(共18张PPT)
Section D Writing
——介绍自己最喜欢的歌手或乐队
1．写作任务
假定你是李华，你的笔友Krus所在学校将组织一次主题为“我最喜欢的歌手或乐队”的演讲比赛，他写邮件询问你最喜欢的歌手或乐队，请你给Krus回复一封邮件，要点如下：
(1)说明你最喜欢的歌手或乐队；
(2)介绍该歌手或乐队的音乐特点和影响；
(3)解释你为什么喜欢该歌手或乐队。
注意：(1)词数80左右；
(2)开头和结尾已为你写好。
Dear Krus，
I'm happy to receive your letter.________________________________
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
2．写作思路(一审、二定、三明确)
(1)一审：确定写作体裁和主题
体裁：应用文——一封电子邮件
主题：我最喜欢的歌手或乐队
(2)二定：确定时态和人称
时态：以一般现在时态和一般过去时态为主
人称：以第三人称为主
(3)三明确：明确写作要点
①说明你最喜欢的歌手或乐队；
②介绍该歌手或乐队的音乐特点和影响；
③解释你为什么喜欢该歌手或乐队。
3．素材整理
(1)关键词语
①建立__________________
②被认为是 __________________
③确定 __________________
④影响 __________________
⑤长大 __________________
⑥最喜欢的组合 __________________
form
be regarded as
identify
influenced
grow up
favourite group
(2)完成句子
①披头士乐队(The Beatles)是一支英国摇滚乐队，于1960年在英格兰利物浦成立，由约翰·列侬、保罗·麦卡特尼、乔治·哈里森和林戈·斯塔尔四名成员组成。
a．The Beatles were an English rock and roll band that ______________ in Liverpool，England in 1960. They were ____________ four members，namely John Lennon，Paul McCartney，George Harrison and Ringo Starr.
was formed
made up of
b．The Beatles were an English rock and roll band formed in Liverpool，England in 1960.They ___________ John Lennon，Paul McCartney，George Harrison and Ringo Starr.
②他们被认为是当地最好的摇滚乐队。
a．They ________ locally ___________ the best rock and roll band.
b．They were ____________ be the best local rock and roll band.
consisted of
were
regarded as
considered to
③歌曲很好地用他们对于爱情，世界和平和成长的主旋律引起年轻人的共鸣。
The songs resonated greatly with many youths who could ___________ their themes of love，world peace and growing up emotion.
④他们也受到齐柏林飞艇乐队的影响，这是他们最喜欢的乐队，他们渴望取得像它一样的成功。
They were also ____________ by Led Zeppelin，which were their favourite group whom they aspired to be like.
identify with
influenced
4．满分作文(连句成篇)
请将以上句子连成一篇语言流畅、用词准确、要点全面的短文。
参考范文：
Dear Krus，
I'm happy to receive your letter. The Beatles were an English rock and roll band that was formed in Liverpool, England in 1960. They were made up of four members, namely John Lennon, Paul McCartney, George Harrison and Ringo Starr.
They were locally regarded as the best rock and roll band. The songs resonated greatly with many youths who could identify with their themes of love, world peace and growing up emotion. They were also influenced by Led Zeppelin, which were their favourite group whom they aspired to be like. It is their theme that I like about the band. What's your favourite singer or band
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
5．佳作背诵
(1)佳作一
假定你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣，并请你介绍一位你最喜欢的中国历史人物。请你给Jim回复一封电子邮件，内容包括：
①该人物是谁；
②该人物的主要贡献；
③该人物对你的影响。
注意：①词数80左右；
②开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
__________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
参考范文：
Dear Jim，
It's great to hear from you. I feel proud knowing your interest in Chinese history.
As for my favorite figure in Chinese history, it must be Wei Yuan, a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty. He, in his book, Haiguo Tuzhi (Maps and Records of the World), introduced modern technologies and ideas to China. That opened our eyes to the world. In fact, he inspires me to major in English in college, to be a bridge between China and the world.
Interested in knowing more I can find you some books! Just let me know.
Cheers!
Yours，
Li Hua
(2)佳作二
假定你是李华，你的同学张青来信，让你给他介绍一位英美歌手。你给他介绍了美国著名乡村音乐歌手John Denver。根据以下内容，给他写一封回信，80词左右。
①Denver是美国最有名的乡村音乐歌手之一。他举行过多场个人音乐会，去世界许多国家轮回演出；
②他的歌经常在收音机和电视上播放；
③虽然有些歌词我听不懂，但仍可以从他的歌声中感受到乡村的美丽。
参考范文：
Dear Zhang Qing，
Knowing you are keen on famous British and American singers, I am writing to you to tell you something about John Denver.
John Denver, who is a famous American country singer, is one of the most famous country music singers in America. He held many individual concerts, touring in many countries around the world. His songs are so fantastic that they are often broadcast on the radio and TV.
Although I couldn't understand some of the words in his songs, I could still feel the beauty of the country from songs.
If you were to hear his songs someday, I'm sure you'll like them as well.
Yours，
Li HuaSection D Writing——介绍自己最喜欢的歌手或乐队
1．写作任务
假定你是李华，你的笔友Krus所在学校将组织一次主题为“我最喜欢的歌手或乐队”的演讲比赛，他写邮件询问你最喜欢的歌手或乐队，请你给Krus回复一封邮件，要点如下：
(1)说明你最喜欢的歌手或乐队；
(2)介绍该歌手或乐队的音乐特点和影响；
(3)解释你为什么喜欢该歌手或乐队。
注意：(1)词数80左右；
(2)开头和结尾已为你写好。
Dear Krus，
I'm happy to receive your letter.______________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
2．写作思路(一审、二定、三明确)
(1)一审：确定写作体裁和主题
体裁：应用文——一封电子邮件
主题：我最喜欢的歌手或乐队
(2)二定：确定时态和人称
时态：以一般现在时态和一般过去时态为主
人称：以第三人称为主
(3)三明确：明确写作要点
①说明你最喜欢的歌手或乐队；
②介绍该歌手或乐队的音乐特点和影响；
③解释你为什么喜欢该歌手或乐队。
3．素材整理
(1)关键词语
①建立__________________
②被认为是 __________________
③确定 __________________
④影响 __________________
⑤长大 __________________
⑥最喜欢的组合 __________________
(2)完成句子
①披头士乐队(The Beatles)是一支英国摇滚乐队，于1960年在英格兰利物浦成立，由约翰·列侬、保罗·麦卡特尼、乔治·哈里森和林戈·斯塔尔四名成员组成。
a．The Beatles were an English rock and roll band that ________________________ in Liverpool，England in 1960. They were ____________ four members，namely John Lennon，Paul McCartney，George Harrison and Ringo Starr.
b．The Beatles were an English rock and roll band formed in Liverpool，England in 1960.They ________________________ John Lennon，Paul McCartney，George Harrison and Ringo Starr.
②他们被认为是当地最好的摇滚乐队。
a．They ____________ locally ________________________ the best rock and roll band.
b．They were ________________________ be the best local rock and roll band.
③歌曲很好地用他们对于爱情，世界和平和成长的主旋律引起年轻人的共鸣。
The songs resonated greatly with many youths who could ________________________ their themes of love，world peace and growing up emotion.
④他们也受到齐柏林飞艇乐队的影响，这是他们最喜欢的乐队，他们渴望取得像它一样的成功。
They were also ____________ by Led Zeppelin，which were their favourite group whom they aspired to be like.
4．满分作文(连句成篇)
请将以上句子连成一篇语言流畅、用词准确、要点全面的短文。
参考范文：
Dear Krus，
I'm happy to receive your letter. The Beatles were an English rock and roll band that was formed in Liverpool, England in 1960. They were made up of four members, namely John Lennon, Paul McCartney, George Harrison and Ringo Starr.
They were locally regarded as the best rock and roll band. The songs resonated greatly with many youths who could identify with their themes of love, world peace and growing up emotion. They were also influenced by Led Zeppelin, which were their favourite group whom they aspired to be like. It is their theme that I like about the band. What's your favourite singer or band
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
5．佳作背诵
(1)佳作一
假定你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣，并请你介绍一位你最喜欢的中国历史人物。请你给Jim回复一封电子邮件，内容包括：
①该人物是谁；
②该人物的主要贡献；
③该人物对你的影响。
注意：①词数80左右；
②开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
(2)佳作二
假定你是李华，你的同学张青来信，让你给他介绍一位英美歌手。你给他介绍了美国著名乡村音乐歌手John Denver。根据以下内容，给他写一封回信，80词左右。
①Denver是美国最有名的乡村音乐歌手之一。他举行过多场个人音乐会，去世界许多国家轮回演出；
②他的歌经常在收音机和电视上播放；
③虽然有些歌词我听不懂，但仍可以从他的歌声中感受到乡村的美丽。
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Section D Writing——介绍自己最喜欢的歌手或乐队
3．(1)①form ②be regarded as ③identify ④influenced
⑤grow up ⑥favourite group
(2)①a.was formed; made up of b．consisted of
②a.were; regarded as b．considered to ③identify with ④influenced
5．(1)参考范文：
Dear Jim，
It's great to hear from you. I feel proud knowing your interest in Chinese history.
As for my favorite figure in Chinese history, it must be Wei Yuan, a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty. He, in his book, Haiguo Tuzhi (Maps and Records of the World), introduced modern technologies and ideas to China. That opened our eyes to the world. In fact, he inspires me to major in English in college, to be a bridge between China and the world.
Interested in knowing more I can find you some books! Just let me know.
Cheers!
Yours，
Li Hua
(2)参考范文：
Dear Zhang Qing，
Knowing you are keen on famous British and American singers, I am writing to you to tell you something about John Denver.
John Denver, who is a famous American country singer, is one of the most famous country music singers in America. He held many individual concerts, touring in many countries around the world. His songs are so fantastic that they are often broadcast on the radio and TV. Although I couldn't understand some of the words in his songs, I could still feel the beauty of the country from songs.
If you were to hear his songs someday, I'm sure you'll like them as well.
Yours，
Li Hua
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