高考英语冲刺:读后续写技巧简化版
一、情绪描写
直接描写:(A wave/surge/sense of + ) 情感名词 + seized/overwhelmed/took hold of//flooded over/swept over/flowed over + sb.
间接描写:肢体+面部+心
tears streaming down my cheeks
feeling like sitting on pins and needles
with my heart beating
felt her hands sweating
struggled to fight back tears
be lost in thought
My face turned pale/ was burning up
glared at me with burning eyes
dragged his legs
ducked his head
a gentle smile spread over her face
took a deep breath
wagged its tail
licked the boy's face
二、动作描写
主语+谓语A,B and C.
“Well done!” he blinked at me, gave me a thumbs-up and broadened a bright smile.
非谓语doing(表示主动,与谓语动词同时或几乎同时发生), 主语+谓语 and 谓语.
Gathering the courage, he then used a wet towel to cover his mouth and nose, dashing into the burning room.
非谓语done(作为状语表示被动/心理/状态), 主语 + 谓语 + 无灵主语句
Immersed in the enjoyment, he waved at me and expressed his sincere congratulations on me, a wave of happiness immediately swept over me.
三、语言描写
“……,”sb said in a …voice/tone. 某人以…的声音、 语气说到(= in/with+心情类名词. 以…的心情)
“xxx,”sb said +adv..+doing.(添加非谓语动词表达后续动作)
四、画面衔接
一看到 at the sight of
一想到at the thought of
Just at that moment 就在那一瞬间
on the verge of doing在做某事的边缘
Without any hesitation 毫不犹豫
Several days later 几天以后
Beyond one’s expectation 出人意料的是
Driven by his curiosity,出于好奇,
Suddenly
Unfortunately
Eventually
五、主旨升华
脱险类
Finally, we went out of the forest that trapped us. What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that there's always a way out of any difficult situation as long as we stay calm.最后,我们走出了困住我们的森林。多么难忘的经历啊!事实证明,只要我们保持冷静,就总有办法摆脱困境。
It was this unique experience that made me understand whatever difficulty we are faced with, we shouldn't lose heart.正是这种独特的经历使我理解了无论我们面临什么困难,我们都不应失去信心。
人与动物
When dealing with them, it's not only we who take care of them, most of the time, it's they that heal us.
在和他们相处的时候,不仅仅是我们要照顾他们,大多数时候,治愈我们的是他们。
Despite the chill winter wind, their home where the two lovely dogs played happily was filled with the warmth of love and reunion.尽管冬风凛冽,他们家里的两只可爱的小狗快乐地玩耍,家里满是爱和团聚的温暖。
助人为乐
Sometimes, a small act of kindness can be powerful enough to make a huge difference.有时小小的善行会有很大影响。
Though many years have passed, I will never forget the lesson he taught me: only when you help those in trouble is life meaningful.虽然许多年过去了,我永远不会忘记他给我的教训:只有当你帮助那些有困难的人,人生才是有意义的。
友情篇
It was on that very day that Asad made his first friend in the new school, and he truly appreciated the value of sincerity and honesty.就在那一天,阿萨德在新学校结识了他的第一个朋友,他真正认识到真诚和诚实的价值。
Their friendship grew stronger as they embraced each other's imperfections and stood by each other's side.
随着彼此接纳对方的不完美并始终相互支持,他们的友谊变得更加牢固。
成长类
At the end of the play, when the audience stood and applauded, I knew they were not just cheering for my performance that night, but for the performances they knew would come in later years because of my new found confidence. 在戏剧结束时,当观众起立鼓掌时,我知道他们不仅仅是为我那晚的表演欢呼,也是为他们知道几年后会因为我重新找回的信心而来的表演而欢呼。
It is not the lucky charm brought by ice-cream but his own diligence, persistence and confidence that contributes to his success in swim meet. 不是冰激凌带来的幸运魅力,而是他自己的勤奋、坚持和信心,使他在游泳比赛中获得成功。