2026届高考英语二轮复习:读后续写 课件 (43张PPT)

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名称 2026届高考英语二轮复习:读后续写 课件 (43张PPT)
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(共43张PPT)
Continuation Writing
Continuation Writing
读后续写初探
汇报人:WPS
Demands(高考考纲解读):
提供一段350词以内的语言材料,要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语进行续写(150词左右),将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。
Read several paragraphs (about 350 words)
Write two paragraphs(150 words or so)
档 次 描 述
第五档(21—25) —与所给短文融洽度高,与所提供各段落开
头语衔接合理。
— 所使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确,可能
有些许错误,但完全不会影响意义表达。
— 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使所续
写短文结构紧凑。
-----主题一定要正能量,弘扬社会主义核心价值观
coherent(连贯的)
reasonable
rich, accurate
compact(紧凑的)
positive
融洽度高
丰富、准确
结构紧凑
正能量
六字真言
合理
Principles: 读后续写第五档评分原则
写作步骤:
“四步答题法”。
阅读—拟稿—润色—成稿。
Step1 阅读,理清故事情节,找出5W+1How。画出关键词,预测后续故事
1. make sense of the main plots of the passage.
2. Analyze the two given sentences & underline key words to predict what is to follow.
Step2 拟稿Draft
work out an outline
Step 3 Polish 润色
1.Use the key words and phrases in the passage.
2.use different sentence structures.
1.句式要有变化
① 复合句 (主语\宾语\表语\同谓语\定语\状语从句)
② 倒装句
(1 )否定词置于句首(2)only+状语置于句首
③ 强调句型
It is ……that (who)…
④固定句子结构
too…to… so…that… not …until…
not only…but also… neither…nor…
2.要使用高级词汇及短语
① 使用高等级词汇
He is a good student. excellent\extraordinary
② 使用短语
I like music. be fond of\be interested in
③ 使用谚语
As the saying goes,“”
It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever.
(适用于自编名言)
并列
选择
原因
结果
比较
转折
递进
举例
and; as well as ; also; too,
or; either—or;
because (of) ;owing to; due to ; thanks to
so ; therefore ; thus ; as a result
on the contrary ; compared to …,
but ; yet; however ;
besides ; moreover ; in addition
for example; such as ; that is ;take …for example
探究一:What and how to read(读)
(3S)
Step1. Scanning for the theme
Step2. Skimming for narrative elements
Step3. Searching for the plot of the story
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落的开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
If there’s one thing I can’t stand people saying, it’ s, “I’m not good at anything ... I don’t have any talent.” I just don’t buy that at all. To me, everyone has at least one talent, and while it sometimes takes you a lifetime to find, it does exist. There was a time when I didn’t believe that. What changed my mind was a seemingly small event that took place in 1953.
At that time, I was a high school student. I was a funny-looking skinny boy named Eugene Orowitz, who weighed
barely 100 pounds. I was a good student, but as far as I was concerned, in just about every other department I was a loser. I wanted to fit in, to be someone and do something well. But I hadn’t found anything I was good at. One sunny afternoon, our gym class went out to the school’s running track. The teacher taught us all various track and field events. I was a loser in all of them. Then came the javelin(标枪). Suddenly something inside me began saying, “Try it! Try it!” I had to wait for my turn, though, trying not to look too eager. Finally, when everyone had a chance to throw — the best throw going about 30 yards — I looked at the teacher.
“Hey, Orowitz, you want to try ” he asked.
Embarrassed, I looked down, but managed to nod my head.
“Well, come on then,” he said impatiently, and handed me the javelin. Behind me I could hear some of my classmates laughing. As I grasped the javelin in my hand, I was seized with a strange feeling-a new-found excitement. For some crazy reason, I was relaxed over what I was about to do, even though I’d never done it before. I raised the javelin over my head, took six quick steps and let the thing go. The same voice that had urged me to throw it, now told
me it was a good throw.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右:
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:
I watched as the spear(标枪)took off. ________
Paragraph 2:
That night I took the javelin home with me. _________________________________________________
探究一:Reading(读)
step1:Scanning for the theme
If there’s one thing I can’t stand people saying, it’ s, “I’m not good at anything ... I don’t have any talent.” I just don’t buy that at all. To me, everyone has at least one talent, and while it sometimes takes you a lifetime to find, it does exist. There was a time when I didn’t believe that. What changed my mind was a seemingly small event that took place in 1953.
story
when
where
who
what
how
why
one sunny afternoon
on the school’s running track
I(Euenge Orowitz),the teacher,other schoolmates
I collected all my courage to throw the javelin.
I thought I was a loser in every other department other than study.

step2. Skimming for narrative elements
At
At that time, I was a high school student. I was a funnylookingskinny boy named Eugene Orowitz, who weighedbarely 100 pounds. I was a good student, but as far as I was concerned, in just about every other department I was a loser. I wanted to fit in, to be someone and do something well. But I hadn’t found anything I was good at. One sunny afternoon, our gym class went out to the school’s running track. The teacher taught us all various track and field events. I was a loser in all of them. Then came the javelin(标枪). Suddenly something inside me began saying, “Try it! Try it!” I had to wait for my turn, though, trying not to look too eager. Finally, when everyone had a chance to throw — the best throw going about 30 yards — I looked at the teacher.
Step3:Searching for the plot(behaviors and feelingss)
Paras(段落) Behaviors(行为) Feelings(情感)
para. 1
para. 2
not have any talent,
didn’t believe...
loser ,wanted to fit in,hadn’t found anything I was good at
doubtful
not confident and
painful
eager but a little shy
“Hey, Orowitz, you want to try ” he asked.
Embarrassed, I looked down, but managed to nod my head.
“Well, come on then,” he said impatiently, and handed me the javelin. Behind me I could hear some of my classmates laughing. As I grasped the javelin in my hand, I was seized with a strange feeling-a new-found excitement. For some crazy reason, I was relaxed over what I was about to do, even though I’d never done it before. I raised the javelin over my head, took six quick steps and let the thing go. The same voice that had urged me to throw it, now told me it was a good throw.
Paras(段落) Behaviors(行为)
Feelings(情感)
para. 3,4&5
embarrassed but eager
sensitive
hopeful
could hear some of my classmates laughing,
was seized with ,
took six quick steps and let the thing go
Step1.Draw an outline
Step2.Describe the details
Step3.Decorate (polish) the continuation writing
(3D)
探究二:What and how to write(写)
Step1:Draw an Outline
1.Predict the ending based on the plot and the theme.
2.Analyze the given sentences(关键词):
Paragraph 1:
I watched as the spear(标枪)took off. ...
Paragraph 2:
That night I took the javelin home with me...
3.Keep to the theme(正能量)belief talent
ending
beginning(didn’t believe)
climax(result )
(belief,talent)
Continuation Para.1 :
Continuation Para.2 :
process (try,throw)
Predict the ending based on the plot and the theme.(reasonable)
Paragraph 1:(顺推和逆推法)
Paragraph 2:
take home
take off
(主题升华)
personal perception
(个人感悟)
watch
feeling(Oriwitz)
land on
result≧30yards
reactions (teacher and classmates)
mental activity
theme sublimation
Step2.Describe the details
做好三个衔接,内容上下连贯,语言表达风格一致。
principles
主人公命运逆转,出现既在意料之外,又在情理之中的结果,激发读者的兴趣。
续写段一定要正能量,弘扬社会主义核心价值观。
曲折性原则
原文一致原则
正能量原则
① 给出句与续写句的衔接
② 续写1段和续写2段之间的衔接
③ 续写段与整篇文章的衔接
三个链接
灵动、恰当的v./adj./adv.“with”的复合结构非谓语,从句,强调,倒装,虚拟丰富情感描写Step 3 : Decorate(polish润色)Tip: towrite based on the outline and userich and accurateexpressions增加细节
开始写作
细读句
构思框架
修改润色
整洁誊写
读懂大意
理清脉络
1.
细读故事
理清脉络
who; when;where; what; why; how
2.
斟酌首句
巧妙逆推
two given sentences
reasonable ending
3.
巧用描写
点缀细节
detail description, sentence structures
4.
言简意赅
升华主题
positive theme
5.
修改润色
整洁誊写
rich, accurate
beautiful
Summary(tragedies )
Congratulations!
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Homework
Polish your writing.
Practice makes perfect!
Thank you
汇报人:WPS