Part 4 Writing
关于环保的写作
写作题目
中国北方大部分地区持续很长时间的雾霾引起了人们对环境污染问题的担忧。为丰富中学生的环保知识,培养其保护环境的意识,你校英语社决定举行一次有关环境保护的座谈会。请你写一篇发言稿,内容包括以下几个方面:
1.雾霾天气的危害;
2.雾霾产生的原因;
3.就怎样减少雾霾提出建议。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
思路点拨
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1. n.烟雾;雾霾
2. adv.频繁地→ n.频繁;发生率
3. vt.& n.排放;释放
4. n.排放物;散发物;排放
5. 二氧化碳
6. 化石燃料
答案 1.smog 2.frequently;frequency
3.release 4.emission 5.carbon dioxide
6.fossil fuel
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第二段:雾霾产生的原因
(1) (很明显) air pollution is the main factor.
(2)It has (导致) the frequency of smog weather.
(3)Smoke (燃烧化石燃料产生的) and all kinds of dust (释放出的) factories are important factors.
第三段:减少雾霾的建议
(4)We are supposed to reduce (化石燃料的使用) and increase the use of public transport.
(5)We aim to (减少排放) of carbon dioxide.
答案 (1)It is obvious that (2)resulted in/led to (3)from burning fossil fuels;released from (4)the use of fossil fuels (5)cut down the emission
2.句式升级
(6)用定语从句合并句(1)和句(2)
(7)用现在分词作状语合并句(4)和句(5)
答案 (6)It is obvious that air pollution is the main factor that has resulted in the frequency of smog weather. (7)We are supposed to reduce the use of fossil fuels and increase the use of public transport, aiming to cut down the emission of carbon dioxide.
连句成篇
Hello, everyone!
Nowadays, the smog weather frequently occurs. It is of great harm to the health of our breathing system.
It is obvious that air pollution is the main factor that has resulted in the frequency of smog weather. And the reason for air pollution is various. Smoke from burning fossil fuels and all kinds of dust released from factories are important factors.
We are supposed to reduce the use of fossil fuels and increase the use of public transport, aiming to cut down the emission of carbon dioxide.
Thank you!
写作积累
1.Protecting the environment is everyone's responsibility.保护环境,人人有责。
2.It's everyone's duty to care for and protect the environment.爱护和保护环境是每个人的责任。
3.So it's time for us human beings to take quick action to protect water resources.因此,是我们人类迅速采取行动来保护水资源的时候了。
4.How to protect our environment has become one of the most difficult problems in the world.如何保护我们的环境已经成为世界上最困难的问题之一。
5.If everyone makes contributions to protecting the environment, the world will become more beautiful.如果人人都为保护环境做出贡献,世界将变得更加美丽。
6.The rule will undoubtedly reduce the use of plastic bags and enhance people's awareness of environmental protection.这一规定无疑会减少塑料袋的使用,并增强人们的环保意识。
实战演练
假定你是学生会主席,你校计划本周六举行主题为“保护环境,人人有责”的演讲比赛,请你为校英文报写一则通知,内容包括:
1.比赛的时间、地点;
2.参赛人员;
3.就如何准备提出建议。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
Notice
答案与分层梯度式解析
UNIT 3 ENVIRONMENTAL PROTECTION
Part 4 Writing
实战演练
One possible version:
Notice
To raise people's awareness of protecting our environment, our school organizes a speech contest with the theme of “Protecting the environment is everyone's responsibility”.
The contest is to be held in our lecture hall this Saturday. Everyone in our school can take part. It is strongly recommended that you should talk about garbage sorting, which helps improve the recycling of the waste and protect the environment. If you have a passion for this topic, please sign up for the contest as soon as possible.
The Students' Union
1.重点词汇
①awareness n.意识
②responsibility n.责任
③recommend v.建议
④have a passion for...热爱……
⑤sign up for...报名参加……
2.亮点句型
It is strongly recommended that you should talk about garbage sorting, which helps improve the recycling of the waste and protect the environment.(It作形式主语,that引导的主语从句作真正的主语;虚拟语气;which引导非限制性定语从句)强烈建议你应该谈谈垃圾分类,这有助于提高废物的回收利用和保护环境。
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