第5讲 建议信
你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：
1. 你建议的线路；
2. 你的理由；
3. 你的祝愿。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式作答。
Dear Jim，
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Yours，
Li Hua
[佳作欣赏]
Dear Jim， I'm cheerful to receive your letter and know you're coming to China. Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai，both are highly recommended. Personally，I prefer the tour along the Yangtze River，the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization，from which you can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover，the scenery along the river is amazing. That's why I think the trip along the Yangtze River will be a better choice. Hope you'll have a good time in China. Yours，Li Hua 开头：称呼语第一段：表明写信的原因。第二段：这是建议信的主体部分，主要围绕要点1“你建议的线路”和要点2“你的理由”进行详细而又具体的描述，此处可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。第三段：表达你的祝愿。结尾：署名
1. I am writing to give you some suggestions/offer you some advice.
我正写信给你一些建议。
2. You have asked for my advice about ... and I will try to offer some useful suggestions here.
关于……你向我征求意见，在此我尽力提供一些有用的建议。
3. As far as I am concerned/In my opinion，it would be wise to take the following action.
在我看来，采取以下行动是明智的。
4. I think it would be more beneficial if you could ...
我认为如果你能……会更有益处。
5. I hope you will take my advice into account/consideration seriously.
我希望你会认真考虑我的建议。
假定你是李华，你校交换生Mike准备参加“美丽中国(Amazing China)”短视频大赛，特发邮件向你征询视频创意。请给他回一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 提出建议；
2. 阐明理由；
3. 表达祝愿。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式作答。
＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿
[参考范文]
Dear Mike，
Learning you're going to sign up for the short video competition on the theme of Amazing China, I'm writing to share my ideas with you.
If I were you, I would not hesitate to shoot a short video about China's smart agriculture. Nowadays, you can see modern farmers using cutting-edge technologies and devices for agricultural production, monitoring and management. Thanks to this, the efficiency is greatly improved and the country's grain security is guaranteed. Therefore, I'm convinced that showing the enormous changes in Chinese agriculture will hold much appeal for the viewers.
May your entry stand out in the competition!
Yours,
Li Hua
21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)(共10张PPT)
专题一 应用文写作
第5讲 建议信
你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：
1. 你建议的线路；
2. 你的理由；
3. 你的祝愿。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式作答。
Dear Jim，
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
[佳作欣赏]
Dear Jim，
I'm cheerful to receive your letter and know you're coming to China.
Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai，both are highly recommended. Personally，I prefer the tour along the Yangtze River，the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization，from which you can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover，the scenery along the river is amazing. That's why I think the trip along the Yangtze River will be a better choice.
Hope you'll have a good time in China.
Yours，
Li Hua
开头：称呼语
第一段：表明写信的原因。
第二段：这是建议信的主体部分，主要围绕要点1“你建议的线路”和要点2“你的理由”进行详细而又具体的描述，此处可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
第三段：表达你的祝愿。
结尾：署名
1. I am writing to give you some suggestions/offer you some advice.
我正写信给你一些建议。
2. You have asked for my advice about ... and I will try to offer some useful suggestions here.
关于……你向我征求意见，在此我尽力提供一些有用的建议。
3. As far as I am concerned/In my opinion，it would be wise to take the following action.
在我看来，采取以下行动是明智的。
4. I think it would be more beneficial if you could ...
我认为如果你能……会更有益处。
5. I hope you will take my advice into account/consideration seriously.
我希望你会认真考虑我的建议。
假定你是李华，你校交换生Mike准备参加“美丽中国(Amazing China)”短视频大赛，特发邮件向你征询视频创意。请给他回一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 提出建议；
2. 阐明理由；
3. 表达祝愿。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式作答。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
[参考范文]
Dear Mike，
Learning you're going to sign up for the short video competition on the theme of Amazing China, I'm writing to share my ideas with you.
If I were you, I would not hesitate to shoot a short video about China's smart agriculture. Nowadays, you can see modern farmers using cutting-edge technologies and devices for agricultural production, monitoring and management. Thanks to this, the efficiency is greatly improved and the country's grain security is guaranteed. Therefore, I'm convinced that showing the enormous changes in Chinese agriculture will hold much appeal for the viewers.
May your entry stand out in the competition!
Yours,
Li Hua
