2026届高三英语二轮复习：写作进阶 第1部分 第2讲 应用文写作实战操作课件（183张PPT）
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(共183张PPT)
写作进阶
第一部分 应用文写作
第二讲 应用文写作实战操作
应用文写作属于半开放式文体，考查内容种类繁多，自由灵活性强。现根据近年来考查频率，进行分类突破，量体裁衣。
文体解读
建议信是作者就有关问题进行分析针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议，以便让对方接受自己的想法、主张并解决有关问题。建议信可以写给个人、某个组织或机构，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法、观点或忠告。具体写作结构为：
一、应用文写作命题透视
典例导学
(2023·新课标Ⅰ卷)假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1．说明问题；
2．提出建议。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Dear Ryan，
I'm Li Hua from Class 3.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
写作指导
本篇作文要求学生写一封建议信。
1．文章应包含题中所列要点，内容分为三部分：开头(介绍自己并表明写信目的)、主体(表达意见和建议)和结尾(希望被采纳)。
2．学生需认真审题，就本题而言，题干所示的问题可能是被随机分组的两个意愿和基础程度不一致、口语水平不均衡，解决方案可以是按照个人意愿和口语水平进行分组。
3．提建议时要有理有据、态度诚恳、用语礼貌且委婉。
佳作赏析
Dear Ryan，
I'm Li Hua from Class 3.I'm writing to express my concerns about the upcoming oral practice after class.
I understand that you plan to pair all the students randomly for oral practice.However, not all students have the same level of proficiency in English, resulting in some pairs being too challenging for one student while being too easy for the other, which can lead to frustration or a lack of progress.Therefore, I think it is better to assign students to practice in pairs
based on their language proficiency and interests, rather than pair them randomly.Only in this way can each pair have a good match and effectively communicate with each other.Moreover, not only will it improve our English communication skills, but it will also build our confidence.
Therefore, I hope that you will consider my suggestions.Thank you for your attention.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
佳作点评
1．本篇范文要点齐全，结构完整，角色代入感强，体现了语言的交际性原则。在结构上，学生按照三段式结构进行布局谋篇，使得文章条理清楚、层次分明。
2．在遣词造句方面，词汇和句型的选择灵活多样，尤其是句型高级多变，如that引导的宾语从句，动词-ing短语作状语，which引导的非限制性定语从句，it作形式主语，过去分词短语作状语，only置于句首引起的部分倒装以及not only开头的部分倒装结构。
3．对连接和过渡成分(However, Therefore, Moreover)的使用，让学生扎实的英语语言功底和较强的语言表达能力得到了体现。
素材积累
第一部分(首段)：表达写信目的
1．I am writing to give you some suggestions/offer you some advice.
我写信给你一些建议/忠告。
2．You have asked me for my advice with regard to how to learn Chinese, and I will try to make some suggestions here.
你询问我关于如何学习汉语的建议，那么我就在此给出一些建议。
第二部分(主体段)：针对问题，提出建议
1．You'd better……/It's best to...
你最好……/最好是……
2．As far as I am concerned/In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following measures.
在我看来，采取如下措施是明智的。
3．I think it would be more beneficial if you could...我认为如果你能……会更有益。
4．If you want a deep experience in the city, shared bikes would be the best choice.
如果你想对这个城市有深度的体验，共享自行车将是最好的选择。
第三部分(结尾段)：希望采纳建议，并表示谢意
1．I hope these suggestions above will be of some help to you.
我希望以上建议将对你有所帮助。
2．I hope these suggestions will be of use to you.
我希望这些建议会对你有用。
3．I hope that my suggestions will be helpful to you anyway.
无论如何，我希望我的建议对你有所帮助。
演练提能
(2024·福建省漳州市第二次质量检测)
假定你是学校英语俱乐部负责人李华。你的英国外教Andrew询问你在接下来的课程中是否需要介绍一些有关英国的历史知识。请你写一封邮件回复他。内容如下：
(1)你的态度；
(2)你的理由；
(3)你的建议。
注意：
(1)词数80左右；
(2)可适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Dear Andrew，
Thank you for your asking me about whether to introduce some knowledge of British history in our upcoming lessons. However, I believe that it isn't necessary.
Our focus should be on improving students' English language skills. While learning about British culture is interesting, it may not be directly relevant to their language development. Therefore, I suggest we continue with our current lesson plan.
However, if there is a specific aspect of British history that relates to the language or culture, we can certainly incorporate it into our lessons. But overall, our primary objective should be to improve students' language proficiency.
Best regards.
Yours，
Li Hua
二、邀请信——热情相邀，以诚待人
文体解读
邀请信是邀请收信人参加某项活动，一定要注意态度诚恳且措词委婉有礼貌。邀请信的末尾都要表达希望对方参加或出席的愿望。具体写作结构为：
典例导学
(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括：
1．节目介绍；
2．访谈的时间和话题。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Dear Caroline，
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
写作指导
本篇作文要求学生写一封邀请信。内容可分为三部分：(1)写信者的身份以及写信的目的；(2)节目的相关信息以及访谈的时间和话题；(3)最后一段收尾表示期待。
1．首先列出提纲要点，以防遗漏主要内容。
2．人称以第一、二人称为主，注意采用角色代入的方式来体现语言的交际性。
3．访谈尚未发生，涉及访谈的内容应以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。
Dear Caroline，
I am Li Hua from our school's radio station, writing to invite you to be the guest of the English program“Talk and Talk”．
The program invites guests to talk on certain topics, aimed at broadening students' horizons.If it is convenient for you, please come to the studio at 19：00 on Thursday.You are expected to talk about independence of the youth in the West.A 20-minute talk followed by 10 minutes' question answering would be appreciated.
I would appreciate it if you could take my invitation into account.Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
佳作点评
1．文章开头作了自我介绍，并表明写信目的：邀请外教参加访谈节目，言简意赅。
2．范文中使用了大量亮点词汇，如 aimed at, broadening students' horizons, convenient, appreciated等。在句式方面，既有动词-ing 短语 writing to invite you to be the guest of the English program“Talk and Talk”作状语，又有过去分词短语 aimed at broadening students' horizons 和 followed by 10 minutes' question answering 作定语等，展示了较强的语言运用能力，增加了文章的亮点。
3．文章结尾使用了邀请信的套语：I would appreciate it if you...表达了希望对方接受邀请的愿望。
素材积累
第一部分(首段)：介绍自己，简要说明活动，并邀请对方。
1．It's my pleasure/a great honour for me to invite you to participate in/attend/join us in...
我非常高兴/荣幸地邀请您参加……/和我们一起……
2．To broaden our horizons, our school will hold...I'm delighted to invite you to participate in it.
为了开阔我们的视野，我们学校将举行……，我很高兴邀请您参加。
3．A music festival will be held in our school hall at 2：00 p．m. on 5 June.And I'm greatly honoured to invite you to attend it.
音乐节将于6月5日下午2点在我们学校礼堂举行。我很荣幸邀请您参加。
第二部分(主体段)：介绍活动具体内容，并说明受邀人参加的理由。
1．The following are some details about.../Here are some details about.../Some details about...are as follows.
……的细节如下。
2．To begin with, we will...Besides, there will be a number of/various activities such as..., which will...
首先，我们将……；此外，将会有许多/各种各样的活动，例如……，这将……
3．We will start at 7：00 a．m. and arrive there at about 10：00.
我们将在上午7点出发，10点左右到达那里。
4．By the way, you may take Bus No.322 in front of your apartment and it will take you directly to the club.
顺便说一下，你可以乘坐你公寓前的322路公交车，它会直接把你带到俱乐部。
第三部分(结尾段)：期待对方接受邀请并尽快回复。
1．We will feel much honoured if you could come.
如果您能来，我们会非常荣幸。
2．I do hope you will accept our/my invitation if it is convenient for you.
我真心希望，如果您方便的话能接受我们/我的邀请。
3．Would you please let me know as early as possible if you could accept my invitation
如果您能接受我的邀请，能否尽早让我知道？
演练提能
(2024·广西高中毕业班摸底检测)
假定你是李华，你的同学Chris作为交换生来中国已经一年了，他对中国传统节日很感兴趣。恰逢今年春节2月10日他在中国，请你给他写一封邀请函，邀请他去你家欢度春节。内容包括：
1．表达你诚挚的邀请；
2．节日简介(庆祝时间、主要活动安排)。
注意：
1．词数80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Chris，
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Chris，
Knowing that you have a keen interest in Chinese traditional festivals, I'm writing to extend a sincere invitation to you to come over to my house to celebrate the upcoming Spring Festival.
This year, the festival falls on February 10th. Apart from enjoying a feast, we will spend the day visiting relatives and friends, setting off fireworks, or watching the Spring Festival Gala on TV. Generally, children will get lucky money.
We are expecting your arrival. Your presence would add to the warmth and happiness of our family gathering. If you are available, please let me know at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
三、感谢信——真诚道谢，学会感恩
文体解读
感谢信是向帮助、关心和支持过自己的集体或个人表达感谢的信件。感恩是一种美德，因此，感谢信在我们的生活中非常重要，也非常普遍。感谢信的写作对象可以是同学、朋友、老师、机构等。写感谢信时一定要态度诚恳，言词热切，让对方感受到你发自内心的感激之情。具体写作结构为：
典例导学
假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1．表示感谢；
2．回顾Alex对你的帮助；
3．临别祝愿。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Dear Alex，
Yours，
Li Hua
写作指导
本篇作文要求学生写一封感谢信。内容可分为三部分：(1)表达谢意；(2)回顾往事；(3)再次感谢。
1．人称以第一、二人称为主。
2．回顾 Alex 对你的帮助应用一般过去时和虚拟语气等。
佳作赏析
Dear Alex，
I'm sorry to hear that you are going to return to your country very soon and I'm writing this email to express my gratitude for your help.
First of all, thank you for helping me learn English.Without your help, I would not have made such great progress in English learning.Besides, what you told me about your country broadened my horizons and aroused my interest in foreign culture.
I wish you all the best in the future and have a good journey.
Yours，
Li Hua
佳作点评
1．文章开头简明扼要地说明了写信目的，使用了感谢信的套语：I'm writing this email to express my gratitude for your help。
2．书信的主体部分陈述了道谢的原因，使用了过渡性词语： First of all, Besides；高级词汇： make great progress, broaden, arouse；感谢信的套语：...thank you for..., Without your help，I would...；还使用了what引导的主语从句。
3．信的结尾使用感谢信的套语表达了祝愿。
素材积累
第一部分(首段)：表达真挚谢意
1．Thank you so much for your generous/timely help.
非常感谢您慷慨的/及时的帮助。
2．I want to send/express my sincere gratitude for your kind help with my English learning.
我想真诚地感谢您对我英语学习的帮助。
3．On behalf of my whole family，I would like to extend my sincere gratitude for your help.
我谨代表我全家对您的帮助表示真诚的感激。
第二部分(主体段)：解释感谢的原因
1．Thanks to your help, I have made rapid progress in my English.
多亏了您的帮助，我的英语有了飞速的进步。
2．Without your help, I would not have been a top student in English.
没有您的帮助，我就不会成为英语尖子生。
3．But for your help ( If it were not for your help)，I would not have made so much progress in my oral English.
要是没有您的帮助，我的英语口语不会取得如此大的进步。
第三部分(结尾段)：再次感谢
1．I deeply/greatly appreciate your entertainment.
我非常感激你们的盛情款待。
2．I would appreciate it if you could accept my sincere thanks.
如果您能接受我诚挚的感谢，我将不胜感激。
3．Nothing will be able to erase our wonderful memories, and we will remember them forever.
没什么能抹掉我们美好的记忆，我们会永远牢记在心。
演练提能
(2024·江苏省南通市第一次调研测试)
假定你是李华，春节期间你和朋友Mike一起出游，你刚收到他发给你的照片。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1．收到照片表示感谢；
2．回顾一起度过的时光；
3．邀请他周末来家作客。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Mike，
Yours，
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Mike，
How are you Thank you for sending me the photos that bring back those wonderful memories.
The time we spent together during the Spring Festival was just incredible. We woke up early to see the sunrise over the sea. On the way back, we tasted the fine local food, which was impressive indeed. And what was truly unforgettable was the hospitality I had as a guest at your home. I really had a great time.
I'd like to invite you over this weekend. It will be a chance for you to meet my family. Looking forward to your coming.
Yours，
Li Hua
四、申请信——毛遂自荐，心诚则成
文体解读
申请信是指求职、加入某组织或活动的申请等。写申请信让对方了解自己的经验、能力、成就、愿望等，申请信尽可能向对方说明个人的长处，以便留下好印象，获得面谈的机会。具体写作结构为：
典例导学
假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请你写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：
1．写信目的；
2．个人优势；
3．能做的事情。
注意：
1．写作词数应为 80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头结尾已为你写好。
Dear sir，
Yours，
Li Hua
写作指导
这是一篇应用文。要求学生写一封信，申请成为当地美术馆的志愿者。
1．首先说明写信目的；
2．主体段陈述个人优势以及能做的事情；
3．结尾段表达个人期待；
4．人称以第一人称为主，时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。
佳作赏析
Dear Sir，
I am Li Hua, a student from China, who is studying in London during the summer holiday.Knowing an exhibition of Chinese paintings will be held at the gallery next month, I am writing to apply to become a volunteer.
I have the following advantages.First of all，I speak English fluently, which allows me to communicate with visitors without difficulty. What's more, as a Chinese painting lover，I know a lot about this art form.If accepted, I can introduce Chinese painting skills to visitors, helping them know more about Chinese culture.
I think I am qualified to be a volunteer.I would be grateful if you could give me a chance.
Yours，
Li Hua
佳作点评
1．信的开头简明扼要地做了自我介绍，使用了who引导的非限制性定语从句，同时使用了申请信的套语I am writing to apply to...发出申请。
2．信的主体部分介绍了自身的优势，使用了过渡性词语： First of all, What's more；还使用了非限制性定语从句、条件状语从句的省略结构以及动词-ing短语作状语。
3．信的结尾使用了申请信的套语：I would be grateful if...表达了感谢和希望。
素材积累
第一部分(首段)：说明写信目的
1．Knowing some volunteers are wanted, I am writing to win the chance.
得知(你们)需要一些志愿者，我写信争取这个机会。
2．I am writing this letter to recommend myself as a qualified candidate for the job of secretary.
我认为我是秘书工作的合格人选，所以我写信推荐自己。
第二部分(主体段)：表达个人优势
1．I'm an excellent student, among the top 5 in my class of 50 students.
我是一名优秀的学生，在我班50 名学生中名列前五名。
2．I have the following advantages.Firstly, I love to communicate with other people.Secondly, what I study at university is marketing.
我有以下优点。首先，我喜欢和别人交流。其次，我在大学里学的是市场营销。
3．Upon graduation, I first worked as a salesman, then a shop assistant, and now I am working in a supermarket.
毕业后，我先是当了一名销售员，然后当了一名店员，现在我在一家超市工作。
4．I feel I am able to meet the requirements you have listed.
我觉得我能满足你们所列的要求。
第三部分(结尾段)：恳请招聘单位考虑自己的申请，期望回复
1．I think I am qualified to be a manager.Please give me a chance.
我想我有资格成为一名经理。请给我一次机会。
2．I hope I may be granted an interview, when I can show my qualifications more fully.
我希望获得面试机会，届时我可以更详细地展示我的技能。
演练提能
假定你是李华，你校将成立一个校园网站，需要几名英语小记者。请你给网站负责人Henry写一封申请信，内容包括：
1．提出申请；
2．说明自己的优势。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Dear Henry，
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Henry，
I'm glad to hear that a school website will be set up in our school.I'm writing to apply to be an English reporter.
Not only do I have a good command of English, but I also do well in Chinese, especially in writing.Actually, I have won some prizes in both English and Chinese writing contests.More importantly, I have been interested in, and familiar with journalism, especially the new media, such as Weibo, WeChat, and Douyin.
I do believe I'm well qualified for the position.Given the chance, I'm sure I will do a great job and won't let you down.I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
五、道歉信——真诚致歉，前嫌尽释
文体解读
道歉信通常是因为自己的过失或疏忽给别人带来了麻烦或损失的情况下，为了向对方表示歉意而写的信件。具体写作结构为：
典例导学
假定你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1．表达歉意并说明原因；
2．提出建议并给出理由。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Dear Jim，
Yours，
Li Hua
写作指导
本篇作文较为简单，但要注意言之有理，丰富内容。
1．首先为失约道歉，并说明原因(比如生病、学校补课等)，原因应符合常理。接着为Jim提供下次游玩的建议，比如一起逛本市著名的公园、参观博物馆、品尝特色美食等，可自由发挥。
2．解释不能赴约的原因时以过去时为主，建议再约时以现在时或将来时为主。人称以第一人称为主。
3．面对这种审题难度不高但是自由度较大的写作题目时，要注意多用高级词汇与复杂句式，以提高写作分数。
佳作赏析
Dear Jim，
I'm sorry that I won't be able to hang out with you this weekend as scheduled.
I began to cough yesterday morning, so I went to see a doctor.She told me it was a bad cold and that I would have to stay at home for a few days.
I'd really like to spend some time with you.Is it fine with you if we take a trip to Zhangjiakou next Saturday It's one of the host cities for the 2022 Winter Olympics.Please let me know what you think.
Again, I'm sorry about the inconvenience.Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours，
Li Hua
佳作点评
本篇范文行文流畅，要点齐全，内容完整，体现了作者扎实的语言功底。
1．文章充分体现了语言的交际功能，在向朋友表达歉意时情感真挚，展现了作者良好的沟通能力。如开篇使用I'm sorry that...以及文中 I'd really like to...等。
2．文章与时俱进，融入冬奥元素，有利于培养学生的家国情怀，坚定文化自信。
3．文章语言多样，作者在文中运用了一些高级句式，如并列复合句 She told me it was a bad cold and that I would have to stay at home for a few days.，条件状语从句if we take a trip to Zhangjiakou next Saturday等。
素材积累
第一部分(首段)：开头常用句式和套话
1．I'm writing to express my sincere apologies for my mistakes in my work.
我写信是为了对我工作中的失误表示真诚的道歉。
2．I'm sorry to say that I can't go to the bookshop with you on Sunday morning as we planned last week.
很抱歉，我不能像我们上周计划的那样，在周日早上和你一起去书店了。
3．I am terribly sorry to tell you that I am unable to attend your birthday party next Thursday evening.
我很抱歉地告诉你，下周四晚上我不能参加你的生日聚会了。
第二部分(主体段)：陈述理由＋补救措施
1．I want you to know how bad we feel about it and I assure you that it won't happen again.
我想让你知道我们有多难过，我向你保证这不会再发生了。
2．How about going to the cinema this Saturday afternoon If it's convenient for you, let's meet at 3 o'clock on Wanda Plaza.
这个星期六下午去看电影怎样？如果你方便的话，我们3点在万达广场见面吧。
3．Would you mind if I change the appointment time
你会介意我改变约会的时间吗？
第三部分(结尾段)：常用句式和套话
1．Once again，I am sorry for the mistakes I have made.
我对于自己所犯的错误再次道歉。
2．I sincerely hope that you will be able to accept my apologies and give me another chance.
我真诚地希望你能够接受我的道歉，再给我一次机会。
演练提能
(2024·山东省烟台市第一学期期末)
假定你是李华，留学生朋友Peter借给你一本英文名著《飘》(Gone with the Wind)，可是你不小心损坏了。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1．表示道歉；
2．解释损坏原因；
3．提出补救办法。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Peter，
Yours，
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Peter，
I'm writing to express my sincere apology for the accidental damage to the English classic Gone with the Wind you kindly lent me.
Yesterday evening I was absorbed in the book when I carelessly knocked down the cup, the hot water pouring over the book. I was upset that the whole book was in bad shape. Knowing how precious the book is to you, I'm terribly sorry for any inconvenience caused.
I expect to make it up to you by replacing the book with a new copy. I've purchased one online, which will be sent to you in 3 days. I hope this unfortunate incident won't affect our friendship. Please accept my heartfelt apology.
Yours，
Li Hua
六、求助信——阐述困境，委婉请求
文体解读
生活中难免遇到问题需要向他人求助。写求助信时态度一定要诚恳，语言要委婉礼貌。如实反映自己的问题，真诚求助，这样更有可能获得别人的帮助。具体写作结构为：
典例导学
假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括：
1．阐明写信事由；
2．征求建议；
3．表示感谢。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Chris，
Yours，
Li Hua
写作指导
本篇是一封中国学生写给外国朋友寻求帮助的电子邮件，属于“求助信”。
1．确定关系：写信人和收信人之间是朋友关系，所以征求建议时，要保证语言得体。
2．确定时态：以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。
3．确定人称：以第一人称和第二人称为主。
4．确定要点：①你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会；②哪些中国传统文化能吸引外国友人(可列举民乐、武术、剪纸、中国结等)；③对友人帮助的认可和对其所提建议的期待。
佳作赏析
Dear Chris，
How is everything going To spread traditional Chinese culture, our school will hold a theme class meeting, which will be exhibited on the English website.I am writing to ask for your valuable advice on the aspects of traditional Chinese culture which are extremely appealing to foreign friends.
As far as I know, traditional Chinese culture, like paper-cutting, guzheng and so on, has its unique characteristics.For example, Chinese knots are a symbol of good luck and best wishes.Eventually，I am strongly eager to know which aspects of traditional Chinese culture arouse your curiosity most.
With your assistance, I will make full preparations for the meeting.Thanks again for your help.Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
佳作点评
1．要点齐全。题目要求中所列的三个要点(阐明写信事由、征求建议和表示感谢)都在文章中得以体现。
2．结构清晰。第一段开门见山地提出写作的背景和目的；第二段列举中国传统文化的若干方面并征求对方的建议；最后一段表达感谢和期待。
3．语言连贯。作者在文章中合理地运用了as far as I know, for example, eventually 等词或短语，让文章过渡自然。
4．表达多样。作者在文章中运用了非谓语动词、定语从句、介词短语等。
素材积累
第一部分(首段)：请求帮助
1．I'm Li Hua, a student from your English writing class.I'm writing to ask you for help.
我是李华，是您英语写作课的一名学生。我写信是为了请求您帮忙。
2．I can't concentrate on my lessons these days, and I failed in the last exam, which worries me a lot.
这些日子我不能专心学习，上次考试我没有及格，这使我很着急。
3．I have some difficulties in doing ...so I have no choice but to turn to you for help.
我在做……方面有困难，因此我别无选择只能向您求助。
第二部分(主体段)：描述具体困难
1．I would like you to introduce some good ways to learn grammar.
我想请你给我介绍一些学习语法的好方法。
2．But unfortunately, I encounter some difficulties in preparing for the English competition.
但不幸的是，我在准备英语竞赛的时候遇到了一些困难。
3．I wonder how to deal with the problem.
我想知道如何解决这个问题。
4．Faced with/Facing so many difficulties, I have to turn to you for help.
面对如此多的困难，我不得不向您求助。
第三部分(结尾段)：希望得到帮助
1．I would appreciate it very much if you could offer me some timely help.
如果您能给我一些及时的帮助，我会非常感激。
2．I believe I will benefit a lot from your valuable and timely advice.
我相信您的宝贵而及时的建议会使我受益匪浅。
演练提能
(2024·山东聊城三模)
假定你是李华，你报名参加了你校即将举办的关于大自然的英文诗歌朗诵大赛(poetry recitation contest)。请你给外教 Mr Black 写一封邮件，请他指导你选材和朗诵练习。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Dear Mr Black，
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Mr Black，
How are you doing？I've signed up for the English poetry recitation contest to be held by our school, and I'm writing to see whether you could provide me with some help.
The contest requires that each participant should recite a poem about nature, and I've found three poems.Could you be kind enough to help me choose the most suitable one Besides, I hope you could also give me some advice on how to recite it.
I would be very grateful if you could offer me some help.Looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
七、演讲稿——激情洋溢，畅所欲言
文体解读
演讲稿包括发言稿、致辞、竞选稿等，此类文体一般包括简短介绍、陈述主题、概括总结三部分。演讲稿的语言通常要富有感染力，立场要明确，观点要鲜明。具体写作结构为：
典例导学
你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Be smart online learners为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：
1．分析优势与不足；
2．提出学习建议。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Be smart online learners
Good morning, everyone，
It's a great honour for me to stand here and give a speech titled “Be smart online learners”．
写作指导
发言稿也属于演讲稿的一种常见形式，它是参加会议、比赛等活动的人为了表达自己的意见、看法而事先准备好的文稿。
1．本篇作文要求写一篇发言稿，主题为 Be smart online learners。
2．学生在写作时，时态应以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主。
3．写作时需注意合适的开场语和结束语。写作内容包括分析在线学习的优势与不足，即进行对比。学生可结合自身经历来写，使文稿内容更加贴近生活。
佳作赏析
Be smart online learners
Good morning, everyone，
It's a great honour for me to stand here and give a speech titled“Be smart online learners”．
The advantages of online learning are obvious.It allows us to learn anytime and anywhere.Besides, we can absorb all kinds of resources to learn more efficiently.However, its disadvantages cannot be ignored.Staring at the screen for long hours is harmful to our eyes. Worse still, we don't have many opportunities to interact with our teachers and classmates.
Then what should we do to be smart online learners First, we should be brave to discuss our problems with others.Second, it is wise to take a short break after learning for 30 minutes.
In conclusion, only by being smart online learners can we truly enjoy the benefits of modern technology.
佳作点评
1．文章开篇引入话题，然后阐述演讲的具体内容，最后总结。
2．范文中使用了大量亮点句式：动词-ing短语作主语 Staring at the screen...; it 作形式主语 it is wise to take...; 倒装结构 only by being smart online learners can we...; 还使用了一些过渡词语： besides, however, worse still, first, second, in conclusion等。
素材积累
第一部分(首段)：引入话题
1．Today I am honoured to have the opportunity to make this speech.
今天我很荣幸能有机会做这个演讲。
2．Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, distinguished guests, and honorable judges.Thank you all for being here today, as we gather to discuss an important issue that affects us all.
女士们，先生们，尊敬的来宾们，尊敬的评委们，大家下午好！ 感谢大家今天来到这里，我们聚在一起讨论一个影响我们所有人的重要问题。
3．It is my great honour to share with you my opinions on how to memorize English words.
我很荣幸能与大家分享我对如何背英语单词的看法。
第二部分(主体段)：具体内容
1．The topic of my speech is healthy living habits.
我演讲的主题是健康的生活习惯。
2．I'll divide this topic into five main aspects.
我将从五个主要方面谈论这个主题。
3．As is known to us all, failure is the mother of success.
我们都知道失败是成功之母。
4．As students, we'd better walk or take public means of transportation.
作为学生，我们最好步行或乘坐公共交通工具。
第三部分(结尾段)：总结、期待
1．Thanks for your listening( to my speech)．
感谢大家倾听(我的演讲)。
2．Thank you for your time and attention today.As I conclude my remarks, I challenge each and every one of you to take action and make a difference in the world around you.
谢谢您今天的时间和关注。在我结束讲话时，我要求你们每一个人都采取行动，改变你周围的世界。
3．I wish you the best of luck in everything you do!
祝你们一切顺利！
演练提能
(2024·黑龙江哈尔滨市六校上学期六校联考)
你校下月将举办以“A Respectable Teacher”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿参赛，内容包括：
1．简要介绍该老师；
2．你的体会与感想。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Good morning, everyone，
【参考范文】
Good morning, everyone，
Many teachers have taught me in my life but I think Miss Green is the most respectable one.
Miss Green teaches us English, who I think is smart and pretty. You can always see a smile on her face. She goes to school early and goes back home late. She is helpful and patient. She is always ready to help students in need.
She teaches English well. She tries her best to make her lessons interesting. With her help we have made great progress in English. She is not only a good teacher but also our close friend, playing with us after class and sharing little secrets with us.
Miss Green loves us and is loved by us. We will respect her forever.
八、倡议书——发现问题，呼吁行动
文体解读
倡议书属于应用文的一种，是为发起一项呼吁或活动而写的具有号召性的短文。倡议书一般由标题、称呼、正文、结尾、落款五部分组成。写作时，要做到主题突出，内容清楚。同时，注意倡议书的语言要具有号召性和感染力。具体写作结构为：
典例导学
你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则主题为 Live A Low-carbon Life的倡议书，内容包括：
1．低碳生活的意义；
2．我们具体该怎么做；
3．呼吁同学们行动起来。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
写作指导
1．本篇作文为倡议书，要注意题目要求为三部分，建议分三段写作。
2．短文的主体时态为一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。
3．作为倡议书，必须先指出问题，再分析现状并提出措施，最后呼吁行动。
佳作赏析
Live A Low-carbon Life
As is known to all, global warming is becoming increasingly serious and it has done great harm to our environment.To improve the situation, we must live a low-carbon life to reduce greenhouse gas emissions.
Actually, there are many things for us to do.First of all, we must save energy in our daily lives, such as water, electricity, and gas.Secondly, we should avoid using single-use products, especially disposable plastic products.Thirdly, form a habit of reusing and recycling whatever you can.
My dear students, we have only one planet.It's everyone's duty to protect it.Let's work together to make our world a better place to live.
The Students' Union
佳作点评
1．本文分三段写作，结构合理，思路清晰。第一段引出主题——倡导低碳生活；第二段说明我们需要具体采取的措施；第三段发出倡议，呼吁行动。
2．本文运用的高级词块有become increasingly serious, do great harm to, live a low-carbon life, reduce greenhouse gas emissions, avoid using single-use products等。
3．本文运用的高级句式有As is known to all，动词不定式短语作状语 To improve the situation，宾语从句whatever you can以及It's everyone's duty to...等。
素材积累
第一部分(首段)：倡议背景
1．A regulation has been issued recently that all citizens shall wear a helmet while riding an electric bicycle.
最近颁布了一项规定，所有公民骑电动自行车时都必须戴头盔。
2．It is well known that the drinking water in many places is getting worse and worse.
众所周知，许多地方的饮用水正变得越来越糟糕。
3．The Internet can be a double-edged sword.If you use it correctly, it can do you a world of good.However, if you use it unwisely, it may destroy your life.
互联网是一把双刃剑。如果你正确地使用它，它会给你带来很多好处；然而，如果你不明智地使用它，它可能会毁了你的生活。
第二部分(主体段)：提出建议
1．As for the possible reasons, the lack of safety awareness is a major one.
至于可能的原因，缺乏安全意识是一个主要原因。
2．When you lend a helping hand to others, you will make their days better and warm their hearts; when you do something for the environment, you yourself will benefit from it.
当你向别人伸出援助之手时，你会使他们的日子更美好并温暖他们的内心；当你为环境做一些事情时，你自己也会从中受益。
3．It is everyone's responsibility to protect the environment.If we can change our way of life, we can make a big difference to the Earth.
保护环境是每个人的责任。如果我们能改变我们的生活方式，我们就能使地球大为改观。
4．Dear students, history has repeatedly told us that if we don't respect nature, nature will punish us in return.Let's take action to protect wild animals!
亲爱的同学们，历史反复告诉我们，如果我们不尊重自然，自然会惩罚我们作为回报。让我们行动起来保护野生动物吧！
第三部分(结尾段)：发出号召
1．Now we are appealing to you to go to school by bike or on foot.
现在我们呼吁大家骑车或步行去上学。
2．Let's make joint efforts to create a green and harmonious environment.
让我们共同努力，创造一个绿色和谐的环境。
3．So let's take action right now! I'm sure our efforts will eventually pay off!
所以现在就让我们采取行动吧！ 我相信我们的努力最终会得到回报！
演练提能
如今“低头族(phubber)”随处可见，这种现象已严重影响到人们的生活甚至安全。你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则倡议书，反对这种现象，标题为 Say No to Phubbing，内容包括：
1．“低头族”现象的普遍存在；
2．这种现象的危害；
3．呼吁同学们抬起头来。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Say No to Phubbing
With the wide use of the mobile phone, phubbers can be seen everywhere—at home, in the office, on the bus, and on the street.
Those so-called phubbers usually lower their heads looking at their smartphones and ignore whatever happens around them.Needless to say, it's bad manners to neglect your friends or family members around you.What's worse, phubbing can be dangerous.For example, if you stare at your phone while crossing the street, chances are that accidents may happen.
My fellow students, it's time to raise your head and pay attention to people around you.Look at them, talk to them, and care about them.After all, you should live in real life instead of virtual life.
The Students' Union
九、投稿——抓住时机，直抒胸臆
文体解读
征文投稿类文章属于活动介绍类中叙事的一种，一般是就某个特定主题进行论述和描写，以记叙文和议论文居多。具体写作结构为：
典例导学
你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1．读报的经历；2.喜爱的栏目；3.期望和祝福。
注意：
1．写作词数应为 80 左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Youth and Me
写作指导
1．本篇作文要求学生写一篇征文。文章应包含题目所列要点，并且应交代写作背景——学校英文报Youth创刊十周年。
2．文章可分为三段，分别讲述读报经历、喜爱的栏目及理由，最后一段谈期望与祝福。
3．写作时要根据主要内容的顺序来写，可以适当增加细节，并且选用恰当的连接词使文章结构清晰、语言流畅。
佳作赏析
Youth and Me
For the 10th Anniversary of Youth, as a fan of Youth, I want to share my reading experience.Youth has accompanied me throughout my high school years.It covers a wide variety of topics to attract senior students, opening a new window to the outside world for us.
As a regular reader of Youth, I am fascinated by columns on teenagers where I get touched by inspiring stories and gain happiness from exciting news.
I sincerely hope that Youth will make new progress and that more readers will share their own stories.
佳作点评
1．本篇作文完整地表达了写作要点。文章的内容及行文风格符合征文的要求，表达流畅，情感真挚。
2．作者不仅运用了 accompany, cover, attract, be fascinated by, gain ...from, sincerely, make progress等高级词汇，还使用了动词不定式、动词-ing短语和介词短语作状语。
3．本文还运用了It covers a wide variety of topics to attract senior students, opening a new window to the outside world for us.和As a regular reader of Youth，I am fascinated by columns on teenagers where I get touched by inspiring stories and gain happiness from exciting news.等较为复杂的句式。这些高级词汇和复杂句式的使用提升了文章的档次。
素材积累
第一部分(首段)：陈述一个问题或一种现象
1．There is no doubt that food waste has been a very serious social problem.
不可否认，食物浪费已经是一个非常严重的社会问题。
2．It is common knowledge that plastic pollution has been doing great harm to our environment.
众所周知，塑料污染正在严重破坏我们的环境。
3．According to a report, millions of tons of garbage is produced every day worldwide.If we let the situation go on, our cities will be surrounded by the garbage in the near future.
据报道，全球每天要产生数百万吨垃圾。如果我们让这种形势发展下去，在不久的将来，我们的城市将被垃圾包围。
第二部分(主体段)：阐述具体情况及解决方案
1．Every day thousands of tons of plastic waste is dumped into nature without being reused or recycled.
每天数千吨的塑料垃圾未经重新利用和循环使用就倒进了大自然。
2．By sorting the garbage, not only can we turn“waste” into wealth, but we can also save energy and reduce environmental pollution.
通过垃圾分类，我们不仅能够变废为宝，而且可以节约能源和减少环境污染。
3．In the restaurants, people usually order more than they can eat; at home, people dump the leftovers every day.
在饭馆里，人们通常要多点菜；在家里，人们每天倒掉剩饭。
第三段：呼吁人们行动起来
1．It's high time we took measures to stop food waste.
我们现在必须采取措施反对食物浪费。
2．So, please sort your garbage from today on.It's everyone's duty to protect the environment.
因此，从今天开始实施垃圾分类。保护环境，人人有责。
3．We have only one planet after all.Let's take action to protect it, for you, for me, and for our future generations!
毕竟我们只有一个地球。让我们行动起来保护它，为了你，为了我，也为了我们的后代！
演练提能
(2025·山西省晋城市第一次模拟)
你校将举办英语征文比赛。请你以“The impact of technology on our lives”为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1．分析利弊；
2．你的看法。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
The impact of technology on our lives
【参考范文】
The impact of technology on our lives
The impact of technology on our lives is profound, with both benefits and drawbacks. Technology has greatly improved our efficiency, allowed for global communication, and enhanced our entertainment options. It has revolutionized the way we communicate, learn, work, and entertain ourselves. However, it has also led to issues such as eye strain, addiction, and privacy concerns. Balanced use is crucial to maximize its benefits as well as minimize its negative impacts. We must prioritize real-world interactions, protect our privacy, and ensure that technology does not overshadow our daily lives.
十、报道——所见所闻，客观陈述
文体解读
报道属于活动介绍类文章的一种。其特点是以事实为依据，所以首先要交代事件或活动的时间、地点、目的和参与者，然后叙述活动的过程，最后对活动进行评价。报道的应用较为广泛，实用性强。写作过程中要保持事件的真实性，语言要准确、简练。具体写作结构为：
典例导学
假定你是李华，上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1．参加人员；
2．跑步路线：从校门口到南山脚下；
3．活动反响。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
A Cross-Country Running Race
写作指导
1．本篇作文要求写一篇报道。写作时学生应该先开门见山地概述事件的主要内容，文章中应包含新闻报道的五要素(5W：何时 when，何地 where，何人 who，何因 why，何事 what)。
2．在报道中应多从第三视角进行客观描述；由于活动已经结束，因此应用一般过去时。
3．学生要紧扣主题，展开想象，从参加人员、跑步路线、活动反响等方面进行写作，明确体现每一个要点。
佳作赏析
A Cross-Country Running Race
Last Sunday, over 200 students participated in the 5km cross-country running race held by our school to build up their body.
The competitors, excited and energetic, set off at the school gate at 7：00 a．m. and ran all the way to the foot of Nanshan Mountain.Teachers and parents were cheering for them, some of whom even ran together to the finish line.Despite the challenging cross-country conditions, all competitors hugely enjoyed running and tried their best to finish.
It was an unforgettable experience.They have realised that building up their body is of great importance, and they have also learned more about“persistence leads to success”．
佳作点评
1．本篇作文完整地表达了写作要点。文章的内容及行文风格符合新闻报道的文体特征，表达流畅，逻辑严谨。
2．作者不仅运用了participate in, build up one's body, try one's best, energetic, challenging, unforgettable等高级表达，还使用了过去分词短语作后置定语 held by our school，形容词短语作定语 excited and energetic，非限制性定语从句 some of whom even ran together to the finish line, that 引导的宾语从句等较为复杂的句型，这些彰显了作者扎实的英语语言功底。
3．文章结尾引用了谚语persistence leads to success。
素材积累
第一部分(首段)：简要概括事件
1．In order to enrich our campus lives, we held...last week.
为了丰富我们的校园生活，我们上周举办了……
2．Nowadays more and more people begin to realize/notice the importance of ...
现在越来越多的人开始意识到/注意到……的重要性。
第二部分(主体段)：描述活动过程
1．The opening ceremony started at 9：00 a．m., and the schoolmaster delivered a speech about...
开幕式上午9点开始，校长发表了关于……的演讲。
2．The exhibition is scheduled for this weekend, from 8：30 a．m. to 5：30 p．m. It covers a wide range of contents.
展览会安排在本周末，从上午8：30 到下午5：30。展览内容包罗万象。
3．All the students and staff in Senior 3 will gather on the playground at 6：30 a．m., attending a brief opening ceremony.
所有高三的学生和职工将于上午6：30在操场上集合，参加一个简短的开幕式。
4．As scheduled, we are expected to assemble/gather at 8：00 a．m. in the main hall before we head for the destination by bus.
按计划，我们早上8点在大厅集合，然后坐公共汽车到目的地。
第三部分(结尾段)：对活动的评价及感受
1．By participating in the activity, we not only mastered some basic and practical skills, but also raised our awareness of safety.
通过参加这次活动，我们不仅掌握了一些基本的实用技能，而且增强了我们的安全意识。
2．It's such a meaningful activity that students are all looking forward to the next...
这是一次很有意义的活动，学生们都很期待下一次的……
演练提能
(2024·江苏省南通市高三第一次调测)
假定你是李华，2025年元旦你校举行了登高迎新年活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1．活动过程；
2．活动感想。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
A climbing event to celebrate the New Year
【参考范文】
A climbing event to celebrate the New Year
To welcome the new year, our school hosted a climbing activity on New Year's Day.
The climb began at 10 a．m. and lasted for an hour and a half. We took part in a launching ceremony at the Happy Valley gate to warm up before the climb began. We wrote our New Year's wishes on red ribbons and tied them to trees along the way.Reaching the top, we got a bird's-eye view of the entire resort.
As“climbing high”symbolizes growth and new accomplishments in Chinese culture, the event helped demonstrate the spirit of “striving upward” and express our wishes for a happy and prosperous 2025.
十一、通知——提前告知，周全准备
文体解读
通知一般用于公布即将发生的事情，如宣布举行比赛，举办讲座、画展、晚会，召开研讨会等。通知分为书面通知和口头通知。写通知的关键是明确地告知读者活动的必要信息，如时间、地点、活动内容、报名方式及其他细节等。具体写作结构为：
典例导学
你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英文短片Growing Together，内容包括：
1．短片内容：学校的发展；
2．放映时间、地点；
3．欢迎对短片提出意见。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
NOTICE
The Students' Union
写作指导
1．通知的内容要齐全，一定要明确主题、缘由、时间、地点等。
2．通知通常是告知未来要做的事情，因此时态一般用将来时。
3．通知要语言简明、条理清晰。
佳作赏析
NOTICE
Attention, please!
An English short film, called Growing Together, will be shown in the school hall at 7：30 p．m. this Friday.Everyone is welcome to watch the film.It tells about the development of our school.
It is believed that the film is instructive and full of emotion.It tells the story of a school growing up, from small to large, from weak to strong.After the film, each class is supposed to have a discussion and all the students are welcome to make comments and express their views about the film.
Looking forward to your participation.We will witness the glory of our school, and we are growing together.
The Students' Union
佳作点评
1．本文开篇点明主题An English short film, called Growing Together, will be shown...
2．告知信息明确清楚，不仅使用了be welcome to, instructive, tell the story of, make comments, witness the glory of等高级词汇及词块，还使用高分句型It is believed that...以及be supposed to...等。
素材积累
第一部分(首段)：提醒和引入话题
1．May I have your attention, please I have an announcement to make.
请大家注意，我要宣布一则通知。
2．Attention, please! I have something important to tell you.
请注意，我有重要的事要宣布。
3．An English essay contest titled Me and My Motherland will be held in our school in an effort to develop our spirit of patriotism.
为了培养我们的爱国主义精神，我们学校将举行一场题为“我和我的祖国”的英语作文比赛。
第二部分(主体段)：通知具体事项部分
1．As scheduled, the lecture is supposed to be given on Sunday afternoon, from 3 p．m. to 5 p．m., through which you can learn about more background knowledge of Chinese customs.
按照计划，讲座将于周日下午3点至5点进行，您可以通过它了解更多中国习俗的背景知识。
2．Those who are interested in the contest are welcome.
欢迎所有对竞赛感兴趣的人参加。
3．Those who want to take part in/join in the activity please sign up at the Students' Union.
想参加活动的人请在学生会报名。
4．There are varieties of out-of-class activities in our school, which we can take part in after class.
在我们学校有各种各样我们课后可以参加的课外活动。
第三部分(结尾段)：常用语
1．Please attend it on time and don't be late.
请按时到场，不要迟到。
2．Look forward to your participation.
期待你的参与。
3．I believe you can benefit a lot from it.
我相信你能受益很多。
演练提能
(2024·九省联考)
你校英文报计划举办主题为“携手行动，节约粮食”的作文比赛。请你写一则活动通知，内容包括：
(1)介绍活动目的；
(2)说明参赛要求。
注意：
(1)写作词数应为80左右；
(2)请按如下格式作答。
Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition
【参考范文】
Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition
To raise students' awareness of saving food, our school English newspaper is scheduled to hold a writing competition, whose theme is “Hand in Hand, Save the Food”．
Anyone in our school interested in the competition is welcome to participate.Entries should consist of an original piece of writing with 400 words or fewer.They should be related to the theme and show how we can contribute to saving food.Please mail your entry to our email address englishpaper@ by January 31 and the result will be published on May 1, 2024.
Looking forward to your active participation and creative writings.
写作进阶
第一部分 应用文写作
第二讲 应用文写作实战操作
应用文写作属于半开放式文体，考查内容种类繁多，自由灵活性强。现根据近年来考查频率，进行分类突破，量体裁衣。
文体解读
建议信是作者就有关问题进行分析针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议，以便让对方接受自己的想法、主张并解决有关问题。建议信可以写给个人、某个组织或机构，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法、观点或忠告。具体写作结构为：
一、应用文写作命题透视
典例导学
(2023·新课标Ⅰ卷)假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1．说明问题；
2．提出建议。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Dear Ryan，
I'm Li Hua from Class 3.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
写作指导
本篇作文要求学生写一封建议信。
1．文章应包含题中所列要点，内容分为三部分：开头(介绍自己并表明写信目的)、主体(表达意见和建议)和结尾(希望被采纳)。
2．学生需认真审题，就本题而言，题干所示的问题可能是被随机分组的两个意愿和基础程度不一致、口语水平不均衡，解决方案可以是按照个人意愿和口语水平进行分组。
3．提建议时要有理有据、态度诚恳、用语礼貌且委婉。
佳作赏析
Dear Ryan，
I'm Li Hua from Class 3.I'm writing to express my concerns about the upcoming oral practice after class.
I understand that you plan to pair all the students randomly for oral practice.However, not all students have the same level of proficiency in English, resulting in some pairs being too challenging for one student while being too easy for the other, which can lead to frustration or a lack of progress.Therefore, I think it is better to assign students to practice in pairs
based on their language proficiency and interests, rather than pair them randomly.Only in this way can each pair have a good match and effectively communicate with each other.Moreover, not only will it improve our English communication skills, but it will also build our confidence.
Therefore, I hope that you will consider my suggestions.Thank you for your attention.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
佳作点评
1．本篇范文要点齐全，结构完整，角色代入感强，体现了语言的交际性原则。在结构上，学生按照三段式结构进行布局谋篇，使得文章条理清楚、层次分明。
2．在遣词造句方面，词汇和句型的选择灵活多样，尤其是句型高级多变，如that引导的宾语从句，动词-ing短语作状语，which引导的非限制性定语从句，it作形式主语，过去分词短语作状语，only置于句首引起的部分倒装以及not only开头的部分倒装结构。
3．对连接和过渡成分(However, Therefore, Moreover)的使用，让学生扎实的英语语言功底和较强的语言表达能力得到了体现。
素材积累
第一部分(首段)：表达写信目的
1．I am writing to give you some suggestions/offer you some advice.
我写信给你一些建议/忠告。
2．You have asked me for my advice with regard to how to learn Chinese, and I will try to make some suggestions here.
你询问我关于如何学习汉语的建议，那么我就在此给出一些建议。
第二部分(主体段)：针对问题，提出建议
1．You'd better……/It's best to...
你最好……/最好是……
2．As far as I am concerned/In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following measures.
在我看来，采取如下措施是明智的。
3．I think it would be more beneficial if you could...我认为如果你能……会更有益。
4．If you want a deep experience in the city, shared bikes would be the best choice.
如果你想对这个城市有深度的体验，共享自行车将是最好的选择。
第三部分(结尾段)：希望采纳建议，并表示谢意
1．I hope these suggestions above will be of some help to you.
我希望以上建议将对你有所帮助。
2．I hope these suggestions will be of use to you.
我希望这些建议会对你有用。
3．I hope that my suggestions will be helpful to you anyway.
无论如何，我希望我的建议对你有所帮助。
演练提能
(2024·福建省漳州市第二次质量检测)
假定你是学校英语俱乐部负责人李华。你的英国外教Andrew询问你在接下来的课程中是否需要介绍一些有关英国的历史知识。请你写一封邮件回复他。内容如下：
(1)你的态度；
(2)你的理由；
(3)你的建议。
注意：
(1)词数80左右；
(2)可适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Dear Andrew，
Thank you for your asking me about whether to introduce some knowledge of British history in our upcoming lessons. However, I believe that it isn't necessary.
Our focus should be on improving students' English language skills. While learning about British culture is interesting, it may not be directly relevant to their language development. Therefore, I suggest we continue with our current lesson plan.
However, if there is a specific aspect of British history that relates to the language or culture, we can certainly incorporate it into our lessons. But overall, our primary objective should be to improve students' language proficiency.
Best regards.
Yours，
Li Hua
二、邀请信——热情相邀，以诚待人
文体解读
邀请信是邀请收信人参加某项活动，一定要注意态度诚恳且措词委婉有礼貌。邀请信的末尾都要表达希望对方参加或出席的愿望。具体写作结构为：
典例导学
(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括：
1．节目介绍；
2．访谈的时间和话题。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Dear Caroline，
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
写作指导
本篇作文要求学生写一封邀请信。内容可分为三部分：(1)写信者的身份以及写信的目的；(2)节目的相关信息以及访谈的时间和话题；(3)最后一段收尾表示期待。
1．首先列出提纲要点，以防遗漏主要内容。
2．人称以第一、二人称为主，注意采用角色代入的方式来体现语言的交际性。
3．访谈尚未发生，涉及访谈的内容应以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。
Dear Caroline，
I am Li Hua from our school's radio station, writing to invite you to be the guest of the English program“Talk and Talk”．
The program invites guests to talk on certain topics, aimed at broadening students' horizons.If it is convenient for you, please come to the studio at 19：00 on Thursday.You are expected to talk about independence of the youth in the West.A 20-minute talk followed by 10 minutes' question answering would be appreciated.
I would appreciate it if you could take my invitation into account.Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
佳作点评
1．文章开头作了自我介绍，并表明写信目的：邀请外教参加访谈节目，言简意赅。
2．范文中使用了大量亮点词汇，如 aimed at, broadening students' horizons, convenient, appreciated等。在句式方面，既有动词-ing 短语 writing to invite you to be the guest of the English program“Talk and Talk”作状语，又有过去分词短语 aimed at broadening students' horizons 和 followed by 10 minutes' question answering 作定语等，展示了较强的语言运用能力，增加了文章的亮点。
3．文章结尾使用了邀请信的套语：I would appreciate it if you...表达了希望对方接受邀请的愿望。
素材积累
第一部分(首段)：介绍自己，简要说明活动，并邀请对方。
1．It's my pleasure/a great honour for me to invite you to participate in/attend/join us in...
我非常高兴/荣幸地邀请您参加……/和我们一起……
2．To broaden our horizons, our school will hold...I'm delighted to invite you to participate in it.
为了开阔我们的视野，我们学校将举行……，我很高兴邀请您参加。
3．A music festival will be held in our school hall at 2：00 p．m. on 5 June.And I'm greatly honoured to invite you to attend it.
音乐节将于6月5日下午2点在我们学校礼堂举行。我很荣幸邀请您参加。
第二部分(主体段)：介绍活动具体内容，并说明受邀人参加的理由。
1．The following are some details about.../Here are some details about.../Some details about...are as follows.
……的细节如下。
2．To begin with, we will...Besides, there will be a number of/various activities such as..., which will...
首先，我们将……；此外，将会有许多/各种各样的活动，例如……，这将……
3．We will start at 7：00 a．m. and arrive there at about 10：00.
我们将在上午7点出发，10点左右到达那里。
4．By the way, you may take Bus No.322 in front of your apartment and it will take you directly to the club.
顺便说一下，你可以乘坐你公寓前的322路公交车，它会直接把你带到俱乐部。
第三部分(结尾段)：期待对方接受邀请并尽快回复。
1．We will feel much honoured if you could come.
如果您能来，我们会非常荣幸。
2．I do hope you will accept our/my invitation if it is convenient for you.
我真心希望，如果您方便的话能接受我们/我的邀请。
3．Would you please let me know as early as possible if you could accept my invitation
如果您能接受我的邀请，能否尽早让我知道？
演练提能
(2024·广西高中毕业班摸底检测)
假定你是李华，你的同学Chris作为交换生来中国已经一年了，他对中国传统节日很感兴趣。恰逢今年春节2月10日他在中国，请你给他写一封邀请函，邀请他去你家欢度春节。内容包括：
1．表达你诚挚的邀请；
2．节日简介(庆祝时间、主要活动安排)。
注意：
1．词数80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Chris，
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Chris，
Knowing that you have a keen interest in Chinese traditional festivals, I'm writing to extend a sincere invitation to you to come over to my house to celebrate the upcoming Spring Festival.
This year, the festival falls on February 10th. Apart from enjoying a feast, we will spend the day visiting relatives and friends, setting off fireworks, or watching the Spring Festival Gala on TV. Generally, children will get lucky money.
We are expecting your arrival. Your presence would add to the warmth and happiness of our family gathering. If you are available, please let me know at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
三、感谢信——真诚道谢，学会感恩
文体解读
感谢信是向帮助、关心和支持过自己的集体或个人表达感谢的信件。感恩是一种美德，因此，感谢信在我们的生活中非常重要，也非常普遍。感谢信的写作对象可以是同学、朋友、老师、机构等。写感谢信时一定要态度诚恳，言词热切，让对方感受到你发自内心的感激之情。具体写作结构为：
典例导学
假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1．表示感谢；
2．回顾Alex对你的帮助；
3．临别祝愿。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Dear Alex，
Yours，
Li Hua
写作指导
本篇作文要求学生写一封感谢信。内容可分为三部分：(1)表达谢意；(2)回顾往事；(3)再次感谢。
1．人称以第一、二人称为主。
2．回顾 Alex 对你的帮助应用一般过去时和虚拟语气等。
佳作赏析
Dear Alex，
I'm sorry to hear that you are going to return to your country very soon and I'm writing this email to express my gratitude for your help.
First of all, thank you for helping me learn English.Without your help, I would not have made such great progress in English learning.Besides, what you told me about your country broadened my horizons and aroused my interest in foreign culture.
I wish you all the best in the future and have a good journey.
Yours，
Li Hua
佳作点评
1．文章开头简明扼要地说明了写信目的，使用了感谢信的套语：I'm writing this email to express my gratitude for your help。
2．书信的主体部分陈述了道谢的原因，使用了过渡性词语： First of all, Besides；高级词汇： make great progress, broaden, arouse；感谢信的套语：...thank you for..., Without your help，I would...；还使用了what引导的主语从句。
3．信的结尾使用感谢信的套语表达了祝愿。
素材积累
第一部分(首段)：表达真挚谢意
1．Thank you so much for your generous/timely help.
非常感谢您慷慨的/及时的帮助。
2．I want to send/express my sincere gratitude for your kind help with my English learning.
我想真诚地感谢您对我英语学习的帮助。
3．On behalf of my whole family，I would like to extend my sincere gratitude for your help.
我谨代表我全家对您的帮助表示真诚的感激。
第二部分(主体段)：解释感谢的原因
1．Thanks to your help, I have made rapid progress in my English.
多亏了您的帮助，我的英语有了飞速的进步。
2．Without your help, I would not have been a top student in English.
没有您的帮助，我就不会成为英语尖子生。
3．But for your help ( If it were not for your help)，I would not have made so much progress in my oral English.
要是没有您的帮助，我的英语口语不会取得如此大的进步。
第三部分(结尾段)：再次感谢
1．I deeply/greatly appreciate your entertainment.
我非常感激你们的盛情款待。
2．I would appreciate it if you could accept my sincere thanks.
如果您能接受我诚挚的感谢，我将不胜感激。
3．Nothing will be able to erase our wonderful memories, and we will remember them forever.
没什么能抹掉我们美好的记忆，我们会永远牢记在心。
演练提能
(2024·江苏省南通市第一次调研测试)
假定你是李华，春节期间你和朋友Mike一起出游，你刚收到他发给你的照片。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1．收到照片表示感谢；
2．回顾一起度过的时光；
3．邀请他周末来家作客。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Mike，
Yours，
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Mike，
How are you Thank you for sending me the photos that bring back those wonderful memories.
The time we spent together during the Spring Festival was just incredible. We woke up early to see the sunrise over the sea. On the way back, we tasted the fine local food, which was impressive indeed. And what was truly unforgettable was the hospitality I had as a guest at your home. I really had a great time.
I'd like to invite you over this weekend. It will be a chance for you to meet my family. Looking forward to your coming.
Yours，
Li Hua
四、申请信——毛遂自荐，心诚则成
文体解读
申请信是指求职、加入某组织或活动的申请等。写申请信让对方了解自己的经验、能力、成就、愿望等，申请信尽可能向对方说明个人的长处，以便留下好印象，获得面谈的机会。具体写作结构为：
典例导学
假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请你写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：
1．写信目的；
2．个人优势；
3．能做的事情。
注意：
1．写作词数应为 80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头结尾已为你写好。
Dear sir，
Yours，
Li Hua
写作指导
这是一篇应用文。要求学生写一封信，申请成为当地美术馆的志愿者。
1．首先说明写信目的；
2．主体段陈述个人优势以及能做的事情；
3．结尾段表达个人期待；
4．人称以第一人称为主，时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。
佳作赏析
Dear Sir，
I am Li Hua, a student from China, who is studying in London during the summer holiday.Knowing an exhibition of Chinese paintings will be held at the gallery next month, I am writing to apply to become a volunteer.
I have the following advantages.First of all，I speak English fluently, which allows me to communicate with visitors without difficulty. What's more, as a Chinese painting lover，I know a lot about this art form.If accepted, I can introduce Chinese painting skills to visitors, helping them know more about Chinese culture.
I think I am qualified to be a volunteer.I would be grateful if you could give me a chance.
Yours，
Li Hua
佳作点评
1．信的开头简明扼要地做了自我介绍，使用了who引导的非限制性定语从句，同时使用了申请信的套语I am writing to apply to...发出申请。
2．信的主体部分介绍了自身的优势，使用了过渡性词语： First of all, What's more；还使用了非限制性定语从句、条件状语从句的省略结构以及动词-ing短语作状语。
3．信的结尾使用了申请信的套语：I would be grateful if...表达了感谢和希望。
素材积累
第一部分(首段)：说明写信目的
1．Knowing some volunteers are wanted, I am writing to win the chance.
得知(你们)需要一些志愿者，我写信争取这个机会。
2．I am writing this letter to recommend myself as a qualified candidate for the job of secretary.
我认为我是秘书工作的合格人选，所以我写信推荐自己。
第二部分(主体段)：表达个人优势
1．I'm an excellent student, among the top 5 in my class of 50 students.
我是一名优秀的学生，在我班50 名学生中名列前五名。
2．I have the following advantages.Firstly, I love to communicate with other people.Secondly, what I study at university is marketing.
我有以下优点。首先，我喜欢和别人交流。其次，我在大学里学的是市场营销。
3．Upon graduation, I first worked as a salesman, then a shop assistant, and now I am working in a supermarket.
毕业后，我先是当了一名销售员，然后当了一名店员，现在我在一家超市工作。
4．I feel I am able to meet the requirements you have listed.
我觉得我能满足你们所列的要求。
第三部分(结尾段)：恳请招聘单位考虑自己的申请，期望回复
1．I think I am qualified to be a manager.Please give me a chance.
我想我有资格成为一名经理。请给我一次机会。
2．I hope I may be granted an interview, when I can show my qualifications more fully.
我希望获得面试机会，届时我可以更详细地展示我的技能。
演练提能
假定你是李华，你校将成立一个校园网站，需要几名英语小记者。请你给网站负责人Henry写一封申请信，内容包括：
1．提出申请；
2．说明自己的优势。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Dear Henry，
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Henry，
I'm glad to hear that a school website will be set up in our school.I'm writing to apply to be an English reporter.
Not only do I have a good command of English, but I also do well in Chinese, especially in writing.Actually, I have won some prizes in both English and Chinese writing contests.More importantly, I have been interested in, and familiar with journalism, especially the new media, such as Weibo, WeChat, and Douyin.
I do believe I'm well qualified for the position.Given the chance, I'm sure I will do a great job and won't let you down.I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
五、道歉信——真诚致歉，前嫌尽释
文体解读
道歉信通常是因为自己的过失或疏忽给别人带来了麻烦或损失的情况下，为了向对方表示歉意而写的信件。具体写作结构为：
典例导学
假定你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1．表达歉意并说明原因；
2．提出建议并给出理由。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Dear Jim，
Yours，
Li Hua
写作指导
本篇作文较为简单，但要注意言之有理，丰富内容。
1．首先为失约道歉，并说明原因(比如生病、学校补课等)，原因应符合常理。接着为Jim提供下次游玩的建议，比如一起逛本市著名的公园、参观博物馆、品尝特色美食等，可自由发挥。
2．解释不能赴约的原因时以过去时为主，建议再约时以现在时或将来时为主。人称以第一人称为主。
3．面对这种审题难度不高但是自由度较大的写作题目时，要注意多用高级词汇与复杂句式，以提高写作分数。
佳作赏析
Dear Jim，
I'm sorry that I won't be able to hang out with you this weekend as scheduled.
I began to cough yesterday morning, so I went to see a doctor.She told me it was a bad cold and that I would have to stay at home for a few days.
I'd really like to spend some time with you.Is it fine with you if we take a trip to Zhangjiakou next Saturday It's one of the host cities for the 2022 Winter Olympics.Please let me know what you think.
Again, I'm sorry about the inconvenience.Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours，
Li Hua
佳作点评
本篇范文行文流畅，要点齐全，内容完整，体现了作者扎实的语言功底。
1．文章充分体现了语言的交际功能，在向朋友表达歉意时情感真挚，展现了作者良好的沟通能力。如开篇使用I'm sorry that...以及文中 I'd really like to...等。
2．文章与时俱进，融入冬奥元素，有利于培养学生的家国情怀，坚定文化自信。
3．文章语言多样，作者在文中运用了一些高级句式，如并列复合句 She told me it was a bad cold and that I would have to stay at home for a few days.，条件状语从句if we take a trip to Zhangjiakou next Saturday等。
素材积累
第一部分(首段)：开头常用句式和套话
1．I'm writing to express my sincere apologies for my mistakes in my work.
我写信是为了对我工作中的失误表示真诚的道歉。
2．I'm sorry to say that I can't go to the bookshop with you on Sunday morning as we planned last week.
很抱歉，我不能像我们上周计划的那样，在周日早上和你一起去书店了。
3．I am terribly sorry to tell you that I am unable to attend your birthday party next Thursday evening.
我很抱歉地告诉你，下周四晚上我不能参加你的生日聚会了。
第二部分(主体段)：陈述理由＋补救措施
1．I want you to know how bad we feel about it and I assure you that it won't happen again.
我想让你知道我们有多难过，我向你保证这不会再发生了。
2．How about going to the cinema this Saturday afternoon If it's convenient for you, let's meet at 3 o'clock on Wanda Plaza.
这个星期六下午去看电影怎样？如果你方便的话，我们3点在万达广场见面吧。
3．Would you mind if I change the appointment time
你会介意我改变约会的时间吗？
第三部分(结尾段)：常用句式和套话
1．Once again，I am sorry for the mistakes I have made.
我对于自己所犯的错误再次道歉。
2．I sincerely hope that you will be able to accept my apologies and give me another chance.
我真诚地希望你能够接受我的道歉，再给我一次机会。
演练提能
(2024·山东省烟台市第一学期期末)
假定你是李华，留学生朋友Peter借给你一本英文名著《飘》(Gone with the Wind)，可是你不小心损坏了。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1．表示道歉；
2．解释损坏原因；
3．提出补救办法。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Peter，
Yours，
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Peter，
I'm writing to express my sincere apology for the accidental damage to the English classic Gone with the Wind you kindly lent me.
Yesterday evening I was absorbed in the book when I carelessly knocked down the cup, the hot water pouring over the book. I was upset that the whole book was in bad shape. Knowing how precious the book is to you, I'm terribly sorry for any inconvenience caused.
I expect to make it up to you by replacing the book with a new copy. I've purchased one online, which will be sent to you in 3 days. I hope this unfortunate incident won't affect our friendship. Please accept my heartfelt apology.
Yours，
Li Hua
六、求助信——阐述困境，委婉请求
文体解读
生活中难免遇到问题需要向他人求助。写求助信时态度一定要诚恳，语言要委婉礼貌。如实反映自己的问题，真诚求助，这样更有可能获得别人的帮助。具体写作结构为：
典例导学
假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括：
1．阐明写信事由；
2．征求建议；
3．表示感谢。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Chris，
Yours，
Li Hua
写作指导
本篇是一封中国学生写给外国朋友寻求帮助的电子邮件，属于“求助信”。
1．确定关系：写信人和收信人之间是朋友关系，所以征求建议时，要保证语言得体。
2．确定时态：以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。
3．确定人称：以第一人称和第二人称为主。
4．确定要点：①你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会；②哪些中国传统文化能吸引外国友人(可列举民乐、武术、剪纸、中国结等)；③对友人帮助的认可和对其所提建议的期待。
佳作赏析
Dear Chris，
How is everything going To spread traditional Chinese culture, our school will hold a theme class meeting, which will be exhibited on the English website.I am writing to ask for your valuable advice on the aspects of traditional Chinese culture which are extremely appealing to foreign friends.
As far as I know, traditional Chinese culture, like paper-cutting, guzheng and so on, has its unique characteristics.For example, Chinese knots are a symbol of good luck and best wishes.Eventually，I am strongly eager to know which aspects of traditional Chinese culture arouse your curiosity most.
With your assistance, I will make full preparations for the meeting.Thanks again for your help.Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
佳作点评
1．要点齐全。题目要求中所列的三个要点(阐明写信事由、征求建议和表示感谢)都在文章中得以体现。
2．结构清晰。第一段开门见山地提出写作的背景和目的；第二段列举中国传统文化的若干方面并征求对方的建议；最后一段表达感谢和期待。
3．语言连贯。作者在文章中合理地运用了as far as I know, for example, eventually 等词或短语，让文章过渡自然。
4．表达多样。作者在文章中运用了非谓语动词、定语从句、介词短语等。
素材积累
第一部分(首段)：请求帮助
1．I'm Li Hua, a student from your English writing class.I'm writing to ask you for help.
我是李华，是您英语写作课的一名学生。我写信是为了请求您帮忙。
2．I can't concentrate on my lessons these days, and I failed in the last exam, which worries me a lot.
这些日子我不能专心学习，上次考试我没有及格，这使我很着急。
3．I have some difficulties in doing ...so I have no choice but to turn to you for help.
我在做……方面有困难，因此我别无选择只能向您求助。
第二部分(主体段)：描述具体困难
1．I would like you to introduce some good ways to learn grammar.
我想请你给我介绍一些学习语法的好方法。
2．But unfortunately, I encounter some difficulties in preparing for the English competition.
但不幸的是，我在准备英语竞赛的时候遇到了一些困难。
3．I wonder how to deal with the problem.
我想知道如何解决这个问题。
4．Faced with/Facing so many difficulties, I have to turn to you for help.
面对如此多的困难，我不得不向您求助。
第三部分(结尾段)：希望得到帮助
1．I would appreciate it very much if you could offer me some timely help.
如果您能给我一些及时的帮助，我会非常感激。
2．I believe I will benefit a lot from your valuable and timely advice.
我相信您的宝贵而及时的建议会使我受益匪浅。
演练提能
(2024·山东聊城三模)
假定你是李华，你报名参加了你校即将举办的关于大自然的英文诗歌朗诵大赛(poetry recitation contest)。请你给外教 Mr Black 写一封邮件，请他指导你选材和朗诵练习。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Dear Mr Black，
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Mr Black，
How are you doing？I've signed up for the English poetry recitation contest to be held by our school, and I'm writing to see whether you could provide me with some help.
The contest requires that each participant should recite a poem about nature, and I've found three poems.Could you be kind enough to help me choose the most suitable one Besides, I hope you could also give me some advice on how to recite it.
I would be very grateful if you could offer me some help.Looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
七、演讲稿——激情洋溢，畅所欲言
文体解读
演讲稿包括发言稿、致辞、竞选稿等，此类文体一般包括简短介绍、陈述主题、概括总结三部分。演讲稿的语言通常要富有感染力，立场要明确，观点要鲜明。具体写作结构为：
典例导学
你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Be smart online learners为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：
1．分析优势与不足；
2．提出学习建议。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Be smart online learners
Good morning, everyone，
It's a great honour for me to stand here and give a speech titled “Be smart online learners”．
写作指导
发言稿也属于演讲稿的一种常见形式，它是参加会议、比赛等活动的人为了表达自己的意见、看法而事先准备好的文稿。
1．本篇作文要求写一篇发言稿，主题为 Be smart online learners。
2．学生在写作时，时态应以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主。
3．写作时需注意合适的开场语和结束语。写作内容包括分析在线学习的优势与不足，即进行对比。学生可结合自身经历来写，使文稿内容更加贴近生活。
佳作赏析
Be smart online learners
Good morning, everyone，
It's a great honour for me to stand here and give a speech titled“Be smart online learners”．
The advantages of online learning are obvious.It allows us to learn anytime and anywhere.Besides, we can absorb all kinds of resources to learn more efficiently.However, its disadvantages cannot be ignored.Staring at the screen for long hours is harmful to our eyes. Worse still, we don't have many opportunities to interact with our teachers and classmates.
Then what should we do to be smart online learners First, we should be brave to discuss our problems with others.Second, it is wise to take a short break after learning for 30 minutes.
In conclusion, only by being smart online learners can we truly enjoy the benefits of modern technology.
佳作点评
1．文章开篇引入话题，然后阐述演讲的具体内容，最后总结。
2．范文中使用了大量亮点句式：动词-ing短语作主语 Staring at the screen...; it 作形式主语 it is wise to take...; 倒装结构 only by being smart online learners can we...; 还使用了一些过渡词语： besides, however, worse still, first, second, in conclusion等。
素材积累
第一部分(首段)：引入话题
1．Today I am honoured to have the opportunity to make this speech.
今天我很荣幸能有机会做这个演讲。
2．Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, distinguished guests, and honorable judges.Thank you all for being here today, as we gather to discuss an important issue that affects us all.
女士们，先生们，尊敬的来宾们，尊敬的评委们，大家下午好！ 感谢大家今天来到这里，我们聚在一起讨论一个影响我们所有人的重要问题。
3．It is my great honour to share with you my opinions on how to memorize English words.
我很荣幸能与大家分享我对如何背英语单词的看法。
第二部分(主体段)：具体内容
1．The topic of my speech is healthy living habits.
我演讲的主题是健康的生活习惯。
2．I'll divide this topic into five main aspects.
我将从五个主要方面谈论这个主题。
3．As is known to us all, failure is the mother of success.
我们都知道失败是成功之母。
4．As students, we'd better walk or take public means of transportation.
作为学生，我们最好步行或乘坐公共交通工具。
第三部分(结尾段)：总结、期待
1．Thanks for your listening( to my speech)．
感谢大家倾听(我的演讲)。
2．Thank you for your time and attention today.As I conclude my remarks, I challenge each and every one of you to take action and make a difference in the world around you.
谢谢您今天的时间和关注。在我结束讲话时，我要求你们每一个人都采取行动，改变你周围的世界。
3．I wish you the best of luck in everything you do!
祝你们一切顺利！
演练提能
(2024·黑龙江哈尔滨市六校上学期六校联考)
你校下月将举办以“A Respectable Teacher”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿参赛，内容包括：
1．简要介绍该老师；
2．你的体会与感想。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Good morning, everyone，
【参考范文】
Good morning, everyone，
Many teachers have taught me in my life but I think Miss Green is the most respectable one.
Miss Green teaches us English, who I think is smart and pretty. You can always see a smile on her face. She goes to school early and goes back home late. She is helpful and patient. She is always ready to help students in need.
She teaches English well. She tries her best to make her lessons interesting. With her help we have made great progress in English. She is not only a good teacher but also our close friend, playing with us after class and sharing little secrets with us.
Miss Green loves us and is loved by us. We will respect her forever.
八、倡议书——发现问题，呼吁行动
文体解读
倡议书属于应用文的一种，是为发起一项呼吁或活动而写的具有号召性的短文。倡议书一般由标题、称呼、正文、结尾、落款五部分组成。写作时，要做到主题突出，内容清楚。同时，注意倡议书的语言要具有号召性和感染力。具体写作结构为：
典例导学
你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则主题为 Live A Low-carbon Life的倡议书，内容包括：
1．低碳生活的意义；
2．我们具体该怎么做；
3．呼吁同学们行动起来。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
写作指导
1．本篇作文为倡议书，要注意题目要求为三部分，建议分三段写作。
2．短文的主体时态为一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。
3．作为倡议书，必须先指出问题，再分析现状并提出措施，最后呼吁行动。
佳作赏析
Live A Low-carbon Life
As is known to all, global warming is becoming increasingly serious and it has done great harm to our environment.To improve the situation, we must live a low-carbon life to reduce greenhouse gas emissions.
Actually, there are many things for us to do.First of all, we must save energy in our daily lives, such as water, electricity, and gas.Secondly, we should avoid using single-use products, especially disposable plastic products.Thirdly, form a habit of reusing and recycling whatever you can.
My dear students, we have only one planet.It's everyone's duty to protect it.Let's work together to make our world a better place to live.
The Students' Union
佳作点评
1．本文分三段写作，结构合理，思路清晰。第一段引出主题——倡导低碳生活；第二段说明我们需要具体采取的措施；第三段发出倡议，呼吁行动。
2．本文运用的高级词块有become increasingly serious, do great harm to, live a low-carbon life, reduce greenhouse gas emissions, avoid using single-use products等。
3．本文运用的高级句式有As is known to all，动词不定式短语作状语 To improve the situation，宾语从句whatever you can以及It's everyone's duty to...等。
素材积累
第一部分(首段)：倡议背景
1．A regulation has been issued recently that all citizens shall wear a helmet while riding an electric bicycle.
最近颁布了一项规定，所有公民骑电动自行车时都必须戴头盔。
2．It is well known that the drinking water in many places is getting worse and worse.
众所周知，许多地方的饮用水正变得越来越糟糕。
3．The Internet can be a double-edged sword.If you use it correctly, it can do you a world of good.However, if you use it unwisely, it may destroy your life.
互联网是一把双刃剑。如果你正确地使用它，它会给你带来很多好处；然而，如果你不明智地使用它，它可能会毁了你的生活。
第二部分(主体段)：提出建议
1．As for the possible reasons, the lack of safety awareness is a major one.
至于可能的原因，缺乏安全意识是一个主要原因。
2．When you lend a helping hand to others, you will make their days better and warm their hearts; when you do something for the environment, you yourself will benefit from it.
当你向别人伸出援助之手时，你会使他们的日子更美好并温暖他们的内心；当你为环境做一些事情时，你自己也会从中受益。
3．It is everyone's responsibility to protect the environment.If we can change our way of life, we can make a big difference to the Earth.
保护环境是每个人的责任。如果我们能改变我们的生活方式，我们就能使地球大为改观。
4．Dear students, history has repeatedly told us that if we don't respect nature, nature will punish us in return.Let's take action to protect wild animals!
亲爱的同学们，历史反复告诉我们，如果我们不尊重自然，自然会惩罚我们作为回报。让我们行动起来保护野生动物吧！
第三部分(结尾段)：发出号召
1．Now we are appealing to you to go to school by bike or on foot.
现在我们呼吁大家骑车或步行去上学。
2．Let's make joint efforts to create a green and harmonious environment.
让我们共同努力，创造一个绿色和谐的环境。
3．So let's take action right now! I'm sure our efforts will eventually pay off!
所以现在就让我们采取行动吧！ 我相信我们的努力最终会得到回报！
演练提能
如今“低头族(phubber)”随处可见，这种现象已严重影响到人们的生活甚至安全。你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则倡议书，反对这种现象，标题为 Say No to Phubbing，内容包括：
1．“低头族”现象的普遍存在；
2．这种现象的危害；
3．呼吁同学们抬起头来。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Say No to Phubbing
With the wide use of the mobile phone, phubbers can be seen everywhere—at home, in the office, on the bus, and on the street.
Those so-called phubbers usually lower their heads looking at their smartphones and ignore whatever happens around them.Needless to say, it's bad manners to neglect your friends or family members around you.What's worse, phubbing can be dangerous.For example, if you stare at your phone while crossing the street, chances are that accidents may happen.
My fellow students, it's time to raise your head and pay attention to people around you.Look at them, talk to them, and care about them.After all, you should live in real life instead of virtual life.
The Students' Union
九、投稿——抓住时机，直抒胸臆
文体解读
征文投稿类文章属于活动介绍类中叙事的一种，一般是就某个特定主题进行论述和描写，以记叙文和议论文居多。具体写作结构为：
典例导学
你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1．读报的经历；2.喜爱的栏目；3.期望和祝福。
注意：
1．写作词数应为 80 左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Youth and Me
写作指导
1．本篇作文要求学生写一篇征文。文章应包含题目所列要点，并且应交代写作背景——学校英文报Youth创刊十周年。
2．文章可分为三段，分别讲述读报经历、喜爱的栏目及理由，最后一段谈期望与祝福。
3．写作时要根据主要内容的顺序来写，可以适当增加细节，并且选用恰当的连接词使文章结构清晰、语言流畅。
佳作赏析
Youth and Me
For the 10th Anniversary of Youth, as a fan of Youth, I want to share my reading experience.Youth has accompanied me throughout my high school years.It covers a wide variety of topics to attract senior students, opening a new window to the outside world for us.
As a regular reader of Youth, I am fascinated by columns on teenagers where I get touched by inspiring stories and gain happiness from exciting news.
I sincerely hope that Youth will make new progress and that more readers will share their own stories.
佳作点评
1．本篇作文完整地表达了写作要点。文章的内容及行文风格符合征文的要求，表达流畅，情感真挚。
2．作者不仅运用了 accompany, cover, attract, be fascinated by, gain ...from, sincerely, make progress等高级词汇，还使用了动词不定式、动词-ing短语和介词短语作状语。
3．本文还运用了It covers a wide variety of topics to attract senior students, opening a new window to the outside world for us.和As a regular reader of Youth，I am fascinated by columns on teenagers where I get touched by inspiring stories and gain happiness from exciting news.等较为复杂的句式。这些高级词汇和复杂句式的使用提升了文章的档次。
素材积累
第一部分(首段)：陈述一个问题或一种现象
1．There is no doubt that food waste has been a very serious social problem.
不可否认，食物浪费已经是一个非常严重的社会问题。
2．It is common knowledge that plastic pollution has been doing great harm to our environment.
众所周知，塑料污染正在严重破坏我们的环境。
3．According to a report, millions of tons of garbage is produced every day worldwide.If we let the situation go on, our cities will be surrounded by the garbage in the near future.
据报道，全球每天要产生数百万吨垃圾。如果我们让这种形势发展下去，在不久的将来，我们的城市将被垃圾包围。
第二部分(主体段)：阐述具体情况及解决方案
1．Every day thousands of tons of plastic waste is dumped into nature without being reused or recycled.
每天数千吨的塑料垃圾未经重新利用和循环使用就倒进了大自然。
2．By sorting the garbage, not only can we turn“waste” into wealth, but we can also save energy and reduce environmental pollution.
通过垃圾分类，我们不仅能够变废为宝，而且可以节约能源和减少环境污染。
3．In the restaurants, people usually order more than they can eat; at home, people dump the leftovers every day.
在饭馆里，人们通常要多点菜；在家里，人们每天倒掉剩饭。
第三段：呼吁人们行动起来
1．It's high time we took measures to stop food waste.
我们现在必须采取措施反对食物浪费。
2．So, please sort your garbage from today on.It's everyone's duty to protect the environment.
因此，从今天开始实施垃圾分类。保护环境，人人有责。
3．We have only one planet after all.Let's take action to protect it, for you, for me, and for our future generations!
毕竟我们只有一个地球。让我们行动起来保护它，为了你，为了我，也为了我们的后代！
演练提能
(2025·山西省晋城市第一次模拟)
你校将举办英语征文比赛。请你以“The impact of technology on our lives”为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1．分析利弊；
2．你的看法。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
The impact of technology on our lives
【参考范文】
The impact of technology on our lives
The impact of technology on our lives is profound, with both benefits and drawbacks. Technology has greatly improved our efficiency, allowed for global communication, and enhanced our entertainment options. It has revolutionized the way we communicate, learn, work, and entertain ourselves. However, it has also led to issues such as eye strain, addiction, and privacy concerns. Balanced use is crucial to maximize its benefits as well as minimize its negative impacts. We must prioritize real-world interactions, protect our privacy, and ensure that technology does not overshadow our daily lives.
十、报道——所见所闻，客观陈述
文体解读
报道属于活动介绍类文章的一种。其特点是以事实为依据，所以首先要交代事件或活动的时间、地点、目的和参与者，然后叙述活动的过程，最后对活动进行评价。报道的应用较为广泛，实用性强。写作过程中要保持事件的真实性，语言要准确、简练。具体写作结构为：
典例导学
假定你是李华，上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1．参加人员；
2．跑步路线：从校门口到南山脚下；
3．活动反响。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
A Cross-Country Running Race
写作指导
1．本篇作文要求写一篇报道。写作时学生应该先开门见山地概述事件的主要内容，文章中应包含新闻报道的五要素(5W：何时 when，何地 where，何人 who，何因 why，何事 what)。
2．在报道中应多从第三视角进行客观描述；由于活动已经结束，因此应用一般过去时。
3．学生要紧扣主题，展开想象，从参加人员、跑步路线、活动反响等方面进行写作，明确体现每一个要点。
佳作赏析
A Cross-Country Running Race
Last Sunday, over 200 students participated in the 5km cross-country running race held by our school to build up their body.
The competitors, excited and energetic, set off at the school gate at 7：00 a．m. and ran all the way to the foot of Nanshan Mountain.Teachers and parents were cheering for them, some of whom even ran together to the finish line.Despite the challenging cross-country conditions, all competitors hugely enjoyed running and tried their best to finish.
It was an unforgettable experience.They have realised that building up their body is of great importance, and they have also learned more about“persistence leads to success”．
佳作点评
1．本篇作文完整地表达了写作要点。文章的内容及行文风格符合新闻报道的文体特征，表达流畅，逻辑严谨。
2．作者不仅运用了participate in, build up one's body, try one's best, energetic, challenging, unforgettable等高级表达，还使用了过去分词短语作后置定语 held by our school，形容词短语作定语 excited and energetic，非限制性定语从句 some of whom even ran together to the finish line, that 引导的宾语从句等较为复杂的句型，这些彰显了作者扎实的英语语言功底。
3．文章结尾引用了谚语persistence leads to success。
素材积累
第一部分(首段)：简要概括事件
1．In order to enrich our campus lives, we held...last week.
为了丰富我们的校园生活，我们上周举办了……
2．Nowadays more and more people begin to realize/notice the importance of ...
现在越来越多的人开始意识到/注意到……的重要性。
第二部分(主体段)：描述活动过程
1．The opening ceremony started at 9：00 a．m., and the schoolmaster delivered a speech about...
开幕式上午9点开始，校长发表了关于……的演讲。
2．The exhibition is scheduled for this weekend, from 8：30 a．m. to 5：30 p．m. It covers a wide range of contents.
展览会安排在本周末，从上午8：30 到下午5：30。展览内容包罗万象。
3．All the students and staff in Senior 3 will gather on the playground at 6：30 a．m., attending a brief opening ceremony.
所有高三的学生和职工将于上午6：30在操场上集合，参加一个简短的开幕式。
4．As scheduled, we are expected to assemble/gather at 8：00 a．m. in the main hall before we head for the destination by bus.
按计划，我们早上8点在大厅集合，然后坐公共汽车到目的地。
第三部分(结尾段)：对活动的评价及感受
1．By participating in the activity, we not only mastered some basic and practical skills, but also raised our awareness of safety.
通过参加这次活动，我们不仅掌握了一些基本的实用技能，而且增强了我们的安全意识。
2．It's such a meaningful activity that students are all looking forward to the next...
这是一次很有意义的活动，学生们都很期待下一次的……
演练提能
(2024·江苏省南通市高三第一次调测)
假定你是李华，2025年元旦你校举行了登高迎新年活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1．活动过程；
2．活动感想。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
A climbing event to celebrate the New Year
【参考范文】
A climbing event to celebrate the New Year
To welcome the new year, our school hosted a climbing activity on New Year's Day.
The climb began at 10 a．m. and lasted for an hour and a half. We took part in a launching ceremony at the Happy Valley gate to warm up before the climb began. We wrote our New Year's wishes on red ribbons and tied them to trees along the way.Reaching the top, we got a bird's-eye view of the entire resort.
As“climbing high”symbolizes growth and new accomplishments in Chinese culture, the event helped demonstrate the spirit of “striving upward” and express our wishes for a happy and prosperous 2025.
十一、通知——提前告知，周全准备
文体解读
通知一般用于公布即将发生的事情，如宣布举行比赛，举办讲座、画展、晚会，召开研讨会等。通知分为书面通知和口头通知。写通知的关键是明确地告知读者活动的必要信息，如时间、地点、活动内容、报名方式及其他细节等。具体写作结构为：
典例导学
你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英文短片Growing Together，内容包括：
1．短片内容：学校的发展；
2．放映时间、地点；
3．欢迎对短片提出意见。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
NOTICE
The Students' Union
写作指导
1．通知的内容要齐全，一定要明确主题、缘由、时间、地点等。
2．通知通常是告知未来要做的事情，因此时态一般用将来时。
3．通知要语言简明、条理清晰。
佳作赏析
NOTICE
Attention, please!
An English short film, called Growing Together, will be shown in the school hall at 7：30 p．m. this Friday.Everyone is welcome to watch the film.It tells about the development of our school.
It is believed that the film is instructive and full of emotion.It tells the story of a school growing up, from small to large, from weak to strong.After the film, each class is supposed to have a discussion and all the students are welcome to make comments and express their views about the film.
Looking forward to your participation.We will witness the glory of our school, and we are growing together.
The Students' Union
佳作点评
1．本文开篇点明主题An English short film, called Growing Together, will be shown...
2．告知信息明确清楚，不仅使用了be welcome to, instructive, tell the story of, make comments, witness the glory of等高级词汇及词块，还使用高分句型It is believed that...以及be supposed to...等。
素材积累
第一部分(首段)：提醒和引入话题
1．May I have your attention, please I have an announcement to make.
请大家注意，我要宣布一则通知。
2．Attention, please! I have something important to tell you.
请注意，我有重要的事要宣布。
3．An English essay contest titled Me and My Motherland will be held in our school in an effort to develop our spirit of patriotism.
为了培养我们的爱国主义精神，我们学校将举行一场题为“我和我的祖国”的英语作文比赛。
第二部分(主体段)：通知具体事项部分
1．As scheduled, the lecture is supposed to be given on Sunday afternoon, from 3 p．m. to 5 p．m., through which you can learn about more background knowledge of Chinese customs.
按照计划，讲座将于周日下午3点至5点进行，您可以通过它了解更多中国习俗的背景知识。
2．Those who are interested in the contest are welcome.
欢迎所有对竞赛感兴趣的人参加。
3．Those who want to take part in/join in the activity please sign up at the Students' Union.
想参加活动的人请在学生会报名。
4．There are varieties of out-of-class activities in our school, which we can take part in after class.
在我们学校有各种各样我们课后可以参加的课外活动。
第三部分(结尾段)：常用语
1．Please attend it on time and don't be late.
请按时到场，不要迟到。
2．Look forward to your participation.
期待你的参与。
3．I believe you can benefit a lot from it.
我相信你能受益很多。
演练提能
(2024·九省联考)
你校英文报计划举办主题为“携手行动，节约粮食”的作文比赛。请你写一则活动通知，内容包括：
(1)介绍活动目的；
(2)说明参赛要求。
注意：
(1)写作词数应为80左右；
(2)请按如下格式作答。
Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition
【参考范文】
Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition
To raise students' awareness of saving food, our school English newspaper is scheduled to hold a writing competition, whose theme is “Hand in Hand, Save the Food”．
Anyone in our school interested in the competition is welcome to participate.Entries should consist of an original piece of writing with 400 words or fewer.They should be related to the theme and show how we can contribute to saving food.Please mail your entry to our email address englishpaper@ by January 31 and the result will be published on May 1, 2024.
Looking forward to your active participation and creative writings.