Section Ⅵ Writing
写作项目——Writing a postcard
明信片是简化的书信表达形式，其格式通常包括日期、称呼、正文、结束语(祝福语)、签名及收信人地址等。本单元的写作任务是写一张以旅行为主题的明信片，写作中应交代清楚时间、地点、旅行路线，并重点描述旅途见闻及游览感悟。受文体所限，行文应力求言简意赅，描述要做到详略得当。
由教材学写作
一、学文体架构
由文中所给的Alice写给Emma的明信片可知，此类文章的主体部分应以时间为线索介绍旅行的“所至—所见—所感”，具体内容为：
目前 所至：简要介绍所游览的地方 如文中第一句介绍了自己是在云南旅行。
所见：详略得当介绍自己的游览见闻 如文中第二、三句提到自己游览了玉龙雪山，且看到了巨大的牦牛。
所感：表达自己的感受 文中第一句在介绍旅游所在地时穿插有自己的感受，然后又在第四句表达了心中的感慨。
此后 所至：下一步的行程安排 文中第五句简要提及下一步的目的地是丽江，计划去参观丽江古城。
所见：计划去游览的目标
所感：预期会有的收获 文中第七句表达了对丽江之行的期待：肯定会很有趣。
二、学行文逻辑
1．首尾呼应，情境融洽度高
本文首句 “I'm having a really great time in Yunnan, China！”开门见山地表明自己在中国云南玩得很开心，吸引读者继续读下文。结尾部分“It's going to be a lot of fun！”与首句相呼应，语言情境高度融洽。
2．时空转移，自然过渡
本文以时间和空间的转移为线索进行叙述，思路清晰，行文流畅。第二句中“At the moment”和第五句中“Tomorrow”顺畅衔接，过渡自然，既表达了作者对当下美景的享受，又表明了作者对未来美景的期待。同时，第二句中的“Yulong Snow Mountain”和第五句中的“the famous old town of Lijiang”实现了空间的切换，描绘了不同地方的美景。
三、学高级表达
本文第一句中的“really”一词的运用强调了作者在这次旅程中玩得很开心。第三句中的“whole, even, huge”凸显了作者一整天都沉浸在对美丽景色的欣赏中，并且因为看到了牦牛很是兴奋。第四句中的 “so beautiful” 再次感叹了云南的风景之美。
四、学语言风格
本文以简单句为主，辅以少量的并列句，体现了此类文体言简意赅的特色。文中描述多采用生活化的口吻，语言生动活泼，情感真挚浓郁。
写作项目指导
Write a postcard to introduce your travel
——写一张明信片来介绍你的旅途见闻
第一步：构思谋篇
Part 1 Where are you？
Part 2 What have you done so far And what are you going to do next？
Part 3 How do you feel？
第二步：要点表达
(一)介绍所至
1．目前游览了哪些地方？
①At the moment, I'm staying at Sanya and ____________________________________！
现在我在三亚，我玩得非常开心！
②Yesterday we __________________________ and today we visited the Palace Museum.
昨天我们去了长城，今天我们参观了故宫。
③On the first day, we visited the West Lake and ____________________________.
第一天我们游览了西湖，在那儿待了一整天。
④So far ____________________________________________， including the Daming Palace National Heritage Park, Xi'an City Wall, the Great Wild Goose Pagoda and so on.
到目前为止，我去过了许多著名的旅游景点，包括大明宫国家遗址公园、西安城墙、大雁塔等等。
2．下一步计划去什么地方？
①Our next destination is Jiuzhaigou, which we have been ____________ for a long time.
我们的下一个目的地是九寨沟，这是我们期待已久的地方。
②Tomorrow __________________________ in the Summer Palace and have a taste of the famous Beijing roast duck.
明天我们要去颐和园散步，品尝一下著名的北京烤鸭。
③After reaching your destination, we will ______________ this amazing ancient city.
到达目的地之后，我们将有一天的时间来探索这座令人叹为观止的古城。
(二)描述所见
旅途中见到了什么？遇到了什么？
①We admired its amazing traditional architecture and ______________________________ such as Dongpo Pork.
我们欣赏到令人赞叹的传统建筑，并享用了东坡肉等当地美食。
②We saw crowds of visitors — __________________________ and others were diving in the deeper part of the sea.
我们看到了成群结队的游客——有些人在冲浪，有些人在更深的海域潜水。
③We ________________ from a local university. They __________________________ and told us some interesting facts about the museum.
我们遇到了一些来自当地一所大学的年轻人。他们帮我们拍了很多照片，并向我们讲述了一些关于这座博物馆的有趣的事实。
④I ____________________________， going along the wooden pathways to enjoy the changing view from various angles of the Buddha, from its foot to its head.
我选择了步行路线，沿着木板小路一路向上，欣赏到乐山大佛从脚部到头部的各个角度不同的景色。
(三)抒发所感
这趟旅程带给了你哪些感受？
①____________________________________ and the scenery is beautiful.
这里气候宜人，景色优美。
②I've heard that it is an amazing sight, and __________________.
我听说这是一个令人惊叹的景点，我迫不及待想去了。
③It is definitely an exciting trip. If I have a chance, I will be more than happy ____________________________.
这绝对是一次激动人心的旅行。如果我有机会，我会很乐意再次游览这个地方。
[针对练笔]
假定你是李华，现在正在杭州游览西湖，晚上打算去品尝当地的特色小吃。请你给笔友Eric写一张明信片，介绍一下自己的旅行。
写作素材储备
1．旅程安排
(1)We're taking the train, leaving the day before the October holiday begins. We're arriving at 9：30 a．m. and will start sightseeing right away, so I hope we sleep well on the train!
我们打算坐火车，在十一假期开始的前一天出发。上午9：30到达之后，我们马上就开始观光，但愿我们能在火车上睡个好觉！
(2)We're also planning to visit several other places in Xi'an. My dad and I are both looking forward to going to the Shaanxi History Museum, because my dad loves history and I have heard that this museum is known as a “Chinese treasure house”！ We’re also going to visit the Xi’an City Wall and a few other famous sights.
我们还计划游览西安的其他景点。爸爸和我都期待着参观陕西历史博物馆，因为我爸爸热爱历史，而且我听说这家博物馆被誉为“中国宝库”！我们还打算游览西安古城墙和其他一些著名景点。
2．景点介绍
Jinli is a street lying in Chengdu, Sichuan. The street has a long history and is rich in traditional Chinese culture. The street is about 550 meters long. I saw all kinds of ancient style buildings along the well known street, and enjoyed many local snacks, which made my mouth water.
锦里是四川成都的一条街道。这条街历史悠久，蕴含着丰富的中国传统文化。街长大约有550米。我在这条著名的街道上看到了各种各样的古建筑，并享用了许多当地小吃，每种都让我垂涎三尺。
3．旅行感受
I'm having a really great time in Harbin. I've admired the ice sculpture exhibition and visited the world of lanterns wandering about the main street. The scene was one of breathtaking beauty.
我在哈尔滨玩得很开心。我欣赏了冰雕展，徜徉在主街上的灯笼世界之中。美妙的景色令人叹为观止。
Section Ⅵ
写作项目指导
(一)
1．①I am having a great time ②went to the Great Wall
③spent the whole day there
④I have been to many famous tourist spots
2．①expecting to visit ②we are going to take a walk
③have a day to explore
(二)
①enjoyed the excellent local food ②some were surfing
③met some young people; helped us take a lot of pictures
④chose the walking route
(三)
①The weather here is very pleasant ②I can't wait to go
③to visit the place again
[针对练笔]
Hi Eric，
Now, I'm visiting Hangzhou. It is a beautiful city, attracting lots of visitors from home and abroad. I've visited the West Lake, and learned more about its folklores and traditional cultures. Its beautiful scenery is really a feast for the eyes and its long history has impressed me so much. Tonight I plan to enjoy the special snacks here. Visitors all think highly of them. I can't wait!
Bye for now.
Li Hua(共58张PPT)
Section Ⅵ Writing
目 录
课时跟踪检测
写作项目——Writing a postcard
明信片是简化的书信表达形式，其格式通常包括日期、称呼、正文、结束语(祝福语)、签名及收信人地址等。本单元的写作任务是写一张以旅行为主题的明信片，写作中应交代清楚时间、地点、旅行路线，并重点描述旅途见闻及游览感悟。受文体所限，行文应力求言简意赅，描述要做到详略得当。
由教材学写作
一、学文体架构
由文中所给的Alice写给Emma的明信片可知，此类文章的主体部分应以时间为线索介绍旅行的“所至—所见—所感”，具体内容为：
目前 所至：简要介绍所游览的地方 如文中第一句介绍了自己是在云南旅行。
所见：详略得当介绍自己的游览见闻 如文中第二、三句提到自己游览了玉龙雪山，
且看到了巨大的牦牛。
目前 所感：表达自己的感受 文中第一句在介绍旅游所在地时穿插有自己的感受，然后又在第四句表达了心中的感慨。
此后 所至：下一步的行程安排 文中第五句简要提及下一步的目的地是丽江，计划去参观丽江古城。
所见：计划去游览的目标
所感：预期会有的收获 文中第七句表达了对丽江之行的期待：肯定会很有趣。
续
表
二、学行文逻辑
1．首尾呼应，情境融洽度高
本文首句 “I'm having a really great time in Yunnan, China！”开门见山地表明自己在中国云南玩得很开心，吸引读者继续读下文。结尾部分“It's going to be a lot of fun！”与首句相呼应，语言情境高度融洽。
2．时空转移，自然过渡
本文以时间和空间的转移为线索进行叙述，思路清晰，行文流畅。第二句中“At the moment”和第五句中“Tomorrow”顺畅衔接，过渡自然，既表达了作者对当下美景的享受，又表明了作者对未来美景的期待。同时，第二句中的“Yulong Snow Mountain”和第五句中的“the famous old town of Lijiang”实现了空间的切换，描绘了不同地方的美景。
三、学高级表达
本文第一句中的“really”一词的运用强调了作者在这次旅程中玩得很开心。第三句中的“whole, even, huge”凸显了作者一整天都沉浸在对美丽景色的欣赏中，并且因为看到了牦牛很是兴奋。第四句中的 “so beautiful” 再次感叹了云南的风景之美。
四、学语言风格
本文以简单句为主，辅以少量的并列句，体现了此类文体言简意赅的特色。文中描述多采用生活化的口吻，语言生动活泼，情感真挚浓郁。
写作项目指导
Write a postcard to introduce your travel
——写一张明信片来介绍你的旅途见闻
第一步：构思谋篇
Part 1 Where are you？
Part 2 What have you done so far And what are you going to do next？
Part 3 How do you feel？
第二步：要点表达
(一)介绍所至
1．目前游览了哪些地方？
①At the moment, I'm staying at Sanya and !
现在我在三亚，我玩得非常开心！
I am having a great time
②Yesterday we and today we visited the Palace Museum.
昨天我们去了长城，今天我们参观了故宫。
③On the first day, we visited the West Lake and_______________
.
第一天我们游览了西湖，在那儿待了一整天。
went to the Great Wall
spent the whole
day there
④So far , including the Daming Palace National Heritage Park, Xi'an City Wall, the Great Wild Goose Pagoda and so on.
到目前为止，我去过了许多著名的旅游景点，包括大明宫国家遗址公园、西安城墙、大雁塔等等。
I have been to many famous tourist spots
2．下一步计划去什么地方？
①Our next destination is Jiuzhaigou, which we have been ________________for a long time.
我们的下一个目的地是九寨沟，这是我们期待已久的地方。
②Tomorrow in the Summer Palace and have a taste of the famous Beijing roast duck.
明天我们要去颐和园散步，品尝一下著名的北京烤鸭。
expecting to visit
we are going to take a walk
③After reaching your destination, we will ____________________
this amazing ancient city.
到达目的地之后，我们将有一天的时间来探索这座令人叹为观止的古城。
have a day to explore
(二)描述所见
旅途中见到了什么？遇到了什么？
①We admired its amazing traditional architecture and _________
such as Dongpo Pork.
我们欣赏到令人赞叹的传统建筑，并享用了东坡肉等当地美食。
enjoyed
the excellent local food
②We saw crowds of visitors — and others were diving in the deeper part of the sea.
我们看到了成群结队的游客——有些人在冲浪，有些人在更深的海域潜水。
some were surfing
③We from a local university. They
___________________________and told us some interesting facts about the museum.
我们遇到了一些来自当地一所大学的年轻人。他们帮我们拍了很多照片，并向我们讲述了一些关于这座博物馆的有趣的事实。
met some young people
helped us take a lot of pictures
④I , going along the wooden pathways to enjoy the changing view from various angles of the Buddha, from its foot to its head.
我选择了步行路线，沿着木板小路一路向上，欣赏到乐山大佛从脚部到头部的各个角度不同的景色。
chose the walking route
(三)抒发所感
这趟旅程带给了你哪些感受？
① and the scenery is beautiful.
这里气候宜人，景色优美。
②I've heard that it is an amazing sight, and .
我听说这是一个令人惊叹的景点，我迫不及待想去了。
The weather here is very pleasant
I can't wait to go
③It is definitely an exciting trip. If I have a chance, I will be more than happy .
这绝对是一次激动人心的旅行。如果我有机会，我会很乐意再次游览这个地方。
to visit the place again
[针对练笔]
假定你是李华，现在正在杭州游览西湖，晚上打算去品尝当地的特色小吃。请你给笔友Eric写一张明信片，介绍一下自己的旅行。
参考范文：
Hi Eric，
Now, I'm visiting Hangzhou. It is a beautiful city, attracting lots of visitors from home and abroad. I've visited the West Lake, and learned more about its folklores and traditional cultures. Its beautiful scenery is really a feast for the eyes and its long history has impressed me so much. Tonight I plan to enjoy the special snacks here. Visitors all think highly of them. I can't wait!
Bye for now.
Li Hua
写作素材储备
1．旅程安排
(1)We're taking the train, leaving the day before the October holiday begins. We're arriving at 9：30 a．m. and will start sightseeing right away, so I hope we sleep well on the train!
我们打算坐火车，在十一假期开始的前一天出发。上午9：30到达之后，我们马上就开始观光，但愿我们能在火车上睡个好觉！
(2)We're also planning to visit several other places in Xi'an. My dad and I are both looking forward to going to the Shaanxi History Museum, because my dad loves history and I have heard that this museum is known as a “Chinese treasure house”！ We’re also going to visit the Xi’an City Wall and a few other famous sights.
我们还计划游览西安的其他景点。爸爸和我都期待着参观陕西历史博物馆，因为我爸爸热爱历史，而且我听说这家博物馆被誉为“中国宝库”！我们还打算游览西安古城墙和其他一些著名景点。
2．景点介绍
Jinli is a street lying in Chengdu, Sichuan. The street has a long history and is rich in traditional Chinese culture. The street is about 550 meters long. I saw all kinds of ancient-style buildings along the well-known street, and enjoyed many local snacks, which made my mouth water.
锦里是四川成都的一条街道。这条街历史悠久，蕴含着丰富的中国传统文化。街长大约有550米。我在这条著名的街道上看到了各种各样的古建筑，并享用了许多当地小吃，每种都让我垂涎三尺。
3．旅行感受
I'm having a really great time in Harbin. I've admired the ice sculpture exhibition and visited the world of lanterns wandering about the main street. The scene was one of breathtaking beauty.
我在哈尔滨玩得很开心。我欣赏了冰雕展，徜徉在主街上的灯笼世界之中。美妙的景色令人叹为观止。
课时跟踪检测
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.靓表达升级
1．As we were attracted by its natural beauty, we couldn't help taking lots of pictures, cherishing the wonderful memories close to nature and history.
→
(用分词短语作状语升级)
Attracted by its natural beauty, we couldn't help taking lots of pictures, cherishing the wonderful memories close to nature and history.
2．The splendid scenery of sunset on the beach will definitely impress you deeply.
→
The splendid scenery of sunset on the beach will definitely leave a deep impression on you.
(用impression替换impress)
3．Travelling broadens my horizons and opens my eyes to the world.
→
(用not only ... but also ...进行升级)
4．Guilin is a beautiful city and we all want to pay a visit to it.
→__________________________________________________________
(用such ... that升级)
Travelling not only broadens my horizons but also opens my eyes to the world.
Guilin is such a beautiful city that we all want to pay a visit to it.
Ⅱ.微语境写作
1．Knowing that you'll visit China in the coming winter holiday, I'm writing to (给你一些旅行建议)．
2．I (进行七天之旅) to Sanya last winter vacation, which was (一次难忘的经历)．
offer you some suggestions on your trip
went on a seven-day trip
an unforgettable experience
3．During the first week I'll take you to Beijing to show you around some places of interest, (从而帮助你更了解) Chinese culture.
4．I sincerely hope that you will ____________________________
(有机会放松自己) and have a good time in China.
thus helping you know more about
have a chance to relax yourself
Ⅲ.应用文写作
假定你是李华，你和父母正在英国伦敦进行为期一周的旅游。你的新西兰笔友Eric想得知你的旅途见闻。请你写一张明信片寄给他，内容包括：
1．概述旅游的景点；
2．分享照片。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考范文：
Dear Eric，
I am having a one-week trip in London with my parents now. We're having a great time during the trip. We have visited the British Museum on the first day，which has a great number of amazing collections. We also went to the Buckingham Palace，which every traveller can't miss when visiting London. Tomorrow we plan to go to
Hyde Park and have a picnic there. So many famous attractions in London! I sent you an email last night with some photos of my trip that I'd like to share with you.I hope you have received it.
Yours，
Li Hua
Ⅳ.读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语补写一段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The bus ran along the winding mountain road. Trying not to look at the road, I stared out the large window at the tropical greenery (绿色植物) that covered the mountain.
Next to me, my mother was as absorbed by the view as I was.She had won the trip to Costa Rica as an award for her high performance at her job.She had decided to take me with her so that we could have some “girl time” together in a new place，and I couldn't be happier to be in such a beautiful place.
Our bus came to a small parking lot surrounded by forest. Our guide had told the tour group that it was a cloud forest we were visiting. People started to rise from their seats and moved toward the door. My mom and I picked up our bags and started down the narrow passage, excited to finally get to go on a hike after the hour-long bus ride.
When the entire group had gathered outside，the guide smiled at us. “This is an active volcano we are standing on top of now，” he said. “You have the opportunity to explore without a guide. There are two paths you can follow when we get into the woods: the first is a shorter loop (环线) and will take you back here in forty minutes or so；the second will take you a longer way, and you should be back here in an hour and twenty minutes.The longer loop is very steep (陡峭的), but
certainly doable. All of you should be back here in two hours, which should give you plenty of time to admire the beautiful wildlife of Costa Rica！Go ahead and get started！”
Mom looked at me uncertainly. “I think you would like to do the longer loop，” she said after a moment. I nodded. We only had five days here, and I wanted to see as much as I could during that time. Mom finally agreed.
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．要求逻辑通顺，情节合理，重点描写这趟旅程的收获。
We set out on the trail that led further into the dark cloud forest.
参考范文：
We set out on the trail that led further into the dark cloud forest. It was extremely beautiful. After about thirty minutes, the road got steeper and steeper. Soon, the path was so uphill that tourists had to hold onto the railing for balance. “Maybe we need to take a break，” I said, breathing heavily. My mom agreed, pulling over to the side of the steep mountain road. After a lot of stops and starts，we reached a
large open space full of tourists that looked out over the volcano's crater. We took a lot of beautiful photos there. “The long trail wasn't so bad, eh？” the guide asked with a cheerful smile. “You just have to know that keep going when it gets a little tough.”
[阅读拓展训练]
Xiamen is a coastal city. It is located on the southeast coast of China and is very beautiful. It is known as “the City of International Garden”. It is a famous hometown of overseas Chinese, one of China's earliest four main special economic zones (地区) and one of “China's Top Ten Tourist Cities”．
Located on the west coast Taiwan Straits and facing Kinmen Island, Xiamen has unique natural scenery and achieves a good fame of “city on the sea and sea in the city”. With seawater around the city, it has large sand beach and warm sunshine. Here, islands, rocks, temples, flowers and trees form the beautiful natural views. What's more, a number of cultural views like Gulangyu, the peaceful South Putuo Temple add color to the beauty of Xiamen. Besides, the city
includes customs of Fujian, Taiwan and the hometown of overseas Chinese. What's more, influenced by the culture of other countries, exotic buildings are also integrated (合并) into the buildings of Xiamen, forming the travel characteristics of Xiamen.
Facing Xiamen across the sea, Gulangyu has beautiful scenery with birds singing and all kinds of flowers giving off smell. It also gathers and keeps buildings of different styles at home and abroad, so it is also called a place of “International Architecture Exhibition”. This island is also the rich land for music that cultivates numbers of music talents and has a large number of pianos, making it known as “The Piano Island” and “The Hometown of Music”. Besides, the road around the island lets visitors enjoy the beauty of blue sea and clear sky as well as appreciate the natural scenery on this island.
语篇解读：本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍了厦门的自然风光和建筑等旅游特色。
1．What can we infer about Xiamen from Paragraph 1
A．It is a newly built city.
B．It lies on the northeast coast of China.
C．It gains popularity among tourists.
D．It is famous for the seawater there.
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解析：推理判断题。根据第一段中“It is a famous hometown ... Top Ten Tourist Cities.”可知， 厦门是“中国十大旅游城市”之一。由此推知，它很受游客欢迎。
2．What makes Xiamen become “city on the sea and sea in the city”？
A．Its special location.
B．Its rich culture.
C．Its colorful customs.
D．Its developed transportation.
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解析：细节理解题。根据第二段首句“Located on the west coast ... sea in the city.”可知，厦门独特的地理位置使其有“城在海上，海在城中”的美誉。
3．What does the underlined word “exotic” probably mean in Paragraph 2
A．Ancient. B．Foreign.
C．Expensive. D．Surprising.
解析：词义猜测题。根据画线词前“influenced by the culture of other countries”可知，厦门受其他国家文化的影响，所以其建筑也融入了外国的特色。由此可知，画线词exotic意为“外国的”。
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4．What is the last paragraph mainly about
A．The local people of Gulangyu.
B．The early history of Gulangyu.
C．The general introduction of Gulangyu.
D．The different building styles of Gulangyu.
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解析：段落大意题。根据最后一段内容，结合首句“Facing Xiamen across the sea ... giving off smell.”可知，最后一段主要介绍了鼓浪屿的概况。UNIT 5 课时检测(六) Writing
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.靓表达升级
1．As we were attracted by its natural beauty, we couldn't help taking lots of pictures, cherishing the wonderful memories close to nature and history.
→________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
____________________(用分词短语作状语升级)
2．The splendid scenery of sunset on the beach will definitely impress you deeply.
→________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________(用impression替换impress)
3．Travelling broadens my horizons and opens my eyes to the world.
→________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________(用not only ...but also ...进行升级)
4．Guilin is a beautiful city and we all want to pay a visit to it.
→________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________(用such ...that升级)
Ⅱ.微语境写作
1．Knowing that you'll visit China in the coming winter holiday, I'm writing to ________________________________________________________ (给你一些旅行建议)．
2．I ________________________ (进行七天之旅) to Sanya last winter vacation, which was ________________________________ (一次难忘的经历)．
3．During the first week I'll take you to Beijing to show you around some places of interest, ______________________________________ (从而帮助你更了解) Chinese culture.
4．I sincerely hope that you will ____________________________________ (有机会放松自己) and have a good time in China.
Ⅲ.应用文写作
假定你是李华，你和父母正在英国伦敦进行为期一周的旅游。你的新西兰笔友Eric想得知你的旅途见闻。请你写一张明信片寄给他，内容包括：
1．概述旅游的景点；
2．分享照片。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Ⅳ.读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语补写一段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The bus ran along the winding mountain road.Trying not to look at the road, I stared out the large window at the tropical greenery (绿色植物) that covered the mountain.
Next to me, my mother was as absorbed by the view as I was.She had won the trip to Costa Rica as an award for her high performance at her job.She had decided to take me with her so that we could have some “girl time” together in a new place，and I couldn't be happier to be in such a beautiful place.
Our bus came to a small parking lot surrounded by forest.Our guide had told the tour group that it was a cloud forest we were visiting.People started to rise from their seats and moved toward the door.My mom and I picked up our bags and started down the narrow passage, excited to finally get to go on a hike after the hour long bus ride.
When the entire group had gathered outside，the guide smiled at us.“This is an active volcano we are standing on top of now，” he said.“You have the opportunity to explore without a guide.There are two paths you can follow when we get into the woods: the first is a shorter loop (环线) and will take you back here in forty minutes or so；the second will take you a longer way, and you should be back here in an hour and twenty minutes.The longer loop is very steep (陡峭的), but certainly doable.All of you should be back here in two hours, which should give you plenty of time to admire the beautiful wildlife of Costa Rica！Go ahead and get started！”
Mom looked at me uncertainly.“I think you would like to do the longer loop，” she said after a moment.I nodded.We only had five days here, and I wanted to see as much as I could during that time.Mom finally agreed.
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．要求逻辑通顺，情节合理，重点描写这趟旅程的收获。
We set out on the trail that led further into the dark cloud forest.
[阅读拓展训练]
Xiamen is a coastal city.It is located on the southeast coast of China and is very beautiful.It is known as “the City of International Garden”．It is a famous hometown of overseas Chinese, one of China's earliest four main special economic zones (地区) and one of “China's Top Ten Tourist Cities”．
Located on the west coast Taiwan Straits and facing Kinmen Island, Xiamen has unique natural scenery and achieves a good fame of “city on the sea and sea in the city”．With seawater around the city, it has large sand beach and warm sunshine.Here, islands, rocks, temples, flowers and trees form the beautiful natural views.What's more, a number of cultural views like Gulangyu, the peaceful South Putuo Temple add color to the beauty of Xiamen.Besides, the city includes customs of Fujian, Taiwan and the hometown of overseas Chinese.What's more, influenced by the culture of other countries, exotic buildings are also integrated (合并) into the buildings of Xiamen, forming the travel characteristics of Xiamen.
Facing Xiamen across the sea, Gulangyu has beautiful scenery with birds singing and all kinds of flowers giving off smell.It also gathers and keeps buildings of different styles at home and abroad, so it is also called a place of “International Architecture Exhibition”．This island is also the rich land for music that cultivates numbers of music talents and has a large number of pianos, making it known as “The Piano Island” and “The Hometown of Music”．Besides, the road around the island lets visitors enjoy the beauty of blue sea and clear sky as well as appreciate the natural scenery on this island.
1．What can we infer about Xiamen from Paragraph 1
A．It is a newly built city.
B．It lies on the northeast coast of China.
C．It gains popularity among tourists.
D．It is famous for the seawater there.
2．What makes Xiamen become “city on the sea and sea in the city”？
A．Its special location.
B．Its rich culture.
C．Its colorful customs.
D．Its developed transportation.
3．What does the underlined word “exotic” probably mean in Paragraph 2
A．Ancient. B．Foreign.
C．Expensive. D．Surprising.
4．What is the last paragraph mainly about
A．The local people of Gulangyu.
B．The early history of Gulangyu.
C．The general introduction of Gulangyu.
D．The different building styles of Gulangyu.
UNIT 5 课时检测(六)
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.靓表达升级
1.Attracted by its natural beauty, we couldn’t help taking lots of pictures, cherishing the wonderful memories close to nature and history.
2.The splendid scenery of sunset on the beach will definitely leave a deep impression on you.
3.Travelling not only broadens my horizons but also opens my eyes to the world.
4.Guilin is such a beautiful city that we all want to pay a visit to it.
Ⅱ.微语境写作
1.offer you some suggestions on your trip
2.went on a seven day trip; an unforgettable experience
3.thus helping you know more about
4.have a chance to relax yourself
Ⅲ.应用文写作(参考范文)
Dear Eric,
I am having a one week trip in London with my parents now. We’re having a great time during the trip. We have visited the British Museum on the first day,which has a great number of amazing collections. We also went to the Buckingham Palace,which every traveller can’t miss when visiting London. Tomorrow we plan to go to Hyde Park and have a picnic there. So many famous attractions in London! I sent you an email last night with some photos of my trip that I’d like to share with you.I hope you have received it.
Yours,
Li Hua
Ⅳ.读后续写(参考范文)
We set out on the trail that led further into the dark cloud forest. It was extremely beautiful. After about thirty minutes, the road got steeper and steeper. Soon, the path was so uphill that tourists had to hold onto the railing for balance. “Maybe we need to take a break,” I said, breathing heavily. My mom agreed, pulling over to the side of the steep mountain road. After a lot of stops and starts,we reached a large open space full of tourists that looked out over the volcano’s crater. We took a lot of beautiful photos there. “The long trail wasn’t so bad, eh ” the guide asked with a cheerful smile. “You just have to know that keep going when it gets a little tough.”
[阅读拓展训练]
语篇解读:本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍了厦门的自然风光和建筑等旅游特色。
1.选C 推理判断题。根据第一段中“It is a famous hometown ... Top Ten Tourist Cities.”可知, 厦门是“中国十大旅游城市”之一。由此推知,它很受游客欢迎。
2.选A 细节理解题。根据第二段首句“Located on the west coast ... sea in the city.”可知,厦门独特的地理位置使其有“城在海上,海在城中”的美誉。
3.选B 词义猜测题。根据画线词前“influenced by the culture of other countries”可知,厦门受其他国家文化的影响,所以其建筑也融入了外国的特色。由此可知,画线词exotic意为“外国的”。
4.选C 段落大意题。根据最后一段内容,结合首句“Facing Xiamen across the sea ... giving off smell.”可知,最后一段主要介绍了鼓浪屿的概况。
