第4讲 续写热门话题 人与动物
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was invited to a cookout on an old friend's farm in western Washington. I parked my car outside the farm and walked past a milking house which had apparently not been used in many years. A noise at a window caught my attention, so I entered it. It was a hummingbird (蜂鸟), desperately trying to escape. She was covered in spider-webs(蛛网) and was barely able to move her wings. She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up.
With the bird in my cupped hand, I looked around to see how she had gotten in. The broken window glass was the likely answer. I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside, closing the door securely behind me.
When I opened my hand, the bird did not fly away; she sat looking at me with her bright eyes. I removed the sticky spider-webs that covered her head and wings. Still, she made no attempt to fly. Perhaps she had been struggling against the window too long and was too tired Or too thirsty
As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path toward my car where I kept a water bottle, she began to move. I stopped, and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away. Hovering(悬停), she approached within six inches of my face. For a very long moment, this tiny creature looked into my eyes, turning her head from side to side. Then she flew quickly out of sight.
During the cookout, I told my hosts about the hummingbird incident. They promised to fix the window. As I was departing, my friends walked me to my car. I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to the center of our group and began hovering. She turned from person to person until she came to me. She again looked directly into my eyes, then let out a squeaking call and was gone. For a moment, all were speechless. Then someone said, “She must have come to say good-bye.”
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式作答。
A few weeks later, I went to the farm again. ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿
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写作指导：
Ⅰ. 梳理原文细节，理清篇章结构。
Ⅱ. 依据首句提示，构思后续情节。
第一段：由续写第一段及续写第二段的提示语可知，该段应该描述我途经那间挤奶房时回想起上一回拯救蜂鸟的经历，以及享用烧烤的过程。
第二段：由续写第二段的提示语可知，该段应该描述两方面的内容：一是蜂鸟与我之间的互动交流；二是关于人与动物关系的启示。
范文佳作：
A few weeks later, I went to the farm again. I still remembered my friends' promise so I went past the abandoned milking house to see if they had fixed the broken window. To my satisfaction，no other tiny creatures would meet this trouble any more. As I approached the farm，I was greeted by a spicy smell of the barbecue，urging me to walk faster. We were totally immersed in the peaceful atmosphere，enjoying the delicate cuisine，talking about our interesting experiences and singing songs till the sun set. The evening glow spreading across the farm，it was time for us to say good-bye so we went to the parking lot together.
I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. With a squeaking call, she dived towards me and hovered before my face, looking at me with her bright eyes. Then she stopped on my left shoulder. I patted her on the back which was covered by colourful feathers. And I took out my water bottle，trying to give her some water. Content and joyful，she flew about 2 meters above the ground, turning her head from side to side as if expressing her gratitude for saving her life to me again. At that moment，happiness and the feeling of being moved mingled, welling up into my heart，tears rolling down my cheeks.
话题佳句：
1. The dog turned around, eyeing us, with his tail swinging up and down.
这只狗转过身来，上下摆动着尾巴，注视着我们。
2. At first the bird stuck his head out of his cage just to take a sip of water and fill his mouth with food.
起初，这只鸟把头探出笼子，只是为了喝一口水，往嘴里塞满食物。
3. Afraid I might hurt the lovely small creature, I automatically let out a cry to stop my horse.
我害怕会伤害这个可爱的小生物，我不假思索，发出一声喊声来阻止我的马。
4. Confused and frightened at my approach, the wolf backed off, pulling hard the chain.
狼被我的靠近弄得既困惑又害怕，向后退却，使劲地拉着链子。
5. Birds were singing, the air was filled with laughter, and everyone was in the best of moods.
鸟儿在歌唱，空气中充满了笑声，每个人都沉浸在愉悦当中。
6. The wolf edged closer, ears upright, body tense, and stopped a few yards off, her bushy tail wagging slightly.
狼慢慢靠近了，耳朵竖起，身体绷紧，在几码远的地方停了下来，毛茸茸的尾巴微微摆动着。
7. At the sight of me, the dog circled around me, wagging his tail and licking my hands cheerfully.
一看到我，这只狗就围着我转圈，高兴地摇动着尾巴舔着我的手。
8. Shaking with fear, I approached it cautiously and saw that it was a pigeon. It looked at me in fear, trying to open its wings and struggling its feet, but apparently powerless.
我心惊胆战、小心翼翼地靠近它，发现是一只鸽子。它恐惧地看着我，试图张开翅膀，双脚在挣扎，但明显力不从心。
9. Whenever I sat at the table eating biscuits, it looked up at me, cooing(咕咕地叫) constantly. To my joy, I could also reach into the cage to touch it. When I gently fingered its head, it playfully pecked(啄) at me.
每当我坐在桌旁吃饼干，它就看着我，不断咕咕叫。令我高兴的是，我可以把手伸进笼子抚摸它。当我摸它头的时候，它会开玩笑似的啄我。
10. The dog firmly grabbed my trousers and motioned me to the kitchen. As I approached the kitchen, I could obviously smell a strong burning scent and instantly knew what had happened.
这只狗咬住我的裤子，拉我去厨房。当我走向厨房时，我明显地闻到强烈的烧焦味，立刻就意识到发生了什么。
11. With Indigo, our baby dog，passing away, our house seemed quiet as a tomb, messy and lifeless.
由于我们的小狗Indigo死了，我们的房子似乎像坟墓一样死寂，杂乱无章且毫无生气。
12. In the wild and somewhat silly moments of raising an orphaned baby squirrel, our children learned to value and appreciate life.
在野外，通过有些犯傻地收养孤零零的小松鼠，我们的孩子们学会了珍视生命。
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第4讲 续写热门话题 人与动物
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was invited to a cookout on an old friend's farm in western Washington. I parked my car outside the farm and walked past a milking house which had apparently not been used in many years. A noise at a window caught my attention, so I entered it. It was a hummingbird (蜂鸟), desperately trying to escape. She was covered in spider-webs(蛛网) and was barely able to move her wings. She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up.
With the bird in my cupped hand, I looked around to see how she had gotten in. The broken window glass was the likely answer. I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside, closing the door securely behind me.
When I opened my hand, the bird did not fly away; she sat looking at me with her bright eyes. I removed the sticky spider-webs that covered her head and wings. Still, she made no attempt to fly. Perhaps she had been struggling against the window too long and was too tired Or too thirsty
As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path toward my car where I kept a water bottle, she began to move. I stopped, and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away. Hovering(悬停), she approached within six inches of my face. For a very long moment, this tiny creature looked into my eyes, turning her head from side to side. Then she flew quickly out of sight.
During the cookout, I told my hosts about the hummingbird incident. They promised to fix the window. As I was departing, my friends walked me to my car. I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to the center of our group and began hovering. She turned from person to person until she came to me. She again looked directly into my eyes, then let out a squeaking call and was gone. For a moment, all were speechless. Then someone said, “She must have come to say good-bye.”
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式作答。
A few weeks later, I went to the farm again. ___________________
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I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. _______
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写作指导：
Ⅰ. 梳理原文细节，理清篇章结构。
Ⅱ. 依据首句提示，构思后续情节。
第一段：由续写第一段及续写第二段的提示语可知，该段应该描述我途经那间挤奶房时回想起上一回拯救蜂鸟的经历，以及享用烧烤的过程。
第二段：由续写第二段的提示语可知，该段应该描述两方面的内容：一是蜂鸟与我之间的互动交流；二是关于人与动物关系的启示。
范文佳作：
A few weeks later, I went to the farm again. I still remembered my friends' promise so I went past the abandoned milking house to see if they had fixed the broken window. To my satisfaction，no other tiny creatures would meet this trouble any more. As I approached the farm，I was greeted by a spicy smell of the barbecue，urging me to walk faster. We were totally immersed in the peaceful atmosphere，enjoying the delicate cuisine，talking about our interesting experiences and singing songs till the sun set. The evening glow spreading across the farm，it was time for us to say good-bye so we went to the parking lot together.
I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. With a squeaking call, she dived towards me and hovered before my face, looking at me with her bright eyes. Then she stopped on my left shoulder. I patted her on the back which was covered by colourful feathers. And I took out my water bottle，trying to give her some water. Content and joyful，she flew about 2 meters above the ground, turning her head from side to side as if expressing her gratitude for saving her life to me again. At that moment，happiness and the feeling of being moved mingled, welling up into my heart，tears rolling down my cheeks.
话题佳句：
1. The dog turned around, eyeing us, with his tail swinging up and down.
这只狗转过身来，上下摆动着尾巴，注视着我们。
2. At first the bird stuck his head out of his cage just to take a sip of water and fill his mouth with food.
起初，这只鸟把头探出笼子，只是为了喝一口水，往嘴里塞满食物。
3. Afraid I might hurt the lovely small creature, I automatically let out a cry to stop my horse.
我害怕会伤害这个可爱的小生物，我不假思索，发出一声喊声来阻止我的马。
4. Confused and frightened at my approach, the wolf backed off, pulling hard the chain.
狼被我的靠近弄得既困惑又害怕，向后退却，使劲地拉着链子。
5. Birds were singing, the air was filled with laughter, and everyone was in the best of moods.
鸟儿在歌唱，空气中充满了笑声，每个人都沉浸在愉悦当中。
6. The wolf edged closer, ears upright, body tense, and stopped a few yards off, her bushy tail wagging slightly.
狼慢慢靠近了，耳朵竖起，身体绷紧，在几码远的地方停了下来，毛茸茸的尾巴微微摆动着。
7. At the sight of me, the dog circled around me, wagging his tail and licking my hands cheerfully.
一看到我，这只狗就围着我转圈，高兴地摇动着尾巴舔着我的手。
8. Shaking with fear, I approached it cautiously and saw that it was a pigeon. It looked at me in fear, trying to open its wings and struggling its feet, but apparently powerless.
我心惊胆战、小心翼翼地靠近它，发现是一只鸽子。它恐惧地看着我，试图张开翅膀，双脚在挣扎，但明显力不从心。
9. Whenever I sat at the table eating biscuits, it looked up at me, cooing(咕咕地叫) constantly. To my joy, I could also reach into the cage to touch it. When I gently fingered its head, it playfully pecked(啄) at me.
每当我坐在桌旁吃饼干，它就看着我，不断咕咕叫。令我高兴的是，我可以把手伸进笼子抚摸它。当我摸它头的时候，它会开玩笑似的啄我。
10. The dog firmly grabbed my trousers and motioned me to the kitchen. As I approached the kitchen, I could obviously smell a strong burning scent and instantly knew what had happened.
这只狗咬住我的裤子，拉我去厨房。当我走向厨房时，我明显地闻到强烈的烧焦味，立刻就意识到发生了什么。
11. With Indigo, our baby dog，passing away, our house seemed quiet as a tomb, messy and lifeless.
由于我们的小狗Indigo死了，我们的房子似乎像坟墓一样死寂，杂乱无章且毫无生气。
12. In the wild and somewhat silly moments of raising an orphaned baby squirrel, our children learned to value and appreciate life.
在野外，通过有些犯傻地收养孤零零的小松鼠，我们的孩子们学会了珍视生命。
