第7讲 续写热门话题 团队合作
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
An A for Mrs B
I was sitting next to Missy in my ninth-grade world history class when Mrs Bartlett announced a new project. In groups, we were to create a newspaper on the culture we were studying.
On a piece of paper, we wrote the names of three friends we wanted in our group. After collecting all the requests, Mrs B informed us that she would take into consideration the names we chose and would let us know the results the next day. I had no doubt I would get the group of my choice. Only a few people behaved normally in the class, and Missy was one of them. I knew we had chosen each other.
The next day, I anxiously waited for the class. After the bell rang, Missy and I stopped talking as Mrs B called for our attention. She started to call out names. When she reached the third group, Missy's name was called. So, I'm in group three, I thought. The second, third and fourth members of the group were called. My name was not included. There had to be some mistake!
Then I heard it. The last group: “Mauro, Juliette, Rachel，Karina.” I could feel the tears well in my eyes. How could I face being in that group—the boy who rarely spoke English, one girl who was always covered by skirts that went down to her ankles, and the other girl who wore weird clothes. Oh, how badly I wanted to be with my friends.
I fought back tears as I walked up to Mrs B. She looked at me and knew what I was there for. I was determined to convince her I should be in the “good” group. “Why ... ？” I started.
She gently placed a hand on my shoulder. “I know what you want，Karina, ” she said, “but your group needs you. I need you to help them get a passing grade on this assignment. Only you can help them.”
I was stunned(说不出话). I was confused. I was amazed. She had seen something in me I hadn't seen.
“Will you help them？” she asked.
I stood straighter. “Yes, ” I replied. I couldn't believe it came out of my mouth, but it did. I had committed.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式作答。
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写作指导：
Ⅰ. 梳理原文细节，理清篇章结构。
Ⅱ. 依据首句提示，构思后续情节。
第一段：由续写第一段及续写第二段的提示语可知，第一段可写我们通力合作，最终任务顺利完成。
第二段：由续写第二段的提示语和材料标题可知，第二段可写我的团队获奖后的心情和表现，以及我的感悟，最后要回扣标题“An A for Mrs B”，把成就归功于Mrs Bartlett。
范文佳作：
I bravely walked to where the others in my group sat. Encouraged by their big smiles, I sat down and assigned each of us different tasks according to our personal interests and advantages. After that, we plunged right into work. Halfway through it, I felt myself enjoying their company. I learned that Mauro had few friends because he was struggling with the English language; Juliette wore a long skirt every day because of the custom; Rachel had a burning desire to be a fashion designer. Finally, teaming up with one another, we completed our assignment successfully.
In the end, Mrs B gave us an A on that assignment. She explained to the whole class that our newspaper was well-laid-out with rich cultural knowledge. It was thrilling to see our painstaking efforts finally paid off. We hugged tightly, our joy and happiness beyond description. At the moment, I suddenly realized that it was Mrs B's insight that brought out the potential in four of her students, a deep sense of gratitude rising inside me. And thanks to her, I've learned to discover others' strengths. She is the one who truly deserves the grade A.
话题佳句：
1. From then on , we began to work as a fine team and finally finished our project on time.
从那时起，我们开始作为一个优秀团队进行工作，最终按时完成了这个项目。
2. Uncontrollably, a wave of guilt washed over me as I heard the bad news.
当我听到这个坏消息时，我感到一阵无法控制的悔恨。
3. At the same time, all of them laughed with excitement, and the laughter echoed in the room.
与此同时，他们都兴奋地笑了起来，笑声回荡在房间里。
4. The miracle is this: the more we share, the more we have.
这就是奇迹：我们与他人分享的越多，我们拥有的就越多。
5. That day, Mike learned the biggest lesson of his life: it is always better to work as a team than to work alone.
那天，Mike学到了人生中最重要的一课：团队合作总比单干好。
6. I trusted my doctors to heal my body, but I depended on the group to heal my spirit and provide me with a unique fellowship.
我相信我的医生能治愈我的身体，但我依靠这个团队来治愈我的精神，并为我提供一种独特的友谊。
7. But for their common efforts, they couldn't have received so much in their project.
没有他们的共同努力，他们就不可能在这个项目上取得如此大的成就。
8. The whole experience reminded me that teamwork was key to our success in the assigned project.
这整个经历提示我，团队合作是我们成功地完成这项任务的关键。
9. As it turns out, there is always a way out of any difficult situation with our joint efforts.
事实证明，只要我们通力合作，就总有办法摆脱任何困境。
10. A year later, with their joint and continuous effort, the beach regained its beauty and Maria and Peter regained their long-awaited pleasure.
一年后，在他们共同的不断努力下，海滩恢复了它的美丽，Maria和Peter获得了等待已久的快乐。
11. What impressed me most is his inspiration, my persistence and our solidarity, on which the fruitful reward depended.
令我印象最深的是他的灵感，我的坚持，以及我们的团结，这些都是成功的关键。
12. Just as the saying goes, “One person can go far, but a group of people can travel farther.”
俗话说，一个人可以走得很远，但一群人可以走得更远。
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第7讲 续写热门话题 团队合作
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
An A for Mrs B
I was sitting next to Missy in my ninth-grade world history class when Mrs Bartlett announced a new project. In groups, we were to create a newspaper on the culture we were studying.
On a piece of paper, we wrote the names of three friends we wanted in our group. After collecting all the requests, Mrs B informed us that she would take into consideration the names we chose and would let us know the results the next day. I had no doubt I would get the group of my choice. Only a few people behaved normally in the class, and Missy was one of them. I knew we had chosen each other.
The next day, I anxiously waited for the class. After the bell rang, Missy and I stopped talking as Mrs B called for our attention. She started to call out names. When she reached the third group, Missy's name was called. So, I'm in group three, I thought. The second, third and fourth members of the group were called. My name was not included. There had to be some mistake!
Then I heard it. The last group: “Mauro, Juliette, Rachel，Karina.” I could feel the tears well in my eyes. How could I face being in that group—the boy who rarely spoke English, one girl who was always covered by skirts that went down to her ankles, and the other girl who wore weird clothes. Oh, how badly I wanted to be with my friends.
I fought back tears as I walked up to Mrs B. She looked at me and knew what I was there for. I was determined to convince her I should be in the “good” group. “Why ... ？” I started.
She gently placed a hand on my shoulder. “I know what you want，Karina, ” she said, “but your group needs you. I need you to help them get a passing grade on this assignment. Only you can help them.”
I was stunned(说不出话). I was confused. I was amazed. She had seen something in me I hadn't seen.
“Will you help them？” she asked.
I stood straighter. “Yes, ” I replied. I couldn't believe it came out of my mouth, but it did. I had committed.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式作答。
I bravely walked to where the others in my group sat. ___________
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
In the end, Mrs B gave us an A on that assignment. _____________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
写作指导：
Ⅰ. 梳理原文细节，理清篇章结构。
Ⅱ. 依据首句提示，构思后续情节。
第一段：由续写第一段及续写第二段的提示语可知，第一段可写我们通力合作，最终任务顺利完成。
第二段：由续写第二段的提示语和材料标题可知，第二段可写我的团队获奖后的心情和表现，以及我的感悟，最后要回扣标题“An A for Mrs B”，把成就归功于Mrs Bartlett。
范文佳作：
I bravely walked to where the others in my group sat. Encouraged by their big smiles, I sat down and assigned each of us different tasks according to our personal interests and advantages. After that, we plunged right into work. Halfway through it, I felt myself enjoying their company. I learned that Mauro had few friends because he was struggling with the English language; Juliette wore a long skirt every day because of the custom; Rachel had a burning desire to be a fashion designer. Finally, teaming up with one another, we completed our assignment successfully.
In the end, Mrs B gave us an A on that assignment. She explained to the whole class that our newspaper was well-laid-out with rich cultural knowledge. It was thrilling to see our painstaking efforts finally paid off. We hugged tightly, our joy and happiness beyond description. At the moment, I suddenly realized that it was Mrs B's insight that brought out the potential in four of her students, a deep sense of gratitude rising inside me. And thanks to her, I've learned to discover others' strengths. She is the one who truly deserves the grade A.
话题佳句：
1. From then on , we began to work as a fine team and finally finished our project on time.
从那时起，我们开始作为一个优秀团队进行工作，最终按时完成了这个项目。
2. Uncontrollably, a wave of guilt washed over me as I heard the bad news.
当我听到这个坏消息时，我感到一阵无法控制的悔恨。
3. At the same time, all of them laughed with excitement, and the laughter echoed in the room.
与此同时，他们都兴奋地笑了起来，笑声回荡在房间里。
4. The miracle is this: the more we share, the more we have.
这就是奇迹：我们与他人分享的越多，我们拥有的就越多。
5. That day, Mike learned the biggest lesson of his life: it is always better to work as a team than to work alone.
那天，Mike学到了人生中最重要的一课：团队合作总比单干好。
6. I trusted my doctors to heal my body, but I depended on the group to heal my spirit and provide me with a unique fellowship.
我相信我的医生能治愈我的身体，但我依靠这个团队来治愈我的精神，并为我提供一种独特的友谊。
7. But for their common efforts, they couldn't have received so much in their project.
没有他们的共同努力，他们就不可能在这个项目上取得如此大的成就。
8. The whole experience reminded me that teamwork was key to our success in the assigned project.
这整个经历提示我，团队合作是我们成功地完成这项任务的关键。
9. As it turns out, there is always a way out of any difficult situation with our joint efforts.
事实证明，只要我们通力合作，就总有办法摆脱任何困境。
10. A year later, with their joint and continuous effort, the beach regained its beauty and Maria and Peter regained their long-awaited pleasure.
一年后，在他们共同的不断努力下，海滩恢复了它的美丽，Maria和Peter获得了等待已久的快乐。
11. What impressed me most is his inspiration, my persistence and our solidarity, on which the fruitful reward depended.
令我印象最深的是他的灵感，我的坚持，以及我们的团结，这些都是成功的关键。
12. Just as the saying goes, “One person can go far, but a group of people can travel farther.”
俗话说，一个人可以走得很远，但一群人可以走得更远。
