(共10张PPT)
2025年全国二卷英语真题
应用文
假定你是校英文报编辑李华,外教Chris上个月答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章。请给 Chris写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)询问进展;
(2)提醒交稿时间。
注意:(1)写作词数应为80词左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
假定你是校英文报编辑李华,外教Chris上个月答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章。请给 Chris写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)询问进展;
(2)提醒交稿时间。
注意:(1)写作词数应为80词左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
一、审题
明确写作背景与身份
收件人
礼貌用语
写作目的
Dear Chris,
1. 开头:问候 + 引出话题(回顾约定)
How’s it going Thank you again for agreeing to write an article about Canadian sports for our newspaper.
2. 正文:
询问进展(核心要点1)
Could you please share your progress on the article
提醒时间(核心要点2)
We kindly remind you that the submission deadline is [date].
3. 结尾:感谢 + 期待回复
Thank you for your help. Looking forward to your wonderful work!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
写作大纲
几句话就写完了?
无话可说?
(1)合理添加内容
(2)加入礼貌用语
语用功能
交际意识
写作思路
开头问候:
eg. Hope this letter finds you well!
/ How is everything going
写信目的:
eg. I’m writing to ask about the process of the article on Canadian sports.
句式升级
I’m writing with the intention of politely inquiring about the progress of your article on Canadian sports that you kindly agreed/promised to write for our school newspaper.
Our readers are eagerly anticipating, many of whom have expressed great passion/interest about Canadian sports.
第一段:
合理添加内容:
写作思路
核心要点一:
合理添加内容:
eg. Could you please let / Would you mind letting me know how it’s going
eg. I want to remind you of the time to hand in your article.
第二段:
询问进展
eg. Could you kindly update me on how the writing is going
We are truly excited to read/publish/feature your article!
核心要点二:
提醒交稿时间
句式升级
eg. Moreover, could I remind you that the submission headline is by the end of this week.
eg. Also, just a friendly reminder that the submission headline is aproaching— it is scheduled for June 15th.
合理添加内容:
To ensure the publication progress, we’d greatly appreciate it if you could finish the draft by then.
句式升级
委婉提问,避免显得催促
写作思路
合理添加内容:
eg. If you need any materials or assistance, please don’t hesitate to let me know.
eg. Thank you so much for sharing your time and knowledge with us.
第三段:
eg. Please feel free to let me know if you need any materials or assistance.
感谢+期待回复:
eg. Thank you for your dedication/devotion/commitment, and we are looking forward to reading your work/writing.
eg. Thank you again for your support.
参考范文:
Dear Chris,
Hope this letter finds you well! I’m writing with the intention of politely inquiring about the progress of your article on Canadian sports that you kindly promised to write for our school newspaper. Our readers are eagerly anticipating, many of whom have expressed great passion/interest about Canadian sports.
We are truly excited to feature your article! Could you kindly update me on how the writing is going Also, just a friendly reminder that the submission headline is aproaching— it is scheduled for June 15th. To ensure the publication progress, we’d greatly appreciate it if you could finish the draft by then.
If you need any materials or assistance, please don’t hesitate to let me know. Thank you for your dedication/devotion/commitment, and we are looking forward to reading your work/writing.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
总结
(一)易错点及扣分项:
1. 遗漏要点:询问进展和提醒交稿时间,两个核心要点缺一不可;
2. 语气不当:直接催促(如Why haven’t you finished ; You must hand in your essay on...),会显得不礼貌。
(二)高分技巧
1. 合理的细节补充:丰富文章内容,增强针对性。
2. 灵活应变:若题目未明确交稿时间,用"as soon as possible"或"by next Monday"替代。
3. 高级句式:灵活使用情态动词、复合句等不同句式。
紧扣题目两个要点,保持礼貌、清晰、简洁,注意邮件格式和身份体现,即可拿到高分!
THANKS