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2025年全国Ⅱ卷英语
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假定你是校英文报编辑李华,外教Chris上个月答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章。请给 Chris写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 询问进展;
2. 提醒交稿时间。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80词左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
一、细致审题
假定你是校英文报编辑李华,外教Chris上个月答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章。请给 Chris写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 询问进展;
2. 提醒交稿时间。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80词左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
难
催稿信?
弱化“催”的感觉
强化询问与期待
非常考验情商
写信的“必要性”
If you need some information, don't hesitate to tell me.
If you need any assistance or have questions regarding length or fomat, please don't hesitate to inform us.
Dear Chris,
Para 1:问候 + 引出话题(回顾约定)
How’s it going Thank you again for agreeing to write an article about Canadian sports for our newspaper.
Para 2:
询问进展(核心要点1)
Could you please share your progress on the article
提醒时间(核心要点2)
We kindly remind you that the submission deadline is ....
Para 3:感谢 + 期待回复
Thank you for your help. Looking forward to your wonderful work!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
需要补充哪些内容?
二、构思提纲
三、动笔开写
写什么??
弱化“催”的感觉
强化询问与期待
需要补充哪些内容?
Dear Chris,
Hope this letter finds you well! I'm writing to follow up on the article about sports in Canada that you kindly agreed to contribute to our school magazine.
I was wondering how the writing process is coming along. Your insights into Canadian sports will no doubt offer our readers a fascinating glimpse into the highlight of Canadian culture, especially for those who have a passion for ice and snow sports. After hearing you are writing on this topic, many students get excited——the article is truly anticipated! Just as a gentle reminder, the final draft is due next Tuesday, June 25th, to ensure its timely inclusion in the upcoming edition. If you need any assistance or have questions regarding fomat, please don't hesitate to inform us.
We would appreciate it if you could send the article at your earliest convenience. I am looking forward to your reply. Thank you again for your support!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
问候 + 写作目的
展信佳!
两个要点
询问进展
变“催”为善意的提醒
文章的重要意义:猛夸
矛盾点转移
表关心
感谢+期待回复
一、易错点及扣分项
1. 遗漏要点:询问进展和提醒交稿时间,两个核心要点缺一不可。
2. 语气不当:直接催促(如Why haven’t you finished ; You must hand in your essay on...),会显得不礼貌。
二、高分技巧
1. 合理的细节补充:丰富文章内容,增强针对性。
2. 灵活应变:若题目未明确交稿时间,用"as soon as possible"或"by next Monday"替代。
3. 高级句式:灵活使用情态动词、复合句等不同句式。
紧扣题目两个要点,保持礼貌、清晰、简洁,注意邮件格式和身份体现,即可拿到高分!
总结
如何进行句型升级?
I'm writing to ask about the progress of the article on Canadian sports that you promised to write last month.
I'm writing with the intention of following up the progress of the article on Canadian sports that you generously agreed to contribute to our school magazine last month.
直接点明写信目的,提及上个月Chris答应写稿一事,自然引出下文。
Our readers are really looking forward to it. Could you let me know how it's going
Our readers are extremely/highly looking forward to it, many of whom have expressed great curiosity about popular sports in Canada. I can almost imagine their excited faces when your vivid article finally hits the pages! Could you let me know how
it's going
强化情感表达
提醒交稿时间:
Please remember to submit it by....
As the deadline approaches, I’d like to remind you that the final draft is due next Friday, June 14th.
补充内容,细化要求
What’s more, we prefer the article of around 800 words with some interesting personal experiences related to Canadian sports. If it’s not too much trouble, could you also attach some relevant photos to make the article more engaging Should you need any assistance, please feel free to inform me, and we will provide full support.
Dear Chris,
Hope this email finds you well! I'm writing with the intention of following up the progress of the article on Canadian sports that you generously agreed to contribute to our school magazine last month.
Our readers are extremely/highly looking forward to it, many of whom have expressed great curiosity about popular sports in Canada. I can almost imagine their excited faces when your vivid article finally hits the pages! Could you let me know how it's going As the deadline approaches, I’d like to remind you that the final draft is due next Friday, June 14th.What’s more, we prefer the article of around 800 words with some interesting personal experiences related to Canadian sports. If it’s not too much trouble, could you also attach some relevant photos to make the article more engaging Should you need any assistance, please feel free to inform me, and we will provide full support.
Thank you for sharing your knowledge with us—your article is eagerly awaited! We can’t wait to see your insights inspire our readers.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
THANKS