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Section G 单元写作——绿色生活
1．写作任务
假定你是星光中学的老师李华，环保社团的学生给你写信，就汽车带来的空气污染以及交通堵塞等问题向你咨询解决办法。请你写一封回信，主要内容包括：
(1)简要分析目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题；
(2)建议改用绿色出行方式，比如骑自行车，并介绍骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、有益健康等。
参考词汇：环保的environmentally friendly；
低碳生活low carbon life
注意：(1)词数80左右；
(2)信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear fellow students，
I'll express my opinions on this issue.
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
2．写作思路(一审、二定、三明确、四分段)
(1)一审：确定写作体裁和主题
体裁：应用文——书信
主题：分析汽车带来的环境问题，并倡导人们骑自行车
(2)二定：确定时态和人称
时态：以一般现在时为主(讲述现在的情况)
人称：以第一、三人称为主
(3)三明确：①表明写信目的；
②汽车带来的各种问题；
③骑自行车的益处；
④发起倡议——环保出行。
(4)四分段：结合要点分为四个段落。
3．素材整理
(1)关键词语
①currently adv.目前，当前
Currently, the hotel is under repair.
目前，这家酒店正在维修。
②improvement n．提升，改进
He had some suggestions for its improvement, but he had no chance to let them know.
他有一些改进的建议，但没机会让他们知道。
③standard n．水平，标准
The government spared no effort to improve people's living standards.
政府不遗余力地提高人们的生活水平。
④transport n．交通运输系统，运输方式
London's transport infrastructure faces great pressure in coping with the extra traffic from the Olympic Games.
伦敦的交通基础设施在应对奥运会所带来的额外交通量方面面临着巨大压力。
⑤traffic jam交通堵塞
It takes me 40 minutes to get there in a traffic jam.交通堵塞的时候，到那儿要花费我40分钟。
⑥dramatically adv.急剧地；显著地
The housing price has increased dramatically.
房价已大幅上涨了。
⑦solution n．解决措施
I put forward a solution which has aroused their great interest.
我提出了一个解决措施，引起了他们极大的兴趣。
⑧build up建立；逐步增强
We need to build up mutual trust.
我们需要逐步增强彼此间的信任。
(2)完成句子
①现在，随着人们生活水平的提高，汽车已经成了一种受欢迎的交通工具，给我们的生活带来了极大的便利。
________， with the __________ of people's living ________， cars have become a popular means of ________， bringing great ________ to our lives.
Currently
improvement
standards
transport
convenience
②但是，它们(汽车)也引起了一些问题，比如空气污染和交通堵塞，这些问题在一些大城市中尤其明显，严重影响了人们的生活。
However, they have also caused some problems such as air ________ and ________ jams, especially in some big cities, which have ________________ people's lives.
pollution
traffic
dramatically influenced
③就我而言，骑自行车是一种很好的解决办法。
___________________， riding bicycles is a good ________．
④一方面，自行车很环保，因为它们不排放废气。
___________， bicycles are environmentally friendly because they don't _______ exhaust fumes.
As far as I am concerned
solution
For one thing
give off
⑤另一方面，骑自行车给我们提供了一种很好的锻炼方式，对我们的健康有益。
__________， riding bicycles provides us with a good way to exercise and is beneficial to our health.
⑥因此，咱们用骑自行车的方式，为建立一个低碳城市担负起我们的责任吧。
________， let's take ________________________ a low carbon city by riding bicycles.
For another
Therefore
responsibility for building up
4．整理成文
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
参考范文：Dear fellow students，
I'll express my opinions on this issue.
Currently, with the improvement of people's living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our lives. However, they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams, especially in some big cities, which have dramatically influenced people's lives.
As far as I am concerned, riding bicycles is a good solution. For one thing, bicycles are environmentally friendly because they don't give off exhaust fumes. For another, riding bicycles provides us with a good way to exercise and is beneficial to our health.
Therefore, let's take responsibility for building up a low carbon city by riding bicycles.
Yours，
Li Hua
5．写作练习
假设你是学生会主席李华，请你围绕“建设和谐社会”的主题，根据下面所给出的要点提示，用英语给全校学生写一封倡议书。要点提示：
(1)人与社会(祖国、家乡、学校，热爱关心)；
(2)人与人(家人、师长、同学，诚信互助)；
(3)人与自然(能源、环境，爱惜保护)。
注意：
(1)词数80左右，倡议书的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
(2)内容可适当发挥，注意行文连贯。
Dear fellow students，
Our government is aiming to build a harmonious society. I think it is every citizen's duty to work hard to achieve this goal.
As high school students, what should we do？_____________________
___________________________________________________________
Let's start to fight now and spare no effort to do a little bit every day, every hour, and every minute!
Student Union
参考范文：
Dear fellow students，
Our government is aiming to build a harmonious society. I think it is every citizen's duty to work hard to achieve this goal.
As high school students, what should we do Firstly, we must build a harmonious relationship between people and society. We should love and care about the society, including our homeland, hometown and school. Secondly, we must build a harmonious interpersonal relationship.
Everyone should be honest and helpful to his family, teachers and classmates. Thirdly, we must build a harmonious relationship between mankind and nature. Everyone should cherish and protect nature, including energy sources and the environment.
Let's start to fight now and spare no effort to do a little bit every day, every hour, and every minute!
Student UnionSection G 单元写作——绿色生活
1．写作任务
假定你是星光中学的老师李华，环保社团的学生给你写信，就汽车带来的空气污染以及交通堵塞等问题向你咨询解决办法。请你写一封回信，主要内容包括：
(1)简要分析目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题；
(2)建议改用绿色出行方式，比如骑自行车，并介绍骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、有益健康等。
参考词汇：环保的environmentally friendly；
低碳生活low carbon life
注意：(1)词数80左右；
(2)信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear fellow students，
I'll express my opinions on this issue.
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
2．写作思路(一审、二定、三明确、四分段)
(1)一审：确定写作体裁和主题
体裁：应用文——书信
主题：分析汽车带来的环境问题，并倡导人们骑自行车
(2)二定：确定时态和人称
时态：以一般现在时为主(讲述现在的情况)
人称：以第一、三人称为主
(3)三明确：①表明写信目的；
②汽车带来的各种问题；
③骑自行车的益处；
④发起倡议——环保出行。
(4)四分段：结合要点分为四个段落。
3．素材整理
(1)关键词语
①currently adv.目前，当前
Currently, the hotel is under repair.
目前，这家酒店正在维修。
②improvement n．提升，改进
He had some suggestions for its improvement, but he had no chance to let them know.
他有一些改进的建议，但没机会让他们知道。
③standard n．水平，标准
The government spared no effort to improve people's living standards.
政府不遗余力地提高人们的生活水平。
④transport n．交通运输系统，运输方式
London's transport infrastructure faces great pressure in coping with the extra traffic from the Olympic Games.
伦敦的交通基础设施在应对奥运会所带来的额外交通量方面面临着巨大压力。
⑤traffic jam交通堵塞
It takes me 40 minutes to get there in a traffic jam.交通堵塞的时候，到那儿要花费我40分钟。
⑥dramatically adv.急剧地；显著地
The housing price has increased dramatically.
房价已大幅上涨了。
⑦solution n．解决措施
I put forward a solution which has aroused their great interest.
我提出了一个解决措施，引起了他们极大的兴趣。
⑧build up建立；逐步增强
We need to build up mutual trust.
我们需要逐步增强彼此间的信任。
(2)完成句子
①现在，随着人们生活水平的提高，汽车已经成了一种受欢迎的交通工具，给我们的生活带来了极大的便利。
________， with the ________ of people's living ________， cars have become a popular means of ________， bringing great ________ to our lives.
②但是，它们(汽车)也引起了一些问题，比如空气污染和交通堵塞，这些问题在一些大城市中尤其明显，严重影响了人们的生活。
However, they have also caused some problems such as air ________ and ________ jams, especially in some big cities, which have ________________ people's lives.
③就我而言，骑自行车是一种很好的解决办法。
________________________________， riding bicycles is a good ________．
④一方面，自行车很环保，因为它们不排放废气。
________________， bicycles are environmentally friendly because they don't ________________ exhaust fumes.
⑤另一方面，骑自行车给我们提供了一种很好的锻炼方式，对我们的健康有益。
________________， riding bicycles provides us with a good way to exercise and is beneficial to our health.
⑥因此，咱们用骑自行车的方式，为建立一个低碳城市担负起我们的责任吧。
________， let's take ________________________ a low carbon city by riding bicycles.
4．整理成文
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
5．写作练习
假设你是学生会主席李华，请你围绕“建设和谐社会”的主题，根据下面所给出的要点提示，用英语给全校学生写一封倡议书。要点提示：
(1)人与社会(祖国、家乡、学校，热爱关心)；
(2)人与人(家人、师长、同学，诚信互助)；
(3)人与自然(能源、环境，爱惜保护)。
注意：(1)词数80左右，倡议书的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
(2)内容可适当发挥，注意行文连贯。
Dear fellow students，
Our government is aiming to build a harmonious society. I think it is every citizen's duty to work hard to achieve this goal.
As high school students, what should we do？___________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Let's start to fight now and spare no effort to do a little bit every day, every hour, and every minute!
Student Union
Section G 单元写作——绿色生活
3．素材整理
(2)①Currently; improvement; standards; transport; convenience ②pollution; traffic; dramatically influenced ③As far as I am concerned; solution ④For one thing; give off ⑤For another
⑥Therefore; responsibility for building up
4．整理成文
参考范文：Dear fellow students，
I'll express my opinions on this issue.
Currently, with the improvement of people's living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our lives. However, they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams, especially in some big cities, which have dramatically influenced people's lives.
As far as I am concerned, riding bicycles is a good solution. For one thing, bicycles are environmentally friendly because they don't give off exhaust fumes. For another, riding bicycles provides us with a good way to exercise and is beneficial to our health.
Therefore, let's take responsibility for building up a low carbon city by riding bicycles.
Yours，
Li Hua
5．写作练习
参考范文：
Dear fellow students，
Our government is aiming to build a harmonious society. I think it is every citizen's duty to work hard to achieve this goal.
As high school students, what should we do Firstly, we must build a harmonious relationship between people and society. We should love and care about the society, including our homeland, hometown and school. Secondly, we must build a harmonious interpersonal relationship. Everyone should be honest and helpful to his family, teachers and classmates. Thirdly, we must build a harmonious relationship between mankind and nature. Everyone should cherish and protect nature, including energy sources and the environment.
Let's start to fight now and spare no effort to do a little bit every day, every hour, and every minute!
Student Union
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