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句式汇总
Para 1. Para 2.
定句1: 情感+动作 定句6:情感/动作/心理
句2: 句7:
句3: 句8:
句4: 定句9:结局
定句5: 过渡句 定句10:点睛升华
框架
十句五定
定句: 情感+动作
句式汇总:
1. A flood of /a surge of + 情感n + 谓语(welled up in/swept through)sb + when sb did sth.
2. Overwhelmed with+情感n, sb did sth.
3. sb did sth, sb's heart swelling with+情感n.
4. Doing sth, sb’s heart pounded with +情感n.
Doing sth, sb’s eyes twinkled with +正面情感n.
5. With + 身体部位 + doing/done, sb did sth.
6. So + 情感adj. + was sb + that sb did sth.
我的心充满了骄傲和喜悦,我高兴地笑了。
My heart was filled with pride an joy. I smiled happily.
→ A surge of pride and joy welled up in me. I grinned with delight.
→ Overwhelmed with pride and joy, I grinned with delight.
→ With my heart swelling with pride and joy, I grinned with delight.
定句: 动作 :时间状语从句
当...时; 在...前/后
when, as, while after, before,
2. 在…时,……
At the moment + 从句,主句.
3. 正是在那时,……
It was at that time that + 主谓宾
4. 一…就…
The minute/moment/instant + 从句, 主句.
5. 正当某人快要...时
Just as sb be on the verge of doing sth, 主句
定句: 动作
At the moment I was at a loss (不知所措), a gentle voice echoed. It was Mike.
正当我不知所措的时候,一个温柔的声音响起。原来是Mike!
When my performance concluded, the audience burst into thunderous applause.
当我表演结束时,观众席响起了雷鸣般的掌声。
As I stepped through the door, what greeted me was my mother’s warm embrace.
当我一踏进门,迎接我的是妈妈温暖的怀抱。
定句: 动作
让步状语从句:
nevertheless, however, although, even if/though, but
adj + as sb was/were, 主句
despite + 名词
in spite of +名词
定句: 动作
1. 做:
Doing sth, sb did sth, doing sth.
Having done sth, sb did sth, doing sth.
2. 说:
“...”, sb said/exclaimed/murmured, his/her/my voice filled with + 情感n.
3. 介词短语,主句。
Without hesitation, sb did sth.
With determination, sb did sth.
Out of curiosity/sympathy/guilt, sb did sth.
定句: 过渡句
Just when the situation hit a dead end, an unexpected solution emerged.
就在情况陷入僵局的时候,一个意想不到的解决方案出现了。
But this time/ From that day on, things seemed different.
但是这次/从那天开始,事情变得不一样起来了。
As the days slipped away, things began to change.
随着日子一天天流失,事情发生了变化。
Right when they were on the verge of giving up, hope came into sight.
就在他们在放弃的边缘时,希望出现了。
定句: 主题升华
Doing sth, sb realized that...
This unforgettable experience taught sb a valuable lesson that...
What an unforgettable experience! It dawned on sb/It occurred to sb/It turned out that…
Only through this experience did sb realize that
It was thanks to this unique experience that sb understand...
语料积累——主旨升华点睛句
1. 智慧、责任、成长与进步
In the journey of life, growth and progress are our constant companions. Let's embrace challenges and make every step count.
Through his adventures, the young hero learned that with great power comes great responsibility, and that he had a duty to use his abilities for good.
Through his sense of humor and playful spirit, the young boy brought joy and laughter to those around him, even in the darkest of times.
语料积累——主旨升华点睛句
2. 友谊与信任
True friendship is built on trust and understanding. With these foundations, our friendships will stand the test of time.
Even though they were different in many ways, the two friends stuck together and helped each other through thick and thin.
语料积累——主旨升华点睛句
3. 勇敢与坚持
Courage and perseverance are the keys to unlocking our potential. Only by standing firm can we achieve our goals.
Despite her fear, the young girl summoned all her courage and stood up to the bullies(霸凌者), showing them that she would not be intimidated(害怕的,被威胁的).
Determination and optimism are what it takes to conquer your fear and accomplish your goal.
语料积累——主旨升华点睛句
4. 环保与责任
Protecting the environment is a shared responsibility. Let's cherish the beauty of nature and strive to live in harmony with the nature, which is our home and our heritage.
Every plastic bottle we recycle and every tree we plant writes a silent agreement between humanity and nature - a promise that progress shall never surpass conscience.
The real victory over environmental problems lies in realizing that our survival poetry must rhyme with the symphony of wetlands breathing, forests pulsing, and oceans singing.
语料积累——主旨升华点睛句
5. 希望、梦想与追求
Dreams and aspirations(志向) are the driving force of our lives. Let's pursue them with passion and determination.
Through her journey to achieve perfection, the young girl learned that true happiness comes from embracing imperfection and finding joy in the journey.
Despite facing many challenges and setbacks, the young hero never gave up and remained resilient(迅速恢复的,有适应力的) in the face of adversity.
语料积累——主旨升华点睛句
6. 科技与创新
Technology and innovation are transforming our world. Let's embrace these changes and create a brighter future.
With the power of technology, we can overcome challenges and create a more connected world, where progress is driven by creativity and cooperation.
Through her love of art and music, the young girl discovered her creative talents and learned to express herself in new and exciting ways.
语料积累——主旨升华点睛句
7. 文化多样性
Cultural diversity enriches our world. Let's celebrate and respect the unique qualities of each culture.
Through her travels and adventures, the young girl learned to appreciate the differences in people from all over the world, and embraced the idea of inclusivity and acceptance.
语料积累——主旨升华点睛句
8. 教育与成长
Education is the cornerstone(基石) of personal growth, guiding us towards a future full of promise and possibilities. Let's continue learn and expand our horizons.
Education is the key to unlocking our potential and shaping a brighter future. Let's invest in knowledge and skills to pave the way for success.
语料积累——主旨升华点睛句
9. 健康与生活方式
Health is our most valuable possession. Let's adopt a healthy lifestyle and cherish our well-being.
A sound body isn't merely nature's greatest gift, but the compass(指南针) guiding us through life's storms — every step we take in exercise writes resilience(恢复力、适应能力) into our character.
When we fuel(加油) our bodies like engines and train our minds like muscles, we discover health isn't a destination, but the fuel tank(燃油箱) for chasing dreams.
语料积累——主旨升华点睛句
10. 团结协作
Teamwork creates real change when we stop competing and start helping — together we can turn the impossible into possible.
A team isn't just a group of people, but a band where every person plays their part — the best music comes when everyone listens to each other. Alone, we are notes; together, we are symphony.
Working together isn't about hiding mistakes, but learning from each other — when we share our steps, we create a path that leads to bigger wins.
语料积累——主旨升华点睛句
11. 人与自我
Self-reflection is crucial for personal growth and development. Never stop learning about ourselves.
Through her journey of self-discovery, the young girl learned to embrace her true selves and accepting her flaws, which are the key to inner peace and happiness.
Through her journey, the young girl learned that change can be scary, but it can also be an opportunity for growth and new experiences.
语料积累——主旨升华点睛句
12. 家庭生活
Even though they sometimes fought and argued, the family knew that they loved each other deeply and would always be there for one another.
Through his loyalty to his friends and family, the young boy discovered the true meaning of friendship and the power of a strong bond.
语料积累——主旨升华点睛句
13. 友善与同理心
By showing kindness to others, the young boy learned that he could make a positive impact on the world around him.
By putting herself in others shoes, the young girl learned to be more empathetic and understanding towards those around her.
Through forgiveness the young hero was able to mend his broken relationships and move forward with a newfound sense of peace.