(共55张PPT)
Section Ⅵ
Writing
NO 1
(写作项目——Writing a summary)
NO 2
课时跟踪检测
目 录
(写作项目——Writing a summary)
本单元的写作任务是写文学作品的剧情概要，属于概要写作的范畴。概要写作属于应用文的一种，即读者在正确理解文章的基础上，在不改变原文中心思想、体裁和结构的前提下，用简明、精练的语句高度浓缩主要内容和观点。写作时要首先根据文章体裁特点决定内容的取舍，然后找出主题句或关键词(组)，最后，根据阅读时获取的信息、主题句或关键词(组)等，对相关的内容进行整合，厘清各层次、要点之间的关系，用自己的语言把词(组)扩展成句，概括出文章的大意。
由教材学写作
一、学文体架构
(一)析教材课文
Para.1：The introduction of the main characters, setting and start of the play The Blue Bird.
Para.2：The main plot and the theme of the play The Blue Bird.
(二)根据教材课文呈现的概要写作，可总结出该类文体的框架结构如下：
二、学写作手法
本文采用“总－分”结构，第一段首句介绍作品名和作者，接下来概括故事情节的发展、高潮和结局，并揭示主题。
三、学顺承衔接
第二段第一句是承上启下的过渡句；第二段使用了表示转折的让步状语从句Although they ...和并列连词but与and，一步一步将故事的发展推向高潮；本段最后一句概括此作品的中心思想。故事情节发展的层层推进，衔接词的合理使用使文章浑然一体。
四、学亮点表达
1．第一段第一句使用了过去分词短语written by引出该作品的作者，第二句使用了高级词汇search for，第三句使用了高级句式be doing ...when ...，最后一句使用了in search of，体现出较强的语言表达能力。
2．第二段使用了高级词汇encounter, departed, either ...or以及现在分词短语作后置定语和结果状语，that引导的定语从句和although引导的让步状语从句，着力描写了Tyltyl和Mytyl在寻找青鸟的旅程中付出的艰辛。最后一句中使用连词短语not ...but ...，强调了幸福的真谛，揭示了该作品的主题思想。
仿写训练|完成句子
①The following day, Lily __________________________________
she heard an unexpected knock.
第二天，莉莉正在做她的餐厅例行工作，突然听到一声意外的敲门声。
was doing her restaurant routine when
②By the 1850s, it was selling one million copies a year,__________
_____________________________________.
到19世纪50年代为止，该书的年销售量达到一百万册，成为有史以来最受欢迎的教科书之一。
③______________________________________________________ really counts.
不是这部短片，而是短片中播放的内容才真正有价值。
making it
one of the most popular school books ever
It is not the short movie but what is shown in it that
具体写作指导
1．开头段
介绍作者的姓名、书名及有关作者的简要信息。可结合作者所处的时代特点来写其生平，还可写出促使作者创作本作品的历史条件等。良好的开篇段落能抓住读者的注意力，促使他们产生读下去的热切欲望。
①The story ______________ a brave young man.
这个故事主要是关于一个勇敢的年轻人的。
②Dark Materials by the English writer, Philip Pullman, is__________
_______________________.
英国作家菲利普·普尔曼的《黑暗物质》是最伟大的奇幻小说之一。
is mainly about
one of the
greatest fantasy novels
③___________________, it has sold 18 million copies and has been translated into more than 40 languages.
该书于1995年出版，已售出1 800万册，并被翻译成40多种语言。
Published in 1995
2．主体段
如果是小说，要对情节做简要概括，要特别注意概要的客观性，内容完整且忠实于原著；如果不是小说，则要点明写作目的和主题。故事概要可使用现在时，但在为非小说类作品写概要时，则需按照原著的时态。
①The great Shackleton and his crew went aboard the ship named Endurance._____________, on the way the ship became stuck in the ice,_____________________.Having abandoned the ship, they escaped to Elephant Island.Shackleton was ______________he left them to look for help by himself.In the end they were able to survive_____________
___________________.
Unfortunately
sinking into the ocean
so brave that
in spite of so
many difficulties
伟大的沙克尔顿和他的船员登上了名为“耐力号”的船。不幸的是，在途中，这艘船被困在冰中，沉入大海。弃船后，他们逃到了象岛。沙克尔顿非常勇敢，他离开他们独自寻求帮助。尽管困难重重，他们最终还是活了下来。
②The heroine is a girl called Lyra and the hero is a boy called Will.In the first book, Lyra's father, a scientist, ________________that the children enter other worlds, where they have many extraordinary adventures and _______________________a war that could destroy the universe.
makes it possible
play an important part in
女主人公是一个叫莱拉的女孩，男主人公是一个叫威尔的男孩。在第一本书中，莱拉的父亲是一名科学家，他让孩子们有可能进入其他世界，在那里他们进行了许多非凡的冒险，并在一场可能摧毁宇宙的战争中发挥了重要作用。
3．结尾段
对作品的评价和议论是写作的核心部分。在这一部分中，可以提出对作品的看法，评价它的优缺点，讨论它对现在及将来的影响等等。
①_________________________ cures the bad-tempered beast.
是那个贫穷女孩的爱治愈了这头坏脾气的野兽。
②The characters in this story are such ___________________most readers like them.
这个故事里的人物是那么善解人意，大多数读者都喜欢他们。
It is the poor girl's love that
considerate ones that
③In face of danger, they behave so bravely that they___________
____________________.
面对困难，他们表现得如此勇敢，以至于他们使读者深受感动。
④This is an inspiring story, _____________________________.
这是一个非常鼓舞人心的故事，我从中学到很多。
⑤From this story, we have learned that only by working hard_____________________.
从这个故事中，我们学到的是：一个人只有努力工作才能成功。
make the
readers moved deeply
from which I have learned a lot
can a person succeed
[针对练笔]
《百万英镑》是马克·吐温(Mark Twain)的代表作之一，深受全世界青少年读者的喜爱。它以幽默讽刺的语言向我们讲述了一个美国穷小子亨利·亚当斯在伦敦的奇遇。试根据所给提示补全下面短文，并尝试在英语课上为同学们介绍小说《百万英镑》。
Today, I am going to introduce to you a novel.
This novel is called The Million Pound Bank Note, ①______________________ (由马克·吐温所著)．②________________
____________________ (通过幽默讽刺的语言), Mark Twain successfully described the wonderful adventure of Henry Adams, a poor American guy, in London.Two rich men in London had a bet on him and wanted to see
written by Mark Twain
Through humorous
and sarcastic language
what would become of him a month later if they gave him a million pound bank note which couldn't be cashed.A month later, Henry wasn't starved nor arrested, but became a millionaire.What's more, he even won the love of a pretty lady.
The novel ③________________________________________ (被认为是最著名的作品之一) of Mark Twain.It ④____________________
_________ (非常受青少年的欢迎) throughout the world.
This is ⑤____________________________ (对这个故事的简要介绍)．Hope you will enjoy reading this representative work of Mark Twain.
is considered as one of the most famous works
is very popular with
teenagers
a brief introduction to the story
写作素材储备
(一)背写作词汇
1．background n． 背景
2．heroic adj. 英雄的
3．legend n. 传奇
4．signature n. 签名
5．adventure n. 冒险
6．enthusiasm n. 热情
7．challenge n. 挑战
8．open up 打开
9．be famous as 作为……而闻名
10．a series of 一系列
(二)背写作佳句
1．Since the novel was published, it has been popular among children as well as adults.自从这部小说出版以来，就受到了孩子们和成年人的欢迎。
2．Robinson Crusoe is a novel written by the English author Daniel Defoe, which is a widely influential masterpiece.
《鲁滨逊漂流记》是英国作家丹尼尔·笛福的一部小说，是一部影响广泛的杰作。
3．Jane Eyre is a masterpiece of the famous British writer Charlotte Bront and one of the most classic works in the British history of literature.
《简·爱》是英国著名作家夏洛蒂·勃朗特的代表作，也是英国文学史上最经典的作品之一。
4．Having read the first four chapters of Great Expectations by Charles Dickens, I'm glad to share part of the story here with you.
读完了查尔斯·狄更斯的《远大前程》的前四章，我很高兴在这里与大家分享故事的一部分。
5．This novel tells the story of Huckleberry, a boy who lost his parents when he was very young.这部小说讲述了哈克贝利的故事，这个小男孩在很小的时候就失去了父母。
6．The central idea of the play is to look for what's good for you even in desperate situations and always be optimistic and enthusiastic about life.该剧的中心思想是，即使在绝望的情况下，也要寻找对你有利的东西，并始终对生活保持乐观和热情。
No.2 课时跟踪检测
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.靓表达升级
1．Robinson Crusoe by Daniel Defoe, which is based on a true story, is one of the world's most popular adventure novels.(用过去分词作状语升级)
→______________________________________________________
___________________________________________________
Based on a true story, Robinson Crusoe by Daniel Defoe is one of the world's most popular adventure novels.
2．However, on a voyage, he encounters some accidents, and is carried to a deserted island by the wind and waves.He loses touch with outside world and spends 28 hard years.(用定语从句合并句子)
→
However, on a voyage, he encounters some accidents, and is carried to a deserted island by the wind and waves, where he loses touch with outside world and spends 28 hard years.
3．Fortunately, he is found and rescued eventually, and reunited with his family, bringing the abnormal life to an end.(用so that 引导的状语从句升级)
→
Fortunately, he is found and rescued eventually so that he is reunited with his family, bringing the abnormal life to an end.
4．The courage and perseverance to get over difficulties make him survive on the deserted island.(用强调句型对主语进行强调)
→
5．He is able to find ways to solve the problem by working hard.(用“only＋状语”引导的倒装句升级)
→
It is the courage and perseverance to get over difficulties that make him survive on the deserted island.
Only by working hard is he able to find ways to solve the
problem.
Ⅱ.微语境写作
1．The big day finally came.Every actor and actress ____________________(表现出了最佳水平), ______________________
_______ (给观众留下了深刻的印象)．
2．We'd like to take this opportunity to combine your culture with ours by______________________________________(改编这部中国经典动画片) for a short English play.However, _______________________________(改编是一个相当大的挑战)．
performed at their best
impressing the audience
greatly
adapting the classic Chinese cartoon movie
the adaptation is quite a challenge
3．Preparations started right after the discussion.Though most of us ______________________(不擅长戏剧), we all had the confidence to have a try.We ___________________________________(为戏剧做了充分的准备)and ________________________________________________
(所有的男女演员都投入到排练中)．
were not good at drama
made good preparations for the drama
all our actors and actresses were devoted to the practice
4．The members of English Drama Club will perform the highlights of Macbeth and King Lear, which are ____________________
________________________________________________(莎士比亚的代表作，也是英国文学的瑰宝)．This is _________________________
____________(一个欣赏经典的机会) and pay tribute to literary giants.
the masterpieces of
Shakespeare as well as the treasure of English literature
a chance to appreciate the
classics
5．As you know, the English Drama Festival will be held in our school next month.We _________________________(计划排演一个短剧) named Alice in Wonderland, ______________________________
___________(它是根据一部同名电影改编的)．
plan to rehearse a short play
which is based on a movie of the
same title
Ⅲ.应用文写作
假定你是李华，你校英语俱乐部即将举办文学名著读书会。请你为莎士比亚(Shakespeare)的《威尼斯商人》(The Merchant of Venice)写一篇概要，并在读书会上与大家分享。概要的内容包括：
1．作品名称及作者；2．剧情介绍；3．作品的意义及你的感受。
注意：可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考范文：
The Merchant of Venice is one of Shakespeare's plays.Bassanio, a noble but penniless Venetian, asks his friend Antonio for a loan so that he can undertake a journey to woo Portia.Antonio, whose money is invested in foreign ventures, borrows money from Shylock in order to assist Bassanio.However, if the loan can not be repaid in time, Antonio will give Shylock a pound of flesh.
News arrives that Antonio's ships have been lost at sea.Unable to get his money back, Shylock attempts to enforce a terrible revenge on Antonio, demanding his pound of flesh.However, Portia turns the tables on Shylock by an argument: he must take the flesh only, and Shylock must die if any blood is spilled.Thus, the contract is canceled.
This play, in my opinion, focuses on several main themes, such as friendship and the strength of women.It teaches me to treat others kindly and cherish friendship. Therefore, it is definitely worth reading.
Ⅳ.概要写作
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
There are many good reasons for adding recycling to your routine, ranging from a personal level to a global advantage.Recycling your waste makes you more responsible in the way you use and dispose of it.As a result, people end up saving a considerable amount of money while also saving the planet.Individuals, governing bodies and companies can take pride in minimizing their waste as they are helping to reduce global environmental damage and making this earth a better place.
Apart from the environmental benefits, think of the employment that it can generate.You put your waste in different bins.The manpower involved in the logistics and processing of your waste is considerable and thus you are helping to keep people in jobs.What could be more helpful in tough economic times as now than keeping people employed
That is not all of the advantages of recycling.Many charities and community groups raise money through reusing and recycling goods.Your city has many charity shops that will take your unwanted clothes, electronics, furniture and other household items to resell as income for these non-profit organizations and these donations are also tax deductible for you.Some other not-for-profit charities will deliver such clothing and other items to underdeveloped communities around the globe.So, think of the people in need in your local community and in other nations before you throw away all those unused or uneaten stuff into the trash can next time.
When we talk about recycling household and workplace things, we tend to ignore or are less aware of how to deal with the electrical and electronic waste.E-waste is valuable as a source of secondary raw material but poisonous if disposed of improperly.Due to rapid technology development, obsolescent (过时的) items have created a fast growing mass of electronic waste around the globe.
参考范文：
Recycling is beneficial to the environment in terms of not only every individual but also the overall planet.(要点1) It can also help create jobs and keep people employed, generating employment.(要点2) In addition, charities and community groups can help those in need through people's recycling of goods.(要点3) We should also pay more attention to the problem of e-waste.(要点4)
[阅读拓展训练]
阅读七选五
A summary is a piece of writing that tells the main ideas of something.It is basically a shortened version of a larger text that describes its main points. 1 Follow these steps when writing a summary.
Carefully review the work you're summarizing.If you are writing a summary of a written text, make sure to read it carefully.Thus, you can take note of what the author is saying and why he is saying it. 2 Therefore, make sure to take detailed notes.
3 Another way to ensure you are remembering important information is to underline words as you go.If you are watching something, write down time stamps of when important things happen.This makes it easier for you to look back on them when you are writing your summary.
Write down the main points.It is time to organize your summary into sentences that make up paragraphs.It's suggested to start by writing down the main points in your own words.Make sure to write down these main points as they were presented by the author of the text. 4
Add in supporting points.Add in some major supporting points for your main idea.While these are more detailed sentences, make sure they connect to the rest of the text.There is no need to add in minor details if they do not add any value to your summary. 5 Maybe it was not a major plot point in the text.You only want to add general information that will give the reader a high-level understanding of the text.
A．Underline important information.
B．Try to remember important information.
C．But how can you write an effective summary
D．It means that these main points should be written down in order.
E．For instance, there is no need to include the character's eye color.
F．Sometimes a minor detail can make a difference in your summary.
G．Similarly, it is advisable to write a summary about something you are hearing.
语篇解读：本文是一篇说明文。文章主要介绍了如何写出有效的摘要。
1．选C 前文介绍了什么是摘要，后句提到写摘要的建议。所以选项C“但是怎样才能写出有效的摘要呢？”符合上下文语境。
2．选F 本段前文建议在写摘要前一定要仔细阅读文章。选项F“有时，一个微小的细节会让你的摘要大不相同”介绍了要仔细的原因，符合语境。
3．选A 空处为本段中心句。根据本段后文可知，本段主要介绍阅读文章时，应该在重要语句下面画线。所以选项A“在重要信息下面画线”可概括本段主旨，适合放在段首。
4．选D 空前一句建议将文章要点按出现的先后顺序写下来。选项D“这意味着应该按先后顺序把这些要点写下来”承接上文，符合语境。
5．选E 前句说明不用增加没有价值的小细节，选项E“比如，不用写角色的瞳色”是对上文的举例说明，符合语境。5 / 5
Section Ⅵ Writing
写作项目——Writing a summary
本单元的写作任务是写文学作品的剧情概要，属于概要写作的范畴。概要写作属于应用文的一种，即读者在正确理解文章的基础上，在不改变原文中心思想、体裁和结构的前提下，用简明、精练的语句高度浓缩主要内容和观点。写作时要首先根据文章体裁特点决定内容的取舍，然后找出主题句或关键词(组)，最后，根据阅读时获取的信息、主题句或关键词(组)等，对相关的内容进行整合，厘清各层次、要点之间的关系，用自己的语言把词(组)扩展成句，概括出文章的大意。
由教材学写作
一、学文体架构
(一)析教材课文
Para.1：The introduction of the main characters, setting and start of the play The Blue Bird.
Para.2：The main plot and the theme of the play The Blue Bird.
(二)根据教材课文呈现的概要写作，可总结出该类文体的框架结构如下：
二、学写作手法
本文采用“总－分”结构，第一段首句介绍作品名和作者，接下来概括故事情节的发展、高潮和结局，并揭示主题。
三、学顺承衔接
第二段第一句是承上启下的过渡句；第二段使用了表示转折的让步状语从句Although they ...和并列连词but与and，一步一步将故事的发展推向高潮；本段最后一句概括此作品的中心思想。故事情节发展的层层推进，衔接词的合理使用使文章浑然一体。
四、学亮点表达
1．第一段第一句使用了过去分词短语written by引出该作品的作者，第二句使用了高级词汇search for，第三句使用了高级句式be doing ...when ...，最后一句使用了in search of，体现出较强的语言表达能力。
2．第二段使用了高级词汇encounter, departed, either ...or以及现在分词短语作后置定语和结果状语，that引导的定语从句和although引导的让步状语从句，着力描写了Tyltyl和Mytyl在寻找青鸟的旅程中付出的艰辛。最后一句中使用连词短语not ...but ...，强调了幸福的真谛，揭示了该作品的主题思想。
[仿写训练|完成句子]
①The following day, Lily ______________________ she heard an unexpected knock.
第二天，莉莉正在做她的餐厅例行工作，突然听到一声意外的敲门声。
②By the 1850s, it was selling one million copies a year, _______________________.
到19世纪50年代为止，该书的年销售量达到一百万册，成为有史以来最受欢迎的教科书之一。
③__________________________________________________________ really counts.
不是这部短片，而是短片中播放的内容才真正有价值。
具体写作指导
1．开头段
介绍作者的姓名、书名及有关作者的简要信息。可结合作者所处的时代特点来写其生平，还可写出促使作者创作本作品的历史条件等。良好的开篇段落能抓住读者的注意力，促使他们产生读下去的热切欲望。
①The story __________________ a brave young man.
这个故事主要是关于一个勇敢的年轻人的。
②Dark Materials by the English writer, Philip Pullman, is __________________________.
英国作家菲利普·普尔曼的《黑暗物质》是最伟大的奇幻小说之一。
③________________， it has sold 18 million copies and has been translated into more than 40 languages.该书于1995年出版，已售出1 800万册，并被翻译成40多种语言。
2．主体段
如果是小说，要对情节做简要概括，要特别注意概要的客观性，内容完整且忠实于原著；如果不是小说，则要点明写作目的和主题。故事概要可使用现在时，但在为非小说类作品写概要时，则需按照原著的时态。
①The great Shackleton and his crew went aboard the ship named Endurance.________________， on the way the ship became stuck in the ice, ________________.Having abandoned the ship, they escaped to Elephant Island.Shackleton was __________________ he left them to look for help by himself.In the end they were able to survive __________________________.
伟大的沙克尔顿和他的船员登上了名为“耐力号”的船。不幸的是，在途中，这艘船被困在冰中，沉入大海。弃船后，他们逃到了象岛。沙克尔顿非常勇敢，他离开他们独自寻求帮助。尽管困难重重，他们最终还是活了下来。
②The heroine is a girl called Lyra and the hero is a boy called Will.In the first book, Lyra's father, a scientist, ____________________ that the children enter other worlds, where they have many extraordinary adventures and ____________________ a war that could destroy the universe.
女主人公是一个叫莱拉的女孩，男主人公是一个叫威尔的男孩。在第一本书中，莱拉的父亲是一名科学家，他让孩子们有可能进入其他世界，在那里他们进行了许多非凡的冒险，并在一场可能摧毁宇宙的战争中发挥了重要作用。
3．结尾段
对作品的评价和议论是写作的核心部分。在这一部分中，可以提出对作品的看法，评价它的优缺点，讨论它对现在及将来的影响等等。
①________________________________ cures the bad tempered beast.
是那个贫穷女孩的爱治愈了这头坏脾气的野兽。
②The characters in this story are such ______________________________ most readers like them.这个故事里的人物是那么善解人意，大多数读者都喜欢他们。
③In face of danger, they behave so bravely that they ___________________________.
面对困难，他们表现得如此勇敢，以至于他们使读者深受感动。
④This is an inspiring story, ____________________________________.
这是一个非常鼓舞人心的故事，我从中学到很多。
⑤From this story, we have learned that only by working hard _______________________.
从这个故事中，我们学到的是：一个人只有努力工作才能成功。
[针对练笔]
《百万英镑》是马克·吐温(Mark Twain)的代表作之一，深受全世界青少年读者的喜爱。它以幽默讽刺的语言向我们讲述了一个美国穷小子亨利·亚当斯在伦敦的奇遇。试根据所给提示补全下面短文，并尝试在英语课上为同学们介绍小说《百万英镑》。
Today, I am going to introduce to you a novel.
This novel is called The Million Pound Bank Note, ①__________________ (由马克·吐温所著)．②______________________________________________ (通过幽默讽刺的语言), Mark Twain successfully described the wonderful adventure of Henry Adams, a poor American guy, in London.Two rich men in London had a bet on him and wanted to see what would become of him a month later if they gave him a million pound bank note which couldn't be cashed.A month later, Henry wasn't starved nor arrested, but became a millionaire.What's more, he even won the love of a pretty lady.
The novel ③______________________________________________________________ (被认为是最著名的作品之一) of Mark Twain.It ④__________________________ (非常受青少年的欢迎) throughout the world.
This is ⑤__________________________ (对这个故事的简要介绍)．Hope you will enjoy reading this representative work of Mark Twain.
写作素材储备
(一)背写作词汇
1．background n． 背景
2．heroic adj. 英雄的
3．legend n. 传奇
4．signature n. 签名
5．adventure n. 冒险
6．enthusiasm n. 热情
7．challenge n. 挑战
8．open up 打开
9．be famous as 作为……而闻名
10．a series of 一系列
(二)背写作佳句
1．Since the novel was published, it has been popular among children as well as adults.
自从这部小说出版以来，就受到了孩子们和成年人的欢迎。
2．Robinson Crusoe is a novel written by the English author Daniel Defoe, which is a widely influential masterpiece.
《鲁滨逊漂流记》是英国作家丹尼尔·笛福的一部小说，是一部影响广泛的杰作。
3．Jane Eyre is a masterpiece of the famous British writer Charlotte Bront and one of the most classic works in the British history of literature.
《简·爱》是英国著名作家夏洛蒂·勃朗特的代表作，也是英国文学史上最经典的作品之一。
4．Having read the first four chapters of Great Expectations by Charles Dickens, I'm glad to share part of the story here with you.
读完了查尔斯·狄更斯的《远大前程》的前四章，我很高兴在这里与大家分享故事的一部分。
5．This novel tells the story of Huckleberry, a boy who lost his parents when he was very young.
这部小说讲述了哈克贝利的故事，这个小男孩在很小的时候就失去了父母。
6．The central idea of the play is to look for what's good for you even in desperate situations and always be optimistic and enthusiastic about life.该剧的中心思想是，即使在绝望的情况下，也要寻找对你有利的东西，并始终对生活保持乐观和热情。
Section Ⅵ
由教材学写作
①was doing her restaurant routine when
②making it one of the most popular school books ever
③It is not the short movie but what is shown in it that
具体写作指导
1．①is mainly about ②one of the greatest fantasy novels
③Published in 1995
2．①Unfortunately; sinking into the ocean; so brave that; in spite of so many difficulties
②makes it possible; play an important part in
3．①It is the poor girl's love that ②considerate ones that
③make the readers moved deeply
④from which I have learned a lot ⑤can a person succeed
[针对练笔]
①written by Mark Twain
②Through humorous and sarcastic language
③is considered as one of the most famous works
④is very popular with teenagers
⑤a brief introduction to the story4 / 4
UNIT 2 课时检测(六) Writing
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.靓表达升级
1．Robinson Crusoe by Daniel Defoe, which is based on a true story, is one of the world's most popular adventure novels.(用过去分词作状语升级)
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2．However, on a voyage, he encounters some accidents, and is carried to a deserted island by the wind and waves.He loses touch with outside world and spends 28 hard years.(用定语从句合并句子)
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3．Fortunately, he is found and rescued eventually, and reunited with his family, bringing the abnormal life to an end.(用so that 引导的状语从句升级)
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4．The courage and perseverance to get over difficulties make him survive on the deserted island.(用强调句型对主语进行强调)
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5．He is able to find ways to solve the problem by working hard.(用“only＋状语”引导的倒装句升级)
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Ⅱ.微语境写作
1．The big day finally came.Every actor and actress ______________________ (表现出了最佳水平), ____________________________ (给观众留下了深刻的印象)．
2．We'd like to take this opportunity to combine your culture with ours by ___________________________ (改编这部中国经典动画片) for a short English play.However, ____________________________ (改编是一个相当大的挑战)．
3．Preparations started right after the discussion.Though most of us ________________________ (不擅长戏剧), we all had the confidence to have a try.We _______________________ (为戏剧做了充分的准备) and ______________________________________ (所有的男女演员都投入到排练中)．
4．The members of English Drama Club will perform the highlights of Macbeth and King Lear, which are ____________________________________________________________________ (莎士比亚的代表作，也是英国文学的瑰宝)．This is __________________________________ (一个欣赏经典的机会) and pay tribute to literary giants.
5．As you know, the English Drama Festival will be held in our school next month.We ____________________________ (计划排演一个短剧) named Alice in Wonderland, __________________________________ (它是根据一部同名电影改编的)．
Ⅲ.应用文写作
假定你是李华，你校英语俱乐部即将举办文学名著读书会。请你为莎士比亚(Shakespeare)的《威尼斯商人》(The Merchant of Venice)写一篇概要，并在读书会上与大家分享。概要的内容包括：
1．作品名称及作者； 2.剧情介绍；
3．作品的意义及你的感受。
注意：可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Ⅳ.概要写作
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
There are many good reasons for adding recycling to your routine, ranging from a personal level to a global advantage.Recycling your waste makes you more responsible in the way you use and dispose of it.As a result, people end up saving a considerable amount of money while also saving the planet.Individuals, governing bodies and companies can take pride in minimizing their waste as they are helping to reduce global environmental damage and making this earth a better place.
Apart from the environmental benefits, think of the employment that it can generate.You put your waste in different bins.The manpower involved in the logistics and processing of your waste is considerable and thus you are helping to keep people in jobs.What could be more helpful in tough economic times as now than keeping people employed
That is not all of the advantages of recycling.Many charities and community groups raise money through reusing and recycling goods.Your city has many charity shops that will take your unwanted clothes, electronics, furniture and other household items to resell as income for these non profit organizations and these donations are also tax deductible for you.Some other not for profit charities will deliver such clothing and other items to underdeveloped communities around the globe.So, think of the people in need in your local community and in other nations before you throw away all those unused or uneaten stuff into the trash can next time.
When we talk about recycling household and workplace things, we tend to ignore or are less aware of how to deal with the electrical and electronic waste.E waste is valuable as a source of secondary raw material but poisonous if disposed of improperly.Due to rapid technology development, obsolescent (过时的) items have created a fast growing mass of electronic waste around the globe.
[阅读拓展训练]
阅读七选五
A summary is a piece of writing that tells the main ideas of something.It is basically a shortened version of a larger text that describes its main points.__1__ Follow these steps when writing a summary.
Carefully review the work you're summarizing.If you are writing a summary of a written text, make sure to read it carefully.Thus, you can take note of what the author is saying and why he is saying it.__2__ Therefore, make sure to take detailed notes.
__3__ Another way to ensure you are remembering important information is to underline words as you go.If you are watching something, write down time stamps of when important things happen.This makes it easier for you to look back on them when you are writing your summary.
Write down the main points.It is time to organize your summary into sentences that make up paragraphs.It's suggested to start by writing down the main points in your own words.Make sure to write down these main points as they were presented by the author of the text.__4__
Add in supporting points.Add in some major supporting points for your main idea.While these are more detailed sentences, make sure they connect to the rest of the text.There is no need to add in minor details if they do not add any value to your summary.__5__ Maybe it was not a major plot point in the text.You only want to add general information that will give the reader a high level understanding of the text.
A．Underline important information.
B．Try to remember important information.
C．But how can you write an effective summary
D．It means that these main points should be written down in order.
E．For instance, there is no need to include the character's eye color.
F．Sometimes a minor detail can make a difference in your summary.
G．Similarly, it is advisable to write a summary about something you are hearing.
UNIT 2 课时检测(六)
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.1.Based on a true story, Robinson Crusoe by Daniel Defoe is one of the world's most popular adventure novels.
2．However, on a voyage, he encounters some accidents, and is carried to a deserted island by the wind and waves, where he loses touch with outside world and spends 28 hard years.
3．Fortunately, he is found and rescued eventually so that he is reunited with his family, bringing the abnormal life to an end.
4．It is the courage and perseverance to get over difficulties that make him survive on the deserted island.
5．Only by working hard is he able to find ways to solve the problem.
Ⅱ.1.performed at their best; impressing the audience greatly 2.adapting the classic Chinese cartoon movie; the adaptation is quite a challenge
3．were not good at drama; made good preparations for the drama; all our actors and actresses were devoted to the practice
4．the masterpieces of Shakespeare as well as the treasure of English literature; a chance to appreciate the classics
5．plan to rehearse a short play; which is based on a movie of the same title
Ⅲ.应用文写作(参考范文)
The Merchant of Venice is one of Shakespeare's plays.Bassanio, a noble but penniless Venetian, asks his friend Antonio for a loan so that he can undertake a journey to woo Portia.Antonio, whose money is invested in foreign ventures, borrows money from Shylock in order to assist Bassanio.However, if the loan can not be repaid in time, Antonio will give Shylock a pound of flesh.
News arrives that Antonio's ships have been lost at sea.Unable to get his money back, Shylock attempts to enforce a terrible revenge on Antonio, demanding his pound of flesh.However, Portia turns the tables on Shylock by an argument: he must take the flesh only, and Shylock must die if any blood is spilled.Thus, the contract is canceled.
This play, in my opinion, focuses on several main themes, such as friendship and the strength of women.It teaches me to treat others kindly and cherish friendship. Therefore, it is definitely worth reading.
Ⅳ.概要写作(参考范文)
Recycling is beneficial to the environment in terms of not only every individual but also the overall planet.(要点1) It can also help create jobs and keep people employed, generating employment.(要点2) In addition, charities and community groups can help those in need through people's recycling of goods.(要点3) We should also pay more attention to the problem of e waste.(要点4)
[阅读拓展训练]
语篇解读：本文是一篇说明文。文章主要介绍了如何写出有效的摘要。
1．选C 前文介绍了什么是摘要，后句提到写摘要的建议。所以选项C“但是怎样才能写出有效的摘要呢？”符合上下文语境。
2．选F 本段前文建议在写摘要前一定要仔细阅读文章。选项F“有时，一个微小的细节会让你的摘要大不相同”介绍了要仔细的原因，符合语境。
3．选A 空处为本段中心句。根据本段后文可知，本段主要介绍阅读文章时，应该在重要语句下面画线。所以选项A“在重要信息下面画线”可概括本段主旨，适合放在段首。
4．选D 空前一句建议将文章要点按出现的先后顺序写下来。选项D“这意味着应该按先后顺序把这些要点写下来”承接上文，符合语境。
5．选E 前句说明不用增加没有价值的小细节，选项E“比如，不用写角色的瞳色”是对上文的举例说明，符合语境。
