词组搭配：
fierce wind and heavy rain（狂风暴雨）
lose electricity（断电）
stay indoors（待在室内）
light candles（点燃蜡烛）
bond with family（增进家人感情）
4.高分句型：
It was a/an... day when the storm came.
We were... while the storm was hitting...
This experience made me realize that...
No sooner had ______ than ______. （刚……就……）
Eg:No sooner had we closed the windows than the rain poured down.
Despite ______, we ______.（尽管……，我们……）
Eg:Despite the fear, we comforted each other by sharing stories.
This storm made me realize ______ (启示). Now, I always ______ (后续行动).
5. 参考范文
An Unforgettable Storm（基础版）
Last summer, a strong storm hit our city one evening. Dark clouds covered the sky, and the wind blew strongly. My family and I stayed at home. We closed all the windows and sat together in the living room, a little scared.
After the storm, we found many trees fallen down. This unforgettable experience made me understand that we should always be ready for difficulties and stay together with our family.
An Unforgettable Storm（进阶版）
It was dark and gloomy day when the storm came. Black clouds covered the sky, and the wind howled like a wild beast. No sooner had we closed all the windows than the rain poured down, hitting the glass with a fierce pounding.
My family and I huddled in the living room. When the electricity suddenly went out, we quickly lit candles. Despite the fear, we comforted each other by sharing funny stories. My parents told me not to be scared, and we stayed close together. While the storm was hitting hard outside, we sang songs and played card games to pass the time.
This unforgettable storm made me realize that family is the most precious thing in difficult times. It taught me that no matter how fierce the storm is, we can overcome it together. Now, I always cherish every moment with my family and feel grateful for their love and support.
话题六：My Favorite Story Character
在我们读过的故事中，有很多令人印象深刻的角色。请以 "My Favorite Story Character" 为题，写一篇短文，介绍你最喜欢的故事角色。内容包括：
你最喜欢的角色是谁；
这个角色来自哪个故事；
你喜欢这个角色的原因（至少两点）。
要求：词数 80 左右；语句通顺，意思连贯；文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
1. 审题
时态：介绍故事角色，用一般现在时。
人称：第三人称。
内容拆解：指出最喜欢的角色；说明角色来自哪个故事；阐述喜欢这个角色的至少两点原因，如勇敢、善良等。
2. 写作大纲分析
开头：直接点明最喜欢的角色。
中间：介绍角色来源，并分点说明喜欢的原因。
结尾：总结强调对该角色的喜爱，如 “That’s why I like... best.”。
3. 遣词造句
必备词汇：character（角色）、story（故事）、brave（勇敢的）、kind（善良的）、interesting（有趣的）
高分词组搭配：
demonstrate courage（展现勇气）
overcome obstacles（克服困难）
inspire readers（激励读者）
never give up（永不放弃）
leave a deep impression（留下深刻印象）
4.高分句型：
My favorite story character is...
He/She comes from...
I like... because... First,... Second,...
What impresses me most is ______.（最令我印象深刻的是）
Eg:What impresses me most is her determination to fight for justice.
Thanks to ______, I now ______.（多亏……，我现在……）
Eg:Thanks to this character, I now face challenges bravely.
From ______ (故事名), I learned that ______ (品质). Whenever I ______ (情境), I remember ______ (角色行为).
5. 参考范文
My Favorite Story Character（基础版）
My favorite story character is Harry Potter. He comes from the Harry Potter series. I like him for two reasons. First, he is very brave. He always fights against bad wizards without fear. Second, he is kind and helps his friends a lot.
Harry Potter teaches me to be brave and kind. That’s why I like him best.
My Favorite Story Character（进阶版）
My favorite story character is Harry Potter. He comes from the Harry Potter series written by J.K. Rowling. What impresses me most is his courage and kindness, which leave a deep impression on every reader.
I like Harry Potter because he always demonstrates incredible courage. Despite facing powerful dark wizards, he never gives up and bravely overcomes all obstacles. For example, in the fight against Voldemort, he risked his life to protect his friends and the wizarding world. Second, he is extremely kind. He always helps those in need, whether it’s saving his classmates from danger or comforting his friends in hard times.
Thanks to Harry Potter, I now face challenges bravely in my life. His spirit inspires me to be brave and kind. That’s why he is my favorite story character.
话题七：The Most Amazing Natural Wonder I Know
在我们生活的地球上，有很多神奇的自然景观和濒危动物。请以 "The Most Amazing Natural Wonder I Know" 为题，写一篇短文，介绍你知道的最神奇的自然景观。内容包括：
你介绍的自然景观是什么；
它的基本情况（如位置、大小、特点等）；
你为什么觉得它神奇。
要求：词数 80 左右；语句通顺，意思连贯；文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
1. 审题
时态：介绍自然景观，用一般现在时。
人称：第三人称。
内容拆解：说出知道的最神奇的自然景观；介绍其位置、大小、特点等基本情况；说明觉得它神奇的原因，如独特的外观、壮观的景象等。
2. 写作大纲分析
开头：引出要介绍的自然景观。
中间：详细描述景观的基本情况和神奇之处。
结尾：总结表达对该景观的赞美，如 “It’s really an amazing natural wonder.”。
3. 遣词造句
必备词汇：natural wonder（自然景观）、location（位置）、amazing（神奇的）、beautiful（美丽的）、unique（独特的）
高分词组搭配 ：
breathtaking scenery（令人惊叹的景色）
natural masterpiece（自然杰作）
stretch across（横跨）
unique geological features（独特地质特征）
preserve the environment（保护环境）
4.高分句型：
The most amazing natural wonder I know is...
It is located in... and it is... (size)
What makes it amazing is...
It is believed that ______.（人们认为……）
Eg: It is believed that this wonder was formed millions of years ago.
Nothing compares to ______.（无与伦比……）
Eg: Nothing compares to seeing the sunrise over its peaks.
What makes it truly magical is ______ (特点). This wonder reminds us to ______ (环保呼吁).
5. 参考范文
The Most Amazing Natural Wonder I Know（基础版）
The most amazing natural wonder I know is the Grand Canyon. It is located in the United States. It is about 446 kilometers long and up to 29 kilometers wide.
What makes it amazing is its huge size and colorful rocks. When you look down into the canyon, you will be surprised by its beauty. It’s really an amazing natural wonder.
The Most Amazing Natural Wonder I Know（进阶版）
The most amazing natural wonder I know is the Grand Canyon. It is located in Arizona, the United States, and stretches across about 446 kilometers long, up to 29 kilometers wide and over 1.6 kilometers deep. This natural masterpiece has unique geological features formed over millions of years.
What makes it amazing is its breathtaking scenery. The colorful layers of rock tell the story of Earth’s history, and the view from the rim is simply unforgettable. The bright red and orange cliffs contrast sharply with the blue sky, creating a sight that nothing compares to. It is believed that the canyon was carved by the Colorado River, which adds to its mysterious charm.
This wonder reminds us to preserve the environment. Its beauty is a precious gift of nature. Truly, the Grand Canyon is an amazing natural wonder that everyone should see at least once.
话题八：The Most Interesting Place I’ve Ever Been to
在我们去过的地方中，一定有一些让你印象深刻的。请以 "The Most Interesting Place I’ve Ever Been to" 为题，写一篇短文，介绍你去过的最有趣的地方。内容包括：
你去过的最有趣的地方是哪里；
你在那里做了什么；
你为什么觉得它有趣。
要求：词数 80 左右；语句通顺，意思连贯；文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
1. 审题
时态：描述过去的经历，用一般过去时；介绍地点特点，用一般现在时。
人称：第一人称。
内容拆解：说出去过的最有趣的地方；描述在那里做的事情；阐述觉得它有趣的原因，如独特的文化、好玩的活动等。
2. 写作大纲分析
开头：点明最有趣的地方。
中间：叙述在该地的活动和感受，结合当地特色。
结尾：总结表达对这个地方的喜爱，如 “I hope to visit there again.”。
3. 遣词造句
必备词汇：place（地方）、interesting（有趣的）、visit（参观）、activity（活动）、exciting（令人兴奋的）
高分词组搭配：
cultural heritage site（文化遗产地）
explore local traditions（探索当地传统）
try authentic food（品尝地道美食）
unforgettable memories（难忘回忆）
broaden one’s perspective（拓宽视野）
4.高分句型：
The most interesting place I’ve ever been to is...
When I was there, I...
What makes it interesting is...
Little did I know that ______. （我没想到……）
Eg: Little did I know that this trip would change my view of history.
5. 参考范文
The Most Interesting Place I’ve Ever Been to（基础版）
The most interesting place I’ve ever been to is Beijing. Last summer, I visited the Great Wall, the Forbidden City and many other famous places.
At the Great Wall, I climbed up the huge steps and enjoyed the beautiful views. In the Forbidden City, I learned a lot about Chinese history. What made it interesting was the long history and amazing buildings. I hope to visit there again.
The Most Interesting Place I’ve Ever Been to（进阶版）
The most interesting place I’ve ever been to is Xi'an. Last summer, I visited this ancient city with my parents, and it left me with unforgettable memories.
When I was there, I explored many amazing cultural heritage sites. I stood in awe before the Terracotta Army, thousands of life-sized statues that seemed to tell stories of the past. Little did I know that seeing these historical treasures would change my view of Chinese history. I also wandered through the Muslim Quarter, trying authentic local food like roujiamo and yangrou paomo. The delicious flavors and lively atmosphere made me feel the city’s unique charm.
What makes Xi'an interesting is its perfect mix of history and modernity. Ancient city walls stand tall beside busy streets, and traditional handicrafts are sold next to trendy shops. This trip not only broadened my perspective but also made me fall in love with China’s rich culture. I hope to visit there again someday.
话题九：My Favorite Old Thing
根据以下内容，写一篇短文，介绍你最喜欢的一件旧物。内容包括：
你最喜欢的旧物是什么；
你拥有它多久了；
它为什么对你特别（至少一点原因）。
要求：词数 80 左右；语句通顺，意思连贯；文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
1. 审题
时态：介绍旧物和拥有时间，用一般现在时；讲述相关回忆，用一般过去时。
人称：第一人称。
内容拆解：说明最喜欢的旧物是什么；表明拥有它的时间；阐述它对自己特别的原因，如承载美好回忆、有特殊意义等。
2. 写作大纲分析
开头：引出最喜欢的旧物。
中间：描述旧物来历和相关回忆，体现其特殊之处。
结尾：总结表达对旧物的情感，如 “It will always be my favorite thing.”。
3. 遣词造句
必备词汇：old thing（旧物）、memory（回忆）、special（特别的）、keep（保留）、important（重要的）
高分词组搭配：
cherish memories（珍视回忆）
pass down from generation（世代相传）
sentimental value（情感价值）
remind me of（让我想起）
keep it carefully（小心保存）
高分句型：
My favorite old thing is...
I have had it for... years/months.
The reason why it’s special to me is...
Every time I ______, I recall ______.（每当我……，就想起……）
Eg: Every time I hold this watch, I recall my grandfather’s stories.
Though it is ______, it means ______ to me.（虽……，但对我意义重大）
Eg: Though it is worn out, it means the world to me.
5. 参考范文
My Favorite Old Thing（基础版）
My favorite old thing is a photo album. I have had it for five years. It has many photos of my family and friends.
Every time I look at it, I remember happy moments with them. There is a photo of my 10th birthday party. All my friends smiled brightly in the photo. That’s why it’s so special to me. It will always be my favorite thing.
My Favorite Old Thing（进阶版）
My favorite old thing is a red scarf. I have had it for five years, and it was knitted by my grandmother before she passed away. Though it is a bit worn out now, it means the world to me.
The reason why it’s special to me is that it holds precious memories of my grandmother. She spent hours making this scarf, carefully choosing the softest wool and adding small flower patterns. Every time I see it, I recall the warm hugs and sweet stories she used to share with me. Even on cold winter days, just looking at the scarf makes me feel the love and care from my grandmother.
I keep this scarf carefully in my drawer and take it out often. It reminds me of the deep bond between us. This simple scarf will always be my most cherished possession, carrying sentimental value that no new thing can replace.