期末写作指导总结2024-2025学年仁爱科普版（2024）七年级英语下册

仁爱七下期末单元写作指导与练习
写作技巧：
审题认真审题是写好作文的前提，一般地，审题包含两个要素：审要求、审主体信息和要点。
1. 审要求：明确写作要求以确定写作对象、体裁、主题，选定要使用的人称、时态、语态，此外，要注意词数要求；
2. 审主体信息和要点：总览题目要求，划分信息和要点，特别是图表信息。
(二) 谋篇布局：列提纲、分段落在全面审题、充分理解题目的基础上，可以着手准备进行写作，写作以说明性写作为主，主要让考生介绍某些东西、对某些现象进行描述或对某些问题进行答复。与故事类不同，说明性写作意味着段与段之间的内在联系相对松散，可以根据需要将整篇作文分为若干个段落，不同段落各有侧重，最后形成一篇完整的文章。
(三) 检查优化正如中考评分标准所述，要拿高分作文，文章须得语句通顺，意思连贯、流畅，所以检查优化很重要。
1. 优化句子在有把握的前提下，要灵活变换一些词汇和句式。
2. 巧用过渡句优化过渡句能起到承上启下，达到上下文连贯的作用，
如本文中可用Here I’ve got good news for you.或Here is a piece of good news.作为过渡句。
此外，在写作过程中，我们也经常用Let me tell you something about it./ Now I’ll show you…/ Let me share the good news with you.等来作为过渡句。
结尾句应简明扼要，再现主题。
如I hope you will come and experience Chinese Wushu culture. / I hope you can also enjoy Chinese Wushu culture./ Would you like to come and join us？等。
2.得体运用连接词常见的连词有and（并列），however（转折），while（对比），because（因果），if（条件），so….that / such…that（结果），so that（目的），even if（让步）等。此外，作文中常用的起始连词有at first，first of all, in the beginning；归纳有generally speaking；递进有besides，what’s more / worst；表归纳总结的连词，有in a word, all in all等。
（四）再次复核，规范书写文章初稿拟好之后，要检查格式、人称、时态、语态、名词的单复数、大小写、较长单词的拼写、习惯用语、标点符号等是否正确，关联词使用是否恰当，词数是否符合要求，是否存在中国式英语等。要规范地写好每个字母、单词、标点符号以及大小写，保证卷面整洁。
七下话题必备
1．购物是我们日常生活中一项重要的活动，人们几乎每天都要买东西，但怎么合理购物，理性消费，做一个聪明的购物者呢？假如你们的校刊英语专栏正在以“How to Do Shopping Wisely ”为题开展征文活动，请你根据写作要求，结合自身实际谈谈你是如何聪明地购物的。
How to Do Shopping Wisely
Before shopping Make a shopping list Make shopping plans
During shopping Be careful Think again
Others …
写作要求：
(1)文中需要包含表格中所提示的全部要点，可适当发挥，书写规范；
(2)文中不得出现本人姓名或校名；
(3)词数70个左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇：first第一；second第二；last but not least最后同样重要的是
【答案】例文：
How to Do Shopping Wisely
Shopping is an important activity in our life. But how to shop wisely and be a smart shopper Here are my ways.
First, I always make a shopping list before going shopping. I write down what I need and only buy things on the list. It can help me save time and money. I always make a plan, too. I know how much money to pay. Second, I am careful. I check different shops to look for the best price. And I think again before I make payments. Last but not least, if we can share something with our brothers or sisters, there is no need to buy it.
Let’s be a smart shopper and do shopping wisely!
2．如今，很多人喜欢在互联网上点餐。老师要求你们在下周一的英语课上就互联网点餐这一现象，谈谈它的利与弊。请你根据写作要求，谈谈你的看法。
Ordering Food Online, Good or Bad
Advantages (优点) 方便 (convenient) 快捷，品种多样，节省时间……
Disadvantages (缺点) 塑料包装袋 (plastic bags) 对环境 (environment) 不利，经常吃外卖食品 (takeaway) 对健康不好……
Your idea ……
写作要求：
(1)文中需要包含表格中所提示的全部要点，可适当发挥，书写规范；
(2)文中不得出现本人姓名或校名；
(3)词数70个左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
【答案】例文：
Ordering Food Online, Good or Bad
Nowadays, many people like ordering food online. Is it good or bad
Some people think it’s good to order food online because it is convenient and fast. It can help save time. Also, the food is cheap and delicious. Besides, we have many kinds of food to choose from.
However, other people have different ideas. They say eating takeaway too often is bad for health, because takeaway may not be fresh food. And the plastic bags of the food are bad for the environment.
I think we can order food online sometimes, but not too often.
3．如何做一个聪明谨慎的购物者是我们需要掌握的一项重要的生活技能。请你结合下面的图示信息，以“How to Be a Smart and Careful Shopper”为题，向校刊的英语专栏投稿分享一下如何成为一个聪明谨慎的购物者。
写作要求：
（1）文中须包含以下图表中的所有信息，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
（3）词数65词左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
【答案】例文：
How to Be a Smart and Careful Shopper
It’s great fun knowing how to be a smart and careful shopper. Let me tell you something about it.
We can make a shopping list and only buy the things on the list. When we buy things, we can look for things on sale. We can also check different shops to look for the best price. Before making payments, we need to check the price again. If we can share something with our brothers or sisters, there is no need to buy it.
Let’s be a smart and careful shopper!
4．水是我们生活中最常见的东西，也是我们生活中非常重要的东西之一，所以我们要节约用水，保护水资源。假如你们校刊的英语专栏以“家庭节约用水”为主题开展征文活动。请你根据写作要求，结合自身实际谈谈你的认识和做法。
How to Save Water at Home
The importance of water valuable(珍贵的), useful, we use it to ...
How to save water at home take a quick shower, use less water, turn off the tap ...
写作要求：
(1)文中需要包含表格中所提示的全部要点，可适当发挥，书写规范；
(2)文中不得出现本人姓名或校名；
(3)词数70个左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇: first of all 首先; then 然后; in the end 最后; used water用过的水
【答案】例文
How to Save Water at Home
Water is very valuable and useful. We use it to do lots of things in our life. It is important for us to save water. How to save water at home
First of all, we should take a quick shower because it uses less water. Then turn off the tap when we brush our teeth. In the end, remember to water plants with used water. It can make full use of water. In these ways, we can save a lot of water.
Let’s try our best to save water.
5．水在我们的生活中非常重要，水资源非常珍贵，所以我们应该节约用水。假如英语口语课上，老师要求你以“Act Now to Save Water”为题，谈谈生活中浪费水的现象和节约用水的方法。请你根据写作要求写一篇英语短文，为你的口语课做准备。
Problems of wasting water take a bath drip (滴; 漏) from the tap …
Ways to save water take a quick shower fix (修理)
写作要求：
(1)文中需要包含表格中所提示的全部要点，可适当发挥，书写规范；
(2)文中不得出现本人姓名或校名；
(3)词数70个左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
【答案】例文
Act Now to Save Water
Water is very valuable, but many people often waste water in their daily life. For example, some people take a bath for a long time. Some people often don’t turn off the ta p well, so the water drips from the tap. Sometimes people use too much water to wash clothes. Then what should we do to save water First, we should take a quick shower. Second, we should turn off the tap well after we use it. If there is a trip, fix it. Third, when we do some washing, we should use as little water as possible.
Water is really important to us. Let’s save water from now on.
每年4月22日是世界地球日。你校英语社拟开展以“Let’s Protect Our Earth Together”为主题的英语演讲活动，向全校师生发出共同保护地球的倡议。请你根据下列要点提示，写一篇70词左右的英语演讲稿。
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
【答案】例文：
As we all know, the earth is our home. We should protect it. At home, we can save water and turn off the lights when leaving rooms. At school, making a poster to call on more people to protect the earth is a good idea. Also, we can reuse paper because it is an effective way to lower energy consumption during paper-making processes. In the community, we should sort the rubbish to make our environment clean. Let’s take action to protect our earth from now on in order to create a sustainable and beautiful living environment for future generations.
Thank you for your listening.
7．假如你是康康，你和家人上周去了山上露营，请你根据写作要求用英语写一篇短文，介绍你的旅行经历。
When did you go there Last weekend
Where did you go camping In the mountain
Who did you go with My family
How did you go there By car
What was the weather like It was sunny and windy
What did you do Set up the tent, got water, cooked lunch and went fishing
How was your trip Wonderful
写作要求：
(1)短文需要包含表格中所提示的全部要点，可适当发挥，书写规范；
(2)文中不得出现本人姓名或校名；
(3) 词数70个左右。
【答案】例文
A Trip to the Mountain
Last weekend, I camped in the mountain with my family by car. The weather was sunny and windy.
First, when we got there, I helped my father set up the tent. Then, we found a big river. The water was clean, so we got some water. Next, we helped my mother cook and had lunch together. The food was delicious. Later, I went fishing with my father and got a lot of fish. Finally, we returned to our home.
The trip was wonderful and we were happy that day.
8．好的团队要有团队精神。每位成员都应该积极参与团队活动,互相帮助。假如你是小组在组织活动时,遇到个别组员不积极参与的情况,你会怎么办 请根据表格内容提示,写篇短文,提出合理建议。
Building Better Teamwork
The problem some team members are not active in...
Useful suggestions ●communicate(交流)with...; ●set some team rules together; ●discuss the problems with...;
Building better teamwork is important in students’ daily study. But some team members are not active in activities.
As a team member, I will try to help others. First, I will communicate with the team members because I want to find out their difficulties. And then I will try my best to help them out of the difficulties. Second , to make the activities go well ,we will set some team rules together. Third, I will discuss the problems with my teacher. My teacher will give me some advice on how to solve the problems. Finally, I think it is important to care for each other. And everyone should try to make the team better.
9．假设你叫李明,你打算向某学生英文网站投稿,介绍你学校的校规。请你根据思维导图内容提示,用英文写一篇短文。
注意:1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
2.语句连贯,词数 80左右。
My School Rules
Hi ,I’m Li Ming.I’d like to introduce my school rules to you.
First, we must arrive on time for classes and never be late. We need to finish our homework carefully everyday. Second , we must wear school uniforms on weekdays. This can keep us looking tidy. Third, we should be polite and respect our teachers and classmates. What’s more, we must talk quietly in the library and mustn't run in the classroom.
It’s very important to follow the school rules. They can help us make our school life safer and better.
10．假如你是Alice, 这周日你约了在你校学习的英国交换生Helen 去一座新公园游玩。你在预约门票时看到了公园的一些规定。请你根据下列提示写一封邮件,将这些规定告知 Helen。
要求: (1)要点齐全,语句通顺,语法正确,可适当发挥;
(2)词数 70 左右。
参考词汇: walk dogs 遛狗; ride bikes 骑自行车
Dear Helen ,
How are you We’ll go to the new park this Sunday. There are some rules in the park. Let me tell you about them.
First,we can't walk dogs in the park. Second, we must keep the park clean. Third, the park is open from 6 a.m. to 10 p.m. Fourth, don’t swim in the river. Finally , we can’t ride our bikes in the park. Those are the park rules. We all need to follow them.
What about meeting at the bus stop at 9 a.m. Write to me soon.
Yours ,
Alice
11．在你的学习生活中，你一定做过很多让自己感到幸福快乐的事情，如帮助别人、读书、做志愿服务等。请以“______ makes me happy”为题，根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文。
提示词：do good 做好事 help others 帮助他人 do sports 做运动 work hard 努力学习
要点：1.什么让你快乐； 2.在生活中你是如何做的。
要求：1.参考要点内容，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；
4.词数不少于 70。
【答案】 Helping Others Makes Me Happy
Helping others makes me happy because it gives me a sense of purpose and fulfillment. Whenever I assist someone, whether it’s helping a classmate with homework or volunteering in my community, I feel a deep sense of joy. I believe that small acts of kindness can make a big difference in someone’s life.
In my daily life, I try to be attentive to those around me and offer help whenever I can. This not only makes others happy but also brings me great satisfaction and happiness.
12．假如你是李华，你所在的阳光社区将于下个月开放社区图书馆，现面向全社区招募志愿者。请根据以下要点，用英语写一封自荐信。
内容需包含：
1.性格特点：乐于助人，做事细心； 2.爱好：热爱读书…… 3.你对志愿工作的看法：……
注意：1.词数80左右。可适当发挥。2.邮件已给出的部分，不计入总词数。
【答案】例文
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I’m Li Hua. I’m writing to recommend myself as a volunteer of the library in our community.
I’m always willing to help others. When my classmates have trouble with their studies, I often offer my help patiently. Also, I am a careful person. I always pay attention to details, so I can organize activities well.
I love reading very much. I often lose myself in different kinds of books, like exciting novels and interesting science books. I can share my favorite books with community members.
I believe being a volunteer is a great chance to help others and improve myself. It can bring joy to others and make me grow at the same time. Therefore, I am willing to spend my free time doing meaningful things for our community.
I will be thankful if I get the chance.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
13．五一劳动节“May Day”即将来临，一位名叫Jack的交换生将在假期来到成都，并住在你家。假设你是李华，请根据图片信息写一封信，简单介绍一下你自己和你的生活方式，及家庭规则。以便Jack能了解你，从而更快适应这里的生活。
要求：1. 内容须包括提示的所有信息，适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
2. 不能出现真实姓名和学校名称等个人信息；
3. 词数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总数。
【答案】[范文]
Dear Jack,
May Day is coming! I am very happy to hear that you’ll come to Chengdu. Let me tell you something about myself and my family.
My favorite animal is the panda. Pandas are cute. I usually play basketball with my friends. I play it three times a week. It is relaxing.
As for eating habits, I eat fruits and vegetables every day. Because they are good for my health. I hardly have junk food. I also go to bed and get up early.
In my family, we must treat others with respect. Everyone needs to do housework, like cleaning the room.
I hope you can have fun with us in Chengdu. I’m looking forward to seeing you.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
14．根据所给提示，完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容，不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的真实校名和姓名：
国有国法，家有家规。没有规矩不成方圆。假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter在邮件中询问你家的家规，并让你谈谈对这些家规的看法或感受。请根据Peter所提出的问题，给他写封回信。
提示词语：can’t, have to, necessary, strict, important, unfair
提示问题：
1. What rules do you have at home
2. What do you think of the rules Why
【答案】例文：
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to hear from you. Here are some rules in my family.
First, I can’t stay up late because my parents think sleep is important for health. Besides, I have to finish homework before using my phone. Although this feels strict sometimes, I know it’s necessary to focus on studies.
However, I think the rule “can’t eat snacks after 8 PM” is a bit unfair – I’m always hungry while studying!
What about your family rules Looking forward to your reply!
Best wishes,
Li Hua