2025秋高考英语复习写作专题突破二第6讲续写热门话题 生活趣事课件+学案

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第6讲 续写热门话题 生活趣事
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
  Pumpkin (南瓜) carving at Halloween is a family tradition. We visit a local farm every October. In the pumpkin field, I compete with my three brothers and sister to seek out the biggest pumpkin. My dad has a rule that we have to carry our pumpkins back home, and as the eldest child I have an advantage—I carried an 85-pounder back last year.
  This year, it was hard to tell whether my prize or the one chosen by my 14-year-old brother, Jason, was the winner. Unfortunately we forgot to weigh them before taking out their insides, but I was determined to prove my point. All of us were hard at work at the kitchen table, with my mom filming the annual event. I'm unsure now why I thought forcing my head inside the pumpkin would settle the matter, but it seemed to make perfect sense at the time.
  With the pumpkin resting on the table, hole uppermost, I bent over and pressed my head against the opening. At first I got jammed just above my eyes and then, as I went on with my task, unwilling to quit, my nose briefly prevented entry. Finally I managed to put my whole head into it, like a cork(软木塞) forced into a bottle. I was able to straighten up with the huge pumpkin resting on my shoulders.
  My excitement was short-lived. The pumpkin was heavy. “I'm going to set it down, now, ” I said, and with Jason helping to support its weight,I bent back over the table to give it somewhere to rest. It was only when I tried to remove my head that I realized getting out was going to be less straightforward than getting in. When I pulled hard, my nose got in the way. I got into a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my head around trying to find the right angle, but it was no use. “I can't get it out!” I shouted, my voice sounding unnaturally loud in the enclosed space.
注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式作答。
  I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. _______
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________
  The video was posted the day before Halloween._____________
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________
写作指导:
Ⅰ. 梳理原文细节,理清篇章结构。
Ⅱ. 依据首句提示,构思后续情节。
第一段:由续写第一段及续写第二段的提示语可知,该段应该描述我的头被拔出来的整个过程。
第二段:由续写第二段的提示语可知,该段应该描述这段视频被上传到网上走红,我也成了网络红人。
范文佳作:
  I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. My head spun dizzily as if the world swirled. I felt a stab of fear. Jason suggested using a knife to cut the pumpkin open. I waved my hands wildly in protest at the plan. “Then you need to find a way of pulling yourself out, ” My dad said in a calm, cool voice. His voice settled my nerves. I was conscious that my nose was acting as an impediment to my escape. With stretching out my face and biting into the pumpkin, I managed to pull my head out. A ripple of excitement ran through us but the first thing I saw was the camera.
  The video was posted the day before Halloween. My big red nose and my sore chin became netizens' favorite topic. By the end of that day, it had over 1,000 views. People asked Mom to put it on YouTube, and we even got calls from TV breakfast shows. Meanwhile, the video started racking up hundreds of thousands of views. When I went out, I was recognized by people I had never met. The pumpkin also became a minor celebrity. Passers-by and trick-or-treaters would knock and ask for selfies with it. What an unforgettable Halloween!
话题佳句:
1. Amused by his silly mistake, we laughed our head off.
我们被他愚蠢的错误逗乐了,狂笑不已。
2. With crowds of the audience around, so embarrassed was she that she stood there awkwardly, feeling the blood rush to her face.
周围有大批观众,她感到很难堪,尴尬地站在那里,感觉血液涌上了自己的脸。
3. The cookies cooled on the table, filling the kitchen with their sweet smell, making her mouth water.
小甜饼在桌上变凉了,厨房里充满了甜甜的味道,馋得她直流口水。
4. Seeing no other people notice us, I rose and slipped out of the house silently.
见没有其他人注意到我们,我便站起来,悄悄地溜出了房子。
5. He slid to the window of the hut, raised himself on tiptoe, and stole a glance.
他溜到小屋的窗口,踮起脚尖,偷偷看了一眼。
6. I spent the rest of the day in a state of excitement, the extremely good mood I had ever experienced.
那天剩下的时间我都在兴奋中度过,这是我经历过的最愉快的心情。
7. I slowly pulled my picture out of my drawer and held it up. The entire class suddenly exploded with laughter!
我把我的画慢慢地从抽屉里拿出来,举了起来,全班同学突然哄堂大笑!
8. When recognizing who the visitor was, John opened his mouth with his eyes widening.
当认出来访者是谁时,约翰张大了嘴巴,眼睛睁得大大的。
9. She dropped her eyes and stared at her feet, hoping no one would notice how embarrassed she was.
她垂下眼睛,盯着自己的脚,希望没有人会注意到她有多尴尬。
10. She pulled off her shoes and dashed into her bedroom, barefoot and fast.
她脱下鞋子,光着脚飞快地跑到自己卧室中。
11. They laughed loudly, except for me, who could do nothing but force a bitter smile.
他们大笑,当然我没笑,我只能若无其事地挤出一个苦涩的笑。
12. Dad put the egg under an old hen, and every day Chris and I would check to see if it had hatched yet. Twenty-five days seemed like forever.
爸爸把鸡蛋放到老母鸡的身下,每天克里斯和我会查看是否已经孵出了小鸡。二十五天好像总也过不完。
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专题二 读后续写
第6讲 续写热门话题 生活趣事
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
  Pumpkin (南瓜) carving at Halloween is a family tradition. We visit a local farm every October. In the pumpkin field, I compete with my three brothers and sister to seek out the biggest pumpkin. My dad has a rule that we have to carry our pumpkins back home, and as the eldest child I have an advantage—I carried an 85-pounder back last year.
  This year, it was hard to tell whether my prize or the one chosen by my 14-year-old brother, Jason, was the winner. Unfortunately we forgot to weigh them before taking out their insides, but I was determined to prove my point. All of us were hard at work at the kitchen table, with my mom filming the annual event. I'm unsure now why I thought forcing my head inside the pumpkin would settle the matter, but it seemed to make perfect sense at the time.
  With the pumpkin resting on the table, hole uppermost, I bent over and pressed my head against the opening. At first I got jammed just above my eyes and then, as I went on with my task, unwilling to quit, my nose briefly prevented entry. Finally I managed to put my whole head into it, like a cork(软木塞) forced into a bottle. I was able to straighten up with the huge pumpkin resting on my shoulders.
  My excitement was short-lived. The pumpkin was heavy. “I'm going to set it down, now, ” I said, and with Jason helping to support its weight,I bent back over the table to give it somewhere to rest. It was only when I tried to remove my head that I realized getting out was going to be less straightforward than getting in. When I pulled hard, my nose got in the way. I got into a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my head around trying to find the right angle, but it was no use. “I can't get it out!” I shouted, my voice sounding unnaturally loud in the enclosed space.
注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式作答。
  I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. _____
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
  The video was posted the day before Halloween. _______________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
写作指导:
Ⅰ. 梳理原文细节,理清篇章结构。
Ⅱ. 依据首句提示,构思后续情节。
第一段:由续写第一段及续写第二段的提示语可知,该段应该描述我的头被拔出来的整个过程。
第二段:由续写第二段的提示语可知,该段应该描述这段视频被上传到网上走红,我也成了网络红人。
范文佳作:
  I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. My head spun dizzily as if the world swirled. I felt a stab of fear. Jason suggested using a knife to cut the pumpkin open. I waved my hands wildly in protest at the plan. “Then you need to find a way of pulling yourself out, ” My dad said in a calm, cool voice. His voice settled my nerves. I was conscious that my nose was acting as an impediment to my escape. With stretching out my face and biting into the pumpkin, I managed to pull my head out. A ripple of excitement ran through us but the first thing I saw was the camera.
  The video was posted the day before Halloween. My big red nose and my sore chin became netizens' favorite topic. By the end of that day, it had over 1,000 views. People asked Mom to put it on YouTube, and we even got calls from TV breakfast shows. Meanwhile, the video started racking up hundreds of thousands of views. When I went out, I was recognized by people I had never met. The pumpkin also became a minor celebrity. Passers-by and trick-or-treaters would knock and ask for selfies with it. What an unforgettable Halloween!
话题佳句:
1. Amused by his silly mistake, we laughed our head off.
我们被他愚蠢的错误逗乐了,狂笑不已。
2. With crowds of the audience around, so embarrassed was she that she stood there awkwardly, feeling the blood rush to her face.
周围有大批观众,她感到很难堪,尴尬地站在那里,感觉血液涌上了自己的脸。
3. The cookies cooled on the table, filling the kitchen with their sweet smell, making her mouth water.
小甜饼在桌上变凉了,厨房里充满了甜甜的味道,馋得她直流口水。
4. Seeing no other people notice us, I rose and slipped out of the house silently.
见没有其他人注意到我们,我便站起来,悄悄地溜出了房子。
5. He slid to the window of the hut, raised himself on tiptoe, and stole a glance.
他溜到小屋的窗口,踮起脚尖,偷偷看了一眼。
6. I spent the rest of the day in a state of excitement, the extremely good mood I had ever experienced.
那天剩下的时间我都在兴奋中度过,这是我经历过的最愉快的心情。
7. I slowly pulled my picture out of my drawer and held it up. The entire class suddenly exploded with laughter!
我把我的画慢慢地从抽屉里拿出来,举了起来,全班同学突然哄堂大笑!
8. When recognizing who the visitor was, John opened his mouth with his eyes widening.
当认出来访者是谁时,约翰张大了嘴巴,眼睛睁得大大的。
9. She dropped her eyes and stared at her feet, hoping no one would notice how embarrassed she was.
她垂下眼睛,盯着自己的脚,希望没有人会注意到她有多尴尬。
10. She pulled off her shoes and dashed into her bedroom, barefoot and fast.
她脱下鞋子,光着脚飞快地跑到自己卧室中。
11. They laughed loudly, except for me, who could do nothing but force a bitter smile.
他们大笑,当然我没笑,我只能若无其事地挤出一个苦涩的笑。
12. Dad put the egg under an old hen, and every day Chris and I would check to see if it had hatched yet. Twenty-five days seemed like forever.
爸爸把鸡蛋放到老母鸡的身下,每天克里斯和我会查看是否已经孵出了小鸡。二十五天好像总也过不完。