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专题二 读后续写
第2讲 续写热门话题 亲情友情
阅读下面材料， 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段， 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
(2021·新高考Ⅰ卷)
A MOTHER'S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother's Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a. m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff's hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式作答。
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. __________________________________________________
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The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
写作指导：
Ⅰ. 梳理原文细节，理清篇章结构。
Ⅱ. 依据首句提示，构思后续情节。
第一段：由续写第一段及续写第二段的提示语可知，该段主要描述在爸爸的帮助下，早餐做成了。
第二段：由续写第二段的提示语可知，该段应该描述双胞胎的母亲节祝福以及妈妈看到早餐时的反应。
范文佳作：
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Seeing the mess in the kitchen, he immediately understood what had happened, but he wasn't upset. Instead, he applied some medicine to Jeff's hand, and then set out to help them clean up the mess, throwing away the burnt toast. Next, they began to make breakfast, and by now the twins looked cheerful. Before long, the porridge was ready. Their father instructed them to fry the rest of the bread. Soon, the breakfast was ready, too.
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. Opening her eyes, she couldn't believe what she had seen. Before she could ask any question, their father turned up and told his wife about how the twins had made preparations to give her the surprise breakfast, and what troubles they had gone through when making the porridge and toast. Disbelief gave way to excitement and pride. Hugging them in her arms, she said, “Thank you, children. It's such an unforgettable Mother's Day for me.”
话题佳句：
1. The greatest gift of life is friendship, and I have received it.
生命中最棒的礼物是友谊，并且我已收获了。
2. His face lightening up, Arthur sprang up into his mother's warm hug.
亚瑟喜笑颜开，跳进了妈妈温暖的怀抱。
3. At that moment, she realized that it was the warmth and company of her family that enabled her to go through this difficult time.
在那一刻，她意识到，是家人的温暖和陪伴让她度过了这段艰难的时光。
4. Deeply moved by all his son did, the father could say nothing but to hug him tightly, tears welling up.
被儿子所做的一切深深地感动了，父亲说不出话来，只是紧紧地搂着儿子，泪水夺眶而出。
5. Someday, when I am older and have children of my own, I hope I can be just as great a mother as Mom.
有一天，当我长大了，有了自己的孩子，我希望我能成为像妈妈一样伟大的母亲。
6. My father's love is like the sunshine, which brings me firmness and enthusiasm so that my will is strengthened.
父亲的爱就像阳光，带给我坚定和热情，使我的意志更加坚定。
7. I was sure that there was something glorious shining in her eyes. I got to know it was the grace of love.
我确信她眼中有光芒在闪耀，我深知那是爱的光辉。
8. Exhausted as Henry was, he was delighted to help his friend. It was in the instant that he realized what is true friendship.
尽管亨利疲惫不堪，但他还是很乐意帮助他的朋友。就在那一刻，他意识到了什么是真正的友谊。
9. I do know that no life is permanent. No matter where she is, I will cherish our friendship and miss her forever.
我的确知道没有生命是永恒的。无论她在哪里，我都会珍惜我们的友谊，永远想念她。
10. After that, our friendship became closer and I was more like a friend than a teacher to them.
从那以后，我们的关系变得更紧密，我对他们来说更像是朋友而不是老师。
11. Just at that moment, she got a glimpse of Mr Smith in the corner of the hall, who shot Emily a determined look and then clapped loudly to give her a cheer.
就在那一刻，她瞥见了大厅角落的史密斯先生，他坚定地看了艾米莉一眼，然后大声鼓掌为她喝彩。第2讲 续写热门话题 亲情友情
阅读下面材料， 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段， 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
(2021·新高考Ⅰ卷)
A MOTHER'S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother's Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a. m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff's hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式作答。
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.
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The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. ＿＿＿＿＿
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写作指导：
Ⅰ. 梳理原文细节，理清篇章结构。
Ⅱ. 依据首句提示，构思后续情节。
第一段：由续写第一段及续写第二段的提示语可知，该段主要描述在爸爸的帮助下，早餐做成了。
第二段：由续写第二段的提示语可知，该段应该描述双胞胎的母亲节祝福以及妈妈看到早餐时的反应。
范文佳作：
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Seeing the mess in the kitchen, he immediately understood what had happened, but he wasn't upset. Instead, he applied some medicine to Jeff's hand, and then set out to help them clean up the mess, throwing away the burnt toast. Next, they began to make breakfast, and by now the twins looked cheerful. Before long, the porridge was ready. Their father instructed them to fry the rest of the bread. Soon, the breakfast was ready, too.
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. Opening her eyes, she couldn't believe what she had seen. Before she could ask any question, their father turned up and told his wife about how the twins had made preparations to give her the surprise breakfast, and what troubles they had gone through when making the porridge and toast. Disbelief gave way to excitement and pride. Hugging them in her arms, she said, “Thank you, children. It's such an unforgettable Mother's Day for me.”
话题佳句：
1. The greatest gift of life is friendship, and I have received it.
生命中最棒的礼物是友谊，并且我已收获了。
2. His face lightening up, Arthur sprang up into his mother's warm hug.
亚瑟喜笑颜开，跳进了妈妈温暖的怀抱。
3. At that moment, she realized that it was the warmth and company of her family that enabled her to go through this difficult time.
在那一刻，她意识到，是家人的温暖和陪伴让她度过了这段艰难的时光。
4. Deeply moved by all his son did, the father could say nothing but to hug him tightly, tears welling up.
被儿子所做的一切深深地感动了，父亲说不出话来，只是紧紧地搂着儿子，泪水夺眶而出。
5. Someday, when I am older and have children of my own, I hope I can be just as great a mother as Mom.
有一天，当我长大了，有了自己的孩子，我希望我能成为像妈妈一样伟大的母亲。
6. My father's love is like the sunshine, which brings me firmness and enthusiasm so that my will is strengthened.
父亲的爱就像阳光，带给我坚定和热情，使我的意志更加坚定。
7. I was sure that there was something glorious shining in her eyes. I got to know it was the grace of love.
我确信她眼中有光芒在闪耀，我深知那是爱的光辉。
8. Exhausted as Henry was, he was delighted to help his friend. It was in the instant that he realized what is true friendship.
尽管亨利疲惫不堪，但他还是很乐意帮助他的朋友。就在那一刻，他意识到了什么是真正的友谊。
9. I do know that no life is permanent. No matter where she is, I will cherish our friendship and miss her forever.
我的确知道没有生命是永恒的。无论她在哪里，我都会珍惜我们的友谊，永远想念她。
10. After that, our friendship became closer and I was more like a friend than a teacher to them.
从那以后，我们的关系变得更紧密，我对他们来说更像是朋友而不是老师。
11. Just at that moment, she got a glimpse of Mr Smith in the corner of the hall, who shot Emily a determined look and then clapped loudly to give her a cheer.
就在那一刻，她瞥见了大厅角落的史密斯先生，他坚定地看了艾米莉一眼，然后大声鼓掌为她喝彩。
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