第3讲 续写热门话题 历险脱困
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Ezri and Oliver were so keen to climb the mountain that they begged to join their dad Brandon for another hike. Just after 8 a. m. on a beautiful Sunday morning, they set off. Brandon's backpack held his phone, Clif bars(能量棒), packets of apple sauce, apples, water bottles and fishing gear.
Brandon had planned a varied route up the mountain. The winding upward slope was fun and uneventful. Near the top, thick snow blanketed the path. Excitedly, the kids raced across the hard surface. They shared the second-last Clif bar and rested for an hour. Brandon looked around. His phone showed 1：30 p. m. and no signals.
When the kids started down the far side of the slope, Brandon said, “You guys really want to find those fishing lakes, don't you？”
“Oh, yes！” Ezri said. So they took an unfamiliar route down the other side of the mountain.
By the time Brandon realized the path had become an animal trail alongside a stream, it made sense to keep following it. The stream sang to them, and they kept following it down. Mid afternoon, when the sun disappeared behind heavy gray clouds, they suddenly felt lost, cold and hungry. For half an hour they cautiously moved downward until they reached a steep cliff(悬崖) edge. The stream became a noisy, six-metre waterfall. Mist enveloped them as the water raced over a huge rock.
Brandon cursed(咒骂) himself for taking an unknown route down. They held hands and inched down until Oliver slid on a loose rock and all three went flying.
Brandon wiped blood from his forehead and gathered his senses. Was anyone hurt Oliver, crying and shivering, seemed okay. Ezri was weeping, but she too appeared uninjured. Brandon himself didn't feel anything worse than the wound on his forehead. The backpack was stuck in the rocks six metres away. He saw no use trying to find it back. The air was cold and getting colder. They were wet and tired.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式作答。
To save the kids, Brandon realized he had to look for a way out alone. ＿＿＿
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A helicopter with the father and many volunteers set off immediately. ＿＿＿＿
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写作指导：
Ⅰ. 梳理原文细节，理清篇章结构。
Ⅱ. 依据首句提示，构思后续情节。
第一段：由续写第一段及续写第二段的提示语可知，第一段可描写Brandon独自离开去寻找出路，最终联系上911。
第二段：由续写第二段的提示语可知，第二段可写Brandon和志愿者成功找到孩子们，Brandon非常感动。
范文佳作：
To save the kids, Brandon realized he had to look for a way out alone. After he made the decision, he wrapped his coat around them and kissed each of them on the forehead. “Stay here, no matter what. I'll go for help, ” he repeated several times in a trembling voice. In the following hours, Brandon walked through the bush and even suffered another bad fall on the way. Exhausted and bloodied, he emerged from the forest and bumped into a family of hikers, who called 911.
A helicopter with the father and many volunteers set off immediately. On the return trip, Brandon anxiously described the general location of the children to the rescuers. Finally, after a long search, they successfully located the poor children. Upon the helicopter's arrival, Brandon jumped off and ran to embrace his children, moved to see so many strangers in bright red jackets. Every time he thinks of bright red jackets, he would feel he was not alone. There's always someone out there who is willing to help.
话题佳句：
1. When we reached deep into the forest, suddenly the smog spread everywhere and we were not able to see each other clearly and lost our way.
当我们到达森林深处时，烟雾突然弥漫，我们无法看清楚彼此并且迷了路。
2. They both spent a minute catching their breath and calmed themselves down.
他们两人都花了一分钟时间喘了口气，让自己冷静下来。
3. The icy water pierced my skin like needles. I was anxious to climb out by myself, but countless previous failures stopped me from struggling again.
冰冷的水像针一样刺痛我的皮肤。我渴望自己爬出去，但之前无数次的失败阻止了我再次挣扎。
4. He began to shake off the snow, moved snow away with bare hands, and managed to pull himself out.
他开始抖落积雪，徒手把雪移开，并设法把自己拉了出来。
5. Tom was shocked to find that the water kept rising. He was trapped in his house and his heart suddenly jumped into his throat.
汤姆震惊地发现水一直上涨。他被困在他的房子里，他的心一下子提到了嗓子眼。
6. Gathering all his strength, carefully, bit by bit, Simpson climbed out of the snow hole.
辛普森用尽全身力气，一点一点地，小心翼翼地从雪洞里爬了出来。
7. The front door was only a feet away, but the wind was so strong that Jessica had to fight her way out of the car and struggled into the house.
离前门只有一英尺远，但风太大了，杰西卡不得不奋力从车里出来，艰难地进了房子。
8. He felt weak but otherwise fine. He was glad to be out of danger and reunited with his family.
他感到虚弱，但其他方面还好。他很高兴脱离了危险，与家人团聚了。
9. Mom reminded me of how fortunate I was from the jaws of the alligator. It was a narrow escape.
妈妈提醒我，我能从短吻鳄的口中逃脱是多么幸运。这是一次死里逃生。
10. Finally, we went out of the forest that trapped us. What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that there's always a way out of any plight as long as we stay calm.
最后，我们走出了困住我们的森林。多么难忘的经历啊！事实证明，只要我们保持冷静，就总有办法摆脱困境。
11. Our being lost added a special taste to my adventurous vacation which I would remember all my life.
我们的迷路给我的冒险假期增添了一份特别的滋味，我将终生难忘。
12. Whether it's hiking through the mountains or surfing on the beach, every adventure brings its own unique challenges and rewards.
无论是在山上徒步旅行还是在海滩上冲浪，每一次冒险都会带来自己独特的挑战和回报。
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专题二 读后续写
第3讲 续写热门话题 历险脱困
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Ezri and Oliver were so keen to climb the mountain that they begged to join their dad Brandon for another hike. Just after 8 a. m. on a beautiful Sunday morning, they set off. Brandon's backpack held his phone, Clif bars(能量棒), packets of apple sauce, apples, water bottles and fishing gear.
Brandon had planned a varied route up the mountain. The winding upward slope was fun and uneventful. Near the top, thick snow blanketed the path. Excitedly, the kids raced across the hard surface. They shared the second-last Clif bar and rested for an hour. Brandon looked around. His phone showed 1：30 p. m. and no signals.
When the kids started down the far side of the slope, Brandon said, “You guys really want to find those fishing lakes, don't you？”
“Oh, yes！” Ezri said. So they took an unfamiliar route down the other side of the mountain.
By the time Brandon realized the path had become an animal trail alongside a stream, it made sense to keep following it. The stream sang to them, and they kept following it down. Mid afternoon, when the sun disappeared behind heavy gray clouds, they suddenly felt lost, cold and hungry. For half an hour they cautiously moved downward until they reached a steep cliff(悬崖) edge. The stream became a noisy, six-metre waterfall. Mist enveloped them as the water raced over a huge rock.
Brandon cursed(咒骂) himself for taking an unknown route down. They held hands and inched down until Oliver slid on a loose rock and all three went flying.
Brandon wiped blood from his forehead and gathered his senses. Was anyone hurt Oliver, crying and shivering, seemed okay. Ezri was weeping, but she too appeared uninjured. Brandon himself didn't feel anything worse than the wound on his forehead. The backpack was stuck in the rocks six metres away. He saw no use trying to find it back. The air was cold and getting colder. They were wet and tired.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式作答。
To save the kids, Brandon realized he had to look for a way out alone. _____________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
A helicopter with the father and many volunteers set off immediately. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
写作指导：
Ⅰ. 梳理原文细节，理清篇章结构。
Ⅱ. 依据首句提示，构思后续情节。
第一段：由续写第一段及续写第二段的提示语可知，第一段可描写Brandon独自离开去寻找出路，最终联系上911。
第二段：由续写第二段的提示语可知，第二段可写Brandon和志愿者成功找到孩子们，Brandon非常感动。
范文佳作：
To save the kids, Brandon realized he had to look for a way out alone. After he made the decision, he wrapped his coat around them and kissed each of them on the forehead. “Stay here, no matter what. I'll go for help, ” he repeated several times in a trembling voice. In the following hours, Brandon walked through the bush and even suffered another bad fall on the way. Exhausted and bloodied, he emerged from the forest and bumped into a family of hikers, who called 911.
A helicopter with the father and many volunteers set off immediately. On the return trip, Brandon anxiously described the general location of the children to the rescuers. Finally, after a long search, they successfully located the poor children. Upon the helicopter's arrival, Brandon jumped off and ran to embrace his children, moved to see so many strangers in bright red jackets. Every time he thinks of bright red jackets, he would feel he was not alone. There's always someone out there who is willing to help.
话题佳句：
1. When we reached deep into the forest, suddenly the smog spread everywhere and we were not able to see each other clearly and lost our way.
当我们到达森林深处时，烟雾突然弥漫，我们无法看清楚彼此并且迷了路。
2. They both spent a minute catching their breath and calmed themselves down.
他们两人都花了一分钟时间喘了口气，让自己冷静下来。
3. The icy water pierced my skin like needles. I was anxious to climb out by myself, but countless previous failures stopped me from struggling again.
冰冷的水像针一样刺痛我的皮肤。我渴望自己爬出去，但之前无数次的失败阻止了我再次挣扎。
4. He began to shake off the snow, moved snow away with bare hands, and managed to pull himself out.
他开始抖落积雪，徒手把雪移开，并设法把自己拉了出来。
5. Tom was shocked to find that the water kept rising. He was trapped in his house and his heart suddenly jumped into his throat.
汤姆震惊地发现水一直上涨。他被困在他的房子里，他的心一下子提到了嗓子眼。
6. Gathering all his strength, carefully, bit by bit, Simpson climbed out of the snow hole.
辛普森用尽全身力气，一点一点地，小心翼翼地从雪洞里爬了出来。
7. The front door was only a feet away, but the wind was so strong that Jessica had to fight her way out of the car and struggled into the house.
离前门只有一英尺远，但风太大了，杰西卡不得不奋力从车里出来，艰难地进了房子。
8. He felt weak but otherwise fine. He was glad to be out of danger and reunited with his family.
他感到虚弱，但其他方面还好。他很高兴脱离了危险，与家人团聚了。
9. Mom reminded me of how fortunate I was from the jaws of the alligator. It was a narrow escape.
妈妈提醒我，我能从短吻鳄的口中逃脱是多么幸运。这是一次死里逃生。
10. Finally, we went out of the forest that trapped us. What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that there's always a way out of any plight as long as we stay calm.
最后，我们走出了困住我们的森林。多么难忘的经历啊！事实证明，只要我们保持冷静，就总有办法摆脱困境。
11. Our being lost added a special taste to my adventurous vacation which I would remember all my life.
我们的迷路给我的冒险假期增添了一份特别的滋味，我将终生难忘。
12. Whether it's hiking through the mountains or surfing on the beach, every adventure brings its own unique challenges and rewards.
无论是在山上徒步旅行还是在海滩上冲浪，每一次冒险都会带来自己独特的挑战和回报。
