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Section Ⅵ
Writing
NO 1
(写作项目——Writing a survival story)
NO 2
课时跟踪检测
目 录
(写作项目——Writing a survival story)
本单元的写作任务是写一篇求生故事，属于以写事为主的记叙文。在写作时应注意记叙六要素(时间、地点、人物、事件的起因、经过和结果)，注意描写的先后顺序以及记事顺序和记事的完整性，注意把握好事件的开始、发展、高潮及结果。
一、学文体架构
根据教材课文总结出该类文体的框架：
由教材学写作
二、学写作手法
1．第二段第二句中的Fortunately ...because ...和最后一句中的That's lucky, because ...运用相同的表达方式阐述了作者在生存方面的保障——住所和水，给作者为生存而努力的决心，给读者以作者能生存的信心，使语言整齐划一而又波澜迭起，曲折有致，变化多姿。
2.第二段采用了先抑后扬的写作手法，先说明困境的严重性，然后用Fortunately, but, lucky 等词说明目前作者所能做的努力，反映了作者积极克服困难，努力摆脱困境的坚韧不拔和乐观向上的精神。
三、学情感表达
第三段使用了如am worried about, need, must, can, hope等一些揭示心理活动的词汇，生动地描述了作者担忧而又满怀希望的心情。特别是最后两句“If I can solve that challenge, and if the electricity supply holds.I can survive until I am rescued. There's still hope！”强烈地表达出作者打算抓住仅存的一线希望，设法生存下去的决心。
Our teacher _______________ because there was only a little time left for us to finish this task.
我们的老师很担心，因为我们只剩下一点时间来完成这项任务。
仿写训练|完成句子
was very worried
四、学亮点表达
1．第一段第一句中使用了accidentally“出其不意地”，强调了作者在毫无思想准备的情况下被留在了火星上，为整篇文章的情节发展奠定了基调。
2．在第二段中，作者使用了After，Fortunately, What's more, but, because等过渡性词语，串联作者面临危险和设法生存的情节，使句与句之间连贯、顺畅，一气呵成。
How to write a survival story
——如何写求生故事
第一步：构思谋篇
具体写作指导
Part 1 Brief introduction about when, where, who, what ...
Part 2 Specific information of what the dangers were and how you managed to survive, etc.
Part 3 Conclusion of your feelings.
第二步：要点表达
第一部分 故事发生的背景
1．交代故事背景的常用词汇
①______________ 做好准备
②_________________ 一次不同寻常的经历
③________________________ 一次难忘的经历
④look back on the past _________
⑤remind me of the event ______________
be prepared for
quite an experience
an unforgettable experience
回首往事
让我想起那件事
2．常用句式
①I ________________________________ when I was a child.
当我还是孩子的时候，确实有一次难忘的经历。
②Last week, my friends and I went on a camping journey in the woods, and we_____________________________________.
上周，我和朋友们在树林里露营，我们经历了一次难忘的冒险。
did have an unforgettable experience
went through an unforgettable adventure
③_________________________________, I never forget the evening party.
虽然那是三年前的事了，但我从未忘记那个晚会。
④________________________ when the accident happened.
事故发生在一个凉爽的秋夜。
⑤One day, Tom _____________________________________ he saw a boy lying on the ground.
一天，汤姆放学骑自行车回家，这时他看见一个男孩正躺在地上。
Although it happened three years ago
It was a cool autumn night
was riding his bike home from school when
第二部分 讲述求生经过
1．遭遇危险的描述性词语
①____________ 被困在
②___________ 感到紧张
③___________________________ 遇到可怕的情况
④___________________ 感到绝望
⑤__________________ 更糟糕的是
be trapped in
feel nervous
encounter a terrifying situation
feel a sense of despair
to make things worse
2．走出困境的描述性词语
①show our determination ______________
②be worth having a try ________
③To our relief ... ____________
④remain calm and optimistic ______________
表明我们的决心
值得一试
……如释重负
保持冷静和乐观
3．常用句式
①When I_______________, I found I was lying in bed in the hospital.
当我苏醒的时候，发现自己躺在医院的床上。
②When I just went to the middle of the street, a car suddenly appeared and______________________.
我刚到路中间，一辆小汽车突然出现，直接冲我开过来。
came to myself
came directly toward me
③Hearing the cry, I immediately rushed to the bank and jumped into the water___________________________.
听到哭声，我立即冲到岸边，连衣服都没脱就跳进了水里。
④_____________________________, people who were trapped in the flood were saved.
在救援队的帮助下，困在洪水中的人们得救了。
without taking off my clothes
With the help of the rescue team
⑤The firefighters hurried there at once and __________________
________，but the fire was so big that it lasted five hours.
消防队员们立即赶到那里，勇敢地灭火，但火势太大，持续了5个小时。
⑥Without a compass, I____________, and now I am lost in dense jungle.
没有指南针，我失去了方向，现在我迷失在茂密的丛林中。
fought against it
bravely
lost direction
⑦I _____________________to be calm and optimistic at every moment.
我必须提醒自己要时刻保持冷静、乐观。
have to remind myself
第三部分 表达个人感悟
①This experience taught us the importance of ________________
any situation.
这次经历告诉我们为任何情况做好准备的重要性。
②Knowing the importance of first aid, he learned some knowledge about first aid, hoping one day what he learned could _____
_______________________.
认识到急救的重要性，他学习了一些急救知识，希望有一天他所学到的知识能对别人有很大的帮助。
being prepared for
make
a great difference to others
③It doesn't matter how much money she actually has with her;_____________________, a faith that the miracle does exist.
她身上带了多少钱并不重要，重要的是她的信念——相信奇迹真的会出现。
what matters is her faith
[针对练笔]
你校英语俱乐部正在开展主题为“A survival story”的故事大赛，请你用英语写一则求生故事参赛。要点包括：
1．面临的困境； 2.求生的经过。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考范文：
When my friends and I set out on a camping journey in the woods last week, we never expected to encounter such a terrifying situation.
A sudden storm occurred during our hike, and our backpacks were nowhere to be found.Lost and lacking food and water, we felt a sense of despair.However, we knew we had no others to rely on.Drawing upon survival skills shown on TV, first, we encouraged and helped each other and faced the challenge bravely. Second, we tried
our best to find a shelter where we waited and waited until the strong wind died down and the heavy rain came to a stop.After the storm passed, we successfully made it out of the woods before sunset.Fortunately, we survived the sudden storm.
This experience taught us the importance of being prepared for any situation.
写作素材储备
(一)写作佳句
1．故事背景
①Last week, I went for a(n) ...
②Yesterday, I took part in ...
③Last Friday, I went ...with ...
④On ...I decided to go for a(n) ...in ...
⑤When I was on a trip to ...with ..., I ...
2．故事经过
①I got lost in ...
②I was separated from others.
③I found myself standing alone in the middle of ...
④I tried to find ...but failed.
⑤Realising that there was no ..., I felt desperate.
⑥I managed to find ...to supply energy.
⑦I walked along ...trying to find my way out.
⑧I was confident that I could survive.
3．故事结局
①Finally, I was saved/rescued by ...
②After walking non-stop for ...hours, I luckily got out of ...though exhausted.
③Just when I was about to lose hope, I saw ...
④In the end, a group of rescuers found me and ...
⑤This is really an unforgettable experience, from which I've realised ...
(二)主题语段
On the way to the campsite, we climbed a hill，and then we swam across a river, putting the backpacks on a large piece of wood we had found by the river.As we got into a forest, we lost our way.Luckily, we found the right direction with the compass.By the time we arrived at the campsite, it had already been dark.Li Ming then put up the tent, and I made a fire and started cooking.
在去营地的路上，我们爬过一座小山，游过一条河。在河边找到一大块木头，我们把背包放到上面。进入森林后，我们迷路了。幸运的是，我们用指南针找准了方向。当我们到达营地时，天已经黑了。然后李明搭起帐篷，我生了火，开始做饭。
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.靓表达升级
1．If we human beings show our love to animals, they can be preserved.(用only if倒装结构升级)
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No.2 课时跟踪检测
Only if we human beings show our love to them can animals be preserved.
2．Some wild animals are endangered because of human activities.(用强调句型升级，强调原因状语)
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3．It is time to take immediate measures.(用 It's high time that ...升级)
→
It is because of human activities that some wild animals are endangered.
It's high time that immediate measures should be taken.
4．When I felt a burst of heat and saw heavy smoke pouring into the room, I quickly shut the door and made sure it was really closed.(用非谓语动词作状语升级)
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Feeling a burst of heat and seeing heavy smoke pouring into the room, I quickly shut the door and made sure it was really closed.
5．As smog is getting increasingly serious, environmental protection has become an urgent issue for human beings.(用 with 复合结构升级)
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With smog getting increasingly serious, environmental protection has become an urgent issue for human beings.
Ⅱ.微语境写作
1．Mr Johnson ____________________________ (正开着车沿河而行这时) he found someone was shouting for help.
2．Travelling with their neighbours, the Greens flew to Australia which _________________________________ (遭受到强烈飓风袭击)．
was driving along the river when
was struck by a tremendous hurricane
3．I tried getting to the second floor, but the smoke was too thick, ____________________________________(使我看不见也无法呼吸)．
4．When I was surfing in the sea, I __________________ (遭遇了暴风雨) and I couldn't _______________ (和……取得联系) my family.
5．Somehow I made it on the cold night, and I ________________
______________ (对我的逃离很乐观) from the snowslide.
preventing me from seeing and breathing
was caught in a storm
get in touch with
was very optimistic
about my escape
Ⅲ.应用文写作
假定你是李华，上周你和班级同学参加了一次野外生存训练(wildness survival program)，请你给你的英国网友Johnson写一封电子邮件描述这次活动并谈谈自己的感受，内容包括：
1．活动的时间和人员；
2．活动过程；
3．你的感受。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Dear Johnson，
Yours，
Li Hua
参考范文：
Dear Johnson，
My classmates and I took part in a wildness survival program from Thursday to Saturday last week.I can't wait to share some relevant details with you.
Before we started, we were equipped with a compass, a map, a first aid kit, tents, flashlights, some food, some clothes and so on.In the wild, we climbed three hills and swam across two rivers.But then we lost our way in the forest.Luckily, we found the right direction with the help of the compass.As soon as we arrived at the campsite, we put up our tents, made a fire and then started cooking.We also learned how to give first aid.
Through the program, we learned to use knowledge gained in class to solve problems.It was quite an unforgettable experience for me.
Yours，
Li Hua
Ⅳ.片段续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Brady was a recently retired search and rescue dog.He was not happy and missed his owner Al because Al had gone out on a rescue mission without him.Al's nephew Steve took Brady along when he and his friend Zach went on a overnight hike.But suddenly Steve and Zach smelled something burning and they realized that lightning had set the woods on fire.
Wind-blown flame had leaped from the top of one tree to another.The long dry summer had turned the forest into a tinderbox (火绒箱) and the thunderstorm wasn't helping much.It had more wind and lightning than rain.Zach pulled Steve's arm.“Let's go! We can make it back to the river we crossed today.” Steve pulled Brady's leash (皮带) and their heads down against the strong fire-wind, they hurried down the path they had followed earlier.The air was full of smoke, and pine branches broke from burning trees with a crisp sound.Steve kept his eyes on the route.All they had to do was to make it down to the river ...
Brady barked a sharp warning.Ahead of them lay a dense curtain of smoke across the path.They'd never make it through that.They would have to find another escape route.The dog was pulling at his leash trying to draw them away from the smoke.This was what Brady was trained to do, and yet Steve was uneasy.It seemed to him they were moving away from the river.
Brady lifted his head and smelled the smoky wind.Suddenly, the dog ran away and disappeared.The boys yelled and shouted for him, but he didn't come back.
They had no choice but to leave him behind.Heartsick, Steve and Zach went up a slope (斜坡)．He couldn't blame Brady for panicking and escaping.He himself wanted to run even though he didn't have a clue which way.They hadn't gone far when there was a familiar bark, and Brady came running toward him.
“Where have you been？” Steve cried.Brady stopped directly in front of him and started pushing him back toward the slope they'd just climbed.When Steve still didn't get it, Brady grabbed the boy's jeans and pulled harder.The message was clear, but Steve hesitated.Of course he remembered what his uncle had said about Brady saving his life, but that had been a long time ago.Was he still sharp enough to get them through this Brady pulled again, urgently.“OK, big guy，” Steve decided.
注意： 1.续写词数应为80左右；
2．要求逻辑通顺，情节合理，重点描写在Brady的带领下，Steve和Zack找到河流并获救的过程。
Brady led them back down the slope and into the trees.
参考范文：
Brady led them back down the slope and into the trees.Several times the big dog stopped to get his escape route.Often he changed direction.How long they'd walked Steve had no idea.He just held onto Brady's leash with one hand and kept putting one foot in front of the other.He was almost numb when he heard the wonderful sound of rushing water.The river! With a yell the boys ran unsteadily forward until they jumped in cool, running water.“Brady, you did it！”
[阅读拓展训练]
阅读七选五
When the British poet Alfred Lord Tennyson described nature as “red in tooth and claw”， he was telling us that the natural world can be cruel as well as beautiful. 1
Most people living in urban areas rarely encounter wild animals in their natural surroundings. 2 And they are willing to get close to them.But for wild animals, it is “eat or be eaten”， and they can't distinguish between humans and other animals.
3 In Canadian woods lives a dog-like animal, coyote, which is a little bigger than a fox, but smaller than a wolf.They usually avoid humans, but the occasional attacks can be deadly.Every year, one or two people end up getting killed by coyotes.
Earlier last year, a herd of elephants in Yunnan left their home in the Xishuangbanna National Nature Reserve and went on a meandering journey through the province.They destroyed crops and buildings along the way.Villages in their path had to be evacuated because of the potential dangers they posed to villagers.Animal experts haven't determined why the elephants went on their journey. 4 The wild animals we love are in a constant struggle for survival.Our expanding into the natural habitats of wild animals can be dangerous for the animals and then us humans as well.
Maybe we should try to stay away from them. 5 Their lives — red in tooth and claw — are difficult enough without us causing them any more problems than they already have.
A．A walk in the woods can be dangerous.
B．It is a way to protect the wild animals, and it's also our responsibility.
C．In Canada, people have a more realistic attitude towards wild animals.
D．In simple terms, we should try to keep proper distance from wild animals.
E．Hence they misunderstand that wild animals are just as friendly as Disney characters.
F．Thanks to active environmental conservation, the number of the elephants grew larger.
G．A reasonable possibility is that they probably needed more room and more food to survive.
语篇解读：本文是一篇议论文。文章以加拿大森林里的土狼伤人和云南大象迁徙为例告诫我们应当远离野生动物的生活栖息地，这是保护它们的一种方式，也是我们的责任。
1．选D 上文提到了英国诗人认为自然界残酷而美丽，D项 “简言之，我们应该与野生动物保持适当的距离”承接前文内容，符合语境。
2．选E 上文提到住在城市的人们很少遇到野生动物，E项承接上文并与上文构成因果关系，与下文衔接连贯，选项中的they指代上文中的住在城市的人们。
3．选A 下文提到了加拿大森林里有一种土狼，有时会把人咬死。由此可推知，此处段首提及的内容与森林有关，A项符合语境。
4．选G 上文提到了动物专家还没确定这些大象迁徙的原因是什么；下文提到了这些野生动物一直在为生存而奋斗。由此可推知，设空处可能是在谈这些大象迁徙的潜在原因。G项提到了一个合理的可能性，恰好与下文的“in a constant struggle for survival”对应。
5．选B 上文提到我们应该尽量远离野生动物。由此可推知，设空处是在解释为什么需要远离野生动物。B项恰好与上下文对应。5 / 5
Section Ⅵ Writing
写作项目——Writing a survival story
本单元的写作任务是写一篇求生故事，属于以写事为主的记叙文。在写作时应注意记叙六要素(时间、地点、人物、事件的起因、经过和结果)，注意描写的先后顺序以及记事顺序和记事的完整性，注意把握好事件的开始、发展、高潮及结果。
由教材学写作
一、学文体架构
根据教材课文总结出该类文体的框架：
二、学写作手法
1．第二段第二句中的Fortunately ...because ...和最后一句中的That's lucky, because ...运用相同的表达方式阐述了作者在生存方面的保障——住所和水，给作者为生存而努力的决心，给读者以作者能生存的信心，使语言整齐划一而又波澜迭起，曲折有致，变化多姿。
2．第二段采用了先抑后扬的写作手法，先说明困境的严重性，然后用Fortunately, but, lucky 等词说明目前作者所能做的努力，反映了作者积极克服困难，努力摆脱困境的坚韧不拔和乐观向上的精神。
三、学情感表达
第三段使用了如am worried about, need, must, can, hope等一些揭示心理活动的词汇，生动地描述了作者担忧而又满怀希望的心情。特别是最后两句“If I can solve that challenge, and if the electricity supply holds.I can survive until I am rescued. There's still hope！”强烈地表达出作者打算抓住仅存的一线希望，设法生存下去的决心。
Our teacher ____________________ because there was only a little time left for us to finish this task.
我们的老师很担心，因为我们只剩下一点时间来完成这项任务。
四、学亮点表达
1．第一段第一句中使用了accidentally“出其不意地”，强调了作者在毫无思想准备的情况下被留在了火星上，为整篇文章的情节发展奠定了基调。
2．在第二段中，作者使用了After，Fortunately, What's more, but, because等过渡性词语，串联作者面临危险和设法生存的情节，使句与句之间连贯、顺畅，一气呵成。
具体写作指导
How to write a survival story——如何写求生故事
第一步：构思谋篇
Part 1 Brief introduction about when, where, who, what ...
Part 2 Specific information of what the dangers were and how you managed to survive, etc.
Part 3 Conclusion of your feelings.
第二步：要点表达
第一部分 故事发生的背景
1．交代故事背景的常用词汇
①______________ 做好准备
②______________ 一次不同寻常的经历
③______________ 一次难忘的经历
④look back on the past ______________
⑤remind me of the event ______________
2．常用句式
①I ____________________________________ when I was a child.
当我还是孩子的时候，确实有一次难忘的经历。
②Last week, my friends and I went on a camping journey in the woods, and we ________________________________________.
上周，我和朋友们在树林里露营，我们经历了一次难忘的冒险。
③____________________________________， I never forget the evening party.
虽然那是三年前的事了，但我从未忘记那个晚会。
④__________________________________ when the accident happened.
事故发生在一个凉爽的秋夜。
⑤One day, Tom ________________________________________________________ he saw a boy lying on the ground.一天，汤姆放学骑自行车回家，这时他看见一个男孩正躺在地上。
第二部分 讲述求生经过
1．遭遇危险的描述性词语
①______________ 被困在
②______________ 感到紧张
③______________ 遇到可怕的情况
④______________ 感到绝望
⑤______________ 更糟糕的是
2．走出困境的描述性词语
①show our determination ______________
②be worth having a try ______________
③To our relief ... ______________
④remain calm and optimistic ______________
3．常用句式
①When I ________________________， I found I was lying in bed in the hospital.
当我苏醒的时候，发现自己躺在医院的床上。
②When I just went to the middle of the street, a car suddenly appeared and ________________________.我刚到路中间，一辆小汽车突然出现，直接冲我开过来。
③Hearing the cry, I immediately rushed to the bank and jumped into the water ________________________.听到哭声，我立即冲到岸边，连衣服都没脱就跳进了水里。
④______________________________， people who were trapped in the flood were saved.
在救援队的帮助下，困在洪水中的人们得救了。
⑤The firefighters hurried there at once and __________________________________， but the fire was so big that it lasted five hours.
消防队员们立即赶到那里，勇敢地灭火，但火势太大，持续了5个小时。
⑥Without a compass, I __________________， and now I am lost in dense jungle.没有指南针，我失去了方向，现在我迷失在茂密的丛林中。
⑦I ________________________ to be calm and optimistic at every moment.
我必须提醒自己要时刻保持冷静、乐观。
第三部分 表达个人感悟
①This experience taught us the importance of ________________________ any situation.
这次经历告诉我们为任何情况做好准备的重要性。
②Knowing the importance of first aid, he learned some knowledge about first aid, hoping one day what he learned could __________________________________.
认识到急救的重要性，他学习了一些急救知识，希望有一天他所学到的知识能对别人有很大的帮助。
③It doesn't matter how much money she actually has with her; __________________________________________， a faith that the miracle does exist.她身上带了多少钱并不重要，重要的是她的信念——相信奇迹真的会出现。
[针对练笔]
你校英语俱乐部正在开展主题为“A survival story”的故事大赛，请你用英语写一则求生故事参赛。要点包括：
1．面临的困境； 2.求生的经过。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
写作素材储备
(一)写作佳句
1．故事背景
①Last week, I went for a(n) ...
②Yesterday, I took part in ...
③Last Friday, I went ...with ...
④On ...I decided to go for a(n) ...in ...
⑤When I was on a trip to ...with ..., I ...
2．故事经过
①I got lost in ...
②I was separated from others.
③I found myself standing alone in the middle of ...
④I tried to find ...but failed.
⑤Realising that there was no ..., I felt desperate.
⑥I managed to find ...to supply energy.
⑦I walked along ...trying to find my way out.
⑧I was confident that I could survive.
3．故事结局
①Finally, I was saved/rescued by ...
②After walking non-stop for ...hours, I luckily got out of ...though exhausted.
③Just when I was about to lose hope, I saw ...
④In the end, a group of rescuers found me and ...
⑤This is really an unforgettable experience, from which I've realised ...
(二)主题语段
On the way to the campsite, we climbed a hill, and then we swam across a river, putting the backpacks on a large piece of wood we had found by the river.As we got into a forest, we lost our way.Luckily, we found the right direction with the compass.By the time we arrived at the campsite, it had already been dark.Li Ming then put up the tent, and I made a fire and started cooking.
在去营地的路上，我们爬过一座小山，游过一条河。在河边找到一大块木头，我们把背包放到上面。进入森林后，我们迷路了。幸运的是，我们用指南针找准了方向。当我们到达营地时，天已经黑了。然后李明搭起帐篷，我生了火，开始做饭。
Section Ⅵ
由教材学写作
三、was very worried
具体写作指导
第二步 第一部分：1.①be prepared for ②quite an experience
③an unforgettable experience ④回首往事 ⑤让我想起那件事
2．①did have an unforgettable experience ②went through an
unforgettable adventure ③Although it happened three years ago ④It was a cool autumn night
⑤was riding his bike home from school when
第二部分：1.①be trapped in ②feel nervous ③encounter a terrifying situation ④feel a sense of despair ⑤to make things worse
2．①表明我们的决心 ②值得一试 ③……如释重负
④保持冷静和乐观
3．①came to myself ②came directly toward me ③without taking off my clothes ④With the help of the rescue team ⑤fought against it bravely ⑥lost direction ⑦have to remind myself
第三部分：①being prepared for ②make a great difference to others ③what matters is her faith
[针对练笔]
参考范文：
When my friends and I set out on a camping journey in the woods last week, we never expected to encounter such a terrifying situation.
A sudden storm occurred during our hike, and our backpacks were nowhere to be found.Lost and lacking food and water, we felt a sense of despair.However, we knew we had no others to rely on.Drawing upon survival skills shown on TV, first, we encouraged and helped each other and faced the challenge bravely. Second, we tried our best to find a shelter where we waited and waited until the strong wind died down and the heavy rain came to a stop.After the storm passed, we successfully made it out of the woods before sunset.Fortunately, we survived the sudden storm.
This experience taught us the importance of being prepared for any situation.4 / 4
UNIT 6 课时检测(六) Writing
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.靓表达升级
1．If we human beings show our love to animals, they can be preserved.(用only if倒装结构升级)
→
2．Some wild animals are endangered because of human activities.(用强调句型升级，强调原因状语)
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3．It is time to take immediate measures.(用 It's high time that ...升级)
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4．When I felt a burst of heat and saw heavy smoke pouring into the room, I quickly shut the door and made sure it was really closed.(用非谓语动词作状语升级)
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5．As smog is getting increasingly serious, environmental protection has become an urgent issue for human beings.(用 with 复合结构升级)
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Ⅱ.微语境写作
1．Mr Johnson ______________________________ (正开着车沿河而行这时) he found someone was shouting for help.
2．Travelling with their neighbours, the Greens flew to Australia which __________________________________________ (遭受到强烈飓风袭击)．
3．I tried getting to the second floor, but the smoke was too thick, ____________________________________________ (使我看不见也无法呼吸)．
4．When I was surfing in the sea, I __________________________________ (遭遇了暴风雨) and I couldn't __________________________________ (和……取得联系) my family.
5．Somehow I made it on the cold night, and I ____________________________________________ (对我的逃离很乐观) from the snowslide.
Ⅲ.应用文写作
假定你是李华，上周你和班级同学参加了一次野外生存训练(wildness survival program)，请你给你的英国网友Johnson写一封电子邮件描述这次活动并谈谈自己的感受，内容包括：
1．活动的时间和人员；
2．活动过程；
3．你的感受。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Dear Johnson，
Yours，
Li Hua
Ⅳ.片段续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Brady was a recently retired search and rescue dog.He was not happy and missed his owner Al because Al had gone out on a rescue mission without him.Al's nephew Steve took Brady along when he and his friend Zach went on a overnight hike.But suddenly Steve and Zach smelled something burning and they realized that lightning had set the woods on fire.Wind blown flame had leaped from the top of one tree to another.The long dry summer had turned the forest into a tinderbox (火绒箱) and the thunderstorm wasn't helping much.It had more wind and lightning than rain.Zach pulled Steve's arm.“Let's go! We can make it back to the river we crossed today.” Steve pulled Brady's leash (皮带) and their heads down against the strong fire wind, they hurried down the path they had followed earlier.The air was full of smoke, and pine branches broke from burning trees with a crisp sound.Steve kept his eyes on the route.All they had to do was to make it down to the river ...
Brady barked a sharp warning.Ahead of them lay a dense curtain of smoke across the path.They'd never make it through that.They would have to find another escape route.The dog was pulling at his leash trying to draw them away from the smoke.This was what Brady was trained to do, and yet Steve was uneasy.It seemed to him they were moving away from the river.
Brady lifted his head and smelled the smoky wind.Suddenly, the dog ran away and disappeared.The boys yelled and shouted for him, but he didn't come back.
They had no choice but to leave him behind.Heartsick, Steve and Zach went up a slope (斜坡)．He couldn't blame Brady for panicking and escaping.He himself wanted to run even though he didn't have a clue which way.They hadn't gone far when there was a familiar bark, and Brady came running toward him.
“Where have you been？” Steve cried.Brady stopped directly in front of him and started pushing him back toward the slope they'd just climbed.When Steve still didn't get it, Brady grabbed the boy's jeans and pulled harder.The message was clear, but Steve hesitated.Of course he remembered what his uncle had said about Brady saving his life, but that had been a long time ago.Was he still sharp enough to get them through this Brady pulled again, urgently.“OK, big guy，” Steve decided.
注意： 1.续写词数应为80左右；
2．要求逻辑通顺，情节合理，重点描写在Brady的带领下，Steve和Zack找到河流并获救的过程。
Brady led them back down the slope and into the trees.
[阅读拓展训练]
阅读七选五
When the British poet Alfred Lord Tennyson described nature as “red in tooth and claw”， he was telling us that the natural world can be cruel as well as beautiful.__1__
Most people living in urban areas rarely encounter wild animals in their natural surroundings.__2__ And they are willing to get close to them.But for wild animals, it is “eat or be eaten”， and they can't distinguish between humans and other animals.
__3__ In Canadian woods lives a dog like animal, coyote, which is a little bigger than a fox, but smaller than a wolf.They usually avoid humans, but the occasional attacks can be deadly.Every year, one or two people end up getting killed by coyotes.
Earlier last year, a herd of elephants in Yunnan left their home in the Xishuangbanna National Nature Reserve and went on a meandering journey through the province.They destroyed crops and buildings along the way.Villages in their path had to be evacuated because of the potential dangers they posed to villagers.Animal experts haven't determined why the elephants went on their journey.__4__ The wild animals we love are in a constant struggle for survival.Our expanding into the natural habitats of wild animals can be dangerous for the animals and then us humans as well.
Maybe we should try to stay away from them.__5__ Their lives — red in tooth and claw — are difficult enough without us causing them any more problems than they already have.
A．A walk in the woods can be dangerous.
B．It is a way to protect the wild animals, and it's also our responsibility.
C．In Canada, people have a more realistic attitude towards wild animals.
D．In simple terms, we should try to keep proper distance from wild animals.
E．Hence they misunderstand that wild animals are just as friendly as Disney characters.
F．Thanks to active environmental conservation, the number of the elephants grew larger.
G．A reasonable possibility is that they probably needed more room and more food to survive.
UNIT 6 课时检测(六)
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.1.Only if we human beings show our love to them can animals be preserved.
2．It is because of human activities that some wild animals are endangered.
3．It's high time that immediate measures should be taken.
4．Feeling a burst of heat and seeing heavy smoke pouring into the room, I quickly shut the door and made sure it was really closed.
5．With smog getting increasingly serious, environmental protection has become an urgent issue for human beings.
Ⅱ.1.was driving along the river when 2.was struck by a tremendous hurricane 3.preventing me from seeing and breathing 4.was caught in a storm; get in touch with 5.was very optimistic about my escape
Ⅲ.应用文写作(参考范文)
Dear Johnson，
My classmates and I took part in a wildness survival program from Thursday to Saturday last week.I can't wait to share some relevant details with you.
Before we started, we were equipped with a compass, a map, a first aid kit, tents, flashlights, some food, some clothes and so on.In the wild, we climbed three hills and swam across two rivers.But then we lost our way in the forest.Luckily, we found the right direction with the help of the compass.As soon as we arrived at the campsite, we put up our tents, made a fire and then started cooking.We also learned how to give first aid.
Through the program, we learned to use knowledge gained in class to solve problems.It was quite an unforgettable experience for me.
Yours，
Li Hua
Ⅳ.片段续写(参考范文)
Brady led them back down the slope and into the trees.Several times the big dog stopped to get his escape route.Often he changed direction.How long they'd walked Steve had no idea.He just held onto Brady's leash with one hand and kept putting one foot in front of the other.He was almost numb when he heard the wonderful sound of rushing water.The river! With a yell the boys ran unsteadily forward until they jumped in cool, running water.“Brady, you did it！”
[阅读拓展训练]
语篇解读：本文是一篇议论文。文章以加拿大森林里的土狼伤人和云南大象迁徙为例告诫我们应当远离野生动物的生活栖息地，这是保护它们的一种方式，也是我们的责任。
1．选D 上文提到了英国诗人认为自然界残酷而美丽，D项“简言之，我们应该与野生动物保持适当的距离”承接前文内容，符合语境。
2．选E 上文提到住在城市的人们很少遇到野生动物，E项承接上文并与上文构成因果关系，与下文衔接连贯，选项中的they指代上文中的住在城市的人们。
3．选A 下文提到了加拿大森林里有一种土狼，有时会把人咬死。由此可推知，此处段首提及的内容与森林有关，A项符合语境。
4．选G 上文提到了动物专家还没确定这些大象迁徙的原因是什么；下文提到了这些野生动物一直在为生存而奋斗。由此可推知，设空处可能是在谈这些大象迁徙的潜在原因。G项提到了一个合理的可能性，恰好与下文的“in a constant struggle for survival”对应。
5．选B 上文提到我们应该尽量远离野生动物。由此可推知，设空处是在解释为什么需要远离野生动物。B项恰好与上下文对应。
