Part 4 Writing
关于健康生活的写作
写作题目
假设你是李华,你的英国笔友John写信告诉你,近日他由于沉迷于网络游戏,健康受到了很大影响。请你给他写一封回信,为他提供一些建议。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
Dear John,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
思路点拨
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1. adj.充满活力的;精力充沛的
2. adj.身体的
3. n.自制力
4. 下定决心
答案 1.dynamic 2.physical 3.discipline 4.make up one's mind
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第一段:引出写信目的
(1)I'm sorry to hear that you are addicted to online games and that it has greatly affected your (身心健康).
(2)To help you (摆脱) them, I'm willing to give you some advice.
第二段:提出避免沉迷于网络游戏的建议
(3)First,you should (控制) the time that you spend on online games.
(4)To form a regular habit of getting up and going to bed can also help you (变得更好).
(5)As long as you (下定决心) and have discipline, any bad habit can be kicked.
第三段:表达美好祝愿
(6)I hope that you can keep away from online games and (做一个积极乐观、充满活力的学生).
答案 (1)physical and mental health (2)get rid of (3)take control of (4)change for the better (5)make up your mind (6)be a positive and dynamic student
2.句式升级
(7)用so...that...结构改写句(1)
答案 (7)I'm sorry to hear that you are so addicted to online games that it has greatly affected your physical and mental health.
连句成篇
Dear John,
I'm sorry to hear that you are so addicted to online games that it has greatly affected your physical and mental health. To help you get rid of them, I'm willing to give you some advice.
First, you should take control of the time that you spend on online games. Besides, to form a regular habit of getting up and going to bed can also help you change for the better. As long as you make up your mind and have discipline, any bad habit can be kicked.
I hope that you can keep away from online games and be a positive and dynamic student.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
写作积累
关于健康生活的写作
一、常用词汇
1.work out/take exercise锻炼
2.have a balanced diet均衡饮食
3.develop a good habit养成好习惯
4.go to bed early and get up early早睡早起
5.unhealthy living habits不健康的生活习惯
6.go to school without breakfast不吃早餐就去上学
7.keep/stay physically and mentally healthy保持身心健康
二、常用句式
1.There is no doubt that a balanced diet is beneficial to our health.毫无疑问,平衡膳食有益于我们的健康。
2.As we all know, good health lays the foundation for our future development.众所周知,身体健康为我们未来的发展奠定基础。
3.When it comes to keeping healthy, playing sports enjoys widespread popularity among people.当谈到保持健康时,进行体育运动在人们中广受欢迎。
4.It is known to all that health is very important, without which we can hardly enjoy our life.众所周知,健康是非常重要的,没有它,我们很难享受生活。
5.Generally speaking, keeping a balanced diet and taking exercise regularly are recognized as healthy lifestyles.一般来说,保持平衡膳食和定期锻炼被认为是健康的生活方式。
6.Besides, we should take a positive attitude towards people around us so that we can keep mentally healthy.此外,我们应该以积极的态度对待我们周围的人,这样我们才能保持心理健康。
实战演练
假定你是李华,你的外国笔友David来信,向你诉说体重问题带来的烦恼。请你给他写一封回信,提出自己的建议。要点如下:
1.注重体育锻炼;
2.注意健康饮食;
3.保障心理健康。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear David,
I am sorry to hear that you are worried about your weight problem.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案与分层梯度式解析
UNIT 2 HEALTHY LIFESTYLE
Part 4 Writing
实战演练
One possible version:
Dear David,
I am sorry to hear that you are worried about your weight problem. Here are some of my ideas about it, which I hope will be of some help.
It is important to make exercise a part of everyday activities, which will help you lose weight and offer some other benefits. A balanced diet is as important as exercising, because the right balance between fruit,vegetables, proteins and fats keeps you healthy and strong. Above all, good mental health is necessary, leading you to have an active life all along.
I hope everything will be fine.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.重点词汇
①be of some help 有所帮助
②lose weight 减肥
③balanced adj.均衡的;平衡的
④above all最重要的是
⑤have an active life过着积极的生活
2.亮点句型
①It is important to make exercise a part of everyday activities, which will help you lose weight and offer some other benefits.(It作形式主语,动词不定式短语“to make...”作真正的主语;which引导非限制性定语从句)重要的是使运动成为日常活动的一部分,这将有助于你减肥,并提供一些其他的好处。
②Above all, good mental health is necessary, leading you to have an active life all along.(现在分词短语作伴随状语)最重要的是,良好的心理健康是必要的,它使你始终过着积极的生活。
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