2026届高三英语二轮复习：写作进阶 第2部分 第4讲 续写衔接、点题课件（33张PPT）
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写作进阶
第二部分 读后续写
第四讲 续写衔接、点题
一、写好四句，3句衔接与主旨升华
1．四个顺畅呼应，进行有效衔接
(1)续写首句与给出的首段首句的衔接；
(2)续写首段尾句与给出的次段首句的衔接；
(3)给出的次段首句与续写次段首句的衔接；
(4)文章结尾升华与文章主题意义的衔接。
2．围绕“真善美”，传递正能量
续写故事的内容一定要传递正能量，围绕“真善美”的大主题设计情节，弘扬社会主义核心价值观，因此续写结尾要按此进行主旨升华。
二、3句衔接语与主旨升华的常用方法和句式
1．做好衔接的基本方法
(1)提示句的主语继续成为续写的第一句的主语
(2)提示句的某个关键词成为一个新的主语
(3)续写第一段的最后一句的主语和续写第二段的首句主语一致，使得段落连贯一致
[点拨] 根据情况以上规则可以灵活变通，如续写第二段的首句主语一致可以作为续写第一段的最后一句的宾语。但无论如何要保持语义连贯一致。
2．衔接过渡语的常用句式
(1)形容词(短语)作状语
With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business.Anxious and full of expectation, he took the popcorn around to the houses and began to sell his popcorn.
一切准备就绪后，伯纳德开始着手他的新生意。既焦虑又满怀期待，他拿着爆米花挨家挨户地开始售卖。
(2)非谓语动词作状语
(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn't look at me.Seeing his face filled with anxiety，I felt sad, deciding to talk something with him.
我们紧挨着坐了下来，但大卫不愿看我。看着他那充满焦虑的脸，我感到很难过，决定和他说点什么。
(3)倒装句衔接
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.In no time did their father seem to understand exactly what had happened and what to do next.
当双胞胎失望地环顾四周时，他们的父亲出现了。他们的父亲似乎很快就明白了到底发生了什么事，下一步该怎么办。
(4)介词短语或副词作状语衔接
(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news.Much to my surprise/Surprisingly, I beat a lot of participants and won the first prize.
几个星期后，当我几乎忘记比赛的时候，传来了消息。令我吃惊的是，我打败了很多参赛者，获得了第一名。
(5)对话或者独白衔接
(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)I went to my teacher's office after the award presentation.“Congratulations! Your efforts paid off！” said he smilingly.
颁奖典礼结束后，我去了老师的办公室。“祝贺你！ 你的努力得到了回报！”他微笑着说。
(6)状语从句衔接
(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)I went to my teacher's office after the award presentation.The minute I stepped in, he laughed out loud again as has had before, and said“Congratulations！”
颁奖典礼结束后，我去了老师的办公室。我一进门，他又像以前一样大笑起来，说“祝贺你！”
3．主旨升华的常用方法和句式
6种主旨升华的方法
(1)名言结尾法
需要注意的是：不可生搬硬套名言警句，一定要具体文本，具体分析。
①(2022·1月浙江卷)Just as the saying goes, one person can go far, but a group of persons can travel farther.
正如俗话说，一个人可以走得很远，但一群人可以走得更远。
②Just as the saying puts，“Where there is a will, there is a way.” Now I couldn't agree more.
正如俗话所说，“有志者，事竟成。”现在我完全同意。
(2)情感升华法
Seeing the javelin，I felt as if it had been encouraging me and saying，“You've found your talent and I've found you.”
看到标枪，我觉得它好像在鼓励我，并说，“你找到了你的天赋，我找到了你。”
(3)运用修辞法
①I quickly took out the camera and photographed the rare scene—we were robbed by a polar bear.
我迅速拿出相机，拍下了这一罕见的场景——我们被一只北极熊抢劫了。
②That affection towards our family is like a touch of green tea, refreshing and heartwarming.
那份对我们家人的感情像一杯清茶，沁人心脾，温暖人心。
(4)首尾呼应法
①A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day.
一天，在亚瑟上班的路上发生了一件有趣的事情。
②What a funny day! Arthur couldn't stop laughing whenever he looked back on this happy experience.
多么有趣的一天啊！ 每当亚瑟想起这次欢乐的经历，他就忍不住笑个不停。
(5)感悟体会法
①(2024·潍坊市五县市高三10月统考)From the experience，I was fully aware of the responsibility and great value as a doctor, which, therefore, inspired me to continue to pursue my dream.
从这些经验中，我充分意识到作为一名医生的责任和巨大的价值，因此，这激发了我继续追求我的梦想。
②I held the paper bag tightly, tears rolling down without control.It is love that makes the world go around, which I felt deep in my heart.
我紧紧地握着纸袋，眼泪禁不住流了下来。正是爱让这世界转动，在我心里深深感受到了这一点。
(6)画面定格法
①The children said loudly，“Happy Mother's Day！” Mother hugged them tightly and kissed them again and again.
孩子们大声说：“母亲节快乐！”妈妈紧紧地拥抱着他们，一次又一次地吻着他们。
②In the evening, Dad came back.I proudly took out my own money and handed it to Dad.
那天晚上，爸爸回来了。我骄傲地拿出了我自己的钱，递给了爸爸。
5种常用句式
(1)only引起的倒装句
①Only then did I realize that it was bravery that can conquer whatever difficulty came in the way.
直到那时我才意识到，正是勇敢才能克服前进道路上的一切困难。
②Only when we open up the door of our heart can we be bathed in the brilliant sunshine and enjoy the warmth of love.
只有当我们打开心门，我们才能沐浴在灿烂的阳光下享受爱的温暖。
(2)强调句型
It was a simple knot and an understanding heart that saved me from the awkward situation.
正是这一个简单的绳结和一颗善解人意的心将我从尴尬中拯救出来。
(3)From then on＋表行动的句子
①From then on，I made up my mind to pass on“love” to others.
从那以后，我下定决心向别人传递“爱”。
②From that day on, every time I meet someone who needs help，I always reach out to them, hoping to pass on the kindness that Mexican family offered me.
从那天起，每当我遇到需要帮助的人，我总是伸出手去帮助他们，希望把墨西哥家庭给予我的善良传递下去。
(4)Sometimes＋表感悟类的句子
①Sometimes，a moment of kindness could mean so much to another, and that a simple act could make the world so much better.
有时候，那一刻的善良对另一个人来说意义重大，而一个简单的行为可以使世界变得如此美好。
②Sometimes a small act of kindness may be powerful enough to make a huge difference.
有时候一个小小的善举可能会产生巨大的影响。
(5)综合型组合公式：结果＋难忘的经历＋体悟
I thought about what had just happened.What I was eager to utter was that it was such an exceedingly memorable experience that I would never forget.
我想了想刚才发生的事。我急切想说的是，这是一次极其难忘的经历，我永远不会忘记。
【典例示范】
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My dad, George, only had an eighth grade education.A quiet man, he didn't understand my world of school activities.From age 14, he worked.And his dad, Albert, took the money my dad earned and used it to pay family expenses.
I didn't really understand his world either: He was a livestock trucker, and I thought that I would surpass(超过) anything he had accomplished by the time I walked across the stage at high school graduation.
Summers in the mid-70s were spent at home shooting baskets, hitting a baseball, or throwing a football, preparing for my future as a quarterback on a football team.In poor weather，I read about sports or practiced my trombone(长号)．
The summer before my eighth grade I was one of a group of boys that a neighboring farmer hired to work in his field.He explained our basic task, the tractor fired up and we were off, riding down the field looking for weeds to spray with chemicals.After a short way, the farmer stopped and pointed at a weed which we missed.Then we began again.This happened over and over, but we soon learned to identify different grasses like cockleburs, lamb's-quarters, foxtails, and the king of weeds, the pretty purple thistle.It was tiring work, but I looked forward to the pay, even though I wasn't sure how much it would amount to.
At home, my dad said，“A job's a big step to growing up.I'm glad you will be contributing to the household.” My dad's words made me realize that my earnings might not be mine to do with as I wished.
My labors lasted about two weeks, and the farmer said there might be more work, but I wasn't interested.I decided it was not fair that I had to contribute my money.
注意：续写词数应为150左右。
When I brought my paycheck home—it was $119—my dad wanted to talk to me.
I was surprised that my dad allowed me to use the money as I wished.
【范文赏读】
When I brought my paycheck home—it was $119—my dad wanted to talk to me.Obviously(副词作状语衔接), my dad would try to persuade me to contribute all my earning.It's never fair.I thought in my mind hopelessly, grabbing the money tightly in my sweating fist.After a long silence, he didn't ask as expected, instead, he gently said“How do you plan to spend the money from the farmer？” Without any hesitation, the following words popped out，“There are many things I wanted, such as a new football，a
baseball bat and a pair of sneakers and so on, anything but to pay family expense like you.” At that, my dad nodded and let me keep the money(与第二段首句主语一致)．
I was surprised that my dad allowed me to use the money as I wished.Staring at my confused expression(分词作状语衔接), my dad explained：“Though I can't understand your world of school activities, still I will stand by you”．Moved by the touching words and seeing his increasingly hunching back, I felt a sense of guilt and selfishness welled up in my mind and surged through myself.At exactly that moment，I realized why my father let me have the money—it was his expectation for my future, his encouragement and quiet love.It was this unique experience that made me realize I would never surpass his love for me(强调句型)．
写作进阶
第二部分 读后续写
第四讲 续写衔接、点题
一、写好四句，3句衔接与主旨升华
1．四个顺畅呼应，进行有效衔接
(1)续写首句与给出的首段首句的衔接；
(2)续写首段尾句与给出的次段首句的衔接；
(3)给出的次段首句与续写次段首句的衔接；
(4)文章结尾升华与文章主题意义的衔接。
2．围绕“真善美”，传递正能量
续写故事的内容一定要传递正能量，围绕“真善美”的大主题设计情节，弘扬社会主义核心价值观，因此续写结尾要按此进行主旨升华。
二、3句衔接语与主旨升华的常用方法和句式
1．做好衔接的基本方法
(1)提示句的主语继续成为续写的第一句的主语
(2)提示句的某个关键词成为一个新的主语
(3)续写第一段的最后一句的主语和续写第二段的首句主语一致，使得段落连贯一致
[点拨] 根据情况以上规则可以灵活变通，如续写第二段的首句主语一致可以作为续写第一段的最后一句的宾语。但无论如何要保持语义连贯一致。
2．衔接过渡语的常用句式
(1)形容词(短语)作状语
With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business.Anxious and full of expectation, he took the popcorn around to the houses and began to sell his popcorn.
一切准备就绪后，伯纳德开始着手他的新生意。既焦虑又满怀期待，他拿着爆米花挨家挨户地开始售卖。
(2)非谓语动词作状语
(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn't look at me.Seeing his face filled with anxiety，I felt sad, deciding to talk something with him.
我们紧挨着坐了下来，但大卫不愿看我。看着他那充满焦虑的脸，我感到很难过，决定和他说点什么。
(3)倒装句衔接
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.In no time did their father seem to understand exactly what had happened and what to do next.
当双胞胎失望地环顾四周时，他们的父亲出现了。他们的父亲似乎很快就明白了到底发生了什么事，下一步该怎么办。
(4)介词短语或副词作状语衔接
(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news.Much to my surprise/Surprisingly, I beat a lot of participants and won the first prize.
几个星期后，当我几乎忘记比赛的时候，传来了消息。令我吃惊的是，我打败了很多参赛者，获得了第一名。
(5)对话或者独白衔接
(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)I went to my teacher's office after the award presentation.“Congratulations! Your efforts paid off！” said he smilingly.
颁奖典礼结束后，我去了老师的办公室。“祝贺你！ 你的努力得到了回报！”他微笑着说。
(6)状语从句衔接
(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)I went to my teacher's office after the award presentation.The minute I stepped in, he laughed out loud again as has had before, and said“Congratulations！”
颁奖典礼结束后，我去了老师的办公室。我一进门，他又像以前一样大笑起来，说“祝贺你！”
3．主旨升华的常用方法和句式
6种主旨升华的方法
(1)名言结尾法
需要注意的是：不可生搬硬套名言警句，一定要具体文本，具体分析。
①(2022·1月浙江卷)Just as the saying goes, one person can go far, but a group of persons can travel farther.
正如俗话说，一个人可以走得很远，但一群人可以走得更远。
②Just as the saying puts，“Where there is a will, there is a way.” Now I couldn't agree more.
正如俗话所说，“有志者，事竟成。”现在我完全同意。
(2)情感升华法
Seeing the javelin，I felt as if it had been encouraging me and saying，“You've found your talent and I've found you.”
看到标枪，我觉得它好像在鼓励我，并说，“你找到了你的天赋，我找到了你。”
(3)运用修辞法
①I quickly took out the camera and photographed the rare scene—we were robbed by a polar bear.
我迅速拿出相机，拍下了这一罕见的场景——我们被一只北极熊抢劫了。
②That affection towards our family is like a touch of green tea, refreshing and heartwarming.
那份对我们家人的感情像一杯清茶，沁人心脾，温暖人心。
(4)首尾呼应法
①A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day.
一天，在亚瑟上班的路上发生了一件有趣的事情。
②What a funny day! Arthur couldn't stop laughing whenever he looked back on this happy experience.
多么有趣的一天啊！ 每当亚瑟想起这次欢乐的经历，他就忍不住笑个不停。
(5)感悟体会法
①(2024·潍坊市五县市高三10月统考)From the experience，I was fully aware of the responsibility and great value as a doctor, which, therefore, inspired me to continue to pursue my dream.
从这些经验中，我充分意识到作为一名医生的责任和巨大的价值，因此，这激发了我继续追求我的梦想。
②I held the paper bag tightly, tears rolling down without control.It is love that makes the world go around, which I felt deep in my heart.
我紧紧地握着纸袋，眼泪禁不住流了下来。正是爱让这世界转动，在我心里深深感受到了这一点。
(6)画面定格法
①The children said loudly，“Happy Mother's Day！” Mother hugged them tightly and kissed them again and again.
孩子们大声说：“母亲节快乐！”妈妈紧紧地拥抱着他们，一次又一次地吻着他们。
②In the evening, Dad came back.I proudly took out my own money and handed it to Dad.
那天晚上，爸爸回来了。我骄傲地拿出了我自己的钱，递给了爸爸。
5种常用句式
(1)only引起的倒装句
①Only then did I realize that it was bravery that can conquer whatever difficulty came in the way.
直到那时我才意识到，正是勇敢才能克服前进道路上的一切困难。
②Only when we open up the door of our heart can we be bathed in the brilliant sunshine and enjoy the warmth of love.
只有当我们打开心门，我们才能沐浴在灿烂的阳光下享受爱的温暖。
(2)强调句型
It was a simple knot and an understanding heart that saved me from the awkward situation.
正是这一个简单的绳结和一颗善解人意的心将我从尴尬中拯救出来。
(3)From then on＋表行动的句子
①From then on，I made up my mind to pass on“love” to others.
从那以后，我下定决心向别人传递“爱”。
②From that day on, every time I meet someone who needs help，I always reach out to them, hoping to pass on the kindness that Mexican family offered me.
从那天起，每当我遇到需要帮助的人，我总是伸出手去帮助他们，希望把墨西哥家庭给予我的善良传递下去。
(4)Sometimes＋表感悟类的句子
①Sometimes，a moment of kindness could mean so much to another, and that a simple act could make the world so much better.
有时候，那一刻的善良对另一个人来说意义重大，而一个简单的行为可以使世界变得如此美好。
②Sometimes a small act of kindness may be powerful enough to make a huge difference.
有时候一个小小的善举可能会产生巨大的影响。
(5)综合型组合公式：结果＋难忘的经历＋体悟
I thought about what had just happened.What I was eager to utter was that it was such an exceedingly memorable experience that I would never forget.
我想了想刚才发生的事。我急切想说的是，这是一次极其难忘的经历，我永远不会忘记。
【典例示范】
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My dad, George, only had an eighth grade education.A quiet man, he didn't understand my world of school activities.From age 14, he worked.And his dad, Albert, took the money my dad earned and used it to pay family expenses.
I didn't really understand his world either: He was a livestock trucker, and I thought that I would surpass(超过) anything he had accomplished by the time I walked across the stage at high school graduation.
Summers in the mid-70s were spent at home shooting baskets, hitting a baseball, or throwing a football, preparing for my future as a quarterback on a football team.In poor weather，I read about sports or practiced my trombone(长号)．
The summer before my eighth grade I was one of a group of boys that a neighboring farmer hired to work in his field.He explained our basic task, the tractor fired up and we were off, riding down the field looking for weeds to spray with chemicals.After a short way, the farmer stopped and pointed at a weed which we missed.Then we began again.This happened over and over, but we soon learned to identify different grasses like cockleburs, lamb's-quarters, foxtails, and the king of weeds, the pretty purple thistle.It was tiring work, but I looked forward to the pay, even though I wasn't sure how much it would amount to.
At home, my dad said，“A job's a big step to growing up.I'm glad you will be contributing to the household.” My dad's words made me realize that my earnings might not be mine to do with as I wished.
My labors lasted about two weeks, and the farmer said there might be more work, but I wasn't interested.I decided it was not fair that I had to contribute my money.
注意：续写词数应为150左右。
When I brought my paycheck home—it was $119—my dad wanted to talk to me.
I was surprised that my dad allowed me to use the money as I wished.
【范文赏读】
When I brought my paycheck home—it was $119—my dad wanted to talk to me.Obviously(副词作状语衔接), my dad would try to persuade me to contribute all my earning.It's never fair.I thought in my mind hopelessly, grabbing the money tightly in my sweating fist.After a long silence, he didn't ask as expected, instead, he gently said“How do you plan to spend the money from the farmer？” Without any hesitation, the following words popped out，“There are many things I wanted, such as a new football，a
baseball bat and a pair of sneakers and so on, anything but to pay family expense like you.” At that, my dad nodded and let me keep the money(与第二段首句主语一致)．
I was surprised that my dad allowed me to use the money as I wished.Staring at my confused expression(分词作状语衔接), my dad explained：“Though I can't understand your world of school activities, still I will stand by you”．Moved by the touching words and seeing his increasingly hunching back, I felt a sense of guilt and selfishness welled up in my mind and surged through myself.At exactly that moment，I realized why my father let me have the money—it was his expectation for my future, his encouragement and quiet love.It was this unique experience that made me realize I would never surpass his love for me(强调句型)．