8B期末写作复习
1. 志愿者服务
1.1深圳是一座志愿者之城,今年春运期间深圳北站随处可见深圳学子的身影。为发扬志愿者精神,你市英文报将以“一次有意义的志愿活动 (A Meaningful Voluntary Activity)”为主题,开启稿件征集活动。假定你是李华,请写一篇英文短文投稿,报道此次志愿活动。
要点提示:1. 活动时间和地点; 2. 活动内容:①指引方向; ②…… (至少补充一点)3. 活动意义:①锻炼表达能力; ②…… (至少补充一点)
参考词汇:春运 Spring Festival travel rush; 深圳北站 Shenzhen North Railway Station
A Meaningful Voluntary Activity
As a city of volunteers, Shenzhen encourages students to take part in voluntary activities.
During this year’s Spring Festival travel rush, Shenzhen North Railway Station was filled with students. They volunteered to help passengers find their platforms, carry their luggage and answer their questions.This voluntary activity was a meaningful experience for the students. It allowed them to practise their communication skills, learn about different cultures and develop a sense of social responsibility. One student volunteer said, “I’m so glad I had the chance to volunteer. It was a great way to help others and make a difference in my city. I’m grateful for the experience and I will encourage other students to take part in volunteering.”
The voluntary activity at Shenzhen North Railway Station was a big success. The students also learned valuable life lessons.
在春运期间,深圳北站随处可见学生们的身影。(be fill with )
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作为志愿者,他们主动为乘客们提供帮助。比如说帮助他们搬运行李、及时解决问题等等。(offer to do , carry luggages and solve problems)
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这次志愿者活动对于学生们来说非常有意义。学生不仅仅锻炼了交流能力,同时也了解到了不同的文化,提高了社会责任感。(practise communication skills , learn about different culture and improve social responsibility)
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4.此次活动 是一个巨大的成功。对于学生们而言是一次难忘的经历。我们相信会有越来越多的年轻人做志愿者工作,为城市做出贡献。 ( a big success, an unforgettable experience, make contributions to our city)
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5.这是一个很好的方式来帮助别人,使我的城市有所不同。(. It’s a great way to...)
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1.2假如你是阳光中学的学生李华,为帮助贫困山村的学生,你校举办了“Your kindness matters”的主题慈善活动。请你根据以下图文要点提示和要求,写一篇英文短文来介绍此次活动并分享你的感受。
参考词汇:central square 中心广场;charity sale 义卖
In order to help students in poor villages, Sunshine Middle School
为了帮助贫困山区的孩子,阳光中学于5月30日在学校的广场举办了慈善活动。主题是Your kindness matters”
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我们主要为他们筹款和捐赠书籍。(raise money for, donate books)
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3在活动中,一些同学表演了唱歌和跳舞。
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4.通过这次活动,我们不仅仅感受到帮助别人的喜悦,也理解到了生活的艰辛。(hardship of life)
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5.我们应该珍惜生活,努力学习。(cherish life)
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1.2 范文:
B班:
In order to help students in poor villages, Sunshine Middle School held a charity activity with the theme of “Your kindness matters” in the central square of our school on May 30th.
Our event mainly accepted everyone to donate books and raised money for them. We also accepted clean clothes. In the activity, some of our students performed singing and dancing.
Through this activity, we not only felt the joy of helping others, but also made us understand the hardships of life. We should cherish the good life now and study hard.
A班:
On May 30th, Sunshine Middle School organized a meaningful charity event titled "Your Kindness Matters" in the central square, aiming to support poor students in rural areas.
The activity encouraged participation through various forms of contribution: donations of books, second-hand clothing in good condition, and voluntary money support. To further engage attendees, talented students showed excellent performances, including singing and dancing, which added a lively atmosphere to the event.
Beyond material contributions, this experience deeply impacted us. Not only did we discover the happiness of aiding those in need, but it also deepened our awareness of life’s challenges. As a result, we are more motivated to cherish our current and pursue academic excellence with greater determination.Now, we deeply understand how lucky we are and will make effort to achieve higher grades in our studies.
2. 肢体语言
2.1假如你是李明,你校正在开展“践行核心价值观,争做向上好少年”主题活动,请你根据要点提示,用英语写一篇活动倡议书。80 词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
要点提示:1. 在家里:关心家人,勤做家务,节约水电…
2. 在学校:努力学习,尊敬老师,团结同学…
3. 在社会:遵守交规,文明礼貌,不乱扔垃圾…
参考词汇:family member; respect; in society; throw litter
Our school has been carrying out the theme activities of practicing the core values and encouraging the teenagers to be good. As a student, what should we do in our daily life
First, we should love our family members and help them do some housework at home. It’s necessary for us to save water and electricity. Second, at school, we must study hard, get on well with our classmates, respect teachers and try our best to help people in need. Third, in society, we must be friendly to people around us and talk politely. What’s more, it’s important for us to obey the traffic rules. Don’t throw litter everywhere. It’s our duty to keep our environment clean and tidy. Last but not least, we need to exercise often to keep healthy.
Let’s take action and call on more students to join us!
我校开展了践行核心价值观、鼓励青少年向善的主题活动。
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节约水电对我们来说是必要的。
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我们必须与同学和睦相处,尊敬老师,尽力帮助有需要的人。
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保持环境的清洁和整洁是我们的责任。
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让我们采取行动,号召更多的学生加入我们!
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2.2
在选择主题时,我强烈建议关注传统工艺或著名故事。
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如果你喜欢讲故事,花木兰的传说是一个不错的选择。
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她伟大的勇气和对家庭的爱,完美地代表了中国文化的中心价值。
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为了成功地进行演讲,请记住以下关键提示。
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站直,放松肩膀。这会让你看起来很自信。
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我期待着你在演讲比赛中表现出色。
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2.2 范文:
So I would like to share some ideas with you.
When it comes to choosing a topic, I strongly recommend focusing on either traditional crafts or famous stories. Paper-cutting would be perfect - you could show how to cut out a beautiful red ‘Fu’ character from paper. If you prefer storytelling, the legend of Mulan is a good choice. Her great courage and love for family stand for the central value of Chinese culture beautifully.
To give a successful presentation, remember the following key tips. First, try to speak slowly and clearly, especially when pronouncing Chinese names. Second, stand straight with relaxed shoulders. This can make you look confident. And don’t forget to smile and make eye contact with the audience. Most importantly, believe in yourself. Practice in front of a mirror before the competition can improve your confidence.
I hope my suggestions will be helpful to you. And I’m looking forward to your excellent performance in the speech competition. Good luck!
传统技艺
Each different part of China has its own special forms of traditional art.
Chinese knots are a special traditional art of China. They are famous around the world. They are made by hand and have been formed for thousands of years. (They are invented by accident.) Chinese knots are colorful and beautiful. Red is used the most widely. In China, red is usually a symbol of good luck and prosperity. In the past, knots were used to record events by people, but now they are used at festivals and other celebrations. During the Spring Festival, people enjoy hanging the Chinese knots in rooms for auspiciousness . In our daily life, girls like tying the Chinese knots to their phones or keys together.
Nowadays, Chinese knots are here and there in China. And they are becoming more and more popular in the world.
中国结是中国的一种特别的传统艺术。世界著名,有数千年的历史。
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中国结由手工制成。颜色多而美。红色使用最广泛,因为红色象征着好运和繁荣。
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中国结过去用于记录事件,现在用于节日和其他庆典。
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春节期间,人们喜欢把它们挂在房间里祈求好运。
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5.现在中国结在全世界越来越受欢迎。
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3.2 如果你是李华,你的外国笔友 Mike 想了解中国的传统艺术形式,请你根据表格提示,给他写一封 e-mail,给他介绍至少两种中国传统文化,并且欢迎 Mike 来中国体验传统艺术。如果你是李华,你的外国笔友 Mike 想了解中国的传统艺术形式,请你根据表格提示,给他写一封 e-mail,给他介绍至少两种中国传统文化,并且欢迎 Mike 来中国体验传统艺
中国传统艺术 材料 寓意或用途
剪刀、红纸 喜庆吉祥
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剪纸是中国传统技艺之一。历史悠久,深受人们喜爱。人们常用剪刀和红纸来制作。(common tools)
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在春节和婚礼上,剪纸常常被用来装饰房间,因为人们认为剪纸可以带来吉祥。(bring auspiciousness)
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中国结是中国一种特别的手工编制技艺。红色最常见,因为红色象征好运和繁荣。(stand for good luck and prosperity)
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泥人是由面团制成的。 艺术家们用手将面团变成各种各样的形象,比如说孙悟空。
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皮影戏是一种古代的艺术形式。皮影由皮革制作,然后被裁成人物、动物或者物件的形状。皮影戏一般关于经典的故事或者剧目。(be cut out in the shape of ...)
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传统技艺是中国文化的重要部分。现在人们致力于传承这些传统技艺,使其保持鲜活。(keep alive)______________________________________________________________________
欢迎你来到中国,感受和体验传统艺术的魅力。(feel the charm of ...)
Dear Mike,
There are many different kinds of traditional arts in China. Today I will introduce you paper-cutting and Chinese knot.
Paper cutting is one of China’s most popular traditional folk arts. It has a long history. The paper, usually red, is folded before it is cut with scissors. The color of red is often used in paper-cutting, which symbolizes health and prosperity. During the Spring Festival and wedding celebrations, paper-cuttings are used to decorate doors, windows and rooms in order.
Chinese knot is a special art of folk hand knitting in China. The most commonly used color is red because it symbolizes good luck and prosperity. The knots can be used as car or mobile phone decorations. Also, people hang the knots in rooms.
I’m looking forward to seeing you in China soon and experiencing Chinese traditional culture together.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①体裁:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:本文主要是 “一般现在时”;
③提示:根据表格内容提示介绍至少两种中国传统文化艺术,可适当增加细节,注意行文要连贯,逻辑要合理。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明要介绍的中国传统文化艺术;
第二步,详细介绍两种中国传统文化艺术的原材料、寓意和用途;
第三步,邀请Mike来中国体验传统艺术。
[亮点词汇]
①popular traditional folk arts 流行的传统民间艺术
②cut with scissors 用剪刀剪
③symbolizes health and prosperity 象征健康和繁荣
④wedding celebrations 婚礼庆典
⑤commonly 通常
[高分句型]
①The color of red is often used in paper-cutting, which symbolizes health and prosperity. (which引动非限制性定语从句)
②The most commonly used color is red because it symbolizes good luck and prosperity. (原因状语从句)
模仿造句:在春节和婚礼上,剪纸常常被用来装饰房间,因为人们认为剪纸可以带来吉祥。
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4.卡通
4.1中华文明逐步走向世界。假如你是李华,你的德国笔友Jackson想了解中国的卡通电影,同时他对孙悟空特别感兴趣。请你根据以下提示,给Jackson 介绍这方面的内容。
I am glad that you are interested in China’s cartoon movies. As we all know, China’s cartoon movies have a long history. In the 1960s and 1980s, there were many good cartoon movies. One of the most famous films was The Monkey King .
Monkey King is one of the main characters in Journey to the West. He has a magic stick which can be put into his ears. In addition, he can also turn himself into seventy-two different things. What’s more, he is so confident that he never gives up his hope easily when he faces difficulties.
In all, China’s cartoon movies are becoming better and better at present. I hope you have chances to enjoy more Chinese films.
众所周知,中国的动画电影有着悠久的历史。
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孙悟空是《西游记》中的主要人物之一。
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他有一根神奇的棍子,可以插在耳朵里。
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他还可以把自己变成72种不同的东西。(turn into )
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他很有信心,遇到困难时从不轻易放弃希望。(so...that...)
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我希望你有机会欣赏更多的中国电影。
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4.2 假设你所在的学校正在举办一场"Cartoon Festival"(卡通节),每个班级需要推荐一部最受欢迎的卡通片,并在班级内进行展示。作为班级代表,你需要写一篇短文介绍你最喜欢的卡通片。
内容需包括:
1.卡通片的名称及主要角色;
2.简要描述剧情或主题;
3.你喜欢它的原因(如:有趣、有意义等);
我想推荐小猪佩奇参加我们的卡通节。
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我最喜欢的一个部分是他们跳进泥水坑一起大笑。
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小猪佩奇看起来像一个简单而有趣的儿童节目,但实际上充满了聪明的故事。
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小猪佩奇教会了我们关于家庭和友谊的教训。
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我认为,正是这些关于家庭生活的简单故事,让世界各地各个年龄阶段的人们都喜欢它。
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4.2 范文
B班
I want to recommend Peppa Pig for our Cartoon Festival. It's a lovely cartoon about Peppa, a pink pig, and her family and friends.
In the show, Peppa has many funny adventures with her brother George and friends like Suzy Sheep. One of my favorite part is when they jump in muddy puddles and laugh together. The stories are simple but always make me smile.
Peppa Pig may look like a simple funny children's show, but it's actually full of clever storytelling. Peppa Pig teaches good lessons about not only family but also friendship. The English is clear and easy to understand too. I think its simple stories about family life are why people of all ages enjoy it worldwide.
A班
I would like to recommend Peppa Pig for our Cartoon Festival. This British animated series follows the daily adventures of Peppa, an energetic pink pig, along with her family and friends.
The show beautifully captures childhood experiences through simple yet meaningful stories. Whether it's Peppa playing with her little brother George or jumping in muddy puddles with her friends, each episode(一集) is filled with warmth and humor. What makes Peppa Pig special is how it shows valuable life lessons about family relationship and friendship in an entertaining way.
Beyond its colorful cartoons and cheerful characters, the show offers clear English dialogue that's perfect for language learners.Its world-wide popularity lies in how it turns ordinary moments into extraordinary adventures that meet the needs of viewers of all ages.
宠物
6.1谈到庞物,班上同学人人都有话说。你班举办了“Is it a good idea to keep pets ”为主题的讨论活动。请你根据以下要点,总结同学对于养宠物的想法,并表达自己的观点。
Students in my class discussed “Is it a good idea to keep pets ” today. Opinions were divided among my classmates.
Some students argue that having pets is beneficial. They believe pets are cute companions(friends) that teach responsibility. Additionally, pets can provide comfort and reduce loneliness, offering entertainment and emotional support.
However, others oppose the idea, stating that pets require significant time and effort, which may have a bad effect on students’ studies. They also point out that noise and mess will disrupt household cleanliness and peace.
Personally, I support keeping pets because they help us develop a sense of responsibility. Caring for a pet not only brings joy but also teaches valuable life lessons.
有些学生认为养宠物是有益的。
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他们认为宠物是可爱的伙伴,教会他们责任感。。
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宠物可以提供安慰,减少孤独,提供娱乐和情感支持。______________________________________________________________________________
另一些人则反对这一想法,称宠物需要大量的时间和精力,这可能会对学生的学业产生不利影响。______________________________________________________________________________
他们还指出,噪音和混乱会破坏家庭的清洁和和平。______________________________________________________________________________
6.2 随着科技的发展,越来越多的中学生开始使用iPad学习和休闲娱乐。你班举办了“Is it a good idea to keep pets ”为主题的讨论活动。请你根据以下要点,总结同学对于养宠物的想法,并表达自己的观点。短文内容需包含以下几点:
1. 一些同学认为使用iPad对学习有好处;
2. 另一些同学认为ipad对学习可能产生负面影响;
3. 关于iPad使用你有什么建议。
一些学生认为使用iPad是有益的。
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用iPad,我们可以听音乐,下载很多学习材料,在屏幕上阅读。
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然而,其他人反对这个想法,说一些学生把他们的iPad带到教室里听音乐,这可能对他们的学习有不良影响。______________________________________________________________________________
他们还指出,一些学生甚至在家里浪费时间玩电子游戏。______________________________________________________________________________
我认为,作为学生,我们应该好好利用iPad来帮助我们学习。
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6.2 范文
Students in my class discussed “Is it a good idea to use an iPad ”today. Opinions were divided among my classmates.
Some students argue that using an iPad is beneficial.Actually, using an iPad, we can listen to music, download a lot of learning materials and read them on the screen. It’s helpful to our study, especially to our English listening.
However, others oppose the idea, stating that some students bring their iPads to the classroom and listen to music without permission, which may have a bad effect on their studies. They also point out that some of students even waste their time at home playing video games.
In my opinion, as students, we should make good use of iPads to help us study. Besides, the school should make a rule to guide the students to use iPads in a proper way.
8.1 假如你是李华,你们学校正在举行“未来的校园生活”的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下内容写一份关于未来校园生活的演讲稿。
参考词汇:电子课本 e-textbook;AI教学助手 AI teaching assistant
Hello, everyone. I would like to share my ideas of future school life now.
In the campus of the future, we will use e-textbooks and AI teaching assistants. Our homework will be done on the computer, and the computer will automatically check the homework and explain the knowledge that we have not mastered. Our after-school activities will be exploring space using VR technology and going to Mars to play basketball. We will take the flying school bus.
Our future school will be perfect. I believe our dream will come true.
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
在未来的校园里,我们将使用电子教科书和人工智能助教。
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我们的作业将在电脑上完成,电脑会自动检查作业,并解释我们没有掌握的知识。
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我们的课外活动将使用VR技术探索太空,去火星打篮球。
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8.2随着科技的发展,未来的生活会发生怎样的变化呢?请根据以下提示,发挥你的想象力,写一篇英语作文。
提示:
1. 很多事情都由电脑和机器人完成,如做家务;
2. 购物和看病都不需要外出;
3. 学生通过网络把课堂搬到家里;
4. 因为更好的医疗保健,人们可以活到200岁。
参考词汇:medical care 医疗保健
随着科技的发展,计算机和机器人将在每个家庭中发挥重要作用。
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计算机将帮助我们了解世界各地正在发生的事情。
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机器人将帮助我们做大部分家务,比如帮助我们做一些清洁、烹饪或洗衣服。
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由于更好的医疗护理,人们可以活到200岁。
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B班:
What do you think the life in the future will be like
With the development of technology, computers and robots will play a significant role in every family. Computers will help us know what is happening all over the world. Robots will help us do most of the housework, such as helping us do some cleaning, cooking or washing. We can do some shopping and see a doctor without going out. Students can study at home on the Internet. What’s more, people will live up to 200 years old because of better medical care.
Our life in the future will be better and better.
A班:
Have you ever wondered what our lives will be like in the future With the rapid development of technology, computers and robots will play a significant role in every family, changing the way we live.
Computers will serve as our windows to the world, keeping us learning about global events in real time. Meanwhile, intelligent robots will take over most household chores, such as cleaning, cooking, and washing. Imagine a world where shopping and medical care are just a click away—no more waiting in long lines. Even education will face a great change, as students can attend classes from the comfort of their homes.Moreover, thanks to breakthroughs in medical science, human lifespan could extend up to 200 years, allowing people to enjoy longer, healthier lives.
As these innovations(创新)show, our future promises to be more convenient, efficient, and fulfilling than ever before.Indeed, the best is yet to come!