专题二 读后续写
第1讲 续写热门话题 个人成长
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
(2023·新课标Ⅰ卷)When I was in middle school, my social studies teacher asked me to enter a writing contest. I said no without thinking. I did not love writing. My family came from Brazil, so English was only my second language. Writing was so difficult and painful for me that my teacher had allowed me to present my paper on the sinking of the Titanic by acting out a play, where I played all the parts. No one laughed harder than he did.
So, why did he suddenly force me to do something at which I was sure to fail His reply：“Because I love your stories. If you're willing to apply yourself, I think you have a good shot at this.” Encouraged by his words, I agreed to give it a try.
I chose Paul Revere's horse as my subject. Paul Revere was a silversmith (银匠) in Boston who rode a horse at night on April 18, 1775 to Lexington to warn people that British soldiers were coming. My story would come straight from the horse's mouth. Not a brilliant idea, but funny；and unlikely to be anyone else's choice.
What did the horse think, as he sped through the night Did he get tired Have doubts Did he want to quit I sympathized immediately. I got tired. I had doubts. I wanted to quit. But, like Revere's horse, I kept going. I worked hard. I checked my spelling. I asked my older sister to correct my grammar. I checked out a half-dozen books on Paul Revere from the library. I even read a few of them.
When I handed in the essay to my teacher, he read it, laughed out loud, and said, “Great. Now, write it again.” I wrote it again, and again and again. When I finally finished it, the thought of winning had given way to the enjoyment of writing. If I didn't win, I wouldn't care.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式作答。
A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news.
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I went to my teacher's office after the award presentation. ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿
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写作指导：
Ⅰ. 梳理原文细节，理清篇章结构。
Ⅱ. 依据首句提示，构思后续情节。
第一段：由续写第一段及续写第二段的提示语可知，第一段可写我得知获奖后的激动心情，家人(尤其是我姐姐)也为我感到高兴，并回顾参赛的心路历程。
第二段：由续写第二段的提示语可知，第二段可写我表达对老师的感谢，老师会再次给予认可和鼓励。最后，可适当进行升华，不要轻易说不可能。
范文佳作：
A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news. I still remember it was a Monday morning in spring, when my teacher called me to his office, telling me that I had taken first place in the writing contest, and that I was the only winner whose native language wasn't English. Dominated by an overwhelming sense of excitement and pride at his words, I simply stood there dumbfounded, and my feet, as if rooted to the ground, couldn't move a bit. The next day, I was presented with my award and a certificate at the ceremony.
I went to my teacher's office after the award presentation. Giggling instantly with a broad smile spreading on his face, he told me that he was proud of my wonderful performance. It was at that moment that a warm surge of streams washed through my body, and the image of the horse emerged in my mind, encouraging me to continue writing. Indeed, I got a taste of victory and learned to pursue my dream with perseverance, whatever difficulties might arise.
话题佳句：
1. Hard though it is, there is nothing more valuable than the sense of achievement you get from challenging yourself.
虽然很困难，但没有什么比挑战自己获得的成就感更有价值的了。
2. Taking a deep breath to collect myself, I decided to rise from where I fell.
深吸一口气让自己镇定下来，我决定从我跌倒的地方站起来。
3. A great weight off his mind, Tony had never felt so relieved.
卸下了沉重的负担，托尼从没有像现在这样如释重负。
4. Life is full of smiles and tears. Only by accepting them both can we enjoy our life.
生活充满了微笑和泪水。只有接受它们两者，我们才能享受我们的生活。
5. At the moment, I learned what my dad meant and became willing to contribute more to the household. I didn't feel confused anymore about why I should hand in my earnings, as it was indeed my responsibility to support the whole family.
那一刻，我明白了父亲的意思，并愿意为家庭做更多的贡献。我不再对为什么我应该上交我的收入感到困惑，因为养活整个家庭确实是我的责任。
6. This made me moved, and I would try my best to help more people in the future and bring warmth to more people.
这让我很感动，以后我会尽我最大的努力去帮助更多的人，给更多的人带来温暖。
7. This experience made me realize that the persons who you are grateful to are always there and don't ignore them!
这次经历使我意识到，你所要感激的人一直都在那里，不要忽视他们。
8. Through the accident, I came to realize the value of life and the importance of obeying traffic rules. After all, nothing is more precious than life.
通过这次事故，我开始认识到生命的价值和遵守交通规则的重要性。毕竟，没有什么比生命更珍贵。
9. At thirteen, I realized that I'd always become the winner if I wanted something badly and worked for it. I can be the master of my own destiny.
十三岁的时候，我意识到如果我非常想要某样东西并为之努力，我总是会成为胜利者。我可以是自己命运的主宰。
10. I never forgot the feeling of powerlessness when faced with the injured in the accident. It was that accident that changed me, giving me an entirely new life.
我永远不会忘记在那次事故中面对伤者时的那种无力感。正是那次事故改变了我，给了我全新的生活。
11. Since then I have often been reminded of the fish that I did not catch and the wisdom of my uncle: Never brag of your fish before you catch him.
从那以后我经常想起我没有钓到的鱼和我叔叔的智慧：鱼未抓到，莫夸其好。
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专题二 读后续写
第1讲 续写热门话题 个人成长
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
(2023·新课标Ⅰ卷)When I was in middle school, my social studies teacher asked me to enter a writing contest. I said no without thinking. I did not love writing. My family came from Brazil, so English was only my second language. Writing was so difficult and painful for me that my teacher had allowed me to present my paper on the sinking of the Titanic by acting out a play, where I played all the parts. No one laughed harder than he did.
So, why did he suddenly force me to do something at which I was sure to fail His reply：“Because I love your stories. If you're willing to apply yourself, I think you have a good shot at this.” Encouraged by his words, I agreed to give it a try.
I chose Paul Revere's horse as my subject. Paul Revere was a silversmith (银匠) in Boston who rode a horse at night on April 18, 1775 to Lexington to warn people that British soldiers were coming. My story would come straight from the horse's mouth. Not a brilliant idea, but funny；and unlikely to be anyone else's choice.
What did the horse think, as he sped through the night Did he get tired Have doubts Did he want to quit I sympathized immediately. I got tired. I had doubts. I wanted to quit. But, like Revere's horse, I kept going. I worked hard. I checked my spelling. I asked my older sister to correct my grammar. I checked out a half-dozen books on Paul Revere from the library. I even read a few of them.
When I handed in the essay to my teacher, he read it, laughed out loud, and said, “Great. Now, write it again.” I wrote it again, and again and again. When I finally finished it, the thought of winning had given way to the enjoyment of writing. If I didn't win, I wouldn't care.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式作答。
A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news. _____________________________________________________
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I went to my teacher's office after the award presentation. ＿＿＿____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
写作指导：
Ⅰ. 梳理原文细节，理清篇章结构。
Ⅱ. 依据首句提示，构思后续情节。
第一段：由续写第一段及续写第二段的提示语可知，第一段可写我得知获奖后的激动心情，家人(尤其是我姐姐)也为我感到高兴，并回顾参赛的心路历程。
第二段：由续写第二段的提示语可知，第二段可写我表达对老师的感谢，老师会再次给予认可和鼓励。最后，可适当进行升华，不要轻易说不可能。
范文佳作：
A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news. I still remember it was a Monday morning in spring, when my teacher called me to his office, telling me that I had taken first place in the writing contest, and that I was the only winner whose native language wasn't English. Dominated by an overwhelming sense of excitement and pride at his words, I simply stood there dumbfounded, and my feet, as if rooted to the ground, couldn't move a bit. The next day, I was presented with my award and a certificate at the ceremony.
I went to my teacher's office after the award presentation. Giggling instantly with a broad smile spreading on his face, he told me that he was proud of my wonderful performance. It was at that moment that a warm surge of streams washed through my body, and the image of the horse emerged in my mind, encouraging me to continue writing. Indeed, I got a taste of victory and learned to pursue my dream with perseverance, whatever difficulties might arise.
话题佳句：
1. Hard though it is, there is nothing more valuable than the sense of achievement you get from challenging yourself.
虽然很困难，但没有什么比挑战自己获得的成就感更有价值的了。
2. Taking a deep breath to collect myself, I decided to rise from where I fell.
深吸一口气让自己镇定下来，我决定从我跌倒的地方站起来。
3. A great weight off his mind, Tony had never felt so relieved.
卸下了沉重的负担，托尼从没有像现在这样如释重负。
4. Life is full of smiles and tears. Only by accepting them both can we enjoy our life.
生活充满了微笑和泪水。只有接受它们两者，我们才能享受我们的生活。
5. At the moment, I learned what my dad meant and became willing to contribute more to the household. I didn't feel confused anymore about why I should hand in my earnings, as it was indeed my responsibility to support the whole family.
那一刻，我明白了父亲的意思，并愿意为家庭做更多的贡献。我不再对为什么我应该上交我的收入感到困惑，因为养活整个家庭确实是我的责任。
6. This made me moved, and I would try my best to help more people in the future and bring warmth to more people.
这让我很感动，以后我会尽我最大的努力去帮助更多的人，给更多的人带来温暖。
7. This experience made me realize that the persons who you are grateful to are always there and don't ignore them!
这次经历使我意识到，你所要感激的人一直都在那里，不要忽视他们。
8. Through the accident, I came to realize the value of life and the importance of obeying traffic rules. After all, nothing is more precious than life.
通过这次事故，我开始认识到生命的价值和遵守交通规则的重要性。毕竟，没有什么比生命更珍贵。
9. At thirteen, I realized that I'd always become the winner if I wanted something badly and worked for it. I can be the master of my own destiny.
十三岁的时候，我意识到如果我非常想要某样东西并为之努力，我总是会成为胜利者。我可以是自己命运的主宰。
10. I never forgot the feeling of powerlessness when faced with the injured in the accident. It was that accident that changed me, giving me an entirely new life.
我永远不会忘记在那次事故中面对伤者时的那种无力感。正是那次事故改变了我，给了我全新的生活。
11. Since then I have often been reminded of the fish that I did not catch and the wisdom of my uncle: Never brag of your fish before you catch him.
从那以后我经常想起我没有钓到的鱼和我叔叔的智慧：鱼未抓到，莫夸其好。
