人教选择性必修三Unit 4 Part 4 Writing写作点拔学案

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Part 4 Writing
描写一个坚持不懈的人
写作题目
  假定你是李华,你报名参加了学校举办的主题为“The person I respect most”的英文演讲比赛。请你以我国农业科学家袁隆平的事迹为素材写一篇演讲稿,内容包括:
1.基本信息:1930年出生于北京;
2.主要贡献:培育出杂交水稻;
3.身上的优秀品质。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇: 杂交水稻hybrid rice
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua. I'd like to share the person I respect most with you.
                            
                            
                            
                            
                            
                            
                            
                            
思路点拨
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1.    n.困境;逆境
2.    n.耐久力;忍耐力
3.    n.坚持不懈;毅力;韧性
4.    n.奉献;承诺;保证
5.      对……充满热情
答案 1.adversity 2.endurance
3.perseverance 4.commitment
5.be enthusiastic about
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第二段:介绍其基本信息和贡献
(1)Born in Beijing in 1930, Yuan Longping               (被称作) the “father of hybrid rice”.
(2)He                    (对……极富热情) his major course when he was in college.
(3)He                         (克服了许多困境) and he never gave up                    (不管什么挑战) might lie ahead. Eventually, he developed the hybrid rice.
(4)Hybrid rice has a high output and helps feed people                    (国内外的).
第三段:介绍其优秀品质
(5)Yuan Longping is distinguished for his          (出色的忍耐力).
(6)He did agricultural research with one hundred percent               (奉献和毅力).
(7)His virtues                         (对……产生了深刻的影响) people.
答案 (1)is known as (2)was hugely enthusiastic about (3)overcame a number of adversities;no matter what challenges (4)at home and abroad (5)outstanding endurance (6)commitment and perseverance (7)have a deep influence on
2.句式升级
(8)用such...that...改写句(4)
                            
(9)把句(6)和句(7)合并为一个含有非限制性定语从句的复合句
                            
答案 (8)Hybrid rice has such a high output that it helps feed people at home and abroad. (9)He did agricultural research with one hundred percent commitment and perseverance, whose virtues have a deep influence on people.
连句成篇
  Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua. I'd like to share the person I respect most with you.
Born in Beijing in 1930,Yuan Longping is known as the “father of hybrid rice”. He was hugely enthusiastic about his major course when he was in college. He overcame a number of adversities and he never gave up no matter what challenges might lie ahead. Eventually, he developed the hybrid rice. Hybrid rice has such a high output that it helps feed people at home and abroad.
Yuan Longping is distinguished for his outstanding endurance. He did agricultural research with one hundred percent commitment and perseverance, whose virtues have a deep influence on people.
写作积累
描写励志人物的常用词块
1.insist on/persevere in坚持
2.be devoted to/be committed to致力于
3.be able to do/be equal to doing能胜任做
4.do not give up/refuse to acknowledge defeat不放弃/不服输
5.heart and soul/with one hundred percent commitment全心全意地
实战演练
假定你们班本周英语课前“一分钟演讲”的主题为“A Strong-willed Person”。请你写一篇演讲稿, 内容包括:
1.你要介绍的人及理由;
2.这个人对你的启发。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
  Good morning, everyone!
                            
                            
  That's all. Thank you.
答案与分层梯度式解析
UNIT 4 ADVERSITY AND COURAGE
Part 4 Writing
实战演练
One possible version:
Good morning, everyone!
Today I'd like to talk about a strong-willed person—J.K. Rowling.
When Rowling began the first Harry Potter story, she was too poor to own a typewriter or afford the heating at home, so she had to spend hours in a cafeteria, writing by hand. Rowling was so determined that she overcame all the difficulties and completed the novel in several years. Then after a total of twelve rejections, her first novel was finally published, leading her to great success.
J.K. Rowling is my idol, whose strong will always encourages me to carry on whenever I encounter challenges.
That's all. Thank you.
1.重点词汇
①determined adj.坚决的;坚定的
②overcome v.克服;解决
③rejection n.拒绝
④carry on继续做;继续行进
⑤encounter v.遭遇,遇到
2.亮点句型
①Rowling was so determined that she overcame all the difficulties and completed the novel in several years.(“so...that...”引导结果状语从句)罗琳是如此坚定,她克服了所有困难,在几年内完成了这部小说。
②J.K. Rowling is my idol, whose strong will always encourages me to carry on whenever I encounter challenges.(whose引导非限制性定语从句;whenever引导让步状语从句)J.K.罗琳是我的偶像。无论何时我遇到挑战,她的坚强的意志一直鼓励我继续(前进)。
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