人教选择性必修三Unit 1 Part 4 Writing写作点拔学案
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Part 4 Writing
关于艺术展览的写作
写作题目
假定你是李华,想邀请好友Jack一起参加中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展。请给他写封信,内容包括:
1.展览时间、地点;
2.介绍中国剪纸。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
Dear Jack,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
思路点拨
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1. n.展览
2. adj.艺术的
3. adj.有很大影响力的
4. 喜欢
5. 尤其;特别
6. 值得
答案 1.exhibition 2.artistic 3.influential
4.be fond of 5.in particular 6.be worthy of
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第一段:说明写信目的以及展览的时间和地点
(1)Knowing that you (喜欢中国传统艺术), I am writing to invite you to attend a Chinese paper-cutting art exhibition.
(2)It (将在艺术画廊举行) from 8:00 am to 5:00 pm next Sunday in our city center.
第二段:介绍中国剪纸
(3)Paper-cutting is a traditional (艺术形式) in China.
(4)It has a long history and (有很大的艺术价值).
(5)People often (美化他们的家) with the paper-cutting, (尤其) during festivals and weddings.
(6)In addition, there are (一些有影响力的艺术家) who will perform how to make the paper-cutting on the spot.
第三段:表达期望
(7)All in all, it is really (值得你的关注).
答案 (1)are fond of traditional Chinese art (2)will be held in the art gallery (3)art form
(4)is of much artistic value (5)beautify their homes;in particular (6)some influential artists (7)worthy of your attention
2.句式升级
(8)用动词不定式作后置定语合并句(1)和句(2)
(9)把句(3)和句(4)合并为含有定语从句的主从复合句
答案 (8)Knowing that you are fond of traditional Chinese art, I am writing to invite you to attend a Chinese paper-cutting art exhibition to be held in the art gallery from 8:00 am to 5:00 pm next Sunday in our city center. (9)Paper-cutting is a traditional art form in China, which has a long history and is of much artistic value.
连句成篇
Dear Jack,
Knowing that you are fond of traditional Chinese art, I am writing to invite you to attend a Chinese paper-cutting art exhibition to be held in the art gallery from 8:00 am to 5:00 pm next Sunday in our city center.
Paper-cutting is a traditional art form in China, which has a long history and is of much artistic value. People often beautify their homes with the paper-cutting, in particular during festivals and weddings. In addition, there are some influential artists who will perform how to make the paper-cutting on the spot.
All in all, it is really worthy of your attention. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
写作积累
关于艺术展览的写作
一、说明要举办的相关展览
1.An international high school student photography show is going to be held in our school.一场国际高中生摄影展将在我校举行。
2.As scheduled, the activity will be held in the lecture hall at 9:00 a.m. next Wednesday.按照计划,活动将于下周三上午9:00在报告厅举行。
3.Our school is going to hold an art exhibition, which will start from June 15th and last for three weeks.我们学校要举办一场艺术展览,从6月15日开始,持续三周。
二、表示邀请或者告知
1.As I know, you're always wanting to do something for environmental protection.据我所知,你一直想为环境保护做些事情。
2.On behalf of the student union, I feel greatly honored to invite you to participate in the activity.我很荣幸能代表学生会邀请你参加这次活动。
3.Knowing that you are a classical music lover, I'd like to invite you to join me for a concert.知道你是一个古典音乐爱好者,我想邀请你和我一起听音乐会。
三、说明相关展览的目的、内容、参与人员、意义等
1.Any student who is interested is welcome to participate.欢迎有兴趣的同学参加。
2.The theme of the show is how to protect the environment.这个展览的主题是如何保护环境。
3.There are all kinds of activities which can satisfy different students.有各种各样的活动,可以满足不同的学生。
四、表达期望
1.If you can come, I'm sure you'll have an unforgettable experience.如果你能来,我相信你会有一次难忘的经历。
2.If you are available at that time, I really hope that you will come.如果你到时候有空的话,我真的希望你能来。
3.Please let me know in advance if you can come and I'm looking forward to your reply.如果你能来,请提前告诉我,我期待着你的答复。
实战演练
昨天你参观了学校举办的学生国画作品展。请给校英文报写一篇宣传稿,内容包括:
1.展览时间、地点;
2.观展感受;
3.推荐观展。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
读后续写
写作题目
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Mother's Gift
I grew up in a small town where the primary school was a ten-minute walk from my house. When the noon bell rang, I would race breathlessly home. My mother would be standing at the top of the stairs, smiling down at me.
One lunchtime when I was in the third grade would always stay with me. I had been picked to be the princess in the school play, and for weeks my mother had rehearsed my lines so hard with me. But no matter how easily I acted at home, as soon as I stepped onstage, every word disappeared from my head. Finally, my teacher took me aside. She explained that she had written a narrator's(旁白员) part for the play, and asked me to change roles. Her words, kindly expressed, still hurt me, especially when I saw my part go to another girl.
I didn't tell my mother what had happened when I went home for lunch that day. But she sensed my pain. Instead of suggesting we practise my lines, she asked if I wanted to walk in the yard.
It was a lovely spring day and the rose vine was turning green. Under the huge trees, we could see yellow dandelions(蒲公英) on the grass in clusters, as if a painter had touched our landscape with a bit of gold. I watched my mother casually bend down by one dandelion. “I think I'm going to dig up all these weeds,” she said, pulling it up by the roots. “From now on, we'll have only roses in this garden.”
“But I like dandelions,” I protested. “All flowers are beautiful—even dandelions.”
My mother looked at me seriously. “Yes, every flower gives pleasure in its own way, doesn't it ” she asked thoughtfully. I nodded, pleased that I had won her over. “And that is true of people too,” she added. “Not everyone can be a princess, but there is no shame in that.” Knowing that she had guessed my pain, I started to cry as I told her what had happened. She listened and smiled reassuringly(安慰地).
注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
“But you will be a beautiful narrator,”she said,
After the play,I took home the dandelion.
文本分析
初识文本
重点词汇
1.sense v.觉察到
2.casually adv.随意地,漫不经心地
3.dig up挖出
4.protest v.反对;坚决地表示
5.shame n.羞耻;丢脸
障碍词汇
1.rehearse v.背诵;排演,排练
2.vine n.藤蔓;藤
3.cluster n.簇;团
4.win over说服,赢得……的支持
长难句
原句 Under the huge trees, we could see yellow dandelions on the grass in clusters, as if a painter had touched our landscape with a bit of gold.
分析 该句是一个主从复合句。as if引导方式状语从句,从句中使用了虚拟语气。
译文 在大树下,我们可以看到草地上成簇的黄色的蒲公英,仿佛是一位画家为我们的风景增添了一点金色。
故事要素
深研文本
预测情节发展
第一段:她说:“但你会成为一名出色的旁白员。”→妈妈又说了一些鼓励“我”的话→“我”接受了旁白员的角色,努力排练→“我”在演出前看到了妈妈送的一朵蒲公英,战胜了紧张→演出成功
第二段:校园剧结束后,“我”把蒲公英带回了家→妈妈把这朵蒲公英保存起来留作纪念→带给“我”的感触
遣词造句
1.用单词或短语填空
(1) a shining smile 带着灿烂的笑容
(2)be of vital 至关重要的
(3)go on 上台
(4)keep... 陪伴……
(5) 结果
(6) 注视
(7) v.记起,回忆起
(8) adj.宝贵的
答案 (1)wear (2)significance/importance
(3)stage (4)company (5)turn out
(6)gaze at (7)recall (8)precious
2.完成句子
(9)“But you will be a beautiful narrator,” she said, (鼓励) and (安慰) me as she always did.
(10)“The narrator's part is equally important,” my mother added, (带着灿烂的笑容) on her soft face.
(11)Time had (飞逝) and it reached the performance day.
(12)At that very moment, I found a dandelion (塞进我的口袋里) by my mother to
(陪伴我).
(13)Mom carefully (注视着) the dandelion, gently (把它放进) a dictionary and smiled as usual.
(14)Though decades have passed, I constantly (记起宝贵的午餐时光) we were together.
(15)I (感激) the smiles on my mother's face and her kindness.
答案 (9)encouraging;comforting
(10)wearing a shining smile (11)flown by (12)put into my pocket;keep me company (13)gazed at;placed it into (14)recall the precious lunchtime (15)was grateful for
3.句式升级
(16)用强调句型强调时间状语改写句(12)
(17)用形容词作状语合并句(14)和句(15)
答案 (16)It was at that very moment that I found a dandelion put into my pocket by my mother to keep me company. (17)Though decades have passed, I constantly recall the precious lunchtime we were together, grateful for the smiles on my mother's face and her kindness.
连句成篇
“But you will be a beautiful narrator,”she said,encouraging and comforting me as she always did. “The narrator's part is equally important,” my mother added, wearing a shining smile on her soft face. I began to accept that the narrator was of vital significance and rehearsed even harder. Time had flown by and it reached the performance day. Before going on stage I still felt nervous, but it was at that very moment that I found a dandelion put into my pocket by my mother to keep me company. The play turned out to be a great success.
After the play,I took home the dandelion. Mom carefully gazed at the dandelion, gently placed it into a dictionary and smiled as usual. We were perhaps the only people who would keep such a sorry-looking weed. Though decades have passed, I constantly recall the precious lunchtime we were together, grateful for the smiles on my mother's face and her kindness.
写作积累
环境描写
一、环境描写的手法
1.借助感官(视觉、听觉、嗅觉、味觉、触觉)来进行环境描写。如:After the rain, the lotus flowers in the pond are in full blossom. They give off a faint scent.(借助视觉和嗅觉进行描写)
2.从空间的角度进行环境描写,例如,由上到下、由远及近等方式。如:I saw many kids who were laughing happily on the lawn. Then I glanced up and saw a pair of kites, red with long blue tails, soaring in the sky.(采用由下到上的方式进行描写)
二、环境描写的素材
the blue sky蓝天;the songs of birds鸟鸣;the rainy evening 雨夜;the green grass绿草;the setting/rising sun落日/冉冉升起的太阳;a gust of wind一阵狂风;a sea breeze柔和的海风
答案与分层梯度式解析
UNIT 1 ART
Part 4 Writing
实战演练
One possible version:
A 5-day fantastic Chinese painting exhibition hosted by our school is being held in the School Art Hall.
I paid a visit to the exhibition yesterday, which deeply impressed me by those extraordinary artworks of talented students. The exhibition is not only one of the most unforgettable events for us students but also a platform to display the charm of Chinese culture.
I highly recommend a visit to the exhibition, which will provide both a visual feast and a deep insight into a culture of great diversity. Don't miss it!
1.重点词汇
①fantastic adj.极好的
②pay a visit to...参观……
③impress sb. by sth.用某物给某人留下深刻印象
④display v.展示
⑤feast n.盛宴;宴会
2.亮点句型
①I paid a visit to the exhibition yesterday, which deeply impressed me by those extraordinary artworks of talented students.(which引导非限制性定语从句)昨天我参观了展览,它用才华横溢的学生们的那些非凡的艺术作品给我留下了深刻的印象。
②The exhibition is not only one of the most unforgettable events for us students but also a platform to display the charm of Chinese culture.(not only...but also...连接两个并列的表语)这次展览不仅是我们学生最难忘的活动之一,也是展示中国文化魅力的平台。
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关于艺术展览的写作
写作题目
假定你是李华,想邀请好友Jack一起参加中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展。请给他写封信,内容包括:
1.展览时间、地点;
2.介绍中国剪纸。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
Dear Jack,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
思路点拨
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1. n.展览
2. adj.艺术的
3. adj.有很大影响力的
4. 喜欢
5. 尤其;特别
6. 值得
答案 1.exhibition 2.artistic 3.influential
4.be fond of 5.in particular 6.be worthy of
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第一段:说明写信目的以及展览的时间和地点
(1)Knowing that you (喜欢中国传统艺术), I am writing to invite you to attend a Chinese paper-cutting art exhibition.
(2)It (将在艺术画廊举行) from 8:00 am to 5:00 pm next Sunday in our city center.
第二段:介绍中国剪纸
(3)Paper-cutting is a traditional (艺术形式) in China.
(4)It has a long history and (有很大的艺术价值).
(5)People often (美化他们的家) with the paper-cutting, (尤其) during festivals and weddings.
(6)In addition, there are (一些有影响力的艺术家) who will perform how to make the paper-cutting on the spot.
第三段:表达期望
(7)All in all, it is really (值得你的关注).
答案 (1)are fond of traditional Chinese art (2)will be held in the art gallery (3)art form
(4)is of much artistic value (5)beautify their homes;in particular (6)some influential artists (7)worthy of your attention
2.句式升级
(8)用动词不定式作后置定语合并句(1)和句(2)
(9)把句(3)和句(4)合并为含有定语从句的主从复合句
答案 (8)Knowing that you are fond of traditional Chinese art, I am writing to invite you to attend a Chinese paper-cutting art exhibition to be held in the art gallery from 8:00 am to 5:00 pm next Sunday in our city center. (9)Paper-cutting is a traditional art form in China, which has a long history and is of much artistic value.
连句成篇
Dear Jack,
Knowing that you are fond of traditional Chinese art, I am writing to invite you to attend a Chinese paper-cutting art exhibition to be held in the art gallery from 8:00 am to 5:00 pm next Sunday in our city center.
Paper-cutting is a traditional art form in China, which has a long history and is of much artistic value. People often beautify their homes with the paper-cutting, in particular during festivals and weddings. In addition, there are some influential artists who will perform how to make the paper-cutting on the spot.
All in all, it is really worthy of your attention. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
写作积累
关于艺术展览的写作
一、说明要举办的相关展览
1.An international high school student photography show is going to be held in our school.一场国际高中生摄影展将在我校举行。
2.As scheduled, the activity will be held in the lecture hall at 9:00 a.m. next Wednesday.按照计划,活动将于下周三上午9:00在报告厅举行。
3.Our school is going to hold an art exhibition, which will start from June 15th and last for three weeks.我们学校要举办一场艺术展览,从6月15日开始,持续三周。
二、表示邀请或者告知
1.As I know, you're always wanting to do something for environmental protection.据我所知,你一直想为环境保护做些事情。
2.On behalf of the student union, I feel greatly honored to invite you to participate in the activity.我很荣幸能代表学生会邀请你参加这次活动。
3.Knowing that you are a classical music lover, I'd like to invite you to join me for a concert.知道你是一个古典音乐爱好者,我想邀请你和我一起听音乐会。
三、说明相关展览的目的、内容、参与人员、意义等
1.Any student who is interested is welcome to participate.欢迎有兴趣的同学参加。
2.The theme of the show is how to protect the environment.这个展览的主题是如何保护环境。
3.There are all kinds of activities which can satisfy different students.有各种各样的活动,可以满足不同的学生。
四、表达期望
1.If you can come, I'm sure you'll have an unforgettable experience.如果你能来,我相信你会有一次难忘的经历。
2.If you are available at that time, I really hope that you will come.如果你到时候有空的话,我真的希望你能来。
3.Please let me know in advance if you can come and I'm looking forward to your reply.如果你能来,请提前告诉我,我期待着你的答复。
实战演练
昨天你参观了学校举办的学生国画作品展。请给校英文报写一篇宣传稿,内容包括:
1.展览时间、地点;
2.观展感受;
3.推荐观展。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
读后续写
写作题目
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Mother's Gift
I grew up in a small town where the primary school was a ten-minute walk from my house. When the noon bell rang, I would race breathlessly home. My mother would be standing at the top of the stairs, smiling down at me.
One lunchtime when I was in the third grade would always stay with me. I had been picked to be the princess in the school play, and for weeks my mother had rehearsed my lines so hard with me. But no matter how easily I acted at home, as soon as I stepped onstage, every word disappeared from my head. Finally, my teacher took me aside. She explained that she had written a narrator's(旁白员) part for the play, and asked me to change roles. Her words, kindly expressed, still hurt me, especially when I saw my part go to another girl.
I didn't tell my mother what had happened when I went home for lunch that day. But she sensed my pain. Instead of suggesting we practise my lines, she asked if I wanted to walk in the yard.
It was a lovely spring day and the rose vine was turning green. Under the huge trees, we could see yellow dandelions(蒲公英) on the grass in clusters, as if a painter had touched our landscape with a bit of gold. I watched my mother casually bend down by one dandelion. “I think I'm going to dig up all these weeds,” she said, pulling it up by the roots. “From now on, we'll have only roses in this garden.”
“But I like dandelions,” I protested. “All flowers are beautiful—even dandelions.”
My mother looked at me seriously. “Yes, every flower gives pleasure in its own way, doesn't it ” she asked thoughtfully. I nodded, pleased that I had won her over. “And that is true of people too,” she added. “Not everyone can be a princess, but there is no shame in that.” Knowing that she had guessed my pain, I started to cry as I told her what had happened. She listened and smiled reassuringly(安慰地).
注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
“But you will be a beautiful narrator,”she said,
After the play,I took home the dandelion.
文本分析
初识文本
重点词汇
1.sense v.觉察到
2.casually adv.随意地,漫不经心地
3.dig up挖出
4.protest v.反对;坚决地表示
5.shame n.羞耻;丢脸
障碍词汇
1.rehearse v.背诵;排演,排练
2.vine n.藤蔓;藤
3.cluster n.簇;团
4.win over说服,赢得……的支持
长难句
原句 Under the huge trees, we could see yellow dandelions on the grass in clusters, as if a painter had touched our landscape with a bit of gold.
分析 该句是一个主从复合句。as if引导方式状语从句,从句中使用了虚拟语气。
译文 在大树下,我们可以看到草地上成簇的黄色的蒲公英,仿佛是一位画家为我们的风景增添了一点金色。
故事要素
深研文本
预测情节发展
第一段:她说:“但你会成为一名出色的旁白员。”→妈妈又说了一些鼓励“我”的话→“我”接受了旁白员的角色,努力排练→“我”在演出前看到了妈妈送的一朵蒲公英,战胜了紧张→演出成功
第二段:校园剧结束后,“我”把蒲公英带回了家→妈妈把这朵蒲公英保存起来留作纪念→带给“我”的感触
遣词造句
1.用单词或短语填空
(1) a shining smile 带着灿烂的笑容
(2)be of vital 至关重要的
(3)go on 上台
(4)keep... 陪伴……
(5) 结果
(6) 注视
(7) v.记起,回忆起
(8) adj.宝贵的
答案 (1)wear (2)significance/importance
(3)stage (4)company (5)turn out
(6)gaze at (7)recall (8)precious
2.完成句子
(9)“But you will be a beautiful narrator,” she said, (鼓励) and (安慰) me as she always did.
(10)“The narrator's part is equally important,” my mother added, (带着灿烂的笑容) on her soft face.
(11)Time had (飞逝) and it reached the performance day.
(12)At that very moment, I found a dandelion (塞进我的口袋里) by my mother to
(陪伴我).
(13)Mom carefully (注视着) the dandelion, gently (把它放进) a dictionary and smiled as usual.
(14)Though decades have passed, I constantly (记起宝贵的午餐时光) we were together.
(15)I (感激) the smiles on my mother's face and her kindness.
答案 (9)encouraging;comforting
(10)wearing a shining smile (11)flown by (12)put into my pocket;keep me company (13)gazed at;placed it into (14)recall the precious lunchtime (15)was grateful for
3.句式升级
(16)用强调句型强调时间状语改写句(12)
(17)用形容词作状语合并句(14)和句(15)
答案 (16)It was at that very moment that I found a dandelion put into my pocket by my mother to keep me company. (17)Though decades have passed, I constantly recall the precious lunchtime we were together, grateful for the smiles on my mother's face and her kindness.
连句成篇
“But you will be a beautiful narrator,”she said,encouraging and comforting me as she always did. “The narrator's part is equally important,” my mother added, wearing a shining smile on her soft face. I began to accept that the narrator was of vital significance and rehearsed even harder. Time had flown by and it reached the performance day. Before going on stage I still felt nervous, but it was at that very moment that I found a dandelion put into my pocket by my mother to keep me company. The play turned out to be a great success.
After the play,I took home the dandelion. Mom carefully gazed at the dandelion, gently placed it into a dictionary and smiled as usual. We were perhaps the only people who would keep such a sorry-looking weed. Though decades have passed, I constantly recall the precious lunchtime we were together, grateful for the smiles on my mother's face and her kindness.
写作积累
环境描写
一、环境描写的手法
1.借助感官(视觉、听觉、嗅觉、味觉、触觉)来进行环境描写。如:After the rain, the lotus flowers in the pond are in full blossom. They give off a faint scent.(借助视觉和嗅觉进行描写)
2.从空间的角度进行环境描写,例如,由上到下、由远及近等方式。如:I saw many kids who were laughing happily on the lawn. Then I glanced up and saw a pair of kites, red with long blue tails, soaring in the sky.(采用由下到上的方式进行描写)
二、环境描写的素材
the blue sky蓝天;the songs of birds鸟鸣;the rainy evening 雨夜;the green grass绿草;the setting/rising sun落日/冉冉升起的太阳;a gust of wind一阵狂风;a sea breeze柔和的海风
答案与分层梯度式解析
UNIT 1 ART
Part 4 Writing
实战演练
One possible version:
A 5-day fantastic Chinese painting exhibition hosted by our school is being held in the School Art Hall.
I paid a visit to the exhibition yesterday, which deeply impressed me by those extraordinary artworks of talented students. The exhibition is not only one of the most unforgettable events for us students but also a platform to display the charm of Chinese culture.
I highly recommend a visit to the exhibition, which will provide both a visual feast and a deep insight into a culture of great diversity. Don't miss it!
1.重点词汇
①fantastic adj.极好的
②pay a visit to...参观……
③impress sb. by sth.用某物给某人留下深刻印象
④display v.展示
⑤feast n.盛宴;宴会
2.亮点句型
①I paid a visit to the exhibition yesterday, which deeply impressed me by those extraordinary artworks of talented students.(which引导非限制性定语从句)昨天我参观了展览,它用才华横溢的学生们的那些非凡的艺术作品给我留下了深刻的印象。
②The exhibition is not only one of the most unforgettable events for us students but also a platform to display the charm of Chinese culture.(not only...but also...连接两个并列的表语)这次展览不仅是我们学生最难忘的活动之一,也是展示中国文化魅力的平台。
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