(共58张PPT)
Section Ⅵ
Writing
NO 1
(写作项目——Writing a book review)
NO 2
课时跟踪检测
目 录
(写作项目——Writing a book review)
本单元的写作任务是写一篇书评。书评作为一种重要的应用文写作文体，主要是对书籍或文学作品进行介绍和评论的文章。书评是以“书”为对象，实事求是地、有见解地分析图书的内容，探讨作品的思想性、学术性、知识性和艺术性，从而在作者、读者与出版商之间构建信息交流的渠道。
一、学文体架构
(一)析教材课文
Para.1：General facts about the book
Para.2：Plot of the book
Para.3：Comments
Para.4：Conclusion and recommendation
由教材学写作
(二)根据教材呈现的书评总结出该类文体的框架：
二、学写作手法
第一段开门见山地简介书名、作者及对该书的总体评价等基本信息。这种写作手法直入主题，清晰简洁。
三、学逻辑衔接
最后一段进行总结，并和第一段相呼应，使得“总—分—总”文章的结构完整，同时又照应主题，并增强了感染力。
四、学情感表达
1．在进行图书评论时，评论者应先指出需要点评的地方，然后再进行评论。例如第三段第一句属于点评内容，第二句作者用I like it because ...展开评论。后面也采用类似的方法，如：I was really touched by the line；because it shows ...等句子进行评论。
2．最后一段使用Personally这一副词开头，表达评论者自己的观点。touching一词画龙点睛，评论者对作品的喜爱跃然纸上。
五、学亮点表达
1．亮点词汇
(1)第一段首句中使用高级词汇illustrate，强调作品的特点。
(2)最后一段使用touching以及让步状语从句的省略结构whatever their age，照应第一段中的fantasy, children及adults，使得文章首尾呼应，浑然一体。
2．亮点句式
(1)第二段首句使用It tells a story about ...这一常用句式来概述图书内容，语言简洁明了。
(2)第二段介绍故事情节时，共使用了两句话。评论者为了避免语言的重复，分别使用了While引导的状语从句和动词-ing形式作状语，使语言表达富有变化。
(3)最后一段虽然只有一句话，但用词简洁，寓意深刻，提升了表达效果。
[仿写训练|完成句子]
①It _________________ a diligent peasant and the ups and downs of his family.
它讲述了一个勤劳的农民及其家庭兴衰的故事。
tells a story about
②____________________________, the sweet memories will never fade away.
无论未来发生什么，甜蜜的回忆永远不会消逝。
③_______________________, we discussed the great artists' works.
参观艺术展时，我们讨论了这些伟大艺术家的作品。
Whatever happens in the future
Visiting the art exhibition
How to write a book review in English ——如何用英语写书评
第一步：构思谋篇
具体写作指导
Part 1 to introduce the author, genre, written time, publishing house, etc.of a book
Part 2 to give a brief description of it
Part 3 to make a brief review
第二步：要点表达
第一部分 对书的基本信息进行简要介绍
1．作品类型有哪些？
①____________ 科幻小说
②_______________ 奇幻文学
③__________________ 爱情小说
science fiction
fantasy literature
romantic novel/story
④_________________ 侦探小说
⑤____________________ 冒险小说
⑥biography _____
⑦autobiography _____
⑧documentary works _________
⑨essay ___________
detective novel/story
adventure novel/story
传记
自传
纪实作品
散文；杂文
2．如何介绍书的作者和创作/出版时间？
①Jane Eyre _______________ the British writer Charlotte Bront.
《简·爱》是由英国作家夏洛蒂·勃朗特创作的。
②________________，the book is popular among teenagers.
这本书出版于2010年，很受青少年欢迎。
③Robinson Crusoe is ____________________________ Daniel Defoe, which is worth reading.
《鲁滨孙漂流记》是著名小说家丹尼尔·笛福的作品，值得一读。
was written by
Published in 2010
the work of the famous novelist
第二部分 介绍书的故事梗概
1．故事的背景
①_________________ a village in the eastern part of Scotland.
故事背景是在苏格兰东部的一个乡村。
The story is set in
②_____________________________, and in places as far away as the deserts of western China.
故事发生在上海以及远至中国西部的沙漠地带。
③Harry Potter _________________________ a brave and good-natured boy who has magic power.
《哈利·波特》讲述了一个拥有魔法，勇敢、善良的男孩的故事。
The story takes place in Shanghai
tells a story concerned with
2．故事的关键信息(可参考下面模板)
The story is set in ， telling .However， .
Therefore， .
第三部分 对作品进行客观公正的评论
1．“评价”类词汇
①_________ 幽默的
②_______________ 感人的
③_______ 使人兴奋的；令人激动的
④______________________ 感人且有教育意义的
⑤________ 优秀的；卓越的
humorous
moving/touching
exciting
touching and educational
excellent
⑥extraordinary ____________________________
⑦amusing ________________
⑧thought-provoking ___________
⑨inspiring ___________
非凡的；特别的；非常奇特的
有趣的；好玩的
发人深思的
鼓舞人心的
2．总结和评价
①In fact, the novel is __________________ I can learn a lot from it.
事实上，这本小说的故事很有意义，我从中可以学到很多东西。
②I think everyone should read it and __________________________.
我想每个人都应该读一读这本书，并从中体会这种美妙的经历。
so meaningful that
get this wonderful experience
③Generally speaking, considered in many aspects, The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn is ____________________________.
总的来说，从多方面来看，《哈克贝利·费恩历险记》是一部美国文学的经典之作。
④_____________________________, I think whatever happens to us, we should never lose hope, kindness or braveness.
(我)被这个鼓舞人心的故事感动了。我想无论发生什么，我们都不应该失去希望、善良和勇敢。
a classic in American literature
Moved by this inspirational story
⑤The novel ____________________________ readers with its humorous language and profound meaning, and was reprinted many times.
这部小说语言幽默，寓意深刻，深受读者欢迎并多次再版。
enjoyed great popularity with
[针对练笔]
假定你在校英文论坛上看到大家在讨论自己最喜欢的课外书。请你根据所给提示，向同学们推荐你最喜爱的文学读物《秘密花园》(The Secret Garden)。
作者 美国作家弗朗西丝·霍奇森·伯内特(Frances Hodgson Burnett)
故事梗概 性格孤僻的玛丽无意中发现了一个废弃的花园。在新结识的朋友们的帮助下，玛丽使花园恢复了生机，同时，她也变得开朗起来。
感悟 面对挫折时，要敞开心扉，笑对人生。
参考范文：
The literary masterpiece The Secret Garden, written by American author Frances Hodgson Burnett, is well worth recommending.
The Secret Garden portrays the growth of a lonely girl named Mary, who comes across a deserted garden.With the assistance of her new friends, Mary ultimately brings it back to life, which transforms her into a cheerful girl in the meanwhile.
The book is not only a heart-warming read but also conveys an inspiring truth: It is wise of us to unlock the secrets of our hearts and embrace the support of those around us.Thus, we can rise to challenges in life with a smile.
第一部分：书本简介
1．The famous Chinese novel I've recently read is ..., written by ...
我最近读的那部著名的中文小说是……它是由……写的。
2．This is a novel written by the English author ..., published in 1719.
这部小说是由英国作家……写的，出版于1719年。
写作素材储备
3．Published in ..., the book is popular among teenagers.
出版于……年，这本书很受青少年欢迎。
4．This great piece of literature was written by ...in 1994.
这部伟大的文学作品是由……于1994年写的。
第二部分：故事梗概
1．The story is set in ...
故事的背景设在……
2．The story is concerned with ...
故事是关于……
3．The book tells a story about ...
这本书讲述了……
4．This book is a growing-up story about a lonely girl ...
这本书是关于一个孤独女孩的成长故事……
第三部分：表达感悟
1．The book is well worth reading, as ...
这本书很值得阅读，因为……
2．This wonderful book shows us that we should uncover ...and be open to people who help us.
这本精彩的书向我们展示了：我们应该揭开……并对帮助我们的人敞开心扉。
3．A positive attitude can help us to overcome challenges in life more easily.
积极的态度可以帮助我们轻而易举地克服生活中的挑战。
4．We can learn to be brave and confident in ourselves from ...
我们可以从……中学到勇敢和自信。
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.靓表达升级
1．The book was written by an American writer.It was a love story.(用过去分词作定语升级)
The book written by an American writer was a love story.
No.2 课时跟踪检测
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2．One of my favorite books is Teahouse.It is set in a typical, old Beijing teahouse.(用定语从句升级)
One of my favorite books is Teahouse, which is set in a typical, old Beijing teahouse.
3．The old servant Tom in the book impressed me most.(用what 引导的主语从句升级)
What impressed me most in the book is the old servant Tom.
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4．I was really inspired by the words spoken by the hero and heroine of the book.(用what引导的宾语从句升级)
I was really inspired by what the hero and heroine of the book spoke.
5．The family in the book overcame varieties of difficulties with great courage and determination.(用强调句升级，强调状语)
It was with great courage and determination that the family in the book overcame varieties of difficulties.
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Ⅱ.微语境写作
1．I think ___________________________ (这本书非常值得读) as it carries the main idea that justice can always beat evil.
2．It is one of my favorite novels, ___________________________
_______________ (以伦敦为背景，发表于17世纪)．
3．________________________ (阅读原著作品) is better than seeing the film based on it.
the book is well worth reading
set in London and published in
the 17th century
Reading the original work
4．It _________________ (讲述了一个关于……的故事) the daughter of a manor (庄园) who shows great perseverance.
5．In my opinion, this is a touching story that everyone should enjoy, _________________ (不管多大年龄)．
6．Those _____________________ (读过这本书的人) think highly of it.
tells a story about
whatever their age
who have read the book
Ⅲ.应用文写作
假定你是李华，你最近读了美国著名作家欧内斯特·海明威的小说《老人与海》，十分佩服小说中老渔夫的意志，懂得了一个人一定要有坚持不懈的精神，才能获得成功的道理。请用英语写一篇书评，并向英语杂志社投稿。主要内容如下：
1．作者与作品的信息；
2．书的大致内容；
3．你的评价。
参考范文：
The book The Old Man and the Sea was written by Ernest Hemingway.The hero is an old fisherman named Santiago.
The novel tells a story about how the hero fights against a very large fish, which is difficult to cope with.Even faced with the threat from a shark, he finally succeeds in bringing the fish out of the sea.
By reading the book, we can feel the old man's strong determination to be ready to overcome the hardship that he is faced with, and this helps us to be stronger and determined when we face challenges.
Personally, I think this is a touching story that will motivate everyone, whatever their age.
Ⅳ.片段续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“Here you go.Up, up and away，” Chrissy yelled, as she pushed her little brother, Russell, on the swing (秋千)．Russell smiled and kicked his feet.“Higher! Higher！” he shouted.“Okay, hang on.Here you go！” Chrissy stood forward and gave the swing an extra hard push.“Help！” Suddenly, Russell screamed.
The swing flew so high that it seemed that it might go flying off into the sky.Russell started to cry just as their mom came running over.“I'm sorry, Russell，” Chrissy said.“I didn't mean to scare you.I guess I pushed a little too hard.” Their mom was angry with Chrissy and shouted, “Was it a little too hard That was way too hard, Chrissy! How could you be so irresponsible？” Hearing the word “irresponsible”， Chrissy cried with tears filling her brown eyes.
A week before, her teacher had told her that she was irresponsible for being late for class.And a few days before her dad had used the word “irresponsible” when he blamed her for not hanging up her clothes.“I'm sorry, Mom，” Chrissy said sadly.She turned away and started to walk slowly down the path that wound through the park.That unpleasant word “irresponsible” kept going through Chrissy's head.
Suddenly, Chrissy saw a little girl walking across the grass, heading up a small hill.Chrissy looked around for the parent, but there was no one else in sight.Chrissy knew there was a running stream on the other side of that hill.“It's dangerous，” Chrissy thought.She ran as fast as she could towards the little girl.When she reached the girl, she stepped in front of her, stopping her from running towards the water.
Chrissy picked up the little girl and carried her towards the playground, looking anxiously for her mother.“Where's your mommy？” she asked the little girl, although she thought the girl was probably too young to talk.She was surprised when the little girl pointed to a distant house on the other side of the fence.
Walking close, Chrissy noticed a small hole in the fence where the little girl might have climbed out.In front of a house, Chrissy could see a policeman talking to a woman who looked upset.“Is this your girl？” Chrissy called out.Then the woman and the policeman came running towards the fence.Minutes later, the girl was in the arms of her mom.
注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．要求逻辑通顺，情节合理，着重描写Chrissy个人形象的转变。
参考范文 ：
Just then, Chrissy's mom and her brother Russell came looking for her.The policeman told them that Chrissy had probably saved the girl's life.“You have a very responsible daughter there，” the policeman said to Chrissy's mom.Hearing that, her mom smiled proudly.The next day, the headline in the newspaper read: Responsible Nine-Year-Old Girl Saves A Baby — with an article about Chrissy.
After reading it, her parents said, “We're proud of you, Chrissy.You are really a responsible young lady.” Feeling inspired, Chrissy now is never late for school.She almost always remembers to hang up her clothes, and is careful when she pushes Russell on the swing.And nobody ever calls her “irresponsible” anymore.
[阅读拓展训练]
阅读七选五
In the most basic sense, self-regulation (自我调节) involves controlling one's behavior and thoughts in pursuit (追求) of long-term goals.Generally，people who are good at self-regulation tend to see the good in others and view challenges as opportunities.They exactly know what they want to achieve，act in accordance with their views，and devote their best effort. 1
2 A bad-tempered child who hits others will be tiresome at school.An adult with poor self-regulation skills may lack self-confidence.He may have difficulty handling stress, and often, this might be expressed in terms of anger and anxiety.
How do problems with self-regulation develop？It could start early when a baby isn't treated with enough care. 3 Later, an adult may struggle with self-regulation, either because this ability wasn't developed during childhood, or because of a lack of skill in managing difficult feelings.When left unchecked, over time this could lead to risky behavior.
4 One of the most frequently used methods is to change your thought patterns, which means that you think about a situation in a positive way, rather than one that's likely to increase negative emotions. 5 Rather than thinking that this reflects something about yourself such as “My friend hates me”， you might instead think, “My friend must be really busy”．
A．Try to cheer yourself up after disappointment.
B．Do the usual series of things at a particular time.
C．A child who doesn't feel safe may have trouble self-regulating.
D．A lack of self-regulation will cause problems in life.
E．Anyhow, self-regulation is so important that we should learn to use this skill.
F．For example, imagine a friend who doesn't return your calls or texts for several days.
G．Also they can calm themselves when feeling upset and cheer themselves when feeling down.
语篇解读：本文是一篇说明文。文章讲述自我调节在人成长过程中的重要性。自我调节可以帮助我们缓解压力，缺乏自我调节能力则会导致各种各样的问题，所以我们要学会自我调节。
1．选G 空前讲述擅长自我调节的人是什么样的，G项继续讲述擅长自我调节的人在心情烦闷或情绪低落时会如何做，与上文是递进关系，符合语境。
2．选D 空处考查段落主旨句。根据下文“A bad-tempered ...may lack self-confidence.”可知，下文讲的是如果缺乏自我调节能力，就会产生不好的影响，所以此段说的是缺乏自我调节能力的消极影响，D项可以概括本段内容，符合语境。
3．选C 上文讲述和婴儿相关的自我调节问题，下文阐述成年人缺乏自我调节能力的原因，所以此处应该讲和孩子相关的自我调节问题。故C项符合语境。
4．选E 根据下文“One of the ...increase negative emotions.”可知，下文讲述的是自我调节的方法。E项指出，我们应该学会自我调节，与下文讲述自我调节的方法衔接自然，符合语境。
5．选F 根据下文“Rather than ...‘My friend must be really busy’．”可知，当好几天都没有收到朋友的电话或短信回复时，不要想朋友讨厌自己，而应该想朋友一定很忙。此处是在举例，列举了有关朋友的例子，F项符合语境。1 / 6
Section Ⅵ Writing
写作项目——Writing a book review
本单元的写作任务是写一篇书评。书评作为一种重要的应用文写作文体，主要是对书籍或文学作品进行介绍和评论的文章。书评是以“书”为对象，实事求是地、有见解地分析图书的内容，探讨作品的思想性、学术性、知识性和艺术性，从而在作者、读者与出版商之间构建信息交流的渠道。
由教材学写作
一、学文体架构
(一)析教材课文
Para.1：General facts about the book
Para.2：Plot of the book
Para.3：Comments
Para.4：Conclusion and recommendation
(二)根据教材呈现的书评总结出该类文体的框架：
二、学写作手法
第一段开门见山地简介书名、作者及对该书的总体评价等基本信息。这种写作手法直入主题，清晰简洁。
三、学逻辑衔接
最后一段进行总结，并和第一段相呼应，使得“总—分—总”文章的结构完整，同时又照应主题，并增强了感染力。
四、学情感表达
1．在进行图书评论时，评论者应先指出需要点评的地方，然后再进行评论。例如第三段第一句属于点评内容，第二句作者用I like it because ...展开评论。后面也采用类似的方法，如：I was really touched by the line；because it shows ...等句子进行评论。
2．最后一段使用Personally这一副词开头，表达评论者自己的观点。touching一词画龙点睛，评论者对作品的喜爱跃然纸上。
五、学亮点表达
1．亮点词汇
(1)第一段首句中使用高级词汇illustrate，强调作品的特点。
(2)最后一段使用touching以及让步状语从句的省略结构whatever their age，照应第一段中的fantasy, children及adults，使得文章首尾呼应，浑然一体。
2．亮点句式
(1)第二段首句使用It tells a story about ...这一常用句式来概述图书内容，语言简洁明了。
(2)第二段介绍故事情节时，共使用了两句话。评论者为了避免语言的重复，分别使用了While引导的状语从句和动词-ing形式作状语，使语言表达富有变化。
(3)最后一段虽然只有一句话，但用词简洁，寓意深刻，提升了表达效果。
[仿写训练|完成句子]
①It ____________________ a diligent peasant and the ups and downs of his family.
它讲述了一个勤劳的农民及其家庭兴衰的故事。
②________________________________________， the sweet memories will never fade away.
无论未来发生什么，甜蜜的回忆永远不会消逝。
③______________________________， we discussed the great artists' works.
参观艺术展时，我们讨论了这些伟大艺术家的作品。
具体写作指导
How to write a book review in English ——如何用英语写书评
第一步：构思谋篇
Part 1 to introduce the author, genre, written time, publishing house, etc.of a book
Part 2 to give a brief description of it
Part 3 to make a brief review
第二步：要点表达
第一部分 对书的基本信息进行简要介绍
1．作品类型有哪些？
①________________ 科幻小说
②________________ 奇幻文学
③________________ 爱情小说
④________________ 侦探小说
⑤________________ 冒险小说
⑥biography ________________
⑦autobiography ________________
⑧documentary works ________________
⑨essay ________________
2．如何介绍书的作者和创作/出版时间？
①Jane Eyre ____________________ the British writer Charlotte Bront.
《简·爱》是由英国作家夏洛蒂·勃朗特创作的。
②____________________，the book is popular among teenagers.
这本书出版于2010年，很受青少年欢迎。
③Robinson Crusoe is ______________________ Daniel Defoe, which is worth reading.
《鲁滨孙漂流记》是著名小说家丹尼尔·笛福的作品，值得一读。
第二部分 介绍书的故事梗概
1．故事的背景
①__________________ a village in the eastern part of Scotland.
故事背景是在苏格兰东部的一个乡村。
②__________________________， and in places as far away as the deserts of western China.
故事发生在上海以及远至中国西部的沙漠地带。
③Harry Potter __________________________ a brave and good-natured boy who has magic power.
《哈利·波特》讲述了一个拥有魔法，勇敢、善良的男孩的故事。
2．故事的关键信息(可参考下面模板)
The story is set in ____________________， telling ________________________________.However，________________________________________________________________________.
Therefore，________________________________________________________________________.
第三部分 对作品进行客观公正的评论
1．“评价”类词汇
①________________ 幽默的
②________________ 感人的
③________________ 使人兴奋的；令人激动的
④________________ 感人且有教育意义的
⑤________________ 优秀的；卓越的
⑥extraordinary ________________
⑦amusing ________________
⑧thought-provoking ________________
⑨inspiring ________________
2．总结和评价
①In fact, the novel is ____________________ I can learn a lot from it.
事实上，这本小说的故事很有意义，我从中可以学到很多东西。
②I think everyone should read it and ____________________________________.
我想每个人都应该读一读这本书，并从中体会这种美妙的经历。
③Generally speaking, considered in many aspects, The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn is ____________________________.
总的来说，从多方面来看，《哈克贝利·费恩历险记》是一部美国文学的经典之作。
④________________________________， I think whatever happens to us, we should never lose hope, kindness or braveness.
(我)被这个鼓舞人心的故事感动了。我想无论发生什么，我们都不应该失去希望、善良和勇敢。
⑤The novel ____________________________ readers with its humorous language and profound meaning, and was reprinted many times.
这部小说语言幽默，寓意深刻，深受读者欢迎并多次再版。
[针对练笔]
假定你在校英文论坛上看到大家在讨论自己最喜欢的课外书。请你根据所给提示，向同学们推荐你最喜爱的文学读物《秘密花园》(The Secret Garden)。
作者 美国作家弗朗西丝·霍奇森·伯内特(Frances Hodgson Burnett)
故事梗概 性格孤僻的玛丽无意中发现了一个废弃的花园。在新结识的朋友们的帮助下，玛丽使花园恢复了生机，同时，她也变得开朗起来。
感悟 面对挫折时，要敞开心扉，笑对人生。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
写作素材储备
第一部分：书本简介
1．The famous Chinese novel I've recently read is ..., written by ...
我最近读的那部著名的中文小说是……它是由……写的。
2．This is a novel written by the English author ..., published in 1719.
这部小说是由英国作家……写的，出版于1719年。
3．Published in ..., the book is popular among teenagers.
出版于……年，这本书很受青少年欢迎。
4．This great piece of literature was written by ...in 1994.
这部伟大的文学作品是由……于1994年写的。
第二部分：故事梗概
1．The story is set in ...
故事的背景设在……
2．The story is concerned with ...
故事是关于……
3．The book tells a story about ...
这本书讲述了……
4．This book is a growing-up story about a lonely girl ...
这本书是关于一个孤独女孩的成长故事……
第三部分：表达感悟
1．The book is well worth reading, as ...
这本书很值得阅读，因为……
2．This wonderful book shows us that we should uncover ...and be open to people who help us.这本精彩的书向我们展示了：我们应该揭开……并对帮助我们的人敞开心扉。
3．A positive attitude can help us to overcome challenges in life more easily.积极的态度可以帮助我们轻而易举地克服生活中的挑战。
4．We can learn to be brave and confident in ourselves from ...
我们可以从……中学到勇敢和自信。
Section Ⅵ
由教材学写作
①tells a story about ②Whatever happens in the future
③Visiting the art exhibition
具体写作指导
第二步 第一部分：1.①science fiction ②fantasy literature
③romantic novel/story ④detective novel/story ⑤adventure
novel/story ⑥传记 ⑦自传 ⑧纪实作品 ⑨散文；杂文
2．①was written by ②Published in 2010
③the work of the famous novelist
第二部分：1.①The story is set in ②The story takes place in Shanghai
③tells a story concerned with
第三部分：1.①humorous ②moving/touching ③exciting
④touching and educational ⑤excellent ⑥非凡的；特别的；非常奇特的 ⑦有趣的；好玩的 ⑧发人深思的 ⑨鼓舞人心的
2．①so meaningful that ②get this wonderful experience
③a classic in American literature
④Moved by this inspirational story ⑤enjoyed great popularity with
[针对练笔]
参考范文：
The literary masterpiece The Secret Garden, written by American author Frances Hodgson Burnett, is well worth recommending.
The Secret Garden portrays the growth of a lonely girl named Mary, who comes across a deserted garden.With the assistance of her new friends, Mary ultimately brings it back to life, which transforms her into a cheerful girl in the meanwhile.
The book is not only a heart warming read but also conveys an inspiring truth: It is wise of us to unlock the secrets of our hearts and embrace the support of those around us.Thus, we can rise to challenges in life with a smile.4 / 4
UNIT 1 课时检测(六) Writing
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.靓表达升级
1．The book was written by an American writer.It was a love story.(用过去分词作定语升级)
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2．One of my favorite books is Teahouse.It is set in a typical, old Beijing teahouse.(用定语从句升级)
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3．The old servant Tom in the book impressed me most.(用what 引导的主语从句升级)
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4．I was really inspired by the words spoken by the hero and heroine of the book.(用what引导的宾语从句升级)
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5．The family in the book overcame varieties of difficulties with great courage and determination.(用强调句升级，强调状语)
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Ⅱ.微语境写作
1．I think ________________________________ (这本书非常值得读) as it carries the main idea that justice can always beat evil.
2．It is one of my favorite novels, ________________________________________________ (以伦敦为背景，发表于17世纪)．
3．____________________________ (阅读原著作品) is better than seeing the film based on it.
4．It ________________________ (讲述了一个关于……的故事) the daughter of a manor (庄园) who shows great perseverance.
5．In my opinion, this is a touching story that everyone should enjoy, ______________________ (不管多大年龄)．
6．Those ________________________ (读过这本书的人) think highly of it.
Ⅲ.应用文写作
假定你是李华，你最近读了美国著名作家欧内斯特·海明威的小说《老人与海》，十分佩服小说中老渔夫的意志，懂得了一个人一定要有坚持不懈的精神，才能获得成功的道理。请用英语写一篇书评，并向英语杂志社投稿。主要内容如下：
1．作者与作品的信息； 2.书的大致内容；
3．你的评价。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：欧内斯特·海明威Ernest Hemingway；《老人与海》 The Old Man and the Sea
Ⅳ.片段续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“Here you go.Up, up and away，” Chrissy yelled, as she pushed her little brother, Russell, on the swing (秋千)．Russell smiled and kicked his feet.“Higher! Higher！” he shouted.“Okay, hang on.Here you go！” Chrissy stood forward and gave the swing an extra hard push.“Help！” Suddenly, Russell screamed.
The swing flew so high that it seemed that it might go flying off into the sky.Russell started to cry just as their mom came running over.“I'm sorry, Russell，” Chrissy said.“I didn't mean to scare you.I guess I pushed a little too hard.” Their mom was angry with Chrissy and shouted, “Was it a little too hard That was way too hard, Chrissy! How could you be so irresponsible？” Hearing the word “irresponsible”， Chrissy cried with tears filling her brown eyes.
A week before, her teacher had told her that she was irresponsible for being late for class.And a few days before her dad had used the word “irresponsible” when he blamed her for not hanging up her clothes.“I'm sorry, Mom，” Chrissy said sadly.She turned away and started to walk slowly down the path that wound through the park.That unpleasant word “irresponsible” kept going through Chrissy's head.
Suddenly, Chrissy saw a little girl walking across the grass, heading up a small hill.Chrissy looked around for the parent, but there was no one else in sight.Chrissy knew there was a running stream on the other side of that hill.“It's dangerous，” Chrissy thought.She ran as fast as she could towards the little girl.When she reached the girl, she stepped in front of her, stopping her from running towards the water.
Chrissy picked up the little girl and carried her towards the playground, looking anxiously for her mother.“Where's your mommy？” she asked the little girl, although she thought the girl was probably too young to talk.She was surprised when the little girl pointed to a distant house on the other side of the fence.
Walking close, Chrissy noticed a small hole in the fence where the little girl might have climbed out.In front of a house, Chrissy could see a policeman talking to a woman who looked upset.“Is this your girl？” Chrissy called out.Then the woman and the policeman came running towards the fence.Minutes later, the girl was in the arms of her mom.
注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．要求逻辑通顺，情节合理，着重描写Chrissy
个人形象的转变。
Just then, Chrissy's mom and her brother Russell came looking for her.
[阅读拓展训练]
阅读七选五
In the most basic sense, self regulation (自我调节) involves controlling one's behavior and thoughts in pursuit (追求) of long term goals.Generally，people who are good at self regulation tend to see the good in others and view challenges as opportunities.They exactly know what they want to achieve，act in accordance with their views，and devote their best effort.__1__
__2__ A bad tempered child who hits others will be tiresome at school.An adult with poor self regulation skills may lack self confidence.He may have difficulty handling stress, and often, this might be expressed in terms of anger and anxiety.
How do problems with self regulation develop？It could start early when a baby isn't treated with enough care.__3__ Later, an adult may struggle with self regulation, either because this ability wasn't developed during childhood, or because of a lack of skill in managing difficult feelings.When left unchecked, over time this could lead to risky behavior.
__4__ One of the most frequently used methods is to change your thought patterns, which means that you think about a situation in a positive way, rather than one that's likely to increase negative emotions.__5__ Rather than thinking that this reflects something about yourself such as “My friend hates me”， you might instead think, “My friend must be really busy”．
A．Try to cheer yourself up after disappointment.
B．Do the usual series of things at a particular time.
C．A child who doesn't feel safe may have trouble self regulating.
D．A lack of self regulation will cause problems in life.
E．Anyhow, self regulation is so important that we should learn to use this skill.
F．For example, imagine a friend who doesn't return your calls or texts for several days.
G．Also they can calm themselves when feeling upset and cheer themselves when feeling down.
UNIT 1 课时检测(六)
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.1.The book written by an American writer was a love story.
2．One of my favorite books is Teahouse, which is set in a typical, old Beijing teahouse.
3．What impressed me most in the book is the old servant Tom.
4．I was really inspired by what the hero and heroine of the book spoke.
5．It was with great courage and determination that the family in the book overcame varieties of difficulties.
Ⅱ.1.the book is well worth reading 2.set in London and published in the 17th century 3.Reading the original work 4.tells a story about 5.whatever their age 6.who have read the book
Ⅲ.应用文写作(参考范文)
The book The Old Man and the Sea was written by Ernest Hemingway.The hero is an old fisherman named Santiago.
The novel tells a story about how the hero fights against a very large fish, which is difficult to cope with.Even faced with the threat from a shark, he finally succeeds in bringing the fish out of the sea.By reading the book, we can feel the old man's strong determination to be ready to overcome the hardship that he is faced with, and this helps us to be stronger and determined when we face challenges.
Personally, I think this is a touching story that will motivate everyone, whatever their age.
Ⅳ.片段续写(参考范文)
Just then, Chrissy's mom and her brother Russell came looking for her.The policeman told them that Chrissy had probably saved the girl's life.“You have a very responsible daughter there，” the policeman said to Chrissy's mom.Hearing that, her mom smiled proudly.The next day, the headline in the newspaper read: Responsible Nine Year Old Girl Saves A Baby — with an article about Chrissy.After reading it, her parents said, “We're proud of you, Chrissy.You are really a responsible young lady.” Feeling inspired, Chrissy now is never late for school.She almost always remembers to hang up her clothes, and is careful when she pushes Russell on the swing.And nobody ever calls her “irresponsible” anymore.
[阅读拓展训练]
语篇解读：本文是一篇说明文。文章讲述自我调节在人成长过程中的重要性。自我调节可以帮助我们缓解压力，缺乏自我调节能力则会导致各种各样的问题，所以我们要学会自我调节。
1．选G 空前讲述擅长自我调节的人是什么样的，G项继续讲述擅长自我调节的人在心情烦闷或情绪低落时会如何做，与上文是递进关系，符合语境。
2．选D 空处考查段落主旨句。根据下文“A bad tempered ...may lack self confidence.”可知，下文讲的是如果缺乏自我调节能力，就会产生不好的影响，所以此段说的是缺乏自我调节能力的消极影响，D项可以概括本段内容，符合语境。
3．选C 上文讲述和婴儿相关的自我调节问题，下文阐述成年人缺乏自我调节能力的原因，所以此处应该讲和孩子相关的自我调节问题。故C项符合语境。
4．选E 根据下文“One of the ...increase negative emotions.”可知，下文讲述的是自我调节的方法。E项指出，我们应该学会自我调节，与下文讲述自我调节的方法衔接自然，符合语境。
5．选F 根据下文“Rather than ...‘My friend must be really busy’．”可知，当好几天都没有收到朋友的电话或短信回复时，不要想朋友讨厌自己，而应该想朋友一定很忙。此处是在举例，列举了有关朋友的例子，F项符合语境。
