(共57张PPT)
Section Ⅵ
Writing
NO 1
(写作项目——Drafting a lecture)
NO 2
课时跟踪检测
目 录
(写作项目——Drafting a lecture)
本单元的写作任务要求写一篇发言稿，介绍一处世界自然遗产。发言稿一般包含开场问候、开篇点题、内容阐述、结尾总结等。其中，“内容阐述”为写作的重点。时态以一般现在时为主；人称以第一、第三人称为主。
一、学文体架构
根据教材课文总结出
该类文体的框架：
由教材学写作
二、学精彩导入
本文开头采用了If引导的条件句，在与读者互动的同时，自然导入了文章主题，既拉近了与读者之间的距离，又有助于激发读者的阅读兴趣，展现了作者较高的语言运用技巧。
__________________________________, I will say Harry Potter without hesitation.
如果你问我最喜欢的书是哪一本，我会毫不犹豫地回答：《哈利·波特》。
仿写训练/完成句子
If you ask me what my favorite book is
三、学亮点表达
1．第二句中的must在此用作名词，表示“必须做(或看)的事”，同时该词加了引号，进一步突出强调了游览梵净山的必要性。
仿写训练/完成句子
______________________ for all lovers of science fiction.
他的新作是所有科幻小说爱好者的必读书。
His new novel is a must
2．第二句中的名词短语A “must” for anyone visiting Guizhou Province在句中作Fanjing Mountain的同位语；倒数第二句中的名词短语One of the first national nature reserves in China也是作Fanjing Mountain的同位语。两个同位语简洁明了地补充了梵净山的相关信息，描述更细致、具体，使读者对梵净山的印象更深刻，令他们对梵净山心向往之。
3．文中运用了national, greatest, renowned, breathtaking等形容词描述梵净山，使之在读者心目中的形象更高大、完美，突出了它的独特之处。
How to draft a lecture about a natural heritage——写一篇介绍自然遗产的发言稿
第一步：构思谋篇
具体写作指导
Part 1 1.Greeting
2.Introduction to the topic
Part 2 Introduce the natural heritage in detail
Part 3 Conclusion
第二步：要点表达
第一部分 导入主题
1．写作背景：表示欢迎
①It's my great pleasure to _________________________________
______ in Jinan.
我很高兴向大家介绍济南一处神奇的自然遗产。
introduce a fantastic natural heritage
to you
②I _________________ I have the chance to act as your tour guide today.
我很荣幸今天有机会当你们的导游。
③It gives me great pleasure ______________, our foreign friends, to the Forbidden City!
外国朋友们，很高兴欢迎你们来到紫禁城！
feel honoured that
to welcome you
2．写作目的：做简单的介绍(以泰山为例)
①I am excited to share with you the wonders of Mount Tai, ________________________________________.
泰山位于山东省。我很高兴与你分享泰山的奇观。
②Have you ever heard of Mount Tai, the highest peak in the region ________________ thousands of years
你听说过泰山吗？它的主峰有数千年的历史。
which is located in the province of Shandong
with a history of
③In order to make sure you will have ___________________
_________________ here, I __________________ give you a brief introduction to it.
为了确保您在这里度过一次愉快而难忘的旅行，我迫不及待地想给您简要介绍一下。
an enjoyable and
unforgettable trip
can hardly wait to
④I _______________________________________________, a UNESCO World Heritage Site that embodies the spirit of Chinese civilization.
我非常乐意向各位介绍泰山。泰山承载着中华文明之魂，并已被联合国教科文组织列为世界文化遗产。
am more than happy to introduce to you Mount Tai
第二部分 介绍自然遗产
1．描述性词汇
①_______________ 名胜古迹
②__________________ 国内外
③_______________________ 因……闻名
④___________________________ 欣赏建筑/风景
places of interest
at home and abroad
be famous/well-known for
admire the architecture/scenery
⑤___________________________ 给某人留下深刻印象
⑥________________________ 享有盛誉
⑦____________________ 开拓视野
⑧_________________________ 在……方面起重要作用
⑨cover an area of ...square metres _______________
leave a deep impression on sb.
enjoy a great reputation as
expand one's horizons
play an important part in ...
占地……平方米
⑩be open to the public ___________
be located in _______
be listed as _______
one of the most famous places _________________
breathtaking scenery ________________
对公众开放
坐落于
被列为
最著名的地方之一
令人惊叹的风景
2．介绍名胜古迹
①The mountain __________________________________, boasting breathtaking natural scenery.
这座山吸引了来自世界各地的游客，拥有令人叹为观止的自然风光。
attracts tourists from all over the world
②Yungang Caves in Datong, Shanxi Province, are a world cultural heritage site with a history _______________________________________.
山西大同云冈石窟是世界文化遗产，其历史可以追溯到1 500多年前。
③That is because you can ___________________________ and enjoy the delicious food.
这是因为你能在这里欣赏独特的建筑，享受美食。
that dates back to more than 1,500 years ago
admire the unique architecture
④___________________________, China, the Forbidden City was the Chinese imperial palace from the mid-Ming Dynasty to the end of the Qing Dynasty.
紫禁城位于中国北京市中心，从明朝中期到清朝末期一直是皇宫。
⑤The Forbidden City, ___________________________________
______________, was listed as one of the World Heritage Sites in 1987.
紫禁城占地72万多平方米，1987年被列为世界文化遗产。
Located in the centre of Beijing
which covers an area of over 720,000
square metres
第三部分 总结升华
①I highly recommend visiting Mount Tai _________________
____________________________________.
我强烈推荐你参观泰山，去领略历史与自然的壮美交融。
②I hope to ______________________________ this majestic mountain with you someday.
我希望有一天能有机会和你一起探索这座雄伟的山。
to appreciate the
magnificent blend of history and nature
have the opportunity to explore
③By visiting the Forbidden City, you _______________________
_____________ and you'll be amazed by its design.
通过参观紫禁城，你会更好地了解中国文化，同时你会被它的设计所震撼。
④I __________________________________ this great wonder for the well-being of future generations.
为了我们子孙后代的福祉，我把保护这一伟大奇迹看作是一项重大行动。
will understand Chinese
culture better
regard it as a significant act to preserve
⑤As a student from Yunnan, I feel proud of this natural heritage and ______________________________________________.
作为一名来自云南的学生，我为这一自然遗产感到骄傲，并把在世界范围内推广这一遗产当作我的责任。
consider it my responsibility to promote it worldwide
[针对练笔]
长城在1987年被联合国教科文组织列为世界文化遗产，请根据提示以“主题句＋支撑句”的模式写一个片段描述其入选原因。
1．长城位于中国北部，全长约6 700公里；
2．长城最初修建于秦朝，目的是抵御外敌入侵；
3．长城是古代劳动人民创造的奇迹，是人类历史上最伟大的工程之一。
参考范文：
The Great Wall was listed as a World Heritage Site by UNESCO in 1987.It is located in the northern part of China, the length of which is about 6,700 kilometers. It was originally built in the Qin Dynasty to defend against the attack of the enemies.It is a wonder created by the ancient Chinese working people and it is one of the greatest projects in the history of human beings.
主题语段
Located in the southeast of China as one of the best-known nature reserves, Mount Wuyi is a fascinating natural wonder that boasts breathtaking scenery, incredible biodiversity and a bunch of temples.With both natural and cultural values, it has been a popular tourist attraction for ages and listed as a UNESCO World Heritage Site since 1999.
写作素材储备
Comprising unique rock formations, clear rivers, and vast forests, Mount Wuyi provides a habitat for a wide variety of wildlife to thrive.
武夷山位于中国东南部，是著名的自然保护区之一，也是一处迷人的自然奇观，拥有令人惊叹的风景、令人难以置信的生物多样性和众多的寺庙。它兼具自然和文化价值，多年来一直是受欢迎的旅游景点，1999年被联合国教科文组织列为世界遗产。武夷山由独特的岩层、清澈的河流和广阔的森林组成，为各种野生动物提供了繁衍的栖息地。
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.靓表达升级
1．Hello, everyone.I feel very honored to deliver a speech about protecting these cultural relics.(用it作形式主语升级)
Hello, everyone.It is a great honor for me to deliver a speech about protecting these cultural relics.
No.2 课时跟踪检测
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2．The Great Wall is located in the northern part of China, with the length of about 21,196 kilometers and it was added to the World Heritage List in 1987.(用过去分词短语作状语升级)
Located in the northern part of China, with the length of about 21,196 kilometers, the Great Wall was added to the World Heritage List in 1987.
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3．Dujiangyan Irrigation System was built over 2,000 years ago and is still playing an important part in irrigation today.(用非限制性定语从句升级)
Dujiangyan Irrigation System, which was built over 2,000 years ago, is still playing an important part in irrigation today.
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4．Lying in the center of the city, Shanghai Museum will offer you a window and you can have a better understanding of Chinese culture from it.(用“介词＋关系代词”引导的定语从句升级)
Lying in the center of the city, Shanghai Museum will offer you a window, from which you can have a better understanding of Chinese culture.
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5．As a famous scenic spot in Guangdong, Lianhua Mountain covers an area of 2.33 square kilometers and is surrounded by lakes.Lianhua Mountain is well-known for its breathtaking scenery.(用非谓语动词升级)
As a famous scenic spot in Guangdong, covering an area of 2.33 square kilometers and surrounded by lakes, Lianhua Mountain is well-known for its breathtaking scenery.
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Ⅱ.微语境写作
1．__________________ (我深感荣幸) to stand here to give you a lecture on ___________________________________________________ (如何保护长城——我们中国的文化遗产)．
2．_____________________________________________________
_________________ (伦敦塔被列为世界文化遗产的原因) is its tourism and cultural value.
I feel very honored
how to protect the Great Wall, our Chinese cultural relics
The reason why the Tower of London was listed as World
Cultural Heritage
3．As we know, Huangshan Mountain, _____________________
_______________ (位于安徽省南部), is one of the most famous tourist attractions in China.
4．Covering more than 1,600 hectares, the park ____________ (是……的栖息地) over 380 varieties of birds, which ___________ (占……比例) more than 90% of the whole amount of bird kinds in Hebei Province.
located in the south of
Anhui Province
is home to
account for
5．_________________________________ (坐落在长江之畔), this beautiful old city has become a popular tourist attraction now, __________________________________________ (吸引着来自世界各地的许多游客)．
Located on the banks of Yangtze River
attracting many visitors from all over the world
Ⅲ.应用文写作
假定你是李华，正在“山水甲天下”的桂林旅游。这里山清水秀，景色宜人。请你发一封电子邮件将你的经历告诉在上海学习汉语的你的外国朋友Tom，内容包括：
1．旅游经历；2．建议他去桂林旅游。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2．请按如下格式作答。
参考词汇：梯田terrace 山歌folk song
广西壮族自治区Guangxi Zhuang Autonomous Region
参考范文：
Dear Tom，
Now I'm writing to share my traveling experience in Guilin with you.It's in Guangxi Zhuang Autonomous Region, China.
I have been here for five days, during which time not only did I enjoy the fascinating scenery like the magical terraces, unique mountains and clear rivers, but also I tried the traditional weaving of Zhuang people.What impressed me most was the spectacular folk song singing competition on the Lijiang River, which attracted thousands of visitors and locals.
Guilin enjoys a worldwide reputation for its beautiful scenery, so it's well worth visiting.I strongly recommend you visit it after finishing your study.
Yours truly，
Li Hua
Ⅳ.片段续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Melati and Isabel deeply love their home on the island, surrounded by tropical rain forests, green fields, and a vast ocean. Enjoying a swim at their local beach was once a daily pleasure for them. But when Melati was fifteen, and Isabel just ten,
the sisters started to lose their enthusiasm for swimming in the waters near their home.More often than not, plastic bags would be around them as they swam and some were scattered on the beach.They got really upset about that.
Melati didn't think much about it until one day her teacher gave a lesson on some world heroes.Each of those people had sparked movements of positive changes in the world.They believed in the impact they could have and they did inspire more people to do something meaningful.After school, Melati walked home slowly in silence, concerned about the vast amount of plastic rubbish on the beach.The heroes crossed her mind.If they could do it, we could do it too, she thought.The idea lit her up.She couldn't wait to share what she thought with Isabel and quickened her pace.
“So many plastic bags around! The beach is dirty and messy! It's so terrible! We have lost the clean and beautiful beach.Can't we do something to get it back？” Melati said heartily.Isabel felt a bit puzzled at what to do, but she also had a strong desire to do something.Picturing a beach as fascinating as before in mind, the pair jumped with joy.
They talked a lot, anxious to know how Dad and Mom would respond to their ideas.That night when the family sat by the dinner table, the sisters eagerly got their ideas across.While Mom and Dad listened to the girls carefully, their eyes shone. “How amazing that would be! We are so proud of you！” Dad exclaimed.Mom came up, gave them a thumbs-up and hugged the sisters.
注意： 1.续写词数应为80左右；
2.要求逻辑通顺，情节合理，重点描写她们采取了哪些行动来清理海滩。
参考范文：
Melati and Isabel decided to make a positive impact straight away. They took advantage of their spare time to pick up rubbish on the beach. However, it was soon that they realized that they couldn't solve the problem on their own, for there was so much plastic.After discussions and preparations, they started an organization to spread their idea among youth, involving more youths in the movement, which proved to be a hit.More and more teenagers took part.In a month, they altogether collected and recycled 2.5 tons of plastic, recovering the beautiful beach.
[阅读拓展训练]
阅读七选五
If you're looking for something fun to do, pack a picnic dinner and take your family or friends to a beautiful place to eat.However, there's a wrong trend to view picnics as an excuse to transport food in single-use plastic containers.Sure, it means the cleanup is easy at the moment, but it just puts it off to a later point, when it takes the form of volunteer cleanups and landfill management. 1 What follows is advice on how to pack such a picnic.
·Use food containers smartly
Using reusable containers is the easiest way to reduce waste. 2 For example, to reduce packaging, you can take along things like a loaf of bread, a whole watermelon, whole vegetables, a knife and a board to cut your food when you're ready to eat.It doesn't all have to be done and sealed (密封) before you leave the house.
·Choose real cutlery (餐具)
Using washable dishes and cutlery for a picnic does not require much more work than single-use ones.
You'd have to carry the waste out anyway in a trash bag, so why not pack your dirty plates and cutlery into a bag and put them in the dishwasher at home 3
·Think about the drinks
Forget the single-use, single-serve drink bottles. 4 Fill a large thermos (保温瓶) or personal water bottles with water, juice or lemonade at pared with a single-use plastic cup, they have the added advantage of keeping your drinks warmer for longer.
·Put cloth bags to good use
Cloth bags are amazing.I use them for so much more than just buying food at the store.They're perfect for packing sandwiches, dried or whole fruit, and other snack foods.You can use them to pack glasses or plates to prevent breaking.They can also work as a napkin, tea towel, or trash bag if needed. 5
A．Be sure to add a few to your picnic basket.
B．There are some healthy dishes you can make or buy.
C．To avoid this, a plastic-free picnic can be a brilliant idea.
D．If you're worried about breaking, take some light camping plates.
E．Instead, just bring along a cloth tablecloth to spread on the ground.
F．These create a huge amount of waste, which can be easily avoided.
G．In addition, keep in mind that you don't have to pre-pack everything.
语篇解读：本文是一篇说明文。文章讲述了无塑料野餐，并给出了具体的建议。
1．选C 上文讲述了野餐营地塑料垃圾的清理问题，C项“为了避免这种情况，无塑料野餐是一个不错的主意。”承接上文，且引起下文“以下是关于如何打包这样的野餐的建议”。
2．选G 上文讲述使用可重复使用的容器可以减少浪费，下文介绍了几种减少包装的方法。G项“此外，请记住，你不必预先打包所有的东西。”与上文构成递进关系，且引起下文。
3．选D 上文提到使用可洗的盘子和餐具野餐并建议把盘子和餐具装进袋子里带回家，D项“如果你担心打破(它们)，那么请带一些轻点的露营盘子。”承接上文，符合语境。
4．选F 上文提到不要使用一次性饮料瓶，下文建议使用大保温瓶和水瓶装饮料。F项“这些都会造成大量的浪费，而这样的浪费是很容易避免的。”是上文使用一次性饮料瓶的结果，且引出下文避免这种浪费的建议，选项中的These指代上文提到的drink bottles。
5．选A 上文讲述了使用布袋的益处，A项“一定要在你的野餐篮子里放一些。”承接上文，符合语境。5 / 5
Section Ⅵ Writing
写作项目——Drafting a lecture
本单元的写作任务要求写一篇发言稿，介绍一处世界自然遗产。发言稿一般包含开场问候、开篇点题、内容阐述、结尾总结等。其中，“内容阐述”为写作的重点。时态以一般现在时为主；人称以第一、第三人称为主。
由教材学写作
一、学文体架构
根据教材课文总结出该类文体的框架：
二、学精彩导入
本文开头采用了If引导的条件句，在与读者互动的同时，自然导入了文章主题，既拉近了与读者之间的距离，又有助于激发读者的阅读兴趣，展现了作者较高的语言运用技巧。
_________________________________________， I will say Harry Potter without hesitation.
如果你问我最喜欢的书是哪一本，我会毫不犹豫地回答：《哈利·波特》。
三、学亮点表达
1．第二句中的must在此用作名词，表示“必须做(或看)的事”，同时该词加了引号，进一步突出强调了游览梵净山的必要性。
________________________ for all lovers of science fiction.
他的新作是所有科幻小说爱好者的必读书。
2．第二句中的名词短语A “must” for anyone visiting Guizhou Province在句中作Fanjing Mountain的同位语；倒数第二句中的名词短语One of the first national nature reserves in China也是作Fanjing Mountain的同位语。两个同位语简洁明了地补充了梵净山的相关信息，描述更细致、具体，使读者对梵净山的印象更深刻，令他们对梵净山心向往之。
3．文中运用了national, greatest, renowned, breathtaking等形容词描述梵净山，使之在读者心目中的形象更高大、完美，突出了它的独特之处。
具体写作指导
How to draft a lecture about a natural heritage——写一篇介绍自然遗产的发言稿
第一步：构思谋篇
Part 1 1.Greeting2.Introduction to the topic
Part 2 Introduce the natural heritage in detail
Part 3 Conclusion
第二步：要点表达
第一部分 导入主题
1．写作背景：表示欢迎
①It's my great pleasure to ____________________________________________ in Jinan.
我很高兴向大家介绍济南一处神奇的自然遗产。
②I ______________________ I have the chance to act as your tour guide today.
我很荣幸今天有机会当你们的导游。
③It gives me great pleasure ______________， our foreign friends, to the Forbidden City!
外国朋友们，很高兴欢迎你们来到紫禁城！
2．写作目的：做简单的介绍(以泰山为例)
①I am excited to share with you the wonders of Mount Tai, ________________________________________________.
泰山位于山东省。我很高兴与你分享泰山的奇观。
②Have you ever heard of Mount Tai, the highest peak in the region ________________________________ thousands of years
你听说过泰山吗？它的主峰有数千年的历史。
③In order to make sure you will have ______________________________ here, I __________________ give you a brief introduction to it.
为了确保您在这里度过一次愉快而难忘的旅行，我迫不及待地想给您简要介绍一下。
④I ______________________________________________________， a UNESCO World Heritage Site that embodies the spirit of Chinese civilization.
我非常乐意向各位介绍泰山。泰山承载着中华文明之魂，并已被联合国教科文组织列为世界文化遗产。
第二部分 介绍自然遗产
1．描述性词汇
①______________ 名胜古迹
②______________ 国内外
③______________ 因……闻名
④______________ 欣赏建筑/风景
⑤_______________ 给某人留下深刻印象
⑥______________ 享有盛誉
⑦______________ 开拓视野
⑧______________ 在……方面起重要作用
⑨cover an area of ...square metres ______________
⑩be open to the public ______________
be located in ______________
be listed as ______________
one of the most famous places ______________
breathtaking scenery ______________
2．介绍名胜古迹
①The mountain __________________________________， boasting breathtaking natural scenery.这座山吸引了来自世界各地的游客，拥有令人叹为观止的自然风光。
②Yungang Caves in Datong, Shanxi Province, are a world cultural heritage site with a history ____________________________________________________.
山西大同云冈石窟是世界文化遗产，其历史可以追溯到1 500多年前。
③That is because you can __________________________________________ and enjoy the delicious food.
这是因为你能在这里欣赏独特的建筑，享受美食。
④__________________________________， China, the Forbidden City was the Chinese imperial palace from the mid-Ming Dynasty to the end of the Qing Dynasty.紫禁城位于中国北京市中心，从明朝中期到清朝末期一直是皇宫。
⑤The Forbidden City, __________________________________________， was listed as one of the World Heritage Sites in 1987.紫禁城占地72万多平方米，1987年被列为世界文化遗产。
第三部分 总结升华
①I highly recommend visiting Mount Tai _______________________________________
________________________________________________________________________.
我强烈推荐你参观泰山，去领略历史与自然的壮美交融。
②I hope to ____________________________________________ this majestic mountain with you someday.
我希望有一天能有机会和你一起探索这座雄伟的山。
③By visiting the Forbidden City, you ____________________________________________ and you'll be amazed by its design.
通过参观紫禁城，你会更好地了解中国文化，同时你会被它的设计所震撼。
④I ___________________________________________________this great wonder for the well-being of future generations.为了我们子孙后代的福祉，我把保护这一伟大奇迹看作是一项重大行动。
⑤As a student from Yunnan, I feel proud of this natural heritage and ____________________________________________.
作为一名来自云南的学生，我为这一自然遗产感到骄傲，并把在世界范围内推广这一遗产当作我的责任。
[针对练笔]
长城在1987年被联合国教科文组织列为世界文化遗产，请根据提示以“主题句＋支撑句”的模式写一个片段描述其入选原因。
1．长城位于中国北部，全长约6 700公里；
2．长城最初修建于秦朝，目的是抵御外敌入侵；
3．长城是古代劳动人民创造的奇迹，是人类历史上最伟大的工程之一。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
写作素材储备
主题语段
Located in the southeast of China as one of the best-known nature reserves, Mount Wuyi is a fascinating natural wonder that boasts breathtaking scenery, incredible biodiversity and a bunch of temples.With both natural and cultural values, it has been a popular tourist attraction for ages and listed as a UNESCO World Heritage Site since prising unique rock formations, clear rivers, and vast forests, Mount Wuyi provides a habitat for a wide variety of wildlife to thrive.
武夷山位于中国东南部，是著名的自然保护区之一，也是一处迷人的自然奇观，拥有令人惊叹的风景、令人难以置信的生物多样性和众多的寺庙。它兼具自然和文化价值，多年来一直是受欢迎的旅游景点，1999年被联合国教科文组织列为世界遗产。武夷山由独特的岩层、清澈的河流和广阔的森林组成，为各种野生动物提供了繁衍的栖息地。
Section Ⅵ
由教材学写作
二、If you ask me what my favorite book is
三、His new novel is a must
具体写作指导
第二步 第一部分：1.①introduce a fantastic natural heritage to you ②feel honoured that ③to welcome you
2．①which is located in the province of Shandong ②with a history of ③an enjoyable and unforgettable trip; can hardly wait to
④am more than happy to introduce to you Mount Tai
第二部分：1.①places of interest ②at home and abroad
③be famous/well known for ④admire the architecture/scenery ⑤leave a deep impression on sb. ⑥enjoy a great reputation as
⑦expand one's horizons ⑧play an important part in ...
⑨占地……平方米 ⑩对公众开放 坐落于 被列为
最著名的地方之一 令人惊叹的风景
2．①attracts tourists from all over the world ②that dates back to more than 1,500 years ago ③admire the unique architecture
④Located in the centre of Beijing
⑤which covers an area of over 720,000 square metres
第三部分：①to appreciate the magnificent blend of history and nature
②have the opportunity to explore ③will understand Chinese
culture better ④regard it as a significant act to preserve
⑤consider it my responsibility to promote it worldwide
[针对练笔]
参考范文：
The Great Wall was listed as a World Heritage Site by UNESCO in 1987.It is located in the northern part of China, the length of which is about 6,700 kilometers. It was originally built in the Qin Dynasty to defend against the attack of the enemies.It is a wonder created by the ancient Chinese working people and it is one of the greatest projects in the history of human beings.4 / 4
UNIT 5 课时检测(六) Writing
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.靓表达升级
1．Hello, everyone.I feel very honored to deliver a speech about protecting these cultural relics.(用it 作形式主语升级)
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2．The Great Wall is located in the northern part of China, with the length of about 21,196 kilometers and it was added to the World Heritage List in 1987.(用过去分词短语作状语升级)
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3．Dujiangyan Irrigation System was built over 2,000 years ago and is still playing an important part in irrigation today.(用非限制性定语从句升级)
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4．Lying in the center of the city, Shanghai Museum will offer you a window and you can have a better understanding of Chinese culture from it.
(用“介词＋关系代词”引导的定语从句升级)
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5．As a famous scenic spot in Guangdong, Lianhua Mountain covers an area of 2.33 square kilometers and is surrounded by lakes.Lianhua Mountain is well known for its breathtaking scenery.(用非谓语动词升级)
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Ⅱ.微语境写作
1．________________________ (我深感荣幸) to stand here to give you a lecture on ______________________________________________________ (如何保护长城——我们中国的文化遗产)．
2．____________________________________________________________________________________ (伦敦塔被列为世界文化遗产的原因) is its tourism and cultural value.
3．As we know, Huangshan Mountain, __________________________________ (位于安徽省南部), is one of the most famous tourist attractions in China.
4．Covering more than 1,600 hectares, the park ______________ (是……的栖息地) over 380 varieties of birds, which ______________ (占……比例) more than 90% of the whole amount of bird kinds in Hebei Province.
5．________________________________________ (坐落在长江之畔), this beautiful old city has become a popular tourist attraction now, ______________________________________________ (吸引着来自世界各地的许多游客)．
Ⅲ.应用文写作
假定你是李华，正在“山水甲天下”的桂林旅游。这里山清水秀，景色宜人。请你发一封电子邮件将你的经历告诉在上海学习汉语的你的外国朋友Tom，内容包括：
1．旅游经历； 2.建议他去桂林旅游。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
参考词汇：梯田terrace 山歌folk song
广西壮族自治区Guangxi Zhuang Autonomous Region
Dear Tom，
Now I'm writing to share my traveling experience in Guilin with you.
Yours truly，
Li Hua
Ⅳ.片段续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Melati and Isabel deeply love their home on the island, surrounded by tropical rain forests, green fields, and a vast ocean.Enjoying a swim at their local beach was once a daily pleasure for them.But when Melati was fifteen, and Isabel just ten, the sisters started to lose their enthusiasm for swimming in the waters near their home.More often than not, plastic bags would be around them as they swam and some were scattered on the beach.They got really upset about that.
Melati didn't think much about it until one day her teacher gave a lesson on some world heroes.Each of those people had sparked movements of positive changes in the world.They believed in the impact they could have and they did inspire more people to do something meaningful.After school, Melati walked home slowly in silence, concerned about the vast amount of plastic rubbish on the beach.The heroes crossed her mind.If they could do it, we could do it too, she thought.The idea lit her up.She couldn't wait to share what she thought with Isabel and quickened her pace.
“So many plastic bags around! The beach is dirty and messy! It's so terrible! We have lost the clean and beautiful beach.Can't we do something to get it back？” Melati said heartily.Isabel felt a bit puzzled at what to do, but she also had a strong desire to do something.Picturing a beach as fascinating as before in mind, the pair jumped with joy.
They talked a lot, anxious to know how Dad and Mom would respond to their ideas.That night when the family sat by the dinner table, the sisters eagerly got their ideas across.While Mom and Dad listened to the girls carefully, their eyes shone. “How amazing that would be! We are so proud of you！” Dad exclaimed.Mom came up, gave them a thumbs up and hugged the sisters.
注意： 1.续写词数应为80左右；
2.要求逻辑通顺，情节合理，重点描写她们采取了哪些行动来清理海滩。
Melati and Isabel decided to make a positive impact straight away.
[阅读拓展训练]
阅读七选五
If you're looking for something fun to do, pack a picnic dinner and take your family or friends to a beautiful place to eat.However, there's a wrong trend to view picnics as an excuse to transport food in single use plastic containers.Sure, it means the cleanup is easy at the moment, but it just puts it off to a later point, when it takes the form of volunteer cleanups and landfill management.___1__ What follows is advice on how to pack such a picnic.
·Use food containers smartly
Using reusable containers is the easiest way to reduce waste.___2__ For example, to reduce packaging, you can take along things like a loaf of bread, a whole watermelon, whole vegetables, a knife and a board to cut your food when you're ready to eat.It doesn't all have to be done and sealed (密封) before you leave the house.
·Choose real cutlery (餐具)
Using washable dishes and cutlery for a picnic does not require much more work than single use ones.
You'd have to carry the waste out anyway in a trash bag, so why not pack your dirty plates and cutlery into a bag and put them in the dishwasher at home __3__
·Think about the drinks
Forget the single use, single serve drink bottles.__4__ Fill a large thermos (保温瓶) or personal water bottles with water, juice or lemonade at pared with a single use plastic cup, they have the added advantage of keeping your drinks warmer for longer.
·Put cloth bags to good use
Cloth bags are amazing.I use them for so much more than just buying food at the store.They're perfect for packing sandwiches, dried or whole fruit, and other snack foods.You can use them to pack glasses or plates to prevent breaking.They can also work as a napkin, tea towel, or trash bag if needed.___5__
A．Be sure to add a few to your picnic basket.
B．There are some healthy dishes you can make or buy.
C．To avoid this, a plastic free picnic can be a brilliant idea.
D．If you're worried about breaking, take some light camping plates.
E．Instead, just bring along a cloth tablecloth to spread on the ground.
F．These create a huge amount of waste, which can be easily avoided.
G．In addition, keep in mind that you don't have to pre pack everything.
UNIT 5 课时检测(六)
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.1.Hello, everyone.It is a great honor for me to deliver a speech about protecting these cultural relics.
2．Located in the northern part of China, with the length of about 21,196 kilometers, the Great Wall was added to the World Heritage List in 1987.
3．Dujiangyan Irrigation System, which was built over 2,000 years ago, is still playing an important part in irrigation today.
4．Lying in the center of the city, Shanghai Museum will offer you a window, from which you can have a better understanding of Chinese culture.
5．As a famous scenic spot in Guangdong, covering an area of 2.33 square kilometers and surrounded by lakes, Lianhua Mountain is well known for its breathtaking scenery.
Ⅱ.1.I feel very honored; how to protect the Great Wall, our Chinese cultural relics 2.The reason why the Tower of London was listed as World Cultural Heritage 3.located in the south of Anhui Province
4．is home to; account for 5.Located on the banks of Yangtze River; attracting many visitors from all over the world
Ⅲ.应用文写作(参考范文)
Dear Tom，
Now I'm writing to share my traveling experience in Guilin with you.It's in Guangxi Zhuang Autonomous Region, China.
I have been here for five days, during which time not only did I enjoy the fascinating scenery like the magical terraces, unique mountains and clear rivers, but also I tried the traditional weaving of Zhuang people.What impressed me most was the spectacular folk song singing competition on the Lijiang River, which attracted thousands of visitors and locals.
Guilin enjoys a worldwide reputation for its beautiful scenery, so it's well worth visiting.I strongly recommend you visit it after finishing your study.
Yours truly，
Li Hua
Ⅳ.片段续写(参考范文)
Melati and Isabel decided to make a positive impact straight away.They took advantage of their spare time to pick up rubbish on the beach.However, it was soon that they realized that they couldn't solve the problem on their own, for there was so much plastic.After discussions and preparations, they started an organization to spread their idea among youth, involving more youths in the movement, which proved to be a hit.More and more teenagers took part.In a month, they altogether collected and recycled 2.5 tons of plastic, recovering the beautiful beach.
[阅读拓展训练]
语篇解读：本文是一篇说明文。文章讲述了无塑料野餐，并给出了具体的建议。
1．选C 上文讲述了野餐营地塑料垃圾的清理问题，C项“为了避免这种情况，无塑料野餐是一个不错的主意。”承接上文，且引起下文“以下是关于如何打包这样的野餐的建议”。
2．选G 上文讲述使用可重复使用的容器可以减少浪费，下文介绍了几种减少包装的方法。G项“此外，请记住，你不必预先打包所有的东西。”与上文构成递进关系，且引起下文。
3．选D 上文提到使用可洗的盘子和餐具野餐并建议把盘子和餐具装进袋子里带回家，D项“如果你担心打破(它们)，那么请带一些轻点的露营盘子。”承接上文，符合语境。
4．选F 上文提到不要使用一次性饮料瓶，下文建议使用大保温瓶和水瓶装饮料。F项“这些都会造成大量的浪费，而这样的浪费是很容易避免的。”是上文使用一次性饮料瓶的结果，且引出下文避免这种浪费的建议，选项中的These指代上文提到的drink bottles。
5．选A 上文讲述了使用布袋的益处，A项“一定要在你的野餐篮子里放一些。”承接上文，符合语境。
