Unit 2 Home Sweet Home
单元主题写作:邀请信
Write an email to ask a friend to help decorate your room. Below is a list of things you may need help with.写一封电子邮件,邀请朋友帮忙装饰你的房间。下面是一些你可能需要帮助的事情。
(buy some flowers. make a poster. go shopping.
bring a pair of Scissors buy glue. bring a brush,
make paper cuttings. bring a painting.)
第一步:理清题目要求
体裁:邀请信
主题:装饰房间
解析需求: things to do : go shopping, make a poster, make paper cutting,
things to buy: buy some flowers, buy glue,
tools you need:bring a pair of scissors, bring a brush, bring a painting,
第二步:列提纲
第三步:写作激活——句型
提出请求:Could you help...
I’d like to / am going to / want to decorate my room ...
Would you please bring...
Let’s go shopping together.
表达想法:I think we can...
I really hope that ...
I need .... / I know... so ...
表达期待:I am looking forward to your reply.
Please reply soon and tell me if you can come.
逻辑衔接词:First, Then, After that... / First, Then, What’s more, last but not the least.
其他学过句型:too... to... = so... that...
It’s adj for sb to do sth...
第四步:语句升级
1.开门见山说来意: I’m going to decorate my room this Sunday . I hope you can come!
[用and 连接两个单句,合并成一句。come 替换成 join me . ]
I’m going to decorate my room next Sunday, and I really hope you can join me!
2. 添加理由:我知道你擅长art, 你的帮助会使我的房间看起来很惊艳。
I know you’re good at art, so your help will make my room look amazing.
[或其他理由 例如:] 对我来说这是个困难的任务,希望和你一起完成它制造美好的回忆/使他有趣。
It’s a hard job for me. I hope we can finish it together and make wonderful memorise./make it fun.
3. 告知任务——按任务先后顺序(逻辑词+句式)
先购物:买花/胶水 /其他装饰品
First, let’s go shopping to buy some flowers , a glue and other decorations ;
然后,我需要你的帮助为墙面制作一副海报。+ 引出 刷子的请求+解释原因
Then, I need your help to make a cool poster for the wall.Could you bring a brush I think we can draw something on it.
我也想制作剪纸,+ 提出带剪刀的需求+ 带一幅画的需求
I also want to make paper cuttings. So could you bring a pair of scissors If possible, could you bring one of your favourite paintings That’s couldn’t be better!
4. 告知期待
让我们一起愉快地把我的房间变得更好。如果你能来的话请尽快回复哦!
Let’s have fun and make my room look great. Reply soon and tell me if you can come!
完整版:
*Subject: Come and Help Me Decorate My Room!*
Dear [Friend's Name],
I’m going to decorate my room next Sunday, and I really hope you can join me! I know you’re good at art, so your help will make my room look amazing.
First, we can go shopping together to buy some colorful flowers,a glue and other decorations. Then, I need your help to make a cool poster for the wall. Could you bring a brush I think we can draw something on it. I also want to make paper cuttings. So could you bring a pair of scissors If possible, could you bring one of your favourite paintings That’s couldn’t be better!
Let’s have fun and make my room look great. Reply soon and tell me if you can come!
Best wishes,
[Your Name]