(共61张PPT)
Section Ⅵ
Writing
NO 1
(写作项目——Writing a speech)
NO 2
课时跟踪检测
目 录
(写作项目——Writing a speech)
本单元的写作任务是写一篇演讲稿，介绍一位有影响力的人物。演讲稿是在较为隆重的仪式上或某些公众场所发表的讲话文稿。介绍有影响力的人物的关键之处在于突出其主要经历、事迹及贡献。
一、学文体架构
根据教材课文总结出
该类文体的框架：
由教材学写作
二、学写作手法
第一段作者直截了当地点明演讲主题，简单介绍了埃德加·斯诺本人及其主要作品《红星照耀中国》。这样的开场白用词凝练且极具吸引力，能给听众留下一个良好的印象。
第二段(主体)用纪实的写作手法，介绍了埃德加·斯诺与红军同甘共苦的经历，真实地再现了他的伟岸形象。
三、学亮点表达
1．亮点词汇
(1)第一段运用了高级词汇influential，broke ideological boundaries，communist movement等，用词准确、含义深刻。
(2)第二段中的高级词汇set foot in和set him apart from the others等增加了语言的生动性、形象性。
(3)第三段中的高级词汇insight和risking his life，准确地刻画出埃德加·斯诺独特的洞察力和大无畏的精神，也传达了作者对埃德加·斯诺的深深敬意。
2．亮点句式
(1)第一段最后一句中when引导的定语从句，强调了埃德加·斯诺的作品《红星照耀中国》的创作背景。
(2)第二段为了突出斯诺和其他国际记者的不同，作者使用了Although引导的让步状语从句。
(3)第三段中的动词-ing短语risking his life during the war to get to the heart of the story and correct prejudice作伴随状语，对斯诺的事迹进行评价。
①This was a time ________________________________________
__________.
这是一个没有收音机，没有电话，也没有电视的时代。
②________________________, Mother comforted her patiently.
妈妈抱着玛丽，耐心地安慰她。
仿写训练/完成句子
when there were no radios, no telephones or
no TV sets
Holding Mary in her arms
③In modern times, people have to learn to live with all kinds of pressure _______________________________________.
在当下，人们尽管过着舒适的生活，但还得学会承受各种压力。
although they are leading a comfortable life
Write a speech about a famous person
——写一篇介绍名人的演讲稿
第一步：构思谋篇
具体写作指导
Part 1 ·Who the person is？
·What boundary he/she has broken？
Part 2 How he/she achieved this？
Part 3 Comments on him/her.
第二步：要点表达
第一部分 引入话题，介绍人物的一些个人信息
1．引出话题
①It is my great honor to ________________________.
我很荣幸有机会在这里发言。
②It is a great honour for me to stand here and ______________.
我很荣幸能站在这里发表演讲。
have a chance to speak here
give my speech
2．通过概括性的语言来简介人物(常用同位语、定语从句)
①Einstein,____________________________________, is well known in the world.
爱因斯坦闻名于世。他发现了“相对论”。
②Howard Carter is one of the most famous explorers _________
____________________.
霍华德·卡特是世界上有史以来最著名的探险家之一。
who discovered the Theory of Relativity
that the
world has ever known
③Shakespeare, _______________________________, wrote plays and poems that are read all over the world.
莎士比亚，一个贫穷家庭的儿子，写的戏剧和诗歌在全世界广为阅读。
who was a son from a poor family
④Thomas Edison, born in America, _______________________
________.
托马斯·爱迪生生于美国，是一位伟大的科学家兼发明家。
⑤Tu Youyou, ______________________________, was born in Ningbo, China.
屠呦呦出生于中国宁波，是一位有耐心、有奉献精神的科学家。
was a great scientist and
inventor
a patient and committed scientist
第二部分 介绍名人的主要经历和贡献
1．描述名人的常用词汇
①_________ n． 困难
②_________ vt. 克服
③__________ adj. 有进取心的
④____________ n. 成就；成绩；功绩
⑤____________ n. 贡献；捐助
hardship
overcome
aggressive
achievement
contribution
⑥_____________ n. 决心；决定
⑦_________ n. 勤奋
⑧________ adj. 慷慨大方的
⑨_________ adj. 乐观的
⑩___________ adj. 优秀的；杰出的
___________ n. 性格
determination
diligence
generous
optimistic
outstanding
personality
__________ adj. 考虑周到的
______ n. 美德；品行
have a passion for ___________
devote one's life to ___________
be honoured as _______
make great contributions to ____________________
thoughtful
virtue
热爱；酷爱
毕生致力于
被誉为
为……做出巨大贡献
2．描述名人的贡献
①Owing to the fact that he can do whatever he has chosen to do with great perseverance, he ______________________________________.
由于他能够坚持不懈地做他所选择的事情，所以他在很多领域都取得了伟大成就。
has made great achievement in many fields
②With his wise thoughts about nature and the world, Confucius ____________________________ in the history of China.
孔子对自然和世界有睿智的洞见，因此被认为是中国历史上一位伟大的思想家。
③Tu Youyou，who is the first Chinese scientist to win the Nobel Prize, _________________________________.
屠呦呦是第一位获得诺贝尔奖的中国科学家，她为我们学生树立了一个好榜样。
is considered as a great thinker
has set a good example to us students
④Madame Curie __________________________ the development of science, which paved the way for further research.
居里夫人对科学的发展做出了巨大贡献，为进一步的研究铺平了道路。
⑤She ___________________ scientific research and her scientific findings benefited people all over the world.
她毕生致力于科学研究，她的科学发现让全世界人民受益。
made a great contribution to
devoted all her life to
第三部分 总体评价
1．“评价”类常用词汇
①_____________________ 为……树立一个好榜样
②____________________ 对某人赞不绝口
③think highly of sb. ________________
④remember sb.for ever _____________
⑤have a great effect on sb. _________________
set a good example to ...
sing high praise for sb.
对某人评价很高
永远铭记某人
对某人有很大影响
2．对人物的总体评价
①He ______________________________ and people come to love him.
他被誉为是一位鼓舞人心的领导，人们渐渐喜欢他了。
②He/She ____________________ by many people and will live on in our hearts forever.
他/她受到很多人的高度赞扬，将永远活在我们心中。
is considered as an inspiring leader
was highly thought of
③Such is Wang Xiaoping, a simple man _____________________
_____________ in his field.
这就是王小平，一个简朴的人，在他的研究领域里取得了巨大的成就。
④His story tells us that ___________________________ and try our best to ___________________________.
他的故事告诉我们，我们应该珍惜我们所拥有的，并尽最大努力克服生活中的任何困难。
who has made great
achievements
we should value what we have
overcome any difficulty in life
[针对练笔]
你校英语角近日将举办一场演讲比赛，要求参赛者介绍一位有影响力的国际友人。请你根据所给提示，用英语写一篇演讲稿，介绍著名医生马海德(Ma Haide)。
生卒年份 1910－1988
主要经历 及贡献 1.出生于美国，1933年获得医学博士学位后，赴上海进行疾病研究；
2.抗日战争(Chinese People's War of Resistance Against Japanese Aggression)期间为前线士兵组织医疗服务；
3.一生致力于推动中国医疗事业的发展。
你的评价 ？
参考范文：
Good morning, everyone!
I'd like to share something about Ma Haide, an outstanding doctor, who was born in America in 1910 and passed away in 1988.
After completing his Doctor of Medicine in 1933, Ma set off for Shanghai to conduct research into some diseases.During the Chinese People's War of Resistance Against Japanese Aggression, he voluntarily participated in organising medical services at the front alongside other foreign doctors, putting his life at risk.
Ma devoted his life to promoting China's medical development, which makes him live on in Chinese people's hearts forever.
This is the end of my speech.Thank you for your attention!
1．Opening
①Today, I'm going to introduce ...
②He/She was born in ..., in ...
③He/She is/was a doctor/social worker ..., who is/was hard-working/intelligent/...
④He/She has broken national boundaries by doing ...
⑤I would like to tell you three reasons why ...
写作素材储备
2．Body
①He/She made every effort to do ...
②He/She is/was devoted to doing ...
③Although ..., what set him/her apart was ...
④ ...set us a good example.
⑤ ...is considered ...
3．Summary
①What he/she has done is worth ...
②His/Her contribution to ...is not only ...but also ...
③...call on ...to learn from his/her example ...
④She is such a ...person that we all admire/respect her.
⑤He ...and that's why he was highly thought of by ....
4．叙述名人生平事迹，可以从不同角度、全方位加以介绍
以下材料可供参考(以钱学森为例)
①生平轨迹：从他们的童年、教育背景和成长经历谈起。
Example：Born in Shanghai in 1911, Qian Xuesen grew up during a time of great change in China.His early education in Beijing laid the foundation for his brilliant academic future.After studying at Shanghai Jiao Tong University, he went to the United States, where he became a key figure in jet and rocket technology.His return to China marked the beginning of an era in which he would promote the development of China's aerospace program.
②成就与贡献：叙述他们在工作或个人生活中的成就，以及这些成就产生的深远影响。
Example：Qian Xuesen's major contributions to China's aerospace industry are unmatched.Under his leadership, China developed its first ballistic missiles, the Dongfeng series, and the Long March rockets.His most remarkable achievement was the successful launch of China's first satellite, Dong Fang Hong I, a milestone that established China as a space power.
③理念与价值观：探讨他们的信念和价值观，以及这些观念是如何指导他们的行动和决策的。
Example：Qian Xuesen's philosophy was deeply rooted in his commitment to his homeland.He believed in the power of science and technology as tools for national development and defense.His dedication to serving his country and his belief in the potential of the Chinese people were central to his work and life, guiding his decisions and shaping his contributions to China's aerospace advancements.
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.靓表达升级
1．He was so old that he couldn't sing high choral parts.That made him lose his job unwillingly.(用“too ...to结构”和“非限制性定语从句”升级)
He was too old to sing high choral parts, which made him lose his job unwillingly.
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2．From 1753, as his skills were increasing, he began to become popular and awesome.(用with复合结构升级)
From 1753, with his skills increasing, he began to become popular and awesome.
3．I want to stress that each of us should be open-minded to different opinions.(用what引导的主语从句升级)
What I want to stress is that each of us should be open-minded to different opinions.
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4．She not only speaks Spanish, but she's also good with computers. (用倒装句升级)
Not only does she speak Spanish, but she's also good with computers.
5．He is warm-hearted and willing to help others in need, so he has won our respect.(用for which引导的定语从句升级)
He is warm-hearted and willing to help others in need, for which he has won our respect.
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Ⅱ.微语境写作
1．_____________________________________ (我很荣幸能在这里演讲) about a cultural celebrity.Today, ___________________________
________ (我将介绍一位知名人士), Yu Guangzhong.As a brilliant star in the literary circle, he is entitled as the “Bright Multicolored Pens”．
It is my great honor to make a speech here
I will introduce a well-known
person
2．During the tough time, it is you who, regardless of the shortage of equipment and the potential risk of infection, __________________
_____________ (拼命抢救感染者)．________________ (也正是你们) made us build up our confidence to defeat it.
3．Not only ____________________________________________ (她能教你怎么写汉字), but also she can offer you some information about Chinese culture.In addition, Ms Li is kind and _______________
__________ (将会很乐意教你)．
desperately rescued
those infected
It is also you who
can she teach you how to write Chinese characters
will be pleased to
teach you
4．I admire Edison a lot because of his great contributions to the world.He had more than 1,000 inventions.In his life time, he was always eager to know ___________________ (事情是如何成功的)．He was also so diligent that he worked day and night.And this explained why he had so many great inventions (他为什么有这么多伟大的发明)．
how things worked
5．I admire Helen Keller because she ______________________ (对生活积极乐观)．She became deaf and blind when she was 19 months old.Since then she lived in a world of darkness and silence，and communication seemed only a dream for her.But she ________________
___________________________ (从未放弃，努力过着积极的生活)．
was optimistic about life
never gave up and
struggled to lead an active life
Ⅲ.应用文写作
假定你是李华，将参加主题为“My favorite figure in Chinese history”的演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：
1．人物和贡献(郑和，著名的航海家，七次下西洋，促进了中国与其他国家间文化和技术的交流)。
2．你的评价。
参考范文：
Hello, everyone.
Glad to be here to make a speech. As for my favorite figure in Chinese history, it must be Zheng He, a famous voyager.He built a great fleet of ships, which was the biggest in the world at that time. From 1405 to 1433, Zheng He went on seven trips to trade valuable goods, such as gold, silver and silk, which encouraged the exchange of cultures and technologies between China and other countries.
Zheng He is really an international hero and his voyages are such a huge achievement that people still remember him as a pioneer in opening up cultural contacts between different peoples around the world.
Thank you !
Ⅳ.片段续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was 3 am when the flood came on an unseasonably warm night in June.Rocks were heard breaking.Susan Roberts, new to Red Lodge, Montana, a small town of 2,300 people, woke from an uneasy sleep.She saw the lights on at her across-the-way neighbors', on the side bordering Rock Creek, a 55-mile river skirting the town's eastern edge.
Roberts's next-door neighbor, a police officer, was evacuating(疏散) with his four kids, and he advised Roberts to do the same.So she put her dogs in the car and moved it to an narrow street behind her home, about 10 feet uphill, as her husband went from house to house, waking others.It was still dark; people were sleeping and didn't realize.More people went to each other's doors, saying, “Wake up and you have to get out.”
The couple stayed in their car and on the few feet of dry land surrounding it for the entirety of the next day, watching their house ruined.Trees were washed down the town's main street.Cars floated away.Floods ruined the Beartooth Highway, a major road connecting Red Lodge to Billings.“The town looked like a riverbed，” says Roberts.“The whole community was wandering around, trying to grasp what happened.”
The day after the flood, more than 20 people — friends, neighbors, strangers, even tourists flocked(群集) to help.“People went into our wet, muddy basement and pulled everything out，” says Roberts.“They sorted and took things home to wash.One person came to clean up our yard.A mother and her two young children pulled rubbish from our chain-link fence.” Helpers even saved her precious photo albums, drying each print before returning it to the book.
And volunteers kept coming every day until summer's end.“People would not take no for an answer.If I was like, ‘Oh, we're OK now，’ they'd be like, ‘No, I'm gonna do something，’” she says.
注意： 1.词数80左右；
2．要求逻辑通顺，情节合理，重点描写所有人共同努力、携手抗灾的场面。
参考范文：
Soon, all over the town, people took action jointly to clean up the whole mess.Volunteer groups, of which Roberts and her husband were members, worked quickly to clear out a space within hours.People offered their vacation homes to the homeless at no charge due to the floods. Restaurant owners organized a gift card group for people to buy gift cards from local businesses to donate to affected residents.
Although the collapsed houses were not built yet, everything was slowly improving in harmony and order.After joint efforts with others, Roberts was no longer new to Red Lodge, but the builder and owner.“I'm blessed，” said Roberts.“People here are more like family members, braving difficulties together.”
[阅读拓展训练]
阅读七选五
Mary went through a personal experience 40 years ago that changed her life path and established her connection with Chinese herbal medicine.
Still childless after 13 years of marriage, Mary longed to become a mother.For years she travelled from country to country and visited top experts in the field, but without success. 1 However, her Chinese herbalist grandmother gave her hope through a herbal treatment.
After three and a half years she became pregnant. 2 The expectant mother's delight was shared by the rest of her family, too.This was the point when she made up her mind to carry on her grandmother's work and devote her life to herbal medicine research, development and promotion.To this end, she invested in a large herbal garden in the suburbs of Jakarta, where more than 30,000 plants are grown. 3
Through the application of great effort and resources over many, many years, Mary's career has developed vigorously, as has her garden. 4 When she was asked whether it was worthwhile to have devoted so much of her life to this research, she firmly responded，“What I have done is to fulfill a promise I once made.More importantly, I want to bring Chinese herbal medicine to all those in need. 5 ”
A．More than 7,000 of these can be used as medicine.
B．The moment the news was confirmed, she burst into tears of happiness.
C．I believe it can help relieve pain and enable the sick to regain their hope of life.
D．The heartbreak and disappointment was so great that she came close to giving up.
E．I'm so happy that the local people like to use Chinese herbal medicine for treatment.
F．Although she is now 80 years old, she is still committed to the study of Chinese herbal medicine.
G．Mary decided to make great contributions to the development of Chinese herbal medicine.
语篇解读：本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了玛丽和中草药结下不解之缘的励志故事。
1．选D 根据上文中的“Still childless after 13 years ...but without success.”可推知，多年来求子无果的经历让玛丽很是伤心和失望，所以D项符合语境。D项承接上文且与空后一句形成转折。
2．选B 根据空后一句“The expectant mother's delight was shared by the rest of her family, too.”可知，通过中草药疗法，多年不孕的玛丽终于怀孕了，梦想达成，自然是喜出望外，所以选B。
3．选A 根据上文中的“devote her life to herbal medicine research”及“To this end ...where more than 30,000 plants are grown.”可推知，玛丽决定致力于中草药研究工作，这些植物很多可以用作中草药，所以A项符合语境。
4．选F 根据下文中的“When she was asked whether it was worthwhile to have devoted so much of her life to this research, she firmly responded”可推知，玛丽后来多年一直致力于中草药的研究工作，所以选F。
5．选C 根据空前一句“More importantly, I want to bring Chinese herbal medicine to all those in need.”并结合玛丽自身的经历可知，玛丽认为中草药能帮助有需要的人，所以C项承接上文，符合语境。7 / 7
Section Ⅵ Writing
写作项目——Writing a speech
本单元的写作任务是写一篇演讲稿，介绍一位有影响力的人物。演讲稿是在较为隆重的仪式上或某些公众场所发表的讲话文稿。介绍有影响力的人物的关键之处在于突出其主要经历、事迹及贡献。
由教材学写作
一、学文体架构
根据教材课文总结出该类文体的框架：
二、学写作手法
第一段作者直截了当地点明演讲主题，简单介绍了埃德加·斯诺本人及其主要作品《红星照耀中国》。这样的开场白用词凝练且极具吸引力，能给听众留下一个良好的印象。
第二段(主体)用纪实的写作手法，介绍了埃德加·斯诺与红军同甘共苦的经历，真实地再现了他的伟岸形象。
三、学亮点表达
1．亮点词汇
(1)第一段运用了高级词汇influential，broke ideological boundaries, communist movement等，用词准确、含义深刻。
(2)第二段中的高级词汇set foot in和set him apart from the others等增加了语言的生动性、形象性。
(3)第三段中的高级词汇insight和risking his life，准确地刻画出埃德加·斯诺独特的洞察力和大无畏的精神，也传达了作者对埃德加·斯诺的深深敬意。
2．亮点句式
(1)第一段最后一句中when引导的定语从句，强调了埃德加·斯诺的作品《红星照耀中国》的创作背景。
(2)第二段为了突出斯诺和其他国际记者的不同，作者使用了Although引导的让步状语从句。
(3)第三段中的动词-ing短语risking his life during the war to get to the heart of the story and correct prejudice作伴随状语，对斯诺的事迹进行评价。
①This was a time ______________________________________________________.
这是一个没有收音机，没有电话，也没有电视的时代。
②____________________________________， Mother comforted her patiently.
妈妈抱着玛丽，耐心地安慰她。
③In modern times, people have to learn to live with all kinds of pressure ____________________________________________.
在当下，人们尽管过着舒适的生活，但还得学会承受各种压力。
具体写作指导
Write a speech about a famous person
——写一篇介绍名人的演讲稿
第一步：构思谋篇
Part 1 ·Who the person is？·What boundary he/she has broken？
Part 2 How he/she achieved this？
Part 3 Comments on him/her.
第二步：要点表达
第一部分 引入话题，介绍人物的一些个人信息
1．引出话题
①It is my great honor to ___________________________________________________.
我很荣幸有机会在这里发言。
②It is a great honour for me to stand here and ____________________.
我很荣幸能站在这里发表演讲。
2．通过概括性的语言来简介人物(常用同位语、定语从句)
①Einstein, __________________________________________， is well known in the world.
爱因斯坦闻名于世。他发现了“相对论”。
②Howard Carter is one of the most famous explorers ______________________________.
霍华德·卡特是世界上有史以来最著名的探险家之一。
③Shakespeare, ____________________________________________， wrote plays and poems that are read all over the world.
莎士比亚，一个贫穷家庭的儿子，写的戏剧和诗歌在全世界广为阅读。
④Thomas Edison, born in America, __________________________________.
托马斯·爱迪生生于美国，是一位伟大的科学家兼发明家。
⑤Tu Youyou, ______________________________________， was born in Ningbo, China.
屠呦呦出生于中国宁波，是一位有耐心、有奉献精神的科学家。
第二部分 介绍名人的主要经历和贡献
1．描述名人的常用词汇
①______________ n． 困难
②______________ vt. 克服
③______________adj. 有进取心的
④______________ n. 成就；成绩；功绩
⑤______________ n. 贡献；捐助
⑥______________ n. 决心；决定
⑦______________ n. 勤奋
⑧______________ adj. 慷慨大方的
⑨______________ adj. 乐观的
⑩______________ adj. 优秀的；杰出的
______________ n. 性格
______________ adj. 考虑周到的
______________ n. 美德；品行
have a passion for ______________
devote one's life to ______________
be honoured as ______________
make great contributions to ______________
2．描述名人的贡献
①Owing to the fact that he can do whatever he has chosen to do with great perseverance, he
________________________________________________________________________.
由于他能够坚持不懈地做他所选择的事情，所以他在很多领域都取得了伟大成就。
②With his wise thoughts about nature and the world, Confucius ____________________________________________ in the history of China.
孔子对自然和世界有睿智的洞见，因此被认为是中国历史上一位伟大的思想家。
③Tu Youyou, who is the first Chinese scientist to win the Nobel Prize, ____________________________________________.
屠呦呦是第一位获得诺贝尔奖的中国科学家，她为我们学生树立了一个好榜样。
④Madame Curie ______________________________________ the development of science, which paved the way for further research.
居里夫人对科学的发展做出了巨大贡献，为进一步的研究铺平了道路。
⑤She __________________________________ scientific research and her scientific findings benefited people all over the world.
她毕生致力于科学研究，她的科学发现让全世界人民受益。
第三部分 总体评价
1．“评价”类常用词汇
①______________ 为……树立一个好榜样
② 对某人赞不绝口
③think highly of sb. ________________
④remember sb.for ever ________________
⑤have a great effect on sb. ________________
2．对人物的总体评价
①He __________________________________ and people come to love him.
他被誉为是一位鼓舞人心的领导，人们渐渐喜欢他了。
②He/She ____________________ by many people and will live on in our hearts forever.
他/她受到很多人的高度赞扬，将永远活在我们心中。
③Such is Wang Xiaoping, a simple man __________________________________ in his field.
这就是王小平，一个简朴的人，在他的研究领域里取得了巨大的成就。
④His story tells us that __________________ and try our best to ____________________.
他的故事告诉我们，我们应该珍惜我们所拥有的，并尽最大努力克服生活中的任何困难。
[针对练笔]
你校英语角近日将举办一场演讲比赛，要求参赛者介绍一位有影响力的国际友人。请你根据所给提示，用英语写一篇演讲稿，介绍著名医生马海德(Ma Haide)。
生卒年份 1910－1988
主要经历及贡献 1.出生于美国，1933年获得医学博士学位后，赴上海进行疾病研究；2.抗日战争(Chinese People's War of Resistance Against Japanese Aggression)期间为前线士兵组织医疗服务；3.一生致力于推动中国医疗事业的发展。
你的评价 ？
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Good morning, everyone!
This is the end of my speech.Thank you for your attention!
写作素材储备
1．Opening
①Today, I'm going to introduce ...
②He/She was born in ..., in ...
③He/She is/was a doctor/social worker ..., who is/was hard-working/intelligent/...
④He/She has broken national boundaries by doing ...
⑤I would like to tell you three reasons why ...
2．Body
①He/She made every effort to do ...
②He/She is/was devoted to doing ...
③Although ..., what set him/her apart was ...
④ ...set us a good example.
⑤ ...is considered ...
3．Summary
①What he/she has done is worth ...
②His/Her contribution to ...is not only ...but also ...
③...call on ...to learn from his/her example ...
④She is such a ...person that we all admire/respect her.
⑤He ...and that's why he was highly thought of by ....
4．叙述名人生平事迹，可以从不同角度、全方位加以介绍
以下材料可供参考(以钱学森为例)
①生平轨迹：从他们的童年、教育背景和成长经历谈起。
Example：Born in Shanghai in 1911, Qian Xuesen grew up during a time of great change in China.His early education in Beijing laid the foundation for his brilliant academic future.After studying at Shanghai Jiao Tong University, he went to the United States, where he became a key figure in jet and rocket technology.His return to China marked the beginning of an era in which he would promote the development of China's aerospace program.
②成就与贡献：叙述他们在工作或个人生活中的成就，以及这些成就产生的深远影响。
Example：Qian Xuesen's major contributions to China's aerospace industry are unmatched.Under his leadership, China developed its first ballistic missiles, the Dongfeng series, and the Long March rockets.His most remarkable achievement was the successful launch of China's first satellite, Dong Fang Hong I, a milestone that established China as a space power.
③理念与价值观：探讨他们的信念和价值观，以及这些观念是如何指导他们的行动和决策的。
Example：Qian Xuesen's philosophy was deeply rooted in his commitment to his homeland.He believed in the power of science and technology as tools for national development and defense.His dedication to serving his country and his belief in the potential of the Chinese people were central to his work and life, guiding his decisions and shaping his contributions to China's aerospace advancements.
Section Ⅵ
由教材学写作
①when there were no radios, no telephones or no TV sets
②Holding Mary in her arms
③although they are leading a comfortable life
具体写作指导
第二步 第一部分：1.①have a chance to speak here ②give my speech
2．①who discovered the Theory of Relativity ②that the world has ever known ③who was a son from a poor family ④was a great scientist and inventor ⑤a patient and committed scientist
第二部分：1.①hardship ②overcome ③aggressive ④achievement
⑤contribution ⑥determination ⑦diligence ⑧generous
⑨optimistic ⑩outstanding personality thoughtful
virtue 热爱；酷爱 毕生致力于 被誉为
为……做出巨大贡献
2．①has made great achievement in many fields ②is considered as a great thinker ③has set a good example to us students
④made a great contribution to ⑤devoted all her life to
第三部分：1.①set a good example to ... ②sing high praise for sb.
③对某人评价很高 ④永远铭记某人 ⑤对某人有很大影响
2．①is considered as an inspiring leader ②was highly thought of ③who has made great achievements
④we should value what we have; overcome any difficulty in life
[针对练笔]
参考范文：
Good morning, everyone!
I'd like to share something about Ma Haide, an outstanding doctor, who was born in America in 1910 and passed away in 1988.
After completing his Doctor of Medicine in 1933, Ma set off for Shanghai to conduct research into some diseases.During the Chinese People's War of Resistance Against Japanese Aggression, he voluntarily participated in organising medical services at the front alongside other foreign doctors, putting his life at risk.
Ma devoted his life to promoting China's medical development, which makes him live on in Chinese people's hearts forever.
This is the end of my speech.Thank you for your attention!4 / 4
UNIT 4 课时检测(六) Writing
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.靓表达升级
1．He was so old that he couldn't sing high choral parts.That made him lose his job unwillingly.(用“too ...to结构”和“非限制性定语从句”升级)
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2．From 1753, as his skills were increasing, he began to become popular and awesome.(用with复合结构升级)
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3．I want to stress that each of us should be open minded to different opinions.(用what引导的主语从句升级)
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4．She not only speaks Spanish, but she's also good with computers.(用倒装句升级)
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5．He is warm hearted and willing to help others in need, so he has won our respect.(用for which引导的定语从句升级)
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Ⅱ.微语境写作
1．______________________________________________________ (我很荣幸能在这里演讲) about a cultural celebrity.Today, ______________________________________ (我将介绍一位知名人士), Yu Guangzhong.As a brilliant star in the literary circle, he is entitled as the “Bright Multicolored Pens”．
2．During the tough time, it is you who, regardless of the shortage of equipment and the potential risk of infection, ________________________________________________ (拼命抢救感染者)．________________________ (也正是你们) made us build up our confidence to defeat it.
3．Not only __________________________________ (她能教你怎么写汉字), but also she can offer you some information about Chinese culture.In addition, Ms Li is kind and ________________________________ (将会很乐意教你)．
4．I admire Edison a lot because of his great contributions to the world.He had more than 1,000 inventions.In his life time, he was always eager to know ____________________________ (事情是如何成功的)．He was also so diligent that he worked day and night.And this explained ________________________________________ (他为什么有这么多伟大的发明)．
5．I admire Helen Keller because she ________________________ (对生活积极乐观)．She became deaf and blind when she was 19 months old.Since then she lived in a world of darkness and silence，and communication seemed only a dream for her.But she ____________________________________________ (从未放弃，努力过着积极的生活)．
Ⅲ.应用文写作
假定你是李华，将参加主题为“My favorite figure in Chinese history”的演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：
1．人物和贡献(郑和，著名的航海家，七次下西洋，促进了中国与其他国家间文化和技术的交流)。
2．你的评价。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Ⅳ.片段续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was 3 am when the flood came on an unseasonably warm night in June.Rocks were heard breaking.Susan Roberts, new to Red Lodge, Montana, a small town of 2,300 people, woke from an uneasy sleep.She saw the lights on at her across the way neighbors', on the side bordering Rock Creek, a 55 mile river skirting the town's eastern edge.
Roberts's next door neighbor, a police officer, was evacuating(疏散) with his four kids, and he advised Roberts to do the same.So she put her dogs in the car and moved it to an narrow street behind her home, about 10 feet uphill, as her husband went from house to house, waking others.It was still dark; people were sleeping and didn't realize.More people went to each other's doors, saying, “Wake up and you have to get out.”
The couple stayed in their car and on the few feet of dry land surrounding it for the entirety of the next day, watching their house ruined.Trees were washed down the town's main street.Cars floated away.Floods ruined the Beartooth Highway, a major road connecting Red Lodge to Billings.“The town looked like a riverbed，” says Roberts.“The whole community was wandering around, trying to grasp what happened.”
The day after the flood, more than 20 people — friends, neighbors, strangers, even tourists flocked(群集) to help.“People went into our wet, muddy basement and pulled everything out，” says Roberts.“They sorted and took things home to wash.One person came to clean up our yard.A mother and her two young children pulled rubbish from our chain link fence.” Helpers even saved her precious photo albums, drying each print before returning it to the book.
And volunteers kept coming every day until summer's end.“People would not take no for an answer.If I was like, ‘Oh, we're OK now，’ they'd be like, ‘No, I'm gonna do something，’” she says.
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．要求逻辑通顺，情节合理，重点描写所有人共同努力、携手抗灾的场面。
Soon, all over the town, people took action jointly to clean up the whole mess.
[阅读拓展训练]
阅读七选五
Mary went through a personal experience 40 years ago that changed her life path and established her connection with Chinese herbal medicine.
Still childless after 13 years of marriage, Mary longed to become a mother.For years she travelled from country to country and visited top experts in the field, but without success. __1__ However, her Chinese herbalist grandmother gave her hope through a herbal treatment.
After three and a half years she became pregnant. __2__ The expectant mother's delight was shared by the rest of her family, too.This was the point when she made up her mind to carry on her grandmother's work and devote her life to herbal medicine research, development and promotion.To this end, she invested in a large herbal garden in the suburbs of Jakarta, where more than 30,000 plants are grown. __3__
Through the application of great effort and resources over many, many years, Mary's career has developed vigorously, as has her garden. __4__ When she was asked whether it was worthwhile to have devoted so much of her life to this research, she firmly responded, “What I have done is to fulfill a promise I once made.More importantly, I want to bring Chinese herbal medicine to all those in need. __5__ ”
A．More than 7,000 of these can be used as medicine.
B．The moment the news was confirmed, she burst into tears of happiness.
C．I believe it can help relieve pain and enable the sick to regain their hope of life.
D．The heartbreak and disappointment was so great that she came close to giving up.
E．I'm so happy that the local people like to use Chinese herbal medicine for treatment.
F．Although she is now 80 years old, she is still committed to the study of Chinese herbal medicine.
G．Mary decided to make great contributions to the development of Chinese herbal medicine.
UNIT 4 课时检测(六)
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.1.He was too old to sing high choral parts, which made him lose his job unwillingly.
2．From 1753, with his skills increasing, he began to become popular and awesome.
3．What I want to stress is that each of us should be open minded to different opinions.
4．Not only does she speak Spanish, but she's also good with computers.
5．He is warm hearted and willing to help others in need, for which he has won our respect.
Ⅱ.1.It is my great honor to make a speech here; I will introduce a well known person 2.desperately rescued those infected; It is also you who 3.can she teach you how to write Chinese characters; will be pleased to teach you 4.how things worked; why he had so many great inventions 5.was optimistic about life; never gave up and struggled to lead an active life
Ⅲ.应用文写作(参考范文)
Hello, everyone.
Glad to be here to make a speech. As for my favorite figure in Chinese history, it must be Zheng He, a famous voyager.He built a great fleet of ships, which was the biggest in the world at that time.From 1405 to 1433, Zheng He went on seven trips to trade valuable goods, such as gold, silver and silk, which encouraged the exchange of cultures and technologies between China and other countries.Zheng He is really an international hero and his voyages are such a huge achievement that people still remember him as a pioneer in opening up cultural contacts between different peoples around the world.
Thank you !
Ⅳ.片段续写(参考范文)
Soon, all over the town, people took action jointly to clean up the whole mess.Volunteer groups, of which Roberts and her husband were members, worked quickly to clear out a space within hours.People offered their vacation homes to the homeless at no charge due to the floods.Restaurant owners organized a gift card group for people to buy gift cards from local businesses to donate to affected residents.Although the collapsed houses were not built yet, everything was slowly improving in harmony and order.After joint efforts with others, Roberts was no longer new to Red Lodge, but the builder and owner.“I'm blessed，” said Roberts.“People here are more like family members, braving difficulties together.”
[阅读拓展训练]
语篇解读：本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了玛丽和中草药结下不解之缘的励志故事。
1．选D 根据上文中的“Still childless after 13 years ...but without success.”可推知，多年来求子无果的经历让玛丽很是伤心和失望，所以D项符合语境。D项承接上文且与空后一句形成转折。
2．选B 根据空后一句“The expectant mother's delight was shared by the rest of her family, too.”可知，通过中草药疗法，多年不孕的玛丽终于怀孕了，梦想达成，自然是喜出望外，所以选B。
3．选A 根据上文中的“devote her life to herbal medicine research”及“To this end ...where more than 30,000 plants are grown.”可推知，玛丽决定致力于中草药研究工作，这些植物很多可以用作中草药，所以A项符合语境。
4．选F 根据下文中的“When she was asked whether it was worthwhile to have devoted so much of her life to this research, she firmly responded”可推知，玛丽后来多年一直致力于中草药的研究工作，所以选F。
5．选C 根据空前一句“More importantly, I want to bring Chinese herbal medicine to all those in need.”并结合玛丽自身的经历可知，玛丽认为中草药能帮助有需要的人，所以C项承接上文，符合语境。
