8.安慰信
高分范文
Dear John,
I'm sorry to hear that you have difficulty in adapting to online learning. Actually, I have similar experiences. Luckily, I've managed to discover effective strategies that could be of great assistance to you.
To begin with, I suggest you make a daily schedule that allows enough time to complete your homework and other assignments. Furthermore, maintaining good communication with your teachers and classmates can prove immensely beneficial. Don't hesitate to pose questions and request further explanations whenever necessary.
Bear in mind that challenges are temporary, and with perseverance, you can overcome them. Believe in your abilities!
Yours sincerely, Li Hua
二、范文积累
(一)亮点词汇
词汇 常用搭配 同义词
strategy n.策略;行动计划 strategy for doing sth./strategy to do sth. 做某事的策略 plan n. 计划
assistance n. 帮助;援助 be of assistance 有用的,有帮助的 help n.帮助 support n. 支持
maintain v. 维持;保持 maintain order 维持秩序 keep v. 保持
pose v. 提出(问题或考虑对象) pose questions 提出问题 raise v. 提出
temporary adj. 暂时的,临时的 temporary assignment临时任务/工作 short-term adj. 短期的
perseverance n. 坚持不懈,毅力 perseverance pays off. 毅力会有回报。 determination n. 决心 毅力
(二)亮点句型
① ...strategies that could be of great assistance to you. (定语从句)
② ...a daily schedule that allows enough time to ... (定语从句)
③ ...maintaining good communication with. can prove immensely beneficial. (动名词短语作主语)
仿写训练
请根据首字母提示,在空白处填入合适的单词。
If you turn to your parents or teachers, they will help you choose appropriate s
to cope with your stress effectively.
It's sometimes hard to m a right balance between sleep and homework.
When you feel too bad, talking to your best friends is of great a to you.
The truth is that most adolescent (青春期的) problems are t , so you don't have to worry.
I firmly believe confidence and p can bring you a bright future.
请根据括号内的提示,在空白处填入合适的表达。
Dear Jacky,
(很抱歉得知你学古诗词ancient Chinese poems有困难). However, there's (2) (没必要感到沮丧) about it. I'd like to offer you some suggestions. To begin with, read an ancient Chinese poem over and over again, which can make it easy for you to understand it. Furthermore, learning some background information about a poem can prove (3) (非常有用), which helps you discover the hidden meaning the poem conveys. More importantly, it makes sense to watch the TV program called Chinese Poetry Conference (中国诗词大会), where poem lovers exchange their experience of learning ancient Chinese poems.
(记住) that difficulties are temporary, and with perseverance, you
will overcome them. (5) (相信你自己的能力)!
Yours,
Li Hua
3.请借鉴本节所学,仿写以下安慰信。
语言积累
高分词汇及短语
tough adj. 困难的
release v. 释放
relate v. 理解
pressure n. 压力
relieve v. 缓解
tension n. 紧张
control v.控制
professional adj. 专业的
effective adj. 有效的
seek professional help寻求专业的帮助
relate to…. 理解;与……产生共鸣
in low spirits 情绪低落
get rid of …. 摆脱……
control your temper控制你的脾气
take a deep breath 深呼吸
二、安慰信写作框架
(一)阐述写信目的
得知对方的不幸
It is shocking/a shock to hear that… 听说……,我非常震惊。
Having known that …, I'm writing to express my great comfort to you. 得知……,我写信安慰你。
表示安慰
Putting myself in your shoes, I can understand how you feel. 设身处地地为你着想,我能理解你的感受。
提出建议
情绪管理
At this moment, what you should do is to cheer up and find ways to reduce your anxiety.此时此刻,你应该振作起来,找到减轻焦虑的方法。
与他人沟通
It is highly recommended that you talk to your trusted friends and family members, or even seek professional help if needed.强烈建议你跟你信任的朋友和家人沟通,甚至在需要的时候寻求专业的帮助。
参加户外运动
Engage yourself in all kinds of physical activities, because it is an effective way to relieve anger and stress.你要参加各种体育活动,因为它是缓解愤怒和压力的一种有效方式。
其他建议
It would be better if you ., in which you can . 如果你……会更好,在这种方式下你会......
Personally, I think you'd better pay close attention to ..., which really counts. 就我个人而言,我认为你最好密切注意……,这很重要。
表达祝福或愿意提供帮助
⑨ If I can be of any assistance to you, I hope you could let me know immediately/instantly.如果我能帮你什么忙,我希望你能立即告诉我。
⑩ I sincerely hope you'll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal. 我希望你很快平静下来,回到正轨。
8.安慰信
仿写训练
(1) strategies (2) maintain assistance (4) temporary (5)perseverance
(1) I'm sorry to learn/hear/know that you're having difficulty learning ancient Chinese poems
no need to feel upset
immensely beneficial
Bear in mind
Believe in your abilities
参考范文
Dear Worried,
Having known that you're having such a tough time at the moment, I can totally understand your situation. Here are some suggestions for you.
Firstly, identifying the root reason for losing your temper should be a top priority, so that you can know how to control your temper. Besides, it is highly recommended that you talk to your trusted friends and family members, or even seek professional help if needed. Lastly, engage yourself in all kinds of physical activities, because it is an effective way to relieve anger and stress.
I sincerely hope you'll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.
Yours, Li Hua