(共67张PPT)
Section Ⅵ
Writing
NO 1
(写作项目——Recommending cultural highlights)
NO 2
课时跟踪检测
目 录
(写作项目——Recommending cultural highlights)
本单元的写作任务是写一封电子邮件，推荐或介绍一座城市的文化亮点。推荐信是英语中常见的一种应用文体，简单地说就是在信中发表你的建议与看法。推荐信除了遵循书信的格式之外，还要求在信中针对对方的问题，给出你的观点及解决办法。
由教材学写作
一、学文体架构
(一)析教材课文
Para.1：Introduce the place recommended in New York.
Para.2：Reasons for recommendation.
Para.3：Expression of the expectation.
(二)根据教材课文呈现的推荐信，可总结出该类文体的框架结构如下：
二、学写作手法
第二段第一、三、五、六句都使用了感叹句，直观地表达了作者极力推荐这些看点的强烈情感。
仿写训练|翻译句子
①期待你的加入！
____________________________
②这个问题曾经是多么困难！
_______________________________
Looking forward to your joining!
How difficult this question has been!
三、学亮点表达
1．第一段第三句中“so many things to see and do”使用了to do不定式作后置定语修饰things，充分表达了在纽约有许多可看可做的事。最后一句为感叹句，并且使用“one of＋形容词最高级＋名词复数”的结构，表达了作者对曼哈顿中城区的强烈推荐之意。
仿写训练|完成句子
①Do you have a cup _________________
你有用来喝水的杯子吗？
②I don't trust his promise _______________.
我不相信他会来访的承诺。
to drink water with
to come for a visit
③The drum is ________________________________.
鼓是最古老的乐器之一。
④It is ____________________ she has played.
这是她所扮演过的最了不起的角色之一。
one of the oldest musical instruments
one of the greatest roles
2．第二段第一句中“with its cafés, street performers and enormous and colorful signs”使用了“with＋名词”结构作后置定语，修饰Broadway district；第四句“With your love of singing and interest”使用了“With＋名词”结构作伴随状语，with可翻译为“带有”。第三句中“showing Shakespeare, modern drama, dance shows or musicals”使用了现在分词短语作伴随状语。
仿写训练|完成句子
①China is an ancient civilized country ________________.
中国是一个历史悠久的文明古国。
②Don't speak __________________.
不要在满嘴食物的时候说话。
with a long history
with your mouth full
③“Would you like me to wrap it for you？” she asked, _______ _____.
“你想让我帮你包起来吗？”她问道，又笑了。
④We were invited to attend a private concert on a beautiful farm, ___________________________________________.
我们受邀在一个美丽的农场参加一场私人音乐会，聆听音乐家的演奏，会见友好的当地人。
smiling
again
listening to musicians and meeting friendly locals
3．第三段第一句使用了that引导的表语从句“...that we're all thinking about doing a big trip ...”，说明抽象名词news的内容。
仿写训练|完成句子
①That's ______________________.
那就是为什么他对我生气。
②It sounds _______________________________.
听起来好像有人在敲门。
why he got angry with me
as if someone is knocking at the door
③My suggestion is ________________________________.
我的建议是我们明天一早就出发。
④The problem is ________________________.
问题是我把他的地址弄丢了。
that we (should) start early tomorrow
that I have lost his address
具体写作指导
How to recommend cultural highlights ——如何推荐文化亮点
第一步：构思谋篇
Part 1 A brief introduction to a cultural highlight.
Part 2 Main body (introduce detailed features of the cultural highlight)．
Part 3 Express the expectation.
第二步：要点表达
第一部分 引入推荐对象
①_________________________ 将……强烈推荐给你
②___________________ 发现……有用/有益
③______________________ 将……考虑在内
strongly recommend ...to you
find ...useful/beneficial
take ...into consideration
④__________________________________________________, I strongly recommend you stay in Beijing, the capital and cultural center of China.
很高兴得知你将在中国待一段时间，我强烈建议你留在北京，北京是中国的首都和文化中心。
Pleased to learn that you are to spend some time in China
⑤The Palace Museum __________________________________, offering you a deeper insight into Chinese culture.
故宫博物院见证了中国的发展，让你更深入地了解中国文化。
⑥Beijing is one of the economic centers in China, _____________ ____________________________.
北京是中国的经济中心之一，它能为你提供许多就业机会。
has witnessed the development of China
which can offer
you numerous job opportunities
第二部分 介绍推荐对象的优点和特色
①The city has a long history and there are many ancient buildings in it ________________________________________ ________________.
这座城市历史悠久，有众多的古代建筑，你可以在这里观赏中国的传统建筑风格。
where you can admire the traditional Chinese
architectural style
②There are ______________________, where you can explore the city's history.
这里有很多的名胜古迹，你可以探索这座城市的历史。
③There are also some traditional Chinese snacks such as Beijing Roast Duck.You can feel typical Chinese food culture ______________.
这里还有一些中国的传统小吃，如北京烤鸭。通过品尝它们，你可以体会到独特的中国饮食文化。
plenty of places of interest
by tasting them
④There are also some activities about traditional Chinese cultures ______________, such as paper-cutting, tea-drinking, dragon dance and so on.
还有一些有关中国传统文化的活动在这座城市里举行，如剪纸、饮茶、舞龙等。
⑤Suzhou _____________________________.It's said that there are more than 100 gardens in all.
苏州以其美丽的园林而闻名。据说苏州共有100多座园林。
held in this city
is famous for its beautiful gardens
第三部分 表达期望
①I wish you _____________________________in China!
我祝愿你在中国度过一段非常快乐且有意义的时光！
②Hope my recommendation can _______________! Wish you an enjoyable and rewarding time in China!
希望我的推荐能对你有所帮助！祝你在中国过得愉快，收获颇丰！
③I'll be more than happy if you can __________________________ ____________.
如果你能考虑我的推荐，我将会非常高兴。
a very happy and meaningful time
be helpful to you
take my recommendation into
consideration
[针对练笔]
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友 Jeff 发来邮件，说他想在暑期来中国旅行，体验中国的文化和饮食。 请你用英语给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1．推荐旅游城市；
2．推荐原因；
3．祝他旅途愉快。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
根据括号内的汉语提示补全短文
Dear Jeff，
①________________________________ (得知你要到中国旅游)during the summer vacation, I'm writing to recommend Chengdu, the capital of Sichuan Province, to you.
Knowing you are travelling to China
Located in the southwest of China, Chengdu is ②______________ (如此美以至于) it attracts millions of tourists all year round.Du Fu Thatched Cottage, one of the most famous tourist attractions in Chengdu, ③__________________ (非常值得一看)．You can learn something about the well-known Chinese poet Du Fu and
so beautiful that
is well worth seeing
④_____________________________________________ (欣赏中国传统风格的公园)．Besides, you can taste hot pot there, ⑤______________ _________ (这是世界闻名的)．
I wish you a pleasant journey.
Yours，
Li Hua
appreciate the parks built in traditional Chinese style
which is famous
worldwide
写作素材储备
(一)背写作词汇
1．popularity n． 受欢迎
2．cultural diversity 文化多样性
3．historic sites 古迹
4．serve as 充当
5．get immersed in 沉浸在
6．strengthen v. 加强
7．be located in 位于
8．profound adj. 意义深远的
9．background n. 背景
10．date from/back to 追溯到
(二)背写作佳句
1．常用开头句
①Having learnt that you are coming to visit Beijing, I'd like to recommend a place of interest — the Great Wall to you.
得知你要来北京参观，我想向你推荐一个旅游胜地——长城。
②I'm very glad to have read the post that you put on the English Forum.I strongly recommend that you pay a visit to my hometown — Beijing.
我很高兴看到你在英语论坛上的帖子。我强烈推荐你到我的家乡北京来参观。
③I'm happy to receive your letter and know that you're coming to China.I'm writing to sincerely express my warmest welcome.
我很高兴收到你的来信，并得知你要来中国。我写信来真诚地表达我最热烈的欢迎。
2．常用中间句
①There are several reasons why I think the Great Wall is a good choice.
我认为长城是一个不错的选择，其原因有几个。
②When it comes to travelling in China, Baoji City, which lies in the western part of Shaanxi Province of northwest China, is a popular tourist destination.
说到在中国旅游，位于中国西北部陕西省西部的宝鸡市是一个很受欢迎的旅游目的地。
③My reasons are as follows: First, Yangzhou is an ancient city with a long history ...
我的理由如下：首先，扬州是一座历史悠久的古城……
④I'd like to tell you something about some places of interest in China.
我想告诉你一些关于中国的名胜古迹的事。
3．常用结束句
①I hope that you would take my recommendation into consideration/account.
我希望你会考虑我的建议。
②I'm looking forward to your early arrival in Beijing!
我期待着你早来北京！
③I'm confident that it will meet your requirements.
我相信它能满足你的要求。
④Hope you have a good time in China.
希望你在中国玩得开心。
No.2 课时跟踪检测
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.靓表达升级
1．There is an ancient tower in the center of the city which dates back to the Ming Dynasty.(现在分词短语作定语)
→______________________________________________________________________
There is an ancient tower in the center of the city dating back to
the Ming Dynasty.
2．Vancouver is surrounded by mountains and the Pacific Ocean.It has a mild and pleasant climate.(用定语从句升级)
→________________________________________________________________________________________
Vancouver, which is surrounded by mountains and the Pacific
Ocean, has a mild and pleasant climate.
3．Zhongshan is located in the south of the Pearl River Delta.Zhongshan is a beautiful garden city.(过去分词短语作状语)
→____________________________________________________ __________________
Located in the south of the Pearl River Delta, Zhongshan is a
beautiful garden city.
Ⅱ.微语境写作
1．___________ (此外), I intend to _______________ (带你参观) my city where you can visit Daming Lake, Baotu Spring and some other ______________ (名胜古迹)．
2．Hong Kong Ocean Park, _______________________________ (位于香港南部), is a world-famous marine life theme park.
What's more
show you around
places of interest
situated in the south of Hong Kong
3．Dali is a beautiful place _________________________________ (气候人，文化丰富), ___________________________ (吸引着全世界的目光)．
4．________________ (众所周知), Badaling is the most famous part of the Great Wall, which ________________(已成为……之一) the New Seven Wonders of the world.So far, the Great Wall at Badaling _____________________________________________ (已经接待了一亿多游客)．
with pleasant weather and rich culture
attracting the eyes of the world
As is known to us
has become one of
has received more than one hundred million visitors
5．Canada is __________________________ (我梦想的度假目的地)．I think the following places of interest ____________________(非常值得参观)．Niagara Falls, ________________ (位于) the Canada-US border, provides a unique sight for tourists.The next one that I'd like to visit is Montreal, where I can _______________________ (体验法国文化)．
my dream holiday destination
are well worth visiting
located/situated on
experience French culture
6．Kunming is among _________________________________ ____ (最著名的历史文化名城) and one of the top tourist cities in China.Due to its pleasant climate, plateau scenery, age-old history, ___________________ (多样化的民族风情), and unique plants and animals, Kunming attracts _________________________(国内外的游客) all year round.
the most famous historical and cultural
cities
diverse ethnic customs
domestic and foreign tourists
Ⅲ.应用文写作
假定你是李华，你校外教Smith准备利用即将到来的中秋节假期去北京游玩，想征询你的建议。请你给他写一封英文邮件，内容包括：
1．旅行建议(景点、美食、交通等)； 2.表达祝愿。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Dear Mr Smith，
————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
参考范文：
Dear Mr Smith，
I'm glad to provide you with some suggestions on your upcoming trip to Beijing during the Mid-Autumn Festival.
Beijing, as the capital of China, offers a rich cultural experience. The Forbidden City showcases Chinese history. The Tian'anmen Square is a symbol of China. The Great Wall offers breathtaking views. You can also explore hutongs (traditional alleyways) to experience traditional Chinese culture.
As for fine food, you can try Peking duck, Zhajiangmian and Bingtanghulu. By the way, use the subway, buses or taxis to get around. Renting a bike or using shared bicycles is also convenient.
I hope these suggestions will be helpful. Enjoy your trip to Beijing during the Mid-Autumn Festival!
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
Ⅳ.读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Rahul was a hard-working and determined individual who believed that success could only be achieved through perseverance and effort.He had big dreams of becoming a renowned musician, and he knew that it would require countless hours of practice and dedication to reach his goal.
Rahul's family was not wealthy, and they couldn't afford to buy him a musical instrument.However, Rahul's unwavering determination pushed him to find a solution.He began working odd jobs in the village, doing chores for neighbors, and saving every penny he earned.He even started waking up early in the morning to help the local farmers with their work.
After months of saving, Rahul finally had enough money to buy a second-hand guitar. It was old and worn, but to Rahul, it was a treasure.He spent hours each day practicing, strumming (弹拨) the strings and experimenting with different melodies.His fingers grew calloused (起茧的), but he never complained.Instead, he saw it as a sign of progress, a proof to his hard work.
Despite his talent, Rahul faced numerous challenges along his journey.People would often discourage him, telling him that he was wasting his time pursuing his dreams.But Rahul remained determined, using their skepticism as fuel to work even harder.
One day, news spread throughout the village about a music competition being held in the nearby city.The competition promised the winner a chance to perform in front of renowned musicians and industry professionals.Rahul saw this as an opportunity to showcase his talent and prove to everyone that hard work pays off.With great anticipation, Rahul prepared for the competition.He practiced day and night, fine-tuning his skills and perfecting his performance.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Finally, the day of the competition arrived. ____________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Days went by, and the results of the competition were announced. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考范文：
Finally, the day of the competition arrived.He traveled to the city eagerly.As Rahul took the stage, his heart was filled with a mixture of nerves and excitement.The crowd falling silent, he strummed the strings of his guitar with passion, pouring his heart and soul into his music.The audience was fascinated by his performance, and applause erupted as he finished his piece.Rahul had given it his all, and he felt a sense of accomplishment regardless of the outcome.
Days went by, and the results of the competition were announced.Rahul won the first prize.The judges praised his hard work, dedication, and the emotional connection he established through his music.He was awarded a scholarship to a famous music academy, where he could further better his skills and learn from accomplished musicians.Rahul's story spread far and wide, inspiring others with his determination and devotion.He became a symbol of the power of hard work and the belief that dreams can come true with unwavering effort.
[阅读拓展训练]
阅读七选五
First established as a state capital in 229 CE, Nanjing, China, has long been one of the country's most important (and largest) inland river ports and is recognized as one of the Four Great Ancient Capitals of China.
Why do people love it
1 Xuanwu Lake provides a peaceful escape right in central Nanjing, with temples, teahouses and restaurants located in nearby Xuanwu Lake Park. Unlike city walls in Beijing or Xi'an, Nanjing's old wall isn't geometric and instead contours the lake and mountain areas. ___ The sense of surprise delivered by these central natural expanses, like the Yangtze River, Zhongshan Mountain range and Xuanwu Lake, is what new residents love about living here.
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What's it like living here
For those who miss the foods of home, there's no shortage of foreign restaurants and cafes that cater to expats (旅居国外者) and international students. 3 Nanjing has an efficient and expansive metro system that covers most of the city, but cycling is also an option, with bike-friendly wide and straight roads.
Residents rave about how affordable Nanjing is compared to other Chinese cities, especially when it comes to housing. 4 That said, the weather can be rough in winter, since most buildings lack central heating. Summers are also very hot and humid.
In general, a certain traditionalism and conservatism can be felt more strongly here than in other Chinese cities, which can make it more of a challenge to make local friends quickly. The language and cultural barrier tends to be high. ____
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A．Getting around the city is easy.
B．The city also has plenty of low-key and live-music clubs.
C．As a result, natural sites often appear in unexpected areas of the city.
D．Rent for an 85-sq-m apartment is more than 50% cheaper than Beijing and 65% less than Shanghai.
E．If you want to experience more of Nanjing's past, Lao Men Dong is a must-see.
F．So learning and speaking Mandarin Chinese can help with integrating into the local community.
G．Though home to 8.3 million people, Nanjing is one of the few big cities left in China to offer easy access to peace.
语篇解读：本文是一篇说明文。文章主要介绍了南京的历史和受欢迎的原因。
1．选G 根据后文“Xuanwu Lake provides a peaceful escape right in central Nanjing, with temples, teahouses and restaurants located in nearby Xuanwu Lake Park.”可知，G项符合语境。其中peace与后文provides a peaceful escape形成呼应关系。
2．选C 根据后文“The sense of surprise delivered by these central natural expanses, like the Yangtze River, Zhongshan Mountain range and Xuanwu Lake, is what new residents love about living here.”可知，C项符合语境。后文是对C项的具体解释。C项中的unexpected areas与后文中的The sense of surprise delivered by these central natural expanses形成呼应。
3．选A 根据后文“Nanjing has an efficient and expansive metro system that covers most of the city”可知，A项符合语境。后文是对A项的具体解释。A项中的easy与后文Nanjing has an efficient and expansive metro system相呼应。
4．选D 根据前文“Residents rave about how affordable Nanjing is compared to other Chinese cities, especially when it comes to housing.”可知，D项符合语境，具体解释上文。D项中的more than 50% cheaper than Beijing and 65% less than Shanghai与前文中的affordable形成呼应关系。
5．选F 根据前文“The language and cultural barrier tends to be high.”可知，F项符合语境，前后句为因果关系。F项中的learning and speaking Mandarin Chinese与前文The language and cultural barrier相呼应。1 / 6
Section Ⅵ Writing
写作项目——Recommending cultural highlights
本单元的写作任务是写一封电子邮件，推荐或介绍一座城市的文化亮点。推荐信是英语中常见的一种应用文体，简单地说就是在信中发表你的建议与看法。推荐信除了遵循书信的格式之外，还要求在信中针对对方的问题，给出你的观点及解决办法。
由教材学写作
一、学文体架构
(一)析教材课文
Para.1：Introduce the place recommended in New York.
Para.2：Reasons for recommendation.
Para.3：Expression of the expectation.
(二)根据教材课文呈现的推荐信，可总结出该类文体的框架结构如下：
二、学写作手法
第二段第一、三、五、六句都使用了感叹句，直观地表达了作者极力推荐这些看点的强烈情感。
[仿写训练|翻译句子]
①期待你的加入！
________________________________________________________________________
②这个问题曾经是多么困难！
________________________________________________________________________
三、学亮点表达
1．第一段第三句中“so many things to see and do”使用了to do不定式作后置定语修饰things，充分表达了在纽约有许多可看可做的事。最后一句为感叹句，并且使用“one of＋形容词最高级＋名词复数”的结构，表达了作者对曼哈顿中城区的强烈推荐之意。
[仿写训练|完成句子]
①Do you have a cup _____________________________________
你有用来喝水的杯子吗？
②I don't trust his promise __________________.
我不相信他会来访的承诺。
③The drum is ____________________________.
鼓是最古老的乐器之一。
④It is ______________________ she has played.
这是她所扮演过的最了不起的角色之一。
2．第二段第一句中“with its cafés, street performers and enormous and colorful signs”使用了“with＋名词”结构作后置定语，修饰Broadway district；第四句“With your love of singing and interest”使用了“With＋名词”结构作伴随状语，with可翻译为“带有”。第三句中“showing Shakespeare, modern drama, dance shows or musicals”使用了现在分词短语作伴随状语。
[仿写训练|完成句子]
①China is an ancient civilized country __________________________.
中国是一个历史悠久的文明古国。
②Don't speak ________________________.
不要在满嘴食物的时候说话。
③“Would you like me to wrap it for you？” she asked, ______________.
“你想让我帮你包起来吗？”她问道，又笑了。
④We were invited to attend a private concert on a beautiful farm, _____________________.
我们受邀在一个美丽的农场参加一场私人音乐会，聆听音乐家的演奏，会见友好的当地人。
3．第三段第一句使用了that引导的表语从句“...that we're all thinking about doing a big trip ...”，说明抽象名词news的内容。
[仿写训练|完成句子]
①That's _________________________________________________.
那就是为什么他对我生气。
②It sounds ______________________________.
听起来好像有人在敲门。
③My suggestion is ________________________________________.
我的建议是我们明天一早就出发。
④The problem is ________________________.
问题是我把他的地址弄丢了。
具体写作指导
How to recommend cultural highlights
——如何推荐文化亮点
第一步：构思谋篇
Part 1 A brief introduction to a cultural highlight.
Part 2 Main body (introduce detailed features of the cultural highlight)．
Part 3 Express the expectation.
第二步：要点表达
第一部分 引入推荐对象
①______________ 将……强烈推荐给你
②______________ 发现……有用/有益
③______________ 将……考虑在内
④________________________________________________________， I strongly recommend you stay in Beijing, the capital and cultural center of China.
很高兴得知你将在中国待一段时间，我强烈建议你留在北京，北京是中国的首都和文化中心。
⑤The Palace Museum __________________________________________， offering you a deeper insight into Chinese culture.
故宫博物院见证了中国的发展，让你更深入地了解中国文化。
⑥Beijing is one of the economic centers in China, ___________________________.
北京是中国的经济中心之一，它能为你提供许多就业机会。
第二部分 介绍推荐对象的优点和特色
①The city has a long history and there are many ancient buildings in it __________________________________________________.
这座城市历史悠久，有众多的古代建筑，你可以在这里观赏中国的传统建筑风格。
②There are ________________________， where you can explore the city's history.
这里有很多的名胜古迹，你可以探索这座城市的历史。
③There are also some traditional Chinese snacks such as Beijing Roast Duck.You can feel typical Chinese food culture ____________.
这里还有一些中国的传统小吃，如北京烤鸭。通过品尝它们，你可以体会到独特的中国饮食文化。
④There are also some activities about traditional Chinese cultures ________________， such as paper cutting, tea drinking, dragon dance and so on.还有一些有关中国传统文化的活动在这座城市里举行，如剪纸、饮茶、舞龙等。
⑤Suzhou ______________________.It's said that there are more than 100 gardens in all.
苏州以其美丽的园林而闻名。据说苏州共有100多座园林。
第三部分 表达期望
①I wish you ________________________________________ in China!
我祝愿你在中国度过一段非常快乐且有意义的时光！
②Hope my recommendation can ______________________！ Wish you an enjoyable and rewarding time in China!
希望我的推荐能对你有所帮助！祝你在中国过得愉快，收获颇丰！
③I'll be more than happy if you can __________________________________________.
如果你能考虑我的推荐，我将会非常高兴。
[针对练笔]
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友 Jeff 发来邮件，说他想在暑期来中国旅行，体验中国的文化和饮食。 请你用英语给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1．推荐旅游城市；
2．推荐原因；
3．祝他旅途愉快。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
根据括号内的汉语提示补全短文
Dear Jeff，
①__________________________________ (得知你要到中国旅游) during the summer vacation, I'm writing to recommend Chengdu, the capital of Sichuan Province, to you.
Located in the southwest of China, Chengdu is ②______________________ (如此美以至于) it attracts millions of tourists all year round.Du Fu Thatched Cottage, one of the most famous tourist attractions in Chengdu, ③________________________ (非常值得一看)．You can learn something about the well known Chinese poet Du Fu and ④__________________________________________ (欣赏中国传统风格的公园)．Besides, you can taste hot pot there, ⑤______________________ (这是世界闻名的)．
I wish you a pleasant journey.
Yours，
Li Hua
写作素材储备
(一)背写作词汇
1．popularity n． 受欢迎
2．cultural diversity 文化多样性
3．historic sites 古迹
4．serve as 充当
5．get immersed in 沉浸在
6．strengthen v. 加强
7．be located in 位于
8．profound adj. 意义深远的
9．background n. 背景
10．date from/back to 追溯到
(二)背写作佳句
1．常用开头句
①Having learnt that you are coming to visit Beijing, I'd like to recommend a place of interest — the Great Wall to you.
得知你要来北京参观，我想向你推荐一个旅游胜地——长城。
②I'm very glad to have read the post that you put on the English Forum.I strongly recommend that you pay a visit to my hometown — Beijing.
我很高兴看到你在英语论坛上的帖子。我强烈推荐你到我的家乡北京来参观。
③I'm happy to receive your letter and know that you're coming to China.I'm writing to sincerely express my warmest welcome.
我很高兴收到你的来信，并得知你要来中国。我写信来真诚地表达我最热烈的欢迎。
2．常用中间句
①There are several reasons why I think the Great Wall is a good choice.
我认为长城是一个不错的选择，其原因有几个。
②When it comes to travelling in China, Baoji City, which lies in the western part of Shaanxi Province of northwest China, is a popular tourist destination.
说到在中国旅游，位于中国西北部陕西省西部的宝鸡市是一个很受欢迎的旅游目的地。
③My reasons are as follows: First, Yangzhou is an ancient city with a long history ...
我的理由如下：首先，扬州是一座历史悠久的古城……
④I'd like to tell you something about some places of interest in China.
我想告诉你一些关于中国的名胜古迹的事。
3．常用结束句
①I hope that you would take my recommendation into consideration/account.
我希望你会考虑我的建议。
②I'm looking forward to your early arrival in Beijing!
我期待着你早来北京！
③I'm confident that it will meet your requirements.
我相信它能满足你的要求。
④Hope you have a good time in China.
希望你在中国玩得开心。
Section Ⅵ
由教材学写作
二、①Looking forward to your joining!
②How difficult this question has been!
三、1.①to drink water with ②to come for a visit
③one of the oldest musical instruments
④one of the greatest roles
2．①with a long history ②with your mouth full ③smiling again
④listening to musicians and meeting friendly locals
3．①why he got angry with me
②as if someone is knocking at the door
③that we (should) start early tomorrow
④that I have lost his address
具体写作指导
第二步 第一部分：①strongly recommend ...to you
②find ...useful/beneficial ③take ...into consideration
④Pleased to learn that you are to spend some time in China
⑤has witnessed the development of China
⑥which can offer you numerous job opportunities
第二部分：①where you can admire the traditional Chinese architectural style ②plenty of places of interest
③by tasting them ④held in this city
⑤is famous for its beautiful gardens
第三部分：①a very happy and meaningful time
②be helpful to you
③take my recommendation into consideration
[针对练笔]
①Knowing you are travelling to China ②so beautiful that
③is well worth seeing
④appreciate the parks built in traditional Chinese style
⑤which is famous worldwide3 / 4
UNIT 3 课时检测(六) Writing
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.靓表达升级
1．There is an ancient tower in the center of the city which dates back to the Ming Dynasty.(现在分词短语作定语)
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2．Vancouver is surrounded by mountains and the Pacific Ocean.It has a mild and pleasant climate.(用定语从句升级)
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3．Zhongshan is located in the south of the Pearl River Delta.Zhongshan is a beautiful garden city.(过去分词短语作状语)
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Ⅱ.微语境写作
1．______________ (此外), I intend to ______________ (带你参观) my city where you can visit Daming Lake, Baotu Spring and some other ______________ (名胜古迹)．
2．Hong Kong Ocean Park, __________________________________ (位于香港南部), is a world famous marine life theme park.
3．Dali is a beautiful place ______________________________________ (气候宜人，文化丰富), ______________________ (吸引着全世界的目光)．
4．__________________ (众所周知), Badaling is the most famous part of the Great Wall, which ____________________ (已成为……之一) the New Seven Wonders of the world.So far, the Great Wall at Badaling ______________________________________________ (已经接待了一亿多游客)．
5．Canada is ____________________________ (我梦想的度假目的地)．I think the following places of interest ____________________ (非常值得参观)．Niagara Falls, __________________ (位于) the Canada US border, provides a unique sight for tourists.The next one that I'd like to visit is Montreal, where I can ______________________ (体验法国文化)．
6．Kunming is among __________________________________________ (最著名的历史文化名城) and one of the top tourist cities in China.Due to its pleasant climate, plateau scenery, age old history, __________________________ (多样化的民族风情), and unique plants and animals, Kunming attracts ____________________________ (国内外的游客) all year round.
Ⅲ.应用文写作
假定你是李华，你校外教Smith准备利用即将到来的中秋节假期去北京游玩，想征询你的建议。请你给他写一封英文邮件，内容包括：
1．旅行建议(景点、美食、交通等)； 2.表达祝愿。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Dear Mr Smith，
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
Ⅳ.读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Rahul was a hard working and determined individual who believed that success could only be achieved through perseverance and effort.He had big dreams of becoming a renowned musician, and he knew that it would require countless hours of practice and dedication to reach his goal.
Rahul's family was not wealthy, and they couldn't afford to buy him a musical instrument.However, Rahul's unwavering determination pushed him to find a solution.He began working odd jobs in the village, doing chores for neighbors, and saving every penny he earned.He even started waking up early in the morning to help the local farmers with their work.
After months of saving, Rahul finally had enough money to buy a second hand guitar. It was old and worn, but to Rahul, it was a treasure.He spent hours each day practicing, strumming (弹拨) the strings and experimenting with different melodies.His fingers grew calloused (起茧的), but he never complained.Instead, he saw it as a sign of progress, a proof to his hard work.
Despite his talent, Rahul faced numerous challenges along his journey.People would often discourage him, telling him that he was wasting his time pursuing his dreams.But Rahul remained determined, using their skepticism as fuel to work even harder.
One day, news spread throughout the village about a music competition being held in the nearby city.The competition promised the winner a chance to perform in front of renowned musicians and industry professionals.Rahul saw this as an opportunity to showcase his talent and prove to everyone that hard work pays off.With great anticipation, Rahul prepared for the competition.He practiced day and night, fine tuning his skills and perfecting his performance.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Finally, the day of the competition arrived.
Days went by, and the results of the competition were announced.
[阅读拓展训练]
阅读七选五
First established as a state capital in 229 CE, Nanjing, China, has long been one of the country's most important (and largest) inland river ports and is recognized as one of the Four Great Ancient Capitals of China.
Why do people love it
__1__ Xuanwu Lake provides a peaceful escape right in central Nanjing, with temples, teahouses and restaurants located in nearby Xuanwu Lake Park. Unlike city walls in Beijing or Xi'an, Nanjing's old wall isn't geometric and instead contours the lake and mountain areas. __2__ The sense of surprise delivered by these central natural expanses, like the Yangtze River, Zhongshan Mountain range and Xuanwu Lake, is what new residents love about living here.
What's it like living here
For those who miss the foods of home, there's no shortage of foreign restaurants and cafes that cater to expats (旅居国外者) and international students. __3__ Nanjing has an efficient and expansive metro system that covers most of the city, but cycling is also an option, with bike friendly wide and straight roads.
Residents rave about how affordable Nanjing is compared to other Chinese cities, especially when it comes to housing. __4__ That said, the weather can be rough in winter, since most buildings lack central heating. Summers are also very hot and humid.
In general, a certain traditionalism and conservatism can be felt more strongly here than in other Chinese cities, which can make it more of a challenge to make local friends quickly. The language and cultural barrier tends to be high. __5__
A．Getting around the city is easy.
B．The city also has plenty of low key and live music clubs.
C．As a result, natural sites often appear in unexpected areas of the city.
D．Rent for an 85 sq m apartment is more than 50% cheaper than Beijing and 65% less than Shanghai.
E．If you want to experience more of Nanjing's past, Lao Men Dong is a must see.
F．So learning and speaking Mandarin Chinese can help with integrating into the local community.
G．Though home to 8.3 million people, Nanjing is one of the few big cities left in China to offer easy access to peace.
UNIT 3 课时检测(六)
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.1.There is an ancient tower in the center of the city dating back to the Ming Dynasty.
2．Vancouver, which is surrounded by mountains and the Pacific Ocean, has a mild and pleasant climate.
3．Located in the south of the Pearl River Delta, Zhongshan is a beautiful garden city.
Ⅱ.1.What's more; show you around; places of interest
2．situated in the south of Hong Kong
3．with pleasant weather and rich culture; attracting the eyes of the world
4．As is known to us; has become one of; has received more than one hundred million visitors
5．my dream holiday destination; are well worth visiting; located/situated on; experience French culture
6．the most famous historical and cultural cities; diverse ethnic customs; domestic and foreign tourists
Ⅲ.应用文写作(参考范文)
Dear Mr Smith，
I'm glad to provide you with some suggestions on your upcoming trip to Beijing during the Mid Autumn Festival.
Beijing, as the capital of China, offers a rich cultural experience. The Forbidden City showcases Chinese history. The Tian'anmen Square is a symbol of China. The Great Wall offers breathtaking views. You can also explore hutongs (traditional alleyways) to experience traditional Chinese culture.
As for fine food, you can try Peking duck, Zhajiangmian and Bingtanghulu. By the way, use the subway, buses or taxis to get around. Renting a bike or using shared bicycles is also convenient.
I hope these suggestions will be helpful. Enjoy your trip to Beijing during the Mid Autumn Festival!
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
Ⅳ.读后续写(参考范文)
Finally, the day of the competition arrived.He traveled to the city eagerly.As Rahul took the stage, his heart was filled with a mixture of nerves and excitement.The crowd falling silent, he strummed the strings of his guitar with passion, pouring his heart and soul into his music.The audience was fascinated by his performance, and applause erupted as he finished his piece.Rahul had given it his all, and he felt a sense of accomplishment regardless of the outcome.
Days went by, and the results of the competition were announced.Rahul won the first prize.The judges praised his hard work, dedication, and the emotional connection he established through his music.He was awarded a scholarship to a famous music academy, where he could further better his skills and learn from accomplished musicians.Rahul's story spread far and wide, inspiring others with his determination and devotion.He became a symbol of the power of hard work and the belief that dreams can come true with unwavering effort.
[阅读拓展训练]
语篇解读：本文是一篇说明文。文章主要介绍了南京的历史和受欢迎的原因。
1．选G 根据后文“Xuanwu Lake provides a peaceful escape right in central Nanjing, with temples, teahouses and restaurants located in nearby Xuanwu Lake Park.”可知，G项符合语境。其中peace与后文provides a peaceful escape形成呼应关系。
2．选C 根据后文“The sense of surprise delivered by these central natural expanses, like the Yangtze River, Zhongshan Mountain range and Xuanwu Lake, is what new residents love about living here.”可知，C项符合语境。后文是对C项的具体解释。C项中的unexpected areas与后文中的The sense of surprise delivered by these central natural expanses形成呼应。
3．选A 根据后文“Nanjing has an efficient and expansive metro system that covers most of the city”可知，A项符合语境。后文是对A项的具体解释。A项中的easy与后文Nanjing has an efficient and expansive metro system相呼应。
4．选D 根据前文“Residents rave about how affordable Nanjing is compared to other Chinese cities, especially when it comes to housing.”可知，D项符合语境，具体解释上文。D项中的more than 50% cheaper than Beijing and 65% less than Shanghai与前文中的affordable形成呼应关系。
5．选F 根据前文“The language and cultural barrier tends to be high.”可知，F项符合语境，前后句为因果关系。F项中的learning and speaking Mandarin Chinese与前文The language and cultural barrier相呼应。
